Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

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Tabhi ravi fir se uske nipple chusne laga.aur jeeb ferne laga..to Deepika bhi Ravi ke supade mein nakun laga di ..

To Ravi apna right hand niche ko le gaya..aur Deepika ki saree ki chunnat khichne laga..uske nipple chuste hue…

Deepika ka chuchak ful ke kismis ke jaise ho chuka tha ..

Aur fir uske petikot ko jaise hi upper uthne laga to Deepika zaldi se apne per mod ke Ravi ke hath ko pakadne lagi..apni janghon ko chipka ke…

Wo nahi chahti thi ki Ravi usko itne geele halat mein dekh le…

To Ravi bhi mana nahi aur sidha Deepika ki fuli hui yoni ko uski purple print wali panty ke upper se pakad liya..uske gale ko chumate hue…

Deepika bed mein chatpatane lagi..jisse uski moti payal chammm chammmm chamm karke bajne lagi .

Wo ghuti Hui awaz se boli..

D: plsssss waahaaaa naahiiii..plssss..( Ravi ka hath pakad ke , sharm ka bhav liye hue)

Ravi ne dekha ki uski panty puri ras se bhigi Hui hai..

Aur wo Deepika ko kamuk nazar se dekhte hue, dheere se panty ke ander hath daal diya .

To mano Deepika bhi apne hatiyar daal di..aur muh fer li..sharm se ..Ravi ke jism mein muh chupate hue ..tez saans lete hue..

Ravi uske yoni ke chote chote se baal ,jo ki puri yoni pe kisi mangrove ke jangle jaise faile hue the…un pe haath ferne laga .

Deepika niche ke baal 1 week pehle hi trim ki hui thi jo Ravi ke hatheli pe mano Kante jaise chub rahe the..

Deepika Sharm se laal ho ke uske chest mein muh chupane lagi..

To Ravi ne jaise hi apni middle finger uske yoni ki lambi si lakeer pe daudayi…to Deepika

Ssisisissiiss ufffff kehte hue,uske gale mein apne chudiyon se bahre hath ko daal ke gale ja lagi .aur pyar se uske gaal ko chumne lagi…kampte hue hontho se ..

Wo teekhi sitkari maarne lagi thi…

Wo apne pati ko aaj sara sukh dena chati thi..

Ravi ka hath uski chaddi ke ander khel dikha raha tha.uski kamuk moti yoni se .

Deepika ki mansal jangh ke bich uski panty bahut mast lag rahi thi…

.wo dheere dheere Deepika ke mote bahgnasa se khelne laga .

jisse Deepika ki siskiyaan badne lagi .aur wo unnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnhhhhhhh unnnnnnnnnnhhh ssissiisisisaanananhhhh kehte hue Ravi ko chumne lagi…aur uske per pe chadne lagi .kamuk awaz se…

Tabhi ravi apni middle finger uske fanko ke bich, uske yoni ke ched mein daal diya .jo bhut buri tarah se geela tha uske kaam ras se…

Ras mano tapak raha tha aaj Deepika ki yoni se , jo apne pati ke mote mardan ling ko lene ko tyar baithi thi .

Ravi ne dheere se finger jaise hi ander daali . Deepika chihuk ke Ravi ke kaan pe dard se boli .

D: ssisisisisis maaarrr gaaayiiiii..sssisisisisis ufff nikkklaaaaa dddooooo naaaaaa…( kamukta bhari awaz se)

To Ravi uske muh ke pass muh ke ja ke uske honth pe chumabno ki barsaat suru kar diya..aur ek finger aur daal diya..aur ander se mod liya..

Ye karne se Deepika ki jaan nikal gayi .uski body tight ho gayi ..aankhe upper ko chad gayi ..wo ravi ka hath pakdne lagi…. hontho ko daba ke…

Aur tabhi ravi uske kaan pe kampte hue bola..

R: hilaaaa meeraaaaa…deeepaaaaa….ufff…behanchod kitniii tiggghttt hai yeeeee…( Deepika ki yoni ke ungli karte hue..dant bhinch ke …)


Aur Deepika ko chumne laga…har jagh pe . to
Deepika masti aur sharm se..uske muh pe hath rakh di ..aur boli .


D,:: app na..paaaglll hooo gaayeeew hoo. Ssisisisisis aaaahh aarmmmm see ..maaaa.. ssiiiii…kitnnaaaa gaanddaaaa bolteeee hooooo…aapppp( sharm se muh chupa ke,, ghabrate hue. Kampte hue)

Ravi muh hata ke uske hath se , usko zor se kiss karte hue bola .

