Fantasy Kismat

[Singh Deep 909]

Chapter 2





Baaki di raat ida hi langh gayi, te Karan apne chhote jehe kiraye de kamre vich wapas aa baitha, par usda dimaag aje vi us kudi te atakya hoya si jo raat nu dukkan vich aayi si.



Ludhiane ch badtameezi koi navi gall nahi si, par oh aurat hadd hi kar gayi si. Meenh naal pije kapde, mitti naal bhari jutti, farsh kharab kitta alag, te utton gall karan da tareeka vi jiven saamne banda hove hi na.



Karan nu kade samajh nahi aaya si ke lokan layi zara jehi insaaniyat dikhani ena aukhi kyon hundi aa. Par aam taur te ohnu farak nahi painda si, par us kudi da vartav usnu chub reha si.



Oh cigarette wali gall ton thodi der baad ik phone call aunde hi dukkan ton nikal gayi si. Par Karan nu andaron-andar eh lagda reha ke je call vi na aunda, ta vi oh apni marzi hi chalaundi.



Sach puchho ta je oh koi vaddi pahunch wali hove, tan nuksan Karan da hi hona si. Chahe galti usdi na hove, malik ne aakhir grahak da hi pakh lena si.



Ludhiana te Chandigarh vich bahut shotia motian celebs, singers, influencers, modelan ghumdiyan phirdiyan rehndiyan san. Har kise nu yaad rakhna mumkin nahi si. Karan nu eh hero-worship waise vi samajh nahi aundi si. Usde layi bas ikko cheez matter kardi si zindagi guzaran joge paise



Usde kamre ch furniture de naa te bas ik kursi, ik meja, te diwar te tangya purana TV si. Na ghar vich garmahat si, na jeen da swaad. Odo hi usde tid vich gudh gudh hoon lag payi. Ohnun yaad aaya ke ajj raat di roti ta oh leke aaya hi nahi.



Aam taur te oh ik restaurant ton raat de bache hoye khane nu saste rate te chak lainda si. Eh ohna di policy de khilaaf si, par Karan kol purana bahana ready hunda si — “ih mere kutte layi aa.”



Ajib gall eh si ke oh restaurant asal vich oh khana usnu vech vi dinda si. Par Karan ne kade sawal nahi kita. Ohnu cheezan di asli keemat da pata si.



“Changa ji… kismat 7, Karan 0,” oh halke jehe gusse ch budbudaya te fridge wal tur peya, jadke oh pehlan hi jaanda si ke andar kujh vi khaas nahi hovega.



Fridge khol ke oh kujh pal tak bas takda reha. Ik dudh da packet paya si jida pata nahi kharab ho gya si ja nahi, te do-teen dabbe aise bache hoye khane de san jo in khaan de layek lag v nahi rahe si.



“Chalo, ajj vi bina roti de hi sahi…” oh haar manni hoi awaaz ch kehnda hoya bed te digg peya.



Par usda phone vibrate hoon lag piya. Karan nu pehlan hi andaza si ke kaun hovega. Usdi khair-khabar len wala koi si hi nahi.



Te jo usne socheya si ohi nikliya, message Bedi saab da si — is hafte kiraya na ditta ta kamra khaali karna pavega.



Karan nu Bedi saab di is gal te gussa vi nahi aaya. Kyunki oh theek bande san. Do vaar pehlan vi oh usdi haalat samajh ke kiraye ch dhel de chukke san. Par oh koi dharamshala nahi chala rahe san — oh vi apna kaam hi chala rahe san.



Karan di zindagi tankhah ton tankhah tak atki hoi si. Je ik mahine di tankhah hath ton nikal jaave, ta ohnu samajh nahi aunda si ke oh ki kare. Par usdi zindagi di sachchai eh vi si ke je oh achanak gaayab ho jaave, ta shayad kise nu pata vi na lagge.



Oh us raat khaali pet so gaya, eh soch ke ke kal kise tarah eh masla sambhal lavega.



Agli saver vi ida hi lang gayi, par Karan time te ready si. Oh kam te jaan layi bilkul utsuk nahi si, par ohnu har shift di lodh si. Har nava din ohnu injh lagda si jiven usde andar kujh mar reha hove.



Sharam oh pehlan hi kaafi hadd tak haar chukka si. Paisa kamaun layi hun oh kise hadd tak ja sakda si.



Is vaar oh ghar ton nikaleya ta usne chatri nal rakh layi. Raat wali bewakoofi dubara nahi karni chahunda si.



Usdi dukkan ghar ton kujh hi mint door si. Dukan te pujde hi usde kanni ik aawaz payi.



“Oye Karan, ajj jaldi aa gaya,” usda coworker Navdeep, jinu saare Navi kehnde san, muskura ke bolya.



Navi college da munda si, ek dum saaf chehra, lambe halke bhure baal, te neelianian akkhan. Malik usnu Karan ton vadh paise dinda si, te eh gall Karan nu chubdi ta si, par oh kar v ki sakda si— Navi de hon naal kujh grahak sachmuch wapas aa jande san.



