Adultery KALYUG ( Antt Hi Aarambh Hai ) { Incest , Fantasy , Romance , Thriller }

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( KALYUG... Part 9 )



( RECAP... 14 year's... )





14 year's Later...



Location... Basti...





( RECAP... )



Chalo Jaan lete hain in 14 saalon mai kya hua... Sabse pehle baat karte hai Yashoda ki...




YASHODA...




Yashoda basti mai kuch hi dino mai ghull mill gayi... Basti ke logo ko jab uske baare me pata chala toh sab ne uska dil kholkar swagat kiya... Jo peeth peeche buraiyan karti thi ab band ho chuki thi.. sab use ijjat se pesh aate the isme kuch had tak Vimala ka bhi haath tha Usne Yashoda ko basti mai ghull mill hone mai kaafi madat ki...



Yashoda padhi likhi nurse thi woh kaam karna chahti thi magar Tony use kahikaam nahi karne deta har baar jaha bhi kaam karne ki koshish karti dusre din use noukri se nikaal diya jata... yeh baat woh bhi samjh Rahi thi aisa kyun ho Raha hai... Magar woh na usko kuch keh paati na aisa karne se rok paati... Dono ke beech Rista kya hai dono nahi samjh paaye the...




Tony uski jindagi mai bhagwan bankar hi aaya tha jab sab logo ne uski madat karne se mana kar diya tab Uski zindagi mai aakar usne jo shahra diya... Dono ke beech jayada time khamoshi rehti thi... Kuch time mai hi Yashoda ne ghar ko aache se sambhal liya tha ghar ka raashan paani sab cheez mai Tony ne madat ki uski ab khana ghar Yashoda hi bana liya karti thi...




Din mai Kanta aur Vimala bhi aa jaya karti saath mai Kanta ki beti jiska naam Sweety rakha tha woh din bhar Nandu ke saath khelti raat mai bhi usi ke saath khelte khelte so jaati... Yashoda ek beti aur paa kar khush thi... Dheere dheere Nandu bada hua School jaane laga Yashoda din bar bour ho jaati toh ghar mai chota sa dawa khana bhi khol liya jaha woh aksar choti moti khansi bhukar ki dawai aur patti kar diya karti thi... Iss par Tony ne bhut mana kiya magar Yashoda ki zidd ke aage usne bhi haar maan li... Ab Yashoda ki yahi dincharya thi din bhar Nandu aur Sweety ki shararatain aur clinic ke saath Kanta aur Vimala ke saath paakar woh basti mai jam gayi thi...



Dhere dhere woh apni purani zindigi bhool gayi thi... Jaha woh maa papa ke saath raha karti thi... Maa ke jaane ke baad aaj bhi woh pita ji ka intezar karti usne unhe dhoonde ki koshish ki Tony ki madat se magar woh nahi mile... Yashoda bhi wanha jana chahti apne ghar ek baar bas pita ji se milne magar har baar Tony mana kar deta woh jayada kuch keh bhi nahi paati... Yaad mai aksar uski aankhein nam ho jaati magar Nandu usko rota dekh khud rone lagta isliye Yashoda uske saamne ro bhi nahi paati thi...




Aaj woh yaha iss seher mai sahi salamat hai tou ek wajah pitaji bhi the jinhone himmat dikhatehue use waha se door bhej diya bina kisi baat ki parwaah kiye... Chup chup kar dil mai abhi bhi apne pita se milne ki ek umeed thi ek aakhri baat dekhne ki unhe...



TONY...




Wanhi Tony ki baat Karen... Tony ki zindagi Yashoda ke aane se poori tarah se badal gayi thi... Kha woh bematlab mai jhagda karta tha marpeet karta tha... Ab sab kuch chod woh kaam par jata hai paise kamata hai jisse ghar kharch chal sake... Usne apne upar Yashoda aur Nandu ki zimmedari le li thi... Ab kehna mushkil hai ki woh pitaji ke kiye waade ki wajah se aisa karraha hai yaa uske man mai kuch hai yeh Tony hi janta hai... kher Tony bhi shaam ka khana uske haath ka khata aur wanhi bahar khatiya par let jata...



Kaafi log uske aisa karne se khush the toh kuch pareshan bhi the... Jo use yashoda aur uske beech kya hai puchte rehte jisse Tony chidd jaya karta tha qki woh bhi nahi samjh paa raha tha uski itni parwaah q kar raha hai... kuch saal aise hi chala jab log baar usse puchte toh woh pareshan ho gaya tha jawaab de de kar uski yeh pareshani ek din chote Nandu ne door kar di use baba keh kar...




Tony uske muhh se baba sun foole nahi sama paa raha tha usne logo ka muh chupp kar diya... Yeh Mera beta hai Tony ka beta... Ab tak Tony jo thoda asmanjas mai rehta tha ab ghar phunchte hi khush ho jata jab Nandu baba baba keh kar uske aage peeche ghumta... Rista Use Nandu ne bata Diya tha logo ka muh bhi chup ho gya...




Khud ko poori tarah se badal liya tha usne but kuch aadatain nahi badal paati jaise Uska aur Parul ka Rishta... Usne khud ko kaafi samay tak Rok kar rakha mgar tha toh ek mard hi Parul ke aage jayada time na tik paya... Uski aur Parul ki ek beti bhi thi jo Nandu se ek saal hi choti thi... Aaj bhi Parul ke paas jata hai ab beti hai toh pita ke naate kuch farz toh banta hai uska samay dene ka magar usne ABHI TAK Parul se shaadi nahi ki... Parul ne bhut baar kaha magar Tony mana kar deta... Basti mai sabko Parul aur Tony ke baare mai pata chala kaafi logo ne peeth peeche baatain ki magar koi samne se Tony ko kuch na keh saki... Yashoda ko jab yeh baat pta chali toh usne koi pratikriya nahi di... Tony uski nazar mai bhagwan tha woh bhala usko kaise galat thera deti... Jisne use nayi zindagi rehne ko ghar pyaar krne waala pariwar diya woh kaise kuch galat kar sakta hai...




VIMALA...



Baat kare Vimala ki toh woh sabhi cheezon se kaafi khush thi... Tony jiski umeed nahi thi woh sudher raha tha... Haan maanti thi kami hai usme magar har kisi ke ander ek na ek Kami rehti hi hai... Yeh soch usne usse jayada danta nahi... Yashoda ke aane se ek beti bhi mill gayi thi use yashoda use maa kehkar bulati thi... Aur uski khushi ko dugna Nandu ne DADI.. bolkar kar diya tha...



Nazim bhi thoda bhut sudhar gya tha ab ghar par jhagda nahi karta tha... Time se ghar aa jata khana khata do baache din bhar shararatain karte use ab zindagi se kuch aur nahi chahiye tha... Bas ek fikar usethi Yashoda ki usne shaadi nahi ki thi na Tony ne... Woh dono se bol bol kar thak gayi thi Yashoda har baar use mana kar deti... Tony ki use jayada fikar nahi thi Qki uske paas Parul thi magar Yashoda... Yashoda uski ek na sunti aur kasam de kar chup Kara deti...



KANTA...




Uski zindagi mai Yashoda se jayada Nandu ne balaav laya... Woh use Yashoda ke saath maa ka pyaar deti apna dhoodh pilaya 4 saal tak Nandu ne uska dhoodh peena nahi chhoda... Woh apne beti se jayada Nandu ko pyaar karne lagi thi woh tha hi itna pyaara... Usne hi Kanta ki zindagi mai aakar ek bete ki kami ko poora kar diya tha... Nazim se use koi lagwaav nahi tha na jaane kitne saal ho gae the use sharirik shambandh banaye usko kami khalti thi lekin woh Baachon ke pyaar ke aage sab bhool jati...



Magar kabhi kabhi Nandu jab 4 saal ka tha dhoodh Peete waqt woh dusre haath uski chuchi daba deta... Jisse Kanta garam ho jati aur dhoodh pilate waqt kabhi kabhi sthalgit ho jati thi... Use baad mai apni harkat par Sharm aati kaise maa hai woh beteke chune se aisa chii kaise ho sakta hai... Magar jab kabhi Nandu use kehta bhookh lagi maa duddu chahiye toh woh usemana nahi kar paati thi... Beti Sweety bhi Nandu ko dekh maa se dhoodh mangi toh Kanta apna dusra chucha nikaal use pila deti thi... Dono din bhar saath khelte saath rehte saath hi so jaate...




Beti ke hone par se hi aaj kal maa ko chinta bani rehti hai magar jab Sweety ko Nandu ka saath paakar uski chinta kaafi had tak kam ho gayi thi... Use ab pta tha ki sweety ka dhyan Nandu aache se rakh lega usko pareshan honeki jarurat nahi thi... Sweety jaise jaise badi hui usme badlaab aane shuru hue toh Kanta use Nandu se door sone ko kehti magar iss baat Sweety maa se jhagda kar leti aur Nandu ke saath hi soti thi... Usne bhi thak haar kar dono ko kuch kehna sahi nahi samjha... socha bade ho jayenge apne aap samjh aa jayegi...



NAZIM...



Uske baare mai kya hi kahe... Yashoda ke aane se uski zindagi jaise tabaah ho gayi thi... kaha woh pehle din bhar shraab Peeta nayi nayi ladkiyon ko chodta... Nahi maanti toh Tony ke naam se unke saath zabardasti karta tha... Ab achanak Tony ke sudhar jaane se uski zindagi khtam si ho gayi thi... Daaru peena kam raat ko jab Kanta par apna gussa nikalne jaata toh woh bhi use dhakke maar kar Bahar kar deti thi... Aur kehti agar mujhse zabardasti karne ki koshish ki toh yashoda se keh dungi woh Tony se keh kar tumhari haddi pasli ek kar dega...




Tony ka naam sun uski gaand fatt jaati thi... Sath me Yashoda par kaafi gussa bhi aata tha ek woh uske saath kuch kar nahi sakta tha qki harwaqt Tony uski hifazat karta tha raat mai ghar ke bahar sota tha... Yashoda ko pehle baar dekh uske Mann mai jo uske zism ko dekh hawas bhar gayi abhi tak dabaya hua tha intzaar tha use bas sahi mauke ka... Jab woh apni hasrat Yashoda ke zism ko nooch kar poori kare aur saath mai uski zindagi jo jhand ho rakhi hai uska badla bhi le sake... Dekhte hai intzaar kab tak chalta hai abhi tak use mauka nahi mila...



NANDU...




Ab chalte hai meri dekhte hai mai kya kar raha hoon....



Woh jaane se pehle mai aapko apne baare mai bata dena chahta hoon... mera naam Nandkishor hai pyaar se sab Nandu bulate hai... Meri teen Maa aur do behne hai... Are are confuse ho gye na teen kaise toh chaliye bata deta hoon... Meri ek Maa jisne janam diya use mai kabhi dekh nahi paya kaisi thi magar itna keh sakta hun meri Yashoda maa se kam nahi hongi... Jo pyaar usne mila mai apne aap ko bhut khudkismat samjhta hoon...




Dusri meri Maa Kanta mujhe bhut pyaar karti hai dono maa ke pyaar ko kon jayada kon kam yeh toh bhagwan bhi nahi jaan sakta hai... mai toh khush hoon jab kabhi khelne ke chakkar mai daant padti toh yeh maa humesha mera bachaav mai aa Yashoda maa ko bhi daant deti... he he he...




Kher teesri aur aakhiri maa Parul unko mai aai kehta hun jab bhi baba ke saath basti mai ghumta yaa unke ghar jaata toh woh mujhe bhut laad pyaar karti... Ab yeh pyaar mujhe hai yaa baba ke saamne dikhawa yeh mai keh nahi sakta woh mujhe pyaar deti mai unhe aai hi bulata...




Do behan Sweety aur Dimple urf ( Dimpi ) Jo behne kehne par badak jaati hai sweety ka toh chlata hai woh bachpan se mereko maarti thi jab use didi kehta bhut der tak gussa rehti jab tak use mana nahi leta khana nahi khati thi... Magar Dimple uska kuch samjh nahi aata tha Sweety ko dekh uski tarah banne ki kosish karti har waqt yaa usse aage... kabhi gaal par pappi leleti kabhi kuch harkat jisse Sweety chidd jaati ab woh aisa Sweety ko dikhane karti yaa kuch aur baat thi yeh aaj tak mujhe nahi pta...



Aakhiri baat jo mujhe nahi pata magar mere baare mai dusre log kehte hai ki meri kahi baatain sach ho jaati hai... Jaise ki Dadi kaam se bahar gayi thi mujhe laddu khane ka man hua toh maine bola aayi laddo khana hai itne mai dadi ander aayi aur unke hathon mai laddo dekh sab chonk gye jo woh mere liye layi thi...



Aise hi bhut si baatain jo mai gaur nahi karta qki mujhe iss cheezon se fark nahi padta... Mai apni masti mai Magan rehta... Aisa nahi tha ki har kahi baat sach jo jati yaa mere paas super power thi balki kabhi kabhi achanak muh se kuch nikal jata jo mere man mai chal raha hota woh sach ho jata tha...




( Kehte hai na din mai kahi ek baat sach ho jati qki jeev par maa saraswati viraj karti hai iss case ko bhi aisa samjh lijiye... Hazam aasani se ho jayega )



Location Government HR school...




Afternoon... Time... 2:30 PM...





Chalte hai meri taraf...Mai bachkar bhag raha tha Sweety mujhe pakadne ke liye peeche bhaag rahi thi qki school mai uski doston ke saamne maine use didi keh diya tha... Toh chaliye dekhte hai aage kya hota hai... Kahani ko mere nazariye se...




Mai... hhhhhh Sweety sorry... hhhh sweety maaf kar de... Hhhhhh ab aur nahi bhaga jaa raha...



Sweety... Hhhh Nandu ke baache tu haath aa ja ek baar mere... Hhhh aaj tujhe nahi chodne waali hhhh ruk Naa...



