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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Mansi- calm down vo aayega vapas
Ashmita- usne kaha tha ki main farmhouse par wait karu vo aaega yaha lekin aaj do din ho gaye vo nahi aaya

Mansi- etna bada kand hua hai kahi underground ho gaya hoga
Naag ne vaise bhi sab jagah dund liya agar kuch hua hota to mil hi jata na
Ashmita- he promised me on our love
Vo usse tod nahi sakta

Mansi- lucifer kabhi apni promises nahi todta aur vo es baar bhi nahi todega
Just believe him
Etne der me naag aagya

Naag- sab saaf ho gaya hai
Sambhal gaye situation
Thanks to you mujhe batane ke liye
Ashmita- lucifer ka kuch pata chala?

Naag- vo aajayenge
Ashmita- usse bahut golliya lagi thi
Pata nahi kaisa hoga

Naag- high class bulletproof vest pahante hai vo
Koe bhi goli unke sareer ko touch nahi kar sakti
Naag ne baat sambhalne ke liye boli lekin ashmita pagal thodi thi

Ashmita- usko blood aa raha tha
Mere sareer par abhi bhi uska blood laga hua hai
Naag- kuch nahi hoga lucifer ko
Aap yuhi tension le rahi ho

Muskaan- lucifer bhaiya nahi aaye?
Aap sab etne tension me kyu ho?
Mansi- lucifer bhaiya aapke liye chocolates lane gaye hai
Abhi aajayenge

Muskaan- vo bina chocolate ke bhi aajate to bhi acha hota
Mansi- to fir aapki chocolate main kha lungi
Theek hai?

Muskaan- hehehe
Theek hai
Mansi- aap ander khelo mujhe didi se kuch baat karni hai

Muskaan- okay
Aur muskaan ander chali gaye
Ashmita- ye kon hai?

Mansi fir ek long story short me bata deti hai ashmita ko lekin abhi vo jada react nahi karti kyuki usse to bas lucifer ki chinta khae ja rahi thi aur to kya hi soche vo

Esliye usne bas hmm hi kiya

Mansi- aap tension mat lo
Vo theek hai aajayenge jaldi hi
Ashmita- mujhe usse akela nahi chhodna chahiye tha
Vo etne dino se pareshan tha meri vajah se aur jab vo mila tab bhi main usse musibat me akela chhod kar aagaye

Mansi- aapne bilkul theek kiya
Kyuki aapke hote vo unse lad nahi sakte the
Esliye unhone aapko jabardasti bejha na ki aap unhe akela chhod kar aaye
Ashmita- bas vo vapas aajaye
Mujhe pata nahi kyu bahut tension ho rahi hai****

Inaaya apne room me padi padi lucifer ke bare me soch rahi thi
Uski aankhen bilkul laal thi sayad kafi roye thi vo aur uska rona banta bhi hai

Vo bahut chahti thi ki lucifer shadi me involve ho aur vo apne kareebi ko lucifer se milaye lekin aisa kuch ho nahi paya

Sath me usse ye bhi pata chal gaya tha ki sehar me kahi shootout hua hai esliye usse aur jada tension ho rakhi thi

Puri mamla to usse pata bhi nahi tha kyuki naag se sab daba diya tha bas halki fulki news hi mili thi usse

Aur ashmita ke na aane par bhi usse kafi dukh hua tha
Besak kitni bhi dooriya ban gaye ho dono ke bich lekin kahi na kahi inaaya ne ye expect kiya tha ki ashmita jarur aayegi lekin vo bhi nahi aaye

Pure time inaaya sirf aur sirf lucifer ko dundti rahi
Uski najare gate se hati hi nahi thi

Lekin lucifer nahi aaya aur jab se shadi khatam hue hai inaaya busy bahut thi lekin fir bhi ek second aisa nahi gujra jab usne lucifer ke bare me socha nahi tha
Ek baar to rathore aur samira ne bhi puch liya tha ki lucifer kyu nahi aaya?

