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“Haan didi… jor laga… haan bas… aur jor laga…”
“MAAA… aaahhhhh…”
“Sir nikal aaya… bas ab…”
“Haan… dhakka de…”
“Jor laga didi… bas… bache ka sir bahar aa raha hai… bas ho gaya…!”
Uaaan… Uaaan… Uaaan… Uaaan…
Uwaa-uwaa… Uwaa-uwaa… Uwaa-uwaa…
“Nair Vaidya… ladki hui hai.”
Nair Vaidya ne bacchi ko uthaya. Khun uske haathon par laga tha vese hee usanne ladki Manju ke haath me di
“Didi, ladki hui hai.
Logon ne ek doosre ki taraf dekha, phir nazar hata li. Jaise sabne dekh liya ho jo dekhna tha.
Baahar nadi tez beh rahi thi.
Puliya us raat bhi doobi padi thi.
Aaj se 2 saal pehele
Yeh kahani hai ek aisi vidhwa maa ki, uske mehnati bete ki, aur us gaon ke logon ki.
Ek sankat aur us sankat se ubharte zinda dilon ki sangharsh ki kahani.
Jahan ek taraf politics aur power ki bhookh hai, wahi doosri taraf hai pyaar, samarpan aur ek-doosre ko upar uthane ki koshish.
Us saal baarish jaldi aa gayi thi.
Mandawa phir se katne wala tha.
Subah ke nau (9)bajne wale the, lekin gaon abhi bhi geela tha. Mitti ki gandh pure galon mein faili hui thi. Kuon ke paas auratein khadi thin, lekin baatein nahi ho rahi thin. Nazar jaldi hat jaati thi.
Sunita do matke uthaye hue apne ghar ki taraf badh rahi thi.
Sunita – 36 saal ki mahila. Kheton, ghar ke kaamon aur kuen se paani nikaalne ki wajah se aaj bhi apni umar se kaafi kam dikhti hai – jaise 25-26 ki ho. Jahan hona chahiye wahan mass aur charbi ki matra maujood hai.
Thodi door peeche Babalu chal raha tha
Babalu – 18 saal ka gabru jawan ladka. Gaon ke akhaade mein jaakar varzish karta hai aur saath hi Kalaripayattu ki practice bhi.
Aap sochoge Kerala ke bahar Kalaripayattu kaise? Is gaon mein ek Mallu parivaar kai peedhiyon se basaa hua hai. aur vo Ayurvedic Vaidya hai, unka parichay aage diya jaayega.
Aangan mein Manju baithi thi.Geela aanchal, muh par woh wali halki muskaan jaise usse pehle se pata ho aaj kya hone wala hai.
Usne Sunita ko dekhte hue bas itna kaha,
“Aaj der kar di.”
Sunita ne matke neeche rakhe. Jawab nahi diya.
Manju – Kahani ki mukhya jaan aur sabki chaheti.
Ek chulbuli, alhad si ladki. Jaise koi nadi ho – jahan jaana ho wahan chali jaaye. Samaj, parampara… sabko taar-taar kar de. Jo dil mein ho wahi muh pe. Na apmaan ka bhay, na samman ka moh.
Sunita ke liye jaise uski saagi chhoti behen ho.
Umar 28 saal. Pati Ramu Nagpur mein rickshaw chalata hai. Unka ek beta hai – Sundar, jo abhi school jaata hai.
Manju ki khaas baat – ise mardon se kaam nikalwana aata hai. Apne namard pati ki wajah se iske gaon se baahar ke rusukhdar logon se sharirik aur aarthik, har tarah ke sambandh hain.
Bhola Yadav – 55 saal ka hatta-katta, 6.5 feet lambaa pehelwan.
Bahubali aur gaon ka Sarpanch.
Uske paas bohot bada gaay-bhains ka tabela hai – kam se kam 100 se zyada gaayein. Ek bail hai jiska naam Firangi hai. Is gaon ki har gaay ko yahi chodta hai, aur isi se gaayein gaabhin hoti hain. Yeh gaon ka riwaj hai.
Bahubali hone ke naate is zile ki police, saansad aur MLA se bhi zyada powerful hai.
Gaon mein aisi koi aurat nahi jiski nazar isne na gaayi ho, aur jo iske tabele mein aakar “gaabhin” na ho gayi ho.
Lekin Sunita ne ise kabhi ghaas nahi daali, na kabhi uske tabele ke aas-paas dikhi.
Akram – Gaon ka kasai. 48 saal ka. Dekhne mein Asur jaisa – 6.8 feet ooncha, chauda, beraham aur zaalim.
Chaar biwiyaan hain – aur Pandrah bacche hain.
Bulla Khan – Gaon ka halwai. 45 saal ka, baith-baith ke pet nikal aaya hai, lekin bada hi madarchod kisam ka banda.
Uski dukaan ya hotel gaon ki rajneeti ka adda hai. Yahan sab log aate hain. Kaafi baat-cheet hoti hai. Pure gaon ke lofa, nithalle aur manchale yahin baith jaate hain. Aur aate-jaate mahilaon ko chedna yahan aam baat hai.
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khalihan ki story aa chuki hai. lekin aapne dobara esi story ko likhna start kiya hai to esme jaroor kuchh nayapan hoga aur majedar bhi. achhi baat hai. kahani ka plot shandar hai. lekin kahani beech m adhuri mat chhodiyega. nahi to hum jese padne wale ka dil toot jayega. keep it up .
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Dono aangan mein dakhil hue.
Sunita ne matke neeche rakhe aur Babalu ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
“Jaa, naha le. Main chai-nashta nikaalti hoon. Aaj der ho gayi.”
Babalu ne muskurate hue sir hila diya.
“Haan ma.”
Woh nahaane chala gaya.
Sunita ne chulha jalaaya. Pani garam kiya, aata gundha, roti sekne lagi.
Aangan mein mitti ki khushbu ab bhi faili hui thi. Baahar se kabhi-kabhi gaon ke kutte ki awaaz aa jaati thi.
Thodi der mein Babalu naha kar aaya. Baal geele the, Usne baniyan pehen rakhi thi, kandhe aur baazu pehle se zyada sakht dikh rahe the.
Woh charpai par baith gaya. Sunita ne uske saamne garam chai aur nashta rakh diya.
Babalu thodi der chupchaap khaata raha. Phir bina uthi aankhon se bola,
“Ma… ab kaisa lag raha hai?”
Sunita roti sekhate hue boli,
“Theek hai. Tu khaana kha.”
Babalu ne chai ki pyali neeche rakhi.
“Kal raat bhi tum karah rahi thi. Main utha tha. Pet ka dard abhi tak hai?”
Sunita ne uski taraf dekha. Thodi der chup rahi, phir halki si muskurahat ke saath kahi,
“Ab tu bhi meri maa banne chala hai kya? Itna poochta hai.”
Babalu thoda sa sharma gaya.
“Aisa nahi… bas pooch liya.”
Sunita ne uske liye ek roti aur uske plate me daali
“Hai dard. Kabhi-kabhi tez ho jaata hai. Lekin ab theek ho jaayega.”
Itne mein aangan mein payal ki chhankar sunai di. Manju aa gayi thi.
Usne pehle Babalu ko dekha, phir Sunita ko.
“Didi, aaj bhi dard hai kya?”
Sunita ne hashte hue kaha,
“Haan. Iske samne to main chhupa bhi nahi paati.”
Manju ne Babalu ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
“Tu khet nikal ja. Main Didi ko Nair Vaidya ke paas le jaati hoon. Report bhi aa gayi hai. Der mat kar.”
Babalu thodi der ruka. Phir uth gaya, kudali uthayi aur bola,
“Theek hai. Main shaam tak aa jaunga. Ma, dhyan rakhna.”
Woh aangan se nikal gaya.
Sunita ne gande kapde ikatthe kiye. Manju ne bhi uske saath haath bada diya.
Dono nadi ki taraf chal diye. Pure raste , Payal ki awaaz ke saath-saath unki baatein bhi chal rahi thin.
“Kitne din se dard hai ?”
Manju ne poocha.
“Lagbhag do mahine. Pehle socha mahine ka hi dard hoga. Phir badhta gaya.”
Manju ne uska baanh se halka sa dhakka diya.
“Aur bataya nahi? Main hoti to pehle din hi le jaati.”
Sunita has padi.
“Haan, tu to doctor hi ban jaati.”
Ghat par kai auratein pehle se thin.
Yahan ek alag sa kona tha jahan mard kabhi nahi aate the. Sirf auraton ka hissa. Wahan hasi, mazak, gila-shikwa, sab khul kar hota tha.
Jab Sunita aur Manju pahunchi to ek aurat ne unhe dekhte hi bol diya,
“Arre Sunita aa gayi! Aaj bhi dekh ke lagta hai jaise teri umar kisi ne rok di ho.”
Doosri hansti hui boli,
“Sahi keh rahi hai. Hum log to dekhte hi dekhte dhal gaye, yeh ab bhi bilkul waise hi hai.”
Teesari aurat ne kapda nichodte hue kaha,
“Aisa badan ho to mard ghar se bahar nikalna bhi bhool jaaye. Bechara ghar pe hi baitha rahe.”
Hansi phail gayi.
Sunita ne bhi halka sa muskurate hue kaha,
“Bas karo ab. Roz-roz yehi baat. Koi naya nahi hai kya?”
Auratein aur zor se hans padi.
Manju uske paas baith gayi aur dheere se boli,
“Itna dard hai to pehle kyun nahi bataya?”
Sunita ne kapda ragadte hue kaha,
“Kya batati? Har mahine ka dard samajh leti thi. Is baar zyada din chal gaya. Socha khud theek ho jaayega.”
Manju ne uske chehre ko dekha.
“Ultrasound mein kya aaya?”
“Cyst hai. Vaidya ko dikhana padega”
Dono waha se kapade dho ke ghar nikal gaye
Ghar pahunchkar Sunita ne chai banayi.
