Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

[vj4u]

Bhai Bhai hame to jhatke dete hi ho bechare Devang Malhotra ko pahle Sanveer se and flashback me jo uske father Saleel Aharya ne jhatka diya bechaare ko apni aukaat pata chal gyi and lastly apka last ka dialogue

paani hai hum,magar samandar ke jisse PIYA NAHI JAA SAKTA...

dard hai hum,aur dard ko dard DIYA NAHI JAA SAKTA...

aam bande ki sateek paribhasha hain hum....

bina humare kaam KIYA NAHI JAA SAKTA aur,

bhid kar humse JIYA NAHI JAA SAKTA.....

Awesome ki had se bi aage koi word ho to bi kam he

thanks for appreciating brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Today's update had a happy, witty atmosphere which I loved very much, looks like the story of Khanak and Sanvy will move slowly. Devansh may be a powerful man but he should not take wrong decision and it is his boy's fault so instead of explaining to him he is troubling them which is wrong but I don't know why I think later that he will become a cause of trouble. Whether it is a matter of past or present Devansh's thinking has not changed, so he was a loser in the past and will still be a loser.

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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thanks for appreciating brother...be along

 

[vj4u]

Shaandaar update hamesha ki tarah
Dono baap bete se uljhe baithe hain dono ko hi dhamki par asar ulta

Ab devansh rohan ko kyaa kahta hai dekhna hoga
Mujhe aisa q lag raha hai ki ek trustee khanak ke pita hain
Just imagine kiya baaki aap bata denge

naa,uske pitah army me hain... SANVEER ne KHANAK ke intro update me bataya tha ye..

 

[vj4u]

gajab ka update .. maja aa gaya padhke ..
sanvy ko sabne gher liya kyunki usne restigate hone se bacha liya sabko aur nits to 3 idiot ka salaam bhi karne ki soch raha tha agar ladkiya waha nahi hoti to ..
khanak ke chehre pe muskan dekhkar line mast boli sanvy ne ..
devang malhotra aaya tha principal ke paas aur sanvy ko restigate karne ko keh raha tha ,
sanvy ke saath uske saare dost aa gaye isse pata chalta hai kitna pyar bhara hai unke dosti me .. principal ne keh diya ki wo sanvy ko nahi nikal sakti aur apne resign bhi dene ki baat kahi jisse devang ki bolti band ho gayi ..

nits ne bhi mast jawab diya jab devang ne sanvy ko dekh lunga aisa kaha ..

saari ghamand aur akad nikal di sanvy ne apne mom dad ka naam bataya ..
saneel ke maut ke baad devang ne veronica ko ghar se nikalne ki koshish ki par uske baad usko itna nuksan uthana pada ki dobara usne sanvy ke ghar ki taraf dekha bhi nahi ..

aur saneel se mulakat bhi yaad aa gayi jab wo family ke saath restaurant me tha ,waha devang ne aakar veronica se badtamiji ki aur saneel ne pehle uske bodyguards ko sambhala ,aur baadme 3 thappad me devang ko taare dikha diye ..

cm ke saath baat karne se pata chal gaya devang ko ki uski aulat kya hai saneel ke saamne ..

ab lagta hai devang kuch na kuch karke badlaa lene ki soch hi raha hoga ,kameena jo thehra .. apne bete ki galti to dikhayi nahi deti aise logo ko ..

paani hai hum,magar samandar ke jisse PIYA NAHI JAA SAKTA...

dard hai hum,aur dard ko dard DIYA NAHI JAA SAKTA...

aam bande ki sateek paribhasha hain hum....

bina humare kaam KIYA NAHI JAA SAKTA aur,

bhid kar humse JIYA NAHI JAA SAKTA....
ekdam mast hai ye shayri ..

thanks for the beautiful review brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

ise kehte h hindi me pichhwade ke parkhacche uda dena...jo saneel aharya ne devang malhotra ke uda diye h ...khud ko top samjhne wala devang saneel ke samne fussi bomb hi ban gya. Waise bhi ek kahawat h kbhi kbhi jo dikhta h wo hota nhi h aur jo hota h wo dikhta nhi h. Saneel aharya ke baare me ye kahawat fit baith-ti h abhi tk ka jitna bhi unka intro hua h jitne bhi bakye samne aaye h usse ye baat to sahi sabit hoti hi h baki to waqt pr pta chal hi jana h kon kya h..aur identity disclose na krne ke pichhe kya reason h...past me saneel and veronica aur ab sanvy ne devang ki bolti aise bnd ki jo dobara khul nhi paayi...pr iss baar sayd devang fir se koshish jrur krega apni past me hui aur abhi present me hui insult ka bdla lene ke liye..dekhte h kya hota h ab aage...waiting brother
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thanks brother... saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

