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Ek nayi kahani likhne ja raha hoon, jo bilkul kalpanik hai aur iska real life se koi sambandh nahi hai. Is kahani mein real life ka koi logic ya niyam apply nahi hoga, kyunki yeh ek fantasy kahani hai.
Phir bhi, main isse incest prefix ke tahat rakh raha hoon, aap log samajh Gaye honge Kyun.

Genre: Fantasy / Incest


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Ek nayi kahani likhne ja raha hoon, jo bilkul kalpanik hai aur iska real life se koi sambandh nahi hai. Is kahani mein real life ka koi logic ya niyam apply nahi hoga, kyunki yeh ek fantasy kahani hai.
Phir bhi, main isse incest prefix ke tahat rakh raha hoon, aap log samajh Gaye honge Kyun.

Genre: Fantasy / Incest



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Eagerly waiting for update sir 😄 😄
 
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Update 1

'Waaaaa' 'Waaah'

Ek alishan kamre ke ek kone mein leta hua tha ek nanha sa jaan, apne charon haath-pair upar ki taraf karke ro raha tha, shayad bhook lagi thi usse isliye ro raha tha.

Par yeh kya, nanha jaan kamre mein sirf akela? Iska maa-baap kahan gaye? Koi kyun iss nanhe se jaan ko khilane nahi aa raha tha?

Nanha jaan rota raha bhook se, bechara muh se kuch bol bhi nahi pa raha tha, bas ro raha tha.

Dusre kamre mein ek aurat baithi thi jo uss nanhe se jaan ki roti hui cheekh saaf-saaf sun pa rahi thi, fir bhi, woh aurat uthkar dekhne nahi gayi, woh baithi rahi, chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha uss aurat ke.

Tabhi Ek chhoti si, shayad teen saal ki bacchi apne haathon mein khilona liye us aurat ke paas aayi, uski saree ko kheenchte hue -

“Mumma! Woh kaun hai? aul lo kyon kyon raha hai?”

Aurat ne apni bacchi ki taraf dekha par koi jawab nahi diya, woh chup rahi bacchi ke sawal pe. Par bacchi kahan shant rehne wali thi, woh fir se puchi.

“Mumma!! Woh lo kyon raha hai?”

Bacchi ne apni tooti-phooti shabdon mein pucha, par uski mumma ne jawab nahi diya.

“Mumma!?”

Apni mumma se koi jawab na paakar bacchi apni jid par aa gayi, usne aurat ki saree ko apne nanhe haathon se zor se kheenchte hue —

“Mummaaaa!!!! Bolo na woh lo kyu raha hai?”

Iss baar aurat ne bacchi ko thoda daant diya.

“RIA!!!!”

Ria apni mumma ki daant se darr gayi aur ro di, aansu toh nahi, bas rone ki awaaz hi nikli uske muh se.

Ria: “Waaaahh!!! Mumma aap bule ho... bohat bule ho!”

Aurat ne jaise hi dekha bacchi uski daant se ro di, usne turant hi bacchi ko apne goad mein utha liya.

“Sorry! Sorry! Galti ho gayi... Maafi kardo mumma ko.”

Ria: "Aap bure ho... bohat bure ho sniff.”

“Accha... Thik hai, papa aayenge to toffee layenge, chocolate wali, tum khaogi na?”

Bacchon ko aur kya chahiye hota hai, ek toffee woh bhi chocolate ki, bacchi ne apne chhote haathon se badi-badi aankhon ko pochha, pani toh nahi tha, par usne dekha tha rone ke baad log apni aankhon par haath se aansu pochhte hain, Ria ne bhi wahi kiya, aankh malte hue woh boli—

Ria (sir hilate hue): “Haan!”

“Thik hai to ab royogi toh nahi?”

Ria: *ehehe* “Nahi, mumma!, papa kab aayenge?”

“Didi ko lene gaye hain school se, thodi der mein aa jayenge papa, fir tumhari toffee bhi layenge.”

Ria: “Yeeeeee... Toffee... Yeeeeee!”

Ria khushi se phudak uthi, toh wahi uski mumma ne uski khushi dekh muskurayi par uski muskurahat mein khushi nahi, ek pheeka-pan tha.Ria apni mumma ke goad mein baithkar khilone ke saath khel rahi thi, aurat bhi apni bacchi ko dekh rahi thi, par dhyan uska kahi aur tha. Uski aankhon pe ek khalipan thi.

Dusre kamre se uss nanhe bacche ke rone ki awaaz abhi bhi aa rahi thi. Ria ko bhi sunai de rahi thi. Sunai toh woh aurat ko bhi aa rahi thi, par woh us rote hue bacche ko dekhne tak nahi ja rahi thi.