Dono aangan mein baith gayi.
Manju ne chai ki pyali haath mein li aur boli,
“Chal, ab der mat kar. Nair Vaidya ke paas chalte hain. Woh tujhe pehle se jaanta hai. Family jaisa hi hai. Itne saal se dekh raha hai tujhe.”
Sunita ne chai ki pyaali se bhapkar uthte hue kaha,
“Haan… chalte hain. Ab chhupane se kya hoga.”
Woh uth khadi hui.
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Nair Vaidya ka kamra gaon ke ek kone mein tha.
Usne dono ko dekhte hi pehchan liya aur muskura diya.
“Sunita… itne din baad. Baitho. Manju bhi aa gayi saath mein.”
Usne report li, dheere-dheere padhi, phir Sunita ko litaya aur pet check kiya.
Thodi der baad bola,
“Cyst hai. Ovarian cyst. Cancer nahi.
Lekin yeh baar-baar ho sakta hai. Abhi dawai aur panchakarma se control karenge. Tension mat lo.”
Sunita ne raahat ki saans li.
Vaidya ne usse bahar bhej diya.
“Manju, tu andar ruk ja.”
Darwaza band hua.
Vaidya ne chashma utara. Aankhen thaki hui thin, Lekin aawaz me chinta aur aapana paan tha.
“Tu is gaon ki baat samajhti hai. Yahan aurat zyada din akeli theek nahi reh paati.”
Manju chup rahi.
“Tera khud ka haal dekh. Pati das saal se Nagpur mein hai, phir bhi tujhe koi aisi shikayat nahi.
Sunita aath saal se bilkul bandh karke baithi hai. Jo dard uske pet mein hai, woh sirf cyst ka nahi. Andar kuch ruk gaya hai.”
Manju ne dheere se kaha,
“Vaidya ji… woh aisi nahi hai. Main usse kuch bolungi bhi to dar lagta hai. Kahee rishta hee naa Tod de ”
Vaidya ne gehari saans li kutch der socha aur kaha yahi ek upay bacha hai
Kisi kee jaan bachane ke liye muzhe ye karna hee padega ye mara dharm hai
Vaidya ne ek chhota pudia nikaala aur uske haath mein rakha.
“Yeh churna hai. Roz subah thoda sa doodh mein mila dena. Dheere kaam karega. Uske andar ki bujhi hui garmi ko dheere se jagayega. Jabardasti se nahi. Time lagega.”
Manju ne pudia liya.
“Agar usne mana kar diya to?”
Vaidya thoda muskura diya.
“Tu jaanti hai kaise baat karni hai. Mera kaam yahan tak tha. Aage teri aur uski marzi.”
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Baahar nikalte waqt Manju ne Sunita se kaha,
“Chal, ab ghar. Dawai mil gayi hai. Ab theek ho jaayega.”
Raaste mein Manju chup thi.
Uske dimaag mein ek baat ghum rahi thi.
MLA ke yahan “Gau Vansh Samvardhan” ka awedan kiya tha. Do gaay milne wali thin.
Woh gaay Mohanpura se leni thin. Wahan Gau vansh sawadhan kendra bhee hain.
Kutch baat baan sakati hai.
uske paass pehele se hee ek gau thee aur akeli ko 2 uar gau nahee sambhalti paati usane kutch soch ke man me ek yojana banayi kee ye gau vansh sunita didi ko de degi.
Ghar pahunchkar usne pehli baar doodh mein woh churna milaya. Bahut thoda sa.
Sunita se bas itna kaha,
“Yeh dawai ka doodh hai. Vaidya ne kaha hai, roz lena.”
Sunita ne pyali haath mein lete hue hashte hue kahi,
“Ab tu bhi doctor ban gayi kya?”
Phir bina kuch aur pooche pi liya.
Baahar baarish phir se shuru ho chuki thi.
Sunita ne matke neeche rakhe aur Babalu ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
“Jaa, naha le. Main chai-nashta nikaalti hoon. Aaj der ho gayi.”
Babalu ne muskurate hue sir hila diya.
“Haan ma.”
Woh nahaane chala gaya.
Sunita ne chulha jalaaya. Pani garam kiya, aata gundha, roti sekne lagi.
Aangan mein mitti ki khushbu ab bhi faili hui thi. Baahar se kabhi-kabhi gaon ke kutte ki awaaz aa jaati thi.
Thodi der mein Babalu naha kar aaya. Baal geele the, Usne baniyan pehen rakhi thi, kandhe aur baazu pehle se zyada sakht dikh rahe the.
Woh charpai par baith gaya. Sunita ne uske saamne garam chai aur nashta rakh diya.
Babalu thodi der chupchaap khaata raha. Phir bina uthi aankhon se bola,
“Ma… ab kaisa lag raha hai?”
Sunita roti sekhate hue boli,
“Theek hai. Tu khaana kha.”
Babalu ne chai ki pyali neeche rakhi.
“Kal raat bhi tum karah rahi thi. Main utha tha. Pet ka dard abhi tak hai?”
Sunita ne uski taraf dekha. Thodi der chup rahi, phir halki si muskurahat ke saath kahi,
“Ab tu bhi meri maa banne chala hai kya? Itna poochta hai.”
Babalu thoda sa sharma gaya.
“Aisa nahi… bas pooch liya.”
Sunita ne uske liye ek roti aur uske plate me daali
“Hai dard. Kabhi-kabhi tez ho jaata hai. Lekin ab theek ho jaayega.”
Itne mein aangan mein payal ki chhankar sunai di. Manju aa gayi thi.
Usne pehle Babalu ko dekha, phir Sunita ko.
“Didi, aaj bhi dard hai kya?”
Sunita ne hashte hue kaha,
“Haan. Iske samne to main chhupa bhi nahi paati.”
Manju ne Babalu ki taraf dekhte hue boli,
“Tu khet nikal ja. Main Didi ko Nair Vaidya ke paas le jaati hoon. Report bhi aa gayi hai. Der mat kar.”
Babalu thodi der ruka. Phir uth gaya, kudali uthayi aur bola,
“Theek hai. Main shaam tak aa jaunga. Ma, dhyan rakhna.”
Woh aangan se nikal gaya.
Sunita ne gande kapde ikatthe kiye. Manju ne bhi uske saath haath bada diya.
Dono nadi ki taraf chal diye. Pure raste , Payal ki awaaz ke saath-saath unki baatein bhi chal rahi thin.
“Kitne din se dard hai ?”
Manju ne poocha.
“Lagbhag do mahine. Pehle socha mahine ka hi dard hoga. Phir badhta gaya.”
Manju ne uska baanh se halka sa dhakka diya.
“Aur bataya nahi? Main hoti to pehle din hi le jaati.”
Sunita has padi.
“Haan, tu to doctor hi ban jaati.”
Ghat par kai auratein pehle se thin.
Yahan ek alag sa kona tha jahan mard kabhi nahi aate the. Sirf auraton ka hissa. Wahan hasi, mazak, gila-shikwa, sab khul kar hota tha.
Jab Sunita aur Manju pahunchi to ek aurat ne unhe dekhte hi bol diya,
“Arre Sunita aa gayi! Aaj bhi dekh ke lagta hai jaise teri umar kisi ne rok di ho.”
Doosri hansti hui boli,
“Sahi keh rahi hai. Hum log to dekhte hi dekhte dhal gaye, yeh ab bhi bilkul waise hi hai.”
Teesari aurat ne kapda nichodte hue kaha,
“Aisa badan ho to mard ghar se bahar nikalna bhi bhool jaaye. Bechara ghar pe hi baitha rahe.”
Hansi phail gayi.
Sunita ne bhi halka sa muskurate hue kaha,
“Bas karo ab. Roz-roz yehi baat. Koi naya nahi hai kya?”
Auratein aur zor se hans padi.
Manju uske paas baith gayi aur dheere se boli,
“Itna dard hai to pehle kyun nahi bataya?”
Sunita ne kapda ragadte hue kaha,
“Kya batati? Har mahine ka dard samajh leti thi. Is baar zyada din chal gaya. Socha khud theek ho jaayega.”
Manju ne uske chehre ko dekha.
“Ultrasound mein kya aaya?”
“Cyst hai. Vaidya ko dikhana padega”
Dono waha se kapade dho ke ghar nikal gaye
Ghar pahunchkar Sunita ne chai banayi.
Dono aangan mein baith gayi.
Manju ne chai ki pyali haath mein li aur boli,
“Chal, ab der mat kar. Nair Vaidya ke paas chalte hain. Woh tujhe pehle se jaanta hai. Family jaisa hi hai. Itne saal se dekh raha hai tujhe.”
Sunita ne chai ki pyaali se bhapkar uthte hue kaha,
“Haan… chalte hain. Ab chhupane se kya hoga.”
Woh uth khadi hui.
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Nair Vaidya ka kamra gaon ke ek kone mein tha.
Usne dono ko dekhte hi pehchan liya aur muskura diya.
“Sunita… itne din baad. Baitho. Manju bhi aa gayi saath mein.”
Usne report li, dheere-dheere padhi, phir Sunita ko litaya aur pet check kiya.
Thodi der baad bola,
“Cyst hai. Ovarian cyst. Cancer nahi.
Lekin yeh baar-baar ho sakta hai. Abhi dawai aur panchakarma se control karenge. Tension mat lo.”
Sunita ne raahat ki saans li.
Vaidya ne usse bahar bhej diya.
“Manju, tu andar ruk ja.”
Darwaza band hua.
Vaidya ne chashma utara. Aankhen thaki hui thin, Lekin aawaz me chinta aur aapana paan tha.
“Tu is gaon ki baat samajhti hai. Yahan aurat zyada din akeli theek nahi reh paati.”
Manju chup rahi.
“Tera khud ka haal dekh. Pati das saal se Nagpur mein hai, phir bhi tujhe koi aisi shikayat nahi.
