Incest KHAMOSHIYAN ( nafrat maa bete ka)

[Vicky jutt]

Vikky Bhai yhi to iss writer ke khubsurti hai ...ke isee emotional knowledge kafe jyada hai.....isne anu to esa iss liye dikhaya take hum audience anu se bhi nafrat kerne lage...aur Abi ko sahi mane ....


Yhi isne jyoti ke sath kiya thaa...aur dekho hum me se maximum audience jyoti se hate kerta hai ...hum bhi whi emotion ko fill kerte hai jo story me deva ker rha hota hai...
Aapne Sayed original story me to hu albela pdhi hogee...iss tarah ka emotional connection is se phele mene uss story me fill Kiya thaa..aur abb yhan ker rha hu...


Aur apne jo story bataye hai wo Sayed climax sence hoga ..aur Sayed writer ko pasand bhi aye ....per mujhe legta hai isne climax soch rhaa hai ...aur iss story ka climax happy ending nhi hone wale ...esaa mujhe legta hai ....kyu ke ye writer sahab Thora emotionally dark hai ..jo ke hame deva ke charector se pata chalta hai .....

Mujhe legta hai esi apne aap se likhne dena chahye ....yakin mano ye iss story ko jaberdest banaye gaa...aur log copy kerenge iske story ko ....like wo to hai albela

But EK hi afsoos hay K tum ny story hi chor di Raman ko maara dety to sab set ho Jata haha miss yaar Kamaal Ki starting Ki Thi many to tumy bola b Tha K main likhooo

 

[maakaLover]

Bhai aap iske jaal me fas rhee ho ....esee log bahot mitha bolte hai .....per hame inse Bach ker rehna chahye ...kyu ke ye log kafe khaternak hote hai ..me to sub se bolunga aap sub ko iske story padhne bund ker dene chahye...

Aap sab eske taref ker isee jane anjane me badhawa de rehe hoo

Luser ban him from ur story or complaint to the moderators,,, me ni chahta ki kisi ke bhi comments ki wjh se tumhe story aage likhne me koi bhi preshani hoo,, aur jo persons ko problem h wo khud apna bhala sochkr dur kyu ni ho jate,, kisne kaha h samaj kalyan k lie,, mahan Yogi yahan tk bhagwan bhi bina madad mange madad ni krte, bina need k madad ni krte aur mujhe ni lgta h yahan pr kisine bhi kisise koi bhi iss trh ki madad mangi h,, me aise comment krne wale ka shukriya krta hun jinko sbki itni parwah h,, pr ye bhi kadwa sach h ki sbko apke pov(point of view) se ghanta farak ni pdta idhar
(3rd line se mene Luser se influence hokr likha h,, jese wo meetha bolta h usi trh mene bss thoda kam kadwa bolne ki koshish ki h wrna 1st 2nd line toh tumse sbne padh he li hongi naa

 

[maakaLover]

Vikky Bhai yhi to iss writer ke khubsurti hai ...ke isee emotional knowledge kafe jyada hai.....isne anu to esa iss liye dikhaya take hum audience anu se bhi nafrat kerne lage...aur Abi ko sahi mane ....


Yhi isne jyoti ke sath kiya thaa...aur dekho hum me se maximum audience jyoti se hate kerta hai ...hum bhi whi emotion ko fill kerte hai jo story me deva ker rha hota hai...
Aapne Sayed original story me to hu albela pdhi hogee...iss tarah ka emotional connection is se phele mene uss story me fill Kiya thaa..aur abb yhan ker rha hu...


Aur apne jo story bataye hai wo Sayed climax sence hoga ..aur Sayed writer ko pasand bhi aye ....per mujhe legta hai isne climax soch rhaa hai ...aur iss story ka climax happy ending nhi hone wale ...esaa mujhe legta hai ....kyu ke ye writer sahab Thora emotionally dark hai ..jo ke hame deva ke charector se pata chalta hai .....

Mujhe legta hai esi apne aap se likhne dena chahye ....yakin mano ye iss story ko jaberdest banaye gaa...aur log copy kerenge iske story ko ....like wo to hai albela

Bhaiii tumhri sab baat shi lgi bss ek baat k lie thodi bechani aur dar h ki ending kya sach me jyda dark hogi,,,,, kher dekhna pdegaa wo toh,, mene bhi itna jyada strong attachment kisi story k sath feel nhi kiya h ( ki kya hoga kya nhii hoga)

 

[Luser]

Luser ban him from ur story or complaint to the moderators,,, me ni chahta ki kisi ke bhi comments ki wjh se tumhe story aage likhne me koi bhi preshani hoo,, aur jo persons ko problem h wo khud apna bhala sochkr dur kyu ni ho jate,, kisne kaha h samaj kalyan k lie,, mahan Yogi yahan tk bhagwan bhi bina madad mange madad ni krte, bina need k madad ni krte aur mujhe ni lgta h yahan pr kisine bhi kisise koi bhi iss trh ki madad mangi h,, me aise comment krne wale ka shukriya krta hun jinko sbki itni parwah h,, pr ye bhi kadwa sach h ki sbko apke pov(point of view) se ghanta farak ni pdta idhar
(3rd line se mene Luser se influence hokr likha h,, jese wo meetha bolta h usi trh mene bss thoda kam kadwa bolne ki koshish ki h wrna 1st 2nd line toh tumse sbne padh he li hongi naa

Nhi bhi ager ye mare story ko criticise kerte mujhe bilkul bura nhi legta ..per personal attack ker rhee hai ..to mene unhe samjha Diya hai ..abb wo bilkul esaa nhi kerengee....unhone khud bola hai

 

[maakaLover]

Nhi bhi ager ye mare story ko criticise kerte mujhe bilkul bura nhi legta ..per personal attack ker rhee hai ..to mene unhe samjha Diya hai ..abb wo bilkul esaa nhi kerengee....unhone khud bola hai

Tum free ho toh jara dm me aana, thodi baat krni h bs

 

[paand]

Nhi piyary Bhai main ap Sy nraaz Ku Hona hay bas dost wesy hi Dil main bt aai to Bol baqi rhi story Ki bt to wo to writer K hisaab Sy hi chalti hay Ku K start krny Sy pahly hi sab Soch K rakha hota hay bas kuch kuch change laay ja skty Hain mujhy to bas ap Sy yay Khushi hay K ap apni story chor nhi rhy hoo Ku K bhohat Sy log bolty Hain sath sath yay nhi Hona chahiyay Tha wo nhi Hona chahiyay Tha jis Sy likhny Waly ko b hurt hota hay K itni mehant aur time use ho raha hay phir asa response to wo story hi stop kr deta hay forum py sab Sy ziyada story Hain hi adhuri khair koi bt nhi Haan Bhai Jo main ap ko btany wala Tha Dil Bol raha hay bta Doon baqi ap Ki marzi hi hoo gi

Anu ko ap ny aysa show krwaya hay jaisy usy koi fark hi nhi pra hay Ku K jab pakri Gai aur Abhi ny Jo b bola tab tak usy khud Sy b nafart ho rhi Thi khud ko b maarna parta maar Leti but bhola Ki baaty sun K us ka koi itna ziyada react nhi Tha us ka to EK beta hi sab kuch Tha Jo wo b ab nhi raha jis wajah Sy nhi raha us wajah K liyay usy her had Sy Paar Hona chahiyay lekin wo to phir us Sy pahly hi trah baaty kr rhi hay aur us K kahny py deva ko pakrny b ja rhi hay baqi is main b ho skta hay ap ka koi raaaz hoo ya many Galt Bol Diya hoo aur EK bt bhohat achi lagi K is updated main ap ny sab kirdaaro ko use Kiya hay Haan to ab joyti Ki bt kry to Bhai bhaly hi usy haveli Bula Liya jaisy b lekin usy itni asani Sy to nhi andr aany Dena chahiyay Tha Ku K pichly updates main jaha usy haveli Sy door Kiya Tha to yahi Pory gaon main famous Tha K wo EK badlchaln hay to phir jab wo wapis aai to koi b bola Ku nhi aur Samar ny to usy yaha aany Sy mana Kiya Tha aur sab Sy mein point Bhai jab dono lar rhi Thi deva K liyay aur joyti Samar Sy Bolny ko bolti hay to wo kuch nhi bola K wo ager us Ki maa Hony ka dhong ab KR rhi hay to tab yay maa Kaha Thi jab us py zulam ho rhy thy aur jis piyar ka Sahara ly K tum ny us K sath yay sab Kiya tum to wo piyar sabit nhi KR Pai Kabi tumhary do chehry Hain Jo bas dolat K liyay mery sath achi bni rhi aur Meri pith pichy apny yar Ki etc khair yay sab ab ghuzr gya Bhai ab ap new likhny Waly ho to itna hi bolo Ga K her EK py focus kro parhny main aur achi lagy gi

