Absolutely no, stunning and thrilling writingPart-2
Ham jaise hi Imran bhukari ke pas pahuche hame bohot gandhi bas ane lage is wajese maa ne apne sadi apne nak pe laga di. Imran bhikari swabhav se sidha tha par bohot gandha reheta tha. uske taraf dekhke lagta tha mahino se na nahaya ho aur pichhle 4 mahino se mene use usi fate shirt aur lungi me dekha tha. Uske jag jag fate shirt se uska jalidar baniyan wo bhi fata hua dikhayi deta tha. Abhi wo pure kale maile ho gaye the. Usne haskar hamare tarf umid se dekh kar apna katora age kiya. Maa ne use bhi prasad diya.
Bhikari: shukriya malkin (usne haskar kaha)
Maa: chacha, aaj ghar ke taraf aa jaiye kal ki sabji roti bachi hui he.
Bhikari: ha malkin me ata hu. Aap ki bohot daya he muz budhe bhikari par. Allah apko lambi umra de. (Usne hat jodke kaha)
Maa: Isme daya ki koi bat nahi. Thik he aap aa jaiyega.
Bhikari: ha malkin
Maa ka swabhav bohot dayalu tha. Unko garib aur beghar logo pe bohot daya ati thi. Aur hamesha unse wo pyar se bat karti thi.
Fir me aur maa ghar ke liye nikal gaye. Ham ghar karib 10:30 baje pohoch gaye. Fir ghar jake me tv dekhne laga aur maa dopeher ke khane ki tayari karne lagi. Karib 11:30 baje tak maa ne khana bana liya tha tabhi papa office se aa gaye. Kal urgent kam ke vajese papa ko rat me office me hi rukhna pada. Wo bohot thake hue lag rahe the.
Maa: are aa gaye aap…kitni der laga di. Aap ne kaha tha rat me late hoga aur aap abhi subhe aa rahe he.
Papa: are kya karu…urgent kam aa yaga tha to nikal hi nahi paya office se.
Maa: Aur aap mera call bhi nahi receive kiya.
Papa: are mene bataya na urgent kam tha to aur usme tumhare call pe call. Kitni bar kaha he agar mene call nahi uthaya to me koi urgent kam he hu, thodi der bad call kar liya karunga. Par tumhara he ki call pe call kiye jati ho. (Papa ne jara uchi awaj me bola)
Maa: muze apki fikar ho rahi thi.
Papa: (shant hote hue) dekho me bohot thaka hua hu, sar dard kar rha he aur nind bhi aa rahi he. Ham badme bat karte he.
Maa: apne khana nahi khaya isliye sar dard kar rha hoga. Thoda kha lijiye apko achha lagega.
Papa: Office se ate waqt mene nasta kar liya he abhi bhuk nahi he.
Maa: are..thik he me apka sar daba deti hu
Papa: iski koi jarurat nahi thoda so lunga to thik ho jayega.
Ye bolkar papa sidhe upar kamare me chale gaye. Is bat se maa thodi udhas dikh rahi thi.
Fir thodi der bad Ankush bhi school se aa gaya. Uski school subhe 7 baje se 12 tak reheti he. Aaj saturday tha to uska half day hi tha, fir bhi vo abhi 12 baje aa raha tha.
Maa: kaha the itni de. Aaj to half day tha na fir bhi itna late
Ankush: wo jara dosto ke sath tha
Maa: kitni bar kaha he ke aise awara gardi karne wale dosto se dur rho. Par tum sunne ko tayar hi nahi.
Ankush: apko kitni bar kaha he us bareme mat bola kijiye (chillate hue per patak kar Ankush upar kamre me chala gaya)
Maa: Ankush rukho..me baat kar rahi hu
Par Ankush nahi rukha aur sidhe upar chala gaya. Maa is sab se aur dukhi ho gayi. Muze maa ke liye bura bhi lag raha tha.