R: hilaaaa naaaaaa….( Request wali awaz se,uski yoni mein ungliyon ko ander bahar karte hue)

To Deepika ne bhi …kamuk awaz nikalte hue , Ravi ke underwear mein hath dala aur Ravi ke supade ko masal diya .

Jisse Ravi ko bahut maaza aaya aur wo Deepika ke bhagnasa ko angulte se maslte hue,uski yoni mein anguliyon ko ander bahar karne laga..aur anguthe se bahgnasa ko masal ke rakh diya.

Jisse ab Deepika ye sehan nahi kar paayi .aur Ravi ko kas ke pakad ke uske honth pe ek lamba kisss dete hue jhad gayi ..yoni tight karte hue…kampte hue…

Ssisisisisissi baaaasssssss sssisisisi baaassssss kehte hue…

To Ravi usko chora…aur uske panty se hath bahar khincha aue panty ke lastik ki tez awaz hui ..
.uski anguliya puri tarah se gili thi…wo un ungliyon ko jaise hi sunga.. Deepika Sharm se muh fer di..

Fir Ravi Deepika se bola .

R: blouse utar ..( apna underwear niche karke)

Deepika dhere se..hanfte hue uthi .aur hath upper karke blouse ko utar di…

Aur let gayi ..chadar khinch ke .karwat le kar…abhi bhi uska petticoat uske kamar pe tha ..

Ravi Deepika ke piche aa gaya..aur Deepika ke sath chadar ke ander aa ke ..uske piche se ling ko uski yoni dwar pe lagaya..

Deepika muh ok piche karke boli .

D: sssoo jaaaaoo naaa….( Pareshan ho ke)

R: naa…nahi sona hai …( piche se gaal chum ke, uske balo ki khusboo lete hue)

Deepika kuch na boli .

To Ravi uske panty ko side kiya… Aur yoni pe ling laga ke uske pet ko apne taraf khinch ke kamar ko aage badha diya .jisse uska supada Deepika ke mote fanko ko faila ke ghusa …

Deepika dard se bilbila gayi .aur aage ko sark gayi ..

To Ravi zaldi se usko sidha letaya .aur uske upper chadne laga to wo Dar se boli. .

D: naa naa . Pls. Nahi..naaaa….( Hanfte hue)

To Ravi pehle uski panty ko jangho tak niche kiya aur bola. .

R:: us din yahi tak ki thi naa .( Gaal chum ke, janghon ko sehla ke)

Deepika thuk niagalte hue boli .

D:: haaannnnnn…plsss maattt kaarooonnaaa bahar takkk awaz jayegi. ( Awaz daba ke request wali nazar se)

To Ravi apne ek hath se uske dono hathon ko pakad ke upper ko le gaya

.aur uske Tango ke bich mein aa gaya …aur right hand se ling ko pakad ke uski yoni pe jaise hi ragda. …Deepika karha gayi. Aur hath ko churane ki koshish karne lagi..

Lekin Ravi ne nahi chora to uski chudiya tut ke Deepika ke kaan ke paas giri. Aur chudiyon ki tez awaz aane lagi …


To Ravi uske yoni pe ling laga let gaya… upper.. Deepika apne per sidhe kiye rahi…

To Ravi bola .

R: per kholl…( uttejana se)

D: naa naaa .nahi…tez se karoge aapp..??( Rone wali awaz se)

R:: nahi karunga,khol zaldi. .( tez saans le kar, ek hath se , Deepika ke dono hath pakad ke)

To Deepika boli. ..

D:: maaattt kaarooo naaaa bahar awqzzz jayegi. .sach mein …kaall kaaarr lennaaaa….naaa pakkaa...( Pareshan ho ke)

R: jane dee …awaz bahar…( Deepika ke honth chum ke)

To Deepika boli muh hata ke boli…

D: kaat kaat ke na suja diye hai .apne …mat karo na. .( pareshan ho ke)

To Ravi uske gaal ko chum ke bola ..

R: abhi to ye bhi sujani hai mujhe ..aaj raat bhar isko chod ke…( gaal ko chum ke , ling ko ched pe laga ke)

Aur jaise hi wo kamar ko dheere se dabaya..

Ling Deepika ki tight yoni mein ja ghusa…aur Deepika dard se per marne lagi ..aur boli..

