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Fantasy Emperor, Rule out Darkness:

Is the story of Emperor going good? Should I continue it? Choose after reading.

  • Yes?

    Votes: 30 96.8%

  • No?

    Votes: 1 3.2%
  • Total voters
    31
dev61901

dev61901

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Update-6:


Killing Me Softly:



Ab tak Emperor ke kahani may:


MONA: you should get up now, sad khan.

Sad: yar call me sad only. Yea sad khan b bohot ajeeb lag raha hi.

MONA: ok, ding: name of the system owner updated to Sad.

Get up sad lets face the world.

Sad: yes, MONA chalo ab is darkness ko properly rule out kertay hi. We can do this. Smiles.


Lights, camera, and action-----------------



Now Next:



Sad’s Residence,

Morning, time 9:34AM.

Kitchen maysay aik awaz aari thi.

Waha per do goray, creamy , or khubsuret lambay nakhuno walay hath bohot tayzy say aik shelf per rakhay huay bowl may chaltay ja rahay thay.

In hatho ke maliken ko nah to apnay ird gird ke koi fiker thi or nah he wo koi b or cheez soch rahi thi.

Jo cheez zaruri thi wo tha yea kam pura kerna or jaldi say waha pohnchna jaha uska dil or dimag Janay kabsay laga hua tha.

Tayzy say apnay hatho ko move kerti yea katil Haseena apnay he khayalo may kahi goom se thi.

Kia yea sahi ban raha hoga?

Yar maynay pehlay kiu yea sub sika nahi.

Agger yea usko pasand nah aya to may kia karu gi?

Oh God please yea usko pasand ah jai.

Maynay aysa pehlay kabi b nahi kia kissy kay lia b. agger yea ganda bana hua to?

Mera to dil he toot jai ga if usnay isko enjoy nah kia to.

Uff, may b nah.

Thora jaldi kerna hoga. mujay he usko good morning wish kerni hi bus.


I know, zarur he usko pasand ai ga.

Afterall, ismay meri feelings b to include hi.

Kk kia meri feelings? Blush,

Akhir kia hi meri feelings?

Oh, haya what are you thinking, yea kia hota ja raha hi tumay? Smiles.

I am cooking something for someone. oh my God. kitna special lag raha hi yea kerna.


Yea kaysa feel ker rahi hu may us time say.


Wo kiu mujay bus ab apna sa lagta hi?

Umm, damid yea kia hota ja raha hi mujay yar. Smiles,

May such may paggel ho rahi hu.


Appi shaid sahi kehty hi.


Per kia yea bura hi ya acha?


That touch, s sss. His touch.


Akhir wo he kiu?


Kia hi jo mujay bar bar uski teraf khinchta rehta hi?


Aysa pehlay to kabbi nahi hua.


Yea sub us time say kiu shuru hua, may to kabbi b aysa nahi sochti thi, phir ab kiu?


Kk kia isko touch kerna uski galty thi ya kuch or?


Sochtay huay haya nay apnay kamptay hath ko upper ke teraf lana shuru kia.


Or aikdum say usy jaga per raka jo us time sad nay pakri thi.


Um, yes. I can feel your touch.



Uff kaysay hora hi yea sub.



Haya apni ankhay band ker kay us moment ko phir say yad ker rahi thi.



Uska wo touch wo squeeze. Ahm yes. Humf.

Haya baysakhta apnay 32.c. right boob ko feel kerti ja rahi thi. uski wo nazuk fingers slowly slowly uski soft surface per move or slide ho rahi thi.



Kaysay tumnay isko itny ahsani say paker lia tha or kaysay kia tha yea sub?

Huh,, tell me naaa. umm.


yes, ahh, I just feel you so much. Sss..



Oh I just want you in my life dear cousin.



Akhirr kiu? mujay kiu bus wo he chaia ab or kuch b nahi bus wo.



Uff, yes I feel this strange for him.

Only him, umm more.



He is the one. wo he hi that special person for me, really is he?



Pp per agger yea kissy ko b pata chal gaya to?



Aikdum say yea thought nay uska haseen daydream tor dia.



Nooooo, may kabi b aysa nahi hony do gi.

He is my little special secret.

Smiles, yes wo he mera secret hi.

Aysa secret jo may kissy say b kabi b share nah karu gi or nah he usko khudsay kabi door Janay dongi.



Yes, never, kabbi nahi. Blush, what you have done to me dear cousin.

Kash kay tum b waysa he feel karo jaysa may abi is waqat ker rahi hu.

Its so special, so sweet.

Mera dill, uhm kabi b nahi itni zor say dherka.

Jab tum meray itna kareeb thay.

Your breaths. Mujay abi b apnay face per wo feel hoti hi.

Oh, I love it.

You have changed something in me.

Yes you have.



Haya?



Please bus aysay he rahna meray sath. Smiles.



Haya?



Hmmm, smiles.



Hayaaa tum sun b rahi ho?



Huh, wha what, kk kia hua? Kiu itna zorsay cheek rahi ho api?



Anum: kitchen kay doorway may apni usy cute but deadly look kay sath haya ko ghusay say daykhy ja rahi thi. Is time koi b anum ko daykhta to der kay marai hil he nah sakta. Uski black nighty or khulay rayshmy balo may wo aik dilkush parry lag rahi thi.

Per uskay Masoom say rosy face per aik angry look or haya say kaii sarayyy sawal daykhay ja saktay thay.



Haya: bolo b? ab chup kiu ho?



Anum: hayrani say boltay huay, ye yea kia ker rahi ho tum?



Haya: kk kiu? Kia hua? Nazer nahi ara kia ker rahi hu? Or log kitchen may kia kertay hi?



Anum: hath apni nagin jaysi balkhati kamer per rak ker, hmm, logo ka bohot pata hi tumay? Apnay kaarnammay ko zara ghor say daykho gi? Yea kia ab kitchen lag b raha hi?



Haya: huh?



Jaysay he usnay kitchen kay shelves or floor per nazer dali to------






Sad’s Room, sad apnay bed say jaysay he uthnay laga to.



Aouuu, shit yar.

Ssss. It hurts. Aik tayz derd usko uskay left bazu may say chalta hua uskay shoulder tak hua. Ahh, mera yea hath move kiu nahi hora yar? Sad nay apna pura zor laga ker apnay left hand ko move kerwanay ke koshish ke per tab he.



MONA: Stop sad.





Sad: hmmm? uf MONA, yea kia hora hi ah MONA? Why its not moving? I feel like nothing.



MONA: sad, your left arm is having a Humerus Fracture.



Sad: yea kia hota hi?

Explain it please?



MONA: simple terms may is arm ko bohot buri terha torture kia gaya hi. Is may multiple vanes dislodge ho chuki hi and sorry but yea fil hal physically heal nahi kia ja sakta.


Sad: whaat? Kk kia matlab hi MONA? Mera bazu kia totally useless ho chuka hi? Per aysa kaysay ho gaya. Now what? Tell me.

See!!.

Maynay kaha tha na tumsay that may aik useless lerka hu.



MONA: sad listen. Don’t lose hope ok? Yea abi teek nahi ho sakta per we will find some solution to it. So please relax?


Sad: huh, yeah right.

Relax? Wow, yea kaysay keh sakti ho tum. After jo b kuch ho gaya hi meray sath?

Ha, tell me?



MONA: I was just.



Sad: MONA abi tum khud he daykh lo kay may thora sa positive hua tha but see darkness came again. Snif!!. Yea he hi meri reality. I I am nothing, snif but a big failure.



MONA: silence,



Sad: bus aysa he chalta rehna hi each time to me. Snif. I ahuh, i am a loser a big bad lu loser apni ankho ko sad apnay right hand say bari bari pohnch raha tha. uski sari excitement un ansuo may tip tip ker kay nikelty ja rahi thi.


i was blind now i am a proper disable.


wow, my luck.


huh!!.


MONA: sad please stop feeling bad about yourself.



Sad: or yea, kk



Click, cheeeen,



Sad?



Uth gay tum?



Ab kaysa feel ker rahay ho?

Derd za ziada to nahi hi nah?




Sad: aik ghusay may jalty hui awaz kay sath. Kiu? Kia problem hi appko? Kiu aii ho yaha?


Voice: aikdum say ghabrah ker, may to bus!!.

Ye yea supe.



Sad: huh right. Aik kam karay please, jo b lai ho iskay sath he please get out of here.



Voice: pp per sad. maynay kia kia hi? what happened?



Sad: kia apko sunai nahi dia? Just get lost pleaseeeee. Go from here.

Goooooo!!!.

Leave meee alone.


Haya ko sad ka reaction daykh ker mano jaysay aik electric shock lag gaya tha.


uskay samnay mano sub ruk sa gaya.

kitni khush thi wo or usko badlay may kia mila?


is time wo bus cheek cheek ker rona chati thi.


uski badi badi jheel se ankho may pani uter aya tha.
wo thrush aikdum say hilly or kay sath derwaza band ker kay tayzy say apnay kamray may aa gai.

ab tak uskay ahsas ka band tootnay wala he tha.

usnay khudko sambhala or bathroom ke teraf supe kay bowl ko basin tak ;a ker apnay unhi kamptay goray hatho say ahista ahista kerkay may slip ker dia.

hum, how, how could he. Sinf. Kitna huh kitna ghusa tha uski us awaz may. Kiuuu, snif, wo kiu nahi samja kay yea may thi. Snif, why he spoke like this to me snif siss kitna soch ker may yea lay ker gai thi uskay pass. Is may to, huh, is may to meri feelings b thi or phir sis phir b usnay nahi samja. Kiuuu!!. Why sad, snif, aysa kaysay ker saktay ho tum? Wo be meray sath ssss. Snif, sis,




Wahi kitchen may, Mr. Khan apni newspaper ko hath may thamay jaysay he ahista ahista chal ker enter huay.