Fir maa ne muze kaha
Maa: jao beta chotu ko samzake khana khane ke liye bulao
Me: thik he maa
Aur me upar kamare me gaya aur Ankush ko samzake khana khane ke liye bolne laga. pehele wo meri bat nahi man raha tha par akhirlar wo khana khane ke liye niche aa gaya. Hamne khana khaya fir Ankush upar sone ke liye chala gaya aur me niche hall me tv dekhne laga. Maa bartan manj rahi isliye unhnone apna padar ghumakar samne sadike andar dal diya tha jaisa ki aksar aurate kam karte waqt karti he. Is wajese unka ek side se pura pet aur kamar dikh rahi thi. Tabhi bahar se awaj aya. Wo aur koi nahi imran bhikari tha. Maa kam me busy thi to unhone muze kaha
Maa: are bittu, ye khana unko de ke aa to.
Me: ha maa
Aur me jaise jane laga mera phone baja aur call mere sir ka tha to attend karna important tha.
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Ye dekhkar maa khud hi khana lekar bahar chali gayi. Maa ka dhya hi nahi raha ki wo kis halat me he. Bhikari maa ko is halat me dekh kar pehele chauk gaya aur ek pal unki najar maa ke saf najar ane wali nabhi pe gayi. Aur dusre hi pal use apni galti ka ehesas hua aur usne najare niche kar li. Wo abhi bhi bahut bas mar rha tha maa apni sase rokh kar uski pas gayi aur usko khana de diya aur thoda piche hat gayi.
Bhikari: aapka bohot shukriya malkin. Aap n hoti to mera kya hota. Bhagwan kare aap sada khus raho.
Fir bhikari chala gaya aur maa bhi andar aa gayi. Mera call khatam ho gaya tha aur me sofe pe baitha tha. Wo nak pe hat rakh kar hi andar ayi thi.
Maa: kitna ganda rehta hai kitna gandha bas marta he.
Me: are maa wo bhikari he. Use to ab iski adat ho gayi he. Uske pas kaha achha pani aur sabun he jo wo nahaye.
Maa: are bohotse garib log rehete he par saf sudhre rehete he. Aur mene jo purane kapde isse diye the wo bhi nahi pehenta wahi purani gandhe kapde pehene reheta he. Chiii…
Me: ha wo to he…ab kya kare.
Fir maa ne apna kam khatam kiya aur ham dopeher ki nind lene lage. Sham ko 4:30 baje me nind se utha aur fresh ho gaya. Ankush 4 baje tuition ko chala gaya tha. Me room se bahar aya to muze maa papa ke room se awaj aa rahi thi. Unko darwaja thoda khula hua tha. Mene thoda najdik jake suna
Maa: apne pehele bataya bhi nahi ki apko bahar gav jana he aur abhi jate time bata rahe ho
Papa: ab bata raha hu na..kam me busy tha to yad nahi raha batana. Isme itna bhi kya ho gaya.
Maa: itna kya hua…mahina ho gaya apki meri achhese baat nahi hui he…aap hamesha kam me hi busy rehete ho…ghar ke tarf apka kuch ghyan hi nahi he..amare bete kese he..wo achhese padhai kar rhe he ya nahi apko kuch parva hi nahi.
Papa: to kya karu kam chhod du. Jo bhi kar rha hu tum logoke liye hi kar rha hu na(papa chillate hue bolne lage)
Maa: aap itna bhi kam ke pichhe pagal mat hoiye ke hame hi bhul jaye. Paise kam aenge ghar me to chalega
Papa: bachho jesi bat mat karo Rekha. Ab janedo meri aaj rat ki flight he muze packing karni he aur thoda office ka kam bhi khatam karna he please ham bad me bat karenge
Maa: par suniye to….
Par papa nahi rukhe aur office ki bag lekar room se bahar aane lage to me turant darwajese dur ho gaya. Papa bag lekar niche chale gaye. Wo office ka kam nicheke room me karte the. Me fir se room ke andar zaka to maa roye ja rahi thi.
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Muze unko dekh kar bohot bura laga. Mera dil bhi unke liye rone laga. Par mene unko akela chhod na hi behetar samza. Thodi der bad me ghar se bahar tehlneke liye nikla tab sham ke 6 baj rahe the. Me bridge cross karke mandir ki aur nikal gaya. Mandir ke thoda age jake mere dost ka ghar he to aksar ham sham ko uske ghar ke pas wale garden me tehlte he. Mene aaj sath me ball bhi liya tha ham catching practice karne wale the. Aur chalte chalte me catching kar rha tha. Aur ball galtise mere hath se chchut kar zadiyo me chala gaya. Jaisa mene bataya tha bridge se leke 500m tar zadiya he usme kuch bade ped aur bohot se babul ke ped he. Agar koi usme undar jaye to bahar se jane wale ko asanise dikhe hi na. Ball kafi andar chala gaya tha, jab me ball lene ke liye andar gaya to mene zadiyome se ek ladki ki awaj suni. Muze turant pata chal gaya ye kya ho raha he. Muze ladkike khasne ka awaj ane laga. Mene chupchap us disha me jane ka thana. Main road se me karib 100m andar aga tha. Itni ghani zadiya thi ki yahase road dikh bhi nahi raha tha. Me jaise hi age gaya me dekh ke chauk gaya wo aur koi nahi balki dudhwala tha jo ek ladki ka bohot jalim tarese mu chod raha tha.
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Uske aise vaishi pan se wo ladki sas bhi nahi le paa rahi thi aur zatpata rahi thi. Uske mu se dhuk ki dhara behe rahi thi par dudhwala rukhne ka nam nahi le raha tha. Us ladki ko dekh kar me samaz gaya ye aur koyi nahi “Nilam” he.
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Nilam 23 sal ki newly married aurat thi jo hamare gharse lag ka row house he usme hi apne pati ke sath reheti thi. Abhi 2 sal se ye hamare pas rehene aye the. Uska pati Rajat ek multinational company me kam karta tha. Dikhane me ye bohot hot thi mene bhi kai bar ise imagine karke pani giraya tha. Ye bohot hi sushil aur samanjas thi aur hamesha bahot adab se pesh ati thi. Usko is halat me dekh ke muze apni akhope wishwas nahi ho raha tha.
Dudhwala bina rukhe uska mu chode ja raha tha jisse Nilam ki halat kharab ho gayi thi. Ye sab me pashi ke zadi me chhup ke dekh raha tha.
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Dudhwale ne uske sar ko dono datose pakda tha aur wo jor jor he apna lund uske gale me utar rha tha. Nilam ne apne adhmare hath se uske coscod ball pakad rakhe the.
Dudhwala: aa…le aur le rand…achhese chus…pura galeme dal..aa…aaj tera pura gala chil dunga…haram jadi. Bohot tadpaya tune..chinal..kitne din se tuze bula raha hu ab jake ayi he tu…aa…
Nilam: gurrr..guurrr….maa….guff…fff….kar…gurrff…do…guurrr…ma….guurrr…lik….guurrff
Par dudhwala nahi rukha aur karib 15 min tak berehmise dudhwala uska mu chodte raha..
Chodte chodte usne Nilam ki salwar fad di aur kamiz upar kar li
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Andar nilam ne ek barik dore wali panty peheni hui thi. Aur uske do bade bade chuttad samne aa gaye. Jise dekh kar mera lund pura tan gaya aur me mera lund full speed me hilane laga
Fir Ali ne Nilam ko uthaya aur pas me ek nim ka ped se mu ke bal sata diya.
Dudhwala: aaj tuze aise chodunga chinal ki tu 100 bar sochegi agese nakhare karne ke pahile.
Dodhwala is enough.Bhikhari ka character thoda interesting lag raha hai. Eo ek accha aadmi se use accha rehne do. Rekha aur bhikhari ka conversion jyada dalo jisme emotion, respect aur jyada romance ho.
