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Iss story ko start karna sa phela kuch baate jo ap sabsa karni hai ..


1. Iss story mai romance , love story , action , hate , suspence , seduction , sex ye sab dekhna ko milega ...


2. Iss story mai sex aayega lekin jaldi nhi jaisa jaisa story build up hogi ... Waisa waisa sex scenes beech beech mai aata jayenga ... Jaisa jaisa kahani apna mid phase mai pauchegi toh bharpur sex scenes dekhna ko milenga ... Aur uska saath saath iss story mai har event ek dusra sa connected honge ...

3. Ye story kahi sa copy bhi nhi ki gyi hai ... Iss story ka har ek scene Maine khud apne imagination sa likha hai ...

4. Dosto meri aadat hai story ko detailing mai likhna ki .. toh iss story mai detailing hogi ...



5 . Ye story bahut lambi hai toh patience rakhana time ka saath sab dekhna ko milega... Aap sabhi ko ...

6 . ye ek imagination story hai toh isma kuch chezza mai apni taraf sa add kar rha hu ho sakta hai ki kahani mai kahai kahi aisa cheza aayengi jo reality sa thora different ho ...

7. Ye story ek fantasy incest story hai ... Aur ye ek imagination story hai reality sa kisi bhi character ka kisi place ka koi connection nhi nikalta hai .... Aur agar connection nikalta hai reality sa toh woh ek just coincidence hoga ...

Toh dosto agar kuch galti ho Jaye story likhte time toh maaf kar dena ...

Uska saath saath dono story mai updates aayenga ...

Baki jald hi aayega 1st update ...

" Tab Tak ka leya haste rahiye aur muskurata rahiye ... "


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EPISODE : 01
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LOCATION : INDONESIA
DATE: 03 MARCH 2017
TIME: 09 PM


Indonesia, Jakarta ke central part mein ek hotel ke saamne ek bahut hi mehngi gaadi aakar rukti hai.



Us gaadi se do shakhs bahar aate hain, jismein ek 22 saal ki ladki hoti hai aur ek 32 saal ke aas-paas aadmi hota hai.



Dono Shaks us hotel ke andar chale jaate hain. Hotel ka manager unhein lift ke zariye us hotel ke 20th floor ke ek kamre mein le jata hai, jahan do shakhs pehle se baithe hote hain.



Un shakhs ke saath room ke andar 8-9 guards apne haathon mein guns le kar khade hote hain, aur karib 10-12 guards room ke bahar poore floor par phailay hote hain.



Andar jaane ke baad, us room ka darwaza ek guard ke dwara band kiya jaata hai. Room pura sound proof tha ...


Aadmi (car wala): "Hello, Mr. Tango."



Aadmi (jo kamre mein baitha tha): "Hello, Mr. Kristofer."



Kristofer: "Toh Mr. Tango, aap kya deal laaye hain?"



Tango: "Mr. Kristofer, aapko yaad hoga ki main Indonesia ka sabse bada drug lord hoon, toh aaj aapke liye ekdham naya aur anokha drug lekar aaya hoon."



Phir Tango apne saath jo doosra aadmi baitha hota hai, usse ek suitcase leta hai aur usko kholta hai. Suitcase khulte hi (ek lock-type mechanism, digital wala khulta hai). Us digital lock ko kholte hi suitcase ka ek chhupa hua hissa khulta hai, jismein ek packet hota hai aur us packet ke andar woh rare drugs hoti hain.



Tango us drugs wale packet ko utha kar Mr. Kristofer ko de deta hai.



Idhar Mr. Kristofer un drugs ko jaanch rahe hote hain aur wahi Tango us ladki ko tirchi nazar se dekh rahe hote hain.



Us ladki ne burkha pehna hua hai, aur us ladki ki aankhon mein dekh kar aisa lagta tha jaise un aankhon mein dekh kar nasha ho jaye.



Kristofer drugs check kar leta hai.



Kristofer: "So, Mr. Tango, is drug ka kya naam hai?"



Tango: "Is khaas drug ka naam hai Scorpion drugs."


Kristofer: "Kya kimat hai?"


Tango: Per kilogram 30 thousands US dollars.


Kristofer: Mr. Tango, kya main jaan sakta hoon ye itna mehnga kyun hai?


