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Fantasy Maantrik-The adventure of Three world's Magic,Romance,Thrill,Incest,Adultery

Story kesi lagi aap ko

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Nub_Ag

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Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Bada hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya h aapne.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
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Nub_Ag

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Nice Update

Behan n apna pati mann liya h jab pta chalega ki vo uska bhaii h tab reaction kya hota h

Urvashi or parul dono sath ja rhiii h

Lagta h bahut bibiya hogi
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mysteryman

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Mast update . Achha laga . Bahan ne to apna pati hi maan liya he. Lekin wo sketch banate hue bhi choki kyu nahi kyuki usaki shakal to ayush se milti julti hi hogi na. Aur ab aap ko urvashi ke sath priya ko bhi le jana hoga . To total ho gayi 3. Bas itani hi he ya aur ginati bhadegi. Dekhate he agle updaye me.
Waiting 4 next update

HAMESHA KI TARAH APKA REVU SHANDAR HOTA HAI...

PAR SHYADA IS STORY MAI AB TAK KOI PRIYA NHI HAI... MERE HISAHB SE VO PARUL HAI...

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Nub_Ag

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UPDATE--13
PREVIOUS-
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Main (man me)- ye urvashi ki bachchi bohot tez hai, par parul lag badi sweet rahi hai aaj.

