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UPDATE-03
Subah ruthven apne me samete kisi tarah so raha tha ki kisi ke garam hatho ka ahsaas hua aur vo hath use chhu paate es se pehle hi apne thande hatho se usne us hath ko jor se jakad liya aur jhatke se fighting position me aa gaya lekin jab samne dekha to vohi ladki thi jo bahut ghabra gaye thi
Ruthven ne turant us ladki ka hath chhoda aur do kadam piche hokar sar jhuka kar us se maafi mangi
Ladki- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Kal bola tha na vapas mat aana? Fir yaha vapas kyu aaye ho?
Thoda gusse me boli sayad apne dar ko chhupa rahi thi
Ruthven- sorry miss. Aapne to mujhe ghar ke liye bola tha aur main vaha vapas nahi gaya. Mere pass rukne ko koe jagah nahi thi esliye yaha so gaya. Yaha thodi thand se bachav tha
Ladki- ye jagah bahar sone ki nahi hai. Ek din me hi jam jaoge tum aisi thand me
Ruthven- jamna hota to abhi tak jam chuka hota miss. Sayad jindagi abhi kuch aur karvana chahti hai
Ladki- young ho tum koe kaam kyu nahi dund lete? Kab tak yaha se vaha tak bhatakte rahoge?
Ruthven- miss kisi ne loot kar li mere sath. Mere sare paise id leke mujhe maar peet kar chale gaye. Ab main apne sehad bhi vapas nahi ja sakta aur koe stranger ko kaam kyu hi dega? Jaise aap mujhe dekh kar dar rahi ho vaise hi baki bhi darenge ki kahi ye koe dhongi to nahi jo dhong kar raha ho aur hume nuksaan pahucha kar bhaag jaye?
Ladki- tumne police complaint kyu nahi ki? Vo to tumhri madad kar sakte the?
Ruthven- nahi police nahi. Mujhe police par trust nahi hai kya pata vo mujhe hi ulta latka de apne sehar ke to apne sehar ke hote hai na? Main to praya hu unke liye
Ladki- kya naam hai tumhra?
Ruthven- ruthven miss
Ladki- kaha se aaye ho?
Ruthven- USA se
Ladki- hmm
Aur vo aage kuch nahi boli sayad uski baatein ki sachae prakhane ki kosis kar rahi thi
Ladki- yaha kyu aaye the?
Ruthven- ghumne ka shok hai esliye
Ladki- ab bhi hai? Usne muskurate hue pucha aur ek baar fir ruthven uski khubsurati ko niharane se khud ko rok nahi paya jise us ladki ne bhi mahsus kar liya tha esliye turant apne serious mode me aa gaye
Ladki- main tumhe kaam de sakti hu
Ruthven- lekin?
Ladki- kya?
Ladki- aap kuch condition batane wali thi par boli nahi esliye lekin kya?
Ladki- agar tumne kuch galat karne ki kosis ki to yaad rakhna…. Aapke pass gun hai ruthven uski baat puri karte hue bola jiske response me ek baar fir ladki ke chehre par muskaan aa gaye
Ladki- tum bahar nahi rah sakte kisi ne dekh liya to problem ho sakti hai esliye jo bhi market ke ander ka kaam hai vo dekh sakte ho. Kaam kiya hai kabhi?
Ruthven- sikh lunga miss
Ladki- kya kaha rakha hai aur kitne ka hai sath me unke alternate kya hai ye sab yaad karna padega. Aasan nahi hai bilkul bhi
Ruthven- kar lunga
Ladki- main tumhe khane ko dungi teeno time aur sone ko jagah
Ruthven ki aankhen thodi upar ko ho gaye maano vo puch raha ho asli chhej ke bare me to batao. Mujhe sirf thode paise chahiye jis se main yaha se ja saku
Ladki ne bhi uski dasa samjh li fir boli pehle dekh to lu tum kaam kar bhi paoge ya nahi aur kya pata tum pehle din hi bhaag jao
Ruthven- aap ek baar rok kar to dekhiye jindagi gujar du apke sath me
Anjane me hi uske muh se nikla. Aisa laga jaise ye usne bola hi nahi balki kisi ne jabardasti use bulva diya ho
Ladki bhi choki aur thoda gussa bhi aaya use
Ruthven- i am so so sorry. Vo bas galti se mere muh se nikal gaya
Ladki- chalo der ho rahi hai aur usne chabi ruthven ko di jisne super market khol di
Ye sehar kafi chhota tha jaha jada log nahi rahte the us hissab se agar dekha jaye to ye market kafi badi thi aur sara samaan available tha vaha par
Ladki- chhoti jagah hai to jada log nahi aate yaha etni subah esliye chalo main tumhe sab batati hu
Aur vo ek ek karke sari details batati gaye aur ruthven sunta gaya
Ladki- samjh gaye? Ek do baar yaad karoge to easy ho jayega
Ruthven- hogya. Thank you miss
Ladki- rachel
Ruthven- sorry??