Aray good morning anum bayta.



Anum: achanek say mud ker. Oh, sorry chachu maynay apko daykha nahi. Good morning. Smiles.



Mr. Khan: oh ho, yea to teek hi, but tum, subha subha or wo b kitchen may? Aj yea suraj kider say nikel aya hi bai?



Anum: blush, chachu ap b nah. Or yea meri merzi nahi thi kay subha subha yea kitchen kay kam karu, but its my duty. Smiles.



Mr. khan: oh?



Anum: yea sub kuch jo ap daykhray ho, yea sub kuch he bikhra hua tha abi thori dare pehlay tak.



Mr. khan: hmmm, kiu koi billy wagayra ghus gai thi ider kia?



Anum: gee bilkul. Aik bohot he paggel se billy ko nikala hi abi apkay anay say pehlay he.



Mr. khan: hahaha, acha to kia yea sub haya ka kaarnama hi kia?



Anum: halkay ghusay may. Or konh ho sakti hi chachu. Pata nahi madam ko kia soojy aj subha subha he.

jab may uth ker nichay aii to yea kitchen kam or war front ziada lag raha tha.



Mr. khan: hahahah, oh ho koi bat nahi tum bayta kissy servant ko bula layti khud kiu kerna shuru hogi yea sub. Choro may kissy ko bulata hu.



Anum: oho meray hansom chachu ab to sub kuch ho chuka hi servants ko kiu tang kerna.
Yea daykhay bus almost done.


Mr. khan: bayta jab b tumay daykhta hu to mujay aik bohot he proud se feeling ati hi. I cannot explain it in words. Tum kitni samajdar or badi hogi ho. Lagta hi ab tumara b kuch kerna paray ga.



Anum: chachuuu, please nah. Ap daykhay mujay phir say cheera rahay hi. Jai mujay bat he nahi kerni appsay.



Mr. khan: aray ismay naraz hony wali konsi bat hi. Kia kuch galat kaha maynay? Huh?


Anum: jo b hi, may ja rahi hu. Jai katty.



Mr. khan: anum bayta suno to sahi.



Per tab taka num staircase char chuki thi.



Upper atay huay, yea sub logo ko pata nahi kia ho jata hi. Her time shadi shadi. Mujay jab kerni he nahi hi to kiu cheeratay hi mujay her time he. Hmmm, may b bat nahi karu gi ab chachu say.

Kehtay huay wo click kay sath derwaza khol ker kamray may aii.

Hmmm? Haya? Kider ho tum?

Chaltay chaltay wo bathroom ke teraf ah chuki thi.

Yea lerki b nah.

Haya? Bai bolo b kia bathroom may ho?

Silence,



Haya? anum nay derwaza knock kia, Tuck tuck, ander ho?



Tab he anum ko, snif, siss, snif. Hhhh,



Jaysay he yea awaz suni to anum aikdumsay ghabra gai. Oy haya? Derwaza kholo. Kia hua hi?



Anum ke awaz or derwazay ke tuck tuck jab haya nay sunny to usnay jaldi say basin ka tap khol dia. Shurrer kay sath pani nay basin may aik shore create ker dia. Haya nay apna ansuo say bhara chera saf kia or.

Hmm, huhhh, bathroom may heee huu.

Anum: tum teek to hona?



Haya: hum, haaa muj mujay kia hona hi snif. Bus ati hu. Sss.



Anum: hay daykho please bahir niklo mujay batao tum ro rahi ho kia?



Haya: huhh, nn nahi to? Snif. Busss paniii ka shore hi. May bhala kiuuuu rouu gi. Snif. Ahista say kiss kay lia rouu konh hi jo sunay ga mera hal. Hums snif, koi b tt to nahi hi. Hmm, koii b nahi.








Sad’s room, sad ko kuch b nahi samaj ara tha kay aik dum say he itna sub kuch kaysay ho gaya uskay sath. Pehlay uski nazer nay uska sath chora, then jo uskay dil ke chabi thi, uski mama us say bohot door chali gai, or ab uski body ka aik important component useless ho chuka tha.



What, a life sad khan. What a fucking life I have.



Shit man really shit.


MONA: jo yea sub sunti ja rahi thi.

Hay?

Umm, are you done crying little baby?



Sad: MONA yea kia kehri ho?



MONA: Ding, name updated to little baby. Smiles.



Sad: why youuu. Yea kia ker rahi ho?



MONA: jo tum mujay show karo gay may to wohi observe ker rahi hu. You are constantly crying and acting like a little baby. So if you are then be happy with your new name. smiles.



Sad: may koi little baby waby nahi hu.

Samji tum?



MONA: umm, no?



Sad: MONAAA.



MONA: yes little baby?

Tell me?



Sad: please, tum b mujay aysay taunt to nah karo. Are you like others too?



MONA: no iamb not. Laykin jab tum meri sun he nahi rahay to kia fark perta hi?



Sad: hmm, ok fine sunao kia kehna hi tumay?



MONA: firstly, khud ko is state say bahir nnikallo.



Sad: apnay app ko jaysay taysay sambhal ker ab MONA ko sun raha tha. Please tell.



MONA: hmm, good boy. Ab daykho tumnay apni is weakness ko itna complicate ker lia that your behavior was very rude with your Cousin Haya Tarik Khan.



Sad: please MONA, let it be. She deserves more than this.



MONA: sad, its not right at all.

you are a system holder, if you are doing the same with them to how you will be different or unique? or meray ider hony ka be kia faida?

You should have different thoughts unlike others nah?



Sad: hmmm, kia may kafi rude tha?


MONA: yes, you were.



Sad: bummer!!. Yar pata nahi us time kia ho gaya tha mujay.



MONA: hmmm, don’t worry we can fixit later..



Sad: yeah, maybe.



MONA: to baby tell me kay kia tumnay mujay properly activate kernay kay baray may kuch socha hi ya nahi?



Sad: huh, what do you mean?



MONA: ah, sorry!!. Folding hands, folding hands, mujay tumay batana bhul gaya tha kay tumay mujay abi activate kerna baki hi. Smiles.



Sad: tt to tum agger activate nahi ho then mujsay bat kaysay ker pa rahi ho? Yea kaysay hora hi?



MONA: its an Artificial Voice Mode. May isko use kertay siraf tumsay communicate ker sakti hu or baki proper functioning kay lia you have to decide on activating me. But, yea sunlo. Jab tumnay mujay aik bar activate kerlia to till your last breath you will be attached to me. Also, jo b is system kay features hi, you will use them to serve your purposes and agger galti say be tumnay kuch mischief attempt ke or in powers ko misuse kia to disgrace or hurt humanity. Then?



Sad: then wha what?



MONA: the system will self-destruct within you.



Sad: ooo like really?


MONA: dam really.



Tum pehlay soch lo.



Sad: hmm, MONA please do it.



MONA: are you sure?


Sad: hmm, yes I don’t want to lose a friend like you. Kia tum apna promise bhul gai ha?



MONA: ah, um, of course not. Ok then, here goes.



Ding: system is running open. Please standby.



Loading in Process



Progress-Bar: 0%, 5%, 15%,



Jaysay jaysay yea slider move hora tha sad apni tayz sanso ko or dhakdhak dhakdhak speed say dhorty hui uski heartbeat ko sun pa raha tha.



Progress-Bar: 40%, 45%, 50%,


Come on, come on. Please jaldi say ho jao. Tab he.



Click cheeen!!. derwaza khula, or aik miti se awaz gunjy room may, Hello and morning sad?



Sad: huh, ah, morning?



Voice: kia ker rahay thay? I heard you talking to someone?


Sad: nahi to appko shaid galat famy hui hi appy wo may bus apni halat per khud say bus bat ker raha tha.



Anum: hmmm, acha, yea batao kay yea sub kuch hua kaysay? You know kay kitna tense ker dia tha tumnay sub ko? Bolo kia hua tha, or sub such bolna werna you know me better. Anum sad kay bed kay pass rakhay couch per aah ker bayt gai. So?



Sad: dilmay, (agger inho nay MONA ko sun lia to?) God I am doomed for sure. Aik tension ke layer sad kay forehead per saf daykhy ja sakty thi.


MONA: baby siraf tum mujay sun saktay ho. Just talk to me with your core.



Sad: really? Wow MONA that is cool.



MONA: yes. Smiles.



Sad: process kitna ho chuka?



MONA: its almost complete. Tum bat continue karo nahi to she will be suspicious.



Sad: um, right.



Anum: tum bata rahay ho ya may tumsay apnay style may puchu? Huh?



Sad: ah actually. Mujay nahi pata kay us time per actually may kia hua tha. I I really don’t remember it. Bus mujay kuch log marna shuru ho gay thay jaysay he may department kay corridor may say chal ker staircase ke teraf aara tha.