Sunita aath saal se bilkul bandh karke baithi hai. Jo dard uske pet mein hai, woh sirf cyst ka nahi. Andar kuch ruk gaya hai.”
Manju ne dheere se kaha,
“Vaidya ji… woh aisi nahi hai. Main usse kuch bolungi bhi to dar lagta hai. Kahee rishta hee naa Tod de ”
Vaidya ne gehari saans li kutch der socha aur kaha yahi ek upay bacha hai
Kisi kee jaan bachane ke liye muzhe ye karna hee padega ye mara dharm hai
Vaidya ne ek chhota pudia nikaala aur uske haath mein rakha.
“Yeh churna hai. Roz subah thoda sa doodh mein mila dena. Dheere kaam karega. Uske andar ki bujhi hui garmi ko dheere se jagayega. Jabardasti se nahi. Time lagega.”
Manju ne pudia liya.
“Agar usne mana kar diya to?”
Vaidya thoda muskura diya.
“Tu jaanti hai kaise baat karni hai. Mera kaam yahan tak tha. Aage teri aur uski marzi.”
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Baahar nikalte waqt Manju ne Sunita se kaha,
“Chal, ab ghar. Dawai mil gayi hai. Ab theek ho jaayega.”
Raaste mein Manju chup thi.
Uske dimaag mein ek baat ghum rahi thi.
MLA ke yahan “Gau Vansh Samvardhan” ka awedan kiya tha. Do gaay milne wali thin.
Woh gaay Mohanpura se leni thin. Wahan Gau vansh sawadhan kendra bhee hain.
Kutch baat baan sakati hai.
uske paass pehele se hee ek gau thee aur akeli ko 2 uar gau nahee sambhalti paati usane kutch soch ke man me ek yojana banayi kee ye gau vansh sunita didi ko de degi.
Ghar pahunchkar usne pehli baar doodh mein woh churna milaya. Bahut thoda sa.
Sunita se bas itna kaha,
“Yeh dawai ka doodh hai. Vaidya ne kaha hai, roz lena.”
Sunita ne pyali haath mein lete hue hashte hue kahi,
“Ab tu bhi doctor ban gayi kya?”
Phir bina kuch aur pooche pi liya.
Baahar baarish phir se shuru ho chuki thi.
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Shaam dhalne lagi thi.
Sunita aangan mein baithi Babalu ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Baarish ruk-ruk kar pad rahi thi. Mitti ki khushbu ab bhi hawa mein faili hui thi.
Tabhi Manju aa gayi.
Usne pehle Sunita ka chehra dekha, phir bina kuch zyada pooche doodh mein churna milaya aur uske haath mein de diya.
“Pi lo didi.”
Sunita ne pyali haath mein li aur dheere-dheere pi li.
Dono ke beech wahi purana rishta tha — kabhi kutto-billi ki tarah ladne wala, kabhi behnon jaisa.
Aaj Manju thodi zyada samzdaar dikh rahi thi.
**Manju:** Didi, aaj khana main bana deti hoon. Aap aaram kariye.
**Sunita:** (halka sa muskuraate hue) Kya baat hai Manju? Bada pyar aa raha hai apni behen pe aaj?
**Manju:** (muh tedha karke) Kya kare? Meri behen ki tabiyat hi kharab hai. Main dekh ke nahi reh paati.
**Sunita:** Hmm… haan. Pata nahi, mahavari ke dinon mein bhi dard itna badh jaata hai. Doosre-teesre din toh bardasht karna mushkil ho jaata hai.
Tu kaise sambhal leti hai itna? Badi bahadur hai tu.
Manju thodi der chup rahi. Phir aawaz dheemi karke boli,
**Manju:** Mujhe bhi hota hai didi. Bohot hota hai.
Par mera rasta… meri gufa… hamesha khuli rehti hai. Jo aata hai, use main swikaar kar leti hoon. Samjhi?
Sunita ki aankhen thodi sikud gayi.
**Sunita:** Chinaal. Sharm nahi aati itna bolte hue?
Agar kabhi tere bete ya pati ko malum pad gaya toh unka kya hoga? Tera yeh baahar muh maarna… achha nahi lagta Manju.
Manju ne aankhen jhukayi. Thodi der tak chup rahi, phir boli,
**Manju:** Didi… mera pati bas naam ka hai.
Pehli hi raat mujhe samajh aa gaya tha. Meri saas-sasur dekhte rehte the, maine jaise-taise din kaate.
Par woh… namard tha. Apni kamzori ka gussa mere upar nikalta tha. Maarta tha. Janwar ki tarah.
Usne saans li.
**Manju:** Kitni baar aapne mujhe usse bachaya hai. Aap na hoti toh pata nahi main aaj kahan hoti.
Sunita chup ho gayi.
Un purane dinon ki yaad aa gayi — Manju ka sooja hua chehra, uske haath ke nishan, raat ke andhere mein uska rona.
Us waqt Manju uske liye sirf ek pareshan aurat nahi, ek chhoti behen jaisi thi.
**Manju:** Achha hua na didi… Bhola Yadav ne us raat aa kar Ramu ko bhaga diya.
Nahi toh woh haramkhor mitti ka tel daal ke mujhe jala hi deta.
Uske baad mere saas-sasur bhi jyada din nahi rahe aur chal base.
Sunita ne dheere se kaha,
“Bhola… haan. Uske Sarpanch banne ke baad gaon mein chor-dakuo ka dar kam ho gaya tha. Khalihan bhi surakshit rehne lage.
Par uski kamzori bhi toh thi. Auraton ke liye uska hawas…”
Manju ne sir hila diya.
“Haan. Woh alag baat hai.”
Thodi der dono chup rahe. Phir Sunita ne baat badli.
**Sunita:** Sundar ki padhai kaisi chal rahi hai?
**Manju:** Achhi hai didi. Pune hostel mein hai. Padhai mein dhyaan hai uska.
**Sunita:** (halka muskuraate hue) Mera Sundar aage jaayega.
Dono ne milkar khana banaya. Baatein chalti rahi — kabhi hasi, kabhi chuppi.
Thodi der baad Babalu khet se aa gaya.
Usne haath-muh dhoya aur teeno ne milkar khana khaya.
Babalu thakan se chup tha.
Sunita bhi apne mein thi.
Khana kha kar Babalu apne kamre mein chala gaya.
Sunita ne bartan saaf kiye, aangan ki jhaadu lagayi, diya bujhaya aur apne kamre mein aa gayi.
Charpai par leti to chhat se baarish ki boondein saaf sunai de rahi thin.
Door se nadi ka gehra shor aa raha tha.
Thodi der tak toh kuch nahi hua.
Phir dheere-dheere naabhi ke neeche wohi garmahat uthne lagi.
Yeh garmi nayi nahi thi.
Yeh wahi thi jo kabhi uske pati ke jeete-ji uthati thi.
Par aaj… aath saal baad… yeh kyun?
Usne karwat badli.
Saadi ka kapda ab uske jism se chipak raha tha. Usne pallu ko dheela kiya, lekin bechaini kam nahi hui.
Aankhen band ki.
Saans ko Niyantrit karne ki koshish ki.
Lekin sharir nahi maan raha tha.
Ek ajeeb si bechaini neeche se fail rahi thi.
Jaise koi soyi hui cheez ab angdai le rahi ho.
Usne darwaze ki taraf dekha — band tha.
Phir uska haath dheere-dheere neeche gaya.
Saadi ke upar se hi, bohot halke haath se, usne wahan sparsh kiya.
Ek halki si lehree si uthi.
Achha lagane laga .
Turant uska vidhwa mann chekh utha —
*Yeh kya kar rahi hai tu?
Yaad rakh, tu vidhwa hai.
Beta doosre kamre mein soya hai.
Yeh sab tujhe shobha nahi deta.
Hath hata.*
Usne haath hata liya.
Lekin garmi kam nahi hui.
Thand mein bhi usse paseena aa raha tha.
Usne saadi ka pallu bilkul hata diya aur karwat badal kar let gayi.
Paani piya.
Phir se aankhen band ki.
Aath saal.
Aath saal se usne apne jism ko itna kas ke bandh rakha tha ki ab woh khud usse ajnabi sa lag raha tha.
Us raat neend bahut der se aayi.
Aur jab aayi, toh bhi adhoori thi.
Beech-beech mein aankhen khul jaati thin, aur woh wahi garmi phir se mehsoos karti thi.
**Doosre din subah**
Subah jaldi uthte hi pehli cheez jo Sunita ne mehsoos ki, woh thi wohi halki si garmi.
Kal raat jaisi nahi, lekin naabhi ke neeche ek shant si garmahat maujood thi.
Usne aankhen kholi.
Baahar abhi bhi geela tha. Baarish raat bhar ruk-ruk kar padti rahi thi.
Woh uth kar aangan mein aayi.
Gaayon ko chara daala, aangan buhara, phir chulha jalaaya.
Thodi der mein Manju aa gayi.
Usne pehle Sunita ka chehra dekha, phir bina kuch pooche doodh garam kiya aur usme churna milaya.
“Subah ki dawai,” usne bas itna kaha.
Sunita ne pyali haath mein li.
Kal raat ki bechaini yaad aa gayi. Ek pal ke liye usne socha ki aaj mana kar de… lekin usne chupchaap pi liya.
Thodi der baad Babalu akhaade ke liye nikal gaya.
Manju aur Sunita kuen se paani nikaalne chali gayi.
Kuen pe doosri auratein pehle se thin.
Wahan wahi purani chhed-khani shuru ho gayi — Sunita ke badan, uski umar, uski jawani ko leke.
Dono ne hasi-mazaak mein jawab diye aur matke bhar kar ghar ki taraf chal di.
Ghar pahunchte hi Babalu bhi akhaade se aa gaya.
Usne aate hi Sunita ke sir se matke utaarne ke liye haath badha diya.
Is beech uska haath jaan-anjaane Sunita ki kamar se chhu gaya.