D: ananananananhhhh naaaaaaaaaaaaaa..maaarr gaayyyiii plssssss….marrr jaaungiiii…plsssss ..( dard se lagbhag rote hue, awaz daba ke)

To Ravi ruk gaya..usko bhi laga ki yoni bahut tight hai.. uske supade ki khal upper ko ho gayi…

Wo Deepika ke hath chora to Deepika ne chain ki saans li..aue apne yoni ko hath se dhakne lagi ..

To Ravi usko dekha..aur uske niche aa ke .pehle uski panty ko pura utar diya .jo bahut gili thi..

Aur fir Deepika ke per khole .ke uske hath ko jhtak diya….aur Deepika ki yoni ki ko dekha ..

Jo mast lag rahi thi .un chote chote baalon se..jo aabhi aa hi rahe the ..

Deepika hanfte hue Ravi ko dekhne lagi..bed sheet pakad ke .wo janti thi ki Ravi kya karne wala hai .

Ravi dono hathon se uske khulhe pakad ke Deepika ko dekhte hue uske yoni pe jhuk gaya ..to Deepika bhi dono hathon se bed sheet ko khinch ki .

Ravi ne jaise hi uske Gili yoni pe apni garm saan chori Deepika ne zaldi se uske bal khinch …diye..

Air halki si karwat le kar Uffffffff sssisisisisisis aaaaaahhmmmm kehte hue muh upper ko mod liya ..

Deepika ke baal pure khule the. Wo mast lag rahi thi ..fir Ravi ne apni jeeb nikal ke uski yoni ki lakeer pe daudayi..to Deepika kaumuk ho ke kamar utha ke bed sheet ko mutthi mein bhinch li..

Deepika Jo abhi thodi der pehle hi jhadi thi .fir se tyar hone lagi…Ravi aaj uski halat kharab karne mein laga tha ..

Deepika apni kamar ko rokna chati thi lekin wo control nahi kar payi…

Aur jaise jaise Ravi uski yoni ko chatne laga . Deepika tezi se kamar upper niche karne lagi .apne muh pe hath rakh ke kamuk ho ke rone wali awaz se…

Wo gardan ko idhar udhar fekne lagi .Kabhi bed se utha ke Ravi ke sir ko dekhti kabhi takiye mein patak deti apne sir ko.

Fir Ravi ne dher sara thuk uske yoni pe gira diya .jisse Deepika ke goosebumps aa gye ..

Aur Ravi zaldi se apna ling hilate hue uske jangho ke bich aa ke .apne ling ko uske ched pe set kiya. ..aur Deepika ke honth pe fir se jhuk gaya …

Deepika bhi ab khud ko rokhna nahi chahti thi aur wo bhi muh khol di .

Ravi uske jeeb ko honth pe daba ke chuste hue jaise hi kamar ko aage ko dabaya .
Ek ghuti hui si cheekh uske muh mein gum si ho gayi..

Wo per patakne lagi.muh ko churane lagi…

Aur jab kuch karne mein nakam rahi to Deepika ne Ravi ke pasliyon ke pass nakun laga Diya..

Aur Deepika ki yoni mein Ravi ka aadhe se zaida ling ghus gaya …fir Ravi ruka nahi . hontho ko daba daba ke chuste hue Deepika ki lene laga .

Thuk bahut hone se, ek baar mota supada jane se Deepika ko ab bahut dard nahi hua .lekin yoni ke fank o shape mein khul gaye .


Ravi ne uske honth chore aur Deepika ke bagal se dono hath daal ke usko apne bahon mein kas liya. ..aur kampte hue Deepika ki marne laga .

Uske face ko dekh ke..

Deepika har jahtke se gardan hila ke .apne hontho ko daba ke awaz rokne ki koshish karne lagi taki awaz bahar na jaye .


Ravi dhere dhere uske ander bahar hone laga. Uska ling jitna bhi ander gaya tha chipchipa pani se tar ho ke waps aata...

Deepika ki yoni bahut tez pach pach pach pach kinawaz karne lagi thi..


Ravi Deepika ke gaal pe chumma lete hue uski lene laga ..

Aur yoni se paccchh paccch pacch ki ki awaz aane lagi…

Aur Ravi ki tez sanso ki awaz..

Aur deepika bhi ab..

Ssisisj aahhhh sssssiii aaaahhhhh sssiisisis aaaahhh sssiiiiiiii…aiiiiyyyaaaaa….sssiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…aaaiiiiyaaaaaaaaaa. kehte hue chudne lagi..per faila ke..