Anum: hum, quite strange? kia aysa he hua tha? like really? Such bol rahay ho?

Paka?



Sad: g paka?



Anum: daykho sad yea tumay batana zaruri hi kay.


MONA: go for it tell her. Quick.


Sad: kay mujay Humerus Fracture Complecation with multiple vanes fiasco ho chuka hi. Yea he nah?



Anum: ttt tumay kaysay pata is term kay baray may or kissnay bataya? Kia mujsay pehlay koi aya tha ider?


MONA: smiles. Baby has a Mainframe system dear. Humhum.



Sad: shush.


MONA: oh sorry. My bad. Smiles.



Sad: ah, wo, nahi wo jab mera arm move nahi hua or aik swear pain surge hua to mujay kuch aysa he laga kay yea syntoms is major cracklet kay he ho saktay hi.



Anum: oh, yeah, right. So, yea ho to gaya hi sath he sath kuch or adverse injuries hui hi jo aik minor time period layn gi for the healing process. Fil hal you are on 2 weeks proper bedrest. Abi kay lia you have to stay home.



Sad: and what about my university? Mera semester waste ho sakta hi. Please don’t say this?



Anum: ufho, chachu nay inform ker dia hi university may to your department’s HOD.



Sad: oh, so bedrest then?



Anum: yeah for now.



MONA: foofoo, baby is jailed for 2 weeks.



Sad: shut up you.



MONA: I can’t hold it. Hahah.



Sad: you are so mean MONA.



MONA: ah, maybe. Smiles.



Anum: sad?



Sad: hmm?


Anum: tell me something? kia haya yaha aii thi?



Sad: um, dilmay, sad bachu ab to tu gaya paka, aik jhijhak kay sath sad nay bola, g aii to thi.



Anum: kuch kaha tha tumnay usko? Ya koi bat hui thi tum dono ke?



Sad: get lost. Gooooo. Please go from here.



Anum: bolo nah sad?



Sad: ah, wo may shaid kafi thoughts may tha with my broken arm to I shouted at her.


Anum: hmmm, so you shouted on my little sister? You are nothing but a little scoundrel saaad. God i hate youu.



Or tab he chatak, aik zor ka thapper anum ke teraf say sad kay left cheak per aik tayz sanata sa ker chuka tha.



You know, mujay nafret hi tumsay. How could you hurt my sis. Kia tumay zara sa b ahsas hi how much sensitive she is?



Kehtay he anum uthi or, shame on you sad. Tip tap tip ker kay nikly or pichay, derwaza thrush, mar gai.



Sad: hmmm, nothing new and nothing to feel.

MONA: baby she is crying?


Sad: I have cryed to MONA.



MONA: hum. Listen now.


Sad: hmm?



MONA: see this.





Layout Screen:​



Welcome to the System:



Ding: you have successfully signed in.



Ding: all functions are stable and running.


Ding: you have been rewarded 20 points.



Ding: you have been given a basic skill.



Ding: you have been given an Advance Skill.



System Name: Mainframe Operating Neo-Alpha,

New name: MONA



System Specification: Mainframe Drag g9.



System-Level: 1:



System Owner: Sad Khan.



Nickname: Little Baby.



Age: 19 years and 4 months.



Nationality: Pakistani



Citizen of: City Lahore:



Status: Student.



Marital Status: Single.



Personality:

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Appearance:7/200:
Aptitude23/200
Agility3/200
Fortitude6/200
Major-Skills:0/0
Rewarded-Skills:Advance Sex-Protection and basic Martial arts


Sad: whaat? sex protection?

MONA: yup. blushes. you will need it.

Sad: pp per kiu?


MONA: you will know it soon enough. smiles.
Moving forward.

Sad: aham.


Family members and affiliations:

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Mr. Nadeem Rehan Khan:Favorability 77/150Relationship: Father:
Anum Tarik Khan:Favorability 40/150Relationship: Cousin:
Haya Tarik Khan:Favorability 60/150Relationship: Cousin and ----
Ghulam Baksh:Favorability 75/150Relationship: Close accomplice


Sad: its amazing MONA.



MONA: hmm, obviously baby you are the chosen one.



Sad: hmmm, yea favorability kia hoti hi?



MONA: yea aik sentiment detector hi. It shows your enemies and affiliations. Jo b 50 ko cross ker chukay hi they feel for you and jaysay jasay tum proceed karo gay to yea slider frequently update hota rahay ga.



Sad: hmm, is may or b log ad hoty jai gay kia?



MONA: absolutely jaysay jaysay tum logo say millo gay the list will be edited



Sad: baba or Ghulam baksh ke to samaj aii yea haya ka graph anum say ziada kiu hi? Or yea ---- ka kia matlab hi?



MONA: it means that a feeling surge in haya is going on. Jab tak wo isko confirm nahi karay gi tab tak system detect nahi ker sakta.



Sad: huh? Kiss type ka feeling surge.





MONA: blushes, itny details nahi day sakti. It’s a girl’s personal stuff. Smiles.





Sad: whaat? Yea kia bat hui?



MONA: bus, also, tum ab logo ko check out be ker saktay ho.



Sad: kia matlab?



MONA: jab tak your eyes are not in working shape, tab tak jo b awaz tum suno gay you can say check and us particular individual ke aik special window khul jai gi. You can see his/her details.



Sad: oh? Great.



Does it work on non-living things too?



MONA: yeah, jin b cheezo ko tum touch karo gay till your visual feature is active.



Sad: awsam.



MONA: ab say you will get various missions to upgrade the system.



Sad: kaysay Missions?



MONA: kuch b ho sakta hi, koi b task ya chore that you have to achieve.



Sad: ooo, just like video game simulation?



MONA: frowns!!!.



Now listen to me you little baby, yea koi game nahi hi. You are the owner of a mainframe system. Iski respect b kerna sikho.



Sad: oops so sorry MONA.



MONA: hmmm.





Sad: naraz ho kia?





MONA: umm, nahi.





Sad: to MONA tum actual may kaha say aii ho?





MONA: Um,, i I don’t know that much.



Sad: hmmm, ok?



MONA: after getting to level 2 tumay aik blessing b milay gi.



Sad: kaysi blessing?



MONA: silence.



Sad: tell me nah?



Huh, tell you what? Kis say bat ker rahay ho sad?










To be continued:
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Bahut hi badhiya update diya ha bro

Sad ne gusse me haya ko bahut kuchh suna diya or haya ko bhi ab tak ye ahsas nahi ha ki usne ab tak kya kya kiya ha sas ke sath to wo aise hi to usse pyar se bat nahi karega are pehle apne kiye ki mafi to mangti tab kuch bat banti sad ki taraf se haya to sad ke pyar me pagal ho gayi ha

Or ye anum ko bas apni sis ka khayal ha are in donon ne jo sad ke sath kiya ha uska inhe jara bhi pachhtawa nahi ha ise bhi jara dose dena bro jisse ise bhi apni galti ka ahsas ho

System ab puri tarah se active ho chuka ha or level 2 par pahunchne par sad ko koi blessing bhi milegi mere anuman se to wo blessing shayad sad ki ankhe thik hona hi hogi jab sad ki ankhe thik hogi or wo dekhne lag jayega tab ayega maja story me and then journey begins to a losser and weak boy to became a like king

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Bhai ye words jo likhte ho ye sahi likha karo yrr.. For example tum likhte ho maynay.. Hota hai mene..
 
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Bahut hi badhiya update diya ha bro

Sad ne gusse me haya ko bahut kuchh suna diya or haya ko bhi ab tak ye ahsas nahi ha ki usne ab tak kya kya kiya ha sas ke sath to wo aise hi to usse pyar se bat nahi karega are pehle apne kiye ki mafi to mangti tab kuch bat banti sad ki taraf se haya to sad ke pyar me pagal ho gayi ha

Or ye anum ko bas apni sis ka khayal ha are in donon ne jo sad ke sath kiya ha uska inhe jara bhi pachhtawa nahi ha ise bhi jara dose dena bro jisse ise bhi apni galti ka ahsas ho

System ab puri tarah se active ho chuka ha or level 2 par pahunchne par sad ko koi blessing bhi milegi mere anuman se to wo blessing shayad sad ki ankhe thik hona hi hogi jab sad ki ankhe thik hogi or wo dekhne lag jayega tab ayega maja story me and then journey begins to a losser and weak boy to became a like king

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Means alot bro jis terha say app follow ker rahay ho story ko
 
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Bhai ye words jo likhte ho ye sahi likha karo yrr.. For example tum likhte ho maynay.. Hota hai mene..
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Dost pehlay to may koi writer nahi hu bus koshish ker raha hu or dusri bat koshish karu ga k improve karu isko b. Apka thanks.
 