Kudiyan usde counter te kuj der gallan maran layi ruk jandia san, te Navi nu gall karni v aundi si. Duniya ch sohna chehra hamesha bikda aa — ads ch, filman ch, dukan ch, har jagah.



Karan nu Navi naal koi khaas jalan nahi si. Oh part-time si, te Karan nu bas ikko gall hairan kardi si — “eh munda ethe kam kar hi kyon reha aa?”



Din aam tarike naal langhda reha. Dopahar tak Navi apni shift karke nikal gaya. Dukkan vich grahak pehlan hi ghatt hunde san, is karke malik mazdoori bachaun layi kattoti karda si. Matlab shaam ton raat tak poori dukkan fer Karan de ser te si.



Par Karan nu pata nahi kyun lag reha c ke ajj jarur kuj howe ga. Oh apni soch v hi c ke, Dukkan da darwaza khulya, te ik vadda saand varga banda darwaza khol ke khada ho gaya. Te usde picho ohi raat wali kudi andar aa gayi.



Karan jakdum khada ho gya te boleya.

“Ji madam, dasso ki cha—” oh gall poori karda, us ton pehlan hi oh kudi uchi deni boli.



“MAIN MANAGER NU MILNA AA!”



Ih sab ine achanak nal hoeya ke Karan ik kadam pichhe hat gaya. Darwaza fadh ke khada banda vi hun andar aa gaya si. Dukan de andar da mahul hi badal gya si.



Office chon manager bahar nikal aeya, te Karan ne usde chehre wal vekh ke hi samajh gya ke ajj panga pe gya aa.



“Oh ho! Kashish Walia ji!?” Randhawa saab di awaaz ch hadd ton vadh utsaah si.



Odo Karan nu samajh aaya ke eh koi jaani-pachhani shakhsiyat aa. Par kis gall layi? Sirf nakhre layi?



Randhawa saab talaaqshuda bande san, umar late forties ch, te kad vi Karan ton kaafi chhota — mushkil naal panj fut chaar inch de kareeb. Kashish ne ohna di over-excitement te akkhan ghumma dittiyan, jiven eh sab us layi aam gall hove.



Asal ch Kashish ik chhote shehar di struggler actress si. Ik sasti OTT Punjabi film de bold scene karke ohnu thodi bohat pehchaan mil gayi si. Na koi vaddi heroine, na koi asli star — par ena zaroor ke Randhawa saab varge bande usnu turant pehchaan lain.



“Tuhaada eh munda nemera bag kharab kar ditta, te mainu full payment chahidi aa,” Kashish ne sakht lehje ch keha.



Odo hi Karan di nazar bag te gayi. LV da logo saaf dikh reha si. Par oh turant samajh gaya ke eh oh wala bag nahi si jo raat nu usde kol si. Par oh eh vi jaanda si ke usdi gall te koi yakeen nahi karega.



“Eh bag ta shayad mere kine mahine da kharcha kadd deve…” Karan ne andar hi andar sochya.



“Hain ihne isdi ini himmat! Main eh pakka karaanga ke eh tuhanu har ik paisa wapas deve,” Randhawa saab ne lagbhag jhukde hoye keha.



Eh sun ke Karan de andar Randhawa saab layi khij hor v vadh gayi usnu gussa te ina aeya…par usne khud te kabu kar liya. Eh hi ta usdi zindagi si — jithe jisda dil karda, ohde sir pair rakh ke langh janda.



Odo Karan di nazar us vaddde bande di shaati wal gayi. Civil dress de thalle usda badge chamak reha si. Ih ik Police wala si.



“Koi saboot hai aa?” Karan ne shaant par saaf awaaz ch puchhya. Oh enna narmi naal bolda si ke lok aksar samajh lainde san ke eh darpok aa.



“Kii?” Kashish ne zehar bhari nazar naal usde wal dekh ke pucheya.



“Main keha, saboot hai aa koi tuhade kol?” Karan ne fer dohraaya.



Odo police wale ne apna phone kadd ke ik video chala ditti. Video ch saaf dikh reha si jiven Karan gusse ch Kashish da bag zor naal khich ke usdi patti tod reha hove. Video dekh ke Karan de ta jime taate muh nu a gye.



“Eh kime ho sakda aa…pencho ih video istu kida aa gayi te ih video bann kida gayi ih pakka saleya ne Ai nal banyi huni aa?” Par sala ih Ai deepfake ina asli kado toh lagan lag piya.



Karan samaj gya si ke Kashish vargi struggle kardi kudi nu apni mehngi zindagi chalon layi paisian di kini lodh hundi a te oh is layi koi v galat raah chun sakdi aa, te ajj usne nishana Karan nu bana liya si.



Karan nu pata hi nahi si apna bachaa kiven kare. Te sach eh si ke oh koshish vi nahi kar reha si. Kyunki ohnu pata si ke kise ne usde gal te zakeen hi nahi karna aa.



