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Wow you really took it quite literally?! Fir bhi update jitna bada toh review nhi hua lol :idk1: jk
Review sufficient tha itna varna as you don't like filler I also don't like fillers varna ho jata update jitna bada to kuch kar kra ke
Lol. Aisa kuch nhi tha Ravisha loved Aakansha...Karan ke dad ke character par sawal mat uthao😂
Democracy gives Right to question anyone, so I'm just excersizing my rights
Yeh baat Payal ke liye bhi bol chuke ho ab ek hi jaan kitne ke liye doge ab lol. Surbhi is beautiful isn't she:love:
Polygamy practice can be outlawed but mindset can't be changed so easily 😅
Nope no cannibalism here...did I used it before? I don't think so. But that's no so simple...she needs a normal human, I needed to plan the right characters at the right moment for that scene. She didn't act because that would have been fultile but oh she'll when she sees her target.:idk1:
Waiting...
Not that much but it was just to describe the palace. As I said before that Jalyak was the one of the oldest regions of the kingdom, on the other side it is located in above the poisons caves so that might have spoilt the structure over the years, because it was never meant to accommodate that type of species. Rest it doesn't have that much of significance.
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Thanks again... sometimes I go over on details...but I try to keep the plot moving in each chapter, so it doesn't turn into a filler at the end.
Details enriched update is the main highlight of this story, so I love that you give such minute details
What??? :shocked: itna sab kuch kaisa ho jayega. We'll see abhi kuch bolungi fir spoil kar dungi sab...but jitna tumne bola hai usse jayda hi hoga :Okay:
Keep the spoilers at your end, we'll wait for the right moment .
It is all connected in the end...chapter one mainly isliye hi tha ab uske significance saamne aa rhe hai season end ke time pe. 👀
Ha ab dhire dhire samjh aa rha h
My god how did you predict it:shocked: ju ko mere saare story spoil kar doge aise toh.
No way, I'll keep that to myself
Lmfao🤣 she'll get one for sure but she's not that weak.

Hmm...I didn't get exactly what are you trying to say here :idk1:
Everything about that region of the kingdom was kept secret till now in the royal clan.
I was saying that whatever's in that region is quite powerful so the jalayaks are afraid to go in that region and due to that power precautionary orders are given to not go into that region by mishaka.
Will try to improve in that aspect...😓
Kabhi kabhi story ke wajah se woh overshadow ho jata hai.
I'm committed towards story not only for these scenes so I will manage without sex scene but if there's one than that should be top class as rest of the story is, because in future when a new readers reads the story none should dare say that the story was good but sex scenes were not upto mark and for that readers didn't give honest reviews that's why story's not upto mark, so I'm giving reviews honestly...
Max hi akela kaafi nhi tha...😂 ab Nandani se jayada Payal popular ho gye👀
Beauty and good songs are appreciated by Everyone.
Ab fir se yeh wali tension rhege...jk. jitne mil rhe hai utne hi kaafi hai aise reviews hi bahut hai mere liye :love:
Ye to tumhari nekdili h jo mujhe or mere comments ko itni ijjat bakshi, dhanyabad 🙏
 
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Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 8000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

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