Ravi bahut dheere dheere uski ander Bhar hone laga tha..aur Deepika ko machalte hue dekh raha tha..

Deepika per failaye hue thi…aur uski jangho ke bich mein Ravi ki kamar dheere dheere upper niche ho rahi thi .


Deepika masti mein doobi hui thi ki Ravi fir ruk gaya .aur Deepika ke ek hath ko uppar karke uske armpit pe kiss karne laga to Deepika se sehan nahi hua .wo Ravi ko bolne lagi. …


D: ssisisisis kyyyuuuunn kaaarr raahee hoooo.. aiseee …ssisisis awaazzz sunnn lenngee saab b. …( Masti mein , Ghuti Hui awaz se )

Lekin Ravi nahi maana ..aur uske gaal ko chum ke , usko dekh ke bola ..

R: sunee deeeeeee…..abhi to pura daaala bhi nahi ..dekh…aaadhe se zaidaaaa bahar hai . .abhi to teri bacche dani tak chodna hai tuje …apne per upper karrrrr…..( kamukta bhari awaz se, Deepika ko dekh ke)

Deepika Sharm se nazar fer li .aur per ghutne se mod ke upper ko kar di..

To Ravi uske gale ko chumane laga .aur Deepika apne honth geele karte hue. …Aankho ko band karte hue boli…

ssisisisisis aaaahhh paaagggalll hoooo aaap…..sssiissisiisis. Ummmmmm sssiisisisis ..

Aur chumate chumate kab wo fir se dhakee marne laga Deepika ko bhi nahi pata chala .

Is position pe Yoni ling ko aram se le rahi thi..aur jaise hi Ravi ne thoda sa zor laga ke dala Deepika aaaaaaaahh maaaaa kehte hue .Ravi ko jakad li..aur per ravi ke kamar pe chada di…

Ab dono ek dusre ki bahon mein the .Ravi uske gaal ko chumete hue usse gandi gandi baat karte hue uski lene laga . Gehre jhatke marte hue…

Wahi Deepika rone wali aawaz se bas haan naaa mein bolne lagi ….

R: faaddd didi bolll terriii chhutttt?????hmm hmmm merii jaaann..faaddd duu…??

D: naaaaaa. Ssisisisi aanannnhhh …ssisisi dheere seeee yaaarrrr…aaahhh maaaaaa…..meriiii….ssisisisisiss….( dard bhari awaz se)

R: fadniiii too padeeegiii naaa ..bhut tight haaiii naaaa…yeeee..( dhakee marte hue)

ekkk baarr bolll dee baasss koi faaddd duu iskoo…bas eekkk baarr apnee bacche dani tak daaalneee deeee..baas ek baar deeepppaaaa meereiii jaaaannn…

( Gaal ko chum chum ke)

Deepika jo dono hath Ravi ke pith pe dale thi ..har jahtke se uski chudiyan khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn….karke bajne lagi thi…


Bahar geeta washroom ko aayi. ..jo Ravi ke room ke pass tha ..wo saf sun sakti thi…wo awaz …
Kyunki wo ghar aisa tha ki, Ravi ke room wale washroom aur common washroom ki chat upper se open thi…

Aur Ravi wale wash room ka door pura band nahi hota tha .to common washroom mein bhi awaz saaf sunayi de rahi thi

Geeta ko aise sunai de raha tha jaise ki , uski didi ki suhag raat uske samne hi ban rahi ho…

Wo saf sun sakti thi .Chudiyon aur Deepika ki halki halki rone jaise awaz .

Jo kuch aise thi. ..

Nana aana..aaannnnhhh ssisisi maaarr jaungggiiii…plssss..aaaaaaahh…..ssisisisis. naaa…purraaaa naahhiiiii….plssssssss…khoon aaa jayegaa yaaarrr…kyunnn nahhiii samjhhh raheeee hooo app…aaaannnhhhhhhhhhhhj mummmmmmmmmmmyyyyy……..marrr gaayiiiii.( ghuti hui Deepika ki awaz)


Wahi tez sanso ki ,kisi mard ki awaz aane lagi…ye Ravi ki thi ..

Tabhi fir kiss karne ki awaz aayi ..

Fir Ravi kuch bola . whisper karte hue Jo geeta ko nahi sunai Diya..

