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Adultery KALYUG ( Antt Hi Aarambh Hai ) { Incest , Fantasy , Romance , Thriller }
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G bro me yahi pe canfiused ho gaya tha..Thanks Bhai...
Baat aapki sahi hai prefix ko lekar mai kaafi confuse tha do din tak... Samjh nahi aa raha kya karun... Last mereko yeh hi theek laha story jayada sex ko promo nahi karegi... Aur adultery toh bilkull nahi I am Romance lover...
Aapke baaki point aage clear ho jayega...
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Incest...
Jo story incest ho to usse incest pe hi chalna chaiye I mean mtlb apno k saath Kary Jo karna he jinse khoni rishta ho or is bich adultery ajye to story me phir wo Maza nai rehta...
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Yashoda...
Agr yashoda ki BAAT Kary to hero ko 1 beta mana he or bete ki Tarah Pala hein ab is k saath toney ho jaye to adultery ho jayegi jisse maza nai ayega story mein...
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Toney...
Shuru me Jab story ko parhna Shuru kiya to laga story ka HERO toney hi hein lakin abi last k update me pata Chala story ka HERO to NANDU hein...
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Nazim...
Yashoda k liye Pagal jis k Dil me yashoda k liye hawas he to Kya Pura ho payega dhekty hein agr yashoda bach payegi to bachane Wala NANDU yani Hero hona chaiye bachane Wala jisse yashoda k Dil me NANDU k liye feelings ajyega romance jese k apne kaha toney ki jaga yashoda k saath NANDU ho to story or achi rhegi...
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Sweety or us ki Maa...
In k saath NANDU ka rishta he jo incest ho sakta Jo k pehle bataya tha or hona b chaiye q k story incest hein...
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Dimpi..
Adultery me ati he iska samajh nai ata lakin apne Socha hoga k kse is cherecter ko agy barha ya jaye...
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NANDU..
SETORH ka HERO abi chota hein kuh kar sakta hein ya nai pata nai lakin apne soch rkha hoga k Isko Kya karna hein ap toney k jaga NANDU ko lao to or Maza ayega hero he to hero hi banao or hero ki jaga do isse jesy k TOENY ko diya hein wo jaga Isko mile to story Zabardaxt...
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Baki ap wrriter ho story Apki hein apne sub Kuch soch rakha hoga pehle se apne Kya likhna Kya nahi likhna he or kese likhna hein hum to redears hein B's apna point of view de sakty hein Jo de rhy hein Baki apko Jo Sahi Lage ap wesa likho story..
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Last Update k last mein Nazim par Kisi ne Piche se war kiya kisne kiya suspens hein Jo agle update me pata chalega lakin agr NANDU ho bachane Wala or YASHODA bach jaye to Yashoda k Dil me NANDU hi sub Kuch ho na k Toney q k isne YASHODA ki izzat bachyi hein or ourat k liye izzat se brh kr kuh nai hota...
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End me agr Meri koi BAAT buri lagi to Dil SE maafi Good luck
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Nazim n itna bada game plan banaya apni aayi ko bhej dia taki jab woh Yashoda ke saath ghinoni harkat kare tab use bachane wala koyi na ho halanki nandu tha lekin woh bachchan kia ker Sakta tha( KALYUG... Part.12 )
( Sabse bada rupiya... / Trapped.. )
Evening Time... 4:35 PM...
Location... Local Bus Stand...
Jaldi kar aayi nahi toh bass nikal jayegi...
Vimala... Lekin beta sun toh main Aachank kaise jaa sakti hun... Woh bhi aise time par Tony bhi nahi hai... Yashoda bhi akeli ho jayegi mai fir kabhi ***** darshan kar aungi...
Nazim... Nahi aayi btaya na tereko kal baba mere sapne Mai aaye unhone bola tujhe ***** jagh matha tekne ke liye... Agar tu aisa nahi karegi unki aatma ko shanti nahi milegi... Aur Bhabhi ki fikr mat kar... Kanta hai woh samhal legi aaj Aur mai bhi bahar so jaunga tu chinta mat kar... Mai hun...
Vimala... ( Chintit hote hue ) Tu keh raha hai toh theek hai... lekin khyaal rakhna hann...
Nazim... ( Kaameeni muskaan chupate hue ) haan aayi tu chinta mat kar mai bhabhi ka aache se khayal rakhunga...
Vimala na chahte hue bhi bus Mai baith jati hai... Usko Yashoda ki fikar ho rahi thi... Magar apne pati se pyaar bhi tha... Unki aatma ko shanti ke liye ek ***** jagh kya har jagah matha tekne ko taiyaar h... Nazim par bharosa kar woh chal deti hai Nazim bhi usko paani ki bottle thamate hue fikr na karne ki salaah deta hai...
Bus nikal jaati hai aur Nazim ke chehre par kamini muskaan wapis aa jati hai... Aaj ka din woh kab se intjaar mai tha uske raaste ka ek kaanta nikal gya dusra jayada pareshani waali baat nahi thi uske liye nikalna... Aage ka plan karte hue woh basti ki taraf chal deta hai...