Anu haveli main aay aur Deva ko arrest krny aur milny ko boly but gunja aur joyti usy bura bla kahy aur even joyti ko Anu aur bhola ka b pta hoo shaid to wo kuch aysa boly aur Anu b usy bhohat kuch Bol dy joyti aur bhola K Bary main to deva ko jab hosh aay to wo Anu aur joyti ko dekh K kuch aysa boly jis Sy dono Ko hi hurt matlb Randi type jaisy o to bhola Ki randiya AJ deva Thakur Ki haveli py kasy apny Malik Sy poch K aai hoo na aysa kuch aur phir Anu usy arrest krny ka boly to deva usy boly K tumhary pas koi saboot ya guwa hay K many ramlal aur us Ki biwi ko mara hay Jis ka jowab us K pas nhi hota hay to wo boly Abhi mery Bhai jaisa hay Jo kuch mery sath ho Chuka hay us K sath nhi hony Doon ga yay sun K Anu K pairo tale zameen Nikal jay aur dhamki b dy K apny yaar Ko Bol Dena K tum dono K bury din Shuru hoo gy Hain Anu waha Sy chali jay deva Dard Bhari hansi hasy hahaha joyti roti us K pas jany lagy to deva usy rok dy dekh Liya wehshiya tum ny apny yaar K kaam yay lafz sun K joyti toot c jay aur nichy gir jay ab usy APNA past her Cheez aur her baat dikh rhi Thi jaha jaha wo Galt Thi aur Sahi na KR ski apni maa Ki Asi halat aur bezti Sy dono Beti deva py char Dory aur wo usy kuch kry joyti apni socho Sy Nikal K unhy roky lekin tab tak der ho jay but deva ko us Sy kuch frk nhi parta wo bas itna hi joyti Ko dekh K boly K in Ko b nhi chora tum ny apni rah py Chala Liya joyti us Ki bt samjh jay K wo Kya Bol raha hay to gir K behosh ho jay jaisy pahli update main doctor pas hi hoty Hain to thik ho jati asy hi kuch din guzry deva ab thik ho Jata hay but wo apny baap aur gunja K ilawa Kisi Sy bt nhi krta Priya ko b ab sab kuch samjh aa Jata hay deva Kya hay aur Ku aysa hay wo b bhohat roti hay to EK din Kamal haveli main AA jay aur deva Sy lary but deva usy kuch na kahy lekin Radha ko waha dekh K ghusa ho jay aur kuch der Mary aur to joyti K pas gun ho Jo wo lrai rokny K liyay drany K liyay fire kry but kuch na ho aur deva Kamal ko Marta jay to joyti Sy deva ko goli lag jay aur deva us Ki traf dekh K muskry aur itna hi boly piyar Jis Sy joyti ko b pta Chal jay K Jo wo piyar piyar krti rehti thi AJ wo piyar Kaha gya Jis K liyay pagal Bani phirti Thi Kisi najayz K liyay usy hi Goli maar di baqi Bhai ap Ki marzi Haan behno ko b pta Chala chahiyay deva Kon hay un ka

Bhai Aap apne story pe focus karo na Q dusre ke story ko kharab karne aa jate Ho kya aap ne apni jo story ko start ki usko apne 22 update me khatam kar diya wo bhi bahut galta tarika se likha hai ek acchi story ko aap ne kharab kar diya or aa gye ab kois or story ko kharab karne

 

[Rajurajkr]

Waiting for next update

 

[wieujdhjw]

Mujhe nhi pata dost ke aapko mere se kya problem hai....mene aapka bura to nhi kiya ...? Fir bhi aap gussa hai ....aur aap bilkul ajad hai apne comments dene ke liye....

Aur mujhe aapke in negativity se koye fark nhi perta ...kyu ke mene apne 20 sal ke Umar me iss se kaye hazar guna jyada nigative energies ko fell kiya hain...aur unhe apne muthe me rekhta hu...

Bhai mujhe aapka naam bhi pata hai ......me aapka dherm bhi janta hu...SOKES BHAI

Bhai flow flow me jyada bol gya ...luser bhai ko bura laga ...but me unhe heart kerna nhi chahta tha...so sorry Bhai ....hamre PM me bhi baat huwe ...aur me yhaa bhi ek baar aur apko sorry bolta hu...

By the way next update keb dogee

 

[maakaLover]

Bhai flow flow me jyada bol gya ...luser bhai ko bura laga ...but me unhe heart kerna nhi chahta tha...so sorry Bhai ....hamre PM me bhi baat huwe ...aur me yhaa bhi ek baar aur apko sorry bolta hu...

By the way next update keb dogee

Bhhhaaaiiiiiii,,,,,,,

 

[Lord xingbie]

CHAPTER -6













Little deva






Priya


Sadhu


Jyoti



Anu ke dor kholte hai aur samne uska beta ABI khara hota hai ,,,....Anu apne bete ke samne Janam jaat nangi khare hote hai .....uska dimag Kam kerna bund ker deta hai ...wo bilkul sun ho jate hai..usne ye manjer kabhi apne sapno me bhi nhi socha thaa...per aaj ye uske sachhaye ban gyee...thee..Aaj uske uss bete samne wo taar taar ho chuke thee ..jo usee apna roll modal manta thaa...jiske izzat wo dil se kerta thaa...per aaj ke baad wo apne bete se najren taak nhi mila sakte .....Anu aaj barbad ho gyee thee....Aaj uske eklote bete ne usee kisi gair merd ke sath nanga range haton paker liya thaa...

Achanak anu ko hoss aata hai aur wo apne kamre me bhagte hai ....jaise he wo kamre me apne kapre pahen ne legte hai ...tabhi bahar se usee gher ke samano ke girne ke awajen aane legte hai ....woo samajh jate hai bahar kya ho rhaa hai ....abb uska jism kapne legta hai ....der ke mare kub uske salwar gili ho gyee....usee pata hi nhi chala .....jee hai usne pasib ker diya thaa...wo bhagte huwe bhar aate hai aur dekhte hai wahan bhola aur ABI ek dusron per laat ghuson ke barsat ker rhaa thaa....anu ko samaj nhi aa rhaa thaa wo kyaa kere kisko pakre ..ager wo bhola ko pakerte hai to ABI Sayed bhola ko jaan se mar de ....aur ager wo apne bete ko pakre ge ..uska beta bhola ke mukkon se khud ko nhi bacha payega ..aur kahi uske bete ko gahri choot naa aa jayee..

Usee kuch nhi sujhta to wo apne survice pistol nikal lete hai aur unn dono per taan dete hai ...aur chilate hai ruk jaaa ooo nhi to me goli chala dunge....


Bhola use dekh ruk jata hai per abhi nhi rukta aur bhola per lagatar war kerta chala jata hai .....

Anu - ABI.......hands upp.....dekh me goli chala dunge...


Abhi ruk jata hai aur anu se bolta hai .....

ABI - chala na goli ....ruke kyu hai....tu hawas me itne dub chuke hai ke khud ke bete per banduk taan de...

Anu ko abb jaker ahsas hota hai ke anjane me usne kyaa ker diya ....usne khud ke bete per banduk tan diya...apne ashiq ko bachane ke liyee.....jaise he use apne galti ka ahsas hota hai wo apni pistol niche ker lete hai .....


Bhola - sale ...tujhe pata nhi tune kisper hath uthaya hai ...tune bhola thakur per hath uthaya hai ....abb dekh tera kya hota hai ....itna bol bhola wahaan se nikal gyaa...

ABI ( tali bajate huwe ) - abb to khus hai naa tu ...tera yar nee tere bete ko jaan se marne ke dhamki de gyaa ....abb to khus hai naa tuu.....Sayed tu bhi to yhee chahte thee...ke tera mujhse picha chut jayee...

Anu - nhi beta ..tu galat samajh rhaa hai....me tujhe se sub se jyada Piya kerte hu....mera aur hai he kon tere sivaa...

ABI - kyu tera yaar hai naa...jo abhi tujhe chod rhaa thaa ..aab tujhe meri kyaa jarurat..tu khud bol rhee thee tujhe uss se pyar hoo gyaa..hai ...mene tere pure rass Lila dekhi ....

Anu - galti ho gye beta ..mujhe maaf ker dee..itna bol anu ABI ke kadmo me gir jate hai ....


Abhi use jhalak ker khud se dur ker deta hai ...aur bolta hai ..

ABI - hatttttt ....sale randi...chu met mujhe ... randiyo ko me khud ko chune nhi deta ....