To Deepika chihuk ke boli ..jor se payal ki chammm chamm ki awaz karte hue .

Nahiii….naaaa…nanana naaaa naaaa aaurrrr naahhhiiiii…plsssss….…lag raha hai .waha….

Fir jor se thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap ki awaz geeta ne suni ..

Aur chudiyon ki tez awaz…

Khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn
( Chudiyon ki awaz)

Aaaiiiiii maaaaaaaaaa…..ssisisisiss aanannnnnnhhh……ssisisiisiss….aaapkooo kyaaaaa hooo gayaaaa haaiii ..sssiisisis maaaa…ssisisisis aaaiiii mummmmmmmmmmmyyyyy…..( ghuti Hui awaz)

Fir Ravi kuch bola ..ruk ke .jisse chudiyon aur payal ki awaz kam ho gayi .

Aur Deepika fir se kasmasa ke boli .


Naa…naaa naaaa. Naaaa…sacchhh mein n.daardddd hooo raahaaaa haaiii…sachhhiiiii…. keh rahi hu ..nikal do na ..jaan bujh ke khud ko rok rahe ho naaa .( Rone wali awaz se)

Aur fir kiss karne ki awaz aayi .aur fir se tez

Khannnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn..

Chudiyan bajne lagi ..

Aur Deepika ki rone jaise awaz..

Ssisisisiss plssssss yaarrrr .aannnnhhh maaaaa ssisisis maarr gaayyyyiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii aaaiyaaaaa niiiiiiiiiiiii…

Aur payal ki Chammmm chammmm chammmm chammmm chammmm ( payal ki awaz)

Aur thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap…janghon ke tkarne ki…


Ye tab ki awaz thi jab Ravi puri kamar ko daba daba ke Deepika ki le raha tha .

Geeta sunne lagi ..thi ..sb log so chuke the ..uske body mein ajeeb sa feel hone laga..aur geeta bhi apni janghon ko sikod li…

Wo jaan gayi ki uske jija ji ,,uski khubsurat didi ke halat kharab kar rahe hai ..

Awaz sun ke Aisa lag raha tha jaise bhut tadabtod jhatke marne ka rahe hai..

Aur fir awaz thodi der baad Deepika ke per patakne aur

Nahi nahi nahii….nahi aayiaaaaa…bas baass…hooo too gayaaaaaaaaaaa..plssssss chorrrrrr dddodoodod…..


Aur turant wo awaz band ho ke kiss karne ki tez awaz aayi..awaz aaa rahi thi …jaise koi geele hontho ko chus raha ho ..

Fir 10 sec baad .aur fir se
Chudiyon aur Deepika ki awaz aane lagi..

Geeta samjh gayi ki aaja uski didi ki aache se kutai kar rahe hai uske jeeja ji…wo muskura ke reh gayi..

Aur wah to aur bhi tez aawaz aane lagi..


Aisa lag raha tha jaise Ravi tezi se ander bahar ho raha hai .aur Deepika dard se rone wali awaz se sitkari maar rahi hai..

Aur sath mein payal aur chudiyon ki tez aawaz aa rahi thi…

Wahi room mein Ravi Deepika ke upper uske face ko dekh ke whisper karte hue usse bol raha hai..

Jo geeta ko saaf sunayi nahi de raha tha ..

Bas Deepika jo thoda zor se ghuti Hui awaz se ruk ruk ke bol rahi thi…wo sunayi de rahi thi .

D:: jalan hooo gaayyyii haaiii plssssss….karr too liyaaaaaaaaa…aabbb. plsssss…( Ravi ki kamar pakad ke)

Tabhi geeta ko honth ko chumne ki awaz aayi .

Aur fir se wo hi khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn khannnnnnn aur payal ki chammmm chammmm chammmm chammmm chammmm..aur Deepika ki..


Ssisisis maaaaaa..ssisis maarrr gaayyyyiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii….ssisisisis baaassss baaasss baassssssss…hoooooo gayayaaaa..chaallaaaaa gayayaaaa waahha taakakkk baassss….bann to gayyii hu apki …aurrr kitnnaaaa karoogeee…bed sheet kharab hoo rahhhii hai yaaaaaarrrr…aaaaiiii mummmmmmmmmmmyyyyy….( ghuti hui rone wali awaz se

Wahi Ravi pura kamar dabaye hue.. Deepika ke garbh dwar ke challe ko faila ke…apna garm lawa chorte hue Deepika ke gale pe tez tez saans lene laga…

Aur geeta ko tez tez saans lene ki awaz aayi .

