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जिस तरह से स्टार्ट किया है. उस तरह से ऐसा तो नहीं लग रहा की पहेली बार लिख रहे हो.

एक कहावत है. पूत के पाऊ पालने मे ही दिख जाते है.

यह ट्रोल नहीं है. पर आप पहले से ही मंजे हुए हो.
bahut shukriya ye sunkar sach mein bahut achha laga, main bas koshish karta rehta hoon lekin apse Readers ki taraf sy appreciation hi Aik writer ko Acha writer banati hai
beherhaal aapne mery kaam ko saraha iss wajah sy shukria --- tareef mai kanjoosi na krne ki wajah sy.
 

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bahut shukriya ye sunkar sach mein bahut achha laga, main bas koshish karta rehta hoon lekin apse Readers ki taraf sy appreciation hi Aik writer ko Acha writer banati hai
beherhaal aapne mery kaam ko saraha iss wajah sy shukria --- tareef mai kanjoosi na krne ki wajah sy.
मेरे रेव्यू देने का अपना अंदाझ है. अगर रोक टोक ना हो तो आगे बढू??? क्यों की कइयों को मेरा अंदाझ बहोत पसंद आता है. पर कइयों को अच्छा नहीं लगता. वैसे आप का एक पूरा अपडेट मेने पढ़ा. और आप वाकेई कुछ नया ही कर रहे हो. स्कील भी शानदार है तो पढ़ने मे मझा आएगा. मै आज रात से ही शुरू करने वाली थी.

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UPDATE________________3




kuwan thakur ka
paani thakur ka
keht khilhaan thakur ka
Gali mohalle thakur k

aadmi= arre wah shamsher beta tumhain tou yaad ho gayi
lakda= mmm aapki wajah sy aur waise papa aap ki hi wajah sy sab mujhe shamsher naam sy jaante hain
Aadmi= halan k naam mera……
Admi= q jo maine naam diya hai uss mai kiya burai hai
Ladka= shamsher nahi litterly shamsher yaar aap naa
tabhi achanak sy uss ladke par sy koi chaddar khenchta ha

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Aurat= rumi rumi oye bass ab uthh bhi kitna sota rahe gaa
Mai= kiya hai chachi sone dy
Aurat= sone dy k bache ———- uth thakur saab ka bulawa aaya hai
Mai= kiyaa thakur saab ka bulawa ( foran sy seedha ho k khade hote huwe )
Aurat= haan
Mai= mera phone kahan hai

Aurat ye lo
mai phone dekhta hoon tou band tha mai uss ko on krta hoon tou charge full ho gaya tha (raat ko laga k soya tha charge par band hone k baad)
mai= kon aaya tha
Aurat= aaya tha k bache bahir khada huwa hai bakhsha aaya hai
Mai jaldi sy bahir nikalta hoon
Baksha= tera rozz ka hai ———— kahan hai mobile tera
Mai= arre yaar battery dead ho gayi thi
Baksha= tou phir apne ghar mai raha krr naa yoon logon k ghar mai q jaata hai malik ny diya tou huwa ahi ghar tujhe(dono chalte huwe haveli jaane lage)
Mai= yaar tujhe pata tou hain gaon walon ka ————- thakur saab ny jab sy pistol chalana sikhaya hai koi bhi aadmi kahin jaa raha ho tou apni jagah mujhe sone ka kehta hai

Baksha= haan haan pata hai (bura saa munh bana k) par teri inhi harkaton ki wajah sy aadha gaon channa padta hai mujhe jab tu call nahi uthata tou
Mai= waise malik ny q bulaya mujhe
Baksha= mujhe kia pata
Mai= tu badi filam hai bakshe tujhe sab pata hota hai bata naa yaar dekh thoda tayar ho k jaaon gaa kasam sy kuch paise tujhe bhi doon gaa agar teri wajah sy mujhe bhi mille tou
Baksha- koi paise waise nahi millain gye wo tou malkin ny aaj subah nashte par ye naam ly liya k tum aage padhna chahte ho
Mai= khaoo khooo khhuuuu (khanste huwe) kia kaha malkin ny
Baksha= mujhe tou nahi pata lekin choti malkin shayad shikat krr rahi thi koi

