Whatever you love just go and nailed it , no matter what others think, either they like it or not , the only thing matter is that how you inculcate your imagination on the thread...
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Erotica Hamjoli
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Ye kahani ek sachhi ghatna pe hogi magar kuch kalpna bhi dalugi taki kahani ka romanch badh sake warna kya fayada is kahani agar saral bhasa me chalti rhi to apko maja nhi aayega.
Aap logon ka akarshan nhi badega to mujhe comment aur view nhi milegi fir story likhane ka josh thanda hoga jo main nhi chahati.
Kuch patron ke naam badlugi jo apki kahani se uthaougi...
Aap logon ka akarshan nhi badega to mujhe comment aur view nhi milegi fir story likhane ka josh thanda hoga jo main nhi chahati.
Kuch patron ke naam badlugi jo apki kahani se uthaougi...
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J8 puri koshisfor new thread
Meri raye hy k Story me incest love action or thriller hona chahiye
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Rishta kahane chhota shabd hain magar apne aap me ye bahut bada hain. Iske arth alag alag hote hain samanusar aur ye samay ham nhi tay karte hain. Hamara socalled samaj tay karta hain.
Hame jo rishta milta hain wo to bhagwan bana ke bhejate hain jaise maa baap, bhai bahan, chacha chachi, mousa mousi, fufa bua aur mama mami. Lekin inken ke alawa kuch rishte aur bhi hote hain jo ham banate hain jaise dost aur apna pyar yani premi premika.
Lekin har rishte ka ek dayara hota hain samaj ke samane unke jikra andaj bhi magar ye sare rishte bhi samay ke bahaw ke sath har jagah ek alag roop me nazar aate hain.
Ye kahani bhi rishto ke isi jatil tano bano ke biche ghumat si nazar ayegi jahan ek rishta kushi ko janam dega to dusra dukh ko. Jahan samay ke bawah ke sath pyar ka kushnuma pal banayegi wohi agale lamhe nafarat aur dukh ka tuman layegi.
Magar kya kare ham log in rishto ke bina jiwan bhi to nhi jee sakate hain aur rishte jis roop me samay ke bahaw ke sath ayege use usi roop me swikar kar hame jivan ko aage badhane padta hain.
Lo main bhi kaha baith gayi aap logo ko is rishte ki kahani me uljhane meagar kya kare dil ki bate hain socha aap logon tak pahucha doon taki aap log kahani ki kuch roop rekha apne dimag me taiyar kar sake.
Ab thodi bhumika shuru karte hain is kahani ki ye kahani hain meri yani apki Priya ki magar mai is kahani ko apko ek kahanikar ki tarah sunaougi.
Is kahani me mere jivan me ghatane wali ghatano aur usi ke rishto me hote utar chadao ke sath unme hone wale pariwartano se hain. Is kahani ko apni collefe lifese shuru karugi lekin mere school aur pichhe ke ki ji dagi flashback me aate rahege.
Chaliye aaj itani baat kar li bahut ho gaya ab jaldi apni jivan ki diary aap logo ke samane rakhugi.
Apki apni
Priya
Rishta kahane chhota shabd hain magar apne aap me ye bahut bada hain. Iske arth alag alag hote hain samanusar aur ye samay ham nhi tay karte hain. Hamara socalled samaj tay karta hain.
Hame jo rishta milta hain wo to bhagwan bana ke bhejate hain jaise maa baap, bhai bahan, chacha chachi, mousa mousi, fufa bua aur mama mami. Lekin inken ke alawa kuch rishte aur bhi hote hain jo ham banate hain jaise dost aur apna pyar yani premi premika.
Lekin har rishte ka ek dayara hota hain samaj ke samane unke jikra andaj bhi magar ye sare rishte bhi samay ke bahaw ke sath har jagah ek alag roop me nazar aate hain.
Ye kahani bhi rishto ke isi jatil tano bano ke biche ghumat si nazar ayegi jahan ek rishta kushi ko janam dega to dusra dukh ko. Jahan samay ke bawah ke sath pyar ka kushnuma pal banayegi wohi agale lamhe nafarat aur dukh ka tuman layegi.
Magar kya kare ham log in rishto ke bina jiwan bhi to nhi jee sakate hain aur rishte jis roop me samay ke bahaw ke sath ayege use usi roop me swikar kar hame jivan ko aage badhane padta hain.
Lo main bhi kaha baith gayi aap logo ko is rishte ki kahani me uljhane meagar kya kare dil ki bate hain socha aap logon tak pahucha doon taki aap log kahani ki kuch roop rekha apne dimag me taiyar kar sake.
Ab thodi bhumika shuru karte hain is kahani ki ye kahani hain meri yani apki Priya ki magar mai is kahani ko apko ek kahanikar ki tarah sunaougi.
Is kahani me mere jivan me ghatane wali ghatano aur usi ke rishto me hote utar chadao ke sath unme hone wale pariwartano se hain. Is kahani ko apni collefe lifese shuru karugi lekin mere school aur pichhe ke ki ji dagi flashback me aate rahege.
Chaliye aaj itani baat kar li bahut ho gaya ab jaldi apni jivan ki diary aap logo ke samane rakhugi.
Apki apni
Priya
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