FORWARD-
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Main sochte hue neeche aa gaya, jahan breakfast ke liye sabhi baithe hue the.
Main bhi jakar baith gaya.
Tabhi dev bhai aaye, maine khade hokar unse hath milaya, or unke sath breakfast karne baith gaya.
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Dev bhai (breakfast karte hue)- to jane ki tayyari ho gayi tum dono ki?
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Main - Ji bhai, par do nahin teen boliye, parul bhi sath ja rahi hai.
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Dev bhai - chalo ye bhi achchha hi hua, 1 se bhale 2. Or do se bhale teen.
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Main - haan ye to hai .
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Dev bhai - waise parul achchhi ladki hai, kya kehte ho, uske pitaji se baat karun tumhare liye??
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Main unki baat sunkar sharma gaya phir mujhe kuchh yaad aaya.
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Main - Wo to baad me dekhenge, pehle breakfast karke aap khopche me aao,
Aapse baat karni hai
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Dev bhai ne muskurate hue apna sar haan me hila diya.
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Tabhi pichhe se "Urvashi & Parul" bhi aa gayin.
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Urvashi - bhai ye khopcha kya hota hai,
or Kya baat karni hai, khopche me lejakar.
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Uski baat par sab hasne lage.
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Joravar - Beti, apna or apne bhai ka dhiyan rakhna.
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Parul - Kaka ji or mera?
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Dev bhai - Are apna ayush hai na tumhara dhiyan rakhne ko.
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Is baat se parul sharma gayi.
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Main - Dev bhaaaiii,
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Dev Bhai - Haan, Oh! Sorry - Sorry O.K. ab nahin chedunga.
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Urvashi (ham sabko ghoorte hue) - kya mujhe koi bataega ki tum sab me kya khichdi pak rahi hai?
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Main - Are gudiya, koi khichdi - vichdi nahin pak rahi. Ye dev bhai vaise hi ched rahe hain.
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Urvashi - Dev bhai, galat baat hai. Aise nahin chhedna chahiye.
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Dev Bhai - Ahh! Sorry bola na gudiya..
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Urvashi - Hmm. Inhen chhedne ka hak sirf mujhe hai.
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Ham sab hasne lage, or aise hi baaten karte hue hamara breakfast khatam hua, or parul chali gayi apna samaan lene, apne ghar se, or sath hi apne papa se permission lene.
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Or main dev bhai ko lekar bagiche me aa gaya.
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Main - Haan to bhai ab bataiyye?
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Dev bhai (mujhe savaliya nazron se dekhte hue) - Kya batana hai?
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Main - Aapki love story or kya?
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Dev bhai ne mujhe ghoor ke dekha or bole-
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Dev Bhai - Ye urvashi ki bachchi ke pet me koi baat nahin pachti, ye pakka usi ka kaam hai.
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Main-kya iss baare me urvashi ko bhi pata hai
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Dev-chal yeh natak mat kar chokne ka mujhe pata hai yeh baat tujhe urvashi ne hi batayi hai
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Main-nahi bhai woh toh maine socha ki jab yahan pe itna khubsurat jungle hai toh aap uss jungle me kyun ghumne jaate ho iss liye...
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Dev-(mujhe ghurte huye)-iss liye kya??
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Main-(najre churate hue)-iss liye kal jab aap wahan gaye the tab maine aapka pichha kiya tha aur aapko bhabhi ji ke sath dekh ke wahan se wapis aa gaya tha
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Dev-galat baat chhote aise pichha nahi karna chahiye kisi ka
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Main-achha aur aise aapka mujh se yeh baat chupana badi achhi baat hai aur agar aap kisi pareshani me hote toh maine toh yahi soch ke aapka picha kiya tha
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Dev-hmm teri baat bhi sahi hai ek pareshani toh hai
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Main-(chinta karte hue)-kyu kya pareshani hai bhai
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Dev-chal main tujhe yeh baat main tujhe shanivaar ki raat ko batata hoon tu aa jayio aur urvashi aur parul ko bhi leke aayio theek hai abhi jaa aur joh kaam hai woh kar
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Main- theek hai waise bhi main unko akele thodi na chhod ke aane wala tha aur shanivaar ko aapka koi bahana nahi chalega
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Dev-(smile)-bata dunga fikar na kar chal jaa ab
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Main-(chhedte huye)-haan bhai late joh ho rahe ho bhabhi se milne ke liye
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main bhi ek baar dev bhai ke gale lagta hoon aur andar aa jate hai hum dono jahan parul aur urvashi apna samaan liye bethi thi
Parul ko samaan ke sath dekhkar main bola-
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Main (parul se)- Are aa gayin aap?
To aapko permission mil hi gayi..
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Parul (smiling)- Permission kyon nahin milti...
Mere pita ji mujhe kisi baat ke liye mana nahin karte..
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Ham baaten karte hue bahar aa gaye
Or pohoch gaye guruji ki kutiya ke paas jahan Maine apni van chhipai thi..
Maine uske oopar se vo jhad - phoos hataya or van me baith gaya..
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Parul doud kar aage vaki seat par baith gayi, or urvashi ko pichhe baithna pada.
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Maine car douda di shaher ki taraf
Urvashi poore raste parul ko ghoor rahi thi, par parul ke man me to pata nahin kya chal raha tha.
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akhir hum phaunch hi gaye maine 2 crore liye aur andar chal diya urvashi&parul ke sath andar diwar pe bahut se gharo aur haweli aur bangalow ki photo's thi aur bahut log bhi baithe the maine ek peon se pucha ki yahan pe sabse best agent kon hai toh usne thodi dur ishara kiya jahan pe ek ladka baitha huwa tha main uski taraf chal diya aur usse greet kiya usne bhi kiya aur baithne ko liye kaha hamme
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P.A-hi sir would you like any tea or coffee
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Main-no thanks water will be fine
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usne uss peon ko bula ke paani mangaya
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P.A.-how could I help you sir
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Main-I want to buy a bunglow in can you show some
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P.A.- ya sure sir i will show you one i am sure you will like
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P.A.-see sir it's fully furnished too
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maine parul aur urvashi ki taraf dekha toh dono ne haan me sar hila diya ki unhe pasand hai yeh ghar
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Main-You are right we like it tell me about how much is it's value
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P.A.-sir the amount you have to pay for this house is 2 crore
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Main-ok are the paper's ready
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P.A.-yes sir you can purchase it right away but it needs some cleaning and some work is pending
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Main-when will be the house ready for us
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P.A.-sir after 1 hour it will be ready
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Main-ok give me the paper and tell me address of the house
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P.A.-sir it's located in ****** colony and here are the papers you have to sing here
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Maine usne jahan kaha wahan pe sign kiya aur payment ki
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P.A.-congratulations sir for buying a new house
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Main-thanks
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P.A.- have a good day sir
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main bahar aaya aur van ko pass me hi bane sports car ke sabse bade showroom ke pass roki andar jaate hi maine dekha urvashi aur parul ek car ko dekh rahi thi joh mujhe bhi pasand aayi
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uske pass me ek bike bhi thi
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maine unn dono ka price puchha toh 2.80 crore huwa maine unhe car pe ek logo
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lagane ko kaha jispe unhone kaha jaise rolls royce me chandi ka laga hota hai waisa lekin maine usse gold ka lagane ko kaha toh unhone kaha ki half hour me ho jayega aur saara kharcha mila ke 3 crore tha car aur bike ka maine bahar aake payment nikal ke andar aake payment ki aur address de diya delivery ka aur bahar aa gaya aur van me baith ke aapne naye ghar ki taraf gadi douda di thodi der me hum ghar phaunch gaye urvashi aur parul ghar ko dekh ke khush ho gayi humne andar jaake check kiya toh ghar ek dum mast tha ghar check karke hum abhi baithe hi the ki ghar ki bell baji maine gate khola toh wahan pe car aur bike aayi thi maine delivery paper pe sign kiya aur bike garage me khadi kardi aur urvashi aur parul ko awaaz lagayi jald hi woh bahar aa gayi aur car ko dekh ke khushi se uchalne lagi maine haste huye unhe gadi me baithne ko kaha aur gate khol diye gadi ke aur driving seat pe baith gaya aur gadi city ke top collage ki taraf bhaga si

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Urvashi-bhai ek baat samajh nahi aayi ki aap pe itne paise kahan se aaye
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Parul bhi uski baat me hami bharne lagi toh maine short me uss raat ki ghatna bata di aur itne collage bhi aa gaya

to... be.... continued.
 
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