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Nice update bhaiupdate 125
asurguru ........ha hai ek aisi kanya nagraj vasuki ki padpotri rajukmari komalangi ( komal ) jo divya sondarya se paripurn
chandal kinitu us tak pahuchana bhi aasan nahi hoga
narkasur ......mitra chandal usme tumhari shayta takshak nag krenge jo hamare mitra bhi hai
chandal .....tab to ye sambhav ho sakta hai
narkasur kantkasur ko partvilok kisi aisi kanya ki talash me nikal gaya
wahi narkasur our chandal aaghe ki yojana banane lagte hai .............
Ab aaghe .......
parijat apne lok lout chuki thi kintu ushe waha bhi surya ke sath bitaye hue pal yaad aate jiski vajha se deree deree parijat ka man parilok se ukhadhne laga
rani pari se baat chupi nahi thi ki parijat fir se pahle ke jaise udhaash rahne lagi hai
jab tak kiran sath hoti parinat kuch khush najar aati per fir ekant me pahle jaise halat ho jati
rani pari ......kya baat hai putri main dekh rahi hun jab se aap jinlok se louti hai
fir se pahle ki tarha udhash rahti hai
parijat ......aisa kuch nahi hai rani maa hamara yaha man nahi lag raha hai
rani pari ......kya sach me yahi baat hai putri parijat
parijat.....?????
rani pari ......aapke mon ko ham bhali bhati samaj rahe hai putri aap kuch samay baad unse milne ja sakti ho
parijat .......hame kiss se milna hai hamne kab kaha rani maa
rani pari ......ye mat bhulo putri rani hone se purva ham aapki maa hai hame pta hai aap surya se prem karti hai our unse judai aap bardast nahi kar pa rahi hai is liya he aapka yaha man nahi lag raha hai
parijat .......pta nahi kaise rani maa per ye sach hai ham unko apna sabkuch man chuke hai hame unse prem hai
rani pari ......aap nishchint raho putri samya aane pe ham savyam aapka vivaah surya se krenge ye ham aapko vachan dete hai
rani pari ki baat sun parijat bhut khush hoti hai
wahi jinlok me .......
kiran ke parilok chale jane ke baad jyadatar samay surya sapna ke sath he laga rahta is bich surya ne maya bua kamini chachi our sapna ki bhut baar acche se bajai teeno ka sarir nikhar diya tha
Pichle kuch samay se manisha our monika bhi surya se kaffi khul gai thi jaise ek dusre ko kiss karname ek dusre ke part ke sath masti karna
manisha......didi kab tak ham ek dusre ko aise he sant karte rahenge surya se ham pyaar karti hai our baat ab to mom bhi janti hai
monika .......shi kaha tumne manisha aaj raat surya ke sath aaghe bhadhna he hoga
manisha .....kintu kaise di
monika .........ham yaha jinlok me hai yaha maine rajved ki putri se dosti kar li hai
manisha .....is baat ka surya se kya lena dena hai
monika ........tumhe ye to pta hai aajkal surya yaha jinlok ki sarab (madira ) ka sevan kar mom ki chudaai karta hai our ab to kamini mami ki bhi surya night me chudaai karta hai
manisha .....to kya hua di
monika ......tu dufer ki dufer he raho
aaj raat surya hamare sath soye ushe manane ki jimedaari tumhari hai baki kaise suru karna hai wo sab main dekh lungi
manisha ......thik hai di surya ko main mna lungi
aap apna karya kijiye aaj kuch bhi ho jaye mujhe surya ko apne andar feel karja hai baki jo hoga dekha jayega
monika our manisha apne apne karya me lag jati hai
vahi jinisha in dono ke plan ke baare me sapna ko bitati hai
sapna ......thik hai unhe jo karja karne dijiye ek na ek din to ye hona he hai
fir aaj kyu nahi our waise bhi wo inse kaffi badi hai vivaah to abhi ho nahi sakta hai
jinisha .....kintu kya ye shi rahega
didi sadi se pahle
sapna ......partvilok me to ye sab sadi se pahle he ho jata hai kher chinta na kro surya inse baad me vivaah kar lega
tab tak inko bhi apni life enjoy karne do
jinisha .....thik hai di fir aap he unki help kar dijiye
sapna ......per main kaise jinisha
jinisha .....are didi sartaj ko aap aj unke sath he sone ko kah dijiye baki ka kam wo our unki special madira kar legi hehehe
Sapna ....samaj gai jinu ki bachi
Asur lok ........