Anu phir bhi girgirate huwe uske kadmo me giri hote hai .....

ABI - are me tujhe apna guru manta thaa ...tere jaisa me bhi police me Jana chata thaa...per aaj tere karan iss police sabdh se mujhe nafrat ho gyee hai ...sala kyaa soch thaa tujhe aur kyaa nikle tu....

ABI usee uspc ka result dikhate huwe ....ye dekh me aaj uspc me ache rank se pass ho gyaa....isee ka surprise Dene tujhe yahan aayaa thaa...per tujhe apne muh kala kerne se fursat nhi hai.....

Fir ABI apne upsc result anu ke samne far deta hai ...aur bolta hai ...Aaj se khatam huwa ye sarife ...Aaj se ye ABI police nhi Gunda banega ...abb ager tujhe dum hai to mujhe rok ker dikhaa....

Phir ABI anu ke baju paker use uthata hai ...aur 4 se 5 thaper uske gaal per jer deta hai.....

Anu ( mun me ) - kya ye sapna hai ....haa haa ye sapna he hai....mera ABI mujhe maar nhi sakta ...he bhagw##an jaldi se ye sapna Tut Jaye ...mera beta mujhe mar nhi sekta ...per tabhi ek aur thaper uske gaal per perta hai ....aur usee yakin ho jata hai ye sapna nhi haqikat hai ....

ABI - bata sale ...kitne dino se ye sab chal rha hai .....kub se tu uske randi hai .....kub se tu mere aankhon me dhul jhok rhee hain.....btaaaaaa


Anu ( kapte huwe ) -...1 sal se.....

ABI - sale haramjade..pichle ek sal se tu uske rekhel Bane huwe hai....


Anu - tu plz mujh se essi baten met ker ...me maa hu tere ....

Abi - kyu abb tujhe saram aa rhee hai ......jub uss se chud rahe thee tub khaan gye thee tere ye saram ...sanskar....

Anu - maf ker de beta ....aab nhi kerunge ,,..me bahak gyee thee,....galti ho gyee mujh se....

ABI ( ek aur thaper anu ke muh per jar deta hai ....) - sun randi ...mujhe ye beta bulana bund ker ....me kisi randi ka beta nhi ho sakta ...mere maa koye bajaru nhi ho sakte...aur tujhe iss galte ka aahsas tub kyu huwa jub tu pakri gyee..ager me tujhe nhi pakerta to tu isee tarah muh kala kerte rehte....aab jub paker liya to galti ka aahsas hone ka dhong ker rhi hai...

ABI (uske bal pakerte huwe ) - chal bata aur kitne yar hai tere....

Anu ( rote huwe ) - such keh rhee hu beta ...aur koye nhi hai....plzz mujhe maaf per de...

ABI usee wahi Jamin per gira deta hai aur usper laton ke baris kerte huwe bolta hai ...

Abi- fir beta bola tune....sale ...

ABI - aaj se tera mera rista khatam ....

Anu fir uske pair ko jor se pakerte huwe ...- itne bare saja met de mujhe ..tere siva mera koye nhi hai...tere bina me kaise jee paunge.e..


Abi - acha mere bina nhi reh sakte ..to jaa uss bhola thakur ke bewi ko le ker aa....me usee chodunga ....uske pith piche...jise tune mere aankon me dhul jhoka ...waise he uske bewi bhi mere liye uske aankhon me dhul jhoka gee...tub jaker mere dil ko sakun milega.....aur uske bewi to mere pass tu laye ge...jis din tu uske bewi ko mere pass le aaye ....uss din me tere pass wapes aa jaungaa....

Ahi - aur hai ager tu kamyab ho gyee.. uske baad bhi hamare bich maa bete kaa rista nhi rehega ,,..kyu ke mere maa ek randi hai ..ye me bardast nhi ker sekta....iss liye hamare bich randi aur uske yar wala rista hoga...


Fir ABI wahan se nikal jata hai ..Aaj Anu ne apna sub kuch kho diyaa Aaj usne apne bete ko kho diya,...wo beta jise wo apne tarah ek police officer banana chahti thee...per aaj uske uss bete ne khud ko criminal banane ke baat khi...ye baat anu ko aur jyada Dara rhee thee...,..uska wo beta jo uske izat apne jaan se bedhker kerta thaa..abb uske jism ka pyasa ho gyaa hai...usee ek randi ke tarah waywahar ker rha hai ....aur in sub ka karan kya hai ...uske ek galti...uske hawas ....Aaj uske iss hawas ne uske sapno ko uske bhawisya ko ..uske bete ke bhawisya ko khaa liya thaa..

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Somyan ko jisa deva ne bola thaa wo pure tarah se tayer hoker gunja ke kamre me aaker beth gyee..wo deva ka intzar ker rhee thee...tabhi kamre me gunja aate hai ...somyan ko uu saj dhaj ker bethe dekh uske chehre per muskan AA jate hai .....

Gunja - aap Aram karye thakurayen me abhi deva ko bulate hu...

Phir gunja apne dairy ke panno ko palat ker usme se ek chithi nikalte hai ...chithi ko dekh leg rhaa thaaa...isee gunja ne abhi tak khola ya padha nhi hai ....kher gunja uss chithi ko leker havali ke chat per chal dete hai ...

Whaan jaker wo deva ko dekhte hai jo chat per leta asman ko dekh rhaa thaa ...Sayed aaj ke din ke bare me soch rhaa thaa....


Deva

Gunja - deva ...tujhe jan naa thaa na ke mene tere khilaf gavaye kyu de...kyu mene tere sath dhokha kiyaa...tu mere jaan hai mere laal aur ek tu hi to hai mera akhari sahara....jis se mujhe ummiden hai ...wo ( chutke gunja ke bate ) to mujhe chor ker chale gyee per tu mere sath rhaa ....fir soch me tere sath dhokha kaise ker sakte hu...Aaj me tere sare sawalon ke jawab laye hu...

Gunja - mere laal ....me tere maa hu ..tere rag rag ko jante hu ...tu chahe mujhe se itne salon tak dur rhaa per abb bhi me tere her dil ke baat jaan lete hu beta ....mujhe pata hai aaj tera mujhe yuu pyar kerna ...wo koye tere dil se nhi aaya thaa ....wo tere chal thee ...jisme tu apne maa ko fasana chahta thaa....

Gunja - maa hu tere ...sub jante hu ....wo pyar jhutha thaa ....tere mere liye somyan se bahas kerna wo bhi jhutha thaa...per jhutha he sahi tune kuch pal ke liye mujhe pyar to kyaa ....mere bacche mere liye buss itnaa he kafe hai...mujhe pata hai tu kisi per bharosa nhi kerta apne maa per bhi nhi ...to ager me tujhe apne muh se sachhaye batau bhi to tu yakin nhi kerega ... isliye me tere liye kisi ka diya chithi laye hu ....ye uss insan ke akhri sabdh thee..jo wo tumhe batane wale thee....

Itna bol gunja wo chithi deva ko pakra wahan se jane legte hai ...deva uske aankhon me dekhte huwe uss chithi ko leta hai....aur gunja se bolta hai ...tere liye mera pyar saccha hai maa ....ye deva sirf tujhse saccha pyar kerta hai ...bus ek baat mujhe tere kareb aane se rokte hai ....ke tune mere sath esaa kyu kiyaa....

Gunja ( uske aankhon se aansu tapak rhee thee...wo bina deva ke taraf dekhe bolte hai ) - chithi padh ...tujhe sara jawab mil jayega ....mere laal..aur wahan se chale jate hai ....

Deva chithi ko dekhta hai ....lifafe ( cover of later ) ke uper kuch likha huwa thaa.....to chalye dekhte hai kya likha hai ....


Ye chithi me amar thakur likh rhaa hu ....iss chithi ko me deva thakur ke liye likh rhaa hu ....jub wo 25 sal ka ho jayee tub yee chithi use de jayee....uss se phele iss chethi koye nhi khol sakta hai...ager kisi ne khola to iss chithi ka maan khatam ho jaye gaa...Iss chithi ko sirf gunja ke hathon deva ko di jayee...

Aab me apne batije deva se baat ker rhaa hu....

Deva mere bache ...me tera chacha tujhse kuch baat kerna chata hu ....lakin uss se phele ye sunischit ( conform ) ke le ke iss chethi ko dusmano ne badal to nhi diya....

Iss lifafe ko aag per sekh laga to tujhe mera signatures dikhe gaa....use signature ok mene under mojod chithi per bhi kiya hai ...dono signature ko mila ager tujhe Thora bhi anter lage dono signatures me to samaj Lena ye chithi nakli hai ...deva ne wisa he Kiya ...aur wo jaan gyaa ke ye chethi asli hai ...uske mun me gunja ke liye aur samman badh gyaa ..wo aab samajh chuka thaa gunja uske sath hai....uske ek maa us se sacha pyar kerte hai ...


