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UPDATE -6

Ab tak

Bahut kuch hua pichle update mein...Sofia ko jala ke maar diya Slayer ne.....yaa uske bhookh ne...uske saath naa jaane aur bhi kitne hi logo ko maara tha Slayer nme yaha tak ki apne dost Parth aur Neelam ko bhi maar diya tha usne..aur fir Earth ko chod Dark world mein chala gaya tha wahi Neelam aur Parth ka ek baccha bhi tha jo abhi IP ko de diya gaya tha...

Ab aage...

After !8 years

Insano ki basti...sorry saher....Haa saher hi hai jaha pe ek aam se school se ek ladka bhagte hue nikal raha tha.....uske picche se aur bhi ladke aur ladkiyan bhaag rahi thi...wo School ki chutti hui thi naa bas ussi wajah se....sabse last mein ek ladka ajeeb sa dubla patla..aankhon pe mota sa chasma tha uske..dhire dhire bahar ki oor jaa raha tha...

"ooye Prateek chal naa bee ab kya yahi rahega..."

"aa raha hu...yaar aaj aakhiri din hai yaha humara...yaha se jaane ka dil hi nahi kar raha mera.....kitni ajeeb baat hai naa jab school aana hota tha to hum bunk maara karte the aur aaj jab pata hai ki ab yaha nahi aana hai to bura lag raha hai..."

"Ye nahi shudhrega sala jaha dekho wahi shurru ho jaata hai....Accha sunno tum dono main aage ki padhayi ke liye dusri jaggah jaa raha hu..tum dono ka kya hai..."

"main bhi bahar jaa raha hu dusre saher mein..wahi padhayi karunga aage ka...Prateek tera kya plan hai.."

Arre Intro bhul gaya yaar :sigh:

Prateek- ye hi hai wo ladka Paarth aur neelam ka beta...unn dono ne kuch aur naaam diya tha isko par IP ne wo naam badal ke Prateek naam rakh diya...hoga koi kaaran...umar 18 saal se bada hai ye....aankhhon pe ek motta sa chasma..sarir dubla patla....aur kya hi kahu haa iski eyebrows milli hui thi...baaki sab dekhne mein ekdum normal saa lagta tha ye...

(prateek ke respect mein)

Main unn dono se ye sab sunn wapas se uddas ho gaya..Master mujhe kahi nahi bhejegi...wo mujhe yahi ope rahne ko kahegi...aur main bhi unki baat maan lkunga jaise aaj tak maante aaya hu...

Main kuch nahi bola aur waha se nikal gaya...

Hamara ghar pahle saher ke biccho bicch hua karta tha par kuchb saal pahle humne shift jkar liya...saher se thoda dur...jaha pe log kam the...yaa naa ke barabar....Master yahas mujhe ladne ke tarike shikhati hai...ab tak to main bahut kuchg seeekh chuka hu par kabhi Mastrer ko harra nahi payya...aur kisi aur pe wo mujhe ye sab use karne se manna karti hai...waise use karne ki jarurat hi nahi padhti yaha sab friendly hai...Haa kuch log mille the jo sahinahi the...par wo khud se mujhse dur ho jaate the...pata nahi kya tha....

Main School se nikal ke cycle leke chal diya ghar ki oor....

Meri speed bahut acchi thi...yaha se mere ghar tak jaane mein jaha ogo ko 30 minute tak cycle chalana padhta tha wahi main 5 minute mein waha pahuch jaata tha...par fir bhi master m,ujhe kachuwa kahti thi...

Main ghar pahucha...Master bahar garden mein baithi meditate kar rahi thi...haa wo mujhse bhi meditate karati hai...usnka kahna hai ki isse aap kisi ek chij pe jyada der tak focus ar sakte hai aur usko samajhne mein aapko aasani hoogi...ek baar mein hi aap kisi bnhi nayi cheez ko seekh sakte hai...

Yaad nahi kitne saalo se ye meditation karta aa raha hu main...

Maine cycle park ki aur fir kitchen mein jaake herbal tea banayi 2 cup ek Master ke liye aur ek mere liye...tea leke mein unke opaas gaya aur tea ko unke pass raklh fdiya...unhone aakhen kholi aur cut utha ke tea pinne lagi...

Master- School khatam kar liya tumne...ab aage ka kya socha hai...

Main jaanta tha ki nab kya hoga aakhir pahle bhi jheel chukka hu naa..ye pahle mujhse mera maat puchegi fir usko accha batayegi aur sab sahi chal raha hoga mere dimmag mein uss jagah pe jaake rahne tak ki planning ban jaayegi tab ye bolengi waha nahi tunm kahui aur jaaoge...

Main- Mere dost bahr jaa rahe hai study ke liye...main bhi...

Master- Hmm tum bhi jaana chahte ho hai naa...

Main- Haa Master main jaana chahta hu par...

Maater- Koin par war nahi tum jaaoge bahar sstudy ke liye...bas ye tay ho gaya....kal subhah humara saman pack karke rakhna...

Main ye sun ke ek baar itnna jt=yada chaunka ki muh mein jo herbal tea thi wo bahar niikal gayi...kaano pe yakkin hi nahi ho raha tha aaj Khud master ne bola mujhe ki main bahar padhne jaa sakta hu.....Maine 1 baar aur puccha pakka karne ke liye kahi aisa to nahi ki kaan khrab ho gaye hai mere..

Main jaldi se utha aur apna aur unka saman pack karne laga...jana kal subah tha par main abhi se laga hua tha...aisa lag raha tha kahi agarkuch chut gaya ho aur Master ne usko dekh apna mann naa badal de..bas yahi sab sochte hue main raat ke khane se pahle hi saari packing kar daali.....uske baad Raat ka khana banaya aur fir maine aur Master ne khana khaya...FIr main apne room mein chala gaya...

Room ke baare mein bata du...sayad ajeeb ho..par ye room bilul waisa hi tha jaise room mein main pahle se rahta aaya hu...ajeeb bas ye hai ki room ke dewaaron pe ajeeb tarah ki drawing banni hui thi aur ye...pata nahi kuch to tha inme...aisa lagta ki ye mujhe rokti ho bahar jaane mein....iss room ki ek aur baat thi...jab bhi mainj gussa ho jaata kissi bhi baat pe yaa fir kuch waisa hi main iss room mein aata aur fir jaadu ki tarah sab sahi...ajeeb hai naa...yaha pe naa agar mein bnahut jyada thaka hua bhii aata tha yaa fir chotton ke saath to thakan yaa wo chotten sab bahut jaldi hi khatam hoo jaati thi...kuch to ajeeb tha iss room mein....

Aaj mera yaha pe aakhiri din hoga...main saab kuch dhyaan se dekh raha tha sab kuch....fir bedpe leta aur soo gaya..

Next morning....

Meri aankh ek darawane sapne se khuli....aur jab khuli to....sab kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha aisa jaise main...main nahi hu...mujhe apna sharir thoda alag sa lag raha tha...maine apne haath dekhe...to haath baalo se bhare hue the...nahkhun the lambe lambe haathon mein...

Ye sab bilkul ussi sapne jaisa lag raha tha...usme bhi yahi hua tha main ek jagah khada hu saamne mere ahut hi ajeeb ajeeb log the..jo insan ki tarah dikhte the par unki height bbahut jyada thi...(Devta)....kuch unse thode chote the par unn sab ki age bahut jyada lag rahi thi haathon mein ek ajeeb si stick..aur sar pe conical topi...(jadugar)...fir kuch aise bhi the jo insan ki tarah hi the sayad par kisi ke kaan bahut lambe to kisi ki punch to kisi ke pankh....naa jaane kya kya tha waha pe...Aur unn logo ne meri oor kuch fenka jo seedha mere body mein samma gaya aur main hawa mein udne laga....daant bahar aa gaye mere sarir baalon se bhar gaya...sar dard karne laga mein chillane laga...aur fir dhadam se jammen pe aur behosh hone se pahle Master waha aa gayi aur main unki goad mein...ki tabhi mujhe Master kisi billi ki tarah dikhne lagi aur...itnne mein meri neend khul gayi...

Main uss soch se bahar aaya aur fir se ek baar haath ki oor dekha..sab sahi tha...bilkul normal....maine socha ki ye sab bas uss sapne ke karan hua tha...main bed se utha aur paani se muh dhoya...aur jaaise hi mirror mein khud ki sakal dekhi...dar ke picche ho gaya....iss waqt sakal itni darawani lag hi rahi thi..maine apni aankhen saaf ki aur fir se dekha to sab normal hi tha..par ek baat ajeeb thi binna chasme ke main khud ka chahera saaf saar dekh paa raha tha...saath mein mirror pe lage hue sticker pe chote chote sabdon mein jo likha hua tha wo bhi....