Evening time... 5:45 PM...
Location... ***** Seher...
...shaam hone ko aayi To y mujhe nahi lagta woh yaha rehta hai... Usne bhi Shersing ka Area btaya lekin yeh jagah pta nahi kitne Shersing rehte honge...
Tony... ( Gusse me ) chaahe kitne bhi Shersing rehte ho yaha... Sabko dhoond nikaalunga mai wohi aakiri aadmi hai jo TejSingh ka pta bta sakta h... Bina usne mai ghar nahi jaane waala tumhe jaana h toh tum jaa sakte ho...
Kamalnath... Isme gussa hone waali kya baat hai main toh bas itna keh raha tha ki shaam hone ko aayi hai chalte hai yaha se... Kal fir TejSingh ko doodne ki koshish krenge aakhir woh mera bhi bhai h... Aur jab tak woh mill nhi jata mai yaha se nhi jaane waala...
Tony... ( Ek baar kamalnath ko dekhta h fir kuch sochte hue kehta hai ) aacha theek hai mai jara ciggerate per kar aata hun kya pta ciggerate waala jaanta ho Shersing ko... Akser paan ke thelo par jaankari mill jaati h jo police waalo ko nhi milti...
Yeh Bolker Tony samne paan Wale ke paas phunch ciggerate maangta hai... Kamalnath wanhi khada dekh raha hota hai... Usko shayad umeed nhi thi isse kaam hoga..
Tony... ( Ciggerate jalate hue ) bhaisahab yaha koi Shersing naam ka aadmi rehta mujhe usse milna h... Tumhe pta h uska ghar kha h...
Paan Wala... ( Tony ko Uper se neeche dekhte hue ) bhaiya meri paan ki dukaan h koi railway enquiry thodi h har kisi ki jaankari rakhunga... Yaha moholle mai 8 Shersing rehte h jao jaakr dhoond lo mera time mat kharab Karo...
Paanwaale ki baat sun Tony ko bhut Tej gussa aata hai... Woh use maarne ke liye aage badhta hai tabhi Kamalnath uska hath pakad leta hai...
Kamalnath... Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho... Ab isme uska kya kasoor chalo yaha se...
Tony... ( Ruko ek sec ) mujhe usse baat karne do... ( Jeb se 100 ka note nikal kar Paan waale ko dikhate hue... ) Ab kuch yaad aa raha h... Shersing kha rehta h...
Paanwaala... ( Note ko dekhte hue ) aap kiss Shersing ki baat kar rahe sahab yaha 6 Shersing h...
Tony... ( 2 aur 100 ke note nikalte hue ) Aisa koi h jo 2 no ka kaam krta ho... Gunda gardi maarpet paise byaaj par Dena...
Paanwaala... ( Noto ko dekhte hue ) haan sahab yaad aaya aise ek sahab yaha rehte h lekin unka ghar... woh bade log h sahab...
Tony... ( 2 aur nikalte hue ) humme unka pta bta de baaki ka hum dekh lenge... Nahi toh hum kisi aur se puch lenge woh bta hi dega Aaj nahi toh kal isme nuksaan kiska hoga...
Paanwaala... ( Noto ko lete hue ) nahi nahi sahab kaise baat karte ho mai le chalta aapko unke ghar... Lekin sahab mai bas door se dikha kar chala aaunga... Mereko aap log ke lafde mai nahi padna mai biwi baache waala hun aur woh bade log hai...
Tony... Chal theek hai door se dikha kar chala Jana...
Paanwaala... ( Dukaan band karte hue ) lekin sahab aapko unse kya kaam hai... Aap dekhne se yaha ke nhi lgate...
Tony... Ek purana udhaar chukta karna hai bas isliye... Waise mai tujhse uska pta maar maar kar bhi uglwa leta...
Paanwaala... ( Chonkte hue ) mtlb sahab...
Tony... Kuch nahi apna kaam kar... poora din nahi hai mere paas mujhe wapis bhi Jana hai...
Paanwaala... ( darte hue ) Ji... sahab... kuch bhi Karo bas mujhe lafde mai mat gastna bta de raha hun...
Abhi yeh log baat kar hi rahe the tabhi ek gaadhi inke saamne aake rukti hai...
...Raamu... Do meetha paan bana aur ek ciggerate de... paise khate mai likh lena...
Aadmi ki baat sun paanwaala chonk jata hai aur Tony ki taraf dekhta hai... Tony ko samjh nahi aata uska kya matlb hai...
Aadmi... ( Jhunjhulate hue ) Use kya dekh raha hai chal jaldi kar ciggerate de mujhe...
Paanwaala aadmi ko ciggerate deta h jise woh jala kar kass lene lgta h... Tony paanwaale ko dekh samjhne ki koshish krta h... Tabhi use kuch yaad aata h woh gour se ek baar aadmi ko aur fir paanwaale ko dekhta h toh woh Tony ki taraf Haan me garden hila deta h... Tony ki gusse me ek baar aakhin band ho jaati h...