Kher aab chalte hai chethi ke taraf dekhte hai kya likha hai usme amar nee...

Mere bache deva ...tu Mera sher bacha hai ....me tujhe roj dekhta hu boryan uthate huwe ...logo ke baat galiyan sunte huwe ...per un sub se tere chehre per ek siken tak nhi aate hai ...isee se pata chalata hai tu ek sher ka bacha hai ...me apne aankhon ke samne tujh per itne julm hote dekh ker bhi kuch nhi ker paya ..iska mujhe hamesa dukh rehega ...per kyaa kerta ..mere halat tujhse bhi bure ha ...tu chal sakta hai bol sakta hai per me wo bhi nhi ker sakta ...tera chacha apahij hai ...tere chacha ko apahij bnaa diya gyaa hai ....jub tu iss chithi ko padh rhaa hoga tub Tak Sayed tere chacha ko mar Diya jayega ....aab jo me bolne wala hu usee dhyan se sun ...

Hum dono bhai ( samar aur amar ) ke khilaf bahut bare sajis huwe hai mere bache ...bhola jo ke tumhara phupha hai ...usne hum dono ke khilaf sajis kere hai ....wo hamara sub kuch hathayana chata hai ....lakin mujhe dukh to iss baat ka hai ki uske uss sajis me hamare bewiyan aur mere bahan bhi uske sath de rhee hai ...


Tere chache Radha aur uss bhola kaa awed sambendh hai ...aur kamal mera beta nhi hai ...ye baat tere maa jyoti ko bhi pata hai ...fir bhi wo iss gunah me unka sath de rhee hai ....tere buwa somyan usee ne he bhola ko havali me laya ...usper bhola ka bhoot sawar thaa ....wo bhola ke khilaf ek sabdh nhi suun naa chahte thee...mene aur tere papa ne usee kitna samjhaya per wo nhi mani...usne bhola se bhag ker Sadi ker le aur usee havali le aaye ...

Baad me somyan ne jayedad me apna hissa mangan suru ker diya ...aur humne ek ache Bhai ke tarah use wo sub de bhi diya ...hamne 5we gau ke sare Jamin aur 5we havali usee de Di ....bad me somyan bhola ke pyar me andhe hoker wo sare jayedad uske naam ker gyee....bhola to thakur bhi nhi thaa per usne apne naam ke aage thakur lagana suru ker diya aur ek nakli thakur ben gyaa...usee tere buwa ne thakur banaya hai mere bachee...uske pass jo bhi hai wo sub hamara hai ...tujhe uss se sare jayedad wapas lene hai ....

Mujhe usne ek dawaye ( medicine ) khila ker gunga aur apahiz bana diya ...aur tumhe pata hai isme uska sath kisne diya ..??.mere khud ke bewi Radha ne.. ...mujhe nhi pata isme tere maa jyoti samil thee yaa nhi...ye baat tujhe he pata lagane hai ....

Ye chithi tujhe gunja ke hathon melege ....aur abb tu Sayed gunja se nafrat bhi kerta hoga ...per yakin man mere bache...gunja ne jo kiyaa wo tere bhalaye ke liye kiyaa...

Gunja ko mene hi bola thaa....ke wo tujhe iss havali se dur ker dee....ye kerna aasan nhi thaa mere bache ...kyu ke dusmano ke rehte ye naa mumkin thaa ...mujhe pata thaa ke kuch dino me yee log mujhe mar denge ....to mene gunja ko bola thaa ke mere khoon ka iljam tere uper dal de...gunja tere khilaf gavaye de ...yakin maan mere bache ..tujhe bachane ke liye yhee ek safe rasata thaa...kyu ke jail se mahfuj jagah aur koye nhi thee hamare najar me ...tu whaan bina kisi khetre ke jinda reh sakta thaa..aur jail ka mahol tujhe wo insan banaye gee...jo hum ( amar and samar ) nhi bun payee...


Aab me tujhe kuch batane jaa rhaa hu ...dhyan se sun...

Tere papa ka accidents huwa thaa jis karan wo coma me chale gyee thee..per ye accident tere fufa ne hi kerwaya thaa...tere papa ke gari ka break fail ...hamare yaahan ke halwaye ne Kiya thaa..( ye bhi halwaye hai jo deva ko bachpan me Marta thaa) jiske karan tere papa ka accident huwe aur usee pal tera Janam huwa ...to tere maa ne tujhe manhus maan ker khud se alag ker diyaa....

Aab sun Tera dusmanon ka naam

Bhola thakur

Halwaye ( RAM PAL - ye aab 7we gau ka sarpanch bun chuka hai ...iske sir per bhola thakur ka hath hai )

Munem ( aab Jile ka MP hai )

Radha ( ye tere chacha ke dusman hai ..... yad rekhna tera chacha iss se bahot pyar kerta thaa.....)

Mujhe ummid hai tu samajh gyaa hoga mere bache ...aab tujhe he hamara badal lena hai ..tu he hai hamare akhere umeed ...hamara khoon ...hamara chirag .... Wada ker bete ...tu badla legaa..

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Chithi pedhne ke bad bhola ke aankon me aansu aa gyee thee....wo wheen ghutnon ke bal beth gyaa...uske aankon ke aansun niche Chet ke jamin per gir rhee thee..per uske muh se ek sabdh nhi nikal rhaa thaa...wo roo nhi paa rhaa thaa....yaa Rona bhul gyaa thaaa
Tabhi deva aasman ke taraf dekh dahadne legta hai ....chilane legtaa hai ....

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Uske dahad sun pure havali tharra jate hai ...sub ke jisme me shiran se dor jate hai ...ye dahad mano koye sher ka ho ...jiske gunj pure jangel me sune jaaa sakte hoo....uske iss dahad se pure ke pure 7wa gau hil gyaa ...raat hone ke karan ye awaj kafe dur tak jaa rhee thee....sare gau wale aapne apne gharon se nikal havali ke taraf dekhne lagee...havali ke gate per bhid jama hone lagee...sub jan naa chate thee akhir havali me fir se kyaa ho gyaa....per lathaton ne bhir ko Baga diyaa...

Samar apne kamre ek kursi per betha ...deva...ke awaj sun rhaa thaa....per uske chehre per ek siken tak nhi aaye ...wo whi bitha bus sunta rhaa.....

Gunja bhi apne kamre ke khidke per bethe uss dahad ko sun rhee thee...uske aankhon se buss aansun tapak rhee thee..per lab sant thee..whe uske bister per lete somyan ye awaj sun kanp gyee....uske jism ke ek ek ruwan khere ho gyee....wo kapte huwe awaj me bolti hai ..


Somyan - g...g....gun...gunja kyaa ho rhaa hai bahar ...kon chikh rha hai ...

Gunja ( muskurate huwe apne bhinge aankhon ke sath ) - sub thek hai thakurayen..ye chek hamare liye srap nhi wardan hai ....ye chek hame batate hai ke koye hai bahar jo samar thakur ke parwah kerta hai ...jo samar thakur ko apne jaan se bhi jyada chahta hai ... Jo sirf aapke Bhai ke liyee jita hai ......app befikr ho ker soo jayee...uske rehte iss havali per ek aanch tek nhi aa sakte ...





Gunja deva ke chekhen sun rote huwe



Kher chalye chelte hai havali ke chat per ...

Me dekh paa rhaa hu ...deva apne ghutno per betha ...apne aap me kuch Barbara rhaa hai ....

Deva - papa ko mara ....papa ko mara....papa ko mara........pp.....ppp....papa ko ...mara.....uske sasen tej chal rhee thee...wo jor jor se sasen lete huwe bus barbaraye jaa rhaa thaa papa ko mara ...papa ko mara.....

Me uske aankon me dekh paa rhaa hu....?? ...wo...woo...woo...ye....yee...ye...d ...de....dev......deva nhi hai ..iske aankho se pata chal rha hai ye deva nhi hai ....iske aakhen lal hai manon iske aankon me khoon utar aaya ho...iske nili aankhen khi gayeb se ho gyee hai ....ye aankhe usee sadhu ke hai jine kamakhaya ke sarkon ko samsan bana diya thaa...


Deva uthta hai aur niche aata hai ...gunja bhag ker uske pass jate hai ...wo deva ko gale lagaa sant kerne ke kosis kerte hai ...

Gunja - sant hoja mere bache ...phele sant ho jaa...tu...