Main room se jaldi bahar gaya....Master ke pass ye sab batane ko ki...par wo milli hi nahi...ek chithi milli mujhe..Chitthi mein kuch likha tha aur saath mein ek sikka tha usme ajeeb saa sikka jisme ek aadmi ki sakal thi par uske kaan bade bade the jaise sapne mein dikha tha...

"Saaman pahuch gaya hai waha pe humara Main kisi se milne jaa rahi hu...ek bus aayegi ghar ke paas usme baith jaana....wo kuch bolle to ye sikka dikha dena unhe..."

Bas itna hi likha tha par ye sab bada ajeeb tha...mere ghar ke pass...Sorry master ke ghar ke pass jo ki saher se dur hai...jaha bahut kam log aate hai waha pe ek bus aaayegi...aur waha wo ajee sa sikka dena hai mujhe..aur Master mere se pahle hi kahi jaa chuki hai...ye sab ajeeb tha aur abhi main soch hi raha tha ki....

poooonn ppppooooooooonnn ppooooooooooooooooonnnn

horn ki aawaj aayi aur...maine bahar dekha to ek badi si bus khadi thi jiske upar ajeeb ajeeb se drawning banne hue the...

"ooye bacche chalega bhi yaa jaun main....tere kaaran late ho raha hai..."

Main abhi tak nahaya bhi nahi tha aur Bus bhi aa gayi thi haa ajeeb hi thi....aur bus wala thoda chidchida lag raha tha..Main waise hi chad gaya bus mein ye soch kar ki waha pahuch ke naha lunga...

Main gate band karke lock laga ke nikal gaya ghar se...haa isme 10 minute lag gaye mujhe...sab kuch check bhi to karna pada...phir bus pe chada to Bus conductor pura gusse mein...

"Kaha jaana hai..."

Ab yaha pe mere ko samajh nahi aaya kya kahu...pata hi nahi tha kaha jaana hai naa to maine hi pucha tha Master se aur naa unhone bataya tha....kuch samajh naa aaya to wo coin nikal ke usko dikha diya...

Usne coin ko dekha...fir mujhe dekha...

"Kamra number 23 mein jaao.."

Main - Kamra number ????..

B.Conductor- Arre yaar kon chod deta hai aise naye logo ko akele safar karne ke liye...Mohit isko iski jagah dikhao re...ooye Driver chal be jaldi waise bhi der ho rahi hai....Pata nahi kaha kaha se aa jate hai..

Wo bol hi raha tha ki kisi ne mere kandhe pe haath rakha aur main piche mudda koi nahi tha aage mudda waha bhi koi nahi tha...aur ekdum dekhte hi dekhte jaha mein khada tha wo jagah hi badal gayi..Main ek room mein pahuch gaya...par ye kaise main to bus mein tha wo bhi gate ke paas aur ab room mein...

Itna sab kuch kabhi nahi hua tha mere saath ki tabhi darwaje pe khatkhat hui..aur main waha darwaje ke paas gaya darte hue....dar to lagega naa ab aise hi achanak se kuch bhi hone lage to dar to lagega hi naa...

Waha darwaje pe pahuch ke darwaja khola to ek ajeeb sa dikhne wala aadmi...haa aadmi hi hoga...bas uske baal nahi the matlab ek bhi baal nahi chahre pe....eyebrows bhi nahi....ab kya hi kaha jaaye isko....ek pal ko to koi bhi dar jaayega....upar se main to pahle se hi darra hua tha...to cheekh hi nikal gayi....salle ko maarne wala tha mein ki wo bhi cheekhne laga...sala chal kya raha tha...

Wo- chilla kaahe rahe ho...salla Heart attack se maar murra gaye to kaa hoga samajh mein aata bhi hai kuch....chalo kamra khali karo stoppage aa gaya hai tumhara....bekar mein darata hai....

Wo itna bola aur darwaja band karke chala gaya wahi main....shocked ki wo tha kon aur kya bol ke nikal gaya ki tabhi ek jor ka jhatka saa laga mujhe aur main...main road pe khada hua tha...Haa road pe...bagal mein aur bhi log the...par ye sab ke sab insan ki tarah hi dikh rahe the...

Mere ko kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha tha pahle wo bus fir wo room aur ab ye...aakhir ho kya raha tha...aur jab kuch samajh mein naa aaye to ek hi kaam kar sakte hai aur wo hai...ruk ke sochne ka...par yaar yaha wo bhi nahi ho raha tha..abhi abhi main road pe tha aur dekhte hi dekhte ab mein kisi garden mein ek line mein khada tha...jaha pe aur bhi bahut se log the aur wo kisi bade se jagah mein jaa rahe the..main jab thodi der rukka raha waha to picche se aawaj dene lag gaye...sab ki aage chalo aage chalo...

Main aage badha aur fir uss Gate ke pass pahuch gaya jaha pe sab jaa rahe the...

"Pahechan bataiye.."

Main- Pahechan ????

Abhi kuch karta ki ek aadmi aaya..Haa ye ek perfect aadmi ki hi tarah dikh raha tha bas iska pet kuch jyada nikla hua tha...

Aadmi- Ye mere saath hai...chalo beta ander aao Kabse sab tumhara intezar kar rahe hai...

Main usko jaanta nahi tha...wo mere ko beta bol raha tha..agar aur koi din hota naa to kabhi naa jaata uske paas par chuki aaj sab kuch itna ajeeb ho raha tha ki...to main bhi chal diya uske saath....

Aadmi- Koi dikkat to nahi hui naa beta aane mein.....chalo ab mere saath aao...

Dikkat kya hi bataun dikkat ka kuch samajh mein hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya hua kaise hua....main yaha tak paucha kaise...

Aadmi- aarre beta kya hua..

Main kuch nahi bola aur o bhi chalne lage...main bhi unke picche picche chalne laga...aur dekhte hi dekhte ek bade..se castle ke saamne pahuch gaye hum log...

Aadmi - Chalo ander chalo..log intezar kar rahe hai...

Main ander gaya to waha pe Master pahle se thi...main unke bagal mein jaake baith gaya...saamne wale chair pe ek aadmi baitha hua tha...jo sayad kuch dekh raha tha haathon mein leke aur uss waqt bahut hi jyada uddas tha aur gusse mein bhi...

Aadmi- Madam hum bahut sarminda hai inn sab ke liye jo kuch bi hua...wo bahut hi galat hua..par ab hum aapke liye kuch karna chahte hai...

Master- (meri oor ishara karte hue) isko yaha daakhila do...saath mein isko special batch....samajh rahe ho naa usme bhi rakhna hai....

Aadmi- Admission to main karwa dunga par special batch...aapko bhi pata hoga ki wo sabke liye nahi hai...uske liye test dena hota hai...

Master- Maine ye to nahi kaha ki binna test ke...lelo..

Aadmi- Hmm..waqt ka bhi bata dijiye..kitna waqt chahiye isko...

Master- Aap taiyaari kariye...ye taiyyaar hai...

Mere samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki kon sa test aur kis chiz ki baat ho rahi thi...

Wo aadmi apne table pe rakhe hue ek bell ko bajata hai aur bahar se kuch log aa jaate hai...

Aadmi- Madam ko unka room dikhao...(Master se) aapko wahi room diya jaa raha hai jisme aap pahle rahte the...aur ab aapki post ki baat karre to aap..iss school ke Chancellor ki post di jaati hai...Ye sab Strange world se tay hua hai..sath mein aap samajh rahi hai naa Orion aur Titan planet bhi...

Master- Ye sab abhi batane ki jarurat nahi hai....Baad mein baat karte hai pahle iska test le lete hai..

Aadmi- Hmm...(logo se) samajh gaye naa jaao...

Sabhi nikal jaate hai...

Master bhi chair se khadi hoti hai aur..mujhe dekhti hai....main bhi khada ho jaata hu...aur fir waha se...nikal jaate hai hum dono...

Bahar jaate hi maine....

Main - Master aaj bahu....

Master- Hmm pata hai ab wo chodo jo main bata rahi hu wo suno...

Main - Ji master...

Master- Kuch der mein tumhe ladna hai....2 log honge...unko harana hai....ho sakta hai wo kuch aisi chize jaante ho jo tumhari soch se bhi parre ho par tum unhe haraoge...samhje...

Main - Hmm

Aaj pahli baar master ne mujhe ladne ko bola tha....aaj unki sikhayi hui har ek kala mein use kar sakta tha...m,aster ne bola tha Jitna hai matlab jitna hai...

Master- Chalo mere picche...

Aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein dekhte hai...kaise Prateek ladta hai...2 fighters se..wo bhi binna magic ke kyunki usko magic aata hi nahi hai.....Saath mein school mein tab se ab tak hue badlaon ke baare mein bhi jaanege..aur bhi kuch baatein.....