Tango: Mr. Kristofer, ye drugs bahut mehange hain aur rare bhi, matlab poori duniya mein mere alawa is drugs ko koi nahi bechta... Aur saath hi is drugs ko pehchanna bahut mushkil hai. Agar is drug ko kisi insaan ko bas sunghadiya jaye toh, ye drug uss insaan ko 5 minutes ke andar hi maut ke gath mein suladega...



Kristofer: Aisa toh bahut drugs market mein hote hain, lekin isme itna khaas kya hai?


Tango: Mr. Kristofer, aise bahut drugs hote honge lekin is khas drug ko agar kisi insaan ko sunghaan de diya jaye, uske baad jab insaan mar jaata hai toh, iss baat ka pata koi nahi laga sakta ki woh insaan kaisa mara... Even blood drug test mein bhi pata nahi chalega ki uss insaan ki maut kaise hui...


Kristofer: Okk Mr. Tango... Then the deal is confirmed...


Kristofer ek suitcase leta hai, apne saath jo ladki aayi thi, uska haath sa aur open karke Tango ki taraf kar deta hai...


Kristofer: So Mr. Tango, here is your 1 million dollars advance, baaki ka order delivery hone ke baad... Aur maal kab tak milega?


Tango: Mr. Kristofer, maal aapko kal tak mil jayega... aur kaha par maal dena hai, uska bhi address de dijiye...


Kristofer: Hmm, ye lo card. Yahan par maal bhejna hai aur kisi ko shak nahi hona chahiye...


Tango: Thik hai, Mr. Kristofer, maal mil jayega aapko...


Kristofer: Okk, Mr. Tango ... I am glad to deal with you...


Phir Tango aur Kristofer dono apna haath milate hain ...


Swoosh....


Swooshhh ...



Swooshhh ...



Swooshhh ...



Swooshhh ...


Panch goliyaan chali, aur panch goliyaan Tango ke saath jo guards andar the, unko jaakar lagi...


Sab iss hamle se shocked ho gaye aur us taraf dekhne lage jahan se goliyaan chali thi... Goli aur koi nahi balki Tango ke ek guard ne chali thi...


Baaki saare guards apne guns uss guard ki taraf kar dete hain aur trigger dabate hain, lekin guns stock ho gayi hoti hain jiska chalte goliyaan nahi chali.


Tabhi woh ladki jo burkha pehne hue wahan khadi thi, usne apne haath mein pistol (Desert Eagle) lekar... Tango ki taraf point out kar deti hai...


Ladki : Stop it... warna tumhara ye boss khatam samjho.


Tango aur Kristofer ye dekh kar hairaan ho jaate hain.



Kristofer: Are you fucking mad... darling ... (gusse se)...

Tango : Kristofer, ye sab kya ho raha hai...


Ladki : Abe chutiya, tujhe dikhayi nahi de raha hai ki maine tere upar gun point karke rakhi hai, toh uske baad bhi pooch raha hai ki kya hai ye sab...



Tango: Kristofer, main iss dhoka ka badla zaroor lunga...


Iss par Kristofer kuch bolta hai... aur Tango bhi kuch bolta hai...




Swoooshshhhh...



Swoooshshhhh...



Swoooshshhhh...



Swoooshshhhh...


Chaar goliyaan aur chali, aur baaki jitne bhi guards uss room ke andar maujood the, sab khatam ho gaye... aur saath hi saath Tango ka saath jo aadmi aaya tha, woh bhi...


Ye dekh, Kristofer aur Tango bahut gussa ho gaye, aur Kristofer ne bahut tezi se uss ladki ke haath par ek zordaar kick maara... Jisse uss ladki ka aim Tango se haath gaya, aur Tango ne bahut tezi se uss guard ke paas jo pistol tha, usko chhinne ki koshish karne laga...


"Dhhapp..."


Us guard ne Tango ke sar ko apne sar se maara, jisse Tango thoda door hua, lekin apne haathon se pistol ko nahi chhoda...


"Chattttakkk..."


Phir us guard ne Tango ko ek chaat maara, aur Tango floor par gir gaya...


Idhar ladki ka aim miss hone ke baad Kristofer ne uss ladki ke dono haathon ko pakad liya... Aur dono ke beech chheen-japti shuru ho gayi...


Kristofer ne ek laat maar di uss ladki ke pet par, jisse woh ladki ke haathon se bandook chhoot gayi, aur woh ladki thodi door jakar ek table par ja giri...