Wanhi aadmi befikar ho ciggerate per raha tabhi uske kadhe par ek hath aata h... Woh palat kar dekta h...
Aadmi... Kya baat hai...
Thadddddd....
Aadmi gulati maarte hue neeche girta hai... Abhi woh sambhal pata usse pehle....
Dhaammmm... Se ek laat uske seene me padti hai jisse usme muh se khoon aa jata hai... Thadddddd... Ek aur mukka uske chehre par padte hai... Woh behoshi ki haalat mai phunch jata hai... Use samjh nahi aa raha tha aakhir yha ho kya raha hai... Kon use maar raha hai...
Aadmi... ( Dard se karahte hue ) aahhhhh huhhhh ahhhhhhh konnnn ho tummm... Mujhe kyu maar rahe ho...
Dhaammmm... Ek aur laat uske seene Mai lagti hai woh pet ke bal gir jata hai... Uski pasli Tut gayi thi shayad chatk ki awaaj aayi sabko.... Woh aankhe kholne ki koshish karta saamne waale shaks ko pehchanne ki koshish krta hai magar....
Thadddddd... Ek mukka aur chehre par padta hai... Aur woh behosh ho jaata hai...
Ladai dekh aas paas kuch log bhi ikttha ho gye tha wanhi paan waala fati aankhon se Tony ko dekh raha tha jo kamalnath ke hath se paani bottle le haath dho Raha tha jisme aadmi ka khoon lga tha... Kamalnath ki haalat bhi kharab ho gayi thi... Wanhi paanwaala dar se kaamp raha tha tabhi Tony uske paas jata hai...
Tony... Tune iska ghar dekha hai na le chal mujhe... Aaja gadhi mai baith...
Tony aadmi ki car mai aake baith jata hai saath hi aadmi ko bhi bagal waali seat par baitha deta hai jo behosh pada tha... Kamalnath bhi darte hue gadi me baith wali paan waale ki alag fati hui thi... Woh dukaan waise hi khuli chod gadhi me baith jata hai... Aur Tony gadhi ko aage le jata h...
Thodi hi der mai woh log society mai ek ghar ke aage rukte hai ghar dekhne mai kaafi bada lag raha... Shayad society ka saBse bada ghar ho... Khair Car se upar kar Tony aadmi ko nikalta hai aur use kandhe par laad ghar ki taraf chal deta hai... Paanwaale ki fati hui thi woh car se utar kar ulte panv bhag jata wanhi kamalnath bhi apne paseene ko ponch raha tha... Woh Tony se thoda door peeche khada tha... Tabhi Tony bell bajata hai jise sun ander se kuch awaaz aati hai... Aur woh side khada ho gaye khulne ka intezar karta hai...
...kon hai... Huhhhh... Yeh kya...
Gate koi mahila kholti hai... Jaise hi woh Tony se puchti hai Tony aadmi ko uske kadmo mai fenk deta hai...
Mahila... ( Rote hue ) konn ho tum log aur mere bete ko kisne mara... Kya hua ise... ( Ander aawaj lagate hue ) suno ji jaldi dekho humare Suraj ko kya ho gya...
Aadmi... ( Ander se bahar aate hue ) Kya hai Rama kyun shor matcha rahi ho... huhhhh kon ho tum log... ( Suraj ko dekhte hue ) suraaajjj... Bete... Kya hua mere Ko...
Tony... ( Aadmi ko dekhte hue ) Shersing...
Aadmi... Huhhhh... Tum konn...
Thadddddd.... Ek mukka padta hai woh chakra kar ander jake girta hai... Aurat bhi dar jati hai uski cheenkh nikal jati hai... Tony Aage badh uska muhh hatho se band karta aur dusre hath se Suraj ko ghseet kar ghar ke ander le aata hai... Jaha Shersing dard se karahte huh ek baar fir uthta hai...
Shersing... Aaahhhh kon ho tummmm... Kyaaaaaaaa chahte ho mujhse... Aahhhh tummm shayad jante nahi mai kon hun.... Tuu yaha aa toh gya zinda wapis nahi ja payega.... Aaahhhh...
Tony ek baar kamalnath ko dekhta hai jo peeche peeche ander aa gya tha... Woh Tony ka ishara samjh gate ki kundi lga deta hai...
Thadddddd.... Ek mukka aur Shersing ko padta hai... Woh fir neeche gir padta hai... Rama ki cheenkh nikal jati hai woh Apne Pati ke paas jati hai... Tony use khinch kar dur kar deta hai... Dhaammmm ek laat uske muhh par padtti hai jisse woh lahu luhaan ho jata hai... Dhere dhere uski aankhein bhi band ho gayi thi...
Night Time... 9:45 PM...
Location... Basti... Tony House...
...maa baba kab aayenge... Mujhe unki bhut yaad aa rahi h...
Mai maa ki goad me leta hua unse baat kar raha tha...
Yashoda... ( Sir par hath fer Sochte hue ) pta nahi beta... pehle kabhi woh gye nahi... abhi shayad kuch jaruri kaam hoga isliye gaye honge...