Banne rahiye...
fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
 

Vickey1211

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UPDATE -6

Ab tak

Bahut kuch hua pichle update mein...Sofia ko jala ke maar diya Slayer ne.....yaa uske bhookh ne...uske saath naa jaane aur bhi kitne hi logo ko maara tha Slayer nme yaha tak ki apne dost Parth aur Neelam ko bhi maar diya tha usne..aur fir Earth ko chod Dark world mein chala gaya tha wahi Neelam aur Parth ka ek baccha bhi tha jo abhi IP ko de diya gaya tha...

Ab aage...

After !8 years

Insano ki basti...sorry saher....Haa saher hi hai jaha pe ek aam se school se ek ladka bhagte hue nikal raha tha.....uske picche se aur bhi ladke aur ladkiyan bhaag rahi thi...wo School ki chutti hui thi naa bas ussi wajah se....sabse last mein ek ladka ajeeb sa dubla patla..aankhon pe mota sa chasma tha uske..dhire dhire bahar ki oor jaa raha tha...

"ooye Prateek chal naa bee ab kya yahi rahega..."

"aa raha hu...yaar aaj aakhiri din hai yaha humara...yaha se jaane ka dil hi nahi kar raha mera.....kitni ajeeb baat hai naa jab school aana hota tha to hum bunk maara karte the aur aaj jab pata hai ki ab yaha nahi aana hai to bura lag raha hai..."

"Ye nahi shudhrega sala jaha dekho wahi shurru ho jaata hai....Accha sunno tum dono main aage ki padhayi ke liye dusri jaggah jaa raha hu..tum dono ka kya hai..."

"main bhi bahar jaa raha hu dusre saher mein..wahi padhayi karunga aage ka...Prateek tera kya plan hai.."

Arre Intro bhul gaya yaar :sigh:

Prateek- ye hi hai wo ladka Paarth aur neelam ka beta...unn dono ne kuch aur naaam diya tha isko par IP ne wo naam badal ke Prateek naam rakh diya...hoga koi kaaran...umar 18 saal se bada hai ye....aankhhon pe ek motta sa chasma..sarir dubla patla....aur kya hi kahu haa iski eyebrows milli hui thi...baaki sab dekhne mein ekdum normal saa lagta tha ye...

(prateek ke respect mein)

Main unn dono se ye sab sunn wapas se uddas ho gaya..Master mujhe kahi nahi bhejegi...wo mujhe yahi ope rahne ko kahegi...aur main bhi unki baat maan lkunga jaise aaj tak maante aaya hu...

Main kuch nahi bola aur waha se nikal gaya...

Hamara ghar pahle saher ke biccho bicch hua karta tha par kuchb saal pahle humne shift jkar liya...saher se thoda dur...jaha pe log kam the...yaa naa ke barabar....Master yahas mujhe ladne ke tarike shikhati hai...ab tak to main bahut kuchg seeekh chuka hu par kabhi Mastrer ko harra nahi payya...aur kisi aur pe wo mujhe ye sab use karne se manna karti hai...waise use karne ki jarurat hi nahi padhti yaha sab friendly hai...Haa kuch log mille the jo sahinahi the...par wo khud se mujhse dur ho jaate the...pata nahi kya tha....

Main School se nikal ke cycle leke chal diya ghar ki oor....

Meri speed bahut acchi thi...yaha se mere ghar tak jaane mein jaha ogo ko 30 minute tak cycle chalana padhta tha wahi main 5 minute mein waha pahuch jaata tha...par fir bhi master m,ujhe kachuwa kahti thi...

Main ghar pahucha...Master bahar garden mein baithi meditate kar rahi thi...haa wo mujhse bhi meditate karati hai...usnka kahna hai ki isse aap kisi ek chij pe jyada der tak focus ar sakte hai aur usko samajhne mein aapko aasani hoogi...ek baar mein hi aap kisi bnhi nayi cheez ko seekh sakte hai...

Yaad nahi kitne saalo se ye meditation karta aa raha hu main...

Maine cycle park ki aur fir kitchen mein jaake herbal tea banayi 2 cup ek Master ke liye aur ek mere liye...tea leke mein unke opaas gaya aur tea ko unke pass raklh fdiya...unhone aakhen kholi aur cut utha ke tea pinne lagi...

Master- School khatam kar liya tumne...ab aage ka kya socha hai...

Main jaanta tha ki nab kya hoga aakhir pahle bhi jheel chukka hu naa..ye pahle mujhse mera maat puchegi fir usko accha batayegi aur sab sahi chal raha hoga mere dimmag mein uss jagah pe jaake rahne tak ki planning ban jaayegi tab ye bolengi waha nahi tunm kahui aur jaaoge...

Main- Mere dost bahr jaa rahe hai study ke liye...main bhi...

Master- Hmm tum bhi jaana chahte ho hai naa...

Main- Haa Master main jaana chahta hu par...

Maater- Koin par war nahi tum jaaoge bahar sstudy ke liye...bas ye tay ho gaya....kal subhah humara saman pack karke rakhna...

Main ye sun ke ek baar itnna jt=yada chaunka ki muh mein jo herbal tea thi wo bahar niikal gayi...kaano pe yakkin hi nahi ho raha tha aaj Khud master ne bola mujhe ki main bahar padhne jaa sakta hu.....Maine 1 baar aur puccha pakka karne ke liye kahi aisa to nahi ki kaan khrab ho gaye hai mere..

Main jaldi se utha aur apna aur unka saman pack karne laga...jana kal subah tha par main abhi se laga hua tha...aisa lag raha tha kahi agarkuch chut gaya ho aur Master ne usko dekh apna mann naa badal de..bas yahi sab sochte hue main raat ke khane se pahle hi saari packing kar daali.....uske baad Raat ka khana banaya aur fir maine aur Master ne khana khaya...FIr main apne room mein chala gaya...

Room ke baare mein bata du...sayad ajeeb ho..par ye room bilul waisa hi tha jaise room mein main pahle se rahta aaya hu...ajeeb bas ye hai ki room ke dewaaron pe ajeeb tarah ki drawing banni hui thi aur ye...pata nahi kuch to tha inme...aisa lagta ki ye mujhe rokti ho bahar jaane mein....iss room ki ek aur baat thi...jab bhi mainj gussa ho jaata kissi bhi baat pe yaa fir kuch waisa hi main iss room mein aata aur fir jaadu ki tarah sab sahi...ajeeb hai naa...yaha pe naa agar mein bnahut jyada thaka hua bhii aata tha yaa fir chotton ke saath to thakan yaa wo chotten sab bahut jaldi hi khatam hoo jaati thi...kuch to ajeeb tha iss room mein....

Aaj mera yaha pe aakhiri din hoga...main saab kuch dhyaan se dekh raha tha sab kuch....fir bedpe leta aur soo gaya..

Next morning....

Meri aankh ek darawane sapne se khuli....aur jab khuli to....sab kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha aisa jaise main...main nahi hu...mujhe apna sharir thoda alag sa lag raha tha...maine apne haath dekhe...to haath baalo se bhare hue the...nahkhun the lambe lambe haathon mein...

Ye sab bilkul ussi sapne jaisa lag raha tha...usme bhi yahi hua tha main ek jagah khada hu saamne mere ahut hi ajeeb ajeeb log the..jo insan ki tarah dikhte the par unki height bbahut jyada thi...(Devta)....kuch unse thode chote the par unn sab ki age bahut jyada lag rahi thi haathon mein ek ajeeb si stick..aur sar pe conical topi...(jadugar)...fir kuch aise bhi the jo insan ki tarah hi the sayad par kisi ke kaan bahut lambe to kisi ki punch to kisi ke pankh....naa jaane kya kya tha waha pe...Aur unn logo ne meri oor kuch fenka jo seedha mere body mein samma gaya aur main hawa mein udne laga....daant bahar aa gaye mere sarir baalon se bhar gaya...sar dard karne laga mein chillane laga...aur fir dhadam se jammen pe aur behosh hone se pahle Master waha aa gayi aur main unki goad mein...ki tabhi mujhe Master kisi billi ki tarah dikhne lagi aur...itnne mein meri neend khul gayi...

Main uss soch se bahar aaya aur fir se ek baar haath ki oor dekha..sab sahi tha...bilkul normal....maine socha ki ye sab bas uss sapne ke karan hua tha...main bed se utha aur paani se muh dhoya...aur jaaise hi mirror mein khud ki sakal dekhi...dar ke picche ho gaya....iss waqt sakal itni darawani lag hi rahi thi..maine apni aankhen saaf ki aur fir se dekha to sab normal hi tha..par ek baat ajeeb thi binna chasme ke main khud ka chahera saaf saar dekh paa raha tha...saath mein mirror pe lage hue sticker pe chote chote sabdon mein jo likha hua tha wo bhi....

