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Zabardast shandaar updateUpdate 68
Subha sb family sath nashta krti hy
In office
Abid. Komal beta ye lo tmhra card isme itni credit limit hy k tum easily apne monthly expenses cover krlogi
Jibran beta ye cash for 2 months
After 2 months tm study k sath job krogy
Meny baat krli hy
London me ek acha brand hy garments ka uski marketing team me tme rkh lengy jtni working hours tume allow hogy utni time k lie
J.. Baba thats not fare komal ko card or me job kro
A. Beta wo larki hy usko mene bologa k wo waha jakr job kre
Tum larkay ho
Yaha bbi mera khud ka office hy islie komal ko office allow hy
J. Ok baba
Sham me dono ghar jany ki tyaari krty hn
A. Jibran me komal ko sath lejarha ho
Tum travel agent k office chle jao
Usne kuch guide line deni hy tume wo smjha dega sb
Jibran chle jata hy
Waha pr staff Jibran ki owner se mulakat kratay hn
Owner. Jibran beta thori si mistake hogie hy usme tmhri help chaie
J. Uncle kheriyat hy sb
Owner.. beta asal me tickets booking k time meri team ne hostel k entry date miss krdi
Jab tum phncho gy us k 2 din baad hostel start hoga
So 2 days k lie aa hotel me stay krlo
But ye baat Abid Sb ko ne btana
Unki pori group ka salo se hmara contract hy
Ab k father se hmara business relationships kharab hoskta hy
J..bas uncle itni si baat hy
Aap preshan na ho me baba ko ne btaonga me manage krlonga
Owner apni sectary ko bolata hy
Jo Jibran sb boly us hotel ka acha se 2 room book krwado
J.. Uncle issue ne behan bbi waha ne hogi hum ek room me manage krlengy
Owner. Ek kam kro jo jo hotels hy Jibran sb ko dekha do wo khud select krlengy
Jibran private pool wala room select krleta hy
Jis ka room se London eye ka view arha tha
Room k front par full mirror or city view arha tha
Jibran wo select krleta hy
Or uski booking kr k Jibran ko personal email krdety hn
Owner beta aapko airport se gari pick kregi
2 nights aap hotel me manage krlo
Apko hotel se hi gari leja kr hostel chor k aiegi
J..no issue i will manage
Owner. Beta again request aap apne father ko ne batna
J. Uncle aap be fikar rhy btana to mje prega q k baba pochy gy hostel kesa hy room kesa hy but me manage krlonga apko kuch ne bolegy wo meri responsibility
Owner. Uska thanks krta hy
Jibran sham me ghar ajata hy
Abid beta hogaya sb
J. G baba
J.. Baba mama or komal kaha hy
A. Beta wo komal ko lekr shopping pr gaie hy
Tum bhi kal chle jana
J..ok baba
Raat ko Jibran komal ko call krta hy
K.. Salam
G Bhai
J. Bahr arhi ho ya room me
K.. Bhai bahr ati ho wait kren
Thori der me komal ajati hy
K.. G bhai bolen
J.. Komal dekho ab hum finally kuch days me London jarhy hn
Sawal ye hy k ab waha jar hum kese rhy gy
Apna private time kese spend krengy
Tum btao
K.. Bhai dekho sb se pehly to waha jakr hum dono hostel me hogy to no private space
J. Humar jab dil ho hum hotel book krskty hn
K..me is baray me sochogi
But abi meri trf se hotel Kylie NO
Ap shahid pr mehnat krengy
Or 1st year achy se srf study or baba ne jo task dia hy uspr focus kren
Me apki hi ho
Waha koe ne janta hoga k hum bhai behan hy
Zrori to ne k room me hum private moments spend kre
Apko thora control krna hoga jo hum dono k lie secrets k lie acha hy
Aap next year flat leleogy
Jb tak sb acha raha to phr to me roz aap k sath hi hogi naa
J. So next year kya mje sb haden paar krni ki permission hogi
Kya saray parday roshni me utarengy
Humara complete milan munkin hoga
Me tmhri gehraieo tak ja skon ga
K. Bhai aap k pas 1 saal hy proof krdo k aap mje smbhaal logy meri zeemedari smbhal logy
Hmara future kya hy
Ye task meri trs se apko hy
Agar aap yw task complete krlety ho to
Meri trf se Yes
Flat me shift hoty hi
Mangetar se Biwi bana skty ho shadi kr k
J.. Shadi kese kronga behan se
K.. Behan k jisam ko nochtay hoy yaad ne ata hy behan ho?