Ek bijli si daud gayi uske poore sharir mein.
Uske muh se ek dabi hui siskari nikal gayi.
Use khud samajh nahi aaya ki abhi kya hua.
Aaj woh Babalu ko ek alag si nazar se dekh rahi thi — lekin turant usne nazar hata li.
Babalu ne hamesha ki tarah nahaaya, nashta kiya aur khet nikal gaya.
Usne kuch notice nahi kiya.
---
Jab saare kaam nipat gaye to Sunita nahaane gayi.
Aaj use apne sharir mein halka sa badlav mehsoos hua.
Uski chhaati thodi aur kasi hui lag rahi thi. Nipple sakht the.
Jaise hi unhe haath laga, ek bijli si phir se daud gayi.
Kapda pehente waqt uska jism pehle se zyada kasa aur sensitve lag raha tha.
Saadi ka pallu jab seenay se chhuuta to ek ajeeb si lehar si uthti.
Paani se bartan dhote waqt bhi geela pan uske liye alag tha.
Woh baar-baar khud se kehti,
“Dawai ka asar hai… bas.”
---
Dopahar ko Manju phir aayi.
Is baar thodi der baith kar baat ki, phir doosri dawai dekar chali gayi.
Sunita ne woh bhi pi li.
Har baar dawai ki matra thodi-thodi badhayi ja rahi thi — ek saath poora khuraak nahi.
Shaam hone lagi to Babalu khet se laut aaya.
Thakan uske chehre par thi.
Usne nahaaya, khana khaya aur jaldi so gaya.
Manju ne teesri baar doodh mein churna milaya.
Sunita ne le liya.
Ab yeh uske liye ek routine jaisa banne laga tha.
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**Raat**
Sunita ne diya bujhaya aur charpai par let gayi.
Baahar nadi ka shor aa raha tha.
Baarish dheemi pad rahi thi.
Pehle toh aaram se leti rahi.
Phir dheere-dheere woh garmi wapas aane lagi — kal se thodi zyada.
Usne karwat badli.
Saans tez ho gayi thi.
Is baar usne darwaze ki taraf dekha — band tha.
Phir uska haath dheere-dheere neeche gaya.
Saadi ke upar se. Bohot halke se.
Ek halki si lehar uthi.
Usne aankhen band kar li.
Kal se thodi der zyada ruka usne.
Sirf kuch pal ke liye.
Bas itna ki garmi thodi si fail jaaye.
Phir uska vidhwa mann bol utha —
*Yeh kya kar rahi hai phir se?
Kal bhi kiya tha. Aaj phir?
Beta soya hai.
Tu vidhwa hai.
Haath hata.*
Usne haath hata liya.
Saans bhaari thi.
Is baar guilt pehle se thoda der se aaya.
Lekin aaya zaroor.
Usne pallu se muh dhak liya.
Aankhen band ki.
Khud ko samjhane ki koshish ki,
“Yeh dawai ki wajah se ho raha hai…
Jab dawai band hogi, sab theek ho jaayega.”
Lekin is baar yeh baat usse khud ko itni mazbooti se nahi samjha paayi.
Garmi ab bhi thi.
Kamzor, lekin thi.
Usne karwat badli.
Paani piya.
Phir se let gayi.
Neend bohot der se aayi.
Aur jab aayi, toh beech-beech mein aankhen khul jaati thin.
Har baar wahi halki si garmi usse yaad dila jaati thi ki uska sharir ab pehle jaisa band nahi raha tha.
Baahar baarish jari thi.
Sunita aangan mein baithi Babalu ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Baarish ruk-ruk kar pad rahi thi. Mitti ki khushbu ab bhi hawa mein faili hui thi.
Tabhi Manju aa gayi.
Usne pehle Sunita ka chehra dekha, phir bina kuch zyada pooche doodh mein churna milaya aur uske haath mein de diya.
“Pi lo didi.”
Sunita ne pyali haath mein li aur dheere-dheere pi li.
Dono ke beech wahi purana rishta tha — kabhi kutto-billi ki tarah ladne wala, kabhi behnon jaisa.
Aaj Manju thodi zyada samzdaar dikh rahi thi.
**Manju:** Didi, aaj khana main bana deti hoon. Aap aaram kariye.
**Sunita:** (halka sa muskuraate hue) Kya baat hai Manju? Bada pyar aa raha hai apni behen pe aaj?
**Manju:** (muh tedha karke) Kya kare? Meri behen ki tabiyat hi kharab hai. Main dekh ke nahi reh paati.
**Sunita:** Hmm… haan. Pata nahi, mahavari ke dinon mein bhi dard itna badh jaata hai. Doosre-teesre din toh bardasht karna mushkil ho jaata hai.
Tu kaise sambhal leti hai itna? Badi bahadur hai tu.
Manju thodi der chup rahi. Phir aawaz dheemi karke boli,
**Manju:** Mujhe bhi hota hai didi. Bohot hota hai.
Par mera rasta… meri gufa… hamesha khuli rehti hai. Jo aata hai, use main swikaar kar leti hoon. Samjhi?
Sunita ki aankhen thodi sikud gayi.
**Sunita:** Chinaal. Sharm nahi aati itna bolte hue?
Agar kabhi tere bete ya pati ko malum pad gaya toh unka kya hoga? Tera yeh baahar muh maarna… achha nahi lagta Manju.
Manju ne aankhen jhukayi. Thodi der tak chup rahi, phir boli,
**Manju:** Didi… mera pati bas naam ka hai.
Pehli hi raat mujhe samajh aa gaya tha. Meri saas-sasur dekhte rehte the, maine jaise-taise din kaate.
Par woh… namard tha. Apni kamzori ka gussa mere upar nikalta tha. Maarta tha. Janwar ki tarah.
Usne saans li.
**Manju:** Kitni baar aapne mujhe usse bachaya hai. Aap na hoti toh pata nahi main aaj kahan hoti.
Sunita chup ho gayi.
Un purane dinon ki yaad aa gayi — Manju ka sooja hua chehra, uske haath ke nishan, raat ke andhere mein uska rona.
Us waqt Manju uske liye sirf ek pareshan aurat nahi, ek chhoti behen jaisi thi.
**Manju:** Achha hua na didi… Bhola Yadav ne us raat aa kar Ramu ko bhaga diya.
Nahi toh woh haramkhor mitti ka tel daal ke mujhe jala hi deta.
Uske baad mere saas-sasur bhi jyada din nahi rahe aur chal base.
Sunita ne dheere se kaha,
“Bhola… haan. Uske Sarpanch banne ke baad gaon mein chor-dakuo ka dar kam ho gaya tha. Khalihan bhi surakshit rehne lage.
Par uski kamzori bhi toh thi. Auraton ke liye uska hawas…”
Manju ne sir hila diya.
“Haan. Woh alag baat hai.”
Thodi der dono chup rahe. Phir Sunita ne baat badli.
**Sunita:** Sundar ki padhai kaisi chal rahi hai?
**Manju:** Achhi hai didi. Pune hostel mein hai. Padhai mein dhyaan hai uska.
**Sunita:** (halka muskuraate hue) Mera Sundar aage jaayega.
Dono ne milkar khana banaya. Baatein chalti rahi — kabhi hasi, kabhi chuppi.
Thodi der baad Babalu khet se aa gaya.
Usne haath-muh dhoya aur teeno ne milkar khana khaya.
Babalu thakan se chup tha.
Sunita bhi apne mein thi.
Khana kha kar Babalu apne kamre mein chala gaya.
Sunita ne bartan saaf kiye, aangan ki jhaadu lagayi, diya bujhaya aur apne kamre mein aa gayi.
Charpai par leti to chhat se baarish ki boondein saaf sunai de rahi thin.
Door se nadi ka gehra shor aa raha tha.
Thodi der tak toh kuch nahi hua.
Phir dheere-dheere naabhi ke neeche wohi garmahat uthne lagi.
Yeh garmi nayi nahi thi.
Yeh wahi thi jo kabhi uske pati ke jeete-ji uthati thi.
Par aaj… aath saal baad… yeh kyun?
Usne karwat badli.
Saadi ka kapda ab uske jism se chipak raha tha. Usne pallu ko dheela kiya, lekin bechaini kam nahi hui.
Aankhen band ki.
Saans ko Niyantrit karne ki koshish ki.
Lekin sharir nahi maan raha tha.
Ek ajeeb si bechaini neeche se fail rahi thi.
Jaise koi soyi hui cheez ab angdai le rahi ho.
Usne darwaze ki taraf dekha — band tha.
Phir uska haath dheere-dheere neeche gaya.
Saadi ke upar se hi, bohot halke haath se, usne wahan sparsh kiya.
Ek halki si lehree si uthi.
Achha lagane laga .
Turant uska vidhwa mann chekh utha —
*Yeh kya kar rahi hai tu?
Yaad rakh, tu vidhwa hai.
Beta doosre kamre mein soya hai.
Yeh sab tujhe shobha nahi deta.
Hath hata.*
Usne haath hata liya.
Lekin garmi kam nahi hui.
Thand mein bhi usse paseena aa raha tha.
Usne saadi ka pallu bilkul hata diya aur karwat badal kar let gayi.
Paani piya.
Phir se aankhen band ki.
Aath saal.
Aath saal se usne apne jism ko itna kas ke bandh rakha tha ki ab woh khud usse ajnabi sa lag raha tha.
Us raat neend bahut der se aayi.
Aur jab aayi, toh bhi adhoori thi.
Beech-beech mein aankhen khul jaati thin, aur woh wahi garmi phir se mehsoos karti thi.
**Doosre din subah**
Subah jaldi uthte hi pehli cheez jo Sunita ne mehsoos ki, woh thi wohi halki si garmi.
Kal raat jaisi nahi, lekin naabhi ke neeche ek shant si garmahat maujood thi.
Usne aankhen kholi.
Baahar abhi bhi geela tha. Baarish raat bhar ruk-ruk kar padti rahi thi.