“Theek aa…” oh dheeme lehje ch bolya. “Dasso, kine paise chahide ne?”



Eh us pal di usdi sab ton vaddi galti si. Je oh sidha mana kar dinda, ta shaed kuj ho janda, par police wale nu dekh ke bilkul v nahi lag reha c ke oh v usdi gal sune ga.



“Tera naseeb changa aa ke Miss Kashish tere case nahi pa rahi,” police wale ne thande andaaz ch keha. “Nava bag le de, gall mukk jaavegi.”



Karan hass peya. Par usda hassa mazaak wala nahi si — thakawat, zaleelpan te haar da hassa si jo usnu khud te aa reha si.



“Ki gall aa? Bohat hasse aa reha aa tenu?” Kashish bhadak ke boli.



Kashish di gal te Karan da dil te kita sali de thapad maar dawe par oh apne upar hor case nahi pawona chahunda si.



Baki di gal sari gal short vich dasa te….ustoh vaad police wale ne Karan nu majboor karke usde account ch paye lagbhag saare paise transfer karwa ditte.



Jo ke mushkil naal ik lakh sattar hazaar de kareeb si. Te upro Karan di naukri v gayi. Te is tarah oh raat de hanera vich ik pull de kinare aa khadeya. Karan ne soch liya si ke oh apni zindagi ajj khatam hi kar lawe ga.



Par usnu nahi pata si ke usde nal kuj aisa hon wala aa jo usdi zindagi da poora rukh hi badal dawe ga.

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Chapter 3





Karan apni zindagi khatam karan da mann bana ke pull te chadh gya.



Ding!

Cashback System di Activation Requirement poori ho gayi hai!

System Binding progress vich aa…!

System safalta naal link ho gaya hai!

Tusi 1 Lakh 70 hazar rupees kharch kite ne. Jis vicho tuci 1 lakh ik khoobsurat aurat te kharach kite aa.

10X Critical Hit trigger hoya hai.

Tuhanu 10 lakh rupay dite jande ne.

Rakam account XXX-XXX-XXX vich transfer ho chukki aa!

Tuhanu 1 lottery ticket mili aa!

Ki tusi draw karna chaunde ho?

YES | NO



Karan oh banda si jide hissay kismat ne kadey kujh changa likheya hi nahi si. Ghat tankha wali naukri, jhootha ilzaam, te usde hissay zaleel hona. Hun oh zindagi khatam karan de bilkul kinare te aa khada si.



Usnu lag reha si ke sohni shakal wale lokan layi duniya waqai aasaan hondi aa.

Eh usda aakhri qadam hona si. Oh pull ton thalle paani wal tak reha si jis vich oh chaal maran hi wala si ke usde dimag vich ik awaj ne ih sab bolna shuru kar dita te usdia akhan saaamne nile rang di ajeeb jahi screen chamak payi.



Karan ne hichkichake YES wala button daba dita.



Mubarkan! Tusi “Charm Skill” draw kita aa!



Charm: Hun user apni personality naal kise vi situation vich ghuss sakda aa ya bach sakda aa. Kainaat ne tuhanu khaas charisma bakhshya aa!



“Is sali ki cheez aa pencho… lagda main sachi pagal ho gaya haan…” Kaamran nu kuj samajh nahi a reha si ke usde nal ho ki reha aa.



Usne socheya te maut de dar toh usda dimag usnu kuj v dikha reha aa. Oh dubara thale wang rahe paani wal dekh ke shaal maran di soch hi reha si ke usde phone di notification tune baj payi.



Te jado usne phone jeb cho kad ke dekhya ta, usde saah ute de ute te thale de thale hi reh gye usde account vich das lakh rupaye jama ho gaye san.



“PENCHO EH TA SACCH AA?!” Karan de muhon unchi jahi nikal gya. Oh ena aachbe vich si ke lagbhag usda santulan bigad hi gya si, par oh jaldi nal pichhe hatt gaya te pull toh thale utar aeya.



“Pencho je ih sach aa, fer te pencho mai hor jeena aa, Sala hunte zindagi jeen da sawad auna aa.”



Pure ik minute tak oh pull de kinare khada apne phone te aye balance wale message nu hi takda reha. Usnu yakeen hi nahi aa reha si ke jo kujh oh vekh reha aa, oh sab usde nal ho chuka aa.



“Haaye rabba… eh ta sachmuch ho gaya…” oh fir zor naal bol piya, par phir ohnu yaad aaya ke oh ajje vi public jagah vich khada aa, te usne turant apne aap nu sambhalya.



Par usnu is gal da te pata lag gya si— eh system sirf odo trigger hunda aa jadon paisa kise khoobsurat aurat te kharch kita howe. Fer usnu yaad aeya ke usne Kashish nu paise dite si, par usne te 1 lakh 70 hazar dita si. Fer usde dimag vich aeya sala 70 hazar oh police wala le gya huna aa.