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Introduction:
yea wearwolf bai jaysi perfect to nahi hogi per its going to be my attempt to match the expectations of the readers. so, hamari yea dunia kia hi. koi kehta hi kay its a solid tropical mass and kuch kehtay hin kay its an amalgamation of various of several known and unknown gases. is dunia kay bahir hamay sirf dikhti hi darkness. its eternal darkness. where time slows down and without darkness the existence of matter is near to impossible. jis terha such or jhut bohot comman binary hi is modern society may, isi terha the concept and binary reality of light and darkness is everlasting. hum roshni say to bhag saktay hin, per kia andehra hamara picha chorta hi? yea sawal bohot complecated hi. andehra kuch aysa hi jo na sirf dunia may hi balkay aik human being b andehray may jita or andehra uskay ander shuru say uskay sath sath rehta or chalta hi. insan hamaysha andehray say der jata hi kiu kay ham kuch daykh nahi patay. kia aj is modern society may her cheez may hum andhay pan ka shikar nahi hin? chahay wo love ho ya law, justice ho ya trust , her cheez ko andha kaha jata hi. however, hum andha usko consider kertay hin jo ankho say daykh nahi pata or without any consideration he/she is titled as a disable. yea title zindagi bher us insan kay sath rehta hi usko haunt kerta hi or log uski kamzori ko exploit kerkay enjoy kertay hin. per kabbi socha hi kay us insan ko kia feel hota hi jab uskay samnay hatho kay isharay kia jatay hin? jab usko bully kia jata hi? jab uski sense of direction ko disturb kerdia jata hi? or ham inhi cheezo ko dusro ko dikha kay entertain hoty hin. yea cheez aik social gossip ban jati hi, log famous ho jatay hin, or us kamzor insan ke sari life spoil ho jati hi, wo zindagi say he ukta jata hi. akhir kiu kertay hin hum yu. kia waja hi iskay pichay? kabbi khud say pucho agger apnay kabbi aysa kia hi to. seldom, the weakness of one becomes a curse for others. so, kahani kuch aysi he hony wali hi. andehra aik insan ke kamzori to hoga laykin wo lerka zindagi may aik dominating Emperor ka derja hasil kernay wala hi. is may shaid uskay losses nay usko aik blessing ban jai gi. wo her dafa giray ga or khud he utay ga. uski life a bed of roses to nahi per exciting or adventurous zarur hony wali hi.
to chalay shuru kertay hin is action or fantasy say full travelogue.
Lahore city, the city of gardens. yea pakistan punjab ka aik mega city hi. yaha ke population poor or middleclass citizens ke heavy ratio ko carry kerti hi. yaha ameer log bohet khas hin kiu kay yea sirf khud per or khudkay business per he focus kertay hin only. inhi may say aik well known business-man, (Nr. Khan), age 44, fit and determined, or selfmade admi hin. inho nay kuch he sal pehlay apni wife ko heart attack kay chaltay kho dia tha. magger lagta hi kay waqat nay inkay us zakham ko bher dia hi ya shaid inho nay apnay ander he kahi apnay saray emotions ko dafen ker dala hi. per beghum rehana ko khona aik shakhs kay lia bohot deadly tha. isi trawma kay chaltay is masoom say dil nay apni sub say important cheez, nerve weakness, caused visual impairment. yea lerka pehlay b kuch nahi tha or apni zindagi ko andehray may johnk ker apni image ko totally kho dia hi. ab yea nothing but a liability for mr. khan. is lerkay ka nam (Sad, khan hi). he is a blind feeble boy. jiski nah school may koi value thi or na he uski family, or uskay cousins koi respect kertay hin uski. only what they care of is usko tang kerna uska mazak urana or uski blindness ko misuse kerkay problematic situations may phasa dayna.
nah to sad ka bachpen worthwhile tha or nah he uski college life nay usay kissy kism ke khushi dee thi. yea sirf study and study kay lia jee raha tha or kabbi kabar apnay college mates or apnay nakcharay cousins ka stuff toy banta tha. uski nazer to khatam thi, baycharay nay apni awaz ka confidence b loos ker dia tha. per kia kissy ko be iski thori se b perva thi? the answer is not at all.
chaltay chaltay the cycle of time went on or aj its november 2022. its the first day of sad for his first class of university. apnay sheeshay kay samnay khara to hua per uski ankhay jhuki hui thi. akhir daykhta to kia daykhta andehray kay ilava. so its it then sad. aj mera university ka safer start hoga. kia may iskay lia ready hu ya nahi? mama please mujay strength dee jia ga.
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Update-6:


Killing Me Softly:



Ab tak Emperor ke kahani may:


MONA: you should get up now, sad khan.

Sad: yar call me sad only. Yea sad khan b bohot ajeeb lag raha hi.

MONA: ok, ding: name of the system owner updated to Sad.

Get up sad lets face the world.

Sad: yes, MONA chalo ab is darkness ko properly rule out kertay hi. We can do this. Smiles.


Lights, camera, and action-----------------



Now Next:



Sad’s Residence,

Morning, time 9:34AM.

Kitchen maysay aik awaz aari thi.

Waha per do goray, creamy , or khubsuret lambay nakhuno walay hath bohot tayzy say aik shelf per rakhay huay bowl may chaltay ja rahay thay.

In hatho ke maliken ko nah to apnay ird gird ke koi fiker thi or nah he wo koi b or cheez soch rahi thi.

Jo cheez zaruri thi wo tha yea kam pura kerna or jaldi say waha pohnchna jaha uska dil or dimag Janay kabsay laga hua tha.

Tayzy say apnay hatho ko move kerti yea katil Haseena apnay he khayalo may kahi goom se thi.

Kia yea sahi ban raha hoga?

Yar maynay pehlay kiu yea sub sika nahi.

Agger yea usko pasand nah aya to may kia karu gi?

Oh God please yea usko pasand ah jai.

Maynay aysa pehlay kabi b nahi kia kissy kay lia b. agger yea ganda bana hua to?

Mera to dil he toot jai ga if usnay isko enjoy nah kia to.

Uff, may b nah.

Thora jaldi kerna hoga. mujay he usko good morning wish kerni hi bus.


I know, zarur he usko pasand ai ga.

Afterall, ismay meri feelings b to include hi.

Kk kia meri feelings? Blush,

Akhir kia hi meri feelings?

Oh, haya what are you thinking, yea kia hota ja raha hi tumay? Smiles.

I am cooking something for someone. oh my God. kitna special lag raha hi yea kerna.


Yea kaysa feel ker rahi hu may us time say.


Wo kiu mujay bus ab apna sa lagta hi?

Umm, damid yea kia hota ja raha hi mujay yar. Smiles,

May such may paggel ho rahi hu.


Appi shaid sahi kehty hi.


Per kia yea bura hi ya acha?


That touch, s sss. His touch.


Akhir wo he kiu?


Kia hi jo mujay bar bar uski teraf khinchta rehta hi?


Aysa pehlay to kabbi nahi hua.


Yea sub us time say kiu shuru hua, may to kabbi b aysa nahi sochti thi, phir ab kiu?


Kk kia isko touch kerna uski galty thi ya kuch or?


Sochtay huay haya nay apnay kamptay hath ko upper ke teraf lana shuru kia.


Or aikdum say usy jaga per raka jo us time sad nay pakri thi.


Um, yes. I can feel your touch.



Uff kaysay hora hi yea sub.



Haya apni ankhay band ker kay us moment ko phir say yad ker rahi thi.



Uska wo touch wo squeeze. Ahm yes. Humf.

Haya baysakhta apnay 32.c. right boob ko feel kerti ja rahi thi. uski wo nazuk fingers slowly slowly uski soft surface per move or slide ho rahi thi.



Kaysay tumnay isko itny ahsani say paker lia tha or kaysay kia tha yea sub?

Huh,, tell me naaa. umm.


yes, ahh, I just feel you so much. Sss..



Oh I just want you in my life dear cousin.



Akhirr kiu? mujay kiu bus wo he chaia ab or kuch b nahi bus wo.



Uff, yes I feel this strange for him.

Only him, umm more.



He is the one. wo he hi that special person for me, really is he?



Pp per agger yea kissy ko b pata chal gaya to?



Aikdum say yea thought nay uska haseen daydream tor dia.



Nooooo, may kabi b aysa nahi hony do gi.

He is my little special secret.

Smiles, yes wo he mera secret hi.

Aysa secret jo may kissy say b kabi b share nah karu gi or nah he usko khudsay kabi door Janay dongi.



Yes, never, kabbi nahi. Blush, what you have done to me dear cousin.

Kash kay tum b waysa he feel karo jaysa may abi is waqat ker rahi hu.

Its so special, so sweet.

Mera dill, uhm kabi b nahi itni zor say dherka.

Jab tum meray itna kareeb thay.

Your breaths. Mujay abi b apnay face per wo feel hoti hi.

Oh, I love it.

You have changed something in me.

Yes you have.



Haya?



Please bus aysay he rahna meray sath. Smiles.



Haya?



Hmmm, smiles.



Hayaaa tum sun b rahi ho?



Huh, wha what, kk kia hua? Kiu itna zorsay cheek rahi ho api?



Anum: kitchen kay doorway may apni usy cute but deadly look kay sath haya ko ghusay say daykhy ja rahi thi. Is time koi b anum ko daykhta to der kay marai hil he nah sakta. Uski black nighty or khulay rayshmy balo may wo aik dilkush parry lag rahi thi.

Per uskay Masoom say rosy face per aik angry look or haya say kaii sarayyy sawal daykhay ja saktay thay.



Haya: bolo b? ab chup kiu ho?



Anum: hayrani say boltay huay, ye yea kia ker rahi ho tum?