Woh uth kar aangan mein aayi.
Gaayon ko chara daala, aangan buhara, phir chulha jalaaya.
Thodi der mein Manju aa gayi.
Usne pehle Sunita ka chehra dekha, phir bina kuch pooche doodh garam kiya aur usme churna milaya.
“Subah ki dawai,” usne bas itna kaha.
Sunita ne pyali haath mein li.
Kal raat ki bechaini yaad aa gayi. Ek pal ke liye usne socha ki aaj mana kar de… lekin usne chupchaap pi liya.
Thodi der baad Babalu akhaade ke liye nikal gaya.
Manju aur Sunita kuen se paani nikaalne chali gayi.
Kuen pe doosri auratein pehle se thin.
Wahan wahi purani chhed-khani shuru ho gayi — Sunita ke badan, uski umar, uski jawani ko leke.
Dono ne hasi-mazaak mein jawab diye aur matke bhar kar ghar ki taraf chal di.
Ghar pahunchte hi Babalu bhi akhaade se aa gaya.
Usne aate hi Sunita ke sir se matke utaarne ke liye haath badha diya.
Is beech uska haath jaan-anjaane Sunita ki kamar se chhu gaya.
Ek bijli si daud gayi uske poore sharir mein.
Uske muh se ek dabi hui siskari nikal gayi.
Use khud samajh nahi aaya ki abhi kya hua.
Aaj woh Babalu ko ek alag si nazar se dekh rahi thi — lekin turant usne nazar hata li.
Babalu ne hamesha ki tarah nahaaya, nashta kiya aur khet nikal gaya.
Usne kuch notice nahi kiya.
---
Jab saare kaam nipat gaye to Sunita nahaane gayi.
Aaj use apne sharir mein halka sa badlav mehsoos hua.
Uski chhaati thodi aur kasi hui lag rahi thi. Nipple sakht the.
Jaise hi unhe haath laga, ek bijli si phir se daud gayi.
Kapda pehente waqt uska jism pehle se zyada kasa aur sensitve lag raha tha.
Saadi ka pallu jab seenay se chhuuta to ek ajeeb si lehar si uthti.
Paani se bartan dhote waqt bhi geela pan uske liye alag tha.
Woh baar-baar khud se kehti,
“Dawai ka asar hai… bas.”
---
Dopahar ko Manju phir aayi.
Is baar thodi der baith kar baat ki, phir doosri dawai dekar chali gayi.
Sunita ne woh bhi pi li.
Har baar dawai ki matra thodi-thodi badhayi ja rahi thi — ek saath poora khuraak nahi.
Shaam hone lagi to Babalu khet se laut aaya.
Thakan uske chehre par thi.
Usne nahaaya, khana khaya aur jaldi so gaya.
Manju ne teesri baar doodh mein churna milaya.
Sunita ne le liya.
Ab yeh uske liye ek routine jaisa banne laga tha.
---
**Raat**
Sunita ne diya bujhaya aur charpai par let gayi.
Baahar nadi ka shor aa raha tha.
Baarish dheemi pad rahi thi.
Pehle toh aaram se leti rahi.
Phir dheere-dheere woh garmi wapas aane lagi — kal se thodi zyada.
Usne karwat badli.
Saans tez ho gayi thi.
Is baar usne darwaze ki taraf dekha — band tha.
Phir uska haath dheere-dheere neeche gaya.
Saadi ke upar se. Bohot halke se.
Ek halki si lehar uthi.
Usne aankhen band kar li.
Kal se thodi der zyada ruka usne.
Sirf kuch pal ke liye.
Bas itna ki garmi thodi si fail jaaye.
Phir uska vidhwa mann bol utha —
*Yeh kya kar rahi hai phir se?
Kal bhi kiya tha. Aaj phir?
Beta soya hai.
Tu vidhwa hai.
Haath hata.*
Usne haath hata liya.
Saans bhaari thi.
Is baar guilt pehle se thoda der se aaya.
Lekin aaya zaroor.
Usne pallu se muh dhak liya.
Aankhen band ki.
Khud ko samjhane ki koshish ki,
“Yeh dawai ki wajah se ho raha hai…
Jab dawai band hogi, sab theek ho jaayega.”
Lekin is baar yeh baat usse khud ko itni mazbooti se nahi samjha paayi.
Garmi ab bhi thi.
Kamzor, lekin thi.
Usne karwat badli.
Paani piya.
Phir se let gayi.
Neend bohot der se aayi.
Aur jab aayi, toh beech-beech mein aankhen khul jaati thin.
Har baar wahi halki si garmi usse yaad dila jaati thi ki uska sharir ab pehle jaisa band nahi raha tha.
Baahar baarish jari thi.
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Bahut shandar agaaj kiya hai ek parichit story ka part 2 aapne. Iske liye apko badhai ho. Magar iss story ke lekhan me aapne apna Jadu dala hai. Beshak Title aur Charactor vahi hai magar yah alag hat kar hai. Aapne uss story ke comment me jo pregnancy wala idea diya tha vahi use karke start Kiya hai. Aapne mukhya nayika Sunita ko start me hi bachcha paida karte hue dikhaya hai yah interesting part hai. Kyoki Sunita vidhwa hai aur ek jawan bete ko maa hai. Vah na keval sanskari bhi hai balki dabang bhi hai jisne sarpanch Bhola Yadav jaise aadmi ko dutkar diya ho uss mahila ke pregnant hona iss story ke romanch ko starting se hi jaga deta hai. Ab chunki ye incest story nahi hai to Bablu se to yah pregnant hui nhi hogi ab sawal yah khada ho gaya hai ki akhir vo mard kaun hai jis ke beej ne Sunita jaisi aurat ko gyabhin kar diya. Kiske uper Sunita itna Fida ho gai ki apni garmi ko mitane ke liye uske neeche aa gai aur usko itna prem karne lagi ki uske bachche ki maa bhi ban gai. Yah dekhna romanchak rahega. Thanks.
Sabse pahle meri ek request hai ki Babalu ki jagah Bablu likha jaay yahi sahi spelling hai. Babalu padhna bada ajeeb sa lagta hai. Chunki yah naam bar bar aa raha rha hai to aur jyada ajeeb lagta hai. Dusra ma ko maa likhiye.
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Ji, uska naam Bablu hi hai. Typing mein galti ho gayi thi.
Yeh kahani main original/main lekhak ki anumati leke likh raha hoon. Yeh unki kahani ka mera version hai — jaise koi movie pehle aayi ho, aur baad mein kisi naye director ne use apne andaaz mein dobara direct kiya ho.
Mujhe original kahani adhuri lagi. Koi bhi maa aise seedha apne hi bete se sex nahi karti. Uske peeche koi na koi majboot wajah ya ghatna honi chahiye.
Mujhe yeh bhi laga ki agar kahani gaon pe hi focused rehti toh behtar hota. Original mein kahani alag-alag direction mein chali gayi — haveli, Munna bhai, chini mill, aur kai auraton ke saath sex — wahan bohot zyada time nikal gaya aur kahani ko kaafi jaldbazi mein khatam kar diya gaya.
yeh normal adultery nahi hai. Yeh ek alag tarah ki story hai — fantasy adultery ke saath political daav-pech mili hui.
Aur haan, hamari jo main kahani Constable Maa hai, woh jaari hai. Uska update jaise pehle hota hai, waise hi weekend pe aayega.
Dono kahaniyon mein farq yeh hai ki Constable Maa mein mujhe research karni padti hai — dates, police ke naam, gangster ke naam dhundhne padte hain.
Jabki Khet Khalihan ek pure fantasy story hai. Iska base pehle se ready hai, isliye yeh kuch hi dino mein khatam ho jaayegi.
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Teen din ho gaye the dawai shuru hue.
Subah, dopahar, shaam — Manju roz doodh mein churna milati rahi. Matra dheere-dheere badhati gayi.
Par Sunita ke upar koi bada asar nahi dikh raha tha.
Woh pehle jaisi hi kaam karti, pehle jaisi hi baat karti.
Andar garmi toh uthati thi, lekin woh usse dabane mein ab bhi kaafi had tak kaamyaab thi.
Manju yeh dekh kar sochne lagi.
“Kya main matra kam de rahi hoon? Ya yeh itni control mein hai ki dawai bhi haar jaaye?”
Phir uske mann mein ek vichar aaya —
*Jaisi sangat baithiye, taisa hi phal deen.*
Woh sochne lagi, “Agar main didi ko apne saath thoda zyada akela rakhun, toh shayad kaheen na kaheen woh bhi meri jaisi ho paaye. Bechari apne berang jeevan mein thoda rang bhar paaye.”
Aise soch kar Manju Sunita ke ghar aa gayi.
Wahan Sunita apna rozmarra ka kaam kar rahi thi aur Babalu naha kar aaya tha.
**Manju:** Didi, aaj aapko mere saath Mohanpura chalna hoga. Mela hai. Mujhe 2 gaay milne wali hain. Mere paas pehle se 2 hain, 4 ko main akeli nahi sambhal paungi. Aapke paas 1 hi hai… ek aap rakh lo, aapke paas 2 ho jaayengi.
**Babalu:** Kyun mausi, rakh lo na. Main toh uske liye roz chara laata hi hoon. 2 ke liye bhi le aunga.
**Manju:** Beta, tu samajhta nahi. Tera ab byah hoga toh ladki wale kya kahenge? “Inke paas bas 1 hi gaay hai.” Kaun dega humein ladki?
Sunita hansne lagi. Babalu sharma gaya.
**Babalu:** Maa, aap chali jaao Mohanpura ke mele mein.
Raat ko main anda kha lunga aur doodh pi lunga. Aapko shayad kal dopahar tak aana hoga.
Aur haan, aate hue apne liye kuch kapde, ghar ka samaan aur mere liye mere kapde lete aana. Par aap wahan rukogi kahan?
