Lovekillsyou
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behtreen kahani hai mitrSo guys last day hamare story ka Phase 1 end hua. Kya sabhi meri writing style se khush hai. Well mujhe sabhi apna apna opinion de sakte hai. Like mere story mein kya achha laga aur kya meri story ko represent karne ki technique achhi hai. Kya mujhe aur bhi apne story ko evolve karna chahiye. Iske jaise bohot se opinion mujhe aap sabhi readers de sakte hai.
Peace ✌.
ok mitrSabhi ke opinions mujhe achhe lag rahe hai. Mein khud bhi kaafi disappoint hu last update se but time kaafi kam tha mere paas and mein har cheez ko explore karna chahta tha. Par aisa kar nahi paya. Par next phase mein ham har part ko achhe se explore karne wale hai. Kabir abhi tak kisi bhi strong situation se nahi guzra hua hai but aane wale phase mein vo apne aap ko kaafi weak feel bhi kar sakta hai because jaha vo ab jaane wala hai waha par uske jaise aur usse bhi powerful persons hai. Unki battle style kaafi different hai. Yeh pura new world hone wala hai kabir ke liye.
Peace.