Karan hor kuj sochda ke usnu ehsaas hieya ke raat kaafi ho chukki aa, te khada v pull te aa. Is layi Karan ne ik second vi waste nahi kita te seedha apne kamre wal daud paya.



Ghar pahunch ke oh bed te chhal maar ke baith gaya. Kamra hamesha di tarah bikhreya hoya si, par hun usnu ohdi parwah nahi si. Oh turant apne phone ch contact list, social apps, gallery sab dekhna lag peya, eh soch ke ke shayad kise kudi da number save hove.



Par usnu kuj v nahi miliya. “Pencho….mere kol ta ik vi kudi da number tak v nahi aa…”



Par hun apne te taras khan da faida nahi si. Sab ton pehla kaam si kiraya clear karna, fer pame system hove ya na hove, bina chhat de banda da guzara nahi ho sakda.



Karan, jo kujh pehla apni jaan den lagga si, hun achanak pehli vaar future baare soch reha si.



Raat khatam hoi, saver hoi, par Karan hun berozgaar si. Par hun usnu naukri di lodh mehsoos nahi ho rahi si. Zindagi ne jiven ohnu second chance de ditta si.



Usne bina der kite 20 hazar Bedi saab nu transfer kar ditte. Pichhla kiraya vi clear ho jaave, te agge layi vi tension nahi rahwe gi. Asal vich paise ta us kol pehla v si te oh kadi v Bedi saab nu paise de salda si. Par Karan oh paise apni study layi jodh reha si. Oh bass kise v tarike nal Bedi saab nu tal reha si. Par hun usde account vich 10 lakh piya si. Is layi usnd jhat hi sare paise Bedi saab nu send kar dite si.



Transfer kittiyan ik minute vi nahi hoi si ke usde darwaze te zor-zor di thak thak hoon lag payi.



“KARAN! OYE KARAN!”



Awaaz sun ke Karan turant samajh gaya ki ih Bedi saab hi ne.



Oh fatafat darwaza khol ke bahar aaya. Bedi saab bahar khade san, Karan nu dekh ke sidah hi bole tu theek ta hai a na Karan. Tenu sare paise ikathe paun di lodh nahi si. Mainu tere haalatan da pata aa putt.



“Hanji mai theek aa, mai socheya vaad vich v dene aa, hune ikathe hi de dama, shaed agle kuj mahine tuci mere kol kireya nahi mango ge.” Karan ne mazakiya lehje vich keha.



Eh mazaak si, par eh, eh vi dikhaunda si ke dono bandiya vich rista kafi vadia si. Par Bedi saab makan malik ne te kireya mangna ohna da haq aa. Is layi Karan nu kadi v Bedi saab da kireya manga galat nahi lageya.



Fer doma vich ik do gallan hor hoyian te Bedi Saab thale chale gye. Hun poora din Karan vehla si, kam us kol hun si nahi, karan layi kuj si nahi. Te phir ohnu ikdam us kudi da naam yaad aaya.



“Kashish…” usne dheeme lehje ch keha. Usde dimaag ch ik nava khayal aeya. Je system sachmuch asal vich hai aa jo ke hai v aa, te jime “Charm” wali skill kam kardi aa, ta shaayad mai Kashish wargi kudi nu te kabu pa sakda aa. Uskolo badla laina ta banda aa.



Ohne apna phone chakeya te internet te usnu labhan lag gaya. Usne Social media, casting pages, local entertainment profiles, sab kuchh khanghaal ditta. Par usnu Kashish bare kuj khaas nahi miliya. Jo ke is gall da saboot si ke oh koi vaddi star nahi aa, bas ik struggler type hi aa.



Par scroll karde karde usde hath usdi offical insta gram id lag hi gayi te jado usne us upar usdi bio padhi…..jis vich likhiya si……. Ke oh model/actress aa te gigs layi available aa.



Te ih padh ke Karan de face te kamini jahi muskan aa gayi. Par oh ini jaldi koi kadam nhi chukan wala si. Oh pehla hor jayda paisa kamona chahunda si.



Apne plan de mutabik oh utheya te apni almari chon apne sab ton changge kapde kad ke paun laga. Par oh kapde naam layi hi change san, kyunki usde zyada tar kapde second-hand market ya saste stall ton liye hoye san, te fashion sense usda waise vi koi khaas nahi si.



Ate ik hor gall usne notice kiti si ke…Bedi saab nu paise bhejan naal system ne koi cashback nahi ditta si. Jisdi ke usnu umeed v nahi si. Kyunki rati jime System ne notification diti si ke tuci khoobsurat aurat te paise kharche aa….us hisab nal Karan nu andaza ho gya si ke System kime work karda aa.



Matlab rule bilkul saaf si: system sirf aurtaan te kharch hoye paise nu hi count karda aa, te shayad oh vi sirf khoobsurat aurtaan te.



Karan apne kamre cho bahar nikal aeya. Par ajj usde kadam bahut halke san. Jo usnu aage kadi nahi lage. Ludhiane di hawa ta ajj v oda di hi si, par Karan de andar ajj pehli vaar umeed da halka jeha jhonka si.