**Manju:** Arre, MLA ji se meri pehchaan hai. Woh kar rahe hain bandobast. Aur wahan ka mela raat mein bhi chalta hai, toh sone ka koi sawal hi nahi.
Sunita ke mann mein thoda sankoch tha — raat bhar rukne ka, aur kisi anjaan aadmi ke bharose. Manju apni hai, par MLA apna nahi hai.
Babalu aur Manju dono ne dekha ki Sunita asmanjas mein hai. Tabhi baahar se kisi ne awaaz lagayi aur woh chali gayi.
**Manju:** Dekh beta, tere baapu ke jaane ke baad se jaise inhone jeena chhod diya hai. Mere saath mele mein jaayegi toh thoda dil bhi behal jaayega, dard se mann bhi kaheen aur lag jaayega. Mana apni maa ko.
**Babalu:** Aap toh jaanti ho na, woh kaisi hain. Nahi maanengi.
**Manju:** Kaisa mard hai re tu… tere ghar ki aurat tera kehna nahi maanti…
(Yeh shabd uske muh se nikal gaye. Uske mann mein bhi ek sansani fail gayi — soch kar ki Sunita uske bete ki aurat hai aur woh is ghar ka mard.)
Babalu ke poore sharir mein sansani daud gayi.
Maa jaisi aurat, jise saare gaon ke aadmi pana chahte hain… woh sach mein uski aurat hai, aur woh is ghar ka mard hai.
Yeh sochte hi uske lund ne ek jhatka diya.
Sunita ghar mein aa gayi.
Babalu ne kaha, “Aapko jaana chahiye.”
Usne kuch paise diye samaan laane ke liye.
Itni jaldi aur mardangi se pesh aaya ki Sunita bas uski aagya ka paalan karne lagi.
Dawai ne ab apna asli asar dikhana shuru kar diya tha.
Sunita dheere-dheere mard ke saamne samarpit hone lagi thi.
Usne cream colour ki saadi pehni aur dono behnein nikal padi Mohanpura ke mele ke liye.
Manju ne apne saath ek bag liya tha. Usme kuch kapde the aur makeup ka samaan.
Jab Sunita ne poocha toh Manju boli, “Kuch khaas nahi… bas aise hi extra kapde, agar zarurat pad jaaye toh.”
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Dono nadi kinare aa gayi. Naav se nadi ke doosre chhor jaane mein 1 ghanta lag gaya.
Wahan se mukhya rasta mila. Dono kisi vaahan ka intezaar karne lagi.
Kaafi der baad unhe ek truck dikha.
Cabin mein Manju ki pehchaan ka aadmi tha — **Akram**.
Woh janwar kharidne ja raha tha Mohanpura.
Use laga ki Manju ki jagah Sunita uske paas baithhegi, par hua ulta.
Manju uske paas baith gayi aur Sunita side ho gayi.
Road bohot kharab thi.
Aaj dawai ki matra bohot zyada thi. Jo garmi raat mein aati thi, woh aaj subah se hi shuru ho gayi thi.
Aath saal baad uske wahan se kaam-ras risne laga tha.
Sunita bohot koshish kar rahi thi control ki, lekin aaj nahi ho paa raha tha.
Manju ne taad liya ki yahi sahi mauka hai.
**Manju:** Didi, kya hua? Baithne mein koi takleef ho rahi hai kya?
**Akram:** Arre Manju, wahan seat ka gadha nikal gaya hai, isliye Sunita ko takleef ho rahi hai.
Manju ne soch kar kaha, “Didi, aap yahan meri jagah pe aa jao. Main aapki jagah pe aa jaati hoon.”
**Sunita:** Are nahi nahi, main theek hoon.
Akram aur Manju dono ne kaha, “Aap pehli baar ja rahi ho. Aage road aur kharab hai, aur abhi 1 ghante ka safar baaki hai.”
Sunita ki majboori thi. Use unki baat maan ni padi.
Ab Sunita beech mein thi — baaye taraf Akram, daaye taraf Manju.
Jaise hi truck start hua, maa ke naak mein ek mardana khushbu aane lagi.
Yeh Akram ke sharir se aa rahi thi.
Us khushbu ne aag mein ghee ka kaam karna shuru kar diya.
Manju chupke se Sunita ke haav-bhaav dekhne lagi.
Use lagne laga ki dawai sach mein asar dikhane lagi hai.
Tabhi road ke side mein ek aur aadmi khada tha. Usne Akram ko dekha aur haath hilaya. Woh bhi truck mein aa gaya.
(Gaon-dehat mein aisa aksar hota hai. Yahan sansadhan kam hote hain, isliye log ek doosre ki madad aise karte hain.)
Ab Manju maa se chipak gayi. Woh aadmi thoda mota tha, isliye 4 logon ko dikkat hone lagi.
Akram ne kaha, “Aap apne dono pair gear ke handle ke beech mein rakh lo, adjust ho jaayega.”
Sunita ne yeh maan liya.
Yahi uski sabse badi galti ho gayi.
Akram baar-baar gear badalta, aur uske haath ki kohni Sunita ki kamar se dab jaati.
Ek jor ka jhatka laga to kisi purush ki kohni Sunita ke stanon se dab gayi.
Uske muh se siskari nikal gayi — “Ouch… hmmm…”
**Manju:** Dard badha kya didi?
Akram ne poocha, “Kaisa dard?”
Manju ne kaha, “Kamar mein dard hai.”
Sunita ne kuch nahi kaha.
Akram ko green signal mil gaya.
Usne kaha, “Sunita, thoda aage sarak jao.”
Uske peechhe ek takiya laga diya.
Dekhne walon ko lagta ki uski kitni care hai,
par asal mein hua yeh ki Sunita aur aage aa gayi.
Ab gearbox ke upar ka gol handle seedha uski chut ke thoda upar tha.
Gaadi ke vibration se uski haalat aur kharab hone lagi.
Uske sharir ne jawab dena shuru kar diya.
Akram mauke ka faayda uthane laga — baar-baar gear badalna aur stanon ko kohni se mardan karna.
Aaj woh khud ko bohot khush-naseeb samajh raha tha.
Jis aurat ke peechhe pura gaon paagal hai, use aaj woh daboch raha tha.
Cabin ke andar ki stithi bohot garam ho chuki thi.
Tabhi Mohanpura aa gaya.
Sunita utar gayi aur Manju se kaha ki woh aati hai.
Woh khule mein mutne chali gayi.
Jaise hi mutne lagi, uski chut se bohot tez siti nikalii.
Uske saath uska kaam-ras bhi nikal aaya.
Aaj kai saalon baad woh jhad gayi thi.
Aur uska dard kahin gayab ho gaya tha.
Usne mann hi mann Vaidya ka aabhaar mana.
Khet se baahar aayi to Manju aur Akram muskura rahe the.
Sunita ki toh jaan hi nikal gayi thi.
Unse alvida karke Akram nikal gaya janwar kharidne.
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Dono MLA Narsingh Jadhav ke farmhouse pahunchi.
P.A. se mulaqaat hui.
MLA neeche aa gaye.
Jaise hi unki nazar Manju pe padi, unke lund ne jhatka de diya. Aaj raat unki thi… aaj toh.
Lekin jaise hi unhone dekha ki baju mein ek bohot hi kamuk stree hai, use dekhte-dekhte unke muh mein paani aa gaya. Unki dhoti mein lund khada ho gaya.
Woh apni besakhi ke sahare wahan aaye.
Unhone Manju ko namaskar kiya aur poocha, “Yeh devi ji kaun hain?”
**Manju:** Yeh meri behen hain, Sunita ji. Aaj pehli baar aayi hain mele mein.
**MLA Jadhav:** Badhiya hai. Aur waise bhi yeh mela suhaaganon ke liye hi hai. Har suhaagan yahan aa kar apni manokaamna poori karti hai. Waise aap kya karti hain?
“Suhaagan” sunte hi Manju aur Sunita chauk gayi.
Sunita ka muh utar gaya. Jadhav ke chaanakya aankhon ne baat pakad li.
**Manju:** MLA ji, mere jija ji ko mare aaj 8 saal ho gaye hain. Iska ek beta hai Babalu, jo abhi 18 saal ka hai. Main koshish karungi ki meri behen mele mein na jaakar aapne jo rukne ki vyavastha ki hai, wahin thehar jaaye.
**MLA:** Ohh… mujhe maaf karna Sunita ji. Aapko dekh ke lagta nahi ki aapka 18 saal ka beta hai. Koi bhi kahega aap 25-26 saal ki hain.
Koi nahi… aap vidhwa hain, yeh bas aapko aur mujhe pata hai. Baaki logon ko nahi. Toh kahunga ki aap vidhwa nahi, ek ladki hain jo shaadi ke liye apna vaar dhoondh rahi hain. Aise bohot si ladkiyan hamare mandir mein aati hain aur manokaamna poori karti hain.
Khud ko kunwari aur ladki sun kar Sunita sharma gayi. Manju bhi.
Phir MLA ne ek phone kiya aur kuch form le aaye.
“Yeh CM Vidhwa Pension ka form hai. Kuch din pehle hi aaya hai. Aapko har mahine 6,000 rupaye milenge. Kisan Samman Yojana ke saalana 60,000 bhi milenge.”
Sunita aur Manju dono bhavuk ho gayi.
“Dhanyavaad MLA ji.”
MLA ne Sunita ko dekha. Unki aankhon mein hawas thi.
Sunita aankhen jhukaye khadi thi.
Manju khayi-kheli thi. Use pata tha yeh budha bina chut chode kuch nahi karega, par uska muawza bhi toh achha-khaasa de raha tha. Isliye Manju chup rahi apni behen ke liye.
Manju apni aakhri chaal chalte hue boli,
“MLA ji, kyun na aap Sunita ko gaon ke Mahila Morcha ki President bana dein? Aur aapki jo Jadhav Milk Company hai, uska doodh collection ki zimmedari aap Sunita aur Babalu ke haathon mein de dein. Babalu pure rajya bhar ghum sakega.”
