Great writings! Please don't let Rashid to make love with Nirmala.Don't make her a slut who makes affairs with a lot of men. Please make different situations and episodes and let only Javed to make love with her. And it is not necessary to lengthen the story unnecessarily if there is no suitable plot.You can finish the story with a happy ending. And also don't let her married life to be destroyed for this illicit and forbidden affairs. Let her affairs a top secret from her loving husband. There is no sexual excitement and eroticism in tragedy.