Aur fir ek awaz aayi Deepika ki

.ssisiisisisisisisisiisisis…..ssisisisi..baasssss baaaasssssssssssssssssss………. baaaasssssssssssssssssss…..aaaannnnnnnnnnnnhhhhh baasssssss…. Deepika Ravi ke kamar ke pass nakhun laga di zor se ..Ravi ke pure pith pe hath pe nakun lage the ..

Jaise kisi ne zor se ragad diya ho ..

Ravi thodi der tak lete raha .aur Deepika ko kiss kiya. Uske honth pe.

Aur fir Ravi ne bahar nikala uske bacche dani se ..
Deepika ki yoni se gadha virya uske khulhe se ho ke ..niche girne laga .



Room mein abhi Deepika behal padi thi.
Peticoat uske kamar pe tha ..aur Ravi uske upper se utar chuka tha . lekin abhi bhi ling Goli kahne se..pyar baitha nahi tha .
.usko abhi aur chaiye tha ..


Aur geeta ko payal ki awaz aayi ..kyunki Deepika per sidhe karke .karwat le kar…behal ho ke let gayi..apni sanso ko control karte hue..

Lekin peshab ka pressure lag raha thaj jisse uske andkosh mein dard hone laga tha .


Ravi bed se jaise hi let niche rakha.. Deepika chadar ko odh ke .karwat le kar..so gayi ..

Kyunki Ravi usko abhi bola tha ..apna ling bahar nikalte hue .uske gaal chum ke ..


R: abhi or karna hai ..mujhe ..aa raha hu ..

Deepika kuch bol nahi paayi janti thi ki Ravi aur karega .to peticoat niche nahi ki ..bas chadar daal li ..

Geeta ko laga ki koi aa raha hai to wo zaldi se wash room se nikal gayi ..

Ravi ko peshab karte time bahut dard hua iasa laga ki ling pura chil gaya hai .aur chukta bhi kyun nahi .wo itne tabad tod jahtke mara tha last mein ..


Ravi aaya aur door ko band karne laga lekin wo band nahi ho raha tha ..sayad lakdi full gayi thi .

Ravi waise hi halka sa band karke aa gaya …Deepika abhi thoda normal hui thi .


Halka halka pet mein dard hone laga tha .Ravi ke un tez jhatko se.

Ravi uske bagal mein aa ke leta. Aur Deepika ko Fir se apne bhahon mein bhar liya …
To Deepika boli. ..

D,: so jaao naa …kitna late ho gaya hai. .kyu kar rahe ho ..itna ..( pareshan ho ke)

R: naaa…ajj raat sona nahi hai ..( Deepika ko pyar karte hue)

To Deepika uske or ko muh ki aur boli. ..

D: naa….koi zarurat nahin hai .pet mein dard ho gaya hai mere…aise karta hai koi??. (Pyar wale gusse Se, karwat liye hue)


R: bas ek baar. Karne de. . Deepika ke shoulder pe kiss karte hue)

D:: naaa ...jalan ho rahi hai mujhe. .naa .ab nahi pls. ( Request wali awaz se, uske taraf muh karte hue)

R: mera nahi hua hai abhi ….ek baar karne de. ( Deepika ke upper chadte hue)

D: apki Kasam bhut jalan ho rahi hai. Bhut dard kar diya …kal kar lena pakkaaa…( request wali awaz se)

R: thodi der baad karenge…bas …( pyar se chum.ke)

to Deepika uske baal sehlate hue usko dekhi .aur fir uske gale lag ke , uske gold ki chain se khelte hue boli..

D: app khush ho na .???( Bhut emotional ho ke)

R:: haan bahut ..zaida .
.( Deepika ko dekh ke..hans ke .usko gale laga ke)

D: aap kabhi gussa to nahi karoge na.??.mujhe pe ..??( Ravi ko shikayat Bhari nazar se dekh ke)

R: kyun???( Hans ke)

To be continued...

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D: aap kabhi gussa to nahi karoge na.??.mujhe pe ..??( Ravi ko shikayat Bhari nazar se dekh ke)

R: kyun???( Hans ke)

D: muje bahut dar lagta hai .apke gusse se .

( Ravi ko pakda ke uske chest pe sir rakh ke, shikayat Bhari awaz se)

To Ravi uske sir pe kiss karte hue bola ..