Ladki- rachel naam hai mera
Ruthven- oh okay got it rachel
Fir rachel apne kaam me lag gaye aur ruthven piche hi raha. Vo dekh sab paa raha tha aur observe bhi kar raha tha
Vaise to yaha kaam karte karte vo jab tak nikalne layak paise ikhata karta tab tak to bahut der ho chuki hoti lekin vo paiso ke liye nahi ruka tha yaha
Ek to use apne bare me koe jankari nahi thi sath me uske sath etna bada hadsa hua tha aur dusra vo abhi apne bare me analysis karna chahta tha
Jab tak use koe answer nahi mil jata aise khule me bahar jana uske liye bilkul bhi safe nahi tha aur jitna vo jana tha us se use etna to idea lag hi gaya tha ki vo normal bilkul nahi hai
Uski yaaddast kamaal ki hai. Jab se vo utha tha nind se tab se abhi tak ki use sari baatein yaad thi, usne kya dekha vo kaha se aaya sab use bilkul saaf saaf pata tha sath me uske dimag me koe bhi chhij hone se pehle uske khatre ke bare me andesha ho jata tha aur jo pehli chhij uske dimag me aati thi ki yaha se safely nikla kaise jaye
Es se use idea to lag gaya tha ki kuch to locha hai uske system ke sath aur jab tak ek do answer nahi aa jate tab tak vo yaha se nahi jayega
Yehi sab usne raat ko socha tha fir decide kiya ki vo es ladki ka sahara leke yaha rukne ka praband kar sakta hai. Jada bada sehar bhi nahi hai aur police bhi bahut kam hai esliye uske liye khatra na ke barabar hai aur kya pata waqt use vapas sab yaad dila de aur uska kaam aasan ho jaye?
Esliye hi usne apne aapko ek sareef ladke jaisa prateet karaya hai aur usme kamyaab bhi ho gaya. Rachel ko jada nahi to thoda bahut sachae dikhaye de hi gaye thi uski baaton se
Aise hi lunch ho gaya aur close ka tag laga kar rachel khana leke piche ki side aa gaye jaha ruthven kaam karne ka dikhava kar raha tha. Ab problem ye thi ki vo to sirf ek ke hissab se khana laye thi usko konsa sapna aaya tha ki aaj ye ladka vapas mil jayega aur use nokari par bhi rakh legi
Fir bhi usne ruthven ko sath me khane ko bol diya
Rachel- aajao ab kiska intezaar kar rahe ho?
Ruthven- its okay miss. Aap kha lijiye mujhe abhi bukh nahi hai
Rachel- jitni hai uthi hi kha lena. Koe force nahi kar raha hai tumhe aur main kam hi laye hu to jada vaise bhi nahi milne wala vo ek baar firse muskuraye
Ruthven- miss ek baat bolu? Bura mat manana
Rachel- kya?
Apni eyebrows ko thoda upar karte hue vo boli
Ruthven- nahi kuch nahi. Aise hi
Rachel- ab bol bhi do. Baaton ko dil me nahi rakhna chahiye
Ruthven- aap muskuraya na kiya karo
Rachel- kya matlab? Suddenly vo ruthven ki baaton ko seriously lene lagi. Ab obviously koe aapko bolega ki aap muskuraya na kiya karo to samne wala janana to chahega hi na ki kyu?
Ruthven- kyuki i am sorry for saying but aap bahut khusburat lagti ho jab aap smile karti ho to. Kisi ka bhi dil uske muh se bahar aa sakta hai.
Rachel- shut up aur chhup chhap khana khao
Thoda gusse me boli. Sayad usko ruthven ka aisa bolna acha nahi laga aur jawab me ruthven ne bhi kuch nahi kaha aur rachel ke sath bath gaya
Khana indian to bilkul bhi nahi tha fast food tha lekin jab bhukh lagti hai to sab bahut acha lagne lagta hai.