Main room se jaldi bahar gaya....Master ke pass ye sab batane ko ki...par wo milli hi nahi...ek chithi milli mujhe..Chitthi mein kuch likha tha aur saath mein ek sikka tha usme ajeeb saa sikka jisme ek aadmi ki sakal thi par uske kaan bade bade the jaise sapne mein dikha tha...

"Saaman pahuch gaya hai waha pe humara Main kisi se milne jaa rahi hu...ek bus aayegi ghar ke paas usme baith jaana....wo kuch bolle to ye sikka dikha dena unhe..."

Bas itna hi likha tha par ye sab bada ajeeb tha...mere ghar ke pass...Sorry master ke ghar ke pass jo ki saher se dur hai...jaha bahut kam log aate hai waha pe ek bus aaayegi...aur waha wo ajee sa sikka dena hai mujhe..aur Master mere se pahle hi kahi jaa chuki hai...ye sab ajeeb tha aur abhi main soch hi raha tha ki....

poooonn ppppooooooooonnn ppooooooooooooooooonnnn

horn ki aawaj aayi aur...maine bahar dekha to ek badi si bus khadi thi jiske upar ajeeb ajeeb se drawning banne hue the...

"ooye bacche chalega bhi yaa jaun main....tere kaaran late ho raha hai..."

Main abhi tak nahaya bhi nahi tha aur Bus bhi aa gayi thi haa ajeeb hi thi....aur bus wala thoda chidchida lag raha tha..Main waise hi chad gaya bus mein ye soch kar ki waha pahuch ke naha lunga...

Main gate band karke lock laga ke nikal gaya ghar se...haa isme 10 minute lag gaye mujhe...sab kuch check bhi to karna pada...phir bus pe chada to Bus conductor pura gusse mein...

"Kaha jaana hai..."

Ab yaha pe mere ko samajh nahi aaya kya kahu...pata hi nahi tha kaha jaana hai naa to maine hi pucha tha Master se aur naa unhone bataya tha....kuch samajh naa aaya to wo coin nikal ke usko dikha diya...

Usne coin ko dekha...fir mujhe dekha...

"Kamra number 23 mein jaao.."

Main - Kamra number ????..

B.Conductor- Arre yaar kon chod deta hai aise naye logo ko akele safar karne ke liye...Mohit isko iski jagah dikhao re...ooye Driver chal be jaldi waise bhi der ho rahi hai....Pata nahi kaha kaha se aa jate hai..

Wo bol hi raha tha ki kisi ne mere kandhe pe haath rakha aur main piche mudda koi nahi tha aage mudda waha bhi koi nahi tha...aur ekdum dekhte hi dekhte jaha mein khada tha wo jagah hi badal gayi..Main ek room mein pahuch gaya...par ye kaise main to bus mein tha wo bhi gate ke paas aur ab room mein...

Itna sab kuch kabhi nahi hua tha mere saath ki tabhi darwaje pe khatkhat hui..aur main waha darwaje ke paas gaya darte hue....dar to lagega naa ab aise hi achanak se kuch bhi hone lage to dar to lagega hi naa...

Waha darwaje pe pahuch ke darwaja khola to ek ajeeb sa dikhne wala aadmi...haa aadmi hi hoga...bas uske baal nahi the matlab ek bhi baal nahi chahre pe....eyebrows bhi nahi....ab kya hi kaha jaaye isko....ek pal ko to koi bhi dar jaayega....upar se main to pahle se hi darra hua tha...to cheekh hi nikal gayi....salle ko maarne wala tha mein ki wo bhi cheekhne laga...sala chal kya raha tha...

Wo- chilla kaahe rahe ho...salla Heart attack se maar murra gaye to kaa hoga samajh mein aata bhi hai kuch....chalo kamra khali karo stoppage aa gaya hai tumhara....bekar mein darata hai....

Wo itna bola aur darwaja band karke chala gaya wahi main....shocked ki wo tha kon aur kya bol ke nikal gaya ki tabhi ek jor ka jhatka saa laga mujhe aur main...main road pe khada hua tha...Haa road pe...bagal mein aur bhi log the...par ye sab ke sab insan ki tarah hi dikh rahe the...

Mere ko kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha tha pahle wo bus fir wo room aur ab ye...aakhir ho kya raha tha...aur jab kuch samajh mein naa aaye to ek hi kaam kar sakte hai aur wo hai...ruk ke sochne ka...par yaar yaha wo bhi nahi ho raha tha..abhi abhi main road pe tha aur dekhte hi dekhte ab mein kisi garden mein ek line mein khada tha...jaha pe aur bhi bahut se log the aur wo kisi bade se jagah mein jaa rahe the..main jab thodi der rukka raha waha to picche se aawaj dene lag gaye...sab ki aage chalo aage chalo...

Main aage badha aur fir uss Gate ke pass pahuch gaya jaha pe sab jaa rahe the...

"Pahechan bataiye.."

Main- Pahechan ????

Abhi kuch karta ki ek aadmi aaya..Haa ye ek perfect aadmi ki hi tarah dikh raha tha bas iska pet kuch jyada nikla hua tha...

Aadmi- Ye mere saath hai...chalo beta ander aao Kabse sab tumhara intezar kar rahe hai...

Main usko jaanta nahi tha...wo mere ko beta bol raha tha..agar aur koi din hota naa to kabhi naa jaata uske paas par chuki aaj sab kuch itna ajeeb ho raha tha ki...to main bhi chal diya uske saath....

Aadmi- Koi dikkat to nahi hui naa beta aane mein.....chalo ab mere saath aao...

Dikkat kya hi bataun dikkat ka kuch samajh mein hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya hua kaise hua....main yaha tak paucha kaise...

Aadmi- aarre beta kya hua..

Main kuch nahi bola aur o bhi chalne lage...main bhi unke picche picche chalne laga...aur dekhte hi dekhte ek bade..se castle ke saamne pahuch gaye hum log...

Aadmi - Chalo ander chalo..log intezar kar rahe hai...

Main ander gaya to waha pe Master pahle se thi...main unke bagal mein jaake baith gaya...saamne wale chair pe ek aadmi baitha hua tha...jo sayad kuch dekh raha tha haathon mein leke aur uss waqt bahut hi jyada uddas tha aur gusse mein bhi...

Aadmi- Madam hum bahut sarminda hai inn sab ke liye jo kuch bi hua...wo bahut hi galat hua..par ab hum aapke liye kuch karna chahte hai...

Master- (meri oor ishara karte hue) isko yaha daakhila do...saath mein isko special batch....samajh rahe ho naa usme bhi rakhna hai....

Aadmi- Admission to main karwa dunga par special batch...aapko bhi pata hoga ki wo sabke liye nahi hai...uske liye test dena hota hai...

Master- Maine ye to nahi kaha ki binna test ke...lelo..

Aadmi- Hmm..waqt ka bhi bata dijiye..kitna waqt chahiye isko...

Master- Aap taiyaari kariye...ye taiyyaar hai...

Mere samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki kon sa test aur kis chiz ki baat ho rahi thi...

Wo aadmi apne table pe rakhe hue ek bell ko bajata hai aur bahar se kuch log aa jaate hai...

Aadmi- Madam ko unka room dikhao...(Master se) aapko wahi room diya jaa raha hai jisme aap pahle rahte the...aur ab aapki post ki baat karre to aap..iss school ke Chancellor ki post di jaati hai...Ye sab Strange world se tay hua hai..sath mein aap samajh rahi hai naa Orion aur Titan planet bhi...

Master- Ye sab abhi batane ki jarurat nahi hai....Baad mein baat karte hai pahle iska test le lete hai..

Aadmi- Hmm...(logo se) samajh gaye naa jaao...

Sabhi nikal jaate hai...

Master bhi chair se khadi hoti hai aur..mujhe dekhti hai....main bhi khada ho jaata hu...aur fir waha se...nikal jaate hai hum dono...

Bahar jaate hi maine....

Main - Master aaj bahu....

Master- Hmm pata hai ab wo chodo jo main bata rahi hu wo suno...

Main - Ji master...

Master- Kuch der mein tumhe ladna hai....2 log honge...unko harana hai....ho sakta hai wo kuch aisi chize jaante ho jo tumhari soch se bhi parre ho par tum unhe haraoge...samhje...

Main - Hmm

Aaj pahli baar master ne mujhe ladne ko bola tha....aaj unki sikhayi hui har ek kala mein use kar sakta tha...m,aster ne bola tha Jitna hai matlab jitna hai...

Master- Chalo mere picche...

Aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein dekhte hai...kaise Prateek ladta hai...2 fighters se..wo bhi binna magic ke kyunki usko magic aata hi nahi hai.....Saath mein school mein tab se ab tak hue badlaon ke baare mein bhi jaanege..aur bhi kuch baatein.....