Mai... hhhhh Pagal hai kyaa... mai nahi ruk raha mujhe pta hai tu mujhe maregi... Hhhhhh




Sweety... hhhh Aacha nahi marungi please ruk jaa dekh mere pair dukhne lage hai... Hhhh ab aur nahi bhaag sakti... Nandu ruk jaa...




Mai... hhhh Mai nahi rukne waala aai ke paas hi jaker rukunga... hhhh unse sikayat karunga teri tu roj mujhe maarti hai... Hhhhhh Terese aachi Dipmi hai mujhe kitna pyaar karti hai...



Sweety... Aahhh ruk jaa Nandu...



Sweety ki aag sun Mai peeche palat kar dekhta hun toh Sweety pessene se lat path mere peeche bhaag rahi thi tabhi mere muh se aachanak nikal jata hai... Sweety sambhal ke...



Aur dhadammmm karke sweety gir padti hai mai bhaagte hue uske paas jata hoon... Usko uthta hun woh mere baal pakad leti hai...




Mai... Aaahhh kya kar rahi hai chod mere baal sweety choddd aaahhh lag rahi hai...


Sweety... Nahi chodungi kya keh raha tha mujhse aachi Dimpi hai woh chudail ki barabri tune mujhse ki... Kya samjhata hai apne aapko... Aaj teri khair nahi...




Mai... Aahhh chod de sweety sorry ab se nahi bolunga promise chod na...




Sweety... Nahi chodungi aaj dekhti hun kon bacahta hai himmat kaise hui Teri dimpi ko merese aacha kehne ki... Aachi tarah se jaanti hun uss kamini ko woh mujhe har waqt chidati rehti hai... Aur tu usko aacha keh raha Aaj teri khair nahi...




Mai... Aacha maaf kar de please lag rahi hai sweety dekh kapde gande ho gaye maa gussa karegi unhe batana padega kya hua... Mai toh bol dunga jo tune kiya jisper badi maa mujhe bacha lengi fir soch le tera kya haal hoga...




Sweety... Mujhe dhamki deta hai ruk tujhe batati hun... Aaj nahi sunne waali kisi ki jo chaahe keh de tu aai se maar kha lungi aur kya...




Mai... Aacha theek hai mere maa sorry promise aaj se tujhe Dimpi se barabri nahi krunga woh chudail waise bhi mujhe pasand nhi harwaqt chipki rehti hai tu toh jaanti hai... Chal khadi ho saare kapde kharab ho gye...



Sweety... Haan toh maine kaha tha kya Tujhse jhagda karne ke liye... Tujhe pta hai na mai kitna pyaar karti tujhse tu har waqt Dimpi kar mujhe pareshan karta hai... Dekh mujhe chot lag gayi khoon bhi aa raha hai...



Mai... ( Pareshan hote hue ) haan yeh toh dikkat ho gayi ek kaam kar uth tu Ghar chalte hai maa ko bol denge gir gayi tu jis chakkar mai kapde kharab ho gaye... Teri patti bhi ho jayegi daant se bhi Bach jayenge...



Sweety... Aaahhhh nahi uth paa rahi Nandu madat kar na...



Mai... ( Use sahara dekar khada karte hue ) kitna khaati hai tu ufff chal jaldi kar ab...



Sweety... Kya kaha tune...




Mai... Kuch nahi woh bass chal na... Maa gussa karengi waise hi kaafi late ho gaya jaldi chalte hai...




Jaha mai Sweety ko lekar ghar jaa raha tha wanhi ghar par kuch aur hi chal raha tha...



Location Basti... Yashoda House'...



Afternoon... Same Time...




Vimala... Beti kitne saal ho gaye mai tujhe bol bolkar thak gayi abhi bhi waqt hai shaadi kar le... mai samjhti hun mai bhi aurat hun kuch jarurat hoti hai sarir ki usko kab tak aise bardast karegi... Aakhir kya dikkat hai...



Yashoda... Maa aap samjhti kyun nahi hai mai aise hi theek hun... Nandu ke saath khush hoon mujhe ab kisi cheez ki chaah nahi hai pyaar krne ke liye didi hai aap hai ek beti bhi hai ab mujhe kuch nahi chahiye...




Vimala... Magar beti...



Yashoda... Please maa... Kuch mat kahiye maanti hun aapki baat ek had tak sahi hai magar maine yeh zindagi khud ke liye chun Li ab mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...



Vimala baat sun dukhi ho jaati hai toh Yashoda uske hath par hath rakh kehti hai...



Yashoda... Maan lo agar kal ko maine shaadi kar li toh mujhe aapko chod kar jana padega Naa jaane woh kaisa hoga kya mai jaise hoon waisa apnayega mujhe... Meri shaadi ko lekar pitaji ne bhi kaafi sapne saza rakhe the ab unke na rehte mai shaadi ka soch bhi nahi sakhti...



Vimala... ( Kuch sochte hue ) Ek baat bAtayegi sach sach... Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...



Yashoda... Isme kya hai maa woh bhut aache hai woh mere liye bhagwan hai unki wajah se aaj jo kuch bhi mai hoon yaha aapke beech...




Vimala... Are waise nahi Pati ke roop mai Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...



Yashoda uski baat sun khamosh ho jati hai...



Vimala... Dekh mai yeh nahi keh rahi ki woh bhut aacha hai... Har kisi mai Kami rehti hai magar shayad kahi na kahi woh bhi tumhe pasand karta isliye ab tak usne bhi shaadi nahi ki... Tu kya kehti hai iss baare mai...



Yashoda... Mai kya kahun mai mere dil mai aisa kuch nahi unke liye... Haan maanti hun woh bhut aache hai bhut izzat karti hun unki magar shaadi samjh nahi aata maa pta nahi kyun...



Vimala... Agar tere pita ji ko Tony pasand hota toh tu kya kehti...




Yashoda... Pitaji ki pasand par mai kaise mana kar sakti hoon maa woh jo karte mere aache ke liye hi karte... Lekin woh baad ki baat hai maa abhi yaha nahi toh aap yeh baatain na karen Baachon ke aane ka bhi samay ho gaya hai... Abhi tak aaye kyun nahi mai dekh kar aati hoon...



Yashoda abhi uthne ko hoti hai tabhi use Nandu ki awaaz sunayi deti hai...



Mai.. Baba Maa kaha hai... Dekho Sweety ke chot lag gayi aap unhe bula do... Tab tak mai ise clinic mai le jata hoon...



Yashoda bahar aakar dekhti hai Toh Tony use nazar aata hai jo ek baar use aakhon mai dekh bahar nikal jata hai... Dono ke beech yeh khamoshi ek aam baat thi jayada kaam hone par hi woh baat Kiya karte the magar aaj yeh khamoshi Yashoda ko kuch alag lag rahi thi saath hi Tony ke haav bhaav kher... Woh sab cheez ko darkinaar kar clinic ki taraf chal padti hai...




( Update kaafi late ho gaya uske liye mai maafi mangta hoon... Rakhi ka tyohar hai aap samjh sakte hain... 100 kaam aa jate hai din mai khair like kar dena 30 likes pichli baar kar diya the khush kar diya yr... )




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Nice update

To nandu abhi 14 saal ka ho gya, sab kuch abhi to filhaal thik chal rha hai.

Parul ke liye ek tarah se bura bhi lag rha hai, use uska pyar nahi mila, lekin isme yashoda ki koi galti nahi. Yashoda agar nahi bhi aati Tony ke jivan me to bhi shayad hi Tony parul se shadi karta.
Lekin parul ke liye to yashoda hi in sabki jimmedar hogi, aur vo apne mann me shayad yashoda aur nandu le liye nafrat pale baithi ho. Khair ye sab ek anuman bhi ho sakta hai, kya pata parul bhi positive character ho. Khair dekhte hai.

Nazim ko ab tak koi moka nahi mila yashoda ko nuksan pahunchane ka, lekin jarur vo bhavishya me koi gadbad karega.

14 saal to beet chuke hai, abhi 3-4 saal aur thoda speed me niklenge to kahani apne level pe aa jani chahiye.

Khair story fantasy section me hai to kya kuch supernatural powers ka kahani me role hoga yaa realistic ke chakkar me kahani puri logic pe hi chalegi. Dekhte hai.

Excellent update. Waiting for next.

 

[Dragon.]

( KALYUG... Part 9 )



( RECAP... 14 year's... )





14 year's Later...



Location... Basti...





( RECAP... )



Chalo Jaan lete hain in 14 saalon mai kya hua... Sabse pehle baat karte hai Yashoda ki...




YASHODA...




Yashoda basti mai kuch hi dino mai ghull mill gayi... Basti ke logo ko jab uske baare me pata chala toh sab ne uska dil kholkar swagat kiya... Jo peeth peeche buraiyan karti thi ab band ho chuki thi.. sab use ijjat se pesh aate the isme kuch had tak Vimala ka bhi haath tha Usne Yashoda ko basti mai ghull mill hone mai kaafi madat ki...



Yashoda padhi likhi nurse thi woh kaam karna chahti thi magar Tony use kahikaam nahi karne deta har baar jaha bhi kaam karne ki koshish karti dusre din use noukri se nikaal diya jata... yeh baat woh bhi samjh Rahi thi aisa kyun ho Raha hai... Magar woh na usko kuch keh paati na aisa karne se rok paati... Dono ke beech Rista kya hai dono nahi samjh paaye the...




Tony uski jindagi mai bhagwan bankar hi aaya tha jab sab logo ne uski madat karne se mana kar diya tab Uski zindagi mai aakar usne jo shahra diya... Dono ke beech jayada time khamoshi rehti thi... Kuch time mai hi Yashoda ne ghar ko aache se sambhal liya tha ghar ka raashan paani sab cheez mai Tony ne madat ki uski ab khana ghar Yashoda hi bana liya karti thi...




Din mai Kanta aur Vimala bhi aa jaya karti saath mai Kanta ki beti jiska naam Sweety rakha tha woh din bhar Nandu ke saath khelti raat mai bhi usi ke saath khelte khelte so jaati... Yashoda ek beti aur paa kar khush thi... Dheere dheere Nandu bada hua School jaane laga Yashoda din bar bour ho jaati toh ghar mai chota sa dawa khana bhi khol liya jaha woh aksar choti moti khansi bhukar ki dawai aur patti kar diya karti thi... Iss par Tony ne bhut mana kiya magar Yashoda ki zidd ke aage usne bhi haar maan li... Ab Yashoda ki yahi dincharya thi din bhar Nandu aur Sweety ki shararatain aur clinic ke saath Kanta aur Vimala ke saath paakar woh basti mai jam gayi thi...



Dhere dhere woh apni purani zindigi bhool gayi thi... Jaha woh maa papa ke saath raha karti thi... Maa ke jaane ke baad aaj bhi woh pita ji ka intezar karti usne unhe dhoonde ki koshish ki Tony ki madat se magar woh nahi mile... Yashoda bhi wanha jana chahti apne ghar ek baar bas pita ji se milne magar har baar Tony mana kar deta woh jayada kuch keh bhi nahi paati... Yaad mai aksar uski aankhein nam ho jaati magar Nandu usko rota dekh khud rone lagta isliye Yashoda uske saamne ro bhi nahi paati thi...




Aaj woh yaha iss seher mai sahi salamat hai tou ek wajah pitaji bhi the jinhone himmat dikhatehue use waha se door bhej diya bina kisi baat ki parwaah kiye... Chup chup kar dil mai abhi bhi apne pita se milne ki ek umeed thi ek aakhri baat dekhne ki unhe...



TONY...




Wanhi Tony ki baat Karen... Tony ki zindagi Yashoda ke aane se poori tarah se badal gayi thi... Kha woh bematlab mai jhagda karta tha marpeet karta tha... Ab sab kuch chod woh kaam par jata hai paise kamata hai jisse ghar kharch chal sake... Usne apne upar Yashoda aur Nandu ki zimmedari le li thi... Ab kehna mushkil hai ki woh pitaji ke kiye waade ki wajah se aisa karraha hai yaa uske man mai kuch hai yeh Tony hi janta hai... kher Tony bhi shaam ka khana uske haath ka khata aur wanhi bahar khatiya par let jata...



Kaafi log uske aisa karne se khush the toh kuch pareshan bhi the... Jo use yashoda aur uske beech kya hai puchte rehte jisse Tony chidd jaya karta tha qki woh bhi nahi samjh paa raha tha uski itni parwaah q kar raha hai... kuch saal aise hi chala jab log baar usse puchte toh woh pareshan ho gaya tha jawaab de de kar uski yeh pareshani ek din chote Nandu ne door kar di use baba keh kar...




Tony uske muhh se baba sun foole nahi sama paa raha tha usne logo ka muh chupp kar diya... Yeh Mera beta hai Tony ka beta... Ab tak Tony jo thoda asmanjas mai rehta tha ab ghar phunchte hi khush ho jata jab Nandu baba baba keh kar uske aage peeche ghumta... Rista Use Nandu ne bata Diya tha logo ka muh bhi chup ho gya...




Khud ko poori tarah se badal liya tha usne but kuch aadatain nahi badal paati jaise Uska aur Parul ka Rishta... Usne khud ko kaafi samay tak Rok kar rakha mgar tha toh ek mard hi Parul ke aage jayada time na tik paya... Uski aur Parul ki ek beti bhi thi jo Nandu se ek saal hi choti thi... Aaj bhi Parul ke paas jata hai ab beti hai toh pita ke naate kuch farz toh banta hai uska samay dene ka magar usne ABHI TAK Parul se shaadi nahi ki... Parul ne bhut baar kaha magar Tony mana kar deta... Basti mai sabko Parul aur Tony ke baare mai pata chala kaafi logo ne peeth peeche baatain ki magar koi samne se Tony ko kuch na keh saki... Yashoda ko jab yeh baat pta chali toh usne koi pratikriya nahi di... Tony uski nazar mai bhagwan tha woh bhala usko kaise galat thera deti... Jisne use nayi zindagi rehne ko ghar pyaar krne waala pariwar diya woh kaise kuch galat kar sakta hai...




VIMALA...