Ruthven ne jada to nahi khaya jitna khana tha usko 25% hi khaya hoga fir mera ho gaya bol kar vo uth gaya. Rachel ne bhi usko kuch nahi bola aur chhup chhap apna lunch continue rakha
Uske baad evening tak koe vartalaap nahi hue dono ke beech. Shaam ko jab jane ka waqt hua to rachel ne sab kaam sameta aur fir ruthven ko boli
Rachel- aur koe jagah to hai nahi tum yahi ruk jana bahut jagah hai sone ko aur yaha ka temperature bhi maintain rahta hai koe problem nahi hogi. Main bahar se band karke ja rahi hu
Ruthven- okay miss
Aur jaise hi rachel mud kar vapas jane ko hue to vaha do mask bande aa jate hai aur chaku dikha kar loot paat karne ki kosis karne lagte hai
Aaj aisa pehli baar hua tha vaha nahi to log bade pyaar muhobbat se hi rahte the. Rachel bahut buri tarah ghabra gaye aur sidha apne purse uske hatho me thama diya
Unme se ek aage aa gaya aur cash counter ko khol kar aur paise dekhne laga jab kuch nahi mila to rachel se uski ghadi, mobile, chain chhene laga
Ruthven jo abhi tak door khada tha uske dimag me ek jhatka sa laga aur agle ki pal
Dhadaam ek kick maari usne aur ek banda udta hua gate se bahar gira. Vo to acha hua ki gate khula hua tha nahi to etna to vo loot nahi paate jitna ka kharcha aa gaya hota
Jaise hi dusra banda ruthven ko marne ko aage aaya badi aasani se uske attack se ruthven bacha aur fir ek chest punch aur vo vahi dher ho gaya
Rachel bechari aur jada dar gaye. Vahi ruthven ne usko bhi utha kar bahar feka fir unke pocket se sare paise nikale aur rachel ki taraf badha diye
Jo kafi ghabra gaye thi esliye kuch react nahi kar paye
Ruthven- dont worry ye abhi nahi uthenge. Aap gate band karke aaram se ghar pahuch jaoge
Lekin vaha se koe jawab nahi aaya
Ruthven- miss??
Apne aur rachel ke beech ek distance maintain karke ruthven vapas bola to rachel vapas apne dunia me aaye
Rachel- can you please come with me?
Mere ghar par ek room extra hai vahi so jana. PLEASE
Vo kafi dari hue thi to ruthven mana nahi kar paya aur khud hi aage badh kar pehle to paise rachel ke hatho me thamaye fir super market band karke rachel ke sath chal diya
Ghar pahuch kar bhi rachel bahut ghabraye hue thi aur vo baar baar gate aur windows check kar rahi thi jise ruthven ache se observe kar raha tha
Ruthven- kitchen kaha hai miss?
Usne ek second ke liye jarur rachel ka dhayan bhang kiya kyuki rachel ne ishare se hi use kitchen ka rasta bata diya
Vo gaya aur teen minutes baad hath me coffee mug leke vapas aa gaya aur
Ruthven- miss coffee?? Vo rachel ke samne vapas khada tha
Ruthven- jindagi easy nahi hoti miss. Aise hadse kabhi kabhi hote rahte hai aur actually me hone bhi chahiye ye hum strong banate hai sath me hum kis atmosphere me rahte hai ye bhi dikhate hai
Rachel- main yaha 22 saalo se hu. Yahi paida hua aur yahi kaam kar rahi hu. Aaj tak kabhi mere sath to chhodo yaha kisi ke sath aisa nahi hua hoga
Ruthven- fir to ek nata experience le liya aapne? Khush kyu nahi najar aa rahi aap? Vaise dekha jaye to aap kitne strangers ko khana kapde naukari aur fir ghar aane ko deti hai? Ye kya pehli baar nahi hua aapke sath?
Rachel- mujhe police complain karni chahiye
Ruthven- vo bache the miss. Vapas kabhi nahi aayenge
Rachel- tumhe kya pata? Dobara aur jada aa gaye to?
Ruthven- to vo sab bhi vaise hi jayenge jaise ye gaye hai aur chehra dekh kar insaan ki aukaat pahchan leta hu main
Rachel- kaun ho tum?
Ruthven- jab pata lag jayega tab bata dunga
Rachel- kya matlab?
Ruthven- matlab ye ki miss abhi aapko rest karna chahiye. Stress ki vajah se aapki tabeyat kharab ho sakti hai
Rachel- hmm right but us se pehle dinner bana leti hu
Ruthven- if you don’t mind main bana deta hu. Aap rest kar lijiye
Rachel ne ek baar najar utha kar ruthven ko dekha sayad pehli baar gaur se dekha aur fir bina kuch bole kitchen ki taraf badh gaye….
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