Per gunja ke baaton ka deva per koye asar nhi ho rha thaa..gunja deva ke gale Lage huwe thee....per achanak uss se alag ho jate hai ...kyu ke deva ka jism kaap rhaa thaa...aur wo kisi bhenker danav ke tarah gurra rhaa thaa....gunja uske aankon me dekhte hai ....aur uske hadiyan tak kaap jate hai...der uske dilon dimag me gher kerne legte hai ...usee uske samne sakhchat yamraj dikh rhaa thaaa....

Usee deva ke aanken pure laal dikhye dete hai ..mano usper gusse ka pahad Tut gyaa ho...

(Note - yhaan tum sub uske aankon ke laal hone se yee mat samajh lena ke uske koye super power hai...wo buss ek dimage marij hai jisko split PRASNILITY DISORDER hai iss liye jub bhi woo gussa hota hai to uske dusre PRASNILITY usper havi ho jate hai ....aur ye laal aankhe gusse ke karan hai ...kuch jyada he laal ho jate hai uske aankhen ...ye uske biological difolt hai ....)

Gunja - tum mere deva nhi ho ....k...ko..kon ho tum....

Sadhu - is jism ke rosni hai deva aur me is jism ka wo andhera hu jisi tum sab ne Janam Diya hai ....me wo bacha hu jisper tum sub ne lakhon julm Kiya ...use mara pita ...aa...a..jub bij babur ka boyo ge to fal aam ka nhi aaye gaa... .....me deva ke kale pahchan( dark PRASNILITY )hu ....


Gunja - thek hai mere laal ...per abhi tu sant ho jaa abhi dekh tu apne maa ke pass hai aa ...dekh tere maa tujh se der rhee hai...yhi chahta hai tu apni maa ko darana chata hai tu...bol...

Sadhu( gungunate huwe) - me bhi sarafat se jita meger .....mujhe sarifon se legta thaa der....sub ko pata thaa me kamjor hu ....me is liye aaj kuch aur hu...

Sadhu - Miyya ...ooo ...more mayya ....tera beta abhi aataa hai bahar Thora khel ker aata hai tera beta ....itna bolte he deva havali se bahar nikal jata hai ....




Sadhu


Samar apne kamre ke khidke se sadhu ko jate dekh rhaa thaa...deva ko iss tarah dekh samar ke chehre per ek sakon ...thaa...mano uske pyas bujh gyee hoo...

Sadhu uss andhere raat me us sunsan raston per khud me hee kuch barbarate huwe gau ke sarpanch ke gher ke taraf badh rhaa thaa...


Ye sarpanch ....RAMPAL apne gher me apne bewi shudha aur apne bete ke sath beth khana khaa rhaa thaa ....rampal bhola thakur ke madad se aab 7we gau ka sarpanch bun chuka thaa ....sarpanch ban nee ke baad isne gau walon ka hak marna suru ker diyaa...ye unke jamene harap leta aur badle me mota rakam mangta ....sub iss se paresan thee...per iske khilaf koye kuch nhi bolta...kyu ke isper bhola thakur kaa hath thaa....

Gau wale kaye baar 7we havali aaye madad mangne ...per Samar ka dhayan in sub me nhi thaa ....aur bhala karta bhi kyaa...jiske khud ke bewi ne us se dhokha kiyaa ho ...wo dusron ke dukh kyaa he dur kerega ....



Mager aab esaa nhi thaa ...aab deva aa chuka thaa...aab tak gau walon ko pata nhi thaa ke deva thakur lot aaya hai ...per unhone kyee bar ek Nile aankhon Wale larke ko Jeep se havali aate jate dekha thaa...per wo yee andaja nhi laga paaye ke ye deva thakur hai ....hamesa unhe legta yee koye dur ka ristedar hai samar thakur kaa....aur to aur deva kisi se jyada baat bhi nhi kerta ...iss liye havali me bhi jyada ter logon ko yee pata nhi thaa ke ye deva thakur hai ....

Kher chelete hai Rampal ke gher ....whaan wo uske bewi aur uska mund budhi beta beth ker khana kaa rhee thee....aur abhi havali se aye awaj ke bare me baat ker rhee thee...

Shudha - legta hai havali me phir kuch huwa hai ...koye jor jor se chila rhaa thaa....

Rampal - hahhahaha...are ro rhaa hoga wo samar thakur ....usee kee chekhen sune hoge tumne ...

Sudha - aap esii baten met kijeyee...aapke karmo kaa hee fal hai jo hamare bete ke halat aaj esii hai ....

Rampal - me apne bete ko vides ( out of country) me lee jaker ilaj kerwaunga ...aab hamare pass paison ke koye Kami nhi hai ....

Fir dono apne bete ko pyar se dekhne legte hai ,...tabhi bahr se jor ke awaj aate hai ...mano koye uske gher ke darwaje ko torne ke kosis ker rhaa ho...rampal turant apna rewalball ( gun with 6 bullets ) nikalta hai ...aur jor se chilata hai ..

Rampal - kon hai bahar ...

Per bhar se koye awaj nhi aate...per tabhi uske gher ke darwaje Tut jata hai ,....aur samne ek hatta katta lerka khera hota hai ...

Rampal uske uper banduk taan puchta hai ...

Rampal - kk....k...k...kon ....ho ....tum...

Sadhu - kaisa hai ree halwaye....aab tu thakuron ke uper banduk tane gaa..itna bera ho gyaa tu.....

Rampal- kon sa thakur ....k...kon ho ...tum ....

Sadhu - sub bataunga ....phele tere bete se to mil luun....

Rampal - dekh mere bete se dur reh ....me goli chala dunga.....

Deva uske baton ko unsuna ker uske bete ke taraf badhne legta hai ....rampal bin kuch soche deva per gole chala deta hai ...usne do goliyan chalaye ,,,.jisme ek deva ke kandhe ko chu ker nikal gyee...aur dusre uske dayen ( left ) kandhe me jaa lage...goli lenge per deva ne jyada pratikriya nhi dee ....wo apne Sanson ko jor se ander khech dhire dhire bahar chorne lagaa...mano apne Sanson ko kabu me rekh rhaa ho....

Fir wo rampal ke taraf japtaa..aur uske bandok wale hath ko paker usee apne kabu me lete huwe samne wale kamre me le jane laga ....sudha deva ko pakerne ke kosis kere ...per usne usee dakhe se dur ker diyaa...aur rampal ko kamre me leker chala gya....

Whaan jaker usne rampal ke dono hathon ko tor diyaa...aur fir bola

Sadhu - pachana mujhe....me hu deva ....deva thakur ....

Rampal ke sasen atek Gaye...uska fefra mano fat jayega....der se uske dhoti bhingne lage....

Sadhu ( haste huwe ) - yee kaa kya ree halwaye .....tune to mute diyaa ree...me to kbhi esii herket nhi kere jub tu mujhe Marta thaa.....hahahhaa,.....

Rampal - malik aapko Jo saja dene hai hame do per mere bache ko bakas doo....usne koyee galte nhi kee hai ....

Sadhu - bilkul ...me use bakas dunga ....tum se....

Tabhi wo rampal ko kamre me bund ker uske bete ke pass aata hai .....whi bagal me sudha bahos pare thee...

Sadhu uske bete ke taraf badhne legta hai ....uska beta der se kaap rhaa thaa ...aur ek kone me dubka para thaa.....

Sadhu - daro met ....tumhe to kuch nhi huwa ....huwa to mujhe hai ...dekho mere kandhe se khoon beh rhaa hai ...mujhe gole lage hai ...me fir bhi nhi der rhaa ....fir tum kyu der rhee hoo....

Larka ( masumyet se ) - aapko derd ho rhaa hai ....

Sadhu ( use apne sene se lagate huwe ) - haa bahot per jub Tak tu mere sene se laga rehega ....mujhe derd nhi hogaa..


Lerka - kass ker uske sene se lag ker ...okk bhaya ...

Sadhu - naam kya hai tera ....

Lerka - kalu ....

Sadhu - kalu ...tere koye galte nhi hai ...beta ...per fir bhi usne ( uper dekhte huwe ) tujhe ye saja de....aur tere yee maa baap jo tujhe uss se bhi bare saja de rhee hai ...tujhe iss beraham dunya me jinda rekh ker....wo apne sawarth ke liye tujhe buss istamal ker rhee hai ....

Kalu - wo mela istemal ker rhee hai ..wo kaise...bhaya

Sadhu - kyu ke unhe tere bhawesya se koye Lena Dena nhi hai ...wo jante hai ke aage chal ker tu akela ho jayega wo dono too mer jayege ...per thujhe chor jayege ....akela....... lachar .........unhe sirf tere hath se agne chahye...wo yhaa apne mukti (swarg or janat ) fix ker rhee hai ....

