I know cuckold kya hain yeh story sameer say start kri thi toh usko hi main rakho nah bhench**d yeh kya us randi ki main bna rahe ho cuckold ka matlb yeh toh nhi ki sameer ko side line krdo ya toh uske naam par story hi start matt kro yeh meine notice kiya hain jitni v cuckold stories likhe te hain sbb focus change kr dite hain story ka like what the hell..
Yaar usko randi bnao uska balatkar krwao usko murderer bna do koi fark nhi but agar ek story tum start kr rahe ho bol kr ki yeh meri dairy hain sameer ki toh middle mein dairy shewta hi kidr se aa gyi…i know writer ki story hain writer kuj v likh sakta hain but as a reader mera kmm hain opinion dena which i did.
yeh story smaeer ki eyes se hi chalni bnti hain ya phir title change krdo story ka or sameer ki story se hi khtm krdo ek cuckold story mein jo cuck hota hain woh hi main hota hain focus woh hi nhi hain toh yeh story cuckold story nhi hain…
Baki writer ki marji uski story hain jo marji likh sakta hain or mein usko read kr k comment kru gah acha likha hain ya bura.
Thik hai bhai. Shayad bich me dayri kyo kisne kaise change ki wo aapne padha nahi hai thik se. Aur sameer hi main characters hai. Kabhi kabhi story ki demand ke hisab se kuch kuch badlav lana jaruri hota hai.
Aur ha story writer ke hisab se hi chalti hai aur chalani chahie unfortunately. Warna yaha par hajaro log padhne aate hai. Writer ek hi hota hai. Sab kuch sab ki sunne jaye to story ki maa bahan waise bhi ho jati hai.
Mere pas srory ki direction hai aur usi direction me story aage badhegi aur bich bich me wk writer ki taur par mai experiment karta rahunga. Experiment se hi alag alag sikh milti hai. Aur logo ke sujav milte hai aur aise hi ek writer ke taur par aage badha ja sakta hai.
Khair thik hai ye sujav aage koi kahani likhunga uske liye. Yaha abhi to story ka line up bahut strict hai aur isi direction me jayegi. Aur experiment karta rahunga.
Baki suggestions ke liye thanks. Dhyan me rakhunga.