Baat kare Vimala ki toh woh sabhi cheezon se kaafi khush thi... Tony jiski umeed nahi thi woh sudher raha tha... Haan maanti thi kami hai usme magar har kisi ke ander ek na ek Kami rehti hi hai... Yeh soch usne usse jayada danta nahi... Yashoda ke aane se ek beti bhi mill gayi thi use yashoda use maa kehkar bulati thi... Aur uski khushi ko dugna Nandu ne DADI.. bolkar kar diya tha...



Nazim bhi thoda bhut sudhar gya tha ab ghar par jhagda nahi karta tha... Time se ghar aa jata khana khata do baache din bhar shararatain karte use ab zindagi se kuch aur nahi chahiye tha... Bas ek fikar usethi Yashoda ki usne shaadi nahi ki thi na Tony ne... Woh dono se bol bol kar thak gayi thi Yashoda har baar use mana kar deti... Tony ki use jayada fikar nahi thi Qki uske paas Parul thi magar Yashoda... Yashoda uski ek na sunti aur kasam de kar chup Kara deti...



KANTA...




Uski zindagi mai Yashoda se jayada Nandu ne balaav laya... Woh use Yashoda ke saath maa ka pyaar deti apna dhoodh pilaya 4 saal tak Nandu ne uska dhoodh peena nahi chhoda... Woh apne beti se jayada Nandu ko pyaar karne lagi thi woh tha hi itna pyaara... Usne hi Kanta ki zindagi mai aakar ek bete ki kami ko poora kar diya tha... Nazim se use koi lagwaav nahi tha na jaane kitne saal ho gae the use sharirik shambandh banaye usko kami khalti thi lekin woh Baachon ke pyaar ke aage sab bhool jati...



Magar kabhi kabhi Nandu jab 4 saal ka tha dhoodh Peete waqt woh dusre haath uski chuchi daba deta... Jisse Kanta garam ho jati aur dhoodh pilate waqt kabhi kabhi sthalgit ho jati thi... Use baad mai apni harkat par Sharm aati kaise maa hai woh beteke chune se aisa chii kaise ho sakta hai... Magar jab kabhi Nandu use kehta bhookh lagi maa duddu chahiye toh woh usemana nahi kar paati thi... Beti Sweety bhi Nandu ko dekh maa se dhoodh mangi toh Kanta apna dusra chucha nikaal use pila deti thi... Dono din bhar saath khelte saath rehte saath hi so jaate...




Beti ke hone par se hi aaj kal maa ko chinta bani rehti hai magar jab Sweety ko Nandu ka saath paakar uski chinta kaafi had tak kam ho gayi thi... Use ab pta tha ki sweety ka dhyan Nandu aache se rakh lega usko pareshan honeki jarurat nahi thi... Sweety jaise jaise badi hui usme badlaab aane shuru hue toh Kanta use Nandu se door sone ko kehti magar iss baat Sweety maa se jhagda kar leti aur Nandu ke saath hi soti thi... Usne bhi thak haar kar dono ko kuch kehna sahi nahi samjha... socha bade ho jayenge apne aap samjh aa jayegi...



NAZIM...



Uske baare mai kya hi kahe... Yashoda ke aane se uski zindagi jaise tabaah ho gayi thi... kaha woh pehle din bhar shraab Peeta nayi nayi ladkiyon ko chodta... Nahi maanti toh Tony ke naam se unke saath zabardasti karta tha... Ab achanak Tony ke sudhar jaane se uski zindagi khtam si ho gayi thi... Daaru peena kam raat ko jab Kanta par apna gussa nikalne jaata toh woh bhi use dhakke maar kar Bahar kar deti thi... Aur kehti agar mujhse zabardasti karne ki koshish ki toh yashoda se keh dungi woh Tony se keh kar tumhari haddi pasli ek kar dega...




Tony ka naam sun uski gaand fatt jaati thi... Sath me Yashoda par kaafi gussa bhi aata tha ek woh uske saath kuch kar nahi sakta tha qki harwaqt Tony uski hifazat karta tha raat mai ghar ke bahar sota tha... Yashoda ko pehle baar dekh uske Mann mai jo uske zism ko dekh hawas bhar gayi abhi tak dabaya hua tha intzaar tha use bas sahi mauke ka... Jab woh apni hasrat Yashoda ke zism ko nooch kar poori kare aur saath mai uski zindagi jo jhand ho rakhi hai uska badla bhi le sake... Dekhte hai intzaar kab tak chalta hai abhi tak use mauka nahi mila...



NANDU...




Ab chalte hai meri dekhte hai mai kya kar raha hoon....



Woh jaane se pehle mai aapko apne baare mai bata dena chahta hoon... mera naam Nandkishor hai pyaar se sab Nandu bulate hai... Meri teen Maa aur do behne hai... Are are confuse ho gye na teen kaise toh chaliye bata deta hoon... Meri ek Maa jisne janam diya use mai kabhi dekh nahi paya kaisi thi magar itna keh sakta hun meri Yashoda maa se kam nahi hongi... Jo pyaar usne mila mai apne aap ko bhut khudkismat samjhta hoon...




Dusri meri Maa Kanta mujhe bhut pyaar karti hai dono maa ke pyaar ko kon jayada kon kam yeh toh bhagwan bhi nahi jaan sakta hai... mai toh khush hoon jab kabhi khelne ke chakkar mai daant padti toh yeh maa humesha mera bachaav mai aa Yashoda maa ko bhi daant deti... he he he...




Kher teesri aur aakhiri maa Parul unko mai aai kehta hun jab bhi baba ke saath basti mai ghumta yaa unke ghar jaata toh woh mujhe bhut laad pyaar karti... Ab yeh pyaar mujhe hai yaa baba ke saamne dikhawa yeh mai keh nahi sakta woh mujhe pyaar deti mai unhe aai hi bulata...




Do behan Sweety aur Dimple urf ( Dimpi ) Jo behne kehne par badak jaati hai sweety ka toh chlata hai woh bachpan se mereko maarti thi jab use didi kehta bhut der tak gussa rehti jab tak use mana nahi leta khana nahi khati thi... Magar Dimple uska kuch samjh nahi aata tha Sweety ko dekh uski tarah banne ki kosish karti har waqt yaa usse aage... kabhi gaal par pappi leleti kabhi kuch harkat jisse Sweety chidd jaati ab woh aisa Sweety ko dikhane karti yaa kuch aur baat thi yeh aaj tak mujhe nahi pta...



Aakhiri baat jo mujhe nahi pata magar mere baare mai dusre log kehte hai ki meri kahi baatain sach ho jaati hai... Jaise ki Dadi kaam se bahar gayi thi mujhe laddu khane ka man hua toh maine bola aayi laddo khana hai itne mai dadi ander aayi aur unke hathon mai laddo dekh sab chonk gye jo woh mere liye layi thi...



Aise hi bhut si baatain jo mai gaur nahi karta qki mujhe iss cheezon se fark nahi padta... Mai apni masti mai Magan rehta... Aisa nahi tha ki har kahi baat sach jo jati yaa mere paas super power thi balki kabhi kabhi achanak muh se kuch nikal jata jo mere man mai chal raha hota woh sach ho jata tha...




( Kehte hai na din mai kahi ek baat sach ho jati qki jeev par maa saraswati viraj karti hai iss case ko bhi aisa samjh lijiye... Hazam aasani se ho jayega )



Location Government HR school...




Afternoon... Time... 2:30 PM...





Chalte hai meri taraf...Mai bachkar bhag raha tha Sweety mujhe pakadne ke liye peeche bhaag rahi thi qki school mai uski doston ke saamne maine use didi keh diya tha... Toh chaliye dekhte hai aage kya hota hai... Kahani ko mere nazariye se...




Mai... hhhhhh Sweety sorry... hhhh sweety maaf kar de... Hhhhhh ab aur nahi bhaga jaa raha...



Sweety... Hhhh Nandu ke baache tu haath aa ja ek baar mere... Hhhh aaj tujhe nahi chodne waali hhhh ruk Naa...



Mai... hhhhh Pagal hai kyaa... mai nahi ruk raha mujhe pta hai tu mujhe maregi... Hhhhhh




Sweety... hhhh Aacha nahi marungi please ruk jaa dekh mere pair dukhne lage hai... Hhhh ab aur nahi bhaag sakti... Nandu ruk jaa...




Mai... hhhh Mai nahi rukne waala aai ke paas hi jaker rukunga... hhhh unse sikayat karunga teri tu roj mujhe maarti hai... Hhhhhh Terese aachi Dipmi hai mujhe kitna pyaar karti hai...



Sweety... Aahhh ruk jaa Nandu...



Sweety ki aag sun Mai peeche palat kar dekhta hun toh Sweety pessene se lat path mere peeche bhaag rahi thi tabhi mere muh se aachanak nikal jata hai... Sweety sambhal ke...



Aur dhadammmm karke sweety gir padti hai mai bhaagte hue uske paas jata hoon... Usko uthta hun woh mere baal pakad leti hai...




Mai... Aaahhh kya kar rahi hai chod mere baal sweety choddd aaahhh lag rahi hai...


Sweety... Nahi chodungi kya keh raha tha mujhse aachi Dimpi hai woh chudail ki barabri tune mujhse ki... Kya samjhata hai apne aapko... Aaj teri khair nahi...




Mai... Aahhh chod de sweety sorry ab se nahi bolunga promise chod na...




Sweety... Nahi chodungi aaj dekhti hun kon bacahta hai himmat kaise hui Teri dimpi ko merese aacha kehne ki... Aachi tarah se jaanti hun uss kamini ko woh mujhe har waqt chidati rehti hai... Aur tu usko aacha keh raha Aaj teri khair nahi...




Mai... Aacha maaf kar de please lag rahi hai sweety dekh kapde gande ho gaye maa gussa karegi unhe batana padega kya hua... Mai toh bol dunga jo tune kiya jisper badi maa mujhe bacha lengi fir soch le tera kya haal hoga...




Sweety... Mujhe dhamki deta hai ruk tujhe batati hun... Aaj nahi sunne waali kisi ki jo chaahe keh de tu aai se maar kha lungi aur kya...




Mai... Aacha theek hai mere maa sorry promise aaj se tujhe Dimpi se barabri nahi krunga woh chudail waise bhi mujhe pasand nhi harwaqt chipki rehti hai tu toh jaanti hai... Chal khadi ho saare kapde kharab ho gye...



Sweety... Haan toh maine kaha tha kya Tujhse jhagda karne ke liye... Tujhe pta hai na mai kitna pyaar karti tujhse tu har waqt Dimpi kar mujhe pareshan karta hai... Dekh mujhe chot lag gayi khoon bhi aa raha hai...



Mai... ( Pareshan hote hue ) haan yeh toh dikkat ho gayi ek kaam kar uth tu Ghar chalte hai maa ko bol denge gir gayi tu jis chakkar mai kapde kharab ho gaye... Teri patti bhi ho jayegi daant se bhi Bach jayenge...



Sweety... Aaahhhh nahi uth paa rahi Nandu madat kar na...



Mai... ( Use sahara dekar khada karte hue ) kitna khaati hai tu ufff chal jaldi kar ab...



Sweety... Kya kaha tune...




Mai... Kuch nahi woh bass chal na... Maa gussa karengi waise hi kaafi late ho gaya jaldi chalte hai...




Jaha mai Sweety ko lekar ghar jaa raha tha wanhi ghar par kuch aur hi chal raha tha...



Location Basti... Yashoda House'...



Afternoon... Same Time...




Vimala... Beti kitne saal ho gaye mai tujhe bol bolkar thak gayi abhi bhi waqt hai shaadi kar le... mai samjhti hun mai bhi aurat hun kuch jarurat hoti hai sarir ki usko kab tak aise bardast karegi... Aakhir kya dikkat hai...



Yashoda... Maa aap samjhti kyun nahi hai mai aise hi theek hun... Nandu ke saath khush hoon mujhe ab kisi cheez ki chaah nahi hai pyaar krne ke liye didi hai aap hai ek beti bhi hai ab mujhe kuch nahi chahiye...




Vimala... Magar beti...



Yashoda... Please maa... Kuch mat kahiye maanti hun aapki baat ek had tak sahi hai magar maine yeh zindagi khud ke liye chun Li ab mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...



Vimala baat sun dukhi ho jaati hai toh Yashoda uske hath par hath rakh kehti hai...



Yashoda... Maan lo agar kal ko maine shaadi kar li toh mujhe aapko chod kar jana padega Naa jaane woh kaisa hoga kya mai jaise hoon waisa apnayega mujhe... Meri shaadi ko lekar pitaji ne bhi kaafi sapne saza rakhe the ab unke na rehte mai shaadi ka soch bhi nahi sakhti...



Vimala... ( Kuch sochte hue ) Ek baat bAtayegi sach sach... Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...



Yashoda... Isme kya hai maa woh bhut aache hai woh mere liye bhagwan hai unki wajah se aaj jo kuch bhi mai hoon yaha aapke beech...




Vimala... Are waise nahi Pati ke roop mai Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...



Yashoda uski baat sun khamosh ho jati hai...



Vimala... Dekh mai yeh nahi keh rahi ki woh bhut aacha hai... Har kisi mai Kami rehti hai magar shayad kahi na kahi woh bhi tumhe pasand karta isliye ab tak usne bhi shaadi nahi ki... Tu kya kehti hai iss baare mai...



Yashoda... Mai kya kahun mai mere dil mai aisa kuch nahi unke liye... Haan maanti hun woh bhut aache hai bhut izzat karti hun unki magar shaadi samjh nahi aata maa pta nahi kyun...



Vimala... Agar tere pita ji ko Tony pasand hota toh tu kya kehti...




Yashoda... Pitaji ki pasand par mai kaise mana kar sakti hoon maa woh jo karte mere aache ke liye hi karte... Lekin woh baad ki baat hai maa abhi yaha nahi toh aap yeh baatain na karen Baachon ke aane ka bhi samay ho gaya hai... Abhi tak aaye kyun nahi mai dekh kar aati hoon...



Yashoda abhi uthne ko hoti hai tabhi use Nandu ki awaaz sunayi deti hai...