Mai... ( Chedte hue ) maa aapko baba ki yaad nahi aa rahi...
Yashoda... ( Chonkte hue ) huhhhhh...
Mai... ( Chedte hue ) Bolo na maa... Mujhe to baba se bhut pyaar h isliye mujhe unki yaad aa rahi aapko usne pyaar nahi h aapko unki yaad nhi aa rahi...
Yashoda... ( Shram chupa kr gusse me ) Nandu tu bhut shaitaan ho gya hai... Teri aache se maar deni padegi... Harwaqt mujhe ko pareshan karta rehta h... ( Halaki use bhi aacha nahi lg raha tha Tony ke jaane se woh kal se unke baare mai soch rahi thi... Woh Tony se puchna chahti thi woh kha jaa raha hai... Lekin dono ke beech kamoshi ki dewaar ko woh toad na saki... )
....kon pareshan kar raha hai meri bhabhi ko...
Nazim baba ghar mai ander aate hue yeh baat bolte hai... Maa aur mai jab unki tarf dekhte hai toh Nazim baba ladkhadate hue ander chale aye the... Yeh unka roz ka tha daaru peena humsab ko iski aadat ho gayi thi... Nazim baba ki nazar maa ko uper se neeche dekh rahi thi... Maa ko sab ajeeb lagta hai woh kuch kehti usse pehle Nazim baba ghar ke ander aa jate hai aur gate ko ander se band kar dete hain...
Mai... Baba aap...
Nazim... ( Kammeni hasi dikhate hue ) Nandu beta kyu Mai yaha nahi aa sakta mai tera baba nahi hun...
Mai... Huhhhh lekin baba abhi iss waqt...
Nazim... ( Yashoda ko gurte hue ) Yahi sahi waqt hai beta... Tere ek baba nahi hai maa akeli hai na toh tere dusre baba aa gye maa ka akela pan door karne ke liye...
Aur aage badh MAA ke kareeb jaane lagte hai... Maa ko theek nahi lag raha tha main dono ko dekh raha tha samjh nahi aa raha kya karun... Tabhi Nazim baba maa ke paas jaa unka hath pakad lete hai...
Yashoda... ( Hath chudate hue gusse mai ) Nazim yeh kya battmezi hai... Nikalo ghar se bahar abhi nahi toh mai shor macha dungi...
Nazim... ( Haste hue ) ha ha ha bula jisko bulana hai aaj koi teri madat ke liye nahi aayegaa... Tune meri zindagi barbaad karke rakh di jab se basti mai aayi hai... Tab se teri garam jisem ne mujhe pagal kar diya hai... Aaj tujhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta Tera jism ko nooch kar mai apna badala poora lunga chilla jitna chillana hai...
Chataakkkk....
Yashoda... ( Gusse mai ) tumhe sharam nahi aati aise baatain karte hue... Nikal jao mere ghar se...
Nazim baba gusse mai aage badh Maa ko daboch lete hai mujhe unki harkat par bhut gussa aata hai mai aage badh unhe maa se alag karne lagta hun... Unke pet par mukke Marta hun magar unko koi farak nahi pad raha tha tha tabhi....
Dhaammmm... Ek laat mere pet mai padti hai jisse mujhe bhut tez dard hota hai... Mai peeche ki taraf girta hu sir dewaar se lag jata hai... Mujhe kuch dikaai nahi de raha aakhen band hone lagi thi... Mujhe maa ki cheenkh sunayi deti hai jo mujhe bula rahi thi magar mujhe sir mai tez dard mehsus hota hai mai kab aankhen band ho gayi pta nahi chalta....
Nazim Yashoda ka muhh band kar deta hai... Sath hi use pakad kar ghatiya par gira deta hai... Yashoda chapatati hui ek baar fir uth khadi hoti hai Nazim use fir se daboch leta hai...
Nazim... Kha jaa rahi hai chinaal aaj tere jism ko nooch kar fenk dunga tujhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta... Kitne saalo se iss din ka intezar kar raha tha tere wajah se Tony ne dhandha chod diya...
Yashoda jaise taise khud ko Nazim se dur karti hai... Wanhi Nazim ke hath me yashoda ki saadi aa jati hai jise kheench kar woh yashoda ke jism se alag krne lgta hai... Yashoda poora jor lagati hai rokne ke liye...
Chataakkkk...
Ek khich kar chanta Nazim Yashoda ko deta hai lekin yahi usse galti ho jati hai... Yashoda chanta padte hi goom kar almari par jaa girti hai jor se... Jisse almari ka kunna uske sir me jaa gusta hai uska sir fat hai... Bhal bhal karke khoon behne lagta hai... Nazim ko dekh fatt gayi thi yeh sab kya ho gaya... woh Yashoda ko check karta hai uski saanse dheme chal rahi thi...
Nazim... ( Darte hue gaal thapthapate hue ) aeeee... Aankheinnnn kholl mai jannta hun tu sunnn rahi... Dekh meri taraf...
Nazim ko samjh nahi aa raha tha ab kya hoga... Sara plan fail ho gaya yeh baat Tony ko pta chal jayegi woh use zinda nahi chodega... Lekin agar na pata chala toh...
