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Shandar Intro diya hai aapne bhai..INTRODUCTION
Yash (age 21 yrs) : Kahani ka main character aur secretly kisi mission par kaam kar raha hai..Yeh Kahani main pata chalega
Ummed Singh (85 yrs) (Death): Yash Ka Dadiji Aur Rajasthan Ka Bahut Bade Businessman tha...Inko Politicians aur Police respect Dete tha...Inki Mout ek Plane crash main hui par inki wife ko lagta hai ki yeh murder tha kyu yeh story main pata chalega...
Nirmal Devi (78 yrs) : Yash ki Dadi..Ghar ki home Minister inki marzi sa hi sara decisions lia jate hai..Aur apne bade Pote sa bahut Pyar karti hai
Sameer Singh (48 yrs) : Yash ka Papa.Businessman bahut shant aur saral nature ka aur pariwar sa bahut zayada pyaar karte aur ek agyakari beta.
Nisha Singh (40 yrs) : Yash ki Maa...bahut khoobsurat aur sath main sabsa pyaar karna wali.Apna aap ko bahut maintain rakhti hai..
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DevRaj Singh (12 yrs): Yash Ka chota bhai aur ghar main ladla..jyaadatar padhai main dhyaan lagta hai aur apna bada bhai ko role model manta hai
Samar Singh (46 yrs) : Yash ka Chacha..Yeh Apna bada Bhai ka lakshman hai.Bass thoda gussa jaldi aata hai inka koi beta nahi hai isliya apna bhai ka bade beta ko apna beta manta hai
Kalpna Singh (44 yrs) : Yashi ki chachi aur samar ki patni..Yehi bhi apni family sa bahut pyaar karti hai aur bahut khus rehti hai par andar hi andar sabsa jyaada udass hai kyu yeh kahani main pata chalega.
Janhvi Singh (20 yrs) : Samar aur Kalpana Ki badi beti..Abhi College main hai graduation 3rd yr..Bahut Zyada khoobsurat aur sath sath gussa wali bhi bilkul apna dad ki tarah.Aur simple rehna pasand karti hai
Krutika Singh (18 yrs) : Samar Aur Kalpana ki choti beti Aur Yash Ki secret Lover.Modern aur Stylish rehna ise pasand hai bahut ziddi bhi hai aur hal hi main apna school khatam kia hai bass results ka intezaar hai
Fufaji (52 yrs) (Death): Ajeet Chauhan Inki bhi mout plane crash main hui thi...
Bua (49yrs) : Shiva Chauhan apna pati ki Death ka baad apna maaika main hi rehti hai aur business main bhi sath deti hai apna bhaiyo ka...khoobsurat aur intelligent hai
Saumya Chauhan (25 yrs) : Shiva Aur Ajeet ki badi beti. Ek passionate Lawyer inka koi boyfriend nahi hai inhe apna Prince Charming ka intezaar hai
Vinita Chauhan (20 yrs) : Shiva Aur Ajeet ki Choti Beti...Yeh bhi Janhvi ka sath hi padti hai uski best friend bhi hai dono apni saari batein ek dusra sa share karte hai..
Vijay Rawat (47 yrs) : Singh Pariwar ka Security Chief bahut trustworthy hai inka purvaaj bhi Singh Pariwar ka bodyguard tha aur yeh parampara aga bada raha hai aur Aur ghar ka teesra Beta jaisa.Har tarah ki fight janta hai
Laxmi Rawat (45 yrs) : Vijay ki patni chanchal aur chulbuli hai...
Vidhya Rawat (18 yrs) : Vijay aur Laxmi ki beti yeh krutika ka sath padti hai aur ghoomna ka bahut shok hai isa.
Ye tha intro, baaki characters samay aane par introduce hote jaenge.
Dhanyavaad!
Shandar Intro diya hai aapne bhai..


Nice Update Continue Rakho Bro.Update 1
Bahut Sari Cars ka kafila bahut teji sa aage badh raha tha.
Yeh Kafila ek Bahut Bade sa school main enter karta hai..Principal ka sath sath sare teacher welcome ka liya entry gate per maujood tha..Sari cars jaise hi ruki sabsa pehla ek bodybuilder type ka aadmi car sa nikla aur uska saath baki cars main sa bhi guards nikla jo ki high-tech guns ka sath tha
Uss aadmi ko dekhar Principal ka chehra par pasina aa gaya..Vo seedha ja kar us aadmi sa kehta hai..
(Prin) :- Gu. Gu. Gud morning Vijay Sir..ji haan yeh vijay tha abb uski personality hi aisi thi ki usko dhekar acha acho ko pasina aa jai..bass vijay ek nazar principal ko dekhta hai aur baar gadi ka gate kholta hai
Jisma sa Nirmla Devi utarti hai aur principal unhe ek flower bonquet deta sab unko wish karte hai aur sab Auditorium ki aur chale jate hai
Sare Students auditorium main maujood tha aaj board ka exams declared hone tha aur hamesha ki tarah Nirmla Devi hi Chief Guest thi
Yeh School bhi inka Sasur ka banwaya tha Jo ki World ki top 10 School Main Sa hai
(Prin) : Toh Baccho Har Saal ki tarah iss Saal bhi hamre school ka students ka results bahut acha gaya hai toh abb main top 3 student ko stage par bulata hu
Toh 3rd par hai Manjeet Shukla,2nd par Miss Aditi Sisodia aur Iss Bar 1st do student aai hai aur keval first hi nahi puri country main top kia hai toh Ladies Na d Gentleman plz warm welcome Miss Krutika Singh and Miss Vidhya Rawat
Pure Auditorium main taaliyon ki aawaj gunjti hai charo jaakar seedha Nirmla Devi sa Aashirwad leta aur certificate aur medal bhi
Uska Baad Nirmla Devi thodi Speech Deti hai aur students ko unka future ka liya wish karti aur blessings dekar vapas car ki ur chal deti hai
Jaise hi car ka pass pauchi hai vaise hi ek zor daar Dhamaka Hota hai Car main Bhoommm!!!!!
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