R; nahi karunga bas. ( Pyar se chum ke)

D:: muje apke sath rehna hai ..( Ravi ko pyar se dekh ke zidd karne wale face se usko pura pakad ke,, chest ke paas sir rakh ke)

R: kyun?? Fir to roz ye hoga fir??( Hans ke)

D: main nahi bol rahi .har time mazak karte ho ..( pyar wale gusse se, dur ho ke).

To Ravi usko khinch liya .

Aur Deepika ki aankhon mein dekhne laga. To Deepika nazar niche kar di .

R:: I love you…( pyar se )

D: hmm.. love you too…( dheere se nazar niche kar ke )

R:: sath rahenge hamesha…( pyar se uske mathe mein kiss karte hue)

To Deepika sharm se muskura ke uske shoulder pe sir rakh di…

Dono ek dusre ke taraf muh kiye the. ..to Ravi uske urooz maslte hue bola ..

R: gussa bhi hogi ..tabb bhi karna hai mujhe sun le ..( urooz maslte hue)

To Deepika pyar wale gusse se boli..

D: apka to bas ..ye hi hai …har time ye hi chaiye ..na…( pyar wale gusse se)

R: to kya fir. .bhut pareshan kiya hai tune …( nippal masal ke)

D: ssissisi…aahhh ….maine kya kiyaaa..hmmm( sir utha ke Ravi ko dekh ke)

R: kiya hai na. .(; Deepika ko pyar se dekh ke)

Deepika fir se uske chest ke pass sir rakh ke muh chupa li…aur Ravi ke liye bahut pyar feel karne lagi ..

Ravi dhere dhere fir se uske nipple maslne laga .aur Deepika bhi usko pakdne lagi .

Dono mein fir se koi baat nahi ho rahi thi…bas Ravi uske shoulder pe kiss karte hue uske per per lagane laga .

To Deepika bhi fir se dheere dheere siskiyaan lene lagi .

Aur Ravi uske face ko chumate hue .. usko sidha leta diya .aur fir se uske pero ke bich aa gaya..

Deepika bhi mana nahi kar paayi….uska bhi fir se man hone laga…

Ravi usko chumate hue , uske jangho ke bich jagh bante hue, apne kahde ling ko uski yoni pe lagane laga ..to Deepika fir se kamukta bhari sistkari marte hue gardan ko khol di .Ravi ko kiss dene ke liye..

Ravi uske gale ko chumate hue , dheere se apna ling ander daal diya .aur Deepika is baar khud hi ghutne se per mod ke upper ko kar di bed se..

Aur fir se wo hi suru ho gaya ..pehle dheere dheere..aur fir baad mein tez jahtke …

Deepika aur ravi ek dusre ko bahon mein bhare hue .ek dusre ko chum rahe the..

Ravi dhere dhere speed tez karne laga .uske mote urooz masal ke..

Wahi Deepika na janne kab anand ke sagar mein kho gayi ..aur Ravi uske yoni rupi samudra mein gote lagne laga ..

.dono ki tez saans chalne lagi …

Ravi Deepika ke kaan mein erotic baat karte hue dheere dheere jhatke marne laga ..

Aur Deepika bhi hontho ko daba ke .haan naa mein sharm se jawab dene lagi .aur Mazza lene lagi…apni suhagraat ka .

Ravi uski leta gaya aur Deepika bhi apne pati ko dete gayi is soch se ki wo aaj maa ban jaye .

Fir Ravi uske bacche dani pe gehre jhatke marne laga. .aur Deepika har jahtke se dard se karha jati. .aur Ravi ke pith mein nakun lagne lagti .

Ravi ne uske honth ko chus chus ke suja diya tha .gale aur urozz pe love bite bana diya tha ..

Aur 15 min tak tabadtod jhatke marte hue. Fir se Deepika ki kokh ko bhar diya .apne maal se. …..

Deepika jaha pe leti thi wha bed sheet pura geela hi chuka tha, uski yoni ke pani se.


Thodi der baad Deepika muskil se uthi .fir washroom gayi .aur apni yoni ko dekhi ..jo puri laal ho chuki thi ..abhi bhi Ravi ka virya uski yoni se gir raha tha..

Aur jaise hi washroom mein bethi .jalan se uski jaan nikal gayi…

Aur
aise hi wo dono subh 3 baje soye ..ek dusre ki bahon mein…


To be continued…

NICE UPDATE BHAI JI THANKS AMAZING AWESOME

 

[Alok]

Maine is update ke liye bahut wait Kiya tha..but sahi se ho nahi paya..