Uske saitaani dimaag Mai khyaal aaya... ( Waise bhi yashoda kuch hi pal ki mehmaan hai woh kisi ko kya btayegi yaha kya hua... Ab mere raaste mai ek hi pilla hai... Usko bhi thikane laga deta hun... Kisi ko pta nahi chalega yaha kya hua )
Ek kameeni muskurahat chehre par laate hue woh uth khada hota hai... Aur kitchen mai jaaker chaku le aata hai... Woh wapis Yashoda ke paas aa kar dekhta hai... Tabhi...
Thadddddd... Uske sir par waar hota hai woh palat pata usse pehle ek aur war uske sir par hota hai....
Thadddddd... Aaaaaaaaaa karahte hue woh neeche gir jata hai... Aankhein khol saamne waale ko dekhne ki koshish karta hai Magar uski aankhein band ho jati hai...
( Kaafi time ho gya... But we are back... Weak ho gya update nahi aaya here we go... Story kaise lagi aapko abhi tak jarur batayen... Sath hi 30 likes please guys ....)
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Nazim n yeh ummeen nahi thi ki Yashoda ke saath jheena jhanpti m yeh hadsa ho Jayega
Shayad nandu n hi nazim ke sir per mara h
Shayad yahi woh starting wala scene h jisme nandu Yashoda ko apne kandhe per leker jaa raha tha
Udher doosre shaher apne Tony bhai n baap beta ko peet peet ker leta dia h
Ab dekhna yeh ki kia tony sahi salamat waha se wapas aa payega or Yashoda ka kia hota woh bachti ha ya nahi
Bahot behtareen shaandar update bhai
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kahani ka pehla update iske bad ki kahani ka tha( KALYUG... Part.12 )
( Sabse bada rupiya... / Trapped.. )
Evening Time... 4:35 PM...
Location... Local Bus Stand...
Jaldi kar aayi nahi toh bass nikal jayegi...
Vimala... Lekin beta sun toh main Aachank kaise jaa sakti hun... Woh bhi aise time par Tony bhi nahi hai... Yashoda bhi akeli ho jayegi mai fir kabhi ***** darshan kar aungi...
Nazim... Nahi aayi btaya na tereko kal baba mere sapne Mai aaye unhone bola tujhe ***** jagh matha tekne ke liye... Agar tu aisa nahi karegi unki aatma ko shanti nahi milegi... Aur Bhabhi ki fikr mat kar... Kanta hai woh samhal legi aaj Aur mai bhi bahar so jaunga tu chinta mat kar... Mai hun...
Vimala... ( Chintit hote hue ) Tu keh raha hai toh theek hai... lekin khyaal rakhna hann...
Nazim... ( Kaameeni muskaan chupate hue ) haan aayi tu chinta mat kar mai bhabhi ka aache se khayal rakhunga...
Vimala na chahte hue bhi bus Mai baith jati hai... Usko Yashoda ki fikar ho rahi thi... Magar apne pati se pyaar bhi tha... Unki aatma ko shanti ke liye ek ***** jagh kya har jagah matha tekne ko taiyaar h... Nazim par bharosa kar woh chal deti hai Nazim bhi usko paani ki bottle thamate hue fikr na karne ki salaah deta hai...
Bus nikal jaati hai aur Nazim ke chehre par kamini muskaan wapis aa jati hai... Aaj ka din woh kab se intjaar mai tha uske raaste ka ek kaanta nikal gya dusra jayada pareshani waali baat nahi thi uske liye nikalna... Aage ka plan karte hue woh basti ki taraf chal deta hai...
Evening time... 5:45 PM...
Location... ***** Seher...
...shaam hone ko aayi To y mujhe nahi lagta woh yaha rehta hai... Usne bhi Shersing ka Area btaya lekin yeh jagah pta nahi kitne Shersing rehte honge...
Tony... ( Gusse me ) chaahe kitne bhi Shersing rehte ho yaha... Sabko dhoond nikaalunga mai wohi aakiri aadmi hai jo TejSingh ka pta bta sakta h... Bina usne mai ghar nahi jaane waala tumhe jaana h toh tum jaa sakte ho...
Kamalnath... Isme gussa hone waali kya baat hai main toh bas itna keh raha tha ki shaam hone ko aayi hai chalte hai yaha se... Kal fir TejSingh ko doodne ki koshish krenge aakhir woh mera bhi bhai h... Aur jab tak woh mill nhi jata mai yaha se nhi jaane waala...
Tony... ( Ek baar kamalnath ko dekhta h fir kuch sochte hue kehta hai ) aacha theek hai mai jara ciggerate per kar aata hun kya pta ciggerate waala jaanta ho Shersing ko... Akser paan ke thelo par jaankari mill jaati h jo police waalo ko nhi milti...
Yeh Bolker Tony samne paan Wale ke paas phunch ciggerate maangta hai... Kamalnath wanhi khada dekh raha hota hai... Usko shayad umeed nhi thi isse kaam hoga..