Ria: “Mumma! Batao na woh kaun hai? Aul woh lo kyun raha hai?”

“Woh hamara bhai hai, Ria!”

Ek pyari si Awaaz aye, awaaz ka peechha karte hue Ria aur uski mumma ne darwaze ki taraf dekha toh wahan ek chhoti si bacchi, lagbhag paanch saal ki, school dress mein, peeth pe chota sa bag tange hue khadi thi.

Ria: “Didi?”

: “Mishka!”

Mishka: “Ria! Woh hamara chhota bhai hai.”

Kehte hue woh apni chhoti behen ke paas aayi. Ria yeh sunte hi apni maa ko puchi.

Ria: “Mumma! Woh mela bhai hai?”

Aurat iss baar bhi chup rahi, bas ‘haa’ mein sir hila diya.

Ria: “Yeeeeee! Mela bhai... Mela bhai... Pal!”

Ria apne bhai ke bare mein sun kar khushi se phudak uthi apni maa ke goad mein, woh khilkhila uthi.

Ria: “Pal bhi lo kyun laha hai, Mumma?”

Aurat chup rahi. Mishka ne dekha apni maa ko, ki bhai ro raha hai fir bhi woh baithi hai, bhai ke paas nahi ja rahi thi. Mishka bhi bacchi thi, bas paanch saal ki, duniyadari usse samajh nahi aati thi, par woh Ria jaisi chhoti nahi thi. Itna toh usse samajh aa raha tha ki uska bhai ro raha hai dusre kamre mein aur uski maa bhai ke paas nahi ja rahi thi.

Ria: “Mumma! Bhai lo raha hai, mujhe le chalo ge bhai ke paas?”

Nanhi Ria ko bhi apne bhai ke paas jana tha. Usse itna samajh aa raha tha ki bhai ro raha hai, matlab bhai ke paas jana hai. Itni si chhoti bacchi ko bhi yeh samajh aa raha tha ki usse kya karna hai, par wahi uski maa jo apne hi bete ko rota hua sun kar bhi jam ke baithi rahi.

Ria ne abhi tak apne bhai ka chehra bhi nahi dekha tha, bas usse itna malum tha ki do din pehle uski mumma-papa hospital se aaye the aur saath mein ek chhota baccha tha, bas itna hi dekha tha usse. Par aaj apni didi se bhai ke bare mein sun kar usse abhi apne bhai ke paas jana tha, usse dekhna tha apne bhai ko.

Ria: “Mumma! Bhai ko dekhna hai!”

Par uski baat ka jawab nahi aaya. Aurat ne bas apni dono betiyon ko ek mayus nazar se dekhi.

Mishka: “Mumma! Bhai ro raha hai, main ja rahi hoon bhai ke paas.”

Kehkar Mishka ne apni peeth par tanga hua school bag neeche rakha aur jane ko hui, ki tabhi—

"Kahan ja rahi hai?”

Mishka ne dekha uska rasta rok te hue darwaze par uski dadi, Shanti Mehta, khadi thi.

Mishka: dadi!

Shanti: “Abhi kahan ja rahi thi?”

Mishka: “Bhai ro raha hai, uske paas ja rahi thi.”

Shanti ne apni bahu ko ek baar dekha, fir Mishka ko dekhi.

Shanti: “Koi zarurat nahi.”

Mishka: “Par dadi....?”

Shanti: “Maine kaha na, koi zarurat nahi!”

Mishka: “Ria ko bhi dekhna hai bhai ko.”

Shanti: “Koi zarurat nahi uss manhoos ko dekhne ki!”

Nanhi Mishka ko thoda gussa aaya ‘manhoos’ shabd apne bhai ke bare mein sun kar, woh bhai jo bas do din pehle paida hua tha. Wahi nanhi Ria ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha, woh bas ek baar apni maa ko, didi ko, dadi ko apni pyaari badi-badi aankhon se ek ek karke dekh rahi thi.

Mishka ne Shanti ko kha jane wali aankhein dikhate hue boli.

Mishka: “Main toh ja rahi hoon bhai ke paas, ro raha hai woh!”

Ria bhi apni maa ke goad mein phudak uthi.

Ria: “Didi, mee bhi... mee bhi”

Shanti (man mein): ‘Mujhe kuch karna hoga, nahi toh yeh dono uss manhoos ke paas chali jayengi.’

Shanti apne man mein kuch sochte hue.

Shanti (chilla kar): “ANITA! Aree ooo ANITA! Kaha mar gayi?”

“Ji! Ji! Maa ji?” karte hue lagbhag 30 saal ki ek aurat aayi, purani si saree pehne hue, apne haath ko saree ke pallu se pochhte hue. Yeh thi Anita, ‘Mehta’ parivaar ki naukrani.