Sadhu - ye duniyan takatwaron ko chor dete hai ...aur kamjoro ko thok dete hai ...ye duniyan bahot berehem hai kalu...

Fir deva apne paas se ek potli niklata hai aur uss potli se ek laddo nikal ker kalu ko deta hai aur bolta hai ....le khaa le..

Kalu usee khaa leta hai ....aur bolta hai bhaya mujhe nind aa rhee hai ...

Deva usee sene se lagaye uske sar ko sahala rhaa thaa...aur usee uske akhre nind ke liye Sulaa rha thaa...aur ..bolta hai soo ja mere bachee....Aram ker abb tu...

Fir dhere dhere kalu ke sasen them jate hai ....deva usee pyar se leta deta hai ...aur sudha ko hoss me Lata hai.....

Sudha hoss me aate apne bete ko Jamin per lete dekh chilate huwe deva se puchte hai ...

Sudha - kyaa kiyaa tumne.....

Sadhu - mene usee mukti de hai ...tum dono se...

Sudha - tune ek masum ko mar diyaa ....dekhna bhag##wn tujhe kabhi maaf nhi karega ....ye mera sarap hai ...ek maa ke baduwa hai tujhe ...jo kabhi khale nhi jatee...



Sadhu - mene to buss usee aane wale kal se bachaya hai ..use mukti de hai ....ager tu such me uss se pyar kerte to tu mujh se phele ye kadam utha latee....

Sudha ( rote huwe ) - to tu mujhe bhi mukti de de....mujhe bhi mar de...mujhe mere bete ke pass bhej de...

Deva usee ascharya se dekhta hai ...fir usse Kamakhya wale uss aurat ke yaad aa jate hai ...aur uske chehre per ek hasi aaa jate hai ....

Deva ( asman ke taraf dekhte huwe) - sirf mere sath he kyuu....??


Fir deva sudha ko bhi ek laddo deta hai aur bolta hai le kha le isse ..aur chala jaa apne bete ke pass....sudha usee kha lete hai ...aur wo bhi khatam ho jate hai ..

Sadhu rampal ke pass aaker ....

Sadhu - tune jo mere sath kiya ...me bhul gyaa ..per tu he thaa wo jiske karan mera baap 7 sal coma me rhaa ....

Sadhu - tujhe kyaa laga thaa ...tu Bach gyaa....deva kisi ko nhi bakesta ...

Sadhu- chal thuk jamen per .....nhi to tere bewi bachoon ke laason ko gidhon ko khila dungaa...tuu aag bhi nhi de payega unhee...

Rampal whe kerta hai wo Jamin per thukne legta hai ...

Sadhu - aab chat isee....

Rampal - ksis suger ( pig ) ke tarah apne he fake huwe thuk ko chatne legta hai ....

Sadhu use bre gor se dekh rhaa thaa...fir bolta hai ..chal mujhe bhar tak chor ker aaa....

Rampal uske piche Jane legta hai ...deva usee Bina dekhe bolta hai ....


Sadhu - esi nhi char pero per chel kisi kutte ke tarah ....

Rampal whee kerta hai ...apne bewi aur bete ke laason ko nangta huwa ek kutte ke tarah deva ke piche Jane legta hai ...Aaj uske hath tute huwe thee....uska koye sahara nhi thaa..naa uska beta raha naa bewi ....Aaj wo ek kutte ban gyaa thaa ...deva ka kutta ...usee deva ka kutta....jise kbhi wo ek kutte ke tarah rekhta thaa...usee dusron ka jhutha khilata thaa..
Per aaj usee uss 7 sal ke deva ke lachare samajh aa rhee thee....usee ptaa chal rhaa thaaa...ke kaisa legta hai jub tumhe puchne wala koye naa ho ...uske haton me derd ho rhaa thaa per aaj uske pass rone tak ke hak nhi thaa ...whe rone ka hak jo usne deva se china thaa...

Jaise he wo apne gher se bahar aata hai ...uska gher dhu dhu ker jalne legta hai ...uske bete aur bewi ke lass uske gher ke sath jal rhee thaa...wo unhe nhikalne ke liye Jana chata hai per ...deva usee whee sarak ke kinare ek khambe se band deta hai ...aur usee apne sub kuch khatam hote dekhne ke liye chor hata hai ....

Sadhu( jate jate ) - aaj tu iss manjer ko dekh kal me tere aankhe bhi tujhse Chen lungaa..

Fir sadhu apne Jeep me beth havali nikal jata hai ....havali aate he sub usee dekh chonk jate hai ...uske pure jism lahu luhan thaa...uske tisart uske jism se chipak gyee thee mano ...wo khoon nhi pani hoo....

Gunja deva ka ye hal dekh naa sake aur kisi bin pani machli ke taraf chatpatane lagee...uska dil mano tham gyaa hoo....Aaj pahli baar usne esaa manjer dekha thaa....

Gunja ( chilate huwe ) - lalla kyaa huwa tujhee....ye khoon ..he bhag##an ye tu mujhe se kis Janam ke paap ke saja de rhaa hai ....iss manjar ko dekhne se phele mere pran kyu nhi le leyee tune....

Gunja (chilate huwe aas paas ke havali ke nokron se ) -tum sub muh kya dekh rhee ho...koye doctor ko bulaooo....ager mere bete ko kuch huwa to me ek ek ke khal kichwa dungee....

Sadhu - abhi nhi maa...abhi wakt nhi aya hai .....tu paresan naa ho ..mujhe in jakhmo ke aadat hai....ye jakham to ber jayega ...(Fir apne dil per hath rakhte huwe )..per ye jakham kaise bare gaa.....

Deva wahe havali ke chokhat per gunja ke god me let jata hai ...abhi deva ke chahre per jakham kaa derd nhi thaa,..... per uske dil ke dard uske chahre per saf dikh rhaa thaa....uske aankhe bund hone lagee thee...per dad dene hoge uske himmat ko ..uske jene ke tibrr iksha ko ...wo buss iss pal ko muskarate huwe jee rhaa thaa...esaa nhi thaa ke deva ko ess se phele goli nhi lagee thee...yaa fir usee iss se phele iss se ghere ghaw nhi huwe theee...wo phele bhi ghayel hotaa ayaa thaa....per aaj uss chithi padhne ke baad wo ander see aur jyada jakhme ho chuka thaa..ye jakham uske dil ke ghaw ko aur jyada ghahra ker diyaa thaa..pehle use legtaa thaa sirf uske sath nainsafe huwe hai ..per aaj usee pata chala ..uske khoon ke sath dhokha huwa thaa...uske chacha ...uske baap ...aur uske sath dhokha huwa thaa...aur iss dhoke me jane anjane me uske maa bhi samil theee...

Usee yee baat dard dee rhee thee ke sirf uske sath nhi per uske baap aur chacha ke sath bhi wahi huwa....wo jyoti se nafrat kerta thaa kyu ke jyoti ne uske galat kiyaa..uske nafarat aaur badh gyee jub usee pata chala ke jyoti uske baap ko chor uss samar ke sath chale gyee....per aab usee ye bardast nhi ho rhaa thaa ke uske maa anjane me he sahi uske baap ke coma me jane ke liye jimedar thee...aur uske saja jo use khud ko dena chaye thaa usne deva ko diyaa..use ye bardast nhi ho Raha thaa ke bhola thakur ne uske gher ke sare aurton ko apne jit liya .....

Mana ke jyoti aur bhola ke bich kuch naa ho...per jyoti ne uske aur Radha ke gunaahon ko chupaya thaa ...ye jyoti ne bhola ke khene per he Kiya hoga ...matalab usne apne gher apne pariwar se jada ehamyet bhola ko diya ..usne bhola ke liye apne pati se jhut bola usee dhokha kiyaa ....ye baaten deva ke dil ko jala rhaa thaa....

Wo aab Rona chahta thaa....per ro nhi paa rhaa thaaa....usne chithi pedhne ke baad bhi Rona chaha per ro nhi paya ...rudan ke naam per uske halakh se sirf chikhen nikle ..pir..usne apne mun ko sant kerne ke liye kuch he ghanton me rampal ke dunyan ujar de ..per...ye bhi uske dil ko sakun naa de saka...abhi deva ka dil sakon dhun rhaa thaa ..per wo usee nhi mil rhee thee....aur ye uske tarap ka karan thee...