Tony... ( Ciggerate jalate hue ) bhaisahab yaha koi Shersing naam ka aadmi rehta mujhe usse milna h... Tumhe pta h uska ghar kha h...
Paan Wala... ( Tony ko Uper se neeche dekhte hue ) bhaiya meri paan ki dukaan h koi railway enquiry thodi h har kisi ki jaankari rakhunga... Yaha moholle mai 8 Shersing rehte h jao jaakr dhoond lo mera time mat kharab Karo...
Paanwaale ki baat sun Tony ko bhut Tej gussa aata hai... Woh use maarne ke liye aage badhta hai tabhi Kamalnath uska hath pakad leta hai...
Kamalnath... Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho... Ab isme uska kya kasoor chalo yaha se...
Tony... ( Ruko ek sec ) mujhe usse baat karne do... ( Jeb se 100 ka note nikal kar Paan waale ko dikhate hue... ) Ab kuch yaad aa raha h... Shersing kha rehta h...
Paanwaala... ( Note ko dekhte hue ) aap kiss Shersing ki baat kar rahe sahab yaha 6 Shersing h...
Tony... ( 2 aur 100 ke note nikalte hue ) Aisa koi h jo 2 no ka kaam krta ho... Gunda gardi maarpet paise byaaj par Dena...
Paanwaala... ( Noto ko dekhte hue ) haan sahab yaad aaya aise ek sahab yaha rehte h lekin unka ghar... woh bade log h sahab...
Tony... ( 2 aur nikalte hue ) humme unka pta bta de baaki ka hum dekh lenge... Nahi toh hum kisi aur se puch lenge woh bta hi dega Aaj nahi toh kal isme nuksaan kiska hoga...
Paanwaala... ( Noto ko lete hue ) nahi nahi sahab kaise baat karte ho mai le chalta aapko unke ghar... Lekin sahab mai bas door se dikha kar chala aaunga... Mereko aap log ke lafde mai nahi padna mai biwi baache waala hun aur woh bade log hai...
Tony... Chal theek hai door se dikha kar chala Jana...
Paanwaala... ( Dukaan band karte hue ) lekin sahab aapko unse kya kaam hai... Aap dekhne se yaha ke nhi lgate...
Tony... Ek purana udhaar chukta karna hai bas isliye... Waise mai tujhse uska pta maar maar kar bhi uglwa leta...
Paanwaala... ( Chonkte hue ) mtlb sahab...
Tony... Kuch nahi apna kaam kar... poora din nahi hai mere paas mujhe wapis bhi Jana hai...
Paanwaala... ( darte hue ) Ji... sahab... kuch bhi Karo bas mujhe lafde mai mat gastna bta de raha hun...
Abhi yeh log baat kar hi rahe the tabhi ek gaadhi inke saamne aake rukti hai...
...Raamu... Do meetha paan bana aur ek ciggerate de... paise khate mai likh lena...
Aadmi ki baat sun paanwaala chonk jata hai aur Tony ki taraf dekhta hai... Tony ko samjh nahi aata uska kya matlb hai...
Aadmi... ( Jhunjhulate hue ) Use kya dekh raha hai chal jaldi kar ciggerate de mujhe...
Paanwaala aadmi ko ciggerate deta h jise woh jala kar kass lene lgta h... Tony paanwaale ko dekh samjhne ki koshish krta h... Tabhi use kuch yaad aata h woh gour se ek baar aadmi ko aur fir paanwaale ko dekhta h toh woh Tony ki taraf Haan me garden hila deta h... Tony ki gusse me ek baar aakhin band ho jaati h...
Wanhi aadmi befikar ho ciggerate per raha tabhi uske kadhe par ek hath aata h... Woh palat kar dekta h...
Aadmi... Kya baat hai...
Thadddddd....
Aadmi gulati maarte hue neeche girta hai... Abhi woh sambhal pata usse pehle....
Dhaammmm... Se ek laat uske seene me padti hai jisse usme muh se khoon aa jata hai... Thadddddd... Ek aur mukka uske chehre par padte hai... Woh behoshi ki haalat mai phunch jata hai... Use samjh nahi aa raha tha aakhir yha ho kya raha hai... Kon use maar raha hai...
Aadmi... ( Dard se karahte hue ) aahhhhh huhhhh ahhhhhhh konnnn ho tummm... Mujhe kyu maar rahe ho...
Dhaammmm... Ek aur laat uske seene Mai lagti hai woh pet ke bal gir jata hai... Uski pasli Tut gayi thi shayad chatk ki awaaj aayi sabko.... Woh aankhe kholne ki koshish karta saamne waale shaks ko pehchanne ki koshish krta hai magar....
Thadddddd... Ek mukka aur chehre par padta hai... Aur woh behosh ho jaata hai...
Ladai dekh aas paas kuch log bhi ikttha ho gye tha wanhi paan waala fati aankhon se Tony ko dekh raha tha jo kamalnath ke hath se paani bottle le haath dho Raha tha jisme aadmi ka khoon lga tha... Kamalnath ki haalat bhi kharab ho gayi thi... Wanhi paanwaala dar se kaamp raha tha tabhi Tony uske paas jata hai...