Uss ladki ko table par ek knife mili, jisse apne haathon mein le liya uss ladki ne...



Phir Kristofer jaisa hi pistol chalana wala hota hai ki uss ladki ne bahut tez speed ke saath uss knife ko apne haathon mein lekar Kristofer ke jis haath mein pistol thi (right hand) usko apne left hand se pakad kar apne right hand mein jo knife tha usse chala diya aur knife seedha jakar Kristofer ke gardan mein ghus gaya...


Aur uss ladki ne Kristofer ka mooh pakad liya jisse Kristofer zyada kuch bol nahi paya aur wahi baith gaya aur apni antim saans ginte-ginte khatam ho gaya...



Idhar phir Tango khada hua aur ek zor daar laat marne ki koshish karta hai... Uska waar khali jaata hai...


phir uss guard ne ek zor daar punch maara Tango ko jisse Tango seedha floor par baith gaya...


"Iska kya karna hai?" woh guard poochta hai...


Aur apne chehre par jo mask laga hua tha usse hata deta hai... Woh guard ek 21 saal ka ladka nikla...


"Kya karna hai? Sa kya matlab? Khatam kar do isse agar ye khatam ho gaya toh ye rare drugs banana bhi khatam ho jayega... Issi drugs ki wajah se India ke sakron jawaanon ne apni jaan gawahi." ladki


"Okk" ... ye bol kar us ladke ne apne haathon mein pistol (Desert Eagle) le li aur Tango ki taraf kar diya ...


Tango ye dekh kar dar gaya ...


"Nahi nahi nahi .... Please mujhe mat maro ..."Tango ...


Woh ladka goli chala deta hai, jo jaake seedha Tango ke sir ke beech lagta hai, aur Tango wahi khatam ho jata hai.


Tabhi uss room ka gate tod kar 6-7 guards andar aate hain apne haathon mein assault rifle le kar... andar ka scenario dekh kar koi guard kuch karta, issa pehla hi...


Uss ladke ne neeche padhi ek assault rifle utha li aur ek uss ladki ko de di, aur dono ne cover le liya ...


Uss ladke ne ek table ka cover le liya aur wahi uss ladki ne diwar ka ....


jitne guards uss room ke andar aaye the, un sab guards ne apna rifle chalana shuru kar diya. Aur ek do guards ne kuch goliyaan chalane ke baad dheere-dheere aage ki taraf barh rahe the aur room ke andar aa rahe the ki..


. Uss ladki ne aur uss ladke ne ek saath goli chalayee, jo jakar sidha un dono guards ko lagi jo aage aa rahe the ... Phir baaki jitne bhi guards bache the uss floor par, woh sabhi room ke bahar diwar ka cover le lete hain...


Phir uss ladke ne uss ladki ko kuch ishara kiya aur ek gehri saans li, aur apne haath mein gun ko kas ke pakad liya aur bahar saare guards ke upar pre-fire karne laga, jisse kuch guards jo uss room ke darwaje par khade the, woh sab khatam ho gaye, aur bahar kuch guards pre-fire ka chapate maj aajate hain ...


Idhar jaisa hi woh ladka apna gun chala raha hota hai, woh ladki uss room ka ek window kholti hai aur woh ladki window ke platform par chadh jaati hai aur uss window ke bahar ek rassi latka rahi hoti hai... Phir woh ladki bolti hai uss ladke se

'Arceus, chalo...'


Phir woh ladki window se jump kar deti hai, aur saath hi saath uss ladke ne apne haathon se gun chhod diya aur woh bhi window se jump kar deta hai...


Thodi der tak kuch awaaz na aane par saare guards andar jaate hain toh dekhte hain ki wahan par window khula hua hai aur andar unka boss mara pada hua hota hai....


Idhar ladka aur ladki dono rassi ke zariye hotel ke neeche aate hain aur hotel ke basement ke parking mein rakhi ek car mein baithkar chal dete hain aur gaadi uss hotel se nikal jaati hai.


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EPISODE : 01
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LOCATION : INDONESIA
DATE: 03 MARCH 2017
TIME: 09 PM


Indonesia, Jakarta ke central part mein ek hotel ke saamne ek bahut hi mehngi gaadi aakar rukti hai.



