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Update was nice as always... Lekin update me kuch chaukaane wala nhi tha...
Gareebi mai Pali badi Kamala jab ghar ki izzat ko aise badnaam hote dekh... Seh nahi paayi uski maa ne use ek baat sikhayi thi... Paisa uske hath mai nahi hai... Lekin izzat tumhare hath mai hai... kabhi izzat jisper usne itne saalo se daag nahi lagne Diya tha... Jab jhoothe iljaam laga utari jaa rahi thi... Toh woh yeh sadma bardast nahi kar paayi...Padma wahi aurat hai jo asal jindagi me bhi kisi ki padosi hogi, iska bartaav chaukaane wala bilkul nhi tha... Lekin jiss tarah tejsingh ne ise jaane diya, usse nirasha jarur lagi... Shayad maahaul hi aisa tha ki wo baat ko aage badhana nhi chahte the..
Yasodha ki maa kamla... Maanshik roop se kaafi kamajor mahila thi, gareebi maanshikta majboot karti hai lekin kamla ke liye ye shayad ulta tha... Itni jaldi apne jeevan se haar maan lena, bevakoophee aur kaayarta ke siwa kuch nhi.
Use jiss waqt, apni beti ko sahara dena tha wo uss waqt apni beti ki ijjat neelaam hote huye dekh kar khud khushi karna sahi samjhi!!
Ju want shock treatment...Abhay-kun, jiss tarah tumne kroorta aur samaaj ke khokhale pan ko darshaya wo yakeenan taarif ke kaabil hai. Tumhe pata hai ki tum ek maa ki bebasi aur pita ki jimmedaaree ko darsha rahe ho, lekin kahi na kahi... Isme kuch nayapan nhi mujhe ab tak nazar nhi aaya!! Lekin ye bhi kehna galat hoga ki mujhe yasodha aur uske parivaar ke prati hamdardi nhi huyi hai.
Ummeed karungi aane wale kuch update me mujhe thoda jhatka jarur lage.
Yup I will be work on it...Tumne ab tak emotion se kahani ko bakhubi baandh rakha hai lekin suprise element is necessary to make this story a HIT!
Thanks for the update, abhay-kun
(Ps- uss chumtiya padma ko to 4-5 thappad raseedh kar lagane hi chahiye theaur ye gadhi kamla.. Pizzz me offf with her shizzz
... Phuck dizz society
see ya in next update revo
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Bhai aaj update ayega na....
Intzar rahega
Waiting
Thodi der mai..Intejaar