Banne rahiye...
Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
 

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Ab tak

Bahut kuch hua pichle update mein...Sofia ko jala ke maar diya Slayer ne.....yaa uske bhookh ne...uske saath naa jaane aur bhi kitne hi logo ko maara tha Slayer nme yaha tak ki apne dost Parth aur Neelam ko bhi maar diya tha usne..aur fir Earth ko chod Dark world mein chala gaya tha wahi Neelam aur Parth ka ek baccha bhi tha jo abhi IP ko de diya gaya tha...

Ab aage...

After !8 years

Insano ki basti...sorry saher....Haa saher hi hai jaha pe ek aam se school se ek ladka bhagte hue nikal raha tha.....uske picche se aur bhi ladke aur ladkiyan bhaag rahi thi...wo School ki chutti hui thi naa bas ussi wajah se....sabse last mein ek ladka ajeeb sa dubla patla..aankhon pe mota sa chasma tha uske..dhire dhire bahar ki oor jaa raha tha...

"ooye Prateek chal naa bee ab kya yahi rahega..."

"aa raha hu...yaar aaj aakhiri din hai yaha humara...yaha se jaane ka dil hi nahi kar raha mera.....kitni ajeeb baat hai naa jab school aana hota tha to hum bunk maara karte the aur aaj jab pata hai ki ab yaha nahi aana hai to bura lag raha hai..."

"Ye nahi shudhrega sala jaha dekho wahi shurru ho jaata hai....Accha sunno tum dono main aage ki padhayi ke liye dusri jaggah jaa raha hu..tum dono ka kya hai..."

"main bhi bahar jaa raha hu dusre saher mein..wahi padhayi karunga aage ka...Prateek tera kya plan hai.."

Arre Intro bhul gaya yaar :sigh:

Prateek- ye hi hai wo ladka Paarth aur neelam ka beta...unn dono ne kuch aur naaam diya tha isko par IP ne wo naam badal ke Prateek naam rakh diya...hoga koi kaaran...umar 18 saal se bada hai ye....aankhhon pe ek motta sa chasma..sarir dubla patla....aur kya hi kahu haa iski eyebrows milli hui thi...baaki sab dekhne mein ekdum normal saa lagta tha ye...

(prateek ke respect mein)

Main unn dono se ye sab sunn wapas se uddas ho gaya..Master mujhe kahi nahi bhejegi...wo mujhe yahi ope rahne ko kahegi...aur main bhi unki baat maan lkunga jaise aaj tak maante aaya hu...

Main kuch nahi bola aur waha se nikal gaya...

Hamara ghar pahle saher ke biccho bicch hua karta tha par kuchb saal pahle humne shift jkar liya...saher se thoda dur...jaha pe log kam the...yaa naa ke barabar....Master yahas mujhe ladne ke tarike shikhati hai...ab tak to main bahut kuchg seeekh chuka hu par kabhi Mastrer ko harra nahi payya...aur kisi aur pe wo mujhe ye sab use karne se manna karti hai...waise use karne ki jarurat hi nahi padhti yaha sab friendly hai...Haa kuch log mille the jo sahinahi the...par wo khud se mujhse dur ho jaate the...pata nahi kya tha....

Main School se nikal ke cycle leke chal diya ghar ki oor....

Meri speed bahut acchi thi...yaha se mere ghar tak jaane mein jaha ogo ko 30 minute tak cycle chalana padhta tha wahi main 5 minute mein waha pahuch jaata tha...par fir bhi master m,ujhe kachuwa kahti thi...

Main ghar pahucha...Master bahar garden mein baithi meditate kar rahi thi...haa wo mujhse bhi meditate karati hai...usnka kahna hai ki isse aap kisi ek chij pe jyada der tak focus ar sakte hai aur usko samajhne mein aapko aasani hoogi...ek baar mein hi aap kisi bnhi nayi cheez ko seekh sakte hai...

Yaad nahi kitne saalo se ye meditation karta aa raha hu main...

Maine cycle park ki aur fir kitchen mein jaake herbal tea banayi 2 cup ek Master ke liye aur ek mere liye...tea leke mein unke opaas gaya aur tea ko unke pass raklh fdiya...unhone aakhen kholi aur cut utha ke tea pinne lagi...

Master- School khatam kar liya tumne...ab aage ka kya socha hai...

Main jaanta tha ki nab kya hoga aakhir pahle bhi jheel chukka hu naa..ye pahle mujhse mera maat puchegi fir usko accha batayegi aur sab sahi chal raha hoga mere dimmag mein uss jagah pe jaake rahne tak ki planning ban jaayegi tab ye bolengi waha nahi tunm kahui aur jaaoge...

Main- Mere dost bahr jaa rahe hai study ke liye...main bhi...

Master- Hmm tum bhi jaana chahte ho hai naa...

Main- Haa Master main jaana chahta hu par...

Maater- Koin par war nahi tum jaaoge bahar sstudy ke liye...bas ye tay ho gaya....kal subhah humara saman pack karke rakhna...

Main ye sun ke ek baar itnna jt=yada chaunka ki muh mein jo herbal tea thi wo bahar niikal gayi...kaano pe yakkin hi nahi ho raha tha aaj Khud master ne bola mujhe ki main bahar padhne jaa sakta hu.....Maine 1 baar aur puccha pakka karne ke liye kahi aisa to nahi ki kaan khrab ho gaye hai mere..

Main jaldi se utha aur apna aur unka saman pack karne laga...jana kal subah tha par main abhi se laga hua tha...aisa lag raha tha kahi agarkuch chut gaya ho aur Master ne usko dekh apna mann naa badal de..bas yahi sab sochte hue main raat ke khane se pahle hi saari packing kar daali.....uske baad Raat ka khana banaya aur fir maine aur Master ne khana khaya...FIr main apne room mein chala gaya...

Room ke baare mein bata du...sayad ajeeb ho..par ye room bilul waisa hi tha jaise room mein main pahle se rahta aaya hu...ajeeb bas ye hai ki room ke dewaaron pe ajeeb tarah ki drawing banni hui thi aur ye...pata nahi kuch to tha inme...aisa lagta ki ye mujhe rokti ho bahar jaane mein....iss room ki ek aur baat thi...jab bhi mainj gussa ho jaata kissi bhi baat pe yaa fir kuch waisa hi main iss room mein aata aur fir jaadu ki tarah sab sahi...ajeeb hai naa...yaha pe naa agar mein bnahut jyada thaka hua bhii aata tha yaa fir chotton ke saath to thakan yaa wo chotten sab bahut jaldi hi khatam hoo jaati thi...kuch to ajeeb tha iss room mein....

Aaj mera yaha pe aakhiri din hoga...main saab kuch dhyaan se dekh raha tha sab kuch....fir bedpe leta aur soo gaya..

Next morning....

Meri aankh ek darawane sapne se khuli....aur jab khuli to....sab kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha aisa jaise main...main nahi hu...mujhe apna sharir thoda alag sa lag raha tha...maine apne haath dekhe...to haath baalo se bhare hue the...nahkhun the lambe lambe haathon mein...

Ye sab bilkul ussi sapne jaisa lag raha tha...usme bhi yahi hua tha main ek jagah khada hu saamne mere ahut hi ajeeb ajeeb log the..jo insan ki tarah dikhte the par unki height bbahut jyada thi...(Devta)....kuch unse thode chote the par unn sab ki age bahut jyada lag rahi thi haathon mein ek ajeeb si stick..aur sar pe conical topi...(jadugar)...fir kuch aise bhi the jo insan ki tarah hi the sayad par kisi ke kaan bahut lambe to kisi ki punch to kisi ke pankh....naa jaane kya kya tha waha pe...Aur unn logo ne meri oor kuch fenka jo seedha mere body mein samma gaya aur main hawa mein udne laga....daant bahar aa gaye mere sarir baalon se bhar gaya...sar dard karne laga mein chillane laga...aur fir dhadam se jammen pe aur behosh hone se pahle Master waha aa gayi aur main unki goad mein...ki tabhi mujhe Master kisi billi ki tarah dikhne lagi aur...itnne mein meri neend khul gayi...

Main uss soch se bahar aaya aur fir se ek baar haath ki oor dekha..sab sahi tha...bilkul normal....maine socha ki ye sab bas uss sapne ke karan hua tha...main bed se utha aur paani se muh dhoya...aur jaaise hi mirror mein khud ki sakal dekhi...dar ke picche ho gaya....iss waqt sakal itni darawani lag hi rahi thi..maine apni aankhen saaf ki aur fir se dekha to sab normal hi tha..par ek baat ajeeb thi binna chasme ke main khud ka chahera saaf saar dekh paa raha tha...saath mein mirror pe lage hue sticker pe chote chote sabdon mein jo likha hua tha wo bhi....