Oh soch reha si ke shayad Ludhiana de malls, cafes, branded showrooms, salons, te upscale markets vich usnu koi kudi mil jawe jiste oh paise kharach kar sake.



Punjab vich sohniyan kudiyan di koi kami nahi si. College jandian kudian, Influencer, model, boutique girls, rich family dian kudiyan ludhiane vich bhariyan piyan san.



Oh sadkan te idhar-udhar nazar maar da tur reha si, kise sohni kudi nu approach karan layi mauka labh reha si. Par Karan de paye change kapde v ine change nahi si ke koi kudi us nu ik pal layi dekh v lawe. Te duja usdi khud v himmat nahi pe rahi si ke oh kise de kol ja ke puche.



Par ida hi usde dimag vich ik practical idea aeya, je oh kise mehnge store ch ja ke kise sohni kudi da bill pay karan bare kudi nu kahwe ta shaed usdi gal bann sakdi aa. Par store ena mehnga vi na hove ke pehle hi bill dekh ke usdi hawa tight ho jaave. Upro koi kudi ida hi thodi apna bill den layi mann jawe gi ih v kise anjan munde de sirf kehan te.



Oh is sab aoch hi reha si ke odo usdi nazar Pavilion Mall te pe gayi, jithe ik premium electronics showroom si — Apple da. Ih dekh ke Karan de chehre te halki jehi smile aa gayi.



“Phone te laptop ton vadh paisa uddan layi hor changi jagah kehdi ho sakdi aa. Oh ih soch ke andar badh gya ke shaed oh store vich kise kudi nu phone ja laptop le dawe ga kyunki, usnu pata si ke apple store vich kayi loki ta bass ida hi ghuman aa jande ne, ohna kol ine paise ta nahi hunde aa, par Iphone lain di isha sab di hundi aa.



Oh ahi sochda store vich vadh gya te usda sawagat Ik kudi ne professional smile nal kita. Karan ne pehli nazar ch hi pehchaan liya, eh ik banonti muskan a jo harek sales girls dindi aa.



“Welcome sir, main tuhadi kiven madad kar sakdi haan?” ladki ne keha.



Usdian akkhan halkian bhurian sab te oh ik dum slim si, usne bahut hi fight dress payi si jis vich usde sharir di banawat saaf dekhi ja sakdi si. Te usnu dekh Karan nu oh theek-thaak attractive laggi si.



Te oh kudi v jime Karan di akh pehchaan gayi si ke Karan ne usnu notice kita aa. Par usne is gal nu ignore kita te apne face te smile banayi rakhi.



“Main ik phone laina aa, te full payment karni aa,” Karan ne sidha keha.



Ladki ik pal layi ruk gayi. Aam taur te lok EMI, card plan, ya exchange di gall karde ne. Eh banda sidha full payment di gall kar reha si.



Karan da nigah jado usde badge te payi ta usnu, usda naam pata lag gya Jasmeen.



“Sir daso kehda model lawo ge, je tuhanu koi help di lodh aa mai tuhanu khud dikha dindi aa.” Jasmeen ne ohi smile apne face te banaye rakhe keha.



Par Karan di nazar nal nal pura showroom scan kar rahi si, oh is aas vich si ke shaayad koi hor vi zyada stunning kudi mil jaave, par store khaasa khaali si. Staff wale fake smileyan naal idhar-udhar phir rahe san.



Karna ik lamba saah liya apne plan excute karan vare soch ke himmat karke usne Jasmeen wal dekya te boliya.



“Jasmeen, je main tenu ik nava iPhone gift karaan, te tenu kiven laggu ga?”



Jasmeen nu is gal di ummed nahi si oh te ih gal sun hadbada jahi gayi. “Ji, Sir, ki keha tuci?”



“I am serious,” Karan ne halki jahi excited tone vich keha. “Main tenu Iphone 17 pro max te ik Macbook Pro with insurance gift karni chahunda aa.”



Karan di ih gal sun ke ta Jasmeen puri tarah hill gayi, usde muh cho shabad hi nahi nikal rahe si. Usde dimag vich pehli gal ahi ayi ke…



“Sir… tusi koi YouTuber-shoutuber ta nahi ho?” Te ina bol ke oh turant idhar-udhar vekhan lag payi, jiven kise hidden camera di talash kar rahi hove.



Par oh kuj hor boldi Karan pehla hi payment counter te puj chuka si. Oh lagoagh doud ke payment counter te puji te boli….”Sir….par oh apni gal puri kardi usto pehla ho Karan bol piya…”Tuhanu kuj v bolan di lodh nahi aa, tuci bass mainu Youtuber hi samaj lawo, te samajh lawo aaj tuhada lucky din aa.



Jasmeen nu is time khushi v bahut ho rahi si, oh nervous v bahut ho rahi si, oh manah v karna cha rahi si, par usnu lalach v aa reha si, oh ih sab sochdi kuch bolan di kohsish kar hi rahi si ke ine vich Karan ne payment te khadi kudi nu bol ke card rahi payment v kar diti si.



