Incest KHAMOSHIYAN ( nafrat maa bete ka)

[dhalchandarun]

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[Akil]

Smooth going bro but kuch doubts hain like kya Samar ko Bhola thakur ki har ek sachchai pata hai ki
(1) Bhola ne hi dev ke janm ke waqt uska accident karwa kar use coma bheja ?
(2) Bhola aur Radha ke kaaran hi Amar apahij hua?
(3) Bhola aur Radha ne hi Amar ki hatya karwai? Agar pata hai toh woh ab tak khamosh kyun tha?
Like woh dhokhe ka jawab hoshiyari se de sakta tha phir bhi usne aisa nahin kiya......
Aur agar nahin pata toh kab pata lagega?
Samar aur Amar ke saath jo hua usme Saumya ka kitna dosh hai?
Kya Jyoti ko nahin pata ki use pati ka accident Bhola ne karwaya tha?
Deva ke haathon ek masoom ka khoon... ...yeh toh sahi nahin hua.....
Rahi baat Sudha ke diye shaap ki toh Deva toh bahut pehle hi apni maa ko kho chuka hai kya yeh baat Sudha nahin jaanti thi......
Rampal Bhola ke sampark mein first time kab aur kaise aaya?
Radha aur Bhola ka rishta kab aur kaise shur'u hua? Aur iske baare mein Jyoti ko kab aur kaise pata laga?
Pata lagne par usne is rishte ko band karwane ki koshish karne ki bajaye sweekar kar liya.....yeh kuch hazm nahin ho raha......
I mean jaisa character abhi tak Jyoti ka dikha hai ki woh apne pati aur bacchon se bahut pyar karti hai toh is hisab se toh use is rishte ko band karwa dena chahiye tha woh bhi bahut pehle hi.......... Aur saath hi use unke kisi bhi bure kaam ko nazarandaz nahin karna chahiye tha khaaskar jab baat uske apne bete ki thi lekin usne phir bhi yeh kiya magar kyun?
Amar ke saath jo hua usmein kya waqai Jyoti bhi doshi hai ki yeh Amar ka sirf waham tha?
Aur yeh Anu ka character bhi kuch samajh nahin aaya ek taraf toh woh bhi Jyoti ki tarah apne bete se pyaar karne ka dum bharti hai wahin doosri taraf Bhola ke saath use ta'alluqaat....aur Abhi aur Deva ko iske baare mein kaise pata laga?
Kya woh dono ek dusre ko pehle se jaante hain magar aur kabse aur kaise jaante hain woh dono ek dusre ko?
Deva aur Samar ko kaise pata laga ki Kamal ka baap Amar nahin Bhola thakur hai?
Anu ab kya karegi?
Let's see what will happen next

 

[Luser]

बढ़िया कहानी लिखी है भाई आपने।

Keep updating, but you work is more important

Dhanyawad...ye mere liye bahot bare baat hai ..ke apko story pasand aaye

 

[Luser]

Abhi jis tarah maine likha hai same usi type ke aap likh lo aur use edit box me jakar sticky post kar do bas sabhi page me wah dikhega sabse upar me.

Okk me ker ke dekhta hu

 

[venom 111]

Update plz?

 

[Luser]