Haya: kk kiu? Kia hua? Nazer nahi ara kia ker rahi hu? Or log kitchen may kia kertay hi?



Anum: hath apni nagin jaysi balkhati kamer per rak ker, hmm, logo ka bohot pata hi tumay? Apnay kaarnammay ko zara ghor say daykho gi? Yea kia ab kitchen lag b raha hi?



Haya: huh?



Jaysay he usnay kitchen kay shelves or floor per nazer dali to------






Sad’s Room, sad apnay bed say jaysay he uthnay laga to.



Aouuu, shit yar.

Ssss. It hurts. Aik tayz derd usko uskay left bazu may say chalta hua uskay shoulder tak hua. Ahh, mera yea hath move kiu nahi hora yar? Sad nay apna pura zor laga ker apnay left hand ko move kerwanay ke koshish ke per tab he.



MONA: Stop sad.





Sad: hmmm? uf MONA, yea kia hora hi ah MONA? Why its not moving? I feel like nothing.



MONA: sad, your left arm is having a Humerus Fracture.



Sad: yea kia hota hi?

Explain it please?



MONA: simple terms may is arm ko bohot buri terha torture kia gaya hi. Is may multiple vanes dislodge ho chuki hi and sorry but yea fil hal physically heal nahi kia ja sakta.


Sad: whaat? Kk kia matlab hi MONA? Mera bazu kia totally useless ho chuka hi? Per aysa kaysay ho gaya. Now what? Tell me.

See!!.

Maynay kaha tha na tumsay that may aik useless lerka hu.



MONA: sad listen. Don’t lose hope ok? Yea abi teek nahi ho sakta per we will find some solution to it. So please relax?


Sad: huh, yeah right.

Relax? Wow, yea kaysay keh sakti ho tum. After jo b kuch ho gaya hi meray sath?

Ha, tell me?



MONA: I was just.



Sad: MONA abi tum khud he daykh lo kay may thora sa positive hua tha but see darkness came again. Snif!!. Yea he hi meri reality. I I am nothing, snif but a big failure.



MONA: silence,



Sad: bus aysa he chalta rehna hi each time to me. Snif. I ahuh, i am a loser a big bad lu loser apni ankho ko sad apnay right hand say bari bari pohnch raha tha. uski sari excitement un ansuo may tip tip ker kay nikelty ja rahi thi.


i was blind now i am a proper disable.


wow, my luck.


huh!!.


MONA: sad please stop feeling bad about yourself.



Sad: or yea, kk



Click, cheeeen,



Sad?



Uth gay tum?



Ab kaysa feel ker rahay ho?

Derd za ziada to nahi hi nah?




Sad: aik ghusay may jalty hui awaz kay sath. Kiu? Kia problem hi appko? Kiu aii ho yaha?


Voice: aikdum say ghabrah ker, may to bus!!.

Ye yea supe.



Sad: huh right. Aik kam karay please, jo b lai ho iskay sath he please get out of here.



Voice: pp per sad. maynay kia kia hi? what happened?



Sad: kia apko sunai nahi dia? Just get lost pleaseeeee. Go from here.

Goooooo!!!.

Leave meee alone.


Haya ko sad ka reaction daykh ker mano jaysay aik electric shock lag gaya tha.


uskay samnay mano sub ruk sa gaya.

kitni khush thi wo or usko badlay may kia mila?


is time wo bus cheek cheek ker rona chati thi.


uski badi badi jheel se ankho may pani uter aya tha.
wo thrush aikdum say hilly or kay sath derwaza band ker kay tayzy say apnay kamray may aa gai.

ab tak uskay ahsas ka band tootnay wala he tha.

usnay khudko sambhala or bathroom ke teraf supe kay bowl ko basin tak ;a ker apnay unhi kamptay goray hatho say ahista ahista kerkay may slip ker dia.

hum, how, how could he. Sinf. Kitna huh kitna ghusa tha uski us awaz may. Kiuuu, snif, wo kiu nahi samja kay yea may thi. Snif, why he spoke like this to me snif siss kitna soch ker may yea lay ker gai thi uskay pass. Is may to, huh, is may to meri feelings b thi or phir sis phir b usnay nahi samja. Kiuuu!!. Why sad, snif, aysa kaysay ker saktay ho tum? Wo be meray sath ssss. Snif, sis,




Wahi kitchen may, Mr. Khan apni newspaper ko hath may thamay jaysay he ahista ahista chal ker enter huay.



Aray good morning anum bayta.



Anum: achanek say mud ker. Oh, sorry chachu maynay apko daykha nahi. Good morning. Smiles.



Mr. Khan: oh ho, yea to teek hi, but tum, subha subha or wo b kitchen may? Aj yea suraj kider say nikel aya hi bai?



Anum: blush, chachu ap b nah. Or yea meri merzi nahi thi kay subha subha yea kitchen kay kam karu, but its my duty. Smiles.



Mr. khan: oh?



Anum: yea sub kuch jo ap daykhray ho, yea sub kuch he bikhra hua tha abi thori dare pehlay tak.



Mr. khan: hmmm, kiu koi billy wagayra ghus gai thi ider kia?



Anum: gee bilkul. Aik bohot he paggel se billy ko nikala hi abi apkay anay say pehlay he.



Mr. khan: hahaha, acha to kia yea sub haya ka kaarnama hi kia?



Anum: halkay ghusay may. Or konh ho sakti hi chachu. Pata nahi madam ko kia soojy aj subha subha he.

jab may uth ker nichay aii to yea kitchen kam or war front ziada lag raha tha.



Mr. khan: hahahah, oh ho koi bat nahi tum bayta kissy servant ko bula layti khud kiu kerna shuru hogi yea sub. Choro may kissy ko bulata hu.



Anum: oho meray hansom chachu ab to sub kuch ho chuka hi servants ko kiu tang kerna.
Yea daykhay bus almost done.


Mr. khan: bayta jab b tumay daykhta hu to mujay aik bohot he proud se feeling ati hi. I cannot explain it in words. Tum kitni samajdar or badi hogi ho. Lagta hi ab tumara b kuch kerna paray ga.



Anum: chachuuu, please nah. Ap daykhay mujay phir say cheera rahay hi. Jai mujay bat he nahi kerni appsay.



Mr. khan: aray ismay naraz hony wali konsi bat hi. Kia kuch galat kaha maynay? Huh?


Anum: jo b hi, may ja rahi hu. Jai katty.



Mr. khan: anum bayta suno to sahi.



Per tab taka num staircase char chuki thi.



Upper atay huay, yea sub logo ko pata nahi kia ho jata hi. Her time shadi shadi. Mujay jab kerni he nahi hi to kiu cheeratay hi mujay her time he. Hmmm, may b bat nahi karu gi ab chachu say.

Kehtay huay wo click kay sath derwaza khol ker kamray may aii.

Hmmm? Haya? Kider ho tum?

Chaltay chaltay wo bathroom ke teraf ah chuki thi.

Yea lerki b nah.

Haya? Bai bolo b kia bathroom may ho?

Silence,



Haya? anum nay derwaza knock kia, Tuck tuck, ander ho?



Tab he anum ko, snif, siss, snif. Hhhh,



Jaysay he yea awaz suni to anum aikdumsay ghabra gai. Oy haya? Derwaza kholo. Kia hua hi?



Anum ke awaz or derwazay ke tuck tuck jab haya nay sunny to usnay jaldi say basin ka tap khol dia. Shurrer kay sath pani nay basin may aik shore create ker dia. Haya nay apna ansuo say bhara chera saf kia or.

Hmm, huhhh, bathroom may heee huu.

Anum: tum teek to hona?



Haya: hum, haaa muj mujay kia hona hi snif. Bus ati hu. Sss.



Anum: hay daykho please bahir niklo mujay batao tum ro rahi ho kia?



Haya: huhh, nn nahi to? Snif. Busss paniii ka shore hi. May bhala kiuuuu rouu gi. Snif. Ahista say kiss kay lia rouu konh hi jo sunay ga mera hal. Hums snif, koi b tt to nahi hi. Hmm, koii b nahi.








Sad’s room, sad ko kuch b nahi samaj ara tha kay aik dum say he itna sub kuch kaysay ho gaya uskay sath. Pehlay uski nazer nay uska sath chora, then jo uskay dil ke chabi thi, uski mama us say bohot door chali gai, or ab uski body ka aik important component useless ho chuka tha.



What, a life sad khan. What a fucking life I have.



Shit man really shit.


MONA: jo yea sub sunti ja rahi thi.

Hay?

Umm, are you done crying little baby?



Sad: MONA yea kia kehri ho?



MONA: Ding, name updated to little baby. Smiles.



Sad: why youuu. Yea kia ker rahi ho?



MONA: jo tum mujay show karo gay may to wohi observe ker rahi hu. You are constantly crying and acting like a little baby. So if you are then be happy with your new name. smiles.



Sad: may koi little baby waby nahi hu.

Samji tum?



MONA: umm, no?



Sad: MONAAA.



MONA: yes little baby?

Tell me?



Sad: please, tum b mujay aysay taunt to nah karo. Are you like others too?



MONA: no iamb not. Laykin jab tum meri sun he nahi rahay to kia fark perta hi?



Sad: hmm, ok fine sunao kia kehna hi tumay?



MONA: firstly, khud ko is state say bahir nnikallo.