Mai.. Baba Maa kaha hai... Dekho Sweety ke chot lag gayi aap unhe bula do... Tab tak mai ise clinic mai le jata hoon...



Yashoda bahar aakar dekhti hai Toh Tony use nazar aata hai jo ek baar use aakhon mai dekh bahar nikal jata hai... Dono ke beech yeh khamoshi ek aam baat thi jayada kaam hone par hi woh baat Kiya karte the magar aaj yeh khamoshi Yashoda ko kuch alag lag rahi thi saath hi Tony ke haav bhaav kher... Woh sab cheez ko darkinaar kar clinic ki taraf chal padti hai...




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( KALYUG... Part 5 )



( Zero To Hero... Intro..)




Early morning... 5:15 AM...





Hhhh... Hhhh... Hhhh... Bas pahunch hi gaya... Thoda sa aur Tony bas




Khud se hi baat kar Tony kaafi der se thele ko chalaye jaa raha tha... Jispe usne yashoda aur baacha dono ko lita diya tha... baccha abhi bhi ro raha tha wohi yashoda behosh thi
......



Tony ko samjh nahi aa raha woh uski madat kaisekare pehle socha yaha se chalana chahiye ghar baaki wohi sochega aage kya karsakte hai... Usne Jaise taise karke Yashoda ko utha kar thele per lita diya... Maathe se bhut khoon abhi bhi nikal raha tha usne apni shirt ki aasteen fad kar uske sir par bandh di... Aur bacche ko uske paas lita kar thela le ghar ki taraf chal diya... Abhi uske dimag se police kar darr nikal chuka tha aur kismat bhi uske saath thi ki police waha se chali gayi thi...




Kaafi mehnat masakkat karne ke baad Tony thele ko lekar apni basti mai phunch gaya... Jaha usko maasi mill gayi raaste mai jo paani bhar rahi thi... Subh 6 baj gye the pahunchte pahunchte iss samay basti ki saari auratain paani bharne nal par phunch jati hai... Tony ka poora bachpan yaha gujara tha pehle maa thi uske jaane ke baad papa hi uske sab kuch the... Woh bhi kuch samay pehle hi chal base... Ristedaar ke naam par ek mausi hi thi Tony ki jo madat kar deti thi... Tony ko do time ka khana mausi ke Ghar hi hota tha... Aur pita ke jaane ke baad toh woh uske saath hi rehta tha... Khud ke ghar mai ghutan hoti thi use...




Aeee... Tonyyyy.. kidher se aa raha hai aur yeh ladki kon hai tere saath... Kya hua ise...




Mausi Tony ko dekh puchti hai... jo kaafi der se nal ki line mai apna number aane ka intezar kar rahi thi... Woh Tony ko apne bete ke jaise hi maanti thi... Tony ki maa ki badi behen thi dono behno mai bhut pyaar tha tabhi choti behen ke jaane ke baad usne Tony ki poori dekhbhal ki maa ki kami nahi hone di use... Woh Tony ke pita se kaafi gussa rehti thi... Pita Tony ke choRi , lootmaari, gundagardi... Yehi kaam tha unka aur unke saath reh rehkar Tony bhi waisa hi ban gaya tha...




Woh Tony ko bhut samjhati thi magar Tony kha kisi ki sunta 2 no. Ka kaam jitna gairkanoni hai... Utna hi Paisa usme hota hai... Tony ne padhai likhayi bhi nahi ki thi muskill se apna naam likh pata tha... Aise mai woh apne pita ke nakse kadam par chalta raha aur bada Gunda ban raha tha... Kaafi naam tha Tony ka basti mai... basti mai lagbhag 1 lakh se jayada log rehte the... Tony ko lagbhag har koi jaanta tha... Uske saath reh kar uska beta Nazim bhi bigad gaya tha... Maar Peet , jua khelna , satta lagana , ladkiyon chedna yeh kaam mai Nazim expert ban gaya tha Tony ke saath reh kar... Jiske karan roz Nazim ko maar padti thi apni maa se... magar maar se kaha asar hota dusre din fir wohi kaam...




Kher back to story... Mausi jinka naam Vimala tha pareshan aur hairaan ho gayi thi Tony ko subh kisi ko saath mai dekh kar jab paas jaake unhone dekha toh ladki ke saath baacha bhi tha... Jo abhi filhaal toh so raha tha shayad rote rote thak gaya hoga...




Vimala.... Kya re... Ab yeh kaam bhi karne laga tu... Neech kon hai yeh ladki aur yeh baacha kiska hai bata mujhe warna Aaj tu jute khayega merese.. ghysne nahi dungi ghar mai na roti dungi tereko khane ke liya... Bta kon hai yeh...



Tony jo thela chala kar thak gaya tha... Thodi saans le raha tha itne mai vimala maasi ki baat sun thoda ghabra bhi gya fir bola...



Tony... subh subh kya chik chik kar rahi hai Tai... Chal baju hat isko ander lekar chal tereko sab btata hai mai...



Tab tak basti ke bhi kuch log ikhtta ho gye the Tony sabko side kar Yashoda ko hatho mai utha leta hai aur maasi ko bacche ko lekar aane ka bol maasi ke ghar chal deta hai... Maasi bhi Tony ke peeche peeche bacche ko le chal deti saath hi basti ki ek do auratain bhi ghar mai aa gayi thi... Tony Yashoda ko bistar par leta deta hai aur palat kar maasi ko dekta hai toh woh sawaliyan nazron se use dekh rahi thi... Saathhi basti ki kuch auratain bhi apas mai khusur pusur kar rahi thi...



Tony pehle toh ghabra jaata hai fir kal jo kuch bhi hua woh mausi ko bta deta hai...



Vimala Tony ki baat sun shock ho jaati hai... Jitna use Tony ko kisi ke saath dekh laga tha usse jayada shock use laga Tony ko kisi anjaan ki madat karte dekh kar... qki Tony ne aaj tak Gunda gardi chori chakari ke alawa kuch nahi kiya... Kher woh khush bhi thi Tony ki baat sunkar shayad uska yeh beta shudhar jaye... Fir ek nazar yashoda ko dekhatoh uske sir par Patti dekh chonk gayi aur jaldi se kitchen mai garam pani rakh kar apna first aid ka dibba lekar aa gayi...



Yashoda ki tarah Vimala bhi pese se nurse thi... Lekin private hospital mai jisme use kaam bhut paise Kam milte the... Jaise taise karke uske ghar ka kharcha chalta tha... Ghar mai Nazim uski biwi Kanta aur haal mai ek beti Hui thi... pati kaafi samay pehle daaru peekar truck se kuchal gaya tha...





Vimala Yashoda ke sir ki patti hata kar dekhti hai toh khoon ab ruk chuka tha... Ghaav kaafi gehra tha woh kitchen mai jaa ek bartan mai gun guna paani le aati hai aur rui ki madat se zakham saaf karti hai... Use sir mai choti gitti dikhti jise nikaal woh Dettol se use saaf karti hai fir cream aur patti laga Tony ko kehti hai...




Vimala... Ghaav kaafi gehra hai khoon bhi kaafi beh Gaya hai... Ise aspataal lekar Jana padega... Khoon ki battle bhi chadhani padegi... Isse dekh kar lagta hai private hospital hi lekar Jana padega... magar...




Tony... Magar itne paise kaha hai apne paas Tai tu kuch kar na tu bhi toh dacter hai...




Vimala... dacter nahi nurse hoon mai aur bina hospital yeh theek nahi hogi khoon kaafi beh Gaya hai... Battle toh chadhani padegi...




Tony... Private hospital pta hai na kitna paisa leta hai , hai tere pass itna paisa yaa mere paas... Tu kuch kar Tai bacha le ise...




Vimala... Mai kya Karun bhagwan thodi hoon khoon chadhana hi padega na ise... aacha sun ek kaam kar mai iske khoon ka sample tujhe de deti hoon isse lab mai le jaa waha se tu iska milta julta khoon le aana saath mai kuch saman likh kar de deti hoon theek hai...



Tony... Haan theek hai yeh kar lete hai bas kaise bhi bacha le ise...



Fir Vimala Tony ko khoon ka sample de deti hai... Aur saath mai samaan ki parchi bhi...



Vimala.. paise hai na tere pass...



Tony... Haan kuch paise hai...




Vimala kuch paise Tony ke haath mai rakh deti hai.. inko bhi leta jaa kam pade jaane par kaam aayenge...




Tony bhi furti mai waha se nikal jata hai... lab phunch woh sample lab waale ko deta hai jise lab waala jama kar 2ghante baad Tony ko bulata hai tab tak woh wanha se nikal chai cigarette jala leta hai... Aur sochne lagata hai woh anjaan ke liye kyun dukhi ho raha hai jisko woh janta tak nahi... aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua uske saath...




Kareeb 2 ghante intjaar karne ke baad lab phunch woh report leta hai aur maasi ke kahi anusaar blood bank phunch jata hai blood lene... Jaha use pta chalta hai khoon paise ke saath saath donate krne par milta hai... Ab woh kya kare kuch soch hi Raha tha ki uth kar doctor ke cabin mai jaa usse baat krta hai...




Morning... 11:05 Am...




Location Basti...




Ale le le... Baacha kya hua chup ho ja Munna... Bhook lagi hai tereko... Ruk abhi teri Tai tereko duddu pilwayegi... Aeee kanta idher aa...



Kanta... Ha maa aapne bulaya...




( Kanta... Maasi ki bahu Nazim se 2 saal pehle baag kar shaadi kar chuki hai... Dedh saal ki ladki hai ise darasal... Bhaag kar saadi bhi isi chakkar mai ki thi usne Nazim se warna usko nazim mai koi intrest nahi tha... Jawani ke Josh mai do baar Nazim se jismani sambadh ban gye the uske... magar kam jankari hone ke karan baccha theher gaya... Girwane ke liye bhi paise lagte hai jo uske paas the nahi aur yeh paap uske haatho hone se bach Gaya... Kam Umar mai maa banne ke dar se bhaag kar Nazim se shaadi Karli...




Nazim toh kanta ki jawani dekh laar lapakata tha kaise mana karta bass fir... Usne bhi ise hi apni kismat maan liya aur basti mai aa gayi rehne... Kuch hi din Mai Nazim ki sacchai use pta chal gayi woh kaisa hai kya kaam karta hai... Jisse use bhut dukh hua magar ab kar. Bhi kya sakte the...




Vimala shaadi se nakhush thi usne kaafi din tak Nazim se baat nahi ki.. magar use apani bahu kaafi pasand aayi isliye usne Nazim ko maaf kar diya... Magar uske kaam ko leker abhi bhi maarti thi... Nazim kaha kisi ki sunta maar kha kar woh wohi kaam karta jo Tony kehta... kher kuch din Mai Vimala ko Kanta ki sacchai bhi pta chal gayi usne Nazim ko bhut mara aur ghar se nikaal diya kanta se use koi sikhayt nahi thi... Kuch time baad Nazim ko baachi hui jiske karan usne Nazim ko maaf kar diya jisse baachi ko pita ki kami na ho... )

Vimala... Kaha thi tu tab se awaaz de rahi hun mai... yeh le bacche ko bhookh lagi hai jara ise doodh pila de...



Kanta.... Maa yeh kon hai kiska baccha hai...




Vimala... Woh sab baad mai pehle Jo boli tereko woh kar... Baacha bhuka hai syad kal se kuch nahi khaya isne... Iski maa bhi hosh mai nahi hai yeh le jaldi kar...



Kanta Vimala ke haath se bacche ko leti hai... Baacha uske goad mai aa Rona band kar deta hai aur muhh bana kar doodh pilana ka ishara karta hai... Kanta bhi baache ko dekhti hai.. bhut hi masoom sa rang bilkull Saaf gora Kanta ko bhi bete ki chahat thi magar woh ab nazim ko paas bhi nahi aane Dena chahti thi... Roz daaru peekar nazim hath bhi utha deta tha fir subh maa se maar khata.. ab uske dil mai Nazim ke liye koi pyaar nahi tha na izzat pati waali.. kher Kanta bacche ko ek tak dekhti hai fir achanak hi maathe par ek pappi de deti hai... Aur apne blause ka hook khol ek side se doodh nikal use pilane lagti hai... Baacha bhi ghat ghat doodh peene lagta hai kuch der mai shant hokar so jata hai...



Vimala kaafi der se apne bete ka intezar kar rahi jo kal se gayab tha... Aur Tony bhi ab tak nahi aaya... Usne apne paas mai rakhi ek glucose ki bottle Yashoda ko laga di ab woh bhi khatam hone ko aayi thi saath mai Yashoda ki halat bhi bigadti jaa rahi thi haath pair Peele pad rahe the khoon ki kami ki wajah se...



Kaafi waqt gujar jaane ke baad Tony ghar aa gaya magar saath mai Nazim bhi tha jo Tony ko Sahara deker laya tha... Vimala Tony ki aise dekh ghabra gayi aur uski taraf aage badhti ki usse pehle Tony ne khoon ki bottle Vimala ki taraf badha di jise dekh Vimala pehle to hairaan hui fir Tony ko dekh sab kuch samjh aa gaya... Blood bank mai Tony ne khud ka blood de kar exchange mai blood laya hai... Use hairat bhi ho rahi thi Tony aisa kar sakta magar fir jaldi seusne Tony ko paas hi padi dusri charpayi par baitha diya.. aur kanta ko awaaz de Tony ko kuch bana kar dene ko kaha... Fir usne apne globes pehne aur Lag gayi Yashoda ki marham patti karne fir khoon ki bottle laga di saath mai kuch dawaiyan bhi yashoda ko di...




Evening time... 7:35 PM...




Subh se shaam ho gayi thi... sab log abhi bhi wanhi ke wanhi the khoon ki bottle bhi khatam ho gayi ab bas sabko intejaar tha Yashoda ke hosh mai aane ka jo sayad thoda lamba chalne wala tha...