Deva (muskurate huwe ...jo insan apne mout ke samay bhi muskuraye to uske do karan hoten hai ek yaa to usne apne jindige ka maksad pura ker liya ho aur dusra wo ander se Tut chuka ho ...usne apne pure jiwan me sirf jhuth fareb dhokha khaya hoo...aur aab wo iss zindige se ubb gyaa ho ...aab buss wo mout ko gale lagana chahta haa..)- maa ...tu mujhe kabhi dhokha to nhi dege naa....aab ager tunee bhi mere sath wahi Kiya to me nhi jhel paungaa ....aab mere se nhi hota maa...khud ko kitna majboot banau ....per ye dunyan mujhe Tod dete hai maa....me apne aap ko bhikherne se bachane ke liye derd ko pita rehta huu..per ye jalim dunyan ek pal me mujhe Tod dete hai ...khud ke jakham bherta hu...per yee jalem dunyan ek naye ghaw mujhe de deti hai



Aaj phir me ro rhaa hu...Aaj deva ke halat dekh me phut khut ker rone legaa.......me uske sare dukhon ko her Lena chahta hu...me uske dard ko pi Jana chahta hu ....per kyaa Karu.... writer hu character nhi .....me buss uske liyee ro sakta hu....


Deva (dard se tarapte huwe per halke hasi haste huwe ) - maa ye dunyan essi kyu hai maa ye itne jalim kyuu hai maa...

Deva - maa ...tu to mujhe dhokha nhi dege naa..tu to mere derd ka karan nhi banege naaa..


Gunja ( rote huwe...deva ke sar per hath pherte huwe ....) - tu ek baar bol ke to dekh ye gunja tere samne apne kaleza kat ker rah dege.....gunja kabhi deva ke derd ka karan nhi ban sakte ....gunja deva ke maraham hai ....uske har jakham ke dawa hai gunja ....

Deva - haha..mujhe tere Jaan nhi chaye maa..ager tune bhi mujhe akela ker diya to ye deva kaise jiye gaa...

Fir deva samar ke taraf dekhte huwe .....

Deva - papa aap gabharo met ...ye deva abhi nhi marega .....deva ke jism me aapk khoon dor rhaa hai yee chote se goli deva ke jaan nhi le sakte ....

Samar - thu mera sher hai ....tu mere saan hai ....tu Mera khoon hai ....tu mere jaan hai ....tujhe kuch nhi hoga beta ....ter liye pure ke pure hospital havali aa rhee hai beta ....tera baap tujhe kuch nhi hone degaa..

Deva - haste huwe ...kya hospital ke pankh lge hai ....?.


Gunja - kiss mithi ka bana hai tuu....iss samay bhi tujhe majak sujh rhee hai....

Deva - haha....buss ...inhee chote chote baton me me apne hase dhund leta hu........aaahhhhhhhh......

Deva samar se - papa aapke bahan ke sath me khelna chata hu...mujhe aapke izajet chahye ...

Samar - aab mera apna sirf tu hai ....mujhe aab kisi se koye fark nhi perta ..

Deva - somyan bhi chacha ke mout ke jimidar hai ....papa....

Idher somyan gunja ke kamre me in sub se bekheber lete huwe hai.....

Phir kaye sare ambulance havali me aate hai ...usme kaye sare machine thee....samar ne kuch he minute me havali ek ek kamre ko ek hospital me badal diyaa....kaye sare doctors ...narson ....ka rehne ka bandobest havali me he ker diya gaya......aab taak deva behoos ho chuka thaa...uska ilaz Kiya jane laga ....


Udher pure gau rampal ke gher ke aas pass jama ho gyaa thaa...kuch log aag bhuja rhee thee to kuch ..tamasa dekh rhee thee...tuch ne Rampal ko khola ....uske iss halat se jyada ter gau wale khus thee....per kuch dhukhe bhi thee....bhola thakur bhi ghatna astel per pahucha....sath he anu bhi apne pure police force ke sath moke per phuche...

Anu ne Rampal ke gavaye le....usne sirf itna bola ....deva ....deva thakur....iss sabdh ko sun pure gau wale ke sath sath bhola bhi kaap gyaa..uske mathe se pasena ke lakir saf dikh rhee..thee....use rampal ke halat dekh aur jyada der leg rhaa thaa...per fir usne khud ko sambhala aur wahan se nikle gyaa...

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Zile ka hospital -

Hospital ke ek kamre me kamal leta huwe thaa...aur chat ke taraf fan ko ghure jaa rha thaa...

Tabhi Radha room me aaye...

Radha - bhokh lage hai mere lalla ko ....

Kamal uske baaton ko unsuna ker - usne tumhe washya kyu khaa maa....

Ye baat sunte he Radha ke jism me mano current lega hoo...uske dedhkene tez hone lage....pura jism achanak pasine se bhi gya....ye sare lakshan der ke thee....Radha der gyee thee ..usne jyoti ka haal apne aankhon se dekha thaaa...wo hamesa yhee prathan kerte thee..ke usee jyoti ke din naa dikhaye ....per aaj Sayed uss darawane din ke phale Kiran Radha ke uper pare thee.....

Radha - w...woo.....wooo.....wo to thaa he batmize ....u..u...us se aur kya ummid ker sakte hai ...koye batamiz lerka thaa bol diyaa.a...

Kamal uske baton ko sun muskara deta hai ....aur uske diye khane ko khane legta hai ....

Kamal ( mun me ) - maa usne tumhe washya kaha hai...me iska badla uske jan leker lunga...

Radha usee khila ker kamre se bhaher aate hai ....aur hospital ke minder jaker ...hath jor lete hai...mano bhag##an se kuch mang rhee hoo....jo ke uske liye bahot jarure ho ....uske jaan se bhi jyada jaruri


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7we gau ke sarkon per ek car dor rhee thee....uss kar ko ek khubsurat aurat drive ker rhi thee....wo koye aur nhi apne jyoti thee....Aaj naa jane kitne dino ke baad wo iss gau me aaye thee...usee yhaan kich lane wala koye aur nhi balke deva thaa....jis jyoti ke pichle 5 salon se iss gau me kadam nhi pare thee.....per deva ke ek jhalak usee iss gau me khich laye thee...tabhi raste me kuch bhasya ( baffalo) ke jhund aa jate hai ....to jyoti ko apne car deme kerne padte hai ...jis se use bhar gwalon ke awaj aane legte hai ....

Jawan Guwala - are kaka tum ne suna ...rampalwa ( rampal ) ka kaa kiyaa deva thakur ne.....

Bhudha Guwala - haa bitwa ....Rampal Babu ko uske karmon ke saja mili ....aab jo jisa kerega waisa bhere gaaa....per dukh to Aaj subah wale khaber ka hai .....

Jawan Guwala - are kaa huwa kaka ....Aaj subah me kachu huwa kaa..

Aab jyoti ke kan khere ho gyee....

Bhudha Guwala - kaaa batayen bitwa...suna hai chote malik ( deva ) ko goli lage..hai ....hum to unko ek jhalak dekh bhi naa paye....aur wo abhi zindgi aur mout se ler rhaa hai ....


Itna sunte he mano jyoti ke sasen them gyee hoo....wo horn dete huwe ..taji se 7we havali ke taraf gare Dora rhee thee....wo car ke string while ko itne joro se pakre thee...mano use ukhar fekege....koye samne aa jata to jor se horn plate per muka martee ....aur chila ker unhe kosti...

Kuch he palon me 7 we havali uske samne thee...aur wo bina kuch soche apne car havali ke darwaje per rok dati hai ...fir bhagte huwe havali me ghus jate hai.......

Same usee kuch noker dikhte hain.....

Jyoti ( hafte huwe .....uske dil ke dhadken uska sath chor rhee thee,..)- d...d...dev....deva khaan hain....

Noker use ek kamre ke taraf isara kerta hai ,...wo bhagte huwe jate hai aur kamre ka gate khole deti hai ...aur deva ( jo ke behos para hai ) gale leg jate hai ....usee koye khayal nhi thaa ke uske aas pass kon kon hai ....
Iss samay kamre me samar gunja somyan Priya munni ....sub thee...per jyoti un sub ko undekha ker deva ke sene se lag jor jor se rone legte hai ...


Jyoti - kya ho gyaa tujhe ...wapas aajaa mere bache ....kyu satata hai apne maa ko ....aur kitna dukh dega mujhe ....mere laal wapas aajaa.....

Gunja - maaf kerna thakurayen...per abb yhaan kyaa lene aaye ho...is pariwar ko khaa gyee aab kyaa mere bete ko bhi khane aaye ho....


Jyoti ( bare bare aankon se gunja ke taraf dekhte huwe ) - ye tu kyaa bol rhee hai ree gunja ...deva mera beta hai ...me kyu khane lagi usee...


Gunja ( gusse me ) - bachpan se to khate aa rhee ho...tumhare karan he aaj mere bete ka yee hal hai ...


Jyoti ko gunja ka deva ko yuun uska beta batana acha nhi leg rhaa thaa....wo ander se jal ker kilat gyee thee...