Asurguru our chandal naglok ke liya asur lok se nikal chuke the
Chandal ke teleportesan ki madad se asurguru our chandal sigra he naglok pahuch gaye
dekhne me naglok kaffi khubasurat our harabhra tha bade bade visahkay paid charo taraf hariyali he hariyali thi
chandal ........ Naglok to bhut he khubasurat hai asurguru
asurguru .......ha kintu jis sthan pe ham hai ye sthan vasuki vansh ka hai jo ki santi priya nag hote hai
hame jin takshak nago se milna hai wo hamare jaise he hai
asurgur waha se ek disha ki our bhad gaye kuch 1 hr ke baad chandal our asurguru takshak nago ko elake me aa pahuche
abhi dono kuch he aaghe bhade the ki dono ko chato taraf se takshak nago ne gher liya
chandal nago pe parhar karne he wala tha ki tabhi asurguru ne ushe rok diya
asurguru ......hame tumhare maharaj nagraj takshak se milna hai
nag ......tum log kon ho tum nag to nahi ho nahi manav ho fir yaha kyu aaye ho
asurguru .........nagraj takshak ko sandesh do ki asurlok se asurguru aaye hai
nag .......bina koi chalaki ke hamare sath chalo agar tum dono ne bhagne ka ya fir anya koi chalaki ki to hame majbuuran tumhe bandi bana nagraj ke samne le jana hoga
bina kisi virodh ke chandal our asurguru nago ke sath takshak nagvansh ke samudaay me pahuche jaha
ye takshak nag vansh ke nag rahte hai
asurguru ko dekhte he takshak nagraj ne unhe phechana liya
t.nagraj .......kya ye satya hai asur lok ke asurguru naglok me
asurguru .....ye satya hai t.nagraj ye ham he hai asurguru
t.nagraj asurguru our chandal ko apne bhavan me le gaya
T.nagraj. .....ab bataiye asurguru itne samay baad yaha naglok me aaye ho to jarur koi vishesh karya sidh karne aaye honge
Asurguru ......tumhari mitra asurraj narkasur ko tumhari shayta chaiye t.nagraj
Itna bol asurguru ek patra t.nagraj ko de deta hai
T.nagraj patra padh kar
T.nagraj .......ham apne mitra ki shayta to krenge kintu isme karya me kuch waqt lag sakta hai
Asurguru ......hame aapse yahi umeed thi t.nagraj
T.nagraj .......badle me hame wo vasuki vansh ki nagamani chaiye
Asurguru karya hone ke baad tum nagamani rakh sakte ho hame koi aapati nahi hai t.nagraj
T.nagraj .......aap sab vishram kre ham apne guptcharo is karya me laga dete hai jaise he hame moka mila ham ushe aapko sonp denge
asurguru ji .....dhanyavad t.nagraj
chandal .....kya ham ek baar us rajkumari komalangi ko dekh sakte hai
t.nagraj ........ha kintu abhi nahi har subha wo maa durga ki aradhana karne mandir jati hai wahi ushe dekh sakte ho
vusuki nagvansh mahal .......
1 ......nagraj mahaveer (veer ) vasuki
2 .......nag maharani purvi
3 .......nag rajkumari komalangi
nagraj veer .........maharani purvi aane wale samay me hame rajkumaari ko naglok ka varisht ghoshit karne wale hai kintu .....
nagrani purvi .......kintu kya maharaj
nagraj veer ......hamari parja hamari putri komalangi ko singhasan pe bethana swikar karegi bhi ya nahi yahi hamari chinta ka vishya hai
nagrani purvi .......kintu hamari kou our santan bhi to nahi hai jishe ham nag log ka utradikari ghoshit kar sake
nagraj veer ......hame chinta hai ho rahi hai hamari putri ki kyuki nagraj takshak nagamani ke piche hai our rajkumaari abhi is yogya nahi hai ki wah nagraj takshak ka samna kar sake
nagrani purvi ......hamare purvajo ke bare me jo kaha vo satya hai to rajkumaari ko hamare us prachin mandir me rah kar puja kar mahadev se vardaan prapt kar rajkumaari is yogya ho sakti hai ki wah naglok our nagraj dono ko sambhal sake
nagraj veer ......kintu waha hamari putri akele kaise rahegi itne lambe samay jabki waha se takshak van bhi bhut pass hai
nagrani purvi .....ham aapki chinta ko samaj rahe hai maharaj kintu yahi ek marg hai jis se nagmani ko bachaaya ja sakta hai nagraj takshak se our rajkumaari ki puja sampan hui to kisi baat ki chinta nahi rahegi
nagraj veer .........ham rajkumaari ko bhejna to nahi chahte the kintu hamare pass anya koi marg bhi to nahi hai
nagrani purvi .....ham rajkumaari se baat karte hai is vishya pe maharaj
nagraj veer ......hame abhi baat karni hogi rajkumari se our unse nagamani mahadev ke sibling ko arpit karvani hogi jo ki puja purn hone ke baad bhut adik sakti sali ho jayegi
nagraj veer rajkumaari komalangi ko is vishya me batate hai
rajkumari komalangi bhi man jati hai
nagraj veer ......putri nagmani ka aahvaan kar ushe mahadev ko arpit kar do
rajkumari nagmani ka aahvaan karti hai jo ki kuch he palo me rajkumaari komalangi ke hatho me aa jati hai
apne pita nagraj veer ke aagya anusar rajkumari nagmani ko mahadev ko arpit kar deti hai