एक बार फिर से आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट वि.जे. भाई ।

पहली बार सनील आहार्य से रूबरू होने का मौका मिला और पहली मुलाकात में ही उन्होंने रीडर्स का दिल भी जीत लिया ।

देवांस मल्होत्रा कालेज के तीन ट्रस्टी में से एक है और एक सक्सेज बिजनेसमैन भी है । अपने लड़के रोहन का पक्ष लेकर प्रिंसिपल से मिलने कालेज आए थे पर प्रिंसिपल मैम के केबिन में जो उनकी दुर्गति हुई वो पढ़कर मजा आ गया । वहां का कन्वर्सेशन बहुत ही बेहतरीन था ।

सनवीर आहार्य के कहने पर उनको उसके पिता सनील आहार्य की यादें ताजा हो गई की एक छोटी सी मुलाकात , मात्र पांच मिनट की मुलाकात में ही किस तरह से सनील आहार्य ने उसकी इज्जत की पाह निकाल दी थी । बुरी तरह से शर्मशार करवा दिया था भरी महफिल में ।

स्टेट के चीफ मिनिस्टर तक सनील आहार्य की पहुंच थी और वो भी अच्छी छवि लिए हुए । वो बैंकर थे , स्पोर्ट्स मैन थे पर चीफ मिनिस्टर तक इतना अधिक प्रभावशाली पहुंच का पता नहीं था । शायद इसका कारण बाद में पता चले !

डायलॉग एक बार फिर से अव्वल दर्जे का । हर डायलॉग वजनदार । अद्भुत लेखनी का मिसाल कायम किया है आपने इस फोरम पर ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट वि.जे. भाई ।

taarif ke liye dhanyawad bhai... yunhi saath bane rahiye..

 

[jitutripathi00]

Waah bhai......Kuch palo ke intzaar ke baad update aane wala hai

 

[vj4u]

Jaisa baap waisa beta, itana powerful fir bhi itna low profile kyon?

waqt waqt ki baat hai...

 

[jitutripathi00]

Bar baar refresh kar rha hu page ko.....

 

[vj4u]

Thanku thanku apdate ke liye. Abhi padhte hai apdate.

Ab tak ka Sabse lamba apdate lag Raha hai

Yeh tow pohchi huwi hasti thai SUNEEL AHARYA JI hawa tight kerdi Devang ki
Bahot zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Bahot khoob superb

...Fabulous Amazing Fantastic Update thaa bhaiiii ...Fabulous Amazing Fantastic Update thaa bhaiiii ...Fabulous Amazing Fantastic Update thaa bhaiiii ...Fabulous Amazing Fantastic Update thaa bhaiiii

Mast Update

What a fantastic update bro.
Attitude hi Kamaal hai baap beto ka

Mast shaandar behtreen update

Behtarin update bhai

Superb Update bhai...

Bahad umda update mitrvar

Bahut hi achha update maja aa gaya padh ke lajawab

Zabardast fantastic update waiting for next

Excellent update bhai

Fabulous Jhakash fantastic update Bhai superb

fantastic update bhai maza aa gya.... Saneel to kisi bomb se kam nahi hai... Intro me hee blast kar diya.. Aur beta to baap se jayada khatarnak hai

Bhai kamal ka update hai
Lage raho bhai ji

Bhai maza a gea kia dhansu update tha mast

Speechless apdate. Ossam ossam apdate

(Aise ZabarDast Update par Kya kahyn Samaj nahi aa rahi Es leye )

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lajwab awesome superbbbb speechless update........... Pichhale har update ki tarah
keep posting bhai..........
waiting for next update..

Saneel hai hum, Dimag se samaja nahi Jaa Sakta,


Veronika hai hum, Dard Ko chupke aur khushi diye Bina Jiya nahi Jaa Sakta ....

Sanvy hai hum, Bina gali ke bola nahi Jaa Sakta....

Fabulous intro hua h sanvy ke papa ka
Keep posting

Beautiful Update Bhai..............

Awesome fantastic wonderful speechless update VJbhai

Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Y kya pehle baap ne bjayi ab bete sath hi princi ne aaj iski izzat ki bja di hahahaha

Wah yr y kya h sanvy k father to kamaal the hero ko esa hona hi tha y to blood m hi h



Waiting

Awesome story ab tak ke sab update read kar liye story bahut achhi hai

LOW profile HIGH defination

mind blowing

Waiting 4 "GalaTH"

Mind blowing update bro

Waiting for next update bro

thanks brothers...be along