Main room se jaldi bahar gaya....Master ke pass ye sab batane ko ki...par wo milli hi nahi...ek chithi milli mujhe..Chitthi mein kuch likha tha aur saath mein ek sikka tha usme ajeeb saa sikka jisme ek aadmi ki sakal thi par uske kaan bade bade the jaise sapne mein dikha tha...

"Saaman pahuch gaya hai waha pe humara Main kisi se milne jaa rahi hu...ek bus aayegi ghar ke paas usme baith jaana....wo kuch bolle to ye sikka dikha dena unhe..."

Bas itna hi likha tha par ye sab bada ajeeb tha...mere ghar ke pass...Sorry master ke ghar ke pass jo ki saher se dur hai...jaha bahut kam log aate hai waha pe ek bus aaayegi...aur waha wo ajee sa sikka dena hai mujhe..aur Master mere se pahle hi kahi jaa chuki hai...ye sab ajeeb tha aur abhi main soch hi raha tha ki....

poooonn ppppooooooooonnn ppooooooooooooooooonnnn

horn ki aawaj aayi aur...maine bahar dekha to ek badi si bus khadi thi jiske upar ajeeb ajeeb se drawning banne hue the...

"ooye bacche chalega bhi yaa jaun main....tere kaaran late ho raha hai..."

Main abhi tak nahaya bhi nahi tha aur Bus bhi aa gayi thi haa ajeeb hi thi....aur bus wala thoda chidchida lag raha tha..Main waise hi chad gaya bus mein ye soch kar ki waha pahuch ke naha lunga...

Main gate band karke lock laga ke nikal gaya ghar se...haa isme 10 minute lag gaye mujhe...sab kuch check bhi to karna pada...phir bus pe chada to Bus conductor pura gusse mein...

"Kaha jaana hai..."

Ab yaha pe mere ko samajh nahi aaya kya kahu...pata hi nahi tha kaha jaana hai naa to maine hi pucha tha Master se aur naa unhone bataya tha....kuch samajh naa aaya to wo coin nikal ke usko dikha diya...

Usne coin ko dekha...fir mujhe dekha...

"Kamra number 23 mein jaao.."

Main - Kamra number ????..

B.Conductor- Arre yaar kon chod deta hai aise naye logo ko akele safar karne ke liye...Mohit isko iski jagah dikhao re...ooye Driver chal be jaldi waise bhi der ho rahi hai....Pata nahi kaha kaha se aa jate hai..

Wo bol hi raha tha ki kisi ne mere kandhe pe haath rakha aur main piche mudda koi nahi tha aage mudda waha bhi koi nahi tha...aur ekdum dekhte hi dekhte jaha mein khada tha wo jagah hi badal gayi..Main ek room mein pahuch gaya...par ye kaise main to bus mein tha wo bhi gate ke paas aur ab room mein...

Itna sab kuch kabhi nahi hua tha mere saath ki tabhi darwaje pe khatkhat hui..aur main waha darwaje ke paas gaya darte hue....dar to lagega naa ab aise hi achanak se kuch bhi hone lage to dar to lagega hi naa...

Waha darwaje pe pahuch ke darwaja khola to ek ajeeb sa dikhne wala aadmi...haa aadmi hi hoga...bas uske baal nahi the matlab ek bhi baal nahi chahre pe....eyebrows bhi nahi....ab kya hi kaha jaaye isko....ek pal ko to koi bhi dar jaayega....upar se main to pahle se hi darra hua tha...to cheekh hi nikal gayi....salle ko maarne wala tha mein ki wo bhi cheekhne laga...sala chal kya raha tha...

Wo- chilla kaahe rahe ho...salla Heart attack se maar murra gaye to kaa hoga samajh mein aata bhi hai kuch....chalo kamra khali karo stoppage aa gaya hai tumhara....bekar mein darata hai....

Wo itna bola aur darwaja band karke chala gaya wahi main....shocked ki wo tha kon aur kya bol ke nikal gaya ki tabhi ek jor ka jhatka saa laga mujhe aur main...main road pe khada hua tha...Haa road pe...bagal mein aur bhi log the...par ye sab ke sab insan ki tarah hi dikh rahe the...

Mere ko kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha tha pahle wo bus fir wo room aur ab ye...aakhir ho kya raha tha...aur jab kuch samajh mein naa aaye to ek hi kaam kar sakte hai aur wo hai...ruk ke sochne ka...par yaar yaha wo bhi nahi ho raha tha..abhi abhi main road pe tha aur dekhte hi dekhte ab mein kisi garden mein ek line mein khada tha...jaha pe aur bhi bahut se log the aur wo kisi bade se jagah mein jaa rahe the..main jab thodi der rukka raha waha to picche se aawaj dene lag gaye...sab ki aage chalo aage chalo...

Main aage badha aur fir uss Gate ke pass pahuch gaya jaha pe sab jaa rahe the...

"Pahechan bataiye.."

Main- Pahechan ????

Abhi kuch karta ki ek aadmi aaya..Haa ye ek perfect aadmi ki hi tarah dikh raha tha bas iska pet kuch jyada nikla hua tha...

Aadmi- Ye mere saath hai...chalo beta ander aao Kabse sab tumhara intezar kar rahe hai...

Main usko jaanta nahi tha...wo mere ko beta bol raha tha..agar aur koi din hota naa to kabhi naa jaata uske paas par chuki aaj sab kuch itna ajeeb ho raha tha ki...to main bhi chal diya uske saath....

Aadmi- Koi dikkat to nahi hui naa beta aane mein.....chalo ab mere saath aao...

Dikkat kya hi bataun dikkat ka kuch samajh mein hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya hua kaise hua....main yaha tak paucha kaise...

Aadmi- aarre beta kya hua..

Main kuch nahi bola aur o bhi chalne lage...main bhi unke picche picche chalne laga...aur dekhte hi dekhte ek bade..se castle ke saamne pahuch gaye hum log...

Aadmi - Chalo ander chalo..log intezar kar rahe hai...

Main ander gaya to waha pe Master pahle se thi...main unke bagal mein jaake baith gaya...saamne wale chair pe ek aadmi baitha hua tha...jo sayad kuch dekh raha tha haathon mein leke aur uss waqt bahut hi jyada uddas tha aur gusse mein bhi...

Aadmi- Madam hum bahut sarminda hai inn sab ke liye jo kuch bi hua...wo bahut hi galat hua..par ab hum aapke liye kuch karna chahte hai...

Master- (meri oor ishara karte hue) isko yaha daakhila do...saath mein isko special batch....samajh rahe ho naa usme bhi rakhna hai....

Aadmi- Admission to main karwa dunga par special batch...aapko bhi pata hoga ki wo sabke liye nahi hai...uske liye test dena hota hai...

Master- Maine ye to nahi kaha ki binna test ke...lelo..

Aadmi- Hmm..waqt ka bhi bata dijiye..kitna waqt chahiye isko...

Master- Aap taiyaari kariye...ye taiyyaar hai...

Mere samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki kon sa test aur kis chiz ki baat ho rahi thi...

Wo aadmi apne table pe rakhe hue ek bell ko bajata hai aur bahar se kuch log aa jaate hai...

Aadmi- Madam ko unka room dikhao...(Master se) aapko wahi room diya jaa raha hai jisme aap pahle rahte the...aur ab aapki post ki baat karre to aap..iss school ke Chancellor ki post di jaati hai...Ye sab Strange world se tay hua hai..sath mein aap samajh rahi hai naa Orion aur Titan planet bhi...

Master- Ye sab abhi batane ki jarurat nahi hai....Baad mein baat karte hai pahle iska test le lete hai..

Aadmi- Hmm...(logo se) samajh gaye naa jaao...

Sabhi nikal jaate hai...

Master bhi chair se khadi hoti hai aur..mujhe dekhti hai....main bhi khada ho jaata hu...aur fir waha se...nikal jaate hai hum dono...

Bahar jaate hi maine....

Main - Master aaj bahu....

Master- Hmm pata hai ab wo chodo jo main bata rahi hu wo suno...

Main - Ji master...

Master- Kuch der mein tumhe ladna hai....2 log honge...unko harana hai....ho sakta hai wo kuch aisi chize jaante ho jo tumhari soch se bhi parre ho par tum unhe haraoge...samhje...

Main - Hmm

Aaj pahli baar master ne mujhe ladne ko bola tha....aaj unki sikhayi hui har ek kala mein use kar sakta tha...m,aster ne bola tha Jitna hai matlab jitna hai...

Master- Chalo mere picche...

Aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein dekhte hai...kaise Prateek ladta hai...2 fighters se..wo bhi binna magic ke kyunki usko magic aata hi nahi hai.....Saath mein school mein tab se ab tak hue badlaon ke baare mein bhi jaanege..aur bhi kuch baatein.....

