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Thanks dear to read my storybhai kahani toh bahut hi badhiya jaa rahi hain, aapne kahani kee ek suspense bana ke rakhhhi hain.
aap ek nischit chal ke saath chal rahe hain, abhi tak aapne fantasy walla part ko reveal nahin kiya hain. kyunki uske baad kahani ek alag hi level pahunch jayegi.
Shayad kaafi naye kirdaro ke baare mein pata chal jayega.
bhai kuchh sawal hain aapse jo lagta hain aapne najarandaj kar diye hain,
jaise kee hero ko kanika ke liye bilkul bhi tension mein nahin tha abhi tak, mana kee usse pata tha kee uske pass bhi kuchh experimental powers hain, lekin usse jo dard diya gaya tha kya usne iske baare mein socha.
aur wo zareen ko bachane mein jyada focused tha jab kee abhi tak zareen ke uski life mein as a love interest enter bhi nahin hui hain.
Bhale hi zareeen ne apna love confess kar liya ho lekin hero ne toh abhi tak usse accept nahin kya tha, agar maan lo kar bhi liya tha toh kanika toh uski wife hain wo toh uski first priority honi chahiye thee.
Kahani mein kaheen bhi aisa nahin laga kee usse uske liye jara bhi tension hain.
Aur sabse jaroori baat meenaskshi aur khusboo ke pass toh powers thee wo usse kidnap hi kyun hone dee agar man lo kidnap ho bhi gayee toh usne apni powers se usse dhoondhne mein itni der kyun lag gayee.
Bahut se sawal hain jiske jawab aapne sahi tarika se nahin diye hain.
Plot toh aapki sahi hain lekin apne kaheen kaheen pe apne loosely likhi hain.
mujhe aapki kahani kaafi achhi lagee.
agar bura laga ho toh sorry bhai, bas ek ardent reader hoon apkee kahani ka toh kuchh sawal man mein khatak rahe thee.
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Thanks dear to read my storyyeh toh shab game hi khel rahe hain asli khiladi kaun hain kissi ko nain pata hain, na toh nakul hi pure control mein hain na hi uske pariwar waale.
aur yeh benam dushman ka toh pata nahin wo hain kaun aur kitne hain, na hi unke motive ka kuchh pata chal raha hain.
Laga toh aisa raha hain kee yeh bas property kee baat hain lekin baat usse aage hain, kaun kisse bacha raha hain yeh maloom hi nahin chal raha hain.
Aur yeh nakul ko kyun bacha rahe hain iske baare mein toh kuchh maloom hi nahin hain.
yeh meenakshi toh pehle usse mara tha toh baad meini usse bachana kyun chah rahi hain.
kya uski maa wakai mein jinda hain, ya phir wo bas ek sapna tha, lekin khusboo aur meenakshi ke reaction se toh aisa nahin lagta hain.
Aur yeh khusboo aur meenakshi ke pass aise powers kahan se aayee, hain kya sirf wahhe dono hi aise shaktio kee maleek hain ya hir aur bhi hain.
Yeh dilawar ko abhi tak unhone ne jinda kyun chhor rakhha hain, agar meenakshi kanika tak pahunch shakti hain to wo dilawar tak bhi pahunch shakti hain toh wo nakul kee isme madad kyun nahin karti hain.
aur jo shaktiya meenakshi ne nakul ko dee hain wo abhi tak jagrit kyun nahin hui hain.
sawal toh aur bhi bahot hain lekin abhi ke liye itna hee.
yeh episode bhi bahut lajawab tha lekin update length thoda sa chhota tha. koi nahin. we'll manage.