Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

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[Pta nhi]

Awesome update

 

[sexy ritu]

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[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ..wo photo lene jo aayi thi uma ke paas lagta hai wo murder karnewali ladki ka koi saathi ho ..
ye neta ko kisne maara hoga vaishali ya dusri ladki ne ,,,aur police ko pata kaise chala ki us ladki ne hi khoon kiya hai ?? gala kaata aur sharir me war karna aam baat hai agar kisiko berahami se maarna ho to ..

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

professor ne itni research ki hai sab cases jo bataye waisa shayad vaishali ke saath bhi ho raha hai ,,,shayad usko pata ho ki dusri ladki usko maar sakti hai isliye wo ghar se bhag gayi ..
shayad dono ka dimaag ek jaisa sochta ho ..par khoon wo ladki ki kar rahi hai aisa lagta hai varsha to jyadatar tannu ya disha ke saath rehti hai ..aur shayad arun bhi ispe najar rakh raha ho ..
aaj to arun pitne se bach gaya warna aalu achche se mil jaate usko ..
par varsha aur arun ki photo leke wo ladki karegi kya ?? aur uma ko kitni aasani se bewakoof bana diya usne ,,,pados me rehti thi aur nisha ko jaanti thi to kabhi ghar na aayi ho aisa kaise ?? aur 5 saal me chehra itna bhi nahi badal jaata ki pehechan na pao .aur aise kisi ko ghar ke photo dikhana ..

dhamakedar suspense aa raha hai kahani me ab kispar nisha ke khoon ka shak kare pata nahi ..

 

[kamdev99008]

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Bas ham jaise kuchh romance, thrill ke kadradano ka khyal karke... Kahani ka flow bhi sath me banaye rakhna

 

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[Ankitarani]

nice update ..wo photo lene jo aayi thi uma ke paas lagta hai wo murder karnewali ladki ka koi saathi ho ..
ye neta ko kisne maara hoga vaishali ya dusri ladki ne ,,,aur police ko pata kaise chala ki us ladki ne hi khoon kiya hai ?? gala kaata aur sharir me war karna aam baat hai agar kisiko berahami se maarna ho to ..

Murder krna aam baat hai...lekin kis hthiyr se maara or forensic na pta lga paaye ye aam baat n h

 

[Ankitarani]

professor ne itni research ki hai sab cases jo bataye waisa shayad vaishali ke saath bhi ho raha hai ,,,shayad usko pata ho ki dusri ladki usko maar sakti hai isliye wo ghar se bhag gayi ..
shayad dono ka dimaag ek jaisa sochta ho ..par khoon wo ladki ki kar rahi hai aisa lagta hai varsha to jyadatar tannu ya disha ke saath rehti hai ..aur shayad arun bhi ispe najar rakh raha ho ..
aaj to arun pitne se bach gaya warna aalu achche se mil jaate usko ..
par varsha aur arun ki photo leke wo ladki karegi kya ?? aur uma ko kitni aasani se bewakoof bana diya usne ,,,pados me rehti thi aur nisha ko jaanti thi to kabhi ghar na aayi ho aisa kaise ?? aur 5 saal me chehra itna bhi nahi badal jaata ki pehechan na pao .aur aise kisi ko ghar ke photo dikhana ..

dhamakedar suspense aa raha hai kahani me ab kispar nisha ke khoon ka shak kare pata nahi ..

Achhe se pdho...ghr aati thi...lekn bhut chhoti thi...ya shayd wo 15,saaal phle baat bta rhi hai...dhyan se pdho wo bolti bai ki m yha akar khelne aati thi