Today I read your 3 updates and I really enjoyed it and I felt that the story is going good but still missing the chemistry between Naina and Suraj. Naina is the heroine of this story and I think you have to give more importance to her charactor than others. I know Shalini is the one of most important charactor and you really gave her a good space but I think when Suraj will realise his love feelings for Naina and he will propose her then this story will go in a great way with Naina/Suraj Romance. Hope you understand brother
Thanks Buddy