Ekdum faltu bakwas. She is a conservative and faithful wife. So it's not possible for her to be a open slut.Hott!! Please have both Bhikary and Dudhwala use mom. Have son eventually use mom and then pimp her our to others!
ekdom mast going,bahut khoob,bahot bahot acha likha yaar.Hats offPart-2
Ham jaise hi Imran bhukari ke pas pahuche hame bohot gandhi bas ane lage is wajese maa ne apne sadi apne nak pe laga di. Imran bhikari swabhav se sidha tha par bohot gandha reheta tha. uske taraf dekhke lagta tha mahino se na nahaya ho aur pichhle 4 mahino se mene use usi fate shirt aur lungi me dekha tha. Uske jag jag fate shirt se uska jalidar baniyan wo bhi fata hua dikhayi deta tha. Abhi wo pure kale maile ho gaye the. Usne haskar hamare tarf umid se dekh kar apna katora age kiya. Maa ne use bhi prasad diya.
Bhikari: shukriya malkin (usne haskar kaha)
Maa: chacha, aaj ghar ke taraf aa jaiye kal ki sabji roti bachi hui he.
Bhikari: ha malkin me ata hu. Aap ki bohot daya he muz budhe bhikari par. Allah apko lambi umra de. (Usne hat jodke kaha)
Maa: Isme daya ki koi bat nahi. Thik he aap aa jaiyega.
Bhikari: ha malkin
Maa ka swabhav bohot dayalu tha. Unko garib aur beghar logo pe bohot daya ati thi. Aur hamesha unse wo pyar se bat karti thi.
Fir me aur maa ghar ke liye nikal gaye. Ham ghar karib 10:30 baje pohoch gaye. Fir ghar jake me tv dekhne laga aur maa dopeher ke khane ki tayari karne lagi. Karib 11:30 baje tak maa ne khana bana liya tha tabhi papa office se aa gaye. Kal urgent kam ke vajese papa ko rat me office me hi rukhna pada. Wo bohot thake hue lag rahe the.
Maa: are aa gaye aap…kitni der laga di. Aap ne kaha tha rat me late hoga aur aap abhi subhe aa rahe he.
Papa: are kya karu…urgent kam aa yaga tha to nikal hi nahi paya office se.
Maa: Aur aap mera call bhi nahi receive kiya.
Papa: are mene bataya na urgent kam tha to aur usme tumhare call pe call. Kitni bar kaha he agar mene call nahi uthaya to me koi urgent kam he hu, thodi der bad call kar liya karunga. Par tumhara he ki call pe call kiye jati ho. (Papa ne jara uchi awaj me bola)
Maa: muze apki fikar ho rahi thi.
Papa: (shant hote hue) dekho me bohot thaka hua hu, sar dard kar rha he aur nind bhi aa rahi he. Ham badme bat karte he.
Maa: apne khana nahi khaya isliye sar dard kar rha hoga. Thoda kha lijiye apko achha lagega.
Papa: Office se ate waqt mene nasta kar liya he abhi bhuk nahi he.
Maa: are..thik he me apka sar daba deti hu
Papa: iski koi jarurat nahi thoda so lunga to thik ho jayega.
Ye bolkar papa sidhe upar kamare me chale gaye. Is bat se maa thodi udhas dikh rahi thi.
Fir thodi der bad Ankush bhi school se aa gaya. Uski school subhe 7 baje se 12 tak reheti he. Aaj saturday tha to uska half day hi tha, fir bhi vo abhi 12 baje aa raha tha.
Maa: kaha the itni de. Aaj to half day tha na fir bhi itna late
Ankush: wo jara dosto ke sath tha
Maa: kitni bar kaha he ke aise awara gardi karne wale dosto se dur rho. Par tum sunne ko tayar hi nahi.
Ankush: apko kitni bar kaha he us bareme mat bola kijiye (chillate hue per patak kar Ankush upar kamre me chala gaya)
Maa: Ankush rukho..me baat kar rahi hu
Par Ankush nahi rukha aur sidhe upar chala gaya. Maa is sab se aur dukhi ho gayi. Muze maa ke liye bura bhi lag raha tha.