Sad: apnay app ko jaysay taysay sambhal ker ab MONA ko sun raha tha. Please tell.



MONA: hmm, good boy. Ab daykho tumnay apni is weakness ko itna complicate ker lia that your behavior was very rude with your Cousin Haya Tarik Khan.



Sad: please MONA, let it be. She deserves more than this.



MONA: sad, its not right at all.

you are a system holder, if you are doing the same with them to how you will be different or unique? or meray ider hony ka be kia faida?

You should have different thoughts unlike others nah?



Sad: hmmm, kia may kafi rude tha?


MONA: yes, you were.



Sad: bummer!!. Yar pata nahi us time kia ho gaya tha mujay.



MONA: hmmm, don’t worry we can fixit later..



Sad: yeah, maybe.



MONA: to baby tell me kay kia tumnay mujay properly activate kernay kay baray may kuch socha hi ya nahi?



Sad: huh, what do you mean?



MONA: ah, sorry!!. Folding hands, folding hands, mujay tumay batana bhul gaya tha kay tumay mujay abi activate kerna baki hi. Smiles.



Sad: tt to tum agger activate nahi ho then mujsay bat kaysay ker pa rahi ho? Yea kaysay hora hi?



MONA: its an Artificial Voice Mode. May isko use kertay siraf tumsay communicate ker sakti hu or baki proper functioning kay lia you have to decide on activating me. But, yea sunlo. Jab tumnay mujay aik bar activate kerlia to till your last breath you will be attached to me. Also, jo b is system kay features hi, you will use them to serve your purposes and agger galti say be tumnay kuch mischief attempt ke or in powers ko misuse kia to disgrace or hurt humanity. Then?



Sad: then wha what?



MONA: the system will self-destruct within you.



Sad: ooo like really?


MONA: dam really.



Tum pehlay soch lo.



Sad: hmm, MONA please do it.



MONA: are you sure?


Sad: hmm, yes I don’t want to lose a friend like you. Kia tum apna promise bhul gai ha?



MONA: ah, um, of course not. Ok then, here goes.



Ding: system is running open. Please standby.



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Come on, come on. Please jaldi say ho jao. Tab he.



Click cheeen!!. derwaza khula, or aik miti se awaz gunjy room may, Hello and morning sad?



Sad: huh, ah, morning?



Voice: kia ker rahay thay? I heard you talking to someone?


Sad: nahi to appko shaid galat famy hui hi appy wo may bus apni halat per khud say bus bat ker raha tha.



Anum: hmmm, acha, yea batao kay yea sub kuch hua kaysay? You know kay kitna tense ker dia tha tumnay sub ko? Bolo kia hua tha, or sub such bolna werna you know me better. Anum sad kay bed kay pass rakhay couch per aah ker bayt gai. So?



Sad: dilmay, (agger inho nay MONA ko sun lia to?) God I am doomed for sure. Aik tension ke layer sad kay forehead per saf daykhy ja sakty thi.


MONA: baby siraf tum mujay sun saktay ho. Just talk to me with your core.



Sad: really? Wow MONA that is cool.



MONA: yes. Smiles.



Sad: process kitna ho chuka?



MONA: its almost complete. Tum bat continue karo nahi to she will be suspicious.



Sad: um, right.



Anum: tum bata rahay ho ya may tumsay apnay style may puchu? Huh?



Sad: ah actually. Mujay nahi pata kay us time per actually may kia hua tha. I I really don’t remember it. Bus mujay kuch log marna shuru ho gay thay jaysay he may department kay corridor may say chal ker staircase ke teraf aara tha.



Anum: hum, quite strange? kia aysa he hua tha? like really? Such bol rahay ho?

Paka?



Sad: g paka?



Anum: daykho sad yea tumay batana zaruri hi kay.


MONA: go for it tell her. Quick.


Sad: kay mujay Humerus Fracture Complecation with multiple vanes fiasco ho chuka hi. Yea he nah?



Anum: ttt tumay kaysay pata is term kay baray may or kissnay bataya? Kia mujsay pehlay koi aya tha ider?


MONA: smiles. Baby has a Mainframe system dear. Humhum.



Sad: shush.


MONA: oh sorry. My bad. Smiles.



Sad: ah, wo, nahi wo jab mera arm move nahi hua or aik swear pain surge hua to mujay kuch aysa he laga kay yea syntoms is major cracklet kay he ho saktay hi.



Anum: oh, yeah, right. So, yea ho to gaya hi sath he sath kuch or adverse injuries hui hi jo aik minor time period layn gi for the healing process. Fil hal you are on 2 weeks proper bedrest. Abi kay lia you have to stay home.



Sad: and what about my university? Mera semester waste ho sakta hi. Please don’t say this?



Anum: ufho, chachu nay inform ker dia hi university may to your department’s HOD.



Sad: oh, so bedrest then?



Anum: yeah for now.



MONA: foofoo, baby is jailed for 2 weeks.



Sad: shut up you.



MONA: I can’t hold it. Hahah.



Sad: you are so mean MONA.



MONA: ah, maybe. Smiles.



Anum: sad?



Sad: hmm?


Anum: tell me something? kia haya yaha aii thi?



Sad: um, dilmay, sad bachu ab to tu gaya paka, aik jhijhak kay sath sad nay bola, g aii to thi.



Anum: kuch kaha tha tumnay usko? Ya koi bat hui thi tum dono ke?



Sad: get lost. Gooooo. Please go from here.



Anum: bolo nah sad?



Sad: ah, wo may shaid kafi thoughts may tha with my broken arm to I shouted at her.


Anum: hmmm, so you shouted on my little sister? You are nothing but a little scoundrel saaad. God i hate youu.



Or tab he chatak, aik zor ka thapper anum ke teraf say sad kay left cheak per aik tayz sanata sa ker chuka tha.



You know, mujay nafret hi tumsay. How could you hurt my sis. Kia tumay zara sa b ahsas hi how much sensitive she is?



Kehtay he anum uthi or, shame on you sad. Tip tap tip ker kay nikly or pichay, derwaza thrush, mar gai.



Sad: hmmm, nothing new and nothing to feel.

MONA: baby she is crying?


Sad: I have cryed to MONA.



MONA: hum. Listen now.


Sad: hmm?



MONA: see this.





Layout Screen:​



Welcome to the System:



Ding: you have successfully signed in.



Ding: all functions are stable and running.


Ding: you have been rewarded 20 points.



Ding: you have been given a basic skill.



Ding: you have been given an Advance Skill.



System Name: Mainframe Operating Neo-Alpha,

New name: MONA



System Specification: Mainframe Drag g9.



System-Level: 1:



System Owner: Sad Khan.



Nickname: Little Baby.



Age: 19 years and 4 months.



Nationality: Pakistani



Citizen of: City Lahore:



Status: Student.



Marital Status: Single.



Personality:

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Appearance:7/200:
Aptitude23/200
Agility3/200
Fortitude6/200
Major-Skills:0/0
Rewarded-Skills:Advance Sex-Protection and basic Martial arts


Sad: whaat? sex protection?

MONA: yup. blushes. you will need it.

Sad: pp per kiu?


MONA: you will know it soon enough. smiles.
Moving forward.

Sad: aham.


Family members and affiliations:

​

Mr. Nadeem Rehan Khan:Favorability 77/150Relationship: Father:
Anum Tarik Khan:Favorability 40/150Relationship: Cousin:
Haya Tarik Khan:Favorability 60/150Relationship: Cousin and ----
Ghulam Baksh:Favorability 75/150Relationship: Close accomplice


Sad: its amazing MONA.



MONA: hmm, obviously baby you are the chosen one.



Sad: hmmm, yea favorability kia hoti hi?



MONA: yea aik sentiment detector hi. It shows your enemies and affiliations. Jo b 50 ko cross ker chukay hi they feel for you and jaysay jasay tum proceed karo gay to yea slider frequently update hota rahay ga.



Sad: hmm, is may or b log ad hoty jai gay kia?



MONA: absolutely jaysay jaysay tum logo say millo gay the list will be edited



Sad: baba or Ghulam baksh ke to samaj aii yea haya ka graph anum say ziada kiu hi? Or yea ---- ka kia matlab hi?



MONA: it means that a feeling surge in haya is going on. Jab tak wo isko confirm nahi karay gi tab tak system detect nahi ker sakta.



Sad: huh? Kiss type ka feeling surge.





MONA: blushes, itny details nahi day sakti. It’s a girl’s personal stuff. Smiles.





Sad: whaat? Yea kia bat hui?



MONA: bus, also, tum ab logo ko check out be ker saktay ho.



Sad: kia matlab?



MONA: jab tak your eyes are not in working shape, tab tak jo b awaz tum suno gay you can say check and us particular individual ke aik special window khul jai gi. You can see his/her details.



Sad: oh? Great.



Does it work on non-living things too?



MONA: yeah, jin b cheezo ko tum touch karo gay till your visual feature is active.



Sad: awsam.



MONA: ab say you will get various missions to upgrade the system.



Sad: kaysay Missions?



MONA: kuch b ho sakta hi, koi b task ya chore that you have to achieve.



Sad: ooo, just like video game simulation?



MONA: frowns!!!.



Now listen to me you little baby, yea koi game nahi hi. You are the owner of a mainframe system. Iski respect b kerna sikho.



