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sunnysss1 said:
Friends aap sab se meri ek gujarish hai..
E Jo kahani hai ek true event par based hai jisme Maine puri tarah se sach hi bayan karna chaha ab tak .. yakeen maano ab tak maine koi b aisa scene add nh kiya Jo hakeekat k khilaf ho...aur mai ek regular lekhak na hote hue b maine puri koshish ki hai ki is kahani ko ek acha sa roop de..e sab isliye likh raha hu ki aage ka Jo update hoga wo is kahani ka sabse aham part hoga...jisko bahut soch samaj kar edit karna hai muje q ki meena k jo karname mai likhane jaa raha hu wo sab ek part me khatam hone wala nh hai...so is kahani ka pehle part ka agla update bahut hi soch samaj kar edit karna hai muje aur iske liye muje thode waqt ki b jarurat hai.. shayad ek hafte ki ...taaki mai sach ko sahi tarah se apne Kalam ki bhasha me utaru..agar aap sab log chahte ho ki kahani ka rythem aur b shandar ho..to plz apni raay post kare...

Aur shayad aap ko pasand ho...mere pass aur do aisa kahani ya hai jo b bilkul sachi ghatana par adharit hai..jisme ek fir se interfaith hai jisme ek shadishuda aurat shaadi k baad apne armano ko puri karti hai...kismat naam maine rakha hai
Akhadu Neelam aur uske nakhre

aur dusri kahani ek aise ladki ki hai jo apne ayyashi k liye mardo ka line laga chuki hai...par mere pass is waqt pehli kahani ka ek update ready hai..jise mai ek do din me post kar sakta hu...wo b sirf aap logo k marzi ho to...yakeen maano is kahani me b aapko utna hi maza aayega jitna meena k kahani me hai...
Now decesion is yours..jab tak meena k karnamo ka agla update aayega kya aap
Akhadu Neelam aur uske nakhre ka pehla update padna chahte ho....

And I pmz you all meena ki kahani aadhe me kabhi nh rukegi...agle hafte iska next update aayega hi...

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dragonslair

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sunnysss1 said:
Friends aap sab se meri ek gujarish hai..
E Jo kahani hai ek true event par based hai jisme Maine puri tarah se sach hi bayan karna chaha ab tak .. yakeen maano ab tak maine koi b aisa scene add nh kiya Jo hakeekat k khilaf ho...aur mai ek regular lekhak na hote hue b maine puri koshish ki hai ki is kahani ko ek acha sa roop de..e sab isliye likh raha hu ki aage ka Jo update hoga wo is kahani ka sabse aham part hoga...jisko bahut soch samaj kar edit karna hai muje q ki meena k jo karname mai likhane jaa raha hu wo sab ek part me khatam hone wala nh hai...so is kahani ka pehle part ka agla update bahut hi soch samaj kar edit karna hai muje aur iske liye muje thode waqt ki b jarurat hai.. shayad ek hafte ki ...taaki mai sach ko sahi tarah se apne Kalam ki bhasha me utaru..agar aap sab log chahte ho ki kahani ka rythem aur b shandar ho..to plz apni raay post kare...

Aur shayad aap ko pasand ho...mere pass aur do aisa kahani ya hai jo b bilkul sachi ghatana par adharit hai..jisme ek fir se interfaith hai jisme ek shadishuda aurat shaadi k baad apne armano ko puri karti hai...kismat naam maine rakha hai
Akhadu Neelam aur uske nakhre

aur dusri kahani ek aise ladki ki hai jo apne ayyashi k liye mardo ka line laga chuki hai...par mere pass is waqt pehli kahani ka ek update ready hai..jise mai ek do din me post kar sakta hu...wo b sirf aap logo k marzi ho to...yakeen maano is kahani me b aapko utna hi maza aayega jitna meena k kahani me hai...
Now decesion is yours..jab tak meena k karnamo ka agla update aayega kya aap
Akhadu Neelam aur uske nakhre ka pehla update padna chahte ho....

And I pmz you all meena ki kahani aadhe me kabhi nh rukegi...agle hafte iska next update aayega hi...

Thank you very much for your valuable support
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