J. Yrw
K. Ab ek forbidden relationship dunya deen k rules ko tora hy to rasta bbi agaya ka khud talash kren
Jawab mil jaie
To biwi bana kr
Mere lie Dulhan ka dress le ana
Jis ko aap apne hato se utarogy
Or me uthaogi apne pao srf or srf apne Bhai Jan k lie
Sari haden paar krni hy aap k sath
Har pose
Har style
Ek weshi janwar ki tara ap pr ride krni hy mje
But i want a safe life and a safe future with you
Jibran agay brh usko kiss krta hy
Jo k kafi lamba hojata hy
Komal bhi khub sath deti hy
K. bhai for the next 1 year ap mere kareeb ne askty
Ha kabhi acha moka hoa
Kahi akele me
Apko kiss krna any time allow but usey agay ne
J. Yrw me ek saal tak kya kronga
Komal Jibran k lund ko pkr k mere is jangli dost ka khud khayal rkhna
J..yrw 1 year bht lamba time hy
K.. Bhai me mana krdo to aap kya krogy?
Me phr bbi apko time derhi ho
Kro manage
Log tarapty hy aaj bhi apni behn ko hasil krny k lie
Me to aap ko apna chuki ho
Ab humre beech bacha kya hy
Bas chota sa time hy ye bhi guzar jaiega
J. Ok
J. Acha sunu
Hum London sham me phncen gy
Or raat 12 bje next date lg jaigi
Date yaad hy
K.. agay barh kr hont choom leti hy
K. Mere honay waly pati dev meri hum safar mere mehboob ka janam din hy kese bhool skati ho
J. To mje phr kya special gift derhi ho
K.. kya chaie aap bta do mana ne krongi
But dont forget the rules
J..usko agent ki saari bata deta hy
Room dekhata hy
Private pool dekhata hy
J. Sham me London phunch jaiegy
Wo pori raat
Uska next day
Or again raat
1 day
2 nights
Hum is room me stay krengy
Or me chatay ho tum or me 2 raat bilkul naked rhy na tmhre jisam pr koe kapra na mere
Me wada krta ho
U will remain virign
Me apni had ne par kronga
Komal.. No
Me esa ne krogi
Ap sab dekh logy
J. Yrw Attack waly din hotel me
Uss din room me
2 baar me tme dekh chuka ho
Ab q rules rkh rhi ho
K. bhai wo accident tha
Me abhi apko sb ne dekhana chati
Me sharam kahtm krlogi
Apne jitna mere sath kia us k bad wese bhi ab ap k sath comfortable ho
But agar aap sb dekhlogy
2 wedding night ka maza khatam hojiega
Jibran komal ko full chipka leta hy
Komal pls man jao na
Mje apne hato se tmhre saray kapre utrany hn
K. No no no
J.. Yrw phr 2 raat kya krnegy hum waha
K. Ok apk lie option hy
Apki ankhey band hogi
Double blind folds
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Apki un blinds fold ko ne khol skty
Agar apne kholi ya mje dekhny ka try kya
To me break up krlogi
Or me mama baba ki kasam khati ho
Me phr apko kabhi apne kareeb any ne dogi
Agar manzoor ne ho to kro wada
Komal hat agay krdeti hy
J.. Pakka wada
Dil ne to ne hy but offer accepted
K.. Chlo phr kuch khaa peelena q k 2 raat me ap bht kamzoor hojogy
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J..wo to wakt btaiega
K..acha chlo ab chlo sonay
J.. uska haat pkr k
Komal sun na
K. g bhai
Jibran uska haat pkr k lund pr rkh deta hy
Komal pls Kuch krde
K.. ab kuch days wait krlo.
Isko sahi se theek krdogi
Jibran usko tightly hug kr k usk pajamay me haat dal deta hy
Dekh to ktna wet hy
Chl na room me chle
Dono ek dosray ko relax krdety hn
K.. nazray jhuka kr Bhai haat nikal lo wrna maar khaogy mere se
J. Baray bhai ko maro gi?
K. Bara bhai choti behan ki marnay me laga hoa hy
Dunya me ese bhaio ko jan se mar dia jata hy
Ap to phr bhi meri jaan ho
Pls Abbi chor do mje
Smjha kro mama baba ghar hy me risk ne logi
Pls chor dona
Jibran uski ek ne sunta usko god me utha leta hy
Komal. Bhai gir jaogi
J. Ne girogi
Me ho na
Komal apne dono pao jibran pr grip krleti hy
Or Jibran komal ko kiss krta hy
Komal bbi rply krti hy
Or Jibran slow slow kr k room me lejata hy
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K..Bhai pls chor do wrna me roo dongi ab
Mje ne krna
J..but q yrw
K. Bhai meri dates any wali me mje pain horha hy
Pls na kro
Uski ankho me anso thy
J. Sorry sorry
Yrw to hi to srf ek larki
Mje kya pata tmhri dates kab ati hy
Kya feel hota hy
K..apko sb btatadogi
J.. sorry again
K. Koe baat ne ab jao
Sojao
Dono ek pyar bhara kiss krty hn or sonay chle jaty hn.