Jyoti - aab tu apne thakurayen se essi baat karege .....aur deva tera beta kub se ho gyaa ..mene use Janam Diya hai ....9 mahine apne kokh me rakha hai ...wo mera beta hai ....

Gunja ( tilmilate huwe ....) - huuh ...bare aaye ....deva ko mene pala hai ...usee mene ne apne sene se laga ker apna dudh pilaya hai ..jub tum ne usee kasie lawarish kutte ke tarah fake diya thaa .....too mene usee sahara diyaa... jub usee iss havali ke log marte to wo sene se lag rota...wo mujhe maa bulata ...aur ye jo tum deva ...deva chilate firte ho naa...ye naam bhi mene diyaa hai usee....wo mujhse pyar kerta hai ...mujhe maa bolta hai ....jante ho naa tum fir kyaa lene aaye ho yhaan ...


Jyoti ( jhulla te huwe....usee mahsus ho raha thaa ke uske aur deva ke bich gunja ek diwer ke tarah hai ....use lag rhaa thaa gunja he deva ko uske khilaf bherka rhee hai ) - naam dene se wo tera beta nhi hogaya...aur me sub samajhte hu...tu he hai wo jo mere bete ko mere khilaf bherka rhee hai ...tere karan mera beta hamesa mujhse dur bhagta rhaa....

Jyoti aur gunja dono ka khoon jal rhaa thaa jalan ke mare dono ka haal bura thaa....wo to deva ke esi halat ne unhe rook rakha thaa ...nhi to abb Tak dono ghuthem ghutha ho chuke hotee....

Ye to Amrit wani hai ke irsiya her aurat ka farz hota hai ...aur ye irsya jyada ter mardon ko leker hota hai ...chahe wo pati ke liye ho yaa bete ke liyee....per jub bhi mene bete ke liye irsiya dekha hai wo sirf saas aur Bahu ke bich dekha hai...per aaj phele baar ye jalan do maa ke bich me dekh rhaa hu ek bete ke liyee....




Gunja ( rob jharte huwe ) - ho gyaa dekh le deva ko ....aab jaa ooo yhaa se ..me apne bete ko sambhal sekte hu....

Jyoti ( dat piste huwe ) - dekh gunja ...tu deva ko mere beta ..mera beta bolna bund ker ....wo tumhara malik hai ..use thakur sahab bula .....wo sirf mera beta hai .....aur tune khub sambhala hai mere lal ko ...dekh kaise halat ho gye hai mere bache ke ......kya isse ko sambhalna bolte hain.....


Gunja - to abb tum mujhe deva ko sambhalna shikha oo gee.....Sayed tum bhul gye ho thakurayen...jo apne pariwar ko nhi sambhala paye...wo mujhe mere bete ko sambhalna shikhayege.....

Gunja - abb jub tujhe pata chala ke sare jayedad deva ke naam ho gyee hai ..wo iss 7 gau ka malik ban gyaa hai...to dore chale aaye uske maa ban nee...sach to yee hai ke tum ek badchalan aurat ho thakurayen...jo apne pati ko chor kisi gair mard ke sath bhag gyee.....


Jyoti ko gunja ke tane kisi garam sarye ke tarah kaan me jaa rahe thee ....aab uska sir me derd hone lage thee....

Jyoti ( samar se ) - aap dekh rhee hai naa samar ...ye aurat mujhe se esi baaten ker rhe hai aur aap sirf dekh rhee hai ....

Samar - to galat kya bola usne....ye havali aab deva ke hai ...aur wo deva ke maa hai....to iss havali ke Malkin huwe woo....


Jyoti ko samar ka gunja ko deva ke maa bolna chubh se gyee...uske dil me mano aag jal uthaa hoo....aaj usee gunja se jalan ke mare nafrat hone lagee...aur jyoti ka jalna benta bhi thaa gunja se...naa to gunja khubsurati me jyoti se kam thee...naa he..chal dhal me...aur aab to gunja ne uske pati aur uske bete ko bhi apne mutthi me ker liya thaa...( eaisa jyoti ka man naa tha ) ...uper se deva ke yee halat .....usne mun me than liaa aab wo iss havali ko chor kahi nhi jayegee...Aaj se ..abhi se...wo iss havali me rhee gee..apne bete ke pass....apne deva ke pass..

jyoti ( Priya aur munni se ) - suno larkyon ...jaker mera kamra saf keroo....me aab yhee rehunge....

Gunja uske iss baat per chidh ker uchal gate hai...wo aab kisi nagin ke saman fufkar marte huwe bolte hai ....

Gunja - ye havali mere hai ...yhaa mere izzat ke bina koye nhi aa sakta ....

Jyoti ( tapak se....jawab dete hain....) - ye havali tere nhi..... ..mere bete ke hai ...ager usee nikalna hoga mujhe iss havali se...to nikal dega,..per tu kon hote hai mujhe nikalne wale....me iss havali ke thakurayen hu ..aur tu ek noker hai ....to apne aukat me reh ....

Gunja ( tilmilati huwe ) - huuh bare aaye ... thakurayen...apne lakshan dekhen hai ....tere ek bhi lakshan thakurayen wale nhi hai....thik hai reh le jub Tak rehna hai ...deva jub uthe gaa..phir bataye gaa tujhe ke uske maa kon hai...

Jyoti - haa bilkul ....aab whee faisal kere gaa...

Fir jyoti kuch nokron ko 5we havali bhejte hai ...jahan wo jyoti ke sare saman .....aur simran aur pihu ko leker 7we havali aa jate ...hai...simran aur pihu ko jyoti ka faisla ajib lega per unhe apne baap se milne ke jyada khuse..thee....aur simran to apne bhai ko yaad ker apne julfon ko sawarti nhi thak rhee thee...baar baar apne mekup ko chek kerte....kahi kuch kami naa reh jayee...usee pata hi nhi thaa uska bhai marnasay huwa para hai

Radha aur bhola jyoti ke iss faisle se kafe hairan thee.....bhola apne kamre me bathe soch rhaa thaa...

Bhola ( mun me ) - to aa gyaa wo ....sale ne aate he rampal aur abb jyoti ko mujh se chin liyaa....iss haramjade per mujhe ache se nazar rekhne pare gee...kyu ke ye sapola zahrila hai ....aur iske zaher ne asser dikhana suru ker diyaa hai ....bhola kuch ker aab......nhi to ye sapola tujhe bhi dess legaa...


Pir bhola anu ko call kerta hai ....

Bhola - kaise hai jane mun ....tune samjha Diya naa apne uss pille ko ke yee bhola thakur kon hai .....aab uss sale ke samne uske maa chodunga ....


Anu - tamiz se bhola wo beta hai mera ....khaberdar jo uske bare me ek sabdh bhi bola tooo.....abb ye bata kyu call Kiya hai mujhe .....


Bhola - are mere jaan me tere bete ko kyaa galat bol diyaa ..akhir haito wo ek randi ka bacha he na....aur mene tujhe call iss liye kiya ke ....tu to jante hai rampal ke pariwar ko deva thakur ne mara hai ....to jaldi se usee hatkare phena aur salakhon ke piche dal...ager tune koye chalake dekhaye to tere bete ko jan se mar dungaa...aur fir usee ke lass per leta ker tujhe chodunga ....itna bol bhola phone cut ker deta hai ....


Anu phone rekh ....dahad maar mar ker rone legte hai ....Aaj uske wajah se uske bete ke jaan khetre me thee..aur to aur uska beta aab usee ek maa ke roop me dekhana tek nhi chahta ,...ab wo usee ek randi samajh taa hai ...aur ek randi ke tarah uske sath sona chahta hai .....

nice update
deva ka insaaf suru ho gaya hai
rampal abhi bhi jinda hai par uska parivar khatam ho gyaa
rampal ko abhi aur jhelna hai maut assan hoti hai par jindagi bahot muskil
chala ke letter se deva ko gunja ki begunahi to mil gay saath hi saath dushmano ke naam bhi
abhit to pehla hi dushman ko haath lagaya hai
anu ko bhi abhi ne acha khasha dose de diya aur uske saath randi jaisa vyavhar bhi karega par
anu bhi bhola ke haatho majboor hai kaya karegi anu dekhna hai
jyoti to deva ke jakhmi hone ka sunka haveli me aa gayi par abhi deva hosh me nahi hai
hosh me aane ke baad kya karega yoti ke saath dekhna hai
wasie bhi ek ghar me rehkar badla lene me maza ayega door rehkar to bas kabhi kabhi mauka milega par samne bahot se mauke milenge
aur apni behno se mil sakega jinka koi kasoor nahi in sab me
unhe bhi apne bhai aur papa ka pyar milega

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