Banne rahiye...
Nice mind blowing update brother
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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UPDATE -6

Ab tak

Bahut kuch hua pichle update mein...Sofia ko jala ke maar diya Slayer ne.....yaa uske bhookh ne...uske saath naa jaane aur bhi kitne hi logo ko maara tha Slayer nme yaha tak ki apne dost Parth aur Neelam ko bhi maar diya tha usne..aur fir Earth ko chod Dark world mein chala gaya tha wahi Neelam aur Parth ka ek baccha bhi tha jo abhi IP ko de diya gaya tha...

Ab aage...

After !8 years

Insano ki basti...sorry saher....Haa saher hi hai jaha pe ek aam se school se ek ladka bhagte hue nikal raha tha.....uske picche se aur bhi ladke aur ladkiyan bhaag rahi thi...wo School ki chutti hui thi naa bas ussi wajah se....sabse last mein ek ladka ajeeb sa dubla patla..aankhon pe mota sa chasma tha uske..dhire dhire bahar ki oor jaa raha tha...

"ooye Prateek chal naa bee ab kya yahi rahega..."

"aa raha hu...yaar aaj aakhiri din hai yaha humara...yaha se jaane ka dil hi nahi kar raha mera.....kitni ajeeb baat hai naa jab school aana hota tha to hum bunk maara karte the aur aaj jab pata hai ki ab yaha nahi aana hai to bura lag raha hai..."

"Ye nahi shudhrega sala jaha dekho wahi shurru ho jaata hai....Accha sunno tum dono main aage ki padhayi ke liye dusri jaggah jaa raha hu..tum dono ka kya hai..."

"main bhi bahar jaa raha hu dusre saher mein..wahi padhayi karunga aage ka...Prateek tera kya plan hai.."

Arre Intro bhul gaya yaar :sigh:

Prateek- ye hi hai wo ladka Paarth aur neelam ka beta...unn dono ne kuch aur naaam diya tha isko par IP ne wo naam badal ke Prateek naam rakh diya...hoga koi kaaran...umar 18 saal se bada hai ye....aankhhon pe ek motta sa chasma..sarir dubla patla....aur kya hi kahu haa iski eyebrows milli hui thi...baaki sab dekhne mein ekdum normal saa lagta tha ye...

(prateek ke respect mein)

Main unn dono se ye sab sunn wapas se uddas ho gaya..Master mujhe kahi nahi bhejegi...wo mujhe yahi ope rahne ko kahegi...aur main bhi unki baat maan lkunga jaise aaj tak maante aaya hu...

Main kuch nahi bola aur waha se nikal gaya...

Hamara ghar pahle saher ke biccho bicch hua karta tha par kuchb saal pahle humne shift jkar liya...saher se thoda dur...jaha pe log kam the...yaa naa ke barabar....Master yahas mujhe ladne ke tarike shikhati hai...ab tak to main bahut kuchg seeekh chuka hu par kabhi Mastrer ko harra nahi payya...aur kisi aur pe wo mujhe ye sab use karne se manna karti hai...waise use karne ki jarurat hi nahi padhti yaha sab friendly hai...Haa kuch log mille the jo sahinahi the...par wo khud se mujhse dur ho jaate the...pata nahi kya tha....

Main School se nikal ke cycle leke chal diya ghar ki oor....

Meri speed bahut acchi thi...yaha se mere ghar tak jaane mein jaha ogo ko 30 minute tak cycle chalana padhta tha wahi main 5 minute mein waha pahuch jaata tha...par fir bhi master m,ujhe kachuwa kahti thi...

Main ghar pahucha...Master bahar garden mein baithi meditate kar rahi thi...haa wo mujhse bhi meditate karati hai...usnka kahna hai ki isse aap kisi ek chij pe jyada der tak focus ar sakte hai aur usko samajhne mein aapko aasani hoogi...ek baar mein hi aap kisi bnhi nayi cheez ko seekh sakte hai...

Yaad nahi kitne saalo se ye meditation karta aa raha hu main...

Maine cycle park ki aur fir kitchen mein jaake herbal tea banayi 2 cup ek Master ke liye aur ek mere liye...tea leke mein unke opaas gaya aur tea ko unke pass raklh fdiya...unhone aakhen kholi aur cut utha ke tea pinne lagi...

Master- School khatam kar liya tumne...ab aage ka kya socha hai...

Main jaanta tha ki nab kya hoga aakhir pahle bhi jheel chukka hu naa..ye pahle mujhse mera maat puchegi fir usko accha batayegi aur sab sahi chal raha hoga mere dimmag mein uss jagah pe jaake rahne tak ki planning ban jaayegi tab ye bolengi waha nahi tunm kahui aur jaaoge...

Main- Mere dost bahr jaa rahe hai study ke liye...main bhi...

Master- Hmm tum bhi jaana chahte ho hai naa...

Main- Haa Master main jaana chahta hu par...

Maater- Koin par war nahi tum jaaoge bahar sstudy ke liye...bas ye tay ho gaya....kal subhah humara saman pack karke rakhna...

Main ye sun ke ek baar itnna jt=yada chaunka ki muh mein jo herbal tea thi wo bahar niikal gayi...kaano pe yakkin hi nahi ho raha tha aaj Khud master ne bola mujhe ki main bahar padhne jaa sakta hu.....Maine 1 baar aur puccha pakka karne ke liye kahi aisa to nahi ki kaan khrab ho gaye hai mere..

Main jaldi se utha aur apna aur unka saman pack karne laga...jana kal subah tha par main abhi se laga hua tha...aisa lag raha tha kahi agarkuch chut gaya ho aur Master ne usko dekh apna mann naa badal de..bas yahi sab sochte hue main raat ke khane se pahle hi saari packing kar daali.....uske baad Raat ka khana banaya aur fir maine aur Master ne khana khaya...FIr main apne room mein chala gaya...

Room ke baare mein bata du...sayad ajeeb ho..par ye room bilul waisa hi tha jaise room mein main pahle se rahta aaya hu...ajeeb bas ye hai ki room ke dewaaron pe ajeeb tarah ki drawing banni hui thi aur ye...pata nahi kuch to tha inme...aisa lagta ki ye mujhe rokti ho bahar jaane mein....iss room ki ek aur baat thi...jab bhi mainj gussa ho jaata kissi bhi baat pe yaa fir kuch waisa hi main iss room mein aata aur fir jaadu ki tarah sab sahi...ajeeb hai naa...yaha pe naa agar mein bnahut jyada thaka hua bhii aata tha yaa fir chotton ke saath to thakan yaa wo chotten sab bahut jaldi hi khatam hoo jaati thi...kuch to ajeeb tha iss room mein....

Aaj mera yaha pe aakhiri din hoga...main saab kuch dhyaan se dekh raha tha sab kuch....fir bedpe leta aur soo gaya..

Next morning....

Meri aankh ek darawane sapne se khuli....aur jab khuli to....sab kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha aisa jaise main...main nahi hu...mujhe apna sharir thoda alag sa lag raha tha...maine apne haath dekhe...to haath baalo se bhare hue the...nahkhun the lambe lambe haathon mein...

Ye sab bilkul ussi sapne jaisa lag raha tha...usme bhi yahi hua tha main ek jagah khada hu saamne mere ahut hi ajeeb ajeeb log the..jo insan ki tarah dikhte the par unki height bbahut jyada thi...(Devta)....kuch unse thode chote the par unn sab ki age bahut jyada lag rahi thi haathon mein ek ajeeb si stick..aur sar pe conical topi...(jadugar)...fir kuch aise bhi the jo insan ki tarah hi the sayad par kisi ke kaan bahut lambe to kisi ki punch to kisi ke pankh....naa jaane kya kya tha waha pe...Aur unn logo ne meri oor kuch fenka jo seedha mere body mein samma gaya aur main hawa mein udne laga....daant bahar aa gaye mere sarir baalon se bhar gaya...sar dard karne laga mein chillane laga...aur fir dhadam se jammen pe aur behosh hone se pahle Master waha aa gayi aur main unki goad mein...ki tabhi mujhe Master kisi billi ki tarah dikhne lagi aur...itnne mein meri neend khul gayi...

Main uss soch se bahar aaya aur fir se ek baar haath ki oor dekha..sab sahi tha...bilkul normal....maine socha ki ye sab bas uss sapne ke karan hua tha...main bed se utha aur paani se muh dhoya...aur jaaise hi mirror mein khud ki sakal dekhi...dar ke picche ho gaya....iss waqt sakal itni darawani lag hi rahi thi..maine apni aankhen saaf ki aur fir se dekha to sab normal hi tha..par ek baat ajeeb thi binna chasme ke main khud ka chahera saaf saar dekh paa raha tha...saath mein mirror pe lage hue sticker pe chote chote sabdon mein jo likha hua tha wo bhi....