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Shandaar fantastic updateUpdate 69
Subha sb nashta sath krty hn
Phr Jibran
Baba..
A. ha beta kya baat hy
J. Baba wo kal travel agent k office gaya tha
Tickets to hogie hn
But Hostel start 2 din bad hoga
A. Beta to issue kya hy
Kuch days baad chle jao
J. Baba class starting me hi miss hojiegi or aagay ki flights full hn 1 week tak
A..phr
J..baba meny unse bol k 2 days ki hotel ki reservation krwali hy
Hotel ki gari airport se pick kregi bad me hostel bhi khud hi drop krdegy
Hum sham me phnch jaiegy
2 nights Hotel ka stay hy
3rd day after breakfast hotel ki gari Hostel drop kr degi
Or unho ne apne London k ek agent ka contact dedia hy jo any time contact me hoga or need hogi to hmre pass bhi ajiega
Meny unka Number save krlia hy
Or Hotel se check out k time wo ajaiegen or khud hume hostel Drop kr k formalities pori krwa k jaiega
A..Good beta
Papers sarat double chk krlena
Sunday mere sath beth jana me bhi tum logo ki cheeze cross chk krlonga
Noor tum bacho k bag pack krny me help krdena
Meny luggage k extra wait ka boldia hy
Jo lejana hy lejao
Waha new hogy jaty hi shopping pr khrcha ne krna
Noor. Beta 1 hi room lia hy na?
J. G mama Komal waha kaha akele rhe gi, islie meny ek hi book kewaya hy hum dono adjust kre lengy
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Q Komal
Or wo muskara kr Komal ko dekhta hy
K. G Bhai no issue
N. Chlo acha hy, Hostel me to Aashi bhi ajigi komal company mil jaiegi
N. Ha theek hy phr koe issue ne tum sath rehna behan k or akela ne chorna kahi
J. G Mama aap befikar rhy me iska khayal rkhoga
But aap bbi isko bhi bolden mje tang na kre
Or meri baat many
N. Komal beta Jibran ki baat sunni hy tme
Wo bara hy so u must obey and respect him
K. G Mama, or jibran ko gussay se dekhi hy.
N. Jibran beta Hostel jany k bad bhi roz subha isk hostel jana
Komal or Aashi ko sath lekr university jana or wapsi chorna phr apne hostel jana
J. G mama befikar rhy
A..chlo beta late horha hy
N.. yrw bachy ab jarhy hn ab to inka office kahatm kren
A.. Kal Saturday hy wese hi half day hota hy
Kal in dono k srf waha in logo ne kya kaam krny hy education k ilawa wo smjhana hy
Next week dono ghar hi hogy
N.. acha
Sb office chle jaty hn
Raat ko sb ajaty hn ghar after dinner sb sonay chle jaty hn
Jibran Komal ko msg krta hy
Sunu
K..hm bolen
J. Mje tmhre pas ana hy
K..ajaie bahr but no masti
J..aja
Dono bahr lodge me beth k khoob baten krty hn
K.. Bhai aap ko dar ne lagta mama baba ko shak hogaya to
Kya harkatn krhy thy aaj mama k samnay zada dimag kharab hy kya
J. Just chill, Na tum kuch bata rhi ho na me
Kuch ne hota
Itni months me kuch shak hoa kisi ko ne na
Aagay bhi ne hoga
Or wese bi waha hme kon janta hy
Bas hotel ki 2 raaten enjoy kr k hostel or phr srf study pr focus
K. Aap ko any time mere pas ana hota hy
Study pr focus kr hi na lo
J. Bas week me 1 baar mere sath hotel chl lia krna
Itna kafi hoga mere lie
K.. sochna bhi mat
Hostel start hony k bad no masti no romance
Miley gy to hum roz but normally
J. Tm bht hoshiyar ho
K. Behan kis ki ho
J..acha Aashi or Shahid ka kya krna hy
K. Bhai mere pas bht se idea hn
Wahi chal k situation dek kr btaogi
J.. ach komal ek baat pocho
K. Ha bhai 10 pocho
J. How u want to celebrate ur wedding night
Mean hum dono ki sohag raat
K. Bhai sb khayali plao bnana band kro
Ap ko kuch ne milny wala
Jab tak aap ek responsible man ne bn jaty
Or jab aap mere conditions pr pura utro gy
Jab me dedogi sb aapka hi befikar rhy
J. Yrw phr bhi btao to
K. Bhai jab wakt aiega to apko apki umeed se zada khush krdogi
Bas us time ap khushi k Marey fail na hojao
Shahid ki tara
J. Beta kafi din hogie ajao ek try hojie
Abbi ek trail hojie
K. Thapar khana hy kya
J. Thappar bhi marlena
Pehli me tmhri mar lo
