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firefox420

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Without Gali :?:

ok bhai .. but wo Arman ke character ko define karte - karte flow mein nikal gaya ...

aage se pure veg version .. bole to shareef baccho wala review .. waise Yug Purush bhai ki meherbaani hai .. inhone he sabko bigaada hai .. to iska negative credit bhi inko hi jaata hai ...
 

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ok bhai .. but wo Arman ke character ko define karte - karte flow mein nikal gaya ...

aage se pure veg version .. bole to shareef baccho wala review .. waise Yug Purush bhai ki meherbaani hai .. inhone he sabko bigaada hai .. to iska negative credit bhi inko hi jaata hai ...
Without Gali story Mai wo feel nhi aayega Jo abhi aata hai padhne Mai , agar with Gali hai to padhega apun.
 
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Without Gali story Mai wo feel nhi aayega Jo abhi aata hai padhne Mai , agar with Gali hai to padhega apun.

story content as it is hai .. kahi - kahi jo errors the typing wale unko theek kiya .. aur proper spacing ke saath .. titles ko highlight karke bold letters ke saath .. aur har quotes and remarks ko proper indent ke saath .. aur har naya chapter naye page se start kiya hai ...

check karlo .. agar badhiya na lage to batana ...

ye ek tarah se Yug Purush bhai ke liye ye PDF ka gift hai ... 732 page .. 56 chapter .. and iiiiiiiiiiiii........eeeeeeeeeesha billi
 
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story content as it is hai .. kahi - kahi jo errors the typing wale unko theek kiya .. aur proper spacing ke saath .. titles ko highlight karke bold letters ke saath .. aur har quotes and remarks ko proper indent ke saath .. aur har naya chapter naye page se start kiya hai ...

check karlo .. agar badhiya na lage to batana ...

ye ek tarah se Yug Purush bhai ke liye gift hai ... 732 page .. 56 chapter .. and iiiiiiiiiiiii........eeeeeeeeeesha billi
Great :yo:
 

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You know nothing about parallel space men issiliye story nahi samjh paa rahe tum :sigh:

bhai saal bhar pehle padhi thi .. jitna yaad tha .. wo bata diya .. aur rahi Parallel universe ki baat .. to bhai sab kuch theory he hai .. and sab kuch predict he kiya gaya hai aaj tak .. rahi story ki baat to ismein .. parallel universe ko lekar to Arman khud he confuse hai .. aur wo jitna bakchod launda hai .. wo khud to confuse rahega he .. aur saath mein auro ko bh ch***ya banata rahega ...
 

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bhai saal bhar pehle padhi thi .. jitna yaad tha .. wo bata diya .. aur rahi Parallel universe ki baat .. to bhai sab kuch theory he hai .. and sab kuch predict he kiya gaya hai aaj tak .. rahi story ki baat to ismein .. parallel universe ko lekar to Arman khud he confuse hai .. aur wo jitna bakchod launda hai .. wo khud to confuse rahega he .. aur saath mein auro ko bh ch***ya banata rahega ...
Tum story waale parallel universe ki baat Kar rahe ho main real waale ki tum Armaan ki baat Kar rahe ho main Gyani bhai ki difference hai bro :dazed
 

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waah kya baat hai .. aapko dobaara dekh kar dil khush ho gaya hai .. ek baar to lagne laga tha ki aapke haath ke fracture waale kaand ke baad ab story yahi chhut jaayegi .. magar main bata nahi sakta .. ki aapke reply dekh kar dil ke andar kya bhayankar Maaadddarcchoood feeling bani hai .. dil khushi se jhoom utha hai ...

bhai aap vishwaas nahi karoge ki 8th semester ki entire PDF ko copy karke .. ek ek line ko properly edit kiya hai aur uske baad nayi PDF banayi hai saaf suthri .. mere Signature mein jaa kar check karlo .. ye kaam maine abhi just 3 din pehle he complete kiya hai .. isko main har roz ek dedh ghanta lagata tha .. aur pata nahi kitne hafto se ispar laga pada tha .. ab aap dekhlo mera aapki story se kitna lagaav hai ...