Anita: Ji maa ji?

Shanti: “Kahan mar gayi thi?”

Anita: “Ji, woh Mishka bitiya ke liye khana garam kar rahi thi, abhi abhi school se aayi hai na.”

Shanti: “Thik hai, thik hai, ab ja, jaakar uss manhoos.....!”

Kehte kehte woh ruk gayi, kyunki Mishka abhi bhi usse kha jane wali nazron se dekh rahi thi.

Shanti (maan mein): ‘Iska kuch karna padega!’

Shanti (ajeeb si muskan ke saath): “Mera matlab tha usse... samajh gayi na?”

Anita: j-ji-!

Shanti: “Ja, dekh toh ro kyun raha hai.”

‘j-ji’ kehte hue Anita chali gayi.

Shanti (muskurate hue): “Dekha na, Mishka beti, Anita gayi hai, tum chinta mat karo uss manhoos... matlab tumhare bhai ke paas anita rahegi. Abhi tum school se aayi ho na, chalo haath muh dho lo, thik hai... Aao mere saath, aur bahu...!”

Usne apni bahu ko dekha, uske paas gayi aur uski goad se Ria ko utha liya.

Shanti: “Ria, aao dadi ke paas, dadi tumhe kahani sunayegi, tumhe kahani sunna pasand hai na?”

Ria: “Haan!”

Shanti (muskan ke saath): “Toh chalo, aaj tumhein ek saitan ki kahani sunaungi, darogi toh nahi?”

Ria (utsaah ke saath): “Naaiii”

Shanti: “Chalo fir, Mishka beti, tum bhi chalo.”

Kehkar Shanti Ria ko goad mein uthaye chal di, peeche peeche Mishka bhi. Shanti ne dono bacchiyon ka dhyan bhai se apni taraf kar liya.Mishka bhi maan gayi, kyunki woh do din se dekh rahi thi Anita uske bhai ke paas jati thi to uska bhai nahi rota tha.

Par sawal uske man mein bhi aaya ki bhai ke paas maa kyun nahi jati thi? Sirf maa hi nahi, papa bhi, dadi bhi, chacha-chachi bhi—koi bhi uske bhai ke paas nahi jata tha, usko bhi rok diya jata tha. Chhoti si thi woh, kuch pata nahi tha usse, bas itna mehsoos ho raha tha ki kuch toh galat ho raha hai uske new born bhai ke saath.

Shanti Ria ko leke chali gayi, Mishka bhi peeche peeche ja rahi thi. Jaate hue woh ruki darwaze ke paas aur apni maa ko dekha.Jab maa se uski aankhein mili toh uss aurat ne apna sirr jhuka liya, kyunki Mishka ki nazar kuch baya kar rahi thi.Aurat ne apni nazar jhuka li, usse aisa lag raha tha maano uski beti uske muh par thook rahi ho.

Fir Mishka bhi chali gayi.Dusre kamre se rone ki awaaz aana bhi band ho gaya tha, shayad Anita ne apna kaam bakhubi nibha diya tha. Ab yeh alishan kamra pura shant pad chuka tha. Thodi der pehle jo rone ki awaaz uske kaano mein goonj rahi thi, woh ab nahi thi. Kamra itna shant tha ki woh apni dhadkan ko sun pa rahi thi.

Woh aurat uthi aur khidki ke paas jaakar khadi ho gayi, chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha uske. Bas ek maan se door neela aasman ko dekh rahi thi. Baahar se dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise woh aurat is khidki ke peeche kaid hai. Khidki se aati hui hawa ne aurat ke baalon ko lehra diya.
Dekhte hi dekhte neela aasman ab neela nahi raha, aasman ko ab ghane kaale baadalon ne gher liya, hawa ka rukh badla aur—

Tap! Tap! TAP-TAP-TAP!!

Baarish shuru ho gayi. Khidki se baarish ki boondein uske chehre par aakar giri—ek bund, do bund, teen bund. Woh aasman ke uss kaale baadal ko dekh rahi thi. Baadal itne kaale the ki din ka ujaala bhi andhakar mein badal diya. Uski gaal geeli ho gayi, baarish ki wajah se ya fir kuch aur? Sirf woh hi janti thi.

CRACK! HISS!

Kaale baadal ko cheerte hue bijli giri, zor se. Awaaz itni tez thi ki ghar ka maidaan hil gaya. Woh aurat abhi bhi aasman ko dekh rahi thi, tabhi—

“Ughhh!”

Ek dard bhari guhaar uske muh se nikli, ek dard sa utha uske seene mein, aisa dard jo seene ko cheer dale. Usne apna pallu seene se hataya, fir usne jo dekha usse seene ka dard aur bhi badh gaya.