Kanta ne samjhdaari dikhate hue sabke liye khana banaya... Jise Nazim ne bhar pet thoos kar khaya magar Tony ko bhookh nahi thi... Vimala ne kaha bhi use magar woh chup raha aur khana hone ke baad Nazim ke saath bahar chala gaya... Vimala subh se Tony ko harkat notice kar rahi thi... ek anjaan ladki ke liye usko itna fikar dekh woh ander hi ander khush bhi bhut thi...

Kanta Sabko khana khila Dene ke baad kaafi der tak bacche ke saath khelti rahi saath mai apni beti ko bhi sambhal rahi thi... Fir baad mai dono ko baari baari doodh pila kar uska di...



Tony ko khud samjh nahi aa raha tha woh aaj se pehle kisi ke liye itna dukhi nahi hua tha... Uske pita ke jaane ke baad toh usne galat kaam krne mai koi kasar nahi chodi thi.. har waqt maarpet Krna yehi pasand tha use... Mager pata nahi q use aaj Yashoda ko dekh dukh bhi ho raha tha aur khushi bhi ki woh uske liye kuch kar raha hai... Shayad uske pita sahi kehte the... Kisi ki madat karne par Khud ko garv mehsoos hoga... Shayad uske pita ke yeh antim sabd uski zindagi ka naya aarambh tha.... Aur zero se Hero banne ki shuruaat bhi par kiski nazron mai Yashoda ki... Jise woh janta tak nahi...



5 days later...



Location.. Basti...



Yashoda... Bhaisahab mera baacha bhookha hai please thoda sa doodh de dijiye.... mai aapke haath jodti hoon usne kal se kuch nahi khaya hai...


Introduction....



Yashoda... Age 21...




Tony.... Age 28...



Vimala... ( Maasi / Tai ) age 52



Nazim... ( Vimala's Son ) Age 26...




Kanta... ( Nazim wife ) age 22 one daughter... Age **

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( KALYUG... Part 9 )



( RECAP... 14 year's... )





14 year's Later...



Location... Basti...





( RECAP... )



Chalo Jaan lete hain in 14 saalon mai kya hua... Sabse pehle baat karte hai Yashoda ki...




YASHODA...




Yashoda basti mai kuch hi dino mai ghull mill gayi... Basti ke logo ko jab uske baare me pata chala toh sab ne uska dil kholkar swagat kiya... Jo peeth peeche buraiyan karti thi ab band ho chuki thi.. sab use ijjat se pesh aate the isme kuch had tak Vimala ka bhi haath tha Usne Yashoda ko basti mai ghull mill hone mai kaafi madat ki...



Yashoda padhi likhi nurse thi woh kaam karna chahti thi magar Tony use kahikaam nahi karne deta har baar jaha bhi kaam karne ki koshish karti dusre din use noukri se nikaal diya jata... yeh baat woh bhi samjh Rahi thi aisa kyun ho Raha hai... Magar woh na usko kuch keh paati na aisa karne se rok paati... Dono ke beech Rista kya hai dono nahi samjh paaye the...




Tony uski jindagi mai bhagwan bankar hi aaya tha jab sab logo ne uski madat karne se mana kar diya tab Uski zindagi mai aakar usne jo shahra diya... Dono ke beech jayada time khamoshi rehti thi... Kuch time mai hi Yashoda ne ghar ko aache se sambhal liya tha ghar ka raashan paani sab cheez mai Tony ne madat ki uski ab khana ghar Yashoda hi bana liya karti thi...




Din mai Kanta aur Vimala bhi aa jaya karti saath mai Kanta ki beti jiska naam Sweety rakha tha woh din bhar Nandu ke saath khelti raat mai bhi usi ke saath khelte khelte so jaati... Yashoda ek beti aur paa kar khush thi... Dheere dheere Nandu bada hua School jaane laga Yashoda din bar bour ho jaati toh ghar mai chota sa dawa khana bhi khol liya jaha woh aksar choti moti khansi bhukar ki dawai aur patti kar diya karti thi... Iss par Tony ne bhut mana kiya magar Yashoda ki zidd ke aage usne bhi haar maan li... Ab Yashoda ki yahi dincharya thi din bhar Nandu aur Sweety ki shararatain aur clinic ke saath Kanta aur Vimala ke saath paakar woh basti mai jam gayi thi...



Dhere dhere woh apni purani zindigi bhool gayi thi... Jaha woh maa papa ke saath raha karti thi... Maa ke jaane ke baad aaj bhi woh pita ji ka intezar karti usne unhe dhoonde ki koshish ki Tony ki madat se magar woh nahi mile... Yashoda bhi wanha jana chahti apne ghar ek baar bas pita ji se milne magar har baar Tony mana kar deta woh jayada kuch keh bhi nahi paati... Yaad mai aksar uski aankhein nam ho jaati magar Nandu usko rota dekh khud rone lagta isliye Yashoda uske saamne ro bhi nahi paati thi...




Aaj woh yaha iss seher mai sahi salamat hai tou ek wajah pitaji bhi the jinhone himmat dikhatehue use waha se door bhej diya bina kisi baat ki parwaah kiye... Chup chup kar dil mai abhi bhi apne pita se milne ki ek umeed thi ek aakhri baat dekhne ki unhe...



TONY...




Wanhi Tony ki baat Karen... Tony ki zindagi Yashoda ke aane se poori tarah se badal gayi thi... Kha woh bematlab mai jhagda karta tha marpeet karta tha... Ab sab kuch chod woh kaam par jata hai paise kamata hai jisse ghar kharch chal sake... Usne apne upar Yashoda aur Nandu ki zimmedari le li thi... Ab kehna mushkil hai ki woh pitaji ke kiye waade ki wajah se aisa karraha hai yaa uske man mai kuch hai yeh Tony hi janta hai... kher Tony bhi shaam ka khana uske haath ka khata aur wanhi bahar khatiya par let jata...



Kaafi log uske aisa karne se khush the toh kuch pareshan bhi the... Jo use yashoda aur uske beech kya hai puchte rehte jisse Tony chidd jaya karta tha qki woh bhi nahi samjh paa raha tha uski itni parwaah q kar raha hai... kuch saal aise hi chala jab log baar usse puchte toh woh pareshan ho gaya tha jawaab de de kar uski yeh pareshani ek din chote Nandu ne door kar di use baba keh kar...




Tony uske muhh se baba sun foole nahi sama paa raha tha usne logo ka muh chupp kar diya... Yeh Mera beta hai Tony ka beta... Ab tak Tony jo thoda asmanjas mai rehta tha ab ghar phunchte hi khush ho jata jab Nandu baba baba keh kar uske aage peeche ghumta... Rista Use Nandu ne bata Diya tha logo ka muh bhi chup ho gya...




Khud ko poori tarah se badal liya tha usne but kuch aadatain nahi badal paati jaise Uska aur Parul ka Rishta... Usne khud ko kaafi samay tak Rok kar rakha mgar tha toh ek mard hi Parul ke aage jayada time na tik paya... Uski aur Parul ki ek beti bhi thi jo Nandu se ek saal hi choti thi... Aaj bhi Parul ke paas jata hai ab beti hai toh pita ke naate kuch farz toh banta hai uska samay dene ka magar usne ABHI TAK Parul se shaadi nahi ki... Parul ne bhut baar kaha magar Tony mana kar deta... Basti mai sabko Parul aur Tony ke baare mai pata chala kaafi logo ne peeth peeche baatain ki magar koi samne se Tony ko kuch na keh saki... Yashoda ko jab yeh baat pta chali toh usne koi pratikriya nahi di... Tony uski nazar mai bhagwan tha woh bhala usko kaise galat thera deti... Jisne use nayi zindagi rehne ko ghar pyaar krne waala pariwar diya woh kaise kuch galat kar sakta hai...




VIMALA...



Baat kare Vimala ki toh woh sabhi cheezon se kaafi khush thi... Tony jiski umeed nahi thi woh sudher raha tha... Haan maanti thi kami hai usme magar har kisi ke ander ek na ek Kami rehti hi hai... Yeh soch usne usse jayada danta nahi... Yashoda ke aane se ek beti bhi mill gayi thi use yashoda use maa kehkar bulati thi... Aur uski khushi ko dugna Nandu ne DADI.. bolkar kar diya tha...



Nazim bhi thoda bhut sudhar gya tha ab ghar par jhagda nahi karta tha... Time se ghar aa jata khana khata do baache din bhar shararatain karte use ab zindagi se kuch aur nahi chahiye tha... Bas ek fikar usethi Yashoda ki usne shaadi nahi ki thi na Tony ne... Woh dono se bol bol kar thak gayi thi Yashoda har baar use mana kar deti... Tony ki use jayada fikar nahi thi Qki uske paas Parul thi magar Yashoda... Yashoda uski ek na sunti aur kasam de kar chup Kara deti...



KANTA...




Uski zindagi mai Yashoda se jayada Nandu ne balaav laya... Woh use Yashoda ke saath maa ka pyaar deti apna dhoodh pilaya 4 saal tak Nandu ne uska dhoodh peena nahi chhoda... Woh apne beti se jayada Nandu ko pyaar karne lagi thi woh tha hi itna pyaara... Usne hi Kanta ki zindagi mai aakar ek bete ki kami ko poora kar diya tha... Nazim se use koi lagwaav nahi tha na jaane kitne saal ho gae the use sharirik shambandh banaye usko kami khalti thi lekin woh Baachon ke pyaar ke aage sab bhool jati...



Magar kabhi kabhi Nandu jab 4 saal ka tha dhoodh Peete waqt woh dusre haath uski chuchi daba deta... Jisse Kanta garam ho jati aur dhoodh pilate waqt kabhi kabhi sthalgit ho jati thi... Use baad mai apni harkat par Sharm aati kaise maa hai woh beteke chune se aisa chii kaise ho sakta hai... Magar jab kabhi Nandu use kehta bhookh lagi maa duddu chahiye toh woh usemana nahi kar paati thi... Beti Sweety bhi Nandu ko dekh maa se dhoodh mangi toh Kanta apna dusra chucha nikaal use pila deti thi... Dono din bhar saath khelte saath rehte saath hi so jaate...




Beti ke hone par se hi aaj kal maa ko chinta bani rehti hai magar jab Sweety ko Nandu ka saath paakar uski chinta kaafi had tak kam ho gayi thi... Use ab pta tha ki sweety ka dhyan Nandu aache se rakh lega usko pareshan honeki jarurat nahi thi... Sweety jaise jaise badi hui usme badlaab aane shuru hue toh Kanta use Nandu se door sone ko kehti magar iss baat Sweety maa se jhagda kar leti aur Nandu ke saath hi soti thi... Usne bhi thak haar kar dono ko kuch kehna sahi nahi samjha... socha bade ho jayenge apne aap samjh aa jayegi...



NAZIM...



Uske baare mai kya hi kahe... Yashoda ke aane se uski zindagi jaise tabaah ho gayi thi... kaha woh pehle din bhar shraab Peeta nayi nayi ladkiyon ko chodta... Nahi maanti toh Tony ke naam se unke saath zabardasti karta tha... Ab achanak Tony ke sudhar jaane se uski zindagi khtam si ho gayi thi... Daaru peena kam raat ko jab Kanta par apna gussa nikalne jaata toh woh bhi use dhakke maar kar Bahar kar deti thi... Aur kehti agar mujhse zabardasti karne ki koshish ki toh yashoda se keh dungi woh Tony se keh kar tumhari haddi pasli ek kar dega...




Tony ka naam sun uski gaand fatt jaati thi... Sath me Yashoda par kaafi gussa bhi aata tha ek woh uske saath kuch kar nahi sakta tha qki harwaqt Tony uski hifazat karta tha raat mai ghar ke bahar sota tha... Yashoda ko pehle baar dekh uske Mann mai jo uske zism ko dekh hawas bhar gayi abhi tak dabaya hua tha intzaar tha use bas sahi mauke ka... Jab woh apni hasrat Yashoda ke zism ko nooch kar poori kare aur saath mai uski zindagi jo jhand ho rakhi hai uska badla bhi le sake... Dekhte hai intzaar kab tak chalta hai abhi tak use mauka nahi mila...



NANDU...




Ab chalte hai meri dekhte hai mai kya kar raha hoon....



Woh jaane se pehle mai aapko apne baare mai bata dena chahta hoon... mera naam Nandkishor hai pyaar se sab Nandu bulate hai... Meri teen Maa aur do behne hai... Are are confuse ho gye na teen kaise toh chaliye bata deta hoon... Meri ek Maa jisne janam diya use mai kabhi dekh nahi paya kaisi thi magar itna keh sakta hun meri Yashoda maa se kam nahi hongi... Jo pyaar usne mila mai apne aap ko bhut khudkismat samjhta hoon...




Dusri meri Maa Kanta mujhe bhut pyaar karti hai dono maa ke pyaar ko kon jayada kon kam yeh toh bhagwan bhi nahi jaan sakta hai... mai toh khush hoon jab kabhi khelne ke chakkar mai daant padti toh yeh maa humesha mera bachaav mai aa Yashoda maa ko bhi daant deti... he he he...




Kher teesri aur aakhiri maa Parul unko mai aai kehta hun jab bhi baba ke saath basti mai ghumta yaa unke ghar jaata toh woh mujhe bhut laad pyaar karti... Ab yeh pyaar mujhe hai yaa baba ke saamne dikhawa yeh mai keh nahi sakta woh mujhe pyaar deti mai unhe aai hi bulata...




Do behan Sweety aur Dimple urf ( Dimpi ) Jo behne kehne par badak jaati hai sweety ka toh chlata hai woh bachpan se mereko maarti thi jab use didi kehta bhut der tak gussa rehti jab tak use mana nahi leta khana nahi khati thi... Magar Dimple uska kuch samjh nahi aata tha Sweety ko dekh uski tarah banne ki kosish karti har waqt yaa usse aage... kabhi gaal par pappi leleti kabhi kuch harkat jisse Sweety chidd jaati ab woh aisa Sweety ko dikhane karti yaa kuch aur baat thi yeh aaj tak mujhe nahi pta...



Aakhiri baat jo mujhe nahi pata magar mere baare mai dusre log kehte hai ki meri kahi baatain sach ho jaati hai... Jaise ki Dadi kaam se bahar gayi thi mujhe laddu khane ka man hua toh maine bola aayi laddo khana hai itne mai dadi ander aayi aur unke hathon mai laddo dekh sab chonk gye jo woh mere liye layi thi...



Aise hi bhut si baatain jo mai gaur nahi karta qki mujhe iss cheezon se fark nahi padta... Mai apni masti mai Magan rehta... Aisa nahi tha ki har kahi baat sach jo jati yaa mere paas super power thi balki kabhi kabhi achanak muh se kuch nikal jata jo mere man mai chal raha hota woh sach ho jata tha...




( Kehte hai na din mai kahi ek baat sach ho jati qki jeev par maa saraswati viraj karti hai iss case ko bhi aisa samjh lijiye... Hazam aasani se ho jayega )



Location Government HR school...




Afternoon... Time... 2:30 PM...





Chalte hai meri taraf...Mai bachkar bhag raha tha Sweety mujhe pakadne ke liye peeche bhaag rahi thi qki school mai uski doston ke saamne maine use didi keh diya tha... Toh chaliye dekhte hai aage kya hota hai... Kahani ko mere nazariye se...




Mai... hhhhhh Sweety sorry... hhhh sweety maaf kar de... Hhhhhh ab aur nahi bhaga jaa raha...



Sweety... Hhhh Nandu ke baache tu haath aa ja ek baar mere... Hhhh aaj tujhe nahi chodne waali hhhh ruk Naa...



Mai... hhhhh Pagal hai kyaa... mai nahi ruk raha mujhe pta hai tu mujhe maregi... Hhhhhh




Sweety... hhhh Aacha nahi marungi please ruk jaa dekh mere pair dukhne lage hai... Hhhh ab aur nahi bhaag sakti... Nandu ruk jaa...




Mai... hhhh Mai nahi rukne waala aai ke paas hi jaker rukunga... hhhh unse sikayat karunga teri tu roj mujhe maarti hai... Hhhhhh Terese aachi Dipmi hai mujhe kitna pyaar karti hai...



Sweety... Aahhh ruk jaa Nandu...



Sweety ki aag sun Mai peeche palat kar dekhta hun toh Sweety pessene se lat path mere peeche bhaag rahi thi tabhi mere muh se aachanak nikal jata hai... Sweety sambhal ke...



Aur dhadammmm karke sweety gir padti hai mai bhaagte hue uske paas jata hoon... Usko uthta hun woh mere baal pakad leti hai...




Mai... Aaahhh kya kar rahi hai chod mere baal sweety choddd aaahhh lag rahi hai...


Sweety... Nahi chodungi kya keh raha tha mujhse aachi Dimpi hai woh chudail ki barabri tune mujhse ki... Kya samjhata hai apne aapko... Aaj teri khair nahi...




Mai... Aahhh chod de sweety sorry ab se nahi bolunga promise chod na...




Sweety... Nahi chodungi aaj dekhti hun kon bacahta hai himmat kaise hui Teri dimpi ko merese aacha kehne ki... Aachi tarah se jaanti hun uss kamini ko woh mujhe har waqt chidati rehti hai... Aur tu usko aacha keh raha Aaj teri khair nahi...




Mai... Aacha maaf kar de please lag rahi hai sweety dekh kapde gande ho gaye maa gussa karegi unhe batana padega kya hua... Mai toh bol dunga jo tune kiya jisper badi maa mujhe bacha lengi fir soch le tera kya haal hoga...




Sweety... Mujhe dhamki deta hai ruk tujhe batati hun... Aaj nahi sunne waali kisi ki jo chaahe keh de tu aai se maar kha lungi aur kya...




Mai... Aacha theek hai mere maa sorry promise aaj se tujhe Dimpi se barabri nahi krunga woh chudail waise bhi mujhe pasand nhi harwaqt chipki rehti hai tu toh jaanti hai... Chal khadi ho saare kapde kharab ho gye...



Sweety... Haan toh maine kaha tha kya Tujhse jhagda karne ke liye... Tujhe pta hai na mai kitna pyaar karti tujhse tu har waqt Dimpi kar mujhe pareshan karta hai... Dekh mujhe chot lag gayi khoon bhi aa raha hai...



Mai... ( Pareshan hote hue ) haan yeh toh dikkat ho gayi ek kaam kar uth tu Ghar chalte hai maa ko bol denge gir gayi tu jis chakkar mai kapde kharab ho gaye... Teri patti bhi ho jayegi daant se bhi Bach jayenge...



Sweety... Aaahhhh nahi uth paa rahi Nandu madat kar na...



Mai... ( Use sahara dekar khada karte hue ) kitna khaati hai tu ufff chal jaldi kar ab...



Sweety... Kya kaha tune...




Mai... Kuch nahi woh bass chal na... Maa gussa karengi waise hi kaafi late ho gaya jaldi chalte hai...




Jaha mai Sweety ko lekar ghar jaa raha tha wanhi ghar par kuch aur hi chal raha tha...



Location Basti... Yashoda House'...



Afternoon... Same Time...




Vimala... Beti kitne saal ho gaye mai tujhe bol bolkar thak gayi abhi bhi waqt hai shaadi kar le... mai samjhti hun mai bhi aurat hun kuch jarurat hoti hai sarir ki usko kab tak aise bardast karegi... Aakhir kya dikkat hai...



Yashoda... Maa aap samjhti kyun nahi hai mai aise hi theek hun... Nandu ke saath khush hoon mujhe ab kisi cheez ki chaah nahi hai pyaar krne ke liye didi hai aap hai ek beti bhi hai ab mujhe kuch nahi chahiye...




Vimala... Magar beti...



Yashoda... Please maa... Kuch mat kahiye maanti hun aapki baat ek had tak sahi hai magar maine yeh zindagi khud ke liye chun Li ab mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...



Vimala baat sun dukhi ho jaati hai toh Yashoda uske hath par hath rakh kehti hai...



Yashoda... Maan lo agar kal ko maine shaadi kar li toh mujhe aapko chod kar jana padega Naa jaane woh kaisa hoga kya mai jaise hoon waisa apnayega mujhe... Meri shaadi ko lekar pitaji ne bhi kaafi sapne saza rakhe the ab unke na rehte mai shaadi ka soch bhi nahi sakhti...



Vimala... ( Kuch sochte hue ) Ek baat bAtayegi sach sach... Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...



Yashoda... Isme kya hai maa woh bhut aache hai woh mere liye bhagwan hai unki wajah se aaj jo kuch bhi mai hoon yaha aapke beech...




Vimala... Are waise nahi Pati ke roop mai Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...



Yashoda uski baat sun khamosh ho jati hai...



Vimala... Dekh mai yeh nahi keh rahi ki woh bhut aacha hai... Har kisi mai Kami rehti hai magar shayad kahi na kahi woh bhi tumhe pasand karta isliye ab tak usne bhi shaadi nahi ki... Tu kya kehti hai iss baare mai...



Yashoda... Mai kya kahun mai mere dil mai aisa kuch nahi unke liye... Haan maanti hun woh bhut aache hai bhut izzat karti hun unki magar shaadi samjh nahi aata maa pta nahi kyun...



Vimala... Agar tere pita ji ko Tony pasand hota toh tu kya kehti...




Yashoda... Pitaji ki pasand par mai kaise mana kar sakti hoon maa woh jo karte mere aache ke liye hi karte... Lekin woh baad ki baat hai maa abhi yaha nahi toh aap yeh baatain na karen Baachon ke aane ka bhi samay ho gaya hai... Abhi tak aaye kyun nahi mai dekh kar aati hoon...



Yashoda abhi uthne ko hoti hai tabhi use Nandu ki awaaz sunayi deti hai...



Mai.. Baba Maa kaha hai... Dekho Sweety ke chot lag gayi aap unhe bula do... Tab tak mai ise clinic mai le jata hoon...



Yashoda bahar aakar dekhti hai Toh Tony use nazar aata hai jo ek baar use aakhon mai dekh bahar nikal jata hai... Dono ke beech yeh khamoshi ek aam baat thi jayada kaam hone par hi woh baat Kiya karte the magar aaj yeh khamoshi Yashoda ko kuch alag lag rahi thi saath hi Tony ke haav bhaav kher... Woh sab cheez ko darkinaar kar clinic ki taraf chal padti hai...




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( KALYUG... PART 6 )


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5 days later...




Location.. Basti



Yashoda... Bhaisahab mera baacha bhookha hai please thoda sa doodh de dijiye.... mai aapke haath jodti hoon usne kal se kuch nahi khaya hai...



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Vimala... Kya hua beti... Sab theek hai... kuch nahi hua dekho theek ho tum............



Yashoda sir mai dard ho raha tha... Ek anjaan mahila ki awaaz sun aakhen kholti hai apne chaaro taraf dekhti hai toh khud ko ek chote se kamre mai paati hai... Jiske ek taraf ek khtiya laga hua tha ek par woh leti thi... Aur ek anzaan chehre ko saamne dekh sochne lagti hai ki woh yaha kaise... Tabhi use raat ki baatain yaad aane lagti hai jo kuch uske saath hua tha... Woh yaad karte waqt woh fir se rone lagti hai tabhi woh aas paas kuch dhoondne lagti hai... Aur uthne lagti hai magar shareer kaafi kamjor ho gaya tha 5 din behosh thi sir mai bhi chot lagi thi aakhen bhi mushkil se khul rahi thi koshish karte hi woh wapis bed par gir padti hai... Aakhir mai aurat ko dekh kar uske muh se do sabd hi nikalte hai..



Yashoda... Mera baccha...



Vimala bhi ab tak paristhiti samjh chuki thi... Woh aage badh Yashoda ko sirhane aache se leta deti fir Kanta ko awaaz laga bulati hai...



Vimala... Sab theek hai baache ko bhi kuch nahi hua... Abhi doodh pee kar so raha hai roko mai bulati hun.... Bahuuu.. jara baache ko leke aana...



Tabhi kamre mai Kanta bahar aati hai jiske haath mai baache ko dekh Yashoda apne hath faila deti hai... Jaise bacche ko maang Rahi ho.. Kanta bhi bacche ko Yashoda ke ek side Sula deti hai aur Yashoda bhi haath fer kar check karti hai woh theek toh hai na... Jab use tasalli ho jaati hai ki baccha theek hai tab kahi jaake use chain aata hai woh maathe par ek kiss karke use apne side se chipka leti hai...



Dono saas bahu bhi yeh sab dekh rahi thi... lekin dono khamosh thi... Yashoda abhi poori theek nahi hui thi kuch hi der mai use fir se neend aa jati hai aur woh bister par so jaati hai... Ek side se baache ko kass kar padke hui thi Yashoda ki koi le kar na bhaag Jaye... Kanta ko lagta hai Bacche ko takleef na phunche isliye woh aage badh use door karne ko hoti hai ki Vimala use mana kar deti hai aur ek tak nihaar kar dono kaamo mai lag jaati hai...





Evening... Time 6:34 PM...




Vimala... Ab kaisa lag raha hai tumhe beti...



Yashoda... Jee theek hoon... lekin aap kon ho aur mai yaha kaise... kaha hun mai...



Vimala... tum abhi mere ghar par ho aur mangalwar raat tum mere bete ko ***** jagah par mili thi... ( Aur fir use poori baat batati hai )




Yashoda... Jee aapka bhut bhut shukriya aapne itni madat ki... Mai aapki jindagi bhar ehsaan mand rahungi... Aapne mere bete ka khayal rakha... Mai marte dum Tak aapka karz nahi bhulungi...




Vimala... Are isme ehsaan waali kya hai beti maine jo kiya insaniyat ke naate kiya... Kisi ki madat karna toh punya ka kaam hota hai... Yeh toh farz tha humhara...



Yashoda... Kaash aapke jaise har koi soch rakhta toh mai...



Bolte bolte chupp ho gayi fir achanak hi aankhon se aansun behne lage... Jo kuch bhi kuch hi din usne dekha kahi bhi use insaniyat toh chodo kisi ne usper Daya bhi nahi dikhayi thi... Pehle hospital fir ghar fir maa aur baad mai uski Chachi ek ek kar uske saamne se ghumne lage jo baatain usne suni thi jo kahi thi usse...




Vimala bhi Yashoda ko dekh rahi thi shayad koi baat hogi... Usne aage badh Yashoda ke ek side aake hath par apna hath rakh diya aur dusre haath se uske aansun ponch diye... Yashoda bhi Vimala ke hath ko kass kar pakad li aur apne seene se laga kar fur fur kar rone lagi... Use sab kuch yaad aa raha tha jo kuch bhi inn dino hua woh bolna chaah rahi apna dard batna magar uske muh se sabd nhi nikl rahe the... Bas aansun beh rahe the... Vimala bhi shithti ko samjh apne hath use pakde rehne Diya aur dusre se uske sir ko sehlane lagi... Kanta bhi khana bana kar kamre mai aa gayi thi... Woh bhi dekh rahi rahi Yashoda ko rote magar abhi usne bhi kuch nahi kaha...




Kaafi time rone ke baad jab kamre mai shaanti hoti hai toh Vimala Kanta ko paani laane ka kehti hai... Fir ek taraf se madat karke Yashoda ko baitha deti hai aur Kanta ke haath se gilaas le Yashoda ko paani pilati hai... paani peene ke baad....



Vimala... Koi baat nahi beti jo hua so bhul Jaa sab theek hai... Yaha tumhe na baache ko koi pareshan nahi karega....




Thode time mai Yashoda bhi nischint ho jati hai aur Vimala use apne baare mai baatain karne lagti Jisse Yashoda ka mann bhi halka ho jata aur chinta bhi kam ki abhi woh shurakshit hai... dhere dhere Kamla ka bhi parichay karati woh bhi apne baare Yashoda ko batane lgati hai tabhi bacche ki neend khul jaati hai aur woh rone lagta hai... Yashoda bhi use goad mai utha chup karane lagti hai tabhi....



Vimala... Kaafi samay se so raha hai beti yeh badmash aise chup nahi hoga doodh pila de ise tab chup hoga... Kamla ko bhi roz pareshan karta hai uthte hi doodh na do toh rota hi rehta hai...