K. Ha besharam behan ki maar maar k soja di thi meri pori
Pls mje na force kro
Me yw conversation or ne krna chati
Ap ganday ho mje bhi ganda bana rhy ho apni tara
Or rhi baat sohag raat ki
To ye sb porany zamany me hot tha
Hum sohag din mnaiegy
Or Jibran k gaal chaat leti hy
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Or wo bhi kholllay Aasman k neechy
Na koe chat ho na koe deewar ho
J..kya matlab kya ghar ki chat pr ?
K..uf ho ne ne
Koie hill station ho
Jaha kisi unchaie pr jakr hum dono akele ho
Ya kisi darya kinaray
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Ya phr island jaha koe aata jata ne hoo
Me xhati ho aap or me un lambo ko ese celebrate kre jo kabhi bhool na laie
I want it in very special and unique
Apni jeb garam krlo q k me aapka bht khrcha krwaongi
J. Jeb baad me garam krlonga
Abhi to me garam ho ajao tmri garmi bhi thandi krdo
Yrw dekho na soch ki itna hard horha ho
Or Komal ka hat pkr k lund pr rkh deta hy
Komal hat hta kr
Ap to any time hard hoty ho
J.. kareeb jakr to tum bi ho to any time wet hoti ho meri yado me
Komal sharma jaati hy
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K. Bhai chlo sonay jao ab or wo ek chota sa kiss kr k chli jaati hy.
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Update 02
Ab Komal ne ID chk ki
usme sana ne sari khud ki pics lgai wi thi but sb without face
id proper maintain thi decent profile
Komal ne messenger chk kie to wo MT thi shaied Sana ne khud delete kie hogy sb
ab Komal ne simple kaam yw kiya daily posts dalna shro krdi
kabhi koie Poem
kabhi Pics
Couple vibes
or notice kiya k kon likw krta hy kon like krta hy kon coment unki profiles chk krti or daily koie naya bnda msg krta hy hi hello hoti but koe bhi matlab ka larka ne mil raaha tha
koie dirext gandi bat krta to koie sexual vdo ya pic bhj deta
ek ID se daily srf heart reactions arhy rhy
na koie coment krta na koe msgS
name uska Emran Khan tha
city bhi same
but usne bhi koie pic ne lgai thi
bas apni body ki pica thi
koie sea side pr to koie Gym mw jis mw wo body show krta or baki sb post dil jalo walo just likw broken or alone
ab Komal or uski koie bat ne hoie thi
but komal sochti agr jis k pic hy to ye bnda perfct hy meri muqbaly ka or single bhi sahi jamy gii
wo sab baat Sana ko btati hy
Sana usko bolti hy kuch na kr uski profile ki sb pics ko like krde dekh khud contact krega
or esa hi hoa
2 din bad msg agaya salam ka
but ab Exams start thy
komal salam ka jwab dekr bolti hy busy due to exams wait few days.
Update 02
Ab Komal ne ID chk ki
usme sana ne sari khud ki pics lgai wi thi but sb without face
id proper maintain thi decent profile
Komal ne messenger chk kie to wo MT thi shaied Sana ne khud delete kie hogy sb
ab Komal ne simple kaam yw kiya daily posts dalna shro krdi
kabhi koie Poem
kabhi Pics
Couple vibes
or notice kiya k kon likw krta hy kon like krta hy kon coment unki profiles chk krti or daily koie naya bnda msg krta hy hi hello hoti but koe bhi matlab ka larka ne mil raaha tha
koie dirext gandi bat krta to koie sexual vdo ya pic bhj deta
ek ID se daily srf heart reactions arhy rhy
na koie coment krta na koe msgS
name uska Emran Khan tha
city bhi same
but usne bhi koie pic ne lgai thi
bas apni body ki pica thi
koie sea side pr to koie Gym mw jis mw wo body show krta or baki sb post dil jalo walo just likw broken or alone
ab Komal or uski koie bat ne hoie thi
but komal sochti agr jis k pic hy to ye bnda perfct hy meri muqbaly ka or single bhi sahi jamy gii
wo sab baat Sana ko btati hy
Sana usko bolti hy kuch na kr uski profile ki sb pics ko like krde dekh khud contact krega
or esa hi hoa
2 din bad msg agaya salam ka
but ab Exams start thy
komal salam ka jwab dekr bolti hy busy due to exams wait few days.
