Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

[Ankitarani]

Nice

Thnkss

 

[Ankitarani]

arun ko achcha pareshan kiya tannu aur disha ne varsha ke kehne par ..bechara ghar se hi bhag gaya .
ab neha ko dekhkar arun ke dil me pyar ka phul khil raha hai dekhte hai dono ki aankh michauli hoti hai ya nahi ..
aur shweta ka sochna bhi sahi hai mobile ko lekar aur amit ko ..ek nakli case aur ek jo sirf 3 logo ko hi pata ho ..
ab mujhe lagta hai sabse pehle shweta ya neha ko agar koi target karega to wo second lady killer hogi ..varsha psycho hai par mobile hack karne ke liye kuch to saaman chahiye jo shayad uske paas nahi hai .

Dekhte hai...kon targer krta hai kisko....ab to tnsn khtm ye thriller hi rhni hai....so dekhege kya hoga

 

[Ankitarani]

prrr tumbare saadgi or shant swabhav ki vjh se hmare lie tum apno se bhi badhkr ho gyi ho...esi baate mt socha kro....
varsha shant aur sadgi bhari ..in logo ke upar chashma chadha hai ..varsha ki darindagi dekhkar ye bole to jyada sahi rahega ki wo kitni shant hai ..

Hahaha....tnnkss...wo shant hai islie story ka naam bhi khamoshiya hai...

 

[Ankitarani]

Why??

Plss dost gussa mt hov....ek or story likhugi iske bad....okkk...plss story pdhte rho..

 

[Ankitarani]

Thread Title Changed On Ts's Request.

Regards
Story Collector

Thnks patel ji...

 

[manikmittalme07]

Thns itne achhe suggestion ke lie...apki baat pr gor kiya or story ki catogery chang kr di.....thanks alot

Ohh that's really honor for me ankita ji..thanks a lot

 

[Pta nhi]

Plss dost gussa mt hov....ek or story likhugi iske bad....okkk...plss story pdhte rho..

Bye..

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

incest tag hata liya story se ..
par koi baat nahi aisi hi ek aur kahani start karo jisme sex ho ( incest ) ..aur saare reader ko khush kar do ..

par ye story me kahi bhi adult ya incest sex fit nahi hoga ...
jaha tak har character ko dekha hai koi bhi horny type nahi hai ..( only my point of view ) ..

tannu ko sexy baate sunna achcha lagta hai apne friend se ( name yaad nahi ) ..
disha ka to dekh liya usko varsha se bhi sexy baate karna pasand nahi hai ..

 

[Ankitarani]

incest tag hata liya story se ..
par koi baat nahi aisi hi ek aur kahani start karo jisme sex ho ( incest ) ..aur saare reader ko khush kar do ..

par ye story me kahi bhi adult ya incest sex fit nahi hoga ...
jaha tak har character ko dekha hai koi bhi horny type nahi hai ..( only my point of view ) ..

tannu ko sexy baate sunna achcha lagta hai apne friend se ( name yaad nahi ) ..
disha ka to dekh liya usko varsha se bhi sexy baate karna pasand nahi hai ..

Hmmm uske liye disri likhugi...isme sex fit hi nhi bethta yrr...

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

कोई बात नही । अब स्टोरी से इनसेस्ट को तिलांजलि दे दिया गया ।

कहानी बढ़िया है ही लेकिन उससे बेहतर आप के लिखने की शैली है । कामेडी और थ्रीलर के बारे में कहना ही क्या !

लेकिन जो लोग इन्सेस्ट देखकर स्टोरी पर आए थे उनके लिए तो यही कहूंगा -
दिल के अरमां आसूंओं में बह गए ।

हो सकता है अंकिता जी...आप के स्टोरी पर लाइक या कमेंट कम हो जाएं लेकिन आप ये देखकर स्टोरी बीच में ही मत छोड़ देना क्योंकि स्टोरी सच में बेहतरीन है ।