waise to main 8th semester ke liye Armaan aka Yugpursuh/Arun aka chalta firta tragedy /MTL bhai aka sidar/Deepika/iiiiiiiii...Esha aka billi/ Gautam/Varun (dono)/Bhu/Rajshiri/divya/shirin(intro-wali)/surabh/sulabh/Vipendra bhiya/HOD sir/Damyanti mam aka dammo rani aka Mom mam/Angelina silva(haayee)/vibha/Akansha/kaalu aka kanghi chor/ Amar sir/ .... in sabke character ko dekhte hue image bhi add karna chahta tha .. aur kuch khaas moments ki .. jaise ki college ke bhahar wala ground jaha Armaan ki ragging hui thi / 3rd sem ke baad wo camping trip and wo night club / langar dance / police walo se gaand tudwana / SP daangi ke saamne collector ke launde ko laat marna / pandey ji ki beti ko jhaadna / first time daaru pee kar ped par bhoot dekhna / dhaabe wale ka register le kar bhaagna / parabola cut maarte hue truck ke aage se bike skit karna .. aur sabse khaas wo 2000 Rs. wala black gogle ghuma kar peherna .. sabki gaand jala dene waale dialogue maarne ke baad / Esha ka teen alag alag language mein I love you wali video mobile mein sambhaal kar rakhna / Nisha ke saath mind fuck bakchodi karna ...

main to inn sabke liye photo add karne ka mann banaye baitha tha .. magar Arman aur Arun jaise bakchod laundo ke liye kaha se itni perfect image chhat-ta .. jo ki inke character ko match karti .. waise aapne note kiya ki maine Arman ka naam bilkul sahi spell kiya .. :D




anyway baat yaha 8th semester ki nahi balke Atmakaami ki ho rahi hai ...

magar iske saath samasya ye hai ki .. agar main isko summarise karna start kardu to BC mere dimaag ki batti gul ho jaayegi .. aur muzhe khud nahi pata rahega ki main kaunse wale multi-parallel universe waale apne version ki life jine laga hu .. na he main Arman ki tarah 'Yugpurush' hu ...

aur sabse jyaada khatra to muzhe uss flat ka hai jisme ki Arman ruka hua tha .. BC agar main uske adar fas gaya to fir kabhi bahar nahi nikal paaunga .. saale ke itne saare darwaze hai pata nahi kaunsa kaha jaakar khul jaaye .. rahi sahi kasar pados mein reh rahi Rathi mam ke ghar par chhalang lagate hue 2-3 pasli toot jaani hai .. BC Gautam ke uncle ne to maar-maar kar Arman ke sir ke baal he uda diye aur uske payr ki bhi buri haalat hai .. magar Anglina silva aur uska pati kuch madad kar sakte hai .. kam se kam Angelina ko wo chakku maarne wala to moment yaad hai .. kyon ki Arman bechara khud confuse ho gaya tha .. ki kya realty hai aur kya nahi .. jaise ki Nisha ko lekar ye bhayankar confusion mein tha ...

8th semester mein jis Nisha ke saath iska affair tha aur jis Varun ke flat mein Arman ruk kar usko apne past ki story suna raha tha .. wo sab to Parallel wale Arman ki life thi .. yaha wali to Nisha ne apne wale Yugpurush Arman ki Restaurant mein apne dosto ke saath mil kar beizzati kar di thi .. aur BC wo dukaan wala ladka Arman ko 'Bro - Bro' bol kar irritate kar raha tha .. agar Arun saath hota to in sabki gaand maarli jaati ...

BC Arman ne kya-kya nahi kiya .. apni boriyat ko khatam karne ke liye .. raat ko Highway par ja kar chori bhi kari .. Gautam ke don chacha ko police se pilwaya aur uske aiyaash giri wale chakle bhi band karaye .. magar waha wo bechari ladki ki Arman ke saamne maut ho gayi thi .. ab dekhte hai ki Angelina Silva apne hero ki kya madad kar paati hai .. aakhir wo neuro surgeon hai .. aur usne Arman ko chhaku mara tha .. aur Arman 'arman' hai iss story ka hero hai .. abhi to Gautam ki gaand todni hai .. saale ne apni behen ke saath mil kar aur Esha ne bhi uska saath diya tha .. Deepika mam ki wajah se Arman 2 mahino tak coma mein raha .. so us-se bhi heesab chukta karna hai .. and sabse important MTL aka Sidar bhai ki maut ka badla lena hai ...

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muzhe bhi kahani padhe hue saal bhar ho gaya .. magar jitni yaad thi wo moments share kar di .. not exact chronological order .. but exact summary ke liye muzhe bhi dobara se story ko beech - beech mein se padhna padega .. sahi kahu to padhte - padhte dimaag ke tote udd jaate hai .. khaas kar wo parallel universe waala funde ke chakkar mein to bernoulli principle ke reverse order mein dimaag ke ander blood flow hone lagta hai .. jyaada stress dalunga to brain hamorrhage ho jaayega ...

i hope it helps ...
:bow: :bow: thank you
 
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