Jasmeen layi ih sab kise supne ja chamatkar toh ghat nahi si. Usnu samajh nahi aa reha si ke oh react kiven kare. Jida hi payement puri hoyi nal hi Karan de dimag vich notification di aawaz a gyi



Ding!

Tusi 5 lakh rupay kharch kite ne.

10X Critical Hit trigger ho gya aa.

Tuhanu 50 lakh rupay milde ne!

Rakam account XXX-XXX-XXX vich transfer ho chukki aa!

Tusi ik khoobsurat aurat te ghatt ton ghatt 5 lakh kharch kite ne!

Congratulations! System upgrade requirement poori ho gayi aa!

New system function unlock ho gya aa!

Congratulations! Tusi “Harem Function” unlock kar liya aa!

Tuhanu 3 lottery tickets milian ne!

Tuhanu 1 extreme lottery ticket mili aa!

Ki tusi draw karna chaunde ho?

YES | NO

 

[Singh Deep 909]

Chapter 3





Karan apni zindagi khatam karan da mann bana ke pull te chadh gya.



Ding!

Cashback System di Activation Requirement poori ho gayi hai!

System Binding progress vich aa…!

System safalta naal link ho gaya hai!

Tusi 1 Lakh 70 hazar rupees kharch kite ne. Jis vicho tuci 1 lakh ik khoobsurat aurat te kharach kite aa.

10X Critical Hit trigger hoya hai.

Tuhanu 10 lakh rupay dite jande ne.

Rakam account XXX-XXX-XXX vich transfer ho chukki aa!

Tuhanu 1 lottery ticket mili aa!

Ki tusi draw karna chaunde ho?

YES | NO



Karan oh banda si jide hissay kismat ne kadey kujh changa likheya hi nahi si. Ghat tankha wali naukri, jhootha ilzaam, te usde hissay zaleel hona. Hun oh zindagi khatam karan de bilkul kinare te aa khada si.



Usnu lag reha si ke sohni shakal wale lokan layi duniya waqai aasaan hondi aa.

Eh usda aakhri qadam hona si. Oh pull ton thalle paani wal tak reha si jis vich oh chaal maran hi wala si ke usde dimag vich ik awaj ne ih sab bolna shuru kar dita te usdia akhan saaamne nile rang di ajeeb jahi screen chamak payi.



Karan ne hichkichake YES wala button daba dita.



Mubarkan! Tusi “Charm Skill” draw kita aa!



Charm: Hun user apni personality naal kise vi situation vich ghuss sakda aa ya bach sakda aa. Kainaat ne tuhanu khaas charisma bakhshya aa!



“Is sali ki cheez aa pencho… lagda main sachi pagal ho gaya haan…” Kaamran nu kuj samajh nahi a reha si ke usde nal ho ki reha aa.



Usne socheya te maut de dar toh usda dimag usnu kuj v dikha reha aa. Oh dubara thale wang rahe paani wal dekh ke shaal maran di soch hi reha si ke usde phone di notification tune baj payi.



Te jado usne phone jeb cho kad ke dekhya ta, usde saah ute de ute te thale de thale hi reh gye usde account vich das lakh rupaye jama ho gaye san.



“PENCHO EH TA SACCH AA?!” Karan de muhon unchi jahi nikal gya. Oh ena aachbe vich si ke lagbhag usda santulan bigad hi gya si, par oh jaldi nal pichhe hatt gaya te pull toh thale utar aeya.



“Pencho je ih sach aa, fer te pencho mai hor jeena aa, Sala hunte zindagi jeen da sawad auna aa.”



Pure ik minute tak oh pull de kinare khada apne phone te aye balance wale message nu hi takda reha. Usnu yakeen hi nahi aa reha si ke jo kujh oh vekh reha aa, oh sab usde nal ho chuka aa.



“Haaye rabba… eh ta sachmuch ho gaya…” oh fir zor naal bol piya, par phir ohnu yaad aaya ke oh ajje vi public jagah vich khada aa, te usne turant apne aap nu sambhalya.



Par usnu is gal da te pata lag gya si— eh system sirf odo trigger hunda aa jadon paisa kise khoobsurat aurat te kharch kita howe. Fer usnu yaad aeya ke usne Kashish nu paise dite si, par usne te 1 lakh 70 hazar dita si. Fer usde dimag vich aeya sala 70 hazar oh police wala le gya huna aa.



Karan hor kuj sochda ke usnu ehsaas hieya ke raat kaafi ho chukki aa, te khada v pull te aa. Is layi Karan ne ik second vi waste nahi kita te seedha apne kamre wal daud paya.



Ghar pahunch ke oh bed te chhal maar ke baith gaya. Kamra hamesha di tarah bikhreya hoya si, par hun usnu ohdi parwah nahi si. Oh turant apne phone ch contact list, social apps, gallery sab dekhna lag peya, eh soch ke ke shayad kise kudi da number save hove.