Main room se jaldi bahar gaya....Master ke pass ye sab batane ko ki...par wo milli hi nahi...ek chithi milli mujhe..Chitthi mein kuch likha tha aur saath mein ek sikka tha usme ajeeb saa sikka jisme ek aadmi ki sakal thi par uske kaan bade bade the jaise sapne mein dikha tha...

"Saaman pahuch gaya hai waha pe humara Main kisi se milne jaa rahi hu...ek bus aayegi ghar ke paas usme baith jaana....wo kuch bolle to ye sikka dikha dena unhe..."

Bas itna hi likha tha par ye sab bada ajeeb tha...mere ghar ke pass...Sorry master ke ghar ke pass jo ki saher se dur hai...jaha bahut kam log aate hai waha pe ek bus aaayegi...aur waha wo ajee sa sikka dena hai mujhe..aur Master mere se pahle hi kahi jaa chuki hai...ye sab ajeeb tha aur abhi main soch hi raha tha ki....

poooonn ppppooooooooonnn ppooooooooooooooooonnnn

horn ki aawaj aayi aur...maine bahar dekha to ek badi si bus khadi thi jiske upar ajeeb ajeeb se drawning banne hue the...

"ooye bacche chalega bhi yaa jaun main....tere kaaran late ho raha hai..."

Main abhi tak nahaya bhi nahi tha aur Bus bhi aa gayi thi haa ajeeb hi thi....aur bus wala thoda chidchida lag raha tha..Main waise hi chad gaya bus mein ye soch kar ki waha pahuch ke naha lunga...

Main gate band karke lock laga ke nikal gaya ghar se...haa isme 10 minute lag gaye mujhe...sab kuch check bhi to karna pada...phir bus pe chada to Bus conductor pura gusse mein...

"Kaha jaana hai..."

Ab yaha pe mere ko samajh nahi aaya kya kahu...pata hi nahi tha kaha jaana hai naa to maine hi pucha tha Master se aur naa unhone bataya tha....kuch samajh naa aaya to wo coin nikal ke usko dikha diya...

Usne coin ko dekha...fir mujhe dekha...

"Kamra number 23 mein jaao.."

Main - Kamra number ????..

B.Conductor- Arre yaar kon chod deta hai aise naye logo ko akele safar karne ke liye...Mohit isko iski jagah dikhao re...ooye Driver chal be jaldi waise bhi der ho rahi hai....Pata nahi kaha kaha se aa jate hai..

Wo bol hi raha tha ki kisi ne mere kandhe pe haath rakha aur main piche mudda koi nahi tha aage mudda waha bhi koi nahi tha...aur ekdum dekhte hi dekhte jaha mein khada tha wo jagah hi badal gayi..Main ek room mein pahuch gaya...par ye kaise main to bus mein tha wo bhi gate ke paas aur ab room mein...

Itna sab kuch kabhi nahi hua tha mere saath ki tabhi darwaje pe khatkhat hui..aur main waha darwaje ke paas gaya darte hue....dar to lagega naa ab aise hi achanak se kuch bhi hone lage to dar to lagega hi naa...

Waha darwaje pe pahuch ke darwaja khola to ek ajeeb sa dikhne wala aadmi...haa aadmi hi hoga...bas uske baal nahi the matlab ek bhi baal nahi chahre pe....eyebrows bhi nahi....ab kya hi kaha jaaye isko....ek pal ko to koi bhi dar jaayega....upar se main to pahle se hi darra hua tha...to cheekh hi nikal gayi....salle ko maarne wala tha mein ki wo bhi cheekhne laga...sala chal kya raha tha...

Wo- chilla kaahe rahe ho...salla Heart attack se maar murra gaye to kaa hoga samajh mein aata bhi hai kuch....chalo kamra khali karo stoppage aa gaya hai tumhara....bekar mein darata hai....

Wo itna bola aur darwaja band karke chala gaya wahi main....shocked ki wo tha kon aur kya bol ke nikal gaya ki tabhi ek jor ka jhatka saa laga mujhe aur main...main road pe khada hua tha...Haa road pe...bagal mein aur bhi log the...par ye sab ke sab insan ki tarah hi dikh rahe the...

Mere ko kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha tha pahle wo bus fir wo room aur ab ye...aakhir ho kya raha tha...aur jab kuch samajh mein naa aaye to ek hi kaam kar sakte hai aur wo hai...ruk ke sochne ka...par yaar yaha wo bhi nahi ho raha tha..abhi abhi main road pe tha aur dekhte hi dekhte ab mein kisi garden mein ek line mein khada tha...jaha pe aur bhi bahut se log the aur wo kisi bade se jagah mein jaa rahe the..main jab thodi der rukka raha waha to picche se aawaj dene lag gaye...sab ki aage chalo aage chalo...

Main aage badha aur fir uss Gate ke pass pahuch gaya jaha pe sab jaa rahe the...

"Pahechan bataiye.."

Main- Pahechan ????

Abhi kuch karta ki ek aadmi aaya..Haa ye ek perfect aadmi ki hi tarah dikh raha tha bas iska pet kuch jyada nikla hua tha...

Aadmi- Ye mere saath hai...chalo beta ander aao Kabse sab tumhara intezar kar rahe hai...

Main usko jaanta nahi tha...wo mere ko beta bol raha tha..agar aur koi din hota naa to kabhi naa jaata uske paas par chuki aaj sab kuch itna ajeeb ho raha tha ki...to main bhi chal diya uske saath....

Aadmi- Koi dikkat to nahi hui naa beta aane mein.....chalo ab mere saath aao...

Dikkat kya hi bataun dikkat ka kuch samajh mein hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya hua kaise hua....main yaha tak paucha kaise...

Aadmi- aarre beta kya hua..

Main kuch nahi bola aur o bhi chalne lage...main bhi unke picche picche chalne laga...aur dekhte hi dekhte ek bade..se castle ke saamne pahuch gaye hum log...

Aadmi - Chalo ander chalo..log intezar kar rahe hai...

Main ander gaya to waha pe Master pahle se thi...main unke bagal mein jaake baith gaya...saamne wale chair pe ek aadmi baitha hua tha...jo sayad kuch dekh raha tha haathon mein leke aur uss waqt bahut hi jyada uddas tha aur gusse mein bhi...

Aadmi- Madam hum bahut sarminda hai inn sab ke liye jo kuch bi hua...wo bahut hi galat hua..par ab hum aapke liye kuch karna chahte hai...

Master- (meri oor ishara karte hue) isko yaha daakhila do...saath mein isko special batch....samajh rahe ho naa usme bhi rakhna hai....

Aadmi- Admission to main karwa dunga par special batch...aapko bhi pata hoga ki wo sabke liye nahi hai...uske liye test dena hota hai...

Master- Maine ye to nahi kaha ki binna test ke...lelo..

Aadmi- Hmm..waqt ka bhi bata dijiye..kitna waqt chahiye isko...

Master- Aap taiyaari kariye...ye taiyyaar hai...

Mere samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki kon sa test aur kis chiz ki baat ho rahi thi...

Wo aadmi apne table pe rakhe hue ek bell ko bajata hai aur bahar se kuch log aa jaate hai...

Aadmi- Madam ko unka room dikhao...(Master se) aapko wahi room diya jaa raha hai jisme aap pahle rahte the...aur ab aapki post ki baat karre to aap..iss school ke Chancellor ki post di jaati hai...Ye sab Strange world se tay hua hai..sath mein aap samajh rahi hai naa Orion aur Titan planet bhi...

Master- Ye sab abhi batane ki jarurat nahi hai....Baad mein baat karte hai pahle iska test le lete hai..

Aadmi- Hmm...(logo se) samajh gaye naa jaao...

Sabhi nikal jaate hai...

Master bhi chair se khadi hoti hai aur..mujhe dekhti hai....main bhi khada ho jaata hu...aur fir waha se...nikal jaate hai hum dono...

Bahar jaate hi maine....

Main - Master aaj bahu....

Master- Hmm pata hai ab wo chodo jo main bata rahi hu wo suno...

Main - Ji master...

Master- Kuch der mein tumhe ladna hai....2 log honge...unko harana hai....ho sakta hai wo kuch aisi chize jaante ho jo tumhari soch se bhi parre ho par tum unhe haraoge...samhje...

Main - Hmm

Aaj pahli baar master ne mujhe ladne ko bola tha....aaj unki sikhayi hui har ek kala mein use kar sakta tha...m,aster ne bola tha Jitna hai matlab jitna hai...

Master- Chalo mere picche...

Aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein dekhte hai...kaise Prateek ladta hai...2 fighters se..wo bhi binna magic ke kyunki usko magic aata hi nahi hai.....Saath mein school mein tab se ab tak hue badlaon ke baare mein bhi jaanege..aur bhi kuch baatein.....

Banne rahiye...
Nice update
 
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