App sabse mafi mangta hu ki jaise socha tha waise hi nahi kar paya...

Don't feel sorry Flymovers777 bhai.....

We can understand your feelings associated with the story.
Being with you from the start of this magnificent creation we feel very much connected to it when we are only reader's but your feelings towards this magnificently written journey of love and emotions must have affected you till the depth of your heart....

Your creation surely will be loved by everyone who will read it with full on emotions....

 

[Pukhraj harshwal]

Gajab

 

[Aliyaa3467]

Nice update

 

[pushpendra2023]

Flymovers bhai aapka bahut bahut dhanyawaad aapne story complete ki, ham sabhi ko yahi expectations thi ki ravi aur Deepika ek ho jaaye jo aapne kar dikhaya. Ek happy ending, ab is se jyada to meri koi expectations nahi thi, kyuki isme dikhaye gaye atoot pyaar aur inke parivaar me ho rahe rochak ghatanakram, emotions, tyag jis tareeke se aapne likha hai wo bahut tha is kahani se judne ke liye, rahi baat suhagraat discription ki to wo koi itni bhi jaruri nahi thi, main Focus dono ka ek hona tha jab pahle hi bahut sare incident moujud ho.
Jo aapne kiya ab iske liye aapko koi guilt to nahi honi chahiye,kyuki aapne is story ko 5 saal se adhik diye hai,aise kitne hi writer aaye aur kahani adhuri chhodkar chale gaye, par aapne kabhi bhi itna lamba break nahi liya ki ham ummid hi chhod de, maine to ye kahani 6 month pahle padhna start kiya tha, isliye mai aapki ki hui mehnat samajh sakta hu ki ek ek update dene me kitna samay dena padta hai,kitni mehnat,kitni Focused hona padta hai story ke liye.
*Hatts off for your hard work*

Mujhe aapse koi bhi shikayat nahi hai,aap ek behatareen lekhak hai.

Waise aapki rachnaye padhne ke liye utsuk paathak uchit kimat bhi ada kar sakte hai, mai kar raha hu aisi hi ek kahani ko padhne ke liye jo is forum me incomplete thi ab unhone ek paid forum chalu kiya hai, jaha koi bhi apni rachnaye prastut kar sakta hai aur padh sakta hai.



Saabhaar evam dhanyawaad​

 

[Minto 61]

Socha tha love hoga
Emotions honge
But bhai aapne to ....
Bas kya kahoo aapse
Sach mei maza nahi aaya end mei
Na to puri tarah se romance ho paya na pyar aur na sex...
Plz don't take otherwise..
Aapki story hame jaan se bhi jya pyari hei pichle 4 saal se ...
Koi na end sahi nahi likha gaya to kya...
Hame story jaan se bhi jyada pyari thi hei aur rahegi...
But alas a tame end of a beautiful story...

 

[Minto 61]

If you can rewrite
plz edit or delete
End part

 

[Vega Star]

Bhai mein na free nahi baitha hu..job bhi haiaue personal kaam bhi hai..

Ek baar thoda likh ke dekho to pata chlta hai..kitna time lagta hai..abhi app logo ko lag raha hoga ki ye to aise hi bol raha hai..

Sach mein nahi likha jata..aur ek baat batao mein kyun pain lu itna?? .koi paid side mein post karunga na..story..taki kuch earning bhi ho..

Dekhiye maine promise kiya tha ki story complete karunga wo maine kar di..ab aacha likha ya bura likha..mein edit nahi karunga..

Aur aaj tak ke liye aap logo ka bahut ehsaan hai..jo apne story padhi..
Ab nahi ho payega

I can understand your point of view. You have given almost four years to this story. Har achchhi chiz ka ant hota hi hai. I appreciate your work. Meri story bhi chal rahi hai, mujhe bhi laga tha ki ye update kuchh khas hoga, hai bhi, par jitna socha tha utna nahi. Par mayus maat hoiye, ho jata hai kabhi kabhi, yaha har koi is story se, in characters se aisa juda hai ki apani apani fantasy ke hisab se soch hi lega.
Me aapko is story ke completion ke liye badhaai deta hu, aap dusari story bhi likh hi rahe ho to uske liye bhi meri shubhkamnaayein. You have done wonderful job. So don't feel any regret. Thank you

 

[ravanapa6359]

NICE UPDATE