Vimala ki baat sun khamosh ho jati hai aur nazrein neeche kar use ab Darr lagne lagta hai... Ki kahi unhe yeh baat pata chali ki woh iski maa nahi hai toh yeh kya sochenge kahi mujhe galat samjh baache se alag toh nahi kar denge...



Aise hi kafi saare khayal uske Mann mai aa rahe the chinta ek baar fir uske maathe par ubhar aayi thi... Vimala do teen baar bol chuki thi Yashoda ko magar Yashoda uski baat par kuch react hi nahi kar rahi thi... Bas neeche sir rakhte hue bacche ko kass leti hai kahi usse woh cheen na le... Vimala bhi Yashoda ko hairan dekh rahi thi doodh pilane ka kehte hi kya ho gaya ise sunn kyun nahi rahi... Woh do teen awaaz deti hai Yashoda ko itne mai bahar se Tony bhi aa jata hai saath hi Nazim jo laar lapakata hua Yashoda ko dekh raha tha... Kanta bhi aa jati hai... Jab Yashoda nahi sunti toh Vimala aage jakar use jhakjhor deti hai...




Vimala... Beti kya hua theek hai na... Kab se awaaz de rahi hoon baacha ro raha hai doodh pila de use...




Yashoda jo kab se sun rahi thi ab use jawaab dena tha uska dil bhi ghabra Raha tha sablog use galat na samjhe... Wanhi Nazim ke chehre par muskaan thi man hi man kuch chal raha tha... Tony aur Kanta dono yashoda ko dekh rahe the samjhne ki koshish kar rahe the ki yaha kya chal raha hai... Yashoda kaafi koshish karti hai kehne ki magar uski jubaan uska saath nhi deti aansun fir aa jate h uske Darr se yeh bhi galat na samjh le use bacche ko dur na kar de...




Vimala bhi Yashoda ko dekh pareshan ho gayi akhiri abhi sab theek tha achanak kya ho gaya.. woh Yashoda ko pass baith jati hai uske sir par hath fer shaant karti hai aur paani pilati hai...



Vimala... Kya hua beti bata mujhe... chinta mat kar beti kaha hai na maa hun maa samjh kar bata kya baat hai jo tujhe pareshan kar rahi hai...



Yashoda ek baar fir nischint ho gayi thi magar abhi bhi soch rahi thi ki kaise bole...




Yashoda... Ji.. woo mujhe doodh nahi aata...



Itna bol chup ho jaati hai...



Vimala... Are toh isme ghabrane waali kya baat hai beti hota hai kabhi kabhi aise isme itna kya darna... Mai Khud yeh aspataal hai na... ******* Usme nurse hoon mai jaanti hun kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai dhoodh nahi aata waise ek baat btao...



Yashoda uski baat sun thoda nischint ho jati hai... Bina kahe hi uska kaam ban gya tha...


Vimala... Tum dekhne se iss sheher ki lagti nahi ho... Ho kha se tum , aur tum akele kaise woh bhi iss halat mai... Jabki Baache ko dekh kar lagta hai haal mai tumne ise janam diya hai... Tumhe toh abhi aaram ki jarurat honi chahiye tum wanha kaise phunchi...



Yashoda ek baar fir sochne lagi kaise bataye tabhi woh dekhti hai sab log uske bolne kawait kar rahe hai woh aur ghabra jati hai... Tabhi Vimala ek baar fir sir sehlane lagti hai ab tak woh samjh gayi jarur koi badi baat hai jiske liye yashoda khod ko taiyar kar rahi hai... Aur usko poora wishwas dilati hai apni baaton se hum sab tumhare saath hai... Yashoda kaafi der sochti hai fir...



Yashoda... Ji sach kaha aapne... mai yaha ki nahi hoon... ***** Sheher se hu... Aur mere maa baap... Meri maa ab iss duniya mai nahi hai...



Woh sab yaad karte ek bar fir ankhen nam ho gayi uski... Baaki sab usko dekh rahe the tabhi woh ek baar fir bolna chalu karti hai...



Yashoda... Mai ******* hospital mai nurse ka kaam karti thi wanha... ( Jo kuch hua sab ek ek kar batati hai )


Jise sun sab shocked ho jaate hai... Vimala hairaan thi wanhi Tony ki aankhon mai gussa aa gaya tha usne kass ke apni mutthi band kar li...



Vimala... Matlab... Yeh baccha... ( Bolte bolte ruk gayi )



Yashoda... Ji... Isko maine janam nahi diya hai... ( Kuch soch kar ) lekin mai iski maa hoon...



Bolkar chup ho jati hai aur baacha jo ro raha tha uske maathe par chum leti hai... Baacha bhi uski ungli pakad leta hai aur uhhaaa karta hua kuch der mai chup ho jata hai...



Thodi der kamre me shanti chaa jaati hai fir ek baar aur Yashoda bolna shuru karti itne din se jo kuch ho raha woh apna man halka karna chaah rahi thi...



Yashoda.... Fir jab hospital se mai ghar pahunchi uske baad... ( Poori baat btati hai jise sab sun hairan ho rahe the sabka muh khula reh gya tha Tony gusse ko daba raha tha )



Fir jab hum ander gaye Toh mAa... ( Ek baar fir woh rone lagi aur jo kuch bhi hua sabko batane lagi... Jisesun sabke aankhon mai aansun aa gaye... Tony aur Nazim ko chod kar... Nazim ko jayada fark nahi pada Wanhi Tony ka gussa ab thoda shant ho humdardi mai badal gaya tha... )




Fir uske baad jab subh... ( Yashoda bolti rahi baaki sab hakke bakke reh sunte rahe... Sabko hairaani ho rahi thi itna kuch ho gaya woh bhi itni Kam samay mai... Yashoda ne kaise itna kuch Saha... Vimala aur Kanta lagatar aansun Baha rahi thi wanhi Tony ki aankhon mai bhi paani aa gaya jab usne uss din raat waala waqkya Yashoda ke muhh se suna... Sath mai gussa bhi aa raha tha woh mutthi kaste hue room se bahar nikal jata hai... Uski peeche peeche Nazim bhi chal deta hai... )



Vimala sab kuch sunti hai aage badh Yashoda ko apne gale laga leti hai... aasun dono ke beh rahe the Kanta bhi sab kuch sun aansun Baha rahi thi... In sabka Rona sun baacha bhi rone lagta hai .. jise dekh sabka dhyan ek baar fir uss taraf jata hai... Aur Vimala Yashoda ke haath se bacche ko pakad Kanta ko awaaz de paas bulati hai... Yashoda hairan dekh rahi thi tabhi...




Vimala... Are bahu dekh nahi rahi mumma ro raha hai jaa ander ise doodh pila de...



Kanta bhi aage badh bacche ko goad mai le leti hai...



Yashoda... Didi iski koi jarurat nahi hai aapko bhi...



Kanta... Are jarurat kaise nahi hai Munna bukha hai aur waise bhi abhi tak tu hosh mai nahi thi mai hi ise apna doodh pila Rahi thi... Aur tere akele ka nhi mera bhi baccha hai aaj se nahi abhi se mera ek beti aur ek beta hai...




Yashoda... Lekin didi...



Kanta... Chup kar badi hun tujhse aache se jaanti hun sahi galat munne ko bhookh lagi hai mai abhi aati hun...



Keh bina koi baat kiye baace ko le dusre kamre mai chali jaati hai... Yashoda ko bas uski peeth dikhti hai woh hairan ho jati hai Kanta ke muhh se baatain sun wanhi Vimala ke chehre par muskaan aa jati hai...



Night... Time... 9 : 32 PM...


location... Temple...



Aadmi... Haan janeman aa gaya bass... Haan band kar di phunch hi raha hoon... Aaj dekh chinaal kaise teri leta hoon... Haan haan le li hai goli tu bhi kapde utar kar nangi hoja aaj bhut man raha teri peeche se lunga... Pyar se lunga na janeman kuch nahi hoga tujhe... Haan theek hai bas aa raha hun... Haan mera toh abhi se khada ho gaya tu phone rakh mai aata hun.. haan chal bye...



Aadmi phone par baat kar raha tha... Tabhi woh dukan se bhar aata aur shutter girane lagta hai ki uske Peeth par ek laat padti hai jisse woh aage gir jata hai uska muh shutter ko lagta hai... woh dard se karahte hue mudkar dekhta hai tabhi do aadmi kahe dikhayi dete hai...




....haath kaise lgaya madarchod...




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( KALYUG... Part 7 )



( KARMA... Jaisi Karni Waisi Bharni... )





Night... Time... 9 : 32 PM...





Aadmi... Haan janeman aa gaya bass... Haan band kar di phunch hi raha hoon... Aaj dekh chinaal kaise teri leta hoon... Haan haan le li hai goli tu bhi kapde utar kar nangi hoja aaj bhut man raha teri peeche se lunga... Pyar se lunga na janeman kuch nahi hoga tujhe... Haan theek hai bas aa raha hun... Haan mera toh abhi se khada ho gaya tu phone rakh mai aata hun.. haan chal bye...



Aadmi phone par baat kar raha tha... Tabhi woh dukan se bhar aata aur shutter girane lagta hai ki uske Peeth par ek laat padti hai jisse woh aage gir jata hai uska muh shutter ko lagta hai... woh dard se karahte hue mudkar dekhta hai tabhi do aadmi kahe dikhayi dete hai...



....haath kaise lgaya madarchod........




Continue....




Aadmi... Aaahhhh hhhh konnn ho tum... Mujhe kyun maar rahe ho...




Saaya 1... Suna hai Aurton par bhut hath chalte hai tere... Bas wohi dekhne aaya tha...




Thuuddd...




....chala ab hath mai bhi toh dekhon kaise tere hath chalte hai...



Thudddd...




...chala kya hua gareebon se nafrat hai tujhe woh aache nahi lagte...




Thuddd...




...agar koi paise waali mahila hoti toh uske saath bhi yehi karta...




Thudddd...




....bol madarchod.... Haath kaise lagaya tune use....




Aadmi.... Aahhh choddd doo mujhe... Mujhse galti ho gayi mai haath jodta hun... Dard ho raha hai mujhe Jane do tumhe jo chahiye le lo... Mere biwi baache hai bhagwan ke liye rehm karo...




Thudddd....




...madarchod uss waqt tujhe apne biwi bacche ki yaad nahi aayi jab use Marta hua chod gaya tha...




Thudddd....




...bhosdike yeh bhi yaad nahi raha ki uske saath koi tha...



Thudddd...




...aaj tujhe aisa sabak milega ki sapne Mai bhi kabhi kisi ke sath aisa nahi....




Uska hath pakad marod deta hai...




Aaadmi... Aaahhhh maaf kar do... Bhaiya galti ho gayi mujhe chod... Aaahhhh maa bhut darddd ho raha hai...




Thudddd...



...aise kaise abhi tera ek hath baaki hai ise bhi thikane laga dun fir tujhe chod dunga...




Woh aage kuch karta usse pehle police ki siren ki awaaz sunayi deti jisse sun dono chup ho jate hai... Aadmi bhi apne bachaav ke liye awaaz lagaane lgata hai woh muh kholta uske phele saya 1 uska muhh band kar deta hai....




Saya 2... bhosdike chal yaha se mamu aa gye hathhe lag gaye inke dono ki gand laal kar denge pehchan bhi nahi payenge bander ki kon hai teri kon si... Chal iss chakke ko baad mai dekh lenge abhi yaha se nikalte hai...




Saya 1 ko bhi uski baat theek lagti magar jaate jaate woh ek baar fir...




Thudddd....



...tujhe pta hai woh ab se meri zimmedari hai... Toh kan khol kar sun le woh jab bhi mile pairon me gir kar maafi maang lena aur aaj ke baad agar kabhi aise kuch sunne mai aaya toh aaj chod raha aage tere game bajane mai mujhe koi pareshani nahi hogi... ( Gaal thapthapate hue ) samjh gaya na meri baat ab Tera muh chod raha hun agar chillaya toh wapas Tera gala daba dunga...



Aaadmi jor jor se saans lene lagta hai kaafi der se uski saans ruki hui thi... Saaya 1 usko usi haal mai chod Jane lagta hai fir pta nahi kya hua wapas laut kar aata hai...




Thudddd...



...harami sala... Sochna bhi mat...




Night Time... 11:15 PM...



Location... Basti...




Vimala... Bahuuu ghar ka dhyan rakhna mai jara basti mai dekh kar aati hoon... Dono karamjale kaha gye... Roz ka ho gaya hai kuch dino se Tony kam se kam ghar pe tha lekin aaj fir gayab hai... Pta nahi kab sudhrega yeh uske saath reh Nazim usse bhi aage nikal gaya hai roz basti se koi na koi shikayat aati rehti hai... Itna mara hai fir bhi nahi sudhrega... Kutte ke saath saath dum bhi tedi ho gayi hai...



Kanta... maaji aapko jaane ki koi jarurat nahi hai aapko waise bhi subh jaldi nikalna hota hai... Kahi nahi gaye honge dono awara jab bhookh lagegi toh ghar aa jayenge... Aur Inka toh aaj kal roz ka ho gya hai roz pee kar aate hai... Aap inki fikr mat karo jab unka man hoga aa jayenge...



Itna keh Kanta chup ho jati hai... Waise aacha hi tha Nazim ghar mai nahi hai... Usko ab Nazim se koi pyaar nahi tha aaye din basti mai kisi na kisi se chedkhaani karta rehta tha... Aur use pta bhi tha ki Nazim ke bahar bhi kisi se jismani sambadh hai... Dono me is baat ko lekar kaafi behes bhi hui thi aur fir Nazim ne haath utha kar use shaant kar diya tab se dono ke beech sharirik shambandh nahi hai... Fir bhi jab Nazim pee kar aata hai toh roz kanta par haath utha deta hai... Kanta ko bhi ab uske hona na hone se koi fark nahi padta woh bas apni baachi ke sahare jee rahi thi...