Sad: oops so sorry MONA.



MONA: hmmm.





Sad: naraz ho kia?





MONA: umm, nahi.





Sad: to MONA tum actual may kaha say aii ho?





MONA: Um,, i I don’t know that much.



Sad: hmmm, ok?



MONA: after getting to level 2 tumay aik blessing b milay gi.



Sad: kaysi blessing?



MONA: silence.



Sad: tell me nah?



Huh, tell you what? Kis say bat ker rahay ho sad?










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Update-1:The first day:Morning 7:30 am. Sad hamara hero apnay room jo first floor per hi dressing table kay samnay khara ho ker apnay kamptay hatho say apni blue lining shirt ko button ker raha hi. Today my new life is about to begin. Xxxx university is a dream for a student. Mujay ab apni is miserable life ko improve kerna hoga and I have to prove myself a valiant asset for baba. Hmmmm, shirt to hogi ab kia reh gaya hi. Oh ha, my bag and my cane. Dressing table say sad aik table kay pass aya or usnay apna black bag or white cane uthai. Its time to step out sad. But, kia yea normal hoga? I have to try and make it a normal life for me.Sad apni age kay 19th year may aah chuka hi per still uskay ander wo teenager flare nahi pai jati. He thinks and acts just like a little boy. Her time kuch nah kuch galat he hota hi jab b he tries to make it right and useful. Per he is still in the struggle. Daykhna to yea hi kay akhir kab tak he can stay like this.Thuck, apnay room ko derwazay kay Pichay chore ker sad ahista ahista staircase ke terf apnay shoes ko floor per drag kerta hua bhar raha hi. Hmmm, kia may first day special bana pau ga? Obviously, university is an institution of moral values. I will be fine yar. Achanek say uska thought bubble aik tayz derd say toota, urg, ouch, fff, uska hath staircase ke gril say unintentionally kafi zor say he laga. First, pain of the day. Shaid its part of my dum fate. Jaysay taysay ker kay usnay yea lamba staircase step down kia or uskay kano may awaz pari.Hmmm, meeting aj he hogi. Tum mr. wakar say bat ker kay venue decide kerlo. Hmmm, us report ka kia bana? Oh ok that’s good. I will be in office in half an hour. Yeah sure, thanks.Sad, staircase kay pass he bilkul motionless khara hua hi. Kiu kay wo koi disturbance nahi chata apnay baba ke official call may.Kia ab sara din uder he kharay raho gay?Sad: ah g, wo, no, baba.Mr. khan: come here sit. Pehlay he tum late ho chukay ho. Take your breakfast.Sad: yes and I I am sorry for being late.Khan: kab tum is sorry ko apni word dictionary say nikal do gay? Its high time to be mature sad.Sad: yes, baba.Khan: come now.Sad nay kadam table ke terf bharaya he tha kay uska hath Ghulam baksh (khan kay kai salo say wafadar butler), nay pakra. Ai baba may baytha du apko.Khan: baksh chore do isko, kab tak yea sahara he lay kay chalta rahay ga. Let him come and find his place.Ghulam baksh ko feel to bura hua per wo mr. khan ke nature say bakhoobi wakif tha. Sad nay apnay baba ke yea bat sun ker Ghulam baksh kay hath ko chortay huay kaha. Koi bat nahi gb g may bayth jau ga. Apka thank you.Sad apnay shivering heart or crumbling thoughts kay sath mr. khan kay samnay chair per aa kay bayta.Khan: hmmm, is bag nay b breakfast kerna hi kia? Next chair per rakho isko or easy ho ker nashta karo. Tumay Yasir drop ker day ga.Sad: g.Khan: university koi Mazak nahi hi sad. Yea aik prestige hoti hi for an individual. Tumay pata hi kay mujay kitni mushkil hui hi tumay is university may admit kerwanay kay lia.Sad: yes baba.Khan: make sure that you will get the most out of it. Don’t waste this opportunity. Yea her dafa nahi milti. Meri sari image b dao per lagi hui hi. Waysay mujay tumsay koi khas Umeed to nahi hi, but little optimism is better then complete dejectedness.Sad: dil may (mujsay behter konh jan sakta hi is bat ko baba),.Khan: are you listening to me?Sad: yes I I am baba.Khan: I mean it sad jo karnamay tum school or college may kertay ai ho I don’’t want to have a bit of it here. Understand?Sad: apnay sukhay lips or galay ko gila kertay huay. Umm I understand.Khan: jaldi karo don’t b late on your first day. May ready hony ja raha hu. Jab may apnay room say niklu tum uni kay lia nikel chukay ho.Sad: g ok. Apni nervousness ko twiddling thumbs may cover kerta sad slow slow apna breakfast khatam ker raha. Mr. khan usko akayla chore kay apnay room ke terf chalay gay. Sad ko unka derwaza thuck band hota sunai dia. Pata nahi kab yea gap khatam hoga baba. I will try to reach out to you.Aik Suhani subha halki miti thandi hawa kay sath Lahore may start hui thi. Her terf birds or traffic ke constant buzzing or blear chal rahi thi. Apna bag or apni stick ko hath may lia sad apnay gher ke lobby say bahir kadam rakhta hi. Hmmm, so now its me and this society. Lets go sad. You can live normal. Ghulam baksh sad kay Pichay Pichay chaltay huay. Baba enjoy kee jia ga apna pehla din.Sad: hmmm, gb koshish karu ga.Ghulam baksh: hmmm, app ziada socha nah karo. Sub normal he hoga.Sad: andehra kuch bright thoughts lata he nahi hi gb. But I will try to.Ghulam baksh: tension na lay bus easy ho ker jai baki apni kismet per chore day.Sad: dil may (phir to ho gaya kam).
Lahore kay aik main road per sad apni silver Honda Civic - Great Sedan! May apnay driver kay sath apni university ke terf bharta ja raha tha,Yasir: baba?Sad: hmmm?Yasir: app kab tak free ho jai gay?Sad: umm I guess 3:30 pm tak classes hongi.Yasir: hmmm, teek hogaya may appko laynay aah jau ga. Agger app jaldi free hogy to Ghulam chachu ko call ker dee jia ga.Sad: g teek hi.Yasir: waysay app konsay subject may ab study kernay lagay ho?Sad: shaid Bio technology (BT) may admission kerwaya hi baba nay.Yasir: hmmm, wah g wah. To kia yea sub apko b pasand hi?Sad: hmmm, dil may (pasand ho ya nah ho ab perhna to hoga, baba told me,---- meri image b dao per lagi hui hi sad, Tumay pata hi kay mujay kitni mushkil hui hi tumay is university may admit kerwanay kay lia, Don’t waste this opportunity), don’t waste this opportunity sad, baba, don’t waste this opportunity sad, baba, baba app teek hin?Sad: hmmm, g im ok. App kia kehray thay. Sorry maynay suna nahi.Yasir: oh, chalay koi bat nahi. May kehra tha kay app kabbi yea xxxx mall ai hin? Hum abi iskay samnay say guzer ray hin.Sad: shaid bachpen may aya hua hu aik do dafa cousins kay sath. Fooo fooo. That hits me all the time jab b bachpen ka sochta hu.Yasir: hmmm, acha to kafi enjoy kertay hin app apnay cousins kay sath. Waysay ajkal sub busy hin kafi kay kissy nay chaker nahi lagaya.Sad: acha he hi, dil may. Hmm, bohot enjoy kia hi unkay sath. All that pain comes back.Yasir: bus hum aagay hin apki manzil tak. Yea appki xxx university to bohot bari hi baba.Sad: hmmmm,Yasir: bus iska main gate hum cross ker rahay hin abi.Sad: kia car ander ja sakti hi kia?Yasir: smile, g g ander agay hin hum.Sad: gari ahista ahista slow hoti hui. Come on sad time to b a mature man. Independency expect your tread.Yasir: baba hum pohnch to gay hin. Kia may apko class tak chornay ao?Sad: oh, nahi nahi I can manage app gher jai baba ka b time ho raha hi office ka may class tak pohnch he jau ga.Yasir: hmmm, daykhlay baba kehtay hin to may aa jata hu class tak.Sad: smile, trust me may manage ker sakta hu.Yasir: gg janta hu may. Haha chalay may chalta hu chuti time mulakat hogi ab. Yasir gari ko gear may dalta hua bola.Sad: um, sure dehan say jaia ga Yasir bahi.Yasir: ap b dehan say rehna.Or boom swish kerti hui gari sad say door or gate say bahir jati hui.Sad: fooo, so now bus may or yea open campus hi. Where do I have my first class. Should I ask around?I hope yaha per log mujay aik normal human consider karay gay. Will they? Or not? Hmmmm. Mmm my college has no good flashbacks on me though.Sad nay jaysay he kadam bharaya usko kai logo ke awazay ana start hui. Kuch hastay, kuch batay kertay, hmmm, come on sad time to move yar.Voice in mind, oy bhondu kider ja raha hi abay. Class may ha? Hahaha hahhaaha tujay konsa koi samaj ani hi. Oy bata na kal board copy kia tha ha. Huuuuhuuu oy ider dayk na. bolna hahahaha kia hua aray bol.Flashback:Aik lerka apnay weak say body structure kay sath xxxx college Lahore kay xxx block may kuch lerko kay bich may phasa hua tha. Wo lerko ka group nah to usko Janay dayra tha or na he uski baybasi per aas pas kay logo ko koi b ferk per raha tha.Lerka1: bol sir kay chamchay. Huh bohot smart banta hi tu.Lerka2: aray chamcha nahi gandu hi yea sir ka yar.HahahahaGanduu oh ha yea to socha he nahi.Lerka1: oy gandu aj say tera naya nam gandu, ok? Pasand aya tujay?Lerka2: bolna gandu zuban pay tala kiu lag gaya teri huh? Lerkay ke bazu pakertay huay.Lerka1: aj to teri class say pehlay class hogi janu, oh sorry, gandu g.Hahaha hahahah hahahahaha.Lerka1: dikha nah kitni heavy class layra hi sir teri. Chal pant nikal.Sub lerkay ajj to public show hoga bai log. Her koi us baycharay ka Mazak bnata ja raha hi.Tab he aik lerkay nay bher kay uski stick cheen lee. O ho ab class tak kaysay jai ga ganduu.HahahaPant b utaray ga yea phir to sir paka iska tokhu ban jai ga.Hahahah hahahahaha. Chal nah chamayli utar zara apni penty. Hahahahah. Jaldi kern a. hahaahahaha.Boy: please stop, mujay Janay day, pleeez pleeez stooooop.High heart rate or tayz sanso kay sath sad apni yado say bahir aya, huh huh fffff. Its its just a dark past now. Ab mujay yea nahi sochna at all.Kadam campus floor per drag kertay huay sad nay aik terf chalna shuru kia.Tab he achanek……………..