Us gaadi se do shakhs bahar aate hain, jismein ek 22 saal ki ladki hoti hai aur ek 32 saal ke aas-paas aadmi hota hai.




Dono Shaks us hotel ke andar chale jaate hain. Hotel ka manager unhein lift ke zariye us hotel ke 20th floor ke ek kamre mein le jata hai, jahan do shakhs pehle se baithe hote hain.



Un shakhs ke saath room ke andar 8-9 guards apne haathon mein guns le kar khade hote hain, aur karib 10-12 guards room ke bahar poore floor par phailay hote hain.




Andar jaane ke baad, us room ka darwaza ek guard ke dwara band kiya jaata hai. Room pura sound proof tha ...


Aadmi (car wala): "Hello, Mr. Tango."



Aadmi (jo kamre mein baitha tha): "Hello, Mr. Kristofer."



Kristofer: "Toh Mr. Tango, aap kya deal laaye hain?"



Tango: "Mr. Kristofer, aapko yaad hoga ki main Indonesia ka sabse bada drug lord hoon, toh aaj aapke liye ekdham naya aur anokha drug lekar aaya hoon."




Phir Tango apne saath jo doosra aadmi baitha hota hai, usse ek suitcase leta hai aur usko kholta hai. Suitcase khulte hi (ek lock-type mechanism, digital wala khulta hai). Us digital lock ko kholte hi suitcase ka ek chhupa hua hissa khulta hai, jismein ek packet hota hai aur us packet ke andar woh rare drugs hoti hain.



Tango us drugs wale packet ko utha kar Mr. Kristofer ko de deta hai.



Idhar Mr. Kristofer un drugs ko jaanch rahe hote hain aur wahi Tango us ladki ko tirchi nazar se dekh rahe hote hain.



Us ladki ne burkha pehna hua hai, aur us ladki ki aankhon mein dekh kar aisa lagta tha jaise un aankhon mein dekh kar nasha ho jaye.



Kristofer drugs check kar leta hai.



Kristofer: "So, Mr. Tango, is drug ka kya naam hai?"



Tango: "Is khaas drug ka naam hai Scorpion drugs."


Kristofer: "Kya kimat hai?"


Tango: Per kilogram 30 thousands US dollars.


Kristofer: Mr. Tango, kya main jaan sakta hoon ye itna mehnga kyun hai?


Tango: Mr. Kristofer, ye drugs bahut mehange hain aur rare bhi, matlab poori duniya mein mere alawa is drugs ko koi nahi bechta... Aur saath hi is drugs ko pehchanna bahut mushkil hai. Agar is drug ko kisi insaan ko bas sunghadiya jaye toh, ye drug uss insaan ko 5 minutes ke andar hi maut ke gath mein suladega...




Kristofer: Aisa toh bahut drugs market mein hote hain, lekin isme itna khaas kya hai?


Tango: Mr. Kristofer, aise bahut drugs hote honge lekin is khas drug ko agar kisi insaan ko sunghaan de diya jaye, uske baad jab insaan mar jaata hai toh, iss baat ka pata koi nahi laga sakta ki woh insaan kaisa mara... Even blood drug test mein bhi pata nahi chalega ki uss insaan ki maut kaise hui...


Kristofer: Okk Mr. Tango... Then the deal is confirmed...


Kristofer ek suitcase leta hai, apne saath jo ladki aayi thi, uska haath sa aur open karke Tango ki taraf kar deta hai...


Kristofer: So Mr. Tango, here is your 1 million dollars advance, baaki ka order delivery hone ke baad... Aur maal kab tak milega?


Tango: Mr. Kristofer, maal aapko kal tak mil jayega... aur kaha par maal dena hai, uska bhi address de dijiye...



Kristofer: Hmm, ye lo card. Yahan par maal bhejna hai aur kisi ko shak nahi hona chahiye...


Tango: Thik hai, Mr. Kristofer, maal mil jayega aapko...



Kristofer: Okk, Mr. Tango ... I am glad to deal with you...


Phir Tango aur Kristofer dono apna haath milate hain ...


Swoosh....



Swooshhh ...



Swooshhh ...



Swooshhh ...



Swooshhh ...


Panch goliyaan chali, aur panch goliyaan Tango ke saath jo guards andar the, unko jaakar lagi...



Sab iss hamle se shocked ho gaye aur us taraf dekhne lage jahan se goliyaan chali thi... Goli aur koi nahi balki Tango ke ek guard ne chali thi...