CRACK!

Ek aur bijli giri. Usne dekha uski blouse seene ke dono taraf se geeli ho chuki thi, aur hawa mein ek khushboo fail gayi thi. Usne apna pallu kas ke daboch liya aur ladkhadate kadmon mein bathroom mein bhag gai.

Aur baahar aasman mein jo kaale baadal the, ab woh laal ho chuke the. Pura aasman laal ho chuka tha, aisa lag raha tha ki koi ro raha ho, aankhon se aansu nahi, khoon baha raha ho.


Udhar Jhoola Ke Kamre MeinJab Anita ne dekha woh nanha sa baccha ro raha tha, iss tarah dekh uski baahen sirkud uthi. “Aakhir kaise yeh ghar wale itne chhote se bacche ko nazarandaaz kar rahe hain?” uske man mein yeh sawal aaya.

“Waaaaa! Waaaa!”

Anita: “Rote nahi babu... Yeh dekho jhunjhuna.”

Anita ne jhunjhuna, jiske andar se jhunjhun awaaz aati thi, woh khilona hilate hue.

"Waaa! Waaa!”

Par bechara, usse toh bhook lagi thi. Anita bhi samajh gayi thi ki isse bhook lagi hai. Hansi aane wali baat thi—ghar ki naukrani ko bhi yeh ghatna lag chuki thi ki baccha bhooka hai, par wahi uski apni maa ne uski rulaai ko nazarandaaz kar diya, ek baar ke liye aayi bhi nahi.Anita ne usse apni goad mein utha liya, woh pyar se usse sehla rahi thi. Bacche ko bhook lagi thi, usne apne chhote-chhote haathon ko Anita ke seene par rakha, usse tatol raha tha dudh ki talaash mein.

Yeh dekh Anita ki aankhein nam ho uthi.

Anita: “Mere seene mein dudh nahi hai, babu! K-kaash hota... Par tum chinta mat karo, tumhe main bhooka nahi rahne doongi.”

Anita ne usse goad mein uthaya aur seene se laga liya, aur powder dudh pani mein milakar bacchon wali bottle se usse khilane lagi.

Anita: “Kaisa durbhagya hai tumhara, babu, maa hote hue bhi tumhe powder dudh peena pad raha hai.”
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Udhar Dusre Kamre Mein. Shanti Ria aur Mishka ko saitan ki kahani suna rahi thi. Kamre mein ek purana sa divan tha, jisme dono bacchiyan baithi thi. Baahar baarish ki awaaz ab bhi goonj rahi thi, aur har bijli ke saath kamra ek pal ke liye ujal jata tha.

Ria (darte hue): “Dadi! Kya sach mein saitan aise hote hain?”

Shanti: “Haan! Aur unse jitna ho sake utna door rehna chahiye.”

Mishka: “Par dadi, aapki kahani mein saitan ka kya dosh tha?”

Shanti “Yahi ki woh saitan hai.”

Mishka: “Par...”

Shanti: “Ab par war chhodo... Jao ab khana khao aur maine jaisa kaha usse yaad rakhna, thik hai.”

Ria: “Haan, dadi, saitan bohat burl hote hain.”

Fir dono behene khana khane baith gayi, par Shanti apne maan mein kuch na kuch khichdi paka rahi thi. “Kuch karna padega uska,” usne maan mein barbaraaya.

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys, yah tha pahla update, haan abhi bhi kuchh characters ka naam meine nahi bataya jaise mumma papa ka, aur bhi characters hai jo jaise jaise story aage badhegi waise waise ek ek karke Sab samne aaenge.

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Bro i love this concept
Manhoos isse pehle bhi yahan bahut si kahaniya is topic per likhi gayi ha lekin complete ek do ko chhodkar kuchh hi huyi ha shayd bahut si is topic per badhiya kahaniyan thi lekin na jane writer ne wo kyun tok di

Lekin ab tumne bhi shuru ki ha to please ho sake to ise complete jarur karna kyonki mujhe ye wala concept bahut pasand ha ye mera favourite topic ha is forum ka

Or update ke bare me
Update is good shayd maa ko dukh ha uske bete ke liye lekin wo dikha nahi rahi ha
Ria ki shayd uski dadi bhadka degi and mishika shayd uske bhai ko pyar de paye lekin kab tak wo bachhi ha abhi dekhte han kab tak apne bhai ko bacha pati ha

And dadi lagta ha wo uske pote ko raste se hatane ki planing kar rahi ha

Ab ye dekhna ha ki ye bachha manhoos kaise bana kon kar gaya iski bhavishyawani

all the best wishing update fast for this story
 
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