Manju ne Jadhav ko aankh maari — matlab agar Babalu nahi rahega toh Sunita ko aasani se pela ja sakta hai.
Jadhav ki aankhon mein chamak aa gayi.
Sunita ne kaha, “President nahi sahab… mere se nahi hoga.”
Tabhi MLA ki patni bhi aa gayi.
“Are kyun nahi hoga? Humne aapke baare mein suna hai. Aap swabhimani hain aur auratein aapko unka aadarsh samajhti hain. Aap hamare Nari Shakti Vibhag ke Mandawa ki Adhyaksha hain aaj se. Aur yeh mera hukum hi samajho, beti.”
Sunita kuch nahi bol paayi. Sab kuch itni jaldi ho gaya.
**Sunita:** Sahab, maanya hai… par mujhe kuch samay chahiye.
**Mr & Mrs Jadhav:** Are beti, Nari Shakti abhi kaagaz pe hai. Hum aane wale Holi ke baad uska ghoshana karenge. Holi ko abhi 3 mahine baaki hain. Chalega na?
Sunita ke paas ab koi chara nahi tha. Usne haan keh diya.
Sunita adhikritik roop se party mein aa gayi. Saare form bhar diye gaye.
Unhe ek kamre mein bhej diya gaya.
Jadhav aur unki patni kutil muskaan se dekhte rahe — jaise koi Kohinoor heera haath mein aa gaya ho.
Room mein jaate hi Sunita baras padi, “Yeh sab kya hai?”
Par Manju ne apne shatir dimaag se sab sambhal liya.
Raat ho gayi.
Sunita kamre mein akele thi.
Manju kisi kaam se baahar gayi thi.( aap ko paata hai konse kaam se )
Charpai par leti to aankhen nahi lag rahi thi.
Subah se jo garmi chali aa rahi thi, ab woh thodi saaf ho gayi thi.
Usne karwat badli.
Akram ki khushbu, gaadi ka hilna, kohni ka sparsh — sab yaad aa raha tha.
Vidhwa mann ab bhi bol raha tha,
lekin awaaz pehle jaisi tez nahi thi.
Usne aankhen band ki.
Lekin neend nahi aayi.
Bahar mela ki lights aur awaaze aa rahi thin.
Subah uthi to pehle se thodi zyada bechaini thi.
Neend adhoori rahi thi.
Manju aa gayi.
Usne doodh mein churna milaya — aaj matra kal se thodi zyada thi.
“Pi lo didi. Aaj mela bhi dekhna hai.”
**Sunita:** Mele mein kaise jaaun? Meri saadi kharab ho gayi hai.
**Manju:** Kya Akram ne bohot ragda kya? Saadi mein hi nikal gaya? Hahaha…
Sunita jhijhak gayi. Sharm aur dar se haklate hue boli, “Kya kaha tune, besharam?”
**Manju:** Are jaane do na didi. Kisne dekha hai? Aur Mohanpura ek bada shehar hai. Yahan kaun jaanega aap kaun ho. Lo, yeh saadi… maine extra laayi thi.
**Sunita:** Par yeh main kaise pehnungi?
**Manju:** Didi, aap yahan ke logon ke liye bin-byahi ho. Zyada mat socho. Apne dil ki suno aur khul ke jiyo. Kaun gaon mein batayega, aur kaun aapko pehchanega?
Tabhi gate pe knock hua. Ek pooja ki thali aayi aur kuch shringar ka samaan.
Sunita hichkichate hue makeup karne lagi.
Kya dikh rahi thi… bohot hi badhiya. Jaise koi kaamdevi ho.
Sunita ne doodh chupchaap pi liya.
Nashta karke dono Gau Vansh Samvardhan Kendra chali gayi.
Wahan form diya, do gaay unke naam kar di gayi.
MLA ke aadmi ne gaayein le li aur farmhouse bhej di.
Ab dono mela ki taraf nikal padi.
Mele mein unche-unche jhule, maut ka kunwa, naav wala jhula, rang-berangi kapde, choodiyan, mithai ki dukanein…
Mela nahi, maano pariyon ki kahani mein aa gaye hon.
Dono usme kho gayi.
Thoda andhera hone laga to rang-berangi lights jal uthi. Mahaul aur bhi rangeen ho gaya.
Bheed mein manchale, lofaange, unki sitiyan, unke dhakke…
Kuch manchale Manju aur Sunita ko dabochte.
Sunita pareshan thi. Manju ko toh is sab mein maza aa raha tha.
Manju ne Sunita ko ek kone mein le jaakar kaha,
“Didi suno… yahan aapko koi nahi jaanta, na mujhe. Kya aap bheed rok paayengi?”
**Sunita:** Nahi… main kaise rok paungi? Par yeh sab ajeeb hai.
**Manju:** Kya aapko farmhouse chhod doon? Kya aapko mela dekhna achha nahi lagta? Chhodo na sab… bas jaise nadi hai waise baho.
Bheed ka kya hai, unhe chhodo. Koi humein nahi jaanta, hum unhe nahi jaante.
Phir Manju use ek halwai ki dukaan mein le gayi. Wahan se doodh liya aur usme churna mila diya — ab subah ke muqable do guna.
Manju ne Sunita ko doodh diya.
Kuch der baithne ke baad dawai ka asar shuru ho gaya.
Sunita soch ke kuch muskura deti hai aur Manju ka haath pakad ke mele mein samaa jaati hai.
Koi jhule mein unhe kohni se stanon ko chhu jaata, koi ticket ki line mein apne lund ko masal deta.
Lekin jab dono thak kar baith gayi, tab dawai ka poora asar Sunita pe hone laga tha.
Tabhi MLA wahan aaye aur bole, “Chalo, maut ka kunwa dekhte hain.”
MLA apahij the, isliye unko Sunita aur Manju sahara deti hain.
Unki dono kohniyan dono ke stanon se chipki hui thin.
Upar ek VIP counter tha, jo keval MLA aur unke parivar ke liye tha. Aas-paas parde lage hue the — ek tarah ka VIP box.
Us box mein keval 2 hi log aa sakte the.
MLA ne Manju ko aankh maari.
**Manju:** Suno didi, aap aur MLA ji yahan ruko. Main baju mein hoon.
Sunita use dekh ke aankhon se rokne ki koshish karti hai, par Manju ek 30-32 saal ke aadmi ki taraf ishara karti hai jo baar-baar use dekh raha tha, aur hans deti hai.
**Sunita:** Kya karne wali hai tu?
**Manju:** Jaise aapko nahi pata… main aapki tarah apni jawani barbad nahi karti. Aap dekho maut ka kunwa. Main aayi use apna kunwa dikha ke.
Sunita kuch kehti, usse pehle Manju nikal gayi aur door se dekhne lagi.
Sunita ko peechhe se woh ladka aaya aur jaise anjaane mein hi usne Manju ki gaand pe apna lund laga diya.
Sunita sharm aur hairani se dekhne lagi, phir VIP box mein chali gayi.
Khel shuru ho gaya.
MLA ne jaan-bujhkar apni kaathi nahi laayi thi.
Kunwe pe kartab chalane lage. MLA dard se karahane lage.
**Sunita:** Kya hua Jadhav ji? Sab theek?
**MLA:** Pair mein dard hai. Chadi nahi laaya. Ab sahara nahi le paa raha. Bike baar baar uppar aane ke wajah se handle bhi nahi pakad paa raha.
“Sunita beti, agar bura na maano toh kya main tumhare dono kandhon ko peechhe se pakadta hoon aur tum us handle ko pakdo? Chalega?”
Sunita ne socha — bichara mushkil mein hai — toh maan gayi.
MLA ki height bohot thi, isliye woh uske peechhe khade hokar upar se dekh paa rahe the.
Sunita ki cleavage aur uske sharir se aa rahi mada gandh unhe uttejit kar rahi thi.
Sunita ka bhi mann dol raha tha, kyunki dawai ka asar ab hone laga tha. Use ab MLA ke paurush ki gandh achhi lagne lagi thi.
MLA peechhe aa gaye aur box ke andhere mein kaheen kho gaye.
Sunita neeche dekh rahi thi.
MLA ab khel ke kartab dekhne ke bahane use peechhe se chipak gaye.
Unka khada lund ab Sunita ki gaand mein dab gaya.
Sunita aage badhna chahti thi, par dab gayi.
MLA ki gaand aur woh sparsh…
Jaise hi bike upar aayi, woh peechhe hat gayi aur lund ab daarar mein chala gaya.
Sunita ab madhosh hone lagi.
Uske sharir ne ab poori tarah se baghawat kar di.
MLA bhi bohot Anubhavi khiladi the.
Unhone apna lund peechhe kiya aur Sunita ke bajuon ko halka-halka sehlane lage.
Apni thodi ko uski gardan ke paas le jaakar garam saanse chhodne lage.
Sunita poori tarah kaam-jwar mein apne aap se kaabu khone lagi thi.
Usne apni kamar khud se peechhe kar di aur lund ko apni daarar mein daal diya.
MLA ne apna haath uski kamar mein daal diya aur pallu se uski kamar ko dhak diya.
Halka-halka kamar ko sehlane lage.
Haath upar le jaate, akhiri blouse ke button ko touch karte, phir neeche aate.
Sunita tadap rahi thi. Gussa ho rahi thi ki koi uske stanon ko jor se daboche.
Vasona aur kaam-jwar se dekh rahi thi, par sharm ke maare kuch keh nahi paayi.
MLA ne uski saadi ke upar se uski kokh ko sehlana shuru kiya.
Sunita apna aapa kho rahi thi.
Apni gaand peechhe le jaakar MLA ke lund pe khud-ba-khud upar-neeche kar rahi thi.
Aisa 10 minute chala.
Phir ek kamuk siskari ke saath Sunita wahin jhad gayi.
Use bohot relax aur apna sharir halka laga.