Baaki saare guards apne guns uss guard ki taraf kar dete hain aur trigger dabate hain, lekin guns stock ho gayi hoti hain jiska chalte goliyaan nahi chali.


Tabhi woh ladki jo burkha pehne hue wahan khadi thi, usne apne haath mein pistol (Desert Eagle) lekar... Tango ki taraf point out kar deti hai...


Ladki : Stop it... warna tumhara ye boss khatam samjho.


Tango aur Kristofer ye dekh kar hairaan ho jaate hain.



Kristofer: Are you fucking mad... darling ... (gusse se)...

Tango : Kristofer, ye sab kya ho raha hai...



Ladki : Abe chutiya, tujhe dikhayi nahi de raha hai ki maine tere upar gun point karke rakhi hai, toh uske baad bhi pooch raha hai ki kya hai ye sab...



Tango: Kristofer, main iss dhoka ka badla zaroor lunga...



Iss par Kristofer kuch bolta hai... aur Tango bhi kuch bolta hai...




Swoooshshhhh...



Swoooshshhhh...




Swoooshshhhh...



Swoooshshhhh...


Chaar goliyaan aur chali, aur baaki jitne bhi guards uss room ke andar maujood the, sab khatam ho gaye... aur saath hi saath Tango ka saath jo aadmi aaya tha, woh bhi...


Ye dekh, Kristofer aur Tango bahut gussa ho gaye, aur Kristofer ne bahut tezi se uss ladki ke haath par ek zordaar kick maara... Jisse uss ladki ka aim Tango se haath gaya, aur Tango ne bahut tezi se uss guard ke paas jo pistol tha, usko chhinne ki koshish karne laga...


"Dhhapp..."



Us guard ne Tango ke sar ko apne sar se maara, jisse Tango thoda door hua, lekin apne haathon se pistol ko nahi chhoda...


"Chattttakkk..."


Phir us guard ne Tango ko ek chaat maara, aur Tango floor par gir gaya...



Idhar ladki ka aim miss hone ke baad Kristofer ne uss ladki ke dono haathon ko pakad liya... Aur dono ke beech chheen-japti shuru ho gayi...


Kristofer ne ek laat maar di uss ladki ke pet par, jisse woh ladki ke haathon se bandook chhoot gayi, aur woh ladki thodi door jakar ek table par ja giri...



Uss ladki ko table par ek knife mili, jisse apne haathon mein le liya uss ladki ne...



Phir Kristofer jaisa hi pistol chalana wala hota hai ki uss ladki ne bahut tez speed ke saath uss knife ko apne haathon mein lekar Kristofer ke jis haath mein pistol thi (right hand) usko apne left hand se pakad kar apne right hand mein jo knife tha usse chala diya aur knife seedha jakar Kristofer ke gardan mein ghus gaya...


Aur uss ladki ne Kristofer ka mooh pakad liya jisse Kristofer zyada kuch bol nahi paya aur wahi baith gaya aur apni antim saans ginte-ginte khatam ho gaya...




Idhar phir Tango khada hua aur ek zor daar laat marne ki koshish karta hai... Uska waar khali jaata hai...


phir uss guard ne ek zor daar punch maara Tango ko jisse Tango seedha floor par baith gaya...


"Iska kya karna hai?" woh guard poochta hai...



Aur apne chehre par jo mask laga hua tha usse hata deta hai... Woh guard ek 21 saal ka ladka nikla...


"Kya karna hai? Sa kya matlab? Khatam kar do isse agar ye khatam ho gaya toh ye rare drugs banana bhi khatam ho jayega... Issi drugs ki wajah se India ke sakron jawaanon ne apni jaan gawahi." ladki


"Okk" ... ye bol kar us ladke ne apne haathon mein pistol (Desert Eagle) le li aur Tango ki taraf kar diya ...


Tango ye dekh kar dar gaya ...


"Nahi nahi nahi .... Please mujhe mat maro ..."Tango ...



Woh ladka goli chala deta hai, jo jaake seedha Tango ke sir ke beech lagta hai, aur Tango wahi khatam ho jata hai.


Tabhi uss room ka gate tod kar 6-7 guards andar aate hain apne haathon mein assault rifle le kar... andar ka scenario dekh kar koi guard kuch karta, issa pehla hi...