Mujhe thodi ghabrahat hone lagi lekin mai phir bhi chalte chalte haveli pohncha aur lawn mai gaya
9 baj gaye the tou abhi bade thakur saab lawn mai baithe akhbar padh rahy the
Mai unke paas gaya aur haath baandh k khada ho gaya
Mai= g gg malik aapne bulaya
Ramlal= (chupp)
mai 2 3 min tak chupp khada raha aur phir tabhi wo akhbar ko lappet k side par rakhte hain aur chashma utar k mujhe dekhte hain
Ramlal= haan barkhurdaar ham ny tumhain tumhain bulwaya tou tha
Mai= koi khaas hukum malik
Ramlal= nahi bass waise hi aaj Kamli bahu tumhara zikar krr rahi thi tou maine socha tumhain bulwa loon
Mai= k kaisa zikar (maine darte darte poocha)

Ramlal- wo tou keh rahi thi k tum thakuron ka mukabla krna chahte ho
Mai= la holl wala kuwat malik meri aisi jurrat kahan k mai aisa kuch krne ka sochoon (aik dum ghabra k ramlal k pairon mai bethty huwe)
Ramlal= arre arre ghabrao nahi mai jaanta hoon tumhain ————- wo tou aisi baatain krne mai mahir hai maine tou bass uss k kahe lafz kahe tumhare samne
Mai= malik ham tou chote log hain ham bhala kaise aap k barabri ka soch sakte hain
Ramlal= acha acha theek hai theek hai (apne paon lambe krr k mery samne krte huwe)
Mai unko aisa krta dekh unke paon dabane laga
Ramlal=Rati sahi kehti hai tumhare haathon mai jadu hai
Mai= par malik maine tou unke pair dabaye hi nahi
Ramlal= arre uss ko itne maze k khane jo bana k khilate rehty ho ———— lekin hamain tou ab ziada masale wale khane mana hai so hamare liye tou tumhare hathon ka jadu aise hai

Mai= bass malik aapki kripa hai sab ————— choti malkin ny khud saari internet sy mujhe cheezain banana sikhai aur ye haath tou akhade ki wajah sy sakht hain iss wajah sy aapko malish achi lagti hai (aur bhi paon dabate huwe)
Ramlal apni jebb mai hath maarta hai aur 1 hazar ka aik note nikal k mujhe deta hai
Ramlal= tumhari yehi baatain tumhain sab sy ziada kamane wala nokar banati hain iss ghar ka tum sy 20 25 25 saal purane nokar itna nahi kama paate jitna tum kamate ho
Mai= maalik aapki sakhawat hai aur nahi tou mujhe kaale aur aadhi shakal wale mai aisa kiya khaas hai
Ramlal= acha iss ko chodo ye batao kamla jo keh rahi thi sach hai ???
Mai= malik mai kasam khaata hoon meri tou jurrat hi nahi aap……….
Ramlal= arre mera matlab ye hai k wo keh rahi thi k tum BBA+ MBA krne ka keh rahy the Rati ko

Mai= g wo tou choti bibi g ny poocha tou maine bata diya
Ramlal= matlab krne ka iraada rakhte ho
Mai= g malik
Ramlal= q hamari seva sy mann bharr gaya k kamla sahi keh rahi thi
Mai= malik mai tou aapki nasal ka nokar hoon meri tou aane wali pustain bhi aapki nokri dain gi meri kiya majal k mai mai aapki seva chorr doon
Ramlal= tumhari padhai likhai sy tou yehi lagta hai ————— abhi 12 pass ki hain tum ny wo bhi sheher k sab sy bade college sy aur mery nokaron mai sy sab sy ziada padhe likhe ban gaye ho (aik tou abhi result nahi aaya aur doosra gaon k nokaron ki baat ho rahi hai)

