Adultery Jung Pyar ke liye Nafrat Se

[shruti vaskale 1]

Achi kahani he

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Mujhe samajh nahi aaraha ki logo ko mera likhna accha lag bhi raha hai ki nahi kyu ki notmal sex storys me 5-6 update me 2laks +vews hote hai yaha 1.5 bhi nahi pahucha chood parso tak next update mil jayga ap sabhi ko

Tention nahi lene ka yar
Story pasand sabko aa rhe hai
Lekin har kisi ko sirf 1 baat ki jaldi hai ki Suspense kab open hoga or Climax kya hoga
Likhte rho bhai achi likh rhe ho story
Try to mai bhi kar rha hoo ki jaldi update doo apni story me lekin kaam ki wajh se time nahi mil paa rha hai mujhe

 

[Ranjit143]

Bil

Tention nahi lene ka yar
Story pasand sabko aa rhe hai
Lekin har kisi ko sirf 1 baat ki jaldi hai ki Suspense kab open hoga or Climax kya hoga
Likhte rho bhai achi likh rhe ho story
Try to mai bhi kar rha hoo ki jaldi update doo apni story me lekin kaam ki wajh se time nahi mil paa rha hai mujhe

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Jitna jaldi ho sakega flashback end karo aur teenon Ko aise Saja do मौत से ज्यादा बतर including pari
Story main pari ko Arav se maafi milega to uske baad main story padhna chhod dungi.......
Writer ji pari ko saja milna chahiye chahe aap usko jitna innocent dikhao

Sab readers ravi or sonal se jyada pari ki saja ki wait dekh lijiye woh Bala update kitna views ayega

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Bil

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Jitna jaldi ho sakega flashback end karo aur teenon Ko aise Saja do मौत से ज्यादा बतर including pari
Story main pari ko Arav se maafi milega to uske baad main story padhna chhod dungi.......
Writer ji pari ko saja milna chahiye chahe aap usko jitna innocent dikhao
Plz
Or story ko report maar dungi

WOW bat to bilkul sahi hai teri yar saza to milne chahiye Pari ko jo ki behad jaroori hai dekho na yar ek tarf Bete se itna pyar karti hai ki uske leye kisi bhi had tak jaane ko tayaar ho gyi thi lekin dosri tarf uski khud ki jaroorat bhi hai jo uska pati poori nahi kar paarha tha isileye Ravi ki Bahooo me gir gye jaake
Rhe Innocent ki bat to Pari to suche bahut innocent he hai abhi isileye use abhi tak Devil or Aarav ki kahe baato ka matlab abhi tak smj nahi aaya rhe sahi kasar Sonal or Ravi ne to ache tarike se Pari ke aakho me patti bandiii hue hai
.
Lekin Saza to milegi he Pari ko Q ki apni khud ki jaroorat ke leye wo esa kadam uthane jaa rhe hai aage chal ke lekin abhi use nahi pata is kadam ke bad wo us cheej ko kabhi lee nahi paygee
.
To kuch smj aaya aapko kaise milegi Saza Pari ko ya abhi bhi complain karoge Writer ki joki mai nahi hoo yar

 

[urc4me]

Romanchak. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

[Janu002]

Nice update

 

[Kratos]

Tention nahi lene ka yar
Story pasand sabko aa rhe hai
Lekin har kisi ko sirf 1 baat ki jaldi hai ki Suspense kab open hoga or Climax kya hoga
Likhte rho bhai achi likh rhe ho story
Try to mai bhi kar rha hoo ki jaldi update doo apni story me lekin kaam ki wajh se time nahi mil paa rha hai mujhe

Tum kab update doge

 

[pardeep2000]

Nice update

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Tum kab update doge

Next week se start karooga bhai

 

[ayush01111]

Next week se start karooga bhai

Waiting hope next week matlab next week