Par usnu kuj v nahi miliya. “Pencho….mere kol ta ik vi kudi da number tak v nahi aa…”



Par hun apne te taras khan da faida nahi si. Sab ton pehla kaam si kiraya clear karna, fer pame system hove ya na hove, bina chhat de banda da guzara nahi ho sakda.



Karan, jo kujh pehla apni jaan den lagga si, hun achanak pehli vaar future baare soch reha si.



Raat khatam hoi, saver hoi, par Karan hun berozgaar si. Par hun usnu naukri di lodh mehsoos nahi ho rahi si. Zindagi ne jiven ohnu second chance de ditta si.



Usne bina der kite 20 hazar Bedi saab nu transfer kar ditte. Pichhla kiraya vi clear ho jaave, te agge layi vi tension nahi rahwe gi. Asal vich paise ta us kol pehla v si te oh kadi v Bedi saab nu paise de salda si. Par Karan oh paise apni study layi jodh reha si. Oh bass kise v tarike nal Bedi saab nu tal reha si. Par hun usde account vich 10 lakh piya si. Is layi usnd jhat hi sare paise Bedi saab nu send kar dite si.



Transfer kittiyan ik minute vi nahi hoi si ke usde darwaze te zor-zor di thak thak hoon lag payi.



“KARAN! OYE KARAN!”



Awaaz sun ke Karan turant samajh gaya ki ih Bedi saab hi ne.



Oh fatafat darwaza khol ke bahar aaya. Bedi saab bahar khade san, Karan nu dekh ke sidah hi bole tu theek ta hai a na Karan. Tenu sare paise ikathe paun di lodh nahi si. Mainu tere haalatan da pata aa putt.



“Hanji mai theek aa, mai socheya vaad vich v dene aa, hune ikathe hi de dama, shaed agle kuj mahine tuci mere kol kireya nahi mango ge.” Karan ne mazakiya lehje vich keha.



Eh mazaak si, par eh, eh vi dikhaunda si ke dono bandiya vich rista kafi vadia si. Par Bedi saab makan malik ne te kireya mangna ohna da haq aa. Is layi Karan nu kadi v Bedi saab da kireya manga galat nahi lageya.



Fer doma vich ik do gallan hor hoyian te Bedi Saab thale chale gye. Hun poora din Karan vehla si, kam us kol hun si nahi, karan layi kuj si nahi. Te phir ohnu ikdam us kudi da naam yaad aaya.



“Kashish…” usne dheeme lehje ch keha. Usde dimaag ch ik nava khayal aeya. Je system sachmuch asal vich hai aa jo ke hai v aa, te jime “Charm” wali skill kam kardi aa, ta shaayad mai Kashish wargi kudi nu te kabu pa sakda aa. Uskolo badla laina ta banda aa.



Ohne apna phone chakeya te internet te usnu labhan lag gaya. Usne Social media, casting pages, local entertainment profiles, sab kuchh khanghaal ditta. Par usnu Kashish bare kuj khaas nahi miliya. Jo ke is gall da saboot si ke oh koi vaddi star nahi aa, bas ik struggler type hi aa.



Par scroll karde karde usde hath usdi offical insta gram id lag hi gayi te jado usne us upar usdi bio padhi…..jis vich likhiya si……. Ke oh model/actress aa te gigs layi available aa.



Te ih padh ke Karan de face te kamini jahi muskan aa gayi. Par oh ini jaldi koi kadam nhi chukan wala si. Oh pehla hor jayda paisa kamona chahunda si.



Apne plan de mutabik oh utheya te apni almari chon apne sab ton changge kapde kad ke paun laga. Par oh kapde naam layi hi change san, kyunki usde zyada tar kapde second-hand market ya saste stall ton liye hoye san, te fashion sense usda waise vi koi khaas nahi si.



Ate ik hor gall usne notice kiti si ke…Bedi saab nu paise bhejan naal system ne koi cashback nahi ditta si. Jisdi ke usnu umeed v nahi si. Kyunki rati jime System ne notification diti si ke tuci khoobsurat aurat te paise kharche aa….us hisab nal Karan nu andaza ho gya si ke System kime work karda aa.



Matlab rule bilkul saaf si: system sirf aurtaan te kharch hoye paise nu hi count karda aa, te shayad oh vi sirf khoobsurat aurtaan te.



Karan apne kamre cho bahar nikal aeya. Par ajj usde kadam bahut halke san. Jo usnu aage kadi nahi lage. Ludhiane di hawa ta ajj v oda di hi si, par Karan de andar ajj pehli vaar umeed da halka jeha jhonka si.



Oh soch reha si ke shayad Ludhiana de malls, cafes, branded showrooms, salons, te upscale markets vich usnu koi kudi mil jawe jiste oh paise kharach kar sake.



Punjab vich sohniyan kudiyan di koi kami nahi si. College jandian kudian, Influencer, model, boutique girls, rich family dian kudiyan ludhiane vich bhariyan piyan san.