Mai= malik mai tou 12 chorain 22 bhi parh gaya rahoon gaa tou aapke darr ka hi bataiye aapke ilaawa kon mujh jaisi shakal aur qismat wale ko rakhe gaa (meri aadhi shakal k ooper 3 bade bade cut the chaku sy jo k inke aik pote ny maare the aur uss k ilaawa meri yaadasht bhi jaa chuki thi———- aage details aati jain gi story mai)
Ramlal= wohi tou mai kahoon k tum aise lagte nahi ho k jaldi sy tum ehsaan bhool jao lekin tumhara padhne ka janoon nokaron mai aaj kal afwahain uda raha hai
Mai= malik wo kameeny tou jalte hain———— mery ko 5 saal mai aapne bibi g logon ka driver aur guard bana diya unse ziada paise aur aitbaar hai aapko mujh par tou bhala q naa wo peeth peechy bakwas karain
Ramlal= hmm tumhara kehna bhi sahi hai ekin kiya ho k agar mai kahoon k tum aage nahi padho gye
Mai= g theek hai malik jaise aapka hukum
Ramlal= q tumhain koi masla nahi ———— mera matlab rati tou keh rahi thi k tumhain khawab aata hai koi uss mai tumhari jo maa hai wo tumhain padhne ka kehti hai
Mai= malik meri jaan uss sapne mai aane wali maa ny thodi naa bachai thi ghundon sy aur khuda jaane wo meri maa hai k nahi lekin agar wo hoti bhi tou maa sy bada khuda ka rutba hota hai aur aapne mujhe khuda ki tarah paala hai 3 wakt ka khana ghar aur tankhaa har maheeny ki
ooper sy aap itna aitbaar krte hain k bibi g logon ko mai college ly k aata jaata raha balke unki class mai padhta bhi raha aur kisi ko unki taraf aankh tak nahi uthane di

Ramlal mery kandhe par thapki maarta hai
Ramlal=shabash tum mery test mai paas ho (apne jebb sy 10 hazar rupye nikal k mujhe dety hain)
Ramlal= chalo theek hai bass kro pair dabana aur ye pakdo aur khade ho jao
Mai unke haath sy paise leta hoon aur khada ho jaata hoon sir jhuka k
Ramlal= theek hai mai principal sy baat krr k tumhara admission krwa doon gaa lekin ab ki baar aik baat yaad rakhna
Mai= g malik hukum
Ramlal= kamlesh ki betian aur baaki sabhi tumhari kuch harkaton ki wajah sy tang thi issi wajah sy wo chahti thi k tum unke saath naa padho
Mai= malik kasam sy mujhe kuch nahi pata tha k mai kuch ghalat krr raha hoon w………….
Ramlal= bass kro mujhe pata hai tum jaan boojh k kuch ulta krne ki socho gye bhi nahi aur waise bhi tum ny kuch ghalat nahi kiya thaa bass ye aaj kal k bache hain tou samjhte nahi

Ramlal= beherhaal Rati k mutabik wo tumhain iss wajah sy pasand nahi krti k aik tou tum class mai yahan tak k teachers aur unke doston k samne bhi unko malkin bulate the ————- jo k ab tum nahi bulao gye unko unke naam sy bulao gye class mai
 

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मेरे रेव्यू देने का अपना अंदाझ है. अगर रोक टोक ना हो तो आगे बढू??? क्यों की कइयों को मेरा अंदाझ बहोत पसंद आता है. पर कइयों को अच्छा नहीं लगता. वैसे आप का एक पूरा अपडेट मेने पढ़ा. और आप वाकेई कुछ नया ही कर रहे हो. स्कील भी शानदार है तो पढ़ने मे मझा आएगा. मै आज रात से ही शुरू करने वाली थी.
Mai un insano mai sy nahi hoon jin ko sirf tareef pasand ho ---- hmm maana k insan hone k naate khud ki tareef pasand hai lekin iss ka matlab ye bhi nahi k agar koi insan sacha review dy yaa apna point of view rakhe tou mai burra maan jaaon -------- Aik acha Reader jo hota ha wo kisi bhi Adab (litrature) ko padh k likhne wale ki nature tak jaan sakta hai ----- aur aap jaise aik skillfull writer k liye meri story sy meri nature janna mushkil nahi ho gi ------- Umeed hai k aap mujhe aik aisa insan hi paayain gi jo Sachai Hazam krr sake
so mai itna hi kahoon gaa k pleeeeeaaaassseeee please khul k raaye dain story par aur sachi raaye dain --------- baaki aik kaam krr dain gi/ gye (q k translation mai gi aaya aur nam shetan tou dono possibilty rakhi hai maine
aik kaam krr dijye gaa k please Hinglish mai review dijye gaa q k aapke khulle vichar bechara AI shayad translate naa kry aur bina translation k mujhe ghanta samajh ni aaye gi ----- Baaki meri koshish tou yehi hai k kuch acha likh sakoon so