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Update-2:The jolt of a new shame:Sad apni pichly buri or negative yado ko jhatka ker apnay kadmo ko campus floor kay sath drag kertay huay aik direction may kuch kadam he chala tha kay tabhi. Um excuse me?Sad: awaz ke terf turn ho ker. Ah yes?Voice: where are you going bayta? Are you new here?Sad: ye yes sir I am admitted recently, my name is sad.Another voice: nice name son. Hmmm, so konsay department may admit huay hin app?Sad: mam its ah bio tech department.Girl voice: oh, interesting mr. sad. Your subject is just like your name. strong and deep ha?Sad: aik slight smile kay sath, thank you mam. Please, can you tell me where is the department?Male voice: ah sure sure, app wrong direction may ja rahay ho bayta come let us show you your department and your class.Sad: ah, thanks I can follow you guys. You can lead the way.Girl voice: why don’t you like to hold my hand?Hahaha,Male voice: don’t you treat him like others zanny.Zanny: huh, im just trying to be polite to a new student ali. Tum b nah. Humm. Just a big jealous.Can’t you see he needs help. We can have some good fame points on helping him nah.Ali: oh, to points kay lia kerna hi. Huh?Zanny: oh ho just example day rahi thi. Mujay points kiu chaia hon gay. Im a star already.Ali: yeah yeah, sweet dreams.Zanny: youuu, snake, don’t you dare mauk me up.Ali: hahaha, aray bad may bat kertay hin mr. sad is getting late nah yar. Daykho you are wasting his noble time.Hayna sad bayta?Sad: sir app dono kia yaha teach kertay hin? I can manage myself agger app engage hin to.Zanny: oh no no, hum bilkul engage nahi hin. By the way nice bag.Ali: hmmm, hum yaha kay teachers kay mentors’ hin my dear. Come follow our voice.Sad: stepping up kertay huay, that’s really great sir and mam.Zanny: hath say ali ko salute kertay huay.Ali: smiles, which class you have in your first hour?Sad: ah sir its basic bio tech lecture.Ali: ah, I see.Sad: following them, suddenly, skuash, thumg, urg.Zanny: hay, smiles, are you ok, ziada to nahi lagi? Sorry hamay laga you will judge it. So sorry yar.Smiles, giving high fives silently.Ali: sad you ok na? huh.Sad: ye yes, I am just fine. Please don’t say sorry. Mujay judge kerna chaia tha it was my fault. Thank you for the hand.Ali: hay, no worries bayta. Bus move carefully. Ok?Zanny: hath parker lo if you are facing problem walking like this.Smiles.Sad: uh, no im fine. It was just a minor push. Hmm, see sad all are not that bad boy. This world is with good souls too.Ali: steps are coming now. Step up ok?Zanny: dehan say ok?Sad: yes yes I will. (yea meri help kernay kay lia apna kam chore ker ai hin), im really greatful to them. Aj ke is busy society may shaid humanity abi b breathe ker rahi hi. I guess, may aysay he itni tension lay raha tha about people of university. They are well mannered and good people. Sad baychara apnay thoughts may he tha kay he didn’t knew that their voices are gone, after few steps, sir, mam? Are you their? I can’t hear you.Tab he, achanek bam thuck. The door behind him closed up.Hahahaha hahahahaahaha enjoy the class bonehead. Hahahahaahhaha kia innocent fool hi yea uff yar. Itna easy tha isko prank kerna. Uhhhh too much fun. Kia kamal ke acting kea li tumnay yar. Sad bayta? Hahahahaha.Ali: or jo tum kehri thi. Come let me hold your hand, um. Itna romantic znany. Uff made for each other.Zanny: come on yar, yuck usko daykha b hi, he is just like a weak worm, mera taste itna b buran ahi. Pleeez.Hahahaha, come lets go yeah hahahaha bye bye sad, do enjoy the class, hahahahaha hahahaha uuuuu hahhaahaah.voices slowly slowly sad say door jati hui.Baychara sad. Uskay saray intuition’s about good people of university were washed away. Aik he jaga per jam sa ho chuka tha wo. His mind was stuck. Even his voice was gone. He just wanted kay bus koi ho uskay pass jis say kuss kay wo liptay or cheek cheek ker roi.Itna baybus wo her dafa he ho jata hi per kabbi b usko wo relief nahi mil para kahi say b. now, what I am going to do, may hu kaha per abi. I even don’t know that. Kiu aya may yaha, why I trusted those people. Kia may such may aik bonehead fool he hu? Maybe they are right. I am good for nothing. All are right. Then what I am living for. Kiu may apni mama kay pass nahi chala jata. Akhir kiu itna baybus hu may?At that time, click slish, oy tum yaha kia ker ray ho bayta?Sad: please mujay chore day mujay please class may jana hi. Please, please, snif, Janay day mujay.Admi: kia hua bayta, kia tum teek ho? Kissy nay kuch kaha tumsay?Tum yaha class may nahi washroom may kharay ho abi. Jana kider hi tumay?Batao mujay?Sad: geee wo bio, bio tech department snif may sis.Admi: oh shaid kissy nay tumay dhokay say yaha pohncha dia hi. Chalo koi bat nahi ao may chore du apko class may.Sad: ah ap paka class may lay kay jao gay na? Promise?Admi: haha, ha bayta, may yaha kay ameer bigray bacho jaysa nahi hu. Hum to yaha noker admi hin. Dusro ka derd samaj saktay hin. Fiker nahi karo bus yea chera saf karo or rona band kro yea lo tissue or phir class may chaltay hin hmmm?Sad: gee geee thank you sir.Classroom, aik cute see young teacher board per points mark kerti hui, we will go like this. Sab note ker layn please. At that time,
May I come in? class kay derwazay may aik normal sa weak structured boy hath may bag or aik white cane lay kay khara tha.Teacher: you are late mister.Boy: yes mam I am sorry. I won’t b excusing next time.Teacher: better for you. Come in.Sad: ahista ahista apni cane ko tightly hold ker kay ander aya..Teacher: oh shit, are youuu.Sad: yes mam I am.Teacher: I I am really really sorry. Boys give him a seat.Please help him out.Boy1: miss yea to koi bat nah hui. Itna protocol toxic ho jata hi aysay logo kay lia. Her dafa phir yea haq say is terha ke demand kia karay ga.Others: hmm, right yar, sahi kehra hi yea, hmmm aysay nahi hona chaia, yeah right, itna konsa koi high figh hi yea lerka, why he is, he shouldn’t be given, not fair yar, its really waste of time, what he thinks of himself?Sad ka yea sub sun ker bus dil ker raha tha kay abi zameen khul jai or wo us may kahi chup jai. Again those words (don’t waste this opportunity) do you understand? Do you understand sad. Do you.Teacher: guys please silence. That’s really not nice. You are treating your classmate. Yea socho kay he is a part of this class. Kindly show some support for him. Jo aysa nahi sochta can leave my class. Because I am here to teach humans not wild proud creatures.Boy kia nam hi apka?Sad: mam its sad khan.Teacher: hmmm, welcome, sad, I am tanya khalid your basic bio teacher and instructer. Ap easy ho ker baytho or class attend karo ok?Sad: hmm, thank you mam. I will.Tanya: good, smile, so guys I was telling you the outline of our corse.Lerka: manners, or wo b is chirkut kay sath, my foot, isko to may sahi say millta hu bus bachu wait and watch. You haven’t seen zan Sikander yet. Huh.Afternoon, after classes, in his car,Yasir: baba kaysa raha aj apka pehla din?Sad: hmmm? Mera din? Wo kafi acha he tha shaid? Dil may, (I don’t know what it was. but I did survived it , I guess).To be continued………….
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