Ab bechari inaaya kya hi batati unhe?
Usse khud kuch pata hota to hi to batati vo

Aise time par dimag me ulte sidhe khayal bhi bahut aate hai jaise ki lucifer ko kuch ho to nahi gaya hai?
Lucifer chala to nahi gaya hai?
Vo humesha bolta tha ki ek din vo bahut door chala jayega kya vo din aaj to nahi hai?
Agar vo chala gaya ya usse kuch ho gaya to fir inaaya kya karegi?
Aise hi pata nahi kitne khayal uske dimag me ghum rahe the jiske jawab uske pass nahi the***

Vahi lucifer sab ko maar kar thodi shanti chahta tha esliye vo chala gaya ussi jungle me
Aur koe jagah bhi to nahi thi uske pass

Jitni golliya lagi thi usse vo abhi bhi uske sareer me hi ghusi hue thi lekin en sab ki kisko hi chinta thi?

Lucifer jungle me pahucha aur us nadi me utar gaya jiske pass bath kar usse saanvi ke bare me pata chala tha

Jab thanda thanda pani uske sareer par lagne laga tab jake usse thodi thodi shanti milne lagi

Kaashvi- tum ne bahut baarish karae hai yaha
Piche se aawaz aae lekin aaj lucifer ko sayad pata tha ki kaashvi jarur aayegi esliye vo jara bhi choka nahi

Lucifer- kisi ko doop se nafarat hai lekin barish nahi naseeb ho rahi
Yaha barish hai to doop naseeb nahi ho rahi
Kaashvi- main esko reality se compare karke dekh lunga
Bahut dino baad aaye?

Lucifer- miss kar rahi thi mujhe?
Kaashvi- tumhri etni premika aaye hai yaha par ki ab tumse milne ka man karne lag gaya hai

Lucifer- tumhe bhi jod du us list me?
Kaashvi- ye pani etna laal kaise ho gaya aaj?

Lucifer- aaj ganda khoon esme pavitra ho gaya hai
Kaashvi- tumhre sareer par ye nisaan kaise hai?

Lucifer- ander aao tumhe dikhata hu apna pura sareer
Kaashvi- aaj thoda alag alag lag rahe ho tum

Lucifer- aaj main vo bana jo main humesha se tha
Kaashvi- humesha se the to fir aaj hi kyu bane?

Lucifer- waqt bahut kutti chhij hai
Kab kiski maar le kahna bahut muskil hai
Kaashvi- bahar aao aur mujhe thodi madad karne do

Lucifer- agar madad hi karni hai to mere bahar aane ka kyu intezaar kar rahi ho?
Yaha aakar bhi madad ki ja sakti hai
Kaashvi- mere kapde gile ho jayenge

Lucifer- mera sareer aag ka ek gola hai ek second me sukha dunga tumhe aur tumhre kapdo ko
Kaashvi- aaj tum bahut badle badle lag rahe ho
Kuch hua hai kya?

Lucifer- kuch bhi nahi hua
Just me being me this time
Kaashvi- chalo fir main hi aajati hu

Aur kaashvi dheere dheere pani me utarne lagi aur uske utarne par lucifer ko pata chala ki eske pass kitna khatarnaak figure hai

Vo humesha loose loose kapde pahnti thi to jada pata nahi chalta tha ki un kapdo ke ander kya chhupa rakha hai usne

Lekin ab bhigne ki vajah se lucifer ko uske curves bilkul saaf dikh rahe the

Kaashvi aisi najaro ko na padh sake aisa to ho nahi sakta tha lekin usne kuch bola nahi

Vo lucifer ke bilkul najdeek aagaye aur uski chest par lage goliyo ke nisaan dekhne lagi

Bina kuch bole usne apne kapdo me se ek nakuli chhij nikali aur 10 seconds me hi lucifer ke sareer se sare goliya nikal kar fek di

Kaashvi ke samne uska nila khoon nikla jise Kaashvi samjhne ki kosis kar rahi thi

Lucifer- mat aa mere etne pass me
Yaha kuch acha nahi milne wala tumhe
Kaashvi- abhi to tumne hi bulaya aur ab tum hi mana kar rahe ho

Lucifer- sirf tum hi dimag nahi pad sakti ho
Main bhi pad sakta hu
Kaashvi- apni aankhen band karo