Tony... Tune iska ghar dekha hai na le chal mujhe... Aaja gadhi mai baith...
Tony aadmi ki car mai aake baith jata hai saath hi aadmi ko bhi bagal waali seat par baitha deta hai jo behosh pada tha... Kamalnath bhi darte hue gadi me baith wali paan waale ki alag fati hui thi... Woh dukaan waise hi khuli chod gadhi me baith jata hai... Aur Tony gadhi ko aage le jata h...
Thodi hi der mai woh log society mai ek ghar ke aage rukte hai ghar dekhne mai kaafi bada lag raha... Shayad society ka saBse bada ghar ho... Khair Car se upar kar Tony aadmi ko nikalta hai aur use kandhe par laad ghar ki taraf chal deta hai... Paanwaale ki fati hui thi woh car se utar kar ulte panv bhag jata wanhi kamalnath bhi apne paseene ko ponch raha tha... Woh Tony se thoda door peeche khada tha... Tabhi Tony bell bajata hai jise sun ander se kuch awaaz aati hai... Aur woh side khada ho gaye khulne ka intezar karta hai...
...kon hai... Huhhhh... Yeh kya...
Gate koi mahila kholti hai... Jaise hi woh Tony se puchti hai Tony aadmi ko uske kadmo mai fenk deta hai...
Mahila... ( Rote hue ) konn ho tum log aur mere bete ko kisne mara... Kya hua ise... ( Ander aawaj lagate hue ) suno ji jaldi dekho humare Suraj ko kya ho gya...
Aadmi... ( Ander se bahar aate hue ) Kya hai Rama kyun shor matcha rahi ho... huhhhh kon ho tum log... ( Suraj ko dekhte hue ) suraaajjj... Bete... Kya hua mere Ko...
Tony... ( Aadmi ko dekhte hue ) Shersing...
Aadmi... Huhhhh... Tum konn...
Thadddddd.... Ek mukka padta hai woh chakra kar ander jake girta hai... Aurat bhi dar jati hai uski cheenkh nikal jati hai... Tony Aage badh uska muhh hatho se band karta aur dusre hath se Suraj ko ghseet kar ghar ke ander le aata hai... Jaha Shersing dard se karahte huh ek baar fir uthta hai...
Shersing... Aaahhhh kon ho tummmm... Kyaaaaaaaa chahte ho mujhse... Aahhhh tummm shayad jante nahi mai kon hun.... Tuu yaha aa toh gya zinda wapis nahi ja payega.... Aaahhhh...
Tony ek baar kamalnath ko dekhta hai jo peeche peeche ander aa gya tha... Woh Tony ka ishara samjh gate ki kundi lga deta hai...
Thadddddd.... Ek mukka aur Shersing ko padta hai... Woh fir neeche gir padta hai... Rama ki cheenkh nikal jati hai woh Apne Pati ke paas jati hai... Tony use khinch kar dur kar deta hai... Dhaammmm ek laat uske muhh par padtti hai jisse woh lahu luhaan ho jata hai... Dhere dhere uski aankhein bhi band ho gayi thi...
Night Time... 9:45 PM...
Location... Basti... Tony House...
...maa baba kab aayenge... Mujhe unki bhut yaad aa rahi h...
Mai maa ki goad me leta hua unse baat kar raha tha...
Yashoda... ( Sir par hath fer Sochte hue ) pta nahi beta... pehle kabhi woh gye nahi... abhi shayad kuch jaruri kaam hoga isliye gaye honge...
Mai... ( Chedte hue ) maa aapko baba ki yaad nahi aa rahi...
Yashoda... ( Chonkte hue ) huhhhhh...
Mai... ( Chedte hue ) Bolo na maa... Mujhe to baba se bhut pyaar h isliye mujhe unki yaad aa rahi aapko usne pyaar nahi h aapko unki yaad nhi aa rahi...
Yashoda... ( Shram chupa kr gusse me ) Nandu tu bhut shaitaan ho gya hai... Teri aache se maar deni padegi... Harwaqt mujhe ko pareshan karta rehta h... ( Halaki use bhi aacha nahi lg raha tha Tony ke jaane se woh kal se unke baare mai soch rahi thi... Woh Tony se puchna chahti thi woh kha jaa raha hai... Lekin dono ke beech kamoshi ki dewaar ko woh toad na saki... )
....kon pareshan kar raha hai meri bhabhi ko...
Nazim baba ghar mai ander aate hue yeh baat bolte hai... Maa aur mai jab unki tarf dekhte hai toh Nazim baba ladkhadate hue ander chale aye the... Yeh unka roz ka tha daaru peena humsab ko iski aadat ho gayi thi... Nazim baba ki nazar maa ko uper se neeche dekh rahi thi... Maa ko sab ajeeb lagta hai woh kuch kehti usse pehle Nazim baba ghar ke ander aa jate hai aur gate ko ander se band kar dete hain...
Mai... Baba aap...