NiceUpdate 09 A.
Fri Night
One day before competition
Dono online thy
Jab Emran online ata hy wo dekhta hy pehly se msg aya hoa tha jis me ek picture thi.
Kal trophy k sath aana tmhre lie gift ready hy
Emran to khushi se pagal horha tha
E. Meri jan be fikar rho
Trophy bhi laonga or kal tme loda bhi dekhaonga
Kal chot or lund ki Sahi se jang hogi raat me.
Next say Jibran subha se nikal jata hy
Pora din trainer k sat hota hy
Gym se sports club jaty hn jaha competition tha
Usi time Abid Khan bhi ajata hy
Abid khan sb se milta hy
Or pochta hy tmhara trainer kon hy
Trainer or Abid Khan apas ne milty hn ek dosry se.
Phr Jibran ko bhj dety hn waha se.
Abid Khan. Coach kya position hy competition ki or Jibran ki preparation ki
Trainer. Abid Sb yaha Jibran k jtni competitor hn meny sb ka data pehly se collect krlia hy srf ek candidate Jibran ko tuff time dehraha hy
Jibran ki position 2nd banegi
Humara saloo se is field ka experience hy jo reality hy wo apko bta rha ho.
A. Theek hy judges ko bolao ek chaie peeti hn un k sath.
Trainer Main judge se Abid Khan ko milwa deta hy.
Abid Khan Sir is time mera bacha is competition me part lerha hy uski preparation k hisab se wo ....
Judge. Me same field ka bnda ho apka bacha Jibran Khan 2nd title jeet lega.
A. Bilkul mje trainer ne btaya uski training bht achi hoie hy
But i want 1st Position
Or Abid Khan usko apney jaal me phasa leta hy or deal krleta hy k 1st position hi chaie mje.
Judge bhi lalach me ajata hy or agree krleta hy.
Competition start hota hy
Sb participants apni apni posing krty hn.
Or in the Final round Jibran 1st Position jeet leta hy.
Abid Khan bht khush tha.
Jibran stage se akr apne trainer se milta hy sb se pehly oski pori team usko congratulate krti hy.
Wo apna medal Abid Khan apne baap ko pehna deta hy Abid Khan , Jibran k sb dosto ko judges management trainer sb ko kal dinner ki dawat dekr ata hy Jibran k jeetny ki khushi me.
Dono Baap beta sath ghar aty hn.
Jibran akar maa Noor KO trophy deta hy sb btata hy
Or wo khush bhi to shok bhi k tmnne competition jeet lia me to smjhti thi k normal body bnaty ho gym jakr
Wo Komal ka pochta hy to
Noor btatai hy
Beta wo to sonay chli gaie room me tm usko subha bata dena
Abid Khan bata deta hy k kal meny dawat rkhi hy is k sb frnds or gym trainer judges sb ki, sb males hi hogy to tum logo ko parso lekr chlonga ek family celebration bhi krengy.
Sb apne apne room me chly jaty hn.
Jibran shower lekr ready hota hy or Zareen ko Trophy ki picture send krdeta hy
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Komal Online usi ka wait krhi thi.
Wo Reply krti hy congratulations
Kab se wait krhi thi tumhara.
30 mins wait kro ati ho online abhi ready hony jarhi ho
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Aaj raat Zareen(Komal) apne hi Bhai Emraan(Jibran) k samny apna jisam ki numaish krny wali hy
Dono ko ab tak ne pata jis sey wo dono mazay le rhy hy wo koe anjan ne apna hi Khoon hy. .
Abid Khan ne betay ki Khushi or apni position k hisab se 1st number ko hi importance di,
But usko ne pata tha k uski waja se aaj usi ki beti kya kregi
Ab Jibran ne condition pori krdi thi ab Komal ki baari thi usey gift deny ki.