Gareeb ghar ki ladki ko bachpan se shikhaya jata hai sasural hi uska ghar hai... Shaadi ke baad woh doli mai jaati hai aur aarthi par hi ghar chod sakti hai... Nazim na sahi pyaar karne waali saas aur ek baachi ke sahare woh apna jeevan gujar degi aisa usne soch liya tha... Haan ek bete ki chahat usko thi jo uska Sahara ban jata magar woh poora nahi ho sakta tha... Isliye jab Yashoda ke bacche ko doodh pilaya toh uski bete ki chahat jaag chuki thi... Woh usko khoob Sara pyaar degi aisa soch liya tha usne apna Sahara banayegi...



Vimala bhi soch mai gum thi use laga Tony kam se kam sudhar raha hai Yashoda ke jariye... Aur Tony ke saath Nazim bhi sudhar jayega magar aaj fir dono ghar se bahar the...




Wanhi Yashoda chup chap dono ki baatain sun rahi thi aur apne bacche ke sath khel rahi thi... Ab tak woh itna toh samjh gayi thi ki dono bigad gaye hai aache kaam nahi krte... Isliye dono unse pareshan hai... tabhi baccha kilkaari maarta hai jor se jisse teeno ka dhyan uspe jaata hai... Teeno ek saath jab use dekhti hai toh chinta ki jagah chehre par muskaan aa jati hai... Qki baacha bhi hass raha hota hai aur ajeeb sa muhh bana kuch kehne ki koshish karta hai...



Yashoda... Ale le mera Raja beta...




( Aur bacche ko khilane lagti hai teeno... )




Vimala... ( Baache ke maathe par ek kiss kar deti hai jisse ek baar baacha kilkari maar har deta hai aur teeno ka dil dekh kar bhut khush ho raha tha ) beti... Waise munne ka naam kya hai...



Yashoda... Ji woh... haan... Natkhat Nandkishor... ( Aur ek tak bacche ko dekhne lagti hai jaise puchna chahti use naam pasand aaya ya nahi )




Kanta... Yeh kaisa naam hai... Aisa naam thodi hota hai...


Yashoda... kyun Didi aacha nahi hai kya.. iski maa ne ise yehi kaha tha dekho yeh bhi hass raha hai naam sunkar... hai na Natkhat Nandkishor...




Kanta... Are Tera upari maala Khali hai kya... woh use naam se bula nahi rahi thi... Balki dulaar rahi thi...




Yashoda... Nahi didi iska naam Natakhat Nandkishor hi rahega... Kitne pyaar se iski maa ne naam rakha tha... Aur fir Munna bhi dekho kaise khush raha hai... Nahi nahi mai iska naam nahi badlungi...




Kanta... Tu sahi mai buddu hai pta nahi kaise padhayi kar nurse ban gayi...




Vimala... Are chup Karo tum dono... Kyun jhagad rahe ho...




Kanta... Dekho na maaji yeh sun nahi Rahi hai bacche ka aisa naam hota hai kya...




Yashoda... Lekin didi...



Vimala... Aacha aacha ruko tumhe iske naam se problem hai tumhe bhi naam nahi badalna... Toh aisa karte hai iska naam Nandkishor rakhte hai Natkhat toh iska swabhaav hai theek hai isse koi dikkat nahi hone chahiye tumhe... aur tum pyaar se Nandu bula lena tumko bhi aacha lagega...



Yashoda... Ji theek hai jaisa aap kahe...



Kanta... Haan Maaji yeh theek hai Nandu... Warna pta nahi sablog isko naam ko lekar chidate... isko toh akal hi nahi hai... ( Bacche ko Yashoda ke haath se lekar ) hai na Nandu... Ale le.. baccha bhookh lagi hai aaja mai duddu pilati hun...



( Aur Kanta bacche ko lekar dusre room mai chali jaati hai jise jaate Yashoda aur Vimala dekh muskurate hai... Tabhi Yashoda kehti hai )




Yashoda... Maaji aap mere liye kitna kar rahi hai mai kaise iss janam mai aapka ehsaan chukaungi... Mera koi nahi hai bass pitaji woh bhi pta nahi kab aayenge itne din Mai aap par bhojh nahi Banna chahti mai kal hi yaha se chali jaungi....




Tony... Aur kaha jaogi btao jara kise jaanti ho iss seher mai... Tere chacha chachi unke pass jinhone itna kuch kaha tumhare baare mai jise sunne se aacha mar jana chahiye... Yaa apne seher waapas jana chahti ho jaha tumhare papa toh rahenge magar tumhara kuch pta nahi... Khud ke nahi kam se kam bacche ke baare mai socho... Tumhe kuch ho gaya toh tumhare baad uska kya hoga socha hai... Tum kaise palogi use... kaise maa banogi uski kya khilaogi use bheekh maang kar jaise uss din maang Rahi thi... Sharam nahi aati tumhe aise maa banogi...




( Tony ghar aata hai toh dono ki baat cheet sunta hai pehle muskaan rehti hai chehre par wanhi baad mai Yashoda ke jaane ki baat sun gusse mai use sunane lagta hai... Vimala , Nazim hairan Tony ko dekh rahe the Aaj Tak khud usne kisi ki parvaah nahi ki thi aur Yashoda ki liye pta nahi kyun kar raha hai... Vimala khush thi wanhi Nazim hairan tha... Yashoda bhi sir jhuka kar sab sunti rehti hai aakhir ki baat sun uske aansun behne lagte hai magar woh sir utha Tony ko dekhne ki himmat nahi juta pati Kanta bhi shor sun bahar aa jati hai... )




Tony... Yeh teri maa nahi hai ( Vimala ko point karte hue ) toh kiss hak se ise maaji bolti ho... ( Kanta ko dikhate hue ) yeh teri bahan nahi hai toh kyun Didi Didi karti firti ho... Hum koi nahi hai tere hann tere bas pitaji hai aao chalo tumhe unke paas chodd kar aata hoon... Kanta do isko iska baccha koi jarurat nahi hai doodh pilane ki tum Mamta lutao baad Yeh kahegi tum iske bacche par ehsaan kar rahi ho... Aur aai tumhe bhi zaroorat nhi h iska khayal rakhne ki yeh bhojh samjhe khudko... Isko iske seher chod kar aata hoon wanha iske pitaji iska khayal rakhenge hum toh koi hai nahi iske... Iske saath hi meri zimmedari bhi khatam ho jayegi iske saath hi...




Tony ki baatein sunne ke baad har kisi ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya tha... Vimala , Kanta statue ban gye the wanhi Yashoda ki zor se rulayi phut padti hai woh apne seher nahi jaa sakti thi yaha bhi kisi ko nahi jaanti thi... Aise mai baache ka kaise khayal rakhegi kaise ek aachi maa ban payegi... Kaise uski parvarish karegi... Use iss baat par bhi Rona aa raha tha ki sabne use galat samjh liya woh aisa nahi kehna chahti thi magar ab use apne kahe par afsos ho raha tha...




Tony... Kya hua ab ro kar kise dikha rahi ho... Ehsaan kar rahe na tujhpar uth abhi chal tujhe ghar chod kar aata hoon...



Vimala... Bas kar Tony chodd use woh kahi nahi jayegi.... Maine keh diya na... Yeh Mera ghar hai jab tak uska man hoga woh yaha rahegi...




Tony... Nahi aai jaane do ise yeh humare pyaar ko ehsaan keh rahi hai...



Vimala... Are ho gayi galti usse chod woh kahi nahi jayegi...





Yashoda... ( Subukte hue ) Nahii... Maaji.. maii.. yaha nahiii... Reh sakti...




Tony... Dekha aai maine kha tha na hum ispar ehsaan kar rahe hai... Isko yaha nahi rehna...




Vimala... Yashoda beti Tu yeh kya keh rahi hai...




Yashoda... Woo maaji woo...


Tony... Tum chalo bahar aai tujhe meri kasam tu beech mai mat aa...




Tony Kanta ke haath se baache ko le Yashoda ko ghar se bahar ke aata hai... Jaha Kanta aur Vimala usko samjha Rahi hoti hai magar Tony kisi ki nahi sunta... Tony Yashoda ko bhar le jaane lagta hai Yashoda apne ghar nahi jana chahti thi rone lagti hai aur ant mai Tony ke pair pakad leti hai...




Yashoda... Please mai apne ghar nahi jana chahti... wanha mere saath munne ko bhi...



Tony... Toh akhir kya chahti ho tum batao... Yha bhi nahi rehna ghar bhi nahi jana...


Yashoda kuch nahi kehti bas pair pakad roti rehti hai... Vimala Kanta bhi Tony ko samjhate hai magat Tony kasam de kar dono ko chup kar deta hai... Aur Yashoda ko uthane lgata hai lekin woh pair nahi chodti... Tony zor laga kar Yashoda ko uthata hai... Yashoda Tony ki aankhon mai dekh use hath jod ghar chodne ke liye mana karti hai...




Tony... Aacha theek hai tumhe yaha nahi rehna aur ghar bhi nahi jana hai na...



Yashoda haan mai sir hilati hai...



Tony... Toh fir tumhe meri har baat manni padegi warna mai ek nahi sununga aur tumhe ghar chod kar hi aunga...




Yashoda kuch nhi kehti aur Tony uska hath pakad khenchte hue ghar ki taraf le aata hai... Aur hath chod Jeb mai se chabi nikalta hai aur ghar ka tala kholta hai aur chabi wapas Yashoda ke haath mai rakh deta hai... Aur use ander le aata hai... Yashoda hairaan thi waanhi peeche peeche baaki sab bhi...




Yashoda... Yeh kiska Ghar hai...



Tony... Mera... Aur bakwas nahi ab se tum yaha rahogi jab tumhare baba aaye chali Jana unke saath magar tab tak tumhaari zimmedari mere haath mai hai... aur mai kuch nahi sununga...




Yashoda... Magar mai kaise... Tum...



Tony... darne ki koi baat nahi hai mai yaha nahi rehta din bhar bahar rehta hoon aur raat aai ke ghar sota hoon... tum din bhar aai ke ghar reh lena raat mai yaha aa jana... Aur koi pareshani hai kya tumhe...




Yashoda... Ji lekin...




Tony... Maine kaha na tumse... Tum yahi rahogi warna abhi tumhe tumhare ghar chod kar aata hun...




Yashoda uske baad kuch nahi kehti chup ho jati hai... Vimala Kanta aur Nazim kabhi Tony toh kabhi Yashoda ko dekh rahe the... Aakhir dono ke Mann mai kya chal raha hai Yashoda kyun wanha nahi rehna chahti thi... Aur Tony ka bartaav toh sabse jayada hairan krne waala tha pehle toh jo bhi kuch usne bola fir baad mai kitne saalo baad usne ghar me kadam rakha tha... Warna dilwali ki safayi ke liye bhi usne Vimala ko mana kar diya tha... Aur aaj Yashoda ko ghar mai le aaya hai... Aur chabi use de di ghar ki...




Tony ko ghar bhut pyaara uske maa papa ki yaadein thi ghar me ek khusboo jise woh nahi jaane dena chahta tha isliye ghar ko band kar rakha tha lekin aaj aisa kyun... yahi sawal sabko tha lekin kisi ki himmat nahi thi puchne ki Tony Yashoda ko chod ghar se bahar nikal jata hai... Peeche peeche Nazim bhi... Ab ghar mai Yashoda Vimala Kanta the Tabhi Kanta bhi bacche ko Vimala ko pakda ghar chali jaati hai qki ghar uski beti akeli thi...




Vimala aur Yashoda kaafi der tak khamosh jo kuch bhi hua sochne lagte hai... Aur baad mai Vimala Yashoda ki madat ghar mai samaan rakhne aur thodi bhut saaf safai kar sone ke liye jagah bana deti hai... Baaki sab kal karne ka bol ghar se nikal jaati hai...




Iss sab mai kaafi samay gujar jata hai... Vimala bahar aake dekhti hai toh ghar ke dware ek khatiya lagi hoti hai jispe Tony aankhein band kar leta hua hota hai... Vimala ke aankhon se aansun ki ek bund gir jaati hai jise woh jaldi se ponch Tony ke paas jaate hai aur uske sir par hath fir deti hai...




Tony bhi aankhein khol apni aai ko dekhta hai fir dubara aankhein band kar leta hai... Yeh sab Yashoda bhi gate par khadi ho dekhti hai... Aur gate lga kar ander chal deti hai...




Raat gehri hoti hai dheere dheere sab so jate hai Do logo ki aankhon mai neend nahi thi... ( Any guesses )




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AWESOME MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

 

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Lagta hai kahani Nandkishor ko hero bana kar likhi gayi hai. Yashoda uski maa ke rupme hongi. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

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Nice update

To nandu abhi 14 saal ka ho gya, sab kuch abhi to filhaal thik chal rha hai.

Parul ke liye ek tarah se bura bhi lag rha hai, use uska pyar nahi mila, lekin isme yashoda ki koi galti nahi. Yashoda agar nahi bhi aati Tony ke jivan me to bhi shayad hi Tony parul se shadi karta.
Lekin parul ke liye to yashoda hi in sabki jimmedar hogi, aur vo apne mann me shayad yashoda aur nandu le liye nafrat pale baithi ho. Khair ye sab ek anuman bhi ho sakta hai, kya pata parul bhi positive character ho. Khair dekhte hai.

Nazim ko ab tak koi moka nahi mila yashoda ko nuksan pahunchane ka, lekin jarur vo bhavishya me koi gadbad karega.

14 saal to beet chuke hai, abhi 3-4 saal aur thoda speed me niklenge to kahani apne level pe aa jani chahiye.

Khair story fantasy section me hai to kya kuch supernatural powers ka kahani me role hoga yaa realistic ke chakkar me kahani puri logic pe hi chalegi. Dekhte hai.

Excellent update. Waiting for next.

Thanks Bhai ...

Story mai super natural move aa gaya hai...
Jo ki story ki theme natural chal rahi hai isliye humne six sence yaa yun kahe prediction keh diya hai...

 

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Awesome update

Thanks Bhai