Lucifer ne bina kuch sawal kiye apni aankhen band kar li

Kaashvi ne uske dil ke pass apna ek hath rakh liya aur
Kaashvi- ab relax ho jao
Sab kuch theek hai
Yaha bas tum ho aur bas tum ho
Relaxxxx bahut shant tarike se kaashvi bol rahi thi

Lucifer kuch hi seconds me bilkul relax ho gaya, uska sareer dheela padne laga aur uska bhaar kaashvi ko feel hone laga

Kaashvi- ab vo dekhe jo tum dekhan chahte ho
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Kaashvi- kya dikh raha hai?
Lucifer- andhera

Kaashvi- roshini dundne ki kosis karo
Lucifer- ek ladki dikh rahi hai

Kaashvi- kon hai?
Lucifer- pata nahi

Kaashvi- kya kar rahi hai?
Lucifer- muskura rahi hai

Kaashvi- tum kaha ho?
Lucifer- uske sath me hi

Kaashvi- kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- laashe padi hai
Sayad maar rahe the kisi ko

Kaashvi- kisko?
Lucifer- nahi pata

Kaashvi- jagah konsi hai?
Lucifer- andera hai
Laal rang bhi dikh raha hai aur bahut chhikhe chhilane ki aawaz aa rahi hai

Kaashvi- tum dono ki vajah se?
Lucifer- lag to raha hai

Kaashvi- dusri jagah jao
Happy jagah
Lucifer- vo sath me hi hai har jagah muskurate hue

Kaashvi- kya ye saanvi hai?
Lucifer- nahi saanvi nahi hai

Kaashvi- saanvi ke bare me socho
Lucifer- nahi dikh rahi
Sab dhundla hota ja raha hai

Kaashvi- kosis karo
Lucifer- jalne lag gaya sab kuch

Kaashvi- relaaxxxx
Aankhen khol lo dheere dheere
Lucifer bhi dheere dheere aankhen kholne laga

Kaashvi- kya hua aaj?
Lucifer- kuch ajeeb tha aaj

Kaashvi- koe baat nahi hume vapas try karenge kabhi
Lucifer- hmm

Kaashvi- chalo bahar aajao
Bahut waqt ho gaya nahate nahate
Lucifer aur kaashvi fir pani se bahar aagaye

Kaashvi lucifer ke jhakmo par vaha se kuch patto ko tod kar lagati hai

Lucifer- mujhe yaad hai tumhe sehar ghumana
Kaashvi- koe baat nahi
Abhi waqt hai bahut
Tum aaram karo....
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
 

Lone survivor

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Ab mai kya kahun bhai story ke hisaab se mumkin hai nai to Jo khud lohe se bana ho usko Kam se kam lakdi se to ghayal nai kar sakte uske liye kuch khash hathiyar chahiye yahan ye sadharan goliyon se ghayal ho gaya na ishiliye bola.baki updete ekdam mast tha
Nahi bhai aap samjhe hi nahi abhi tak
Goliya reason nahi the lucifer ke ghayal hone ka reason to...
 
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Lone survivor

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Bahut hi acha Update tha Lone survivor bhai maja aa gaya. Do din bit gaye hai. Lakin Lucifer ka kuch pata nahi ab yaha aapne to bs ashmita aur innaya ko dikhaya hai abhi to maduri bhi rah gayi hai. Sb paresan hai. Dekhte hai kab jata hai Lucifer sbse paas aur kya hota hai jb wo ek ek se milega. Aur yaha kashvi ke sath bhi kuch quality time to bana hi gaya apna ladka. Dekhte hai next update me kya hota hai.
Madhuri ko jaan bujh kar nahi dikhaya
Usko sochne samjhne do
 

Lone survivor

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Sab bechain hai apne apne reasons ki wajah se, phir Ashmita ho, Inaaya ho, Naag ho yaa phir Lucii ho.

Kaashvi ne aaj kuch to naya try karwaya Lucii ko shayaad wo hi Lucii ko uska past yaad karane mein maddad karegi, ab iska kya relation tha Lucii se past mein wo dekhna hoga?

Bahut hi imotional update.
Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting
 
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