Smooth going bro but kuch doubts hain like kya Samar ko Bhola thakur ki har ek sachchai pata hai ki
(1) Bhola ne hi dev ke janm ke waqt uska accident karwa kar use coma bheja ?
(2) Bhola aur Radha ke kaaran hi Amar apahij hua?
(3) Bhola aur Radha ne hi Amar ki hatya karwai? Agar pata hai toh woh ab tak khamosh kyun tha?
Like woh dhokhe ka jawab hoshiyari se de sakta tha phir bhi usne aisa nahin kiya......
Aur agar nahin pata toh kab pata lagega?
Samar aur Amar ke saath jo hua usme Saumya ka kitna dosh hai?
Kya Jyoti ko nahin pata ki use pati ka accident Bhola ne karwaya tha?
Deva ke haathon ek masoom ka khoon... ...yeh toh sahi nahin hua.....
Rahi baat Sudha ke diye shaap ki toh Deva toh bahut pehle hi apni maa ko kho chuka hai kya yeh baat Sudha nahin jaanti thi......
Rampal Bhola ke sampark mein first time kab aur kaise aaya?
Radha aur Bhola ka rishta kab aur kaise shur'u hua? Aur iske baare mein Jyoti ko kab aur kaise pata laga?
Pata lagne par usne is rishte ko band karwane ki koshish karne ki bajaye sweekar kar liya.....yeh kuch hazm nahin ho raha......
I mean jaisa character abhi tak Jyoti ka dikha hai ki woh apne pati aur bacchon se bahut pyar karti hai toh is hisab se toh use is rishte ko band karwa dena chahiye tha woh bhi bahut pehle hi.......... Aur saath hi use unke kisi bhi bure kaam ko nazarandaz nahin karna chahiye tha khaaskar jab baat uske apne bete ki thi lekin usne phir bhi yeh kiya magar kyun?
Amar ke saath jo hua usmein kya waqai Jyoti bhi doshi hai ki yeh Amar ka sirf waham tha?
Aur yeh Anu ka character bhi kuch samajh nahin aaya ek taraf toh woh bhi Jyoti ki tarah apne bete se pyaar karne ka dum bharti hai wahin doosri taraf Bhola ke saath use ta'alluqaat....aur Abhi aur Deva ko iske baare mein kaise pata laga?
Kya woh dono ek dusre ko pehle se jaante hain magar aur kabse aur kaise jaante hain woh dono ek dusre ko?
Deva aur Samar ko kaise pata laga ki Kamal ka baap Amar nahin Bhola thakur hai?
Anu ab kya karegi?
Let's see what will happen next

Apke ye sare sawal ye darsate hai ke aapne kitne lagan se story ko padhi hai...aur apko pasand bhi aaye ...me aapka sukergujar hu....jo aapne mere story ko pasand kiyaa...

Aap ager chahe to apne ray rekh sekte hai story ke Ane wale updates bare me ...

 

[wieujdhjw]

Update plz?

Bro update 3 din baad aye gaa..writer ne khud bola hai

 

[Akil]

Apke ye sare sawal ye darsate hai ke aapne kitne lagan se story ko padhi hai...aur apko pasand bhi aaye ...me aapka sukergujar hu....jo aapne mere story ko pasand kiyaa...

Aap ager chahe to apne ray rekh sekte hai story ke Ane wale updates bare me ...

Zaroor bhai but ummeed hai ki in questions ka answer aanewale updates mein mil jayega

 

[wieujdhjw]

Aare tere to lup lup hone lagee...such bata kya bola hai usne....

Bache ye instgram ya YouTube ka comment section nhi hai jo tu kuch bhi bolega ....yhaan ager samne wala Thora bhi thera huwa to tere pathun dhili ker sekta hai ....aab dekh kaise mafe mang rhaa hai....

Jub jhela nhi jata hai to kyu ungli kerta hai ...tu raat ko akele mutne nhi jaa sakta ...aur ye benda raat ko he apna kaam kerta hai ...

Lup lup nhi huwe mere ...Bhai ....usne mujhe se bahot ache se baat ke ...

Aur isee bahane me jaan bhi gyaa ke essi log bhi exist kerte hai iss dunyan me ....luser bahi kafe ache insan hai ...kafe humble hai aur yhee khasyet hote hai esee logon ke ..inhe apne gusse per bahaot niyantran hota hai ....

 

[soank]

Lup lup nhi huwe mere ...Bhai ....usne mujhe se bahot ache se baat ke ...

Aur isee bahane me jaan bhi gyaa ke essi log bhi exist kerte hai iss dunyan me ....luser bahi kafe ache insan hai ...kafe humble hai aur yhee khasyet hote hai esee logon ke ..inhe apne gusse per bahaot niyantran hota hai ....

Okk