Fir maa ne muze kaha
Maa: jao beta chotu ko samzake khana khane ke liye bulao
Me: thik he maa
Aur me upar kamare me gaya aur Ankush ko samzake khana khane ke liye bolne laga. pehele wo meri bat nahi man raha tha par akhirlar wo khana khane ke liye niche aa gaya. Hamne khana khaya fir Ankush upar sone ke liye chala gaya aur me niche hall me tv dekhne laga. Maa bartan manj rahi isliye unhnone apna padar ghumakar samne sadike andar dal diya tha jaisa ki aksar aurate kam karte waqt karti he. Is wajese unka ek side se pura pet aur kamar dikh rahi thi. Tabhi bahar se awaj aya. Wo aur koi nahi imran bhikari tha. Maa kam me busy thi to unhone muze kaha
Maa: are bittu, ye khana unko de ke aa to.
Me: ha maa
Aur me jaise jane laga mera phone baja aur call mere sir ka tha to attend karna important tha.
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Ye dekhkar maa khud hi khana lekar bahar chali gayi. Maa ka dhya hi nahi raha ki wo kis halat me he. Bhikari maa ko is halat me dekh kar pehele chauk gaya aur ek pal unki najar maa ke saf najar ane wali nabhi pe gayi. Aur dusre hi pal use apni galti ka ehesas hua aur usne najare niche kar li. Wo abhi bhi bahut bas mar rha tha maa apni sase rokh kar uski pas gayi aur usko khana de diya aur thoda piche hat gayi.
Bhikari: aapka bohot shukriya malkin. Aap n hoti to mera kya hota. Bhagwan kare aap sada khus raho.
Fir bhikari chala gaya aur maa bhi andar aa gayi. Mera call khatam ho gaya tha aur me sofe pe baitha tha. Wo nak pe hat rakh kar hi andar ayi thi.
Maa: kitna ganda rehta hai kitna gandha bas marta he.
Me: are maa wo bhikari he. Use to ab iski adat ho gayi he. Uske pas kaha achha pani aur sabun he jo wo nahaye.
Maa: are bohotse garib log rehete he par saf sudhre rehete he. Aur mene jo purane kapde isse diye the wo bhi nahi pehenta wahi purani gandhe kapde pehene reheta he. Chiii…
Me: ha wo to he…ab kya kare.
Fir maa ne apna kam khatam kiya aur ham dopeher ki nind lene lage. Sham ko 4:30 baje me nind se utha aur fresh ho gaya. Ankush 4 baje tuition ko chala gaya tha. Me room se bahar aya to muze maa papa ke room se awaj aa rahi thi. Unko darwaja thoda khula hua tha. Mene thoda najdik jake suna
Maa: apne pehele bataya bhi nahi ki apko bahar gav jana he aur abhi jate time bata rahe ho
Papa: ab bata raha hu na..kam me busy tha to yad nahi raha batana. Isme itna bhi kya ho gaya.
Maa: itna kya hua…mahina ho gaya apki meri achhese baat nahi hui he…aap hamesha kam me hi busy rehete ho…ghar ke tarf apka kuch ghyan hi nahi he..amare bete kese he..wo achhese padhai kar rhe he ya nahi apko kuch parva hi nahi.
Papa: to kya karu kam chhod du. Jo bhi kar rha hu tum logoke liye hi kar rha hu na(papa chillate hue bolne lage)
Maa: aap itna bhi kam ke pichhe pagal mat hoiye ke hame hi bhul jaye. Paise kam aenge ghar me to chalega
Papa: bachho jesi bat mat karo Rekha. Ab janedo meri aaj rat ki flight he muze packing karni he aur thoda office ka kam bhi khatam karna he please ham bad me bat karenge
Maa: par suniye to….