Uss ladke ne neeche padhi ek assault rifle utha li aur ek uss ladki ko de di, aur dono ne cover le liya ...



Uss ladke ne ek table ka cover le liya aur wahi uss ladki ne diwar ka ....


jitne guards uss room ke andar aaye the, un sab guards ne apna rifle chalana shuru kar diya. Aur ek do guards ne kuch goliyaan chalane ke baad dheere-dheere aage ki taraf barh rahe the aur room ke andar aa rahe the ki..


. Uss ladki ne aur uss ladke ne ek saath goli chalayee, jo jakar sidha un dono guards ko lagi jo aage aa rahe the ... Phir baaki jitne bhi guards bache the uss floor par, woh sabhi room ke bahar diwar ka cover le lete hain...


Phir uss ladke ne uss ladki ko kuch ishara kiya aur ek gehri saans li, aur apne haath mein gun ko kas ke pakad liya aur bahar saare guards ke upar pre-fire karne laga, jisse kuch guards jo uss room ke darwaje par khade the, woh sab khatam ho gaye, aur bahar kuch guards pre-fire ka chapate maj aajate hain ...


Idhar jaisa hi woh ladka apna gun chala raha hota hai, woh ladki uss room ka ek window kholti hai aur woh ladki window ke platform par chadh jaati hai aur uss window ke bahar ek rassi latka rahi hoti hai... Phir woh ladki bolti hai uss ladke se


'Arceus, chalo...'


Phir woh ladki window se jump kar deti hai, aur saath hi saath uss ladke ne apne haathon se gun chhod diya aur woh bhi window se jump kar deta hai...


Thodi der tak kuch awaaz na aane par saare guards andar jaate hain toh dekhte hain ki wahan par window khula hua hai aur andar unka boss mara pada hua hota hai....



Idhar ladka aur ladki dono rassi ke zariye hotel ke neeche aate hain aur hotel ke basement ke parking mein rakhi ek car mein baithkar chal dete hain aur gaadi uss hotel se nikal jaati hai.


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EPISODE : 01
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LOCATION : INDONESIA
DATE: 03 MARCH 2017
TIME: 09 PM


Indonesia, Jakarta ke central part mein ek hotel ke saamne ek bahut hi mehngi gaadi aakar rukti hai.



Us gaadi se do shakhs bahar aate hain, jismein ek 22 saal ki ladki hoti hai aur ek 32 saal ke aas-paas aadmi hota hai.




Dono Shaks us hotel ke andar chale jaate hain. Hotel ka manager unhein lift ke zariye us hotel ke 20th floor ke ek kamre mein le jata hai, jahan do shakhs pehle se baithe hote hain.



Un shakhs ke saath room ke andar 8-9 guards apne haathon mein guns le kar khade hote hain, aur karib 10-12 guards room ke bahar poore floor par phailay hote hain.




Andar jaane ke baad, us room ka darwaza ek guard ke dwara band kiya jaata hai. Room pura sound proof tha ...


Aadmi (car wala): "Hello, Mr. Tango."



Aadmi (jo kamre mein baitha tha): "Hello, Mr. Kristofer."



Kristofer: "Toh Mr. Tango, aap kya deal laaye hain?"



Tango: "Mr. Kristofer, aapko yaad hoga ki main Indonesia ka sabse bada drug lord hoon, toh aaj aapke liye ekdham naya aur anokha drug lekar aaya hoon."




Phir Tango apne saath jo doosra aadmi baitha hota hai, usse ek suitcase leta hai aur usko kholta hai. Suitcase khulte hi (ek lock-type mechanism, digital wala khulta hai). Us digital lock ko kholte hi suitcase ka ek chhupa hua hissa khulta hai, jismein ek packet hota hai aur us packet ke andar woh rare drugs hoti hain.



Tango us drugs wale packet ko utha kar Mr. Kristofer ko de deta hai.



Idhar Mr. Kristofer un drugs ko jaanch rahe hote hain aur wahi Tango us ladki ko tirchi nazar se dekh rahe hote hain.



Us ladki ne burkha pehna hua hai, aur us ladki ki aankhon mein dekh kar aisa lagta tha jaise un aankhon mein dekh kar nasha ho jaye.



Kristofer drugs check kar leta hai.



Kristofer: "So, Mr. Tango, is drug ka kya naam hai?"