aapko pasand aaye iss sy badi khushnaseebi mery liye kiya hogi
 
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Mai un insano mai sy nahi hoon jin ko sirf tareef pasand ho ---- hmm maana k insan hone k naate khud ki tareef pasand hai lekin iss ka matlab ye bhi nahi k agar koi insan sacha review dy yaa apna point of view rakhe tou mai burra maan jaaon -------- Aik acha Reader jo hota ha wo kisi bhi Adab (litrature) ko padh k likhne wale ki nature tak jaan sakta hai ----- aur aap jaise aik skillfull writer k liye meri story sy meri nature janna mushkil nahi ho gi ------- Umeed hai k aap mujhe aik aisa insan hi paayain gi jo Sachai Hazam krr sake
so mai itna hi kahoon gaa k pleeeeeaaaassseeee please khul k raaye dain story par aur sachi raaye dain --------- baaki aik kaam krr dain gi/ gye (q k translation mai gi aaya aur nam shetan tou dono possibilty rakhi hai maine
aik kaam krr dijye gaa k please Hinglish mai review dijye gaa q k aapke khulle vichar bechara AI shayad translate naa kry aur bina translation k mujhe ghanta samajh ni aaye gi ----- Baaki meri koshish tou yehi hai k kuch acha likh sakoon so

aapko pasand aaye iss sy badi khushnaseebi mery liye kiya hogi
Tab to jarur review milega. Vo bhi detail mein. Aur 1st update se. Jo ki padh liya. Magar fir se ek najar dalna padega. Erotic word mai aap ka swagat hai. Jese aap ki hindi kharab hai. Vese meri hinglish. Magar fir bhi puri kosis hogi. Khamiya bhi batai jaegi. Aur achhe kuchh hone par tarif bhi ki jaegi. Agar aap ko porn grafic ya photos chahiye to mere signature me shetan ki shararat ke dono thread khol lena. Bhadar mil jaega. Jo ki story likhne valo ki madad ke lie banaya hai. Hot photos in saree. Beautiful wife and MLF. Aunty, mammy wife. Aur teen girls ke bhi kafi photos hai. Baki meri taraf se bhi redrs ka entertainment hota rahega.

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Tab to jarur review milega. Vo bhi detail mein. Aur 1st update se. Jo ki padh liya. Magar fir se ek najar dalna padega. Erotic word mai aap ka swagat hai. Jese aap ki hindi kharab hai. Vese meri hinglish. Magar fir bhi puri kosis hogi. Khamiya bhi batai jaegi. Aur achhe kuchh hone par tarif bhi ki jaegi. Agar aap ko porn grafic ya photos chahiye to mere signature me shetan ki shararat ke dono thread khol lena. Bhadar mil jaega. Jo ki story likhne valo ki madad ke lie banaya hai. Hot photos in saree. Beautiful wife and MLF. Aunty, mammy wife. Aur teen girls ke bhi kafi photos hai. Baki meri taraf se bhi redrs ka entertainment hota rahega.

Thank you for you Generous Welcome
Aap Jaise aik Expert Writer ki Guidence mai mujhy bhi umeed hai k kuch acha seekhne ko mile gaa aapki stories sy tou padh k hi ladke romance seekhte hain tou umeed hai aapki stories aur aapki chaya mai meri story mai romance ki kami nahi hogi --- baaki mai koshish kroon gaa jahan bohut zaroori ho wahan pics daloon aur intro mai abhi aapka bataye thread zaroor kaam aayain gye so unke liye bhi thanks
 

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Thank you for you Generous Welcome
Aap Jaise aik Expert Writer ki Guidence mai mujhy bhi umeed hai k kuch acha seekhne ko mile gaa aapki stories sy tou padh k hi ladke romance seekhte hain tou umeed hai aapki stories aur aapki chaya mai meri story mai romance ki kami nahi hogi --- baaki mai koshish kroon gaa jahan bohut zaroori ho wahan pics daloon aur intro mai abhi aapka bataye thread zaroor kaam aayain gye so unke liye bhi thanks
Meri story romantic se jyada erotic hai. Aur mai jyada horror pasand karti hu. Aur dono prakar ki story likh chuki hu. Real kisso par adharit. Aur fantacy world ki horror story. Baki romantic to sirf short story likhi hai. Vo bhi sirf contest ke lie.

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Meri story romantic se jyada erotic hai. Aur mai jyada horror pasand karti hu. Aur dono prakar ki story likh chuki hu. Real kisso par adharit. Aur fantacy world ki horror story. Baki romantic to sirf short story likhi hai. Vo bhi sirf contest ke lie.

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Atleast Gender confirmed ------ Apki story ki prefix dekhi maine --------- chudailon sy kaafi prem krti hain aap 2 long story unke naam krr di aapne
 
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