Par papa nahi rukhe aur office ki bag lekar room se bahar aane lage to me turant darwajese dur ho gaya. Papa bag lekar niche chale gaye. Wo office ka kam nicheke room me karte the. Me fir se room ke andar zaka to maa roye ja rahi thi.
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Muze unko dekh kar bohot bura laga. Mera dil bhi unke liye rone laga. Par mene unko akela chhod na hi behetar samza. Thodi der bad me ghar se bahar tehlneke liye nikla tab sham ke 6 baj rahe the. Me bridge cross karke mandir ki aur nikal gaya. Mandir ke thoda age jake mere dost ka ghar he to aksar ham sham ko uske ghar ke pas wale garden me tehlte he. Mene aaj sath me ball bhi liya tha ham catching practice karne wale the. Aur chalte chalte me catching kar rha tha. Aur ball galtise mere hath se chchut kar zadiyo me chala gaya. Jaisa mene bataya tha bridge se leke 500m tar zadiya he usme kuch bade ped aur bohot se babul ke ped he. Agar koi usme undar jaye to bahar se jane wale ko asanise dikhe hi na. Ball kafi andar chala gaya tha, jab me ball lene ke liye andar gaya to mene zadiyome se ek ladki ki awaj suni. Muze turant pata chal gaya ye kya ho raha he. Muze ladkike khasne ka awaj ane laga. Mene chupchap us disha me jane ka thana. Main road se me karib 100m andar aga tha. Itni ghani zadiya thi ki yahase road dikh bhi nahi raha tha. Me jaise hi age gaya me dekh ke chauk gaya wo aur koi nahi balki dudhwala tha jo ek ladki ka bohot jalim tarese mu chod raha tha.
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Uske aise vaishi pan se wo ladki sas bhi nahi le paa rahi thi aur zatpata rahi thi. Uske mu se dhuk ki dhara behe rahi thi par dudhwala rukhne ka nam nahi le raha tha. Us ladki ko dekh kar me samaz gaya ye aur koyi nahi “Nilam” he.
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Nilam 23 sal ki newly married aurat thi jo hamare gharse lag ka row house he usme hi apne pati ke sath reheti thi. Abhi 2 sal se ye hamare pas rehene aye the. Uska pati Rajat ek multinational company me kam karta tha. Dikhane me ye bohot hot thi mene bhi kai bar ise imagine karke pani giraya tha. Ye bohot hi sushil aur samanjas thi aur hamesha bahot adab se pesh ati thi. Usko is halat me dekh ke muze apni akhope wishwas nahi ho raha tha.
Dudhwala bina rukhe uska mu chode ja raha tha jisse Nilam ki halat kharab ho gayi thi. Ye sab me pashi ke zadi me chhup ke dekh raha tha.
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Dudhwale ne uske sar ko dono datose pakda tha aur wo jor jor he apna lund uske gale me utar rha tha. Nilam ne apne adhmare hath se uske coscod ball pakad rakhe the.
Dudhwala: aa…le aur le rand…achhese chus…pura galeme dal..aa…aaj tera pura gala chil dunga…haram jadi. Bohot tadpaya tune..chinal..kitne din se tuze bula raha hu ab jake ayi he tu…aa…
Nilam: gurrr..guurrr….maa….guff…fff….kar…gurrff…do…guurrr…ma….guurrr…lik….guurrff
Par dudhwala nahi rukha aur karib 15 min tak berehmise dudhwala uska mu chodte raha..
Chodte chodte usne Nilam ki salwar fad di aur kamiz upar kar li
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Andar nilam ne ek barik dore wali panty peheni hui thi. Aur uske do bade bade chuttad samne aa gaye. Jise dekh kar mera lund pura tan gaya aur me mera lund full speed me hilane laga
Fir Ali ne Nilam ko uthaya aur pas me ek nim ka ped se mu ke bal sata diya.
Dudhwala: aaj tuze aise chodunga chinal ki tu 100 bar sochegi agese nakhare karne ke pahile.