Dard gayab hi ho gaya tha jo bohot dinon se andar tha. Ab dheere-dheere baahar nikalne laga tha.
MLA ne kaha, “Neeche se ek urine disposal hai, use uthao.”
Sunita ne uthaya.
Unhone kaha, “Mujhe madad karo… mujhe mutna hai.”
Sunita samajh gayi. Neeche nahi ja sakte dono milke, aur mut rok nahi sakte.
Usne aankhen kaheen aur ghuma di, par MLA apni dhoti aur langot nahi khol paa rahe the.
Unki asahayta dekh kar Sunita ne unke dono haath apne sir pe rakhe, neeche baith gayi aur unki dhoti kholi.
Jaise hi uski nazar unke langot mein gayi…
Jaise koi ajgar kisi ped ko lapetata hai, waisa ajgar unke langot mein tha.
Sunita dar gayi. Hichkichane lagi.
MLA jaldi mein the ki Sunita kaheen langot mein hi na nikal jaaye.
Sunita ne waqt ki nazakat dekhte hue langot ke side se unke ajgar ko azaad kiya.
Kam se kam 10 se 12 inch ka hoga, aur 4 ungli saath jodo utni motai ka tha.
Sunita ne aaj pehli baar kisi paraye mard ke guptang ko dekha.
Usne urine pot ka muh MLA ke lund mein ghusa diya.
MLA mutne lage.
Jab unka ho gaya to jaise hi unka lund baahar nikla, Sunita ki ungli ko unka lund chhu gaya.
2 boondein uske haath pe giri.
Ek madhosh karne wali sugandh pure box mein fail gayi.
Dono ne apni saansein kaabu mein ki aur show dekhne lage.
Sunita ne dekha ki Manju gayab hai wahan se, aur woh ladka bhi.
Show khatam hua.
MLA ke aadmi aaye.
Sunita ne ek side se unhe pakda, ek side se P.A. ne, aur unhe neeche le gaye.
Neeche aate hi unhone Sunita se kaha, “Jaldi ghar aa jaana. Zyada der baahar mat rehna.”
Ek packet diya, “Yeh gift hai hamari taraf se.”
Sunita mana karne lagi, par unke aage ek naa nahi chali.
MLA jaane lage aur Sunita Manju ko dhoondhne lagi.
jo nahee mili taab sunita farm house pe akele chali gayi
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Raat ko farmhouse ke kamre mein Sunita akele thi.
Aaj pehli baar usne kisi mard ke haath ka asar apne sharir par itna clear mehsoos kiya tha.
Aaj pehli baar uska sharir kisi aur ke liye geela hua tha.
Woh charpai par baithi rahi.
Haath mein pallu kas ke pakde hue.
Vidhwa mann ab bhi tha…
lekin bohot kamzor.
Bahar mela ki awaaze aa rahi thin.
Usne aankhen band ki.
Aur is baar… thodi der ke liye… usne khud ko rokne ki koshish nahi ki.
Agli subah Manju ne kaha,
“Didi, gaayein final checkup ke liye wapas le jaani hain. Kendra mein bulaya hai.”
Sunita ne bas sir hila diya.
Raat ka asar ab bhi uske sharir mein tha.
Dono gaayein leke Gau Vansh Samvardhan Kendra pahunchi.
Wahan pehle se bheed thi.
Checkup aur prajanan ka kaam chal raha tha.
Tabhi ek badi gaadi aayi.
Usme se ek bada, sakht bail utara gaya.
Logon ne uska naam liya — **Firangi**.
Bhola Yadav ka bail.
Bail ko khunta se bandha gaya.
Uske neeche lal, mota, khada lund latak raha tha.
Nasein phooli hui thin.
Thodi der baad ek gaay ko kheench kar laaya gaya.
Logon ne use bail ke saamne khada kar diya.
Bail ne pehle soongha.
Phir ek jhatke mein peechhe gaya aur chadhaai kar di.
Uske bhaari sharir ne gaay ko dabaya.
Lal lund seedha andar chala gaya.
Ek gehra dhakka. Phir doosra. Teesra.
Gaay ki awaaz nikalii.
Bail ke pair uth-uth kar pad rahe the.
Sunita ki saans ruk si gayi.
Uske pet ke neeche ek tez si lehree uthi.
Kapdon ke andar geelapan badh gaya.
Tabhi kendra ki ek aurat, jo wahan kaam karti thi, bol uthii:
“Arre, is bail ko dekh rahe ho na…
Yeh usi gaay ka bachhada hai jo pichhle saal yahin khadi thi.
Usi ke doodh ne isko itni taakat di hai.
Maa ka doodh… aur aaj wahi beta apni taakat dikha raha hai.”
Sunita ke kaan mein yeh baat teer ki tarah lagi.
Usne turant nazar jhukayi.
Manju uske bagal mein khadi thi.
Usne dheere se, almost bolte hue kaha,
“Janwar koi niyam nahi maante didi…
Woh toh bas apna kaam karte hain.
Hum hi hain jo niyam bana-bana ke khud ko maar daalte hain.”
Sunita ne kuch nahi kaha.
Lekin uske dimaag mein ek hi cheez ghum rahi thi.
*Beta…*
*Maa ka doodh…*
*Taakat…*
Bail ab bhi dhakka maar raha tha.
Lal lund andar-bahar ho raha tha.
Sunita ke muh se halki si siskari nikal gayi.
Usne turant honth daba liye.
Manju ne uska haath pakad liya.
Is baar Sunita ne haath nahi chhudaya.
Pandrah-bees minute baad bail utar gaya.
Uske lund se ghada-ghada paani tapak raha tha.
Log apna kaam dekhne lage.
Normal chehre. Normal baatein.
Sirf Sunita ke pairon mein kamzori thi.
Chehra garam tha.
Pallu usne itna kas ke pakda hua tha ki ungliyan dard kar rahi thin.
Manju ne dheere se kaha,
“Chal didi… ab checkup karwa lete hain.”
Sunita ki awaaz nikli,
“Haan…”
Woh awaaz uski apni nahi lag rahi thi.
Andar kuch aur gehri jagah pe
ek naya khayal ghumne laga tha.
Aisa khayal jo usne kabhi sochne ki himmat nahi ki thi.
Dono gaayein farmhouse pe thi.
Ab unhe Mandawa le jaana tha.
Manju truck ka soch hi rahi thi ki Bhola Yadav khud aa gaya.
Uske peechhe uska bail Firangi gaadi mein bandha hua tha.
**Bhola:** Suna hai do gaay milin hain.
Main jaa raha hoon Mandawa. Chal, saath chal. Gaayein bhi le chalte hain. kyu paise barbaad kaar rahee hai bhade pe .
Manju ne Sunita ki taraf dekha.
Sunita ne bas haa me sir hila diya.
Gaayein Bhola ki badi gaadi mein baandh di gayi.
Firangi bhee gaadi mein tha.
Sunita aur Manju Bhola ke saath cabin mein baith gayi.
Bhola ne engine start kiya.
Is baar road pe koi doosra aadmi nahi tha.
Sirf teen log.
Pehle kuch der chupchaap chalte rahe.
Bhola driving kar raha tha.
Bol nahi raha tha.
sunita fir se aaj beech mein baithi thi.
Sunita manju ke side ke khidki se baahar dekh rahi thi.
Lekin uska dhyan baar-baar Bhola ke bazuon pe chala jaata tha.
Jo steering pakde hue the — mote, sakht, gaon ke mard ke.
Thodi der baad Bhola ne bina mudre hue kaha,
“Kaafi dino baad dikhi.”
**Sunita:** Haan…
Phir phir se chuppi.
aur manju side se dono ko dekh rahi thi.
Kuch nahi bol rahi thi.
Gaadi ek bade gaddhe se guzri.
Sunita thodi si hil gayi.
Uske kandhe ne Bhola ke kandhe ko chhua.
Usne turant door ho jaane ki koshish ki.
Bhola ne koi reaction nahi diya.
Bas driving karta raha.
Andar hi andar uske dimaag mein ek hi baat ghum rahi thi —
*Mera Firangi jab gaay pe chadhta hai na…
Main bhi ispe chadhunga.
Aur iske pet se apna bachhada nikalunga.*
Yeh soch kar uske lund ne joor se dhakka diya.
Usne tangein thodi si failayi aur control kiya.
Sunita ko uski khushbu aa rahi thi —
mitti, pasina, aur bail ki bhaari mardana khushbu.
Aaj dawai ke asar mein woh khushbu uske liye bohot bhaari pad rahi thi.
Ek baar jab gaadi tez mote patthar se guzri, toh Sunita ki jaangh Bhola ki jaangh se ragad gayi.
Ek second ke liye.
Us second mein Sunita ke sharir mein bijli si daudi.
Usne saans rok li.
Bhola ne ab bhi kuch nahi kaha.
Lekin uski ungliyon ne steering ko thoda kas liya.
Baaki rasta aise hi guzra —
kam baatein, zyada chuppi,
aur beech-beech mein woh bhaari, dabi hui tension.
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Shaam tak Mandawa aa gaya.
Gaayein utaari gayi.
Aangan mein bandhi gayi.
Khabar faili.
Aaju-baju ki auratein aa gayi.
Nayi gaay aayi hai toh puja.
Aarti, tilak, dhoop, mithai.
Sab hua.
Bhola aakhir tak khada raha.
Jab auratein chali gayi toh usne Sunita ki taraf dekha.
Is baar nazar mein koi hasi nahi thi.
Sirf ek shant, bhaari irada tha.
Usne kuch nahi kaha.
Bas apne bail ke saath nikal gaya.
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Raat ko Sunita charpai pe leti to uske dimaag mein
Bhola ki woh chuppi
aur uski aakhri nazar
baar-baar ghum rahi thi.
Saath mein Firangi ka lal lund
aur uske dhakke
bhi yaad aa rahe the.
Usne aankhen band ki.
Lekin neend nahi aayi.
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