Oh sadkan te idhar-udhar nazar maar da tur reha si, kise sohni kudi nu approach karan layi mauka labh reha si. Par Karan de paye change kapde v ine change nahi si ke koi kudi us nu ik pal layi dekh v lawe. Te duja usdi khud v himmat nahi pe rahi si ke oh kise de kol ja ke puche.



Par ida hi usde dimag vich ik practical idea aeya, je oh kise mehnge store ch ja ke kise sohni kudi da bill pay karan bare kudi nu kahwe ta shaed usdi gal bann sakdi aa. Par store ena mehnga vi na hove ke pehle hi bill dekh ke usdi hawa tight ho jaave. Upro koi kudi ida hi thodi apna bill den layi mann jawe gi ih v kise anjan munde de sirf kehan te.



Oh is sab aoch hi reha si ke odo usdi nazar Pavilion Mall te pe gayi, jithe ik premium electronics showroom si — Apple da. Ih dekh ke Karan de chehre te halki jehi smile aa gayi.



“Phone te laptop ton vadh paisa uddan layi hor changi jagah kehdi ho sakdi aa. Oh ih soch ke andar badh gya ke shaed oh store vich kise kudi nu phone ja laptop le dawe ga kyunki, usnu pata si ke apple store vich kayi loki ta bass ida hi ghuman aa jande ne, ohna kol ine paise ta nahi hunde aa, par Iphone lain di isha sab di hundi aa.



Oh ahi sochda store vich vadh gya te usda sawagat Ik kudi ne professional smile nal kita. Karan ne pehli nazar ch hi pehchaan liya, eh ik banonti muskan a jo harek sales girls dindi aa.



“Welcome sir, main tuhadi kiven madad kar sakdi haan?” ladki ne keha.



Usdian akkhan halkian bhurian sab te oh ik dum slim si, usne bahut hi fight dress payi si jis vich usde sharir di banawat saaf dekhi ja sakdi si. Te usnu dekh Karan nu oh theek-thaak attractive laggi si.



Te oh kudi v jime Karan di akh pehchaan gayi si ke Karan ne usnu notice kita aa. Par usne is gal nu ignore kita te apne face te smile banayi rakhi.



“Main ik phone laina aa, te full payment karni aa,” Karan ne sidha keha.



Ladki ik pal layi ruk gayi. Aam taur te lok EMI, card plan, ya exchange di gall karde ne. Eh banda sidha full payment di gall kar reha si.



Karan da nigah jado usde badge te payi ta usnu, usda naam pata lag gya Jasmeen.



“Sir daso kehda model lawo ge, je tuhanu koi help di lodh aa mai tuhanu khud dikha dindi aa.” Jasmeen ne ohi smile apne face te banaye rakhe keha.



Par Karan di nazar nal nal pura showroom scan kar rahi si, oh is aas vich si ke shaayad koi hor vi zyada stunning kudi mil jaave, par store khaasa khaali si. Staff wale fake smileyan naal idhar-udhar phir rahe san.



Karna ik lamba saah liya apne plan excute karan vare soch ke himmat karke usne Jasmeen wal dekya te boliya.



“Jasmeen, je main tenu ik nava iPhone gift karaan, te tenu kiven laggu ga?”



Jasmeen nu is gal di ummed nahi si oh te ih gal sun hadbada jahi gayi. “Ji, Sir, ki keha tuci?”



“I am serious,” Karan ne halki jahi excited tone vich keha. “Main tenu Iphone 17 pro max te ik Macbook Pro with insurance gift karni chahunda aa.”



Karan di ih gal sun ke ta Jasmeen puri tarah hill gayi, usde muh cho shabad hi nahi nikal rahe si. Usde dimag vich pehli gal ahi ayi ke…



“Sir… tusi koi YouTuber-shoutuber ta nahi ho?” Te ina bol ke oh turant idhar-udhar vekhan lag payi, jiven kise hidden camera di talash kar rahi hove.



Par oh kuj hor boldi Karan pehla hi payment counter te puj chuka si. Oh lagoagh doud ke payment counter te puji te boli….”Sir….par oh apni gal puri kardi usto pehla ho Karan bol piya…”Tuhanu kuj v bolan di lodh nahi aa, tuci bass mainu Youtuber hi samaj lawo, te samajh lawo aaj tuhada lucky din aa.



Jasmeen nu is time khushi v bahut ho rahi si, oh nervous v bahut ho rahi si, oh manah v karna cha rahi si, par usnu lalach v aa reha si, oh ih sab sochdi kuch bolan di kohsish kar hi rahi si ke ine vich Karan ne payment te khadi kudi nu bol ke card rahi payment v kar diti si.



Jasmeen layi ih sab kise supne ja chamatkar toh ghat nahi si. Usnu samajh nahi aa reha si ke oh react kiven kare. Jida hi payement puri hoyi nal hi Karan de dimag vich notification di aawaz a gyi



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