Nazim... ( Kammeni hasi dikhate hue ) Nandu beta kyu Mai yaha nahi aa sakta mai tera baba nahi hun...
Mai... Huhhhh lekin baba abhi iss waqt...
Nazim... ( Yashoda ko gurte hue ) Yahi sahi waqt hai beta... Tere ek baba nahi hai maa akeli hai na toh tere dusre baba aa gye maa ka akela pan door karne ke liye...
Aur aage badh MAA ke kareeb jaane lagte hai... Maa ko theek nahi lag raha tha main dono ko dekh raha tha samjh nahi aa raha kya karun... Tabhi Nazim baba maa ke paas jaa unka hath pakad lete hai...
Yashoda... ( Hath chudate hue gusse mai ) Nazim yeh kya battmezi hai... Nikalo ghar se bahar abhi nahi toh mai shor macha dungi...
Nazim... ( Haste hue ) ha ha ha bula jisko bulana hai aaj koi teri madat ke liye nahi aayegaa... Tune meri zindagi barbaad karke rakh di jab se basti mai aayi hai... Tab se teri garam jisem ne mujhe pagal kar diya hai... Aaj tujhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta Tera jism ko nooch kar mai apna badala poora lunga chilla jitna chillana hai...
Chataakkkk....
Yashoda... ( Gusse mai ) tumhe sharam nahi aati aise baatain karte hue... Nikal jao mere ghar se...
Nazim baba gusse mai aage badh Maa ko daboch lete hai mujhe unki harkat par bhut gussa aata hai mai aage badh unhe maa se alag karne lagta hun... Unke pet par mukke Marta hun magar unko koi farak nahi pad raha tha tha tabhi....
Dhaammmm... Ek laat mere pet mai padti hai jisse mujhe bhut tez dard hota hai... Mai peeche ki taraf girta hu sir dewaar se lag jata hai... Mujhe kuch dikaai nahi de raha aakhen band hone lagi thi... Mujhe maa ki cheenkh sunayi deti hai jo mujhe bula rahi thi magar mujhe sir mai tez dard mehsus hota hai mai kab aankhen band ho gayi pta nahi chalta....
Nazim Yashoda ka muhh band kar deta hai... Sath hi use pakad kar ghatiya par gira deta hai... Yashoda chapatati hui ek baar fir uth khadi hoti hai Nazim use fir se daboch leta hai...
Nazim... Kha jaa rahi hai chinaal aaj tere jism ko nooch kar fenk dunga tujhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta... Kitne saalo se iss din ka intezar kar raha tha tere wajah se Tony ne dhandha chod diya...
Yashoda jaise taise khud ko Nazim se dur karti hai... Wanhi Nazim ke hath me yashoda ki saadi aa jati hai jise kheench kar woh yashoda ke jism se alag krne lgta hai... Yashoda poora jor lagati hai rokne ke liye...
Chataakkkk...
Ek khich kar chanta Nazim Yashoda ko deta hai lekin yahi usse galti ho jati hai... Yashoda chanta padte hi goom kar almari par jaa girti hai jor se... Jisse almari ka kunna uske sir me jaa gusta hai uska sir fat hai... Bhal bhal karke khoon behne lagta hai... Nazim ko dekh fatt gayi thi yeh sab kya ho gaya... woh Yashoda ko check karta hai uski saanse dheme chal rahi thi...
Nazim... ( Darte hue gaal thapthapate hue ) aeeee... Aankheinnnn kholl mai jannta hun tu sunnn rahi... Dekh meri taraf...
Nazim ko samjh nahi aa raha tha ab kya hoga... Sara plan fail ho gaya yeh baat Tony ko pta chal jayegi woh use zinda nahi chodega... Lekin agar na pata chala toh...
Uske saitaani dimaag Mai khyaal aaya... ( Waise bhi yashoda kuch hi pal ki mehmaan hai woh kisi ko kya btayegi yaha kya hua... Ab mere raaste mai ek hi pilla hai... Usko bhi thikane laga deta hun... Kisi ko pta nahi chalega yaha kya hua )
Ek kameeni muskurahat chehre par laate hue woh uth khada hota hai... Aur kitchen mai jaaker chaku le aata hai... Woh wapis Yashoda ke paas aa kar dekhta hai... Tabhi...
Thadddddd... Uske sir par waar hota hai woh palat pata usse pehle ek aur war uske sir par hota hai....
Thadddddd... Aaaaaaaaaa karahte hue woh neeche gir jata hai... Aankhein khol saamne waale ko dekhne ki koshish karta hai Magar uski aankhein band ho jati hai...
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lekin kal puri padhi,, aur sach ma bhut badhiya story h apki 
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Thanks Bhai
TONY Gunda reh chuka hai... Mean padha likha nahi... Ek hi aachi cheez aati hai usko maar Peet.... Toh woh wohi krega... Bina soche samjhe...
And for Nazim and Yashoda...
( Ready for a twist )Next update will be interesting... Duniya aise nahi jaise dikhti hai woh mC thi mC hai Aur MC rahegi...
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