Tango: "Is khaas drug ka naam hai Scorpion drugs."


Kristofer: "Kya kimat hai?"


Tango: Per kilogram 30 thousands US dollars.


Kristofer: Mr. Tango, kya main jaan sakta hoon ye itna mehnga kyun hai?


Tango: Mr. Kristofer, ye drugs bahut mehange hain aur rare bhi, matlab poori duniya mein mere alawa is drugs ko koi nahi bechta... Aur saath hi is drugs ko pehchanna bahut mushkil hai. Agar is drug ko kisi insaan ko bas sunghadiya jaye toh, ye drug uss insaan ko 5 minutes ke andar hi maut ke gath mein suladega...




Kristofer: Aisa toh bahut drugs market mein hote hain, lekin isme itna khaas kya hai?


Tango: Mr. Kristofer, aise bahut drugs hote honge lekin is khas drug ko agar kisi insaan ko sunghaan de diya jaye, uske baad jab insaan mar jaata hai toh, iss baat ka pata koi nahi laga sakta ki woh insaan kaisa mara... Even blood drug test mein bhi pata nahi chalega ki uss insaan ki maut kaise hui...


Kristofer: Okk Mr. Tango... Then the deal is confirmed...


Kristofer ek suitcase leta hai, apne saath jo ladki aayi thi, uska haath sa aur open karke Tango ki taraf kar deta hai...


Kristofer: So Mr. Tango, here is your 1 million dollars advance, baaki ka order delivery hone ke baad... Aur maal kab tak milega?


Tango: Mr. Kristofer, maal aapko kal tak mil jayega... aur kaha par maal dena hai, uska bhi address de dijiye...



Kristofer: Hmm, ye lo card. Yahan par maal bhejna hai aur kisi ko shak nahi hona chahiye...


Tango: Thik hai, Mr. Kristofer, maal mil jayega aapko...



Kristofer: Okk, Mr. Tango ... I am glad to deal with you...


Phir Tango aur Kristofer dono apna haath milate hain ...


Swoosh....



Swooshhh ...



Swooshhh ...



Swooshhh ...



Swooshhh ...


Panch goliyaan chali, aur panch goliyaan Tango ke saath jo guards andar the, unko jaakar lagi...



Sab iss hamle se shocked ho gaye aur us taraf dekhne lage jahan se goliyaan chali thi... Goli aur koi nahi balki Tango ke ek guard ne chali thi...


Baaki saare guards apne guns uss guard ki taraf kar dete hain aur trigger dabate hain, lekin guns stock ho gayi hoti hain jiska chalte goliyaan nahi chali.


Tabhi woh ladki jo burkha pehne hue wahan khadi thi, usne apne haath mein pistol (Desert Eagle) lekar... Tango ki taraf point out kar deti hai...


Ladki : Stop it... warna tumhara ye boss khatam samjho.


Tango aur Kristofer ye dekh kar hairaan ho jaate hain.



Kristofer: Are you fucking mad... darling ... (gusse se)...

Tango : Kristofer, ye sab kya ho raha hai...



Ladki : Abe chutiya, tujhe dikhayi nahi de raha hai ki maine tere upar gun point karke rakhi hai, toh uske baad bhi pooch raha hai ki kya hai ye sab...



Tango: Kristofer, main iss dhoka ka badla zaroor lunga...



Iss par Kristofer kuch bolta hai... aur Tango bhi kuch bolta hai...




Swoooshshhhh...



Swoooshshhhh...




Swoooshshhhh...



Swoooshshhhh...


Chaar goliyaan aur chali, aur baaki jitne bhi guards uss room ke andar maujood the, sab khatam ho gaye... aur saath hi saath Tango ka saath jo aadmi aaya tha, woh bhi...


Ye dekh, Kristofer aur Tango bahut gussa ho gaye, aur Kristofer ne bahut tezi se uss ladki ke haath par ek zordaar kick maara... Jisse uss ladki ka aim Tango se haath gaya, aur Tango ne bahut tezi se uss guard ke paas jo pistol tha, usko chhinne ki koshish karne laga...


"Dhhapp..."



Us guard ne Tango ke sar ko apne sar se maara, jisse Tango thoda door hua, lekin apne haathon se pistol ko nahi chhoda...


"Chattttakkk..."


Phir us guard ne Tango ko ek chaat maara, aur Tango floor par gir gaya...