nagraj veer putri kal tumhe akele mahadev ke prachin divya ling ki puja kar unhe prashan karna hoga tabhi tum fir se nagmani prapt kar paogi
rajkumari .....jo aagya pita shree ham aapki icchao ka man rakhte hue mahadev ko awashya prashan krenge pita shree
veer .purvi .....hame aapse yahi apeksha thi putri komalangi
takshak van ( naglok )
Chandal raat ke aandere me takshak mahal se nikal pass me he khokhar jangal takshak van me ja pahucha
mohini .....malik chandal ham yaha kyu aaye hai
chandal .....mon raho jab tak main na kahu
chandal wahi ek sthan dekh wo raksh kitab nikalta hai
chandal kitab khol ushe padhne lagta hai
deree deree us kitab se neeli roshni nikalne lagti hai
our ek jagha pe ekati hone lagti hai
2 hr tak chale is karya me mohini ne ek bhi sabad nahi kaha
Kuch der baad neeli roshni ka wo hola chandal ke isare pe pass me khadi mohini ki aatma se ja takrata hai jis se mohini ki chikhe nikalne lagti hai jinhe keval chandal he sun sakta tha
kaffi waqt tak mohini tadapti rahi uske baad deree deree mohini sant ho gai
chandal ......ab tum pahle se saktisali ho mohini our ab tum kisi bhi pavitra aatma ko apne sammohan me sammohit kar kuch bhi karwa sakti ho
mohini .....mujhe itna ajib kyu lag raha malik chandal
chandal .......kyuki abhi abhi jo urja tumse takrai hai wo tumhari aatma se jud chuki hai
kuch der our ishi book ko padhne ke baad chandal jor jor se mantro ka uccharan karne lagta hai
chandal ke seene se rek red our black urja nikal hawa me aakar lene lagti hai
dekhte he dekhte us urja se ek khanjar ka nirman hota hai
jo dikhne me bilkul devil khanjar jaisa tha
chandal .......hahaha surya tumhari mout ka astra tyaar hai ishe shetaani khabar se tumhara aant hoga
mohini waha se gayab ho jati hai our chandal fir se nagraj takshak ke mahal lout aata hai ...........
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Excellent updateupdate 125
asurguru ........ha hai ek aisi kanya nagraj vasuki ki padpotri rajukmari komalangi ( komal ) jo divya sondarya se paripurn
chandal kinitu us tak pahuchana bhi aasan nahi hoga
narkasur ......mitra chandal usme tumhari shayta takshak nag krenge jo hamare mitra bhi hai
chandal .....tab to ye sambhav ho sakta hai
narkasur kantkasur ko partvilok kisi aisi kanya ki talash me nikal gaya
wahi narkasur our chandal aaghe ki yojana banane lagte hai .............
Ab aaghe .......
parijat apne lok lout chuki thi kintu ushe waha bhi surya ke sath bitaye hue pal yaad aate jiski vajha se deree deree parijat ka man parilok se ukhadhne laga
rani pari se baat chupi nahi thi ki parijat fir se pahle ke jaise udhaash rahne lagi hai
jab tak kiran sath hoti parinat kuch khush najar aati per fir ekant me pahle jaise halat ho jati
rani pari ......kya baat hai putri main dekh rahi hun jab se aap jinlok se louti hai
fir se pahle ki tarha udhash rahti hai
parijat ......aisa kuch nahi hai rani maa hamara yaha man nahi lag raha hai
rani pari ......kya sach me yahi baat hai putri parijat
parijat.....?????
rani pari ......aapke mon ko ham bhali bhati samaj rahe hai putri aap kuch samay baad unse milne ja sakti ho
parijat .......hame kiss se milna hai hamne kab kaha rani maa
rani pari ......ye mat bhulo putri rani hone se purva ham aapki maa hai hame pta hai aap surya se prem karti hai our unse judai aap bardast nahi kar pa rahi hai is liya he aapka yaha man nahi lag raha hai
parijat .......pta nahi kaise rani maa per ye sach hai ham unko apna sabkuch man chuke hai hame unse prem hai
rani pari ......aap nishchint raho putri samya aane pe ham savyam aapka vivaah surya se krenge ye ham aapko vachan dete hai
rani pari ki baat sun parijat bhut khush hoti hai
wahi jinlok me .......
kiran ke parilok chale jane ke baad jyadatar samay surya sapna ke sath he laga rahta is bich surya ne maya bua kamini chachi our sapna ki bhut baar acche se bajai teeno ka sarir nikhar diya tha
Pichle kuch samay se manisha our monika bhi surya se kaffi khul gai thi jaise ek dusre ko kiss karname ek dusre ke part ke sath masti karna
manisha......didi kab tak ham ek dusre ko aise he sant karte rahenge surya se ham pyaar karti hai our baat ab to mom bhi janti hai
monika .......shi kaha tumne manisha aaj raat surya ke sath aaghe bhadhna he hoga
manisha .....kintu kaise di
monika .........ham yaha jinlok me hai yaha maine rajved ki putri se dosti kar li hai
manisha .....is baat ka surya se kya lena dena hai
monika ........tumhe ye to pta hai aajkal surya yaha jinlok ki sarab (madira ) ka sevan kar mom ki chudaai karta hai our ab to kamini mami ki bhi surya night me chudaