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Review sufficient tha itna varna as you don't like filler I also don't like fillers varna ho jata update jitna bada to kuch kar kra keWow you really took it quite literally?! Fir bhi update jitna bada toh review nhi hua loljk
Democracy gives Right to question anyone, so I'm just excersizing my rightsLol. Aisa kuch nhi tha Ravisha loved Aakansha...Karan ke dad ke character par sawal mat uthao![]()
Polygamy practice can be outlawed but mindset can't be changed so easilyYeh baat Payal ke liye bhi bol chuke ho ab ek hi jaan kitne ke liye doge ab lol. Surbhi is beautiful isn't she![]()
Waiting...Nope no cannibalism here...did I used it before? I don't think so. But that's no so simple...she needs a normal human, I needed to plan the right characters at the right moment for that scene. She didn't act because that would have been fultile but oh she'll when she sees her target.![]()
Not that much but it was just to describe the palace. As I said before that Jalyak was the one of the oldest regions of the kingdom, on the other side it is located in above the poisons caves so that might have spoilt the structure over the years, because it was never meant to accommodate that type of species. Rest it doesn't have that much of significance.
Details enriched update is the main highlight of this story, so I love that you give such minute detailsThanks again... sometimes I go over on details...but I try to keep the plot moving in each chapter, so it doesn't turn into a filler at the end.
Keep the spoilers at your end, we'll wait for the right moment .What???itna sab kuch kaisa ho jayega. We'll see abhi kuch bolungi fir spoil kar dungi sab...but jitna tumne bola hai usse jayda hi hoga
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Ha ab dhire dhire samjh aa rha hIt is all connected in the end...chapter one mainly isliye hi tha ab uske significance saamne aa rhe hai season end ke time pe.![]()
No way, I'll keep that to myselfMy god how did you predict itju ko mere saare story spoil kar doge aise toh.
Lmfaoshe'll get one for sure but she's not that weak.
I was saying that whatever's in that region is quite powerful so the jalayaks are afraid to go in that region and due to that power precautionary orders are given to not go into that region by mishaka.Hmm...I didn't get exactly what are you trying to say here
Everything about that region of the kingdom was kept secret till now in the royal clan.
I'm committed towards story not only for these scenes so I will manage without sex scene but if there's one than that should be top class as rest of the story is, because in future when a new readers reads the story none should dare say that the story was good but sex scenes were not upto mark and for that readers didn't give honest reviews that's why story's not upto mark, so I'm giving reviews honestly...Will try to improve in that aspect...
Kabhi kabhi story ke wajah se woh overshadow ho jata hai.
Beauty and good songs are appreciated by Everyone.Max hi akela kaafi nhi tha...ab Nandani se jayada Payal popular ho gye
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Ye to tumhari nekdili h jo mujhe or mere comments ko itni ijjat bakshi, dhanyabadAb fir se yeh wali tension rhege...jk. jitne mil rhe hai utne hi kaafi hai aise reviews hi bahut hai mere liye![]()
waitingI said next week![]()
I'll give day after finalizing it
Aaj kaise darshan de diye yahan mahino baad
I said next week![]()
I'll give day after finalizing it