Idhar ladki ka aim miss hone ke baad Kristofer ne uss ladki ke dono haathon ko pakad liya... Aur dono ke beech chheen-japti shuru ho gayi...


Kristofer ne ek laat maar di uss ladki ke pet par, jisse woh ladki ke haathon se bandook chhoot gayi, aur woh ladki thodi door jakar ek table par ja giri...



Uss ladki ko table par ek knife mili, jisse apne haathon mein le liya uss ladki ne...



Phir Kristofer jaisa hi pistol chalana wala hota hai ki uss ladki ne bahut tez speed ke saath uss knife ko apne haathon mein lekar Kristofer ke jis haath mein pistol thi (right hand) usko apne left hand se pakad kar apne right hand mein jo knife tha usse chala diya aur knife seedha jakar Kristofer ke gardan mein ghus gaya...


Aur uss ladki ne Kristofer ka mooh pakad liya jisse Kristofer zyada kuch bol nahi paya aur wahi baith gaya aur apni antim saans ginte-ginte khatam ho gaya...




Idhar phir Tango khada hua aur ek zor daar laat marne ki koshish karta hai... Uska waar khali jaata hai...


phir uss guard ne ek zor daar punch maara Tango ko jisse Tango seedha floor par baith gaya...


"Iska kya karna hai?" woh guard poochta hai...



Aur apne chehre par jo mask laga hua tha usse hata deta hai... Woh guard ek 21 saal ka ladka nikla...


"Kya karna hai? Sa kya matlab? Khatam kar do isse agar ye khatam ho gaya toh ye rare drugs banana bhi khatam ho jayega... Issi drugs ki wajah se India ke sakron jawaanon ne apni jaan gawahi." ladki


"Okk" ... ye bol kar us ladke ne apne haathon mein pistol (Desert Eagle) le li aur Tango ki taraf kar diya ...


Tango ye dekh kar dar gaya ...


"Nahi nahi nahi .... Please mujhe mat maro ..."Tango ...



Woh ladka goli chala deta hai, jo jaake seedha Tango ke sir ke beech lagta hai, aur Tango wahi khatam ho jata hai.


Tabhi uss room ka gate tod kar 6-7 guards andar aate hain apne haathon mein assault rifle le kar... andar ka scenario dekh kar koi guard kuch karta, issa pehla hi...


Uss ladke ne neeche padhi ek assault rifle utha li aur ek uss ladki ko de di, aur dono ne cover le liya ...



Uss ladke ne ek table ka cover le liya aur wahi uss ladki ne diwar ka ....


jitne guards uss room ke andar aaye the, un sab guards ne apna rifle chalana shuru kar diya. Aur ek do guards ne kuch goliyaan chalane ke baad dheere-dheere aage ki taraf barh rahe the aur room ke andar aa rahe the ki..


. Uss ladki ne aur uss ladke ne ek saath goli chalayee, jo jakar sidha un dono guards ko lagi jo aage aa rahe the ... Phir baaki jitne bhi guards bache the uss floor par, woh sabhi room ke bahar diwar ka cover le lete hain...


Phir uss ladke ne uss ladki ko kuch ishara kiya aur ek gehri saans li, aur apne haath mein gun ko kas ke pakad liya aur bahar saare guards ke upar pre-fire karne laga, jisse kuch guards jo uss room ke darwaje par khade the, woh sab khatam ho gaye, aur bahar kuch guards pre-fire ka chapate maj aajate hain ...


Idhar jaisa hi woh ladka apna gun chala raha hota hai, woh ladki uss room ka ek window kholti hai aur woh ladki window ke platform par chadh jaati hai aur uss window ke bahar ek rassi latka rahi hoti hai... Phir woh ladki bolti hai uss ladke se


'Arceus, chalo...'


Phir woh ladki window se jump kar deti hai, aur saath hi saath uss ladke ne apne haathon se gun chhod diya aur woh bhi window se jump kar deta hai...


Thodi der tak kuch awaaz na aane par saare guards andar jaate hain toh dekhte hain ki wahan par window khula hua hai aur andar unka boss mara pada hua hota hai....



Idhar ladka aur ladki dono rassi ke zariye hotel ke neeche aate hain aur hotel ke basement ke parking mein rakhi ek car mein baithkar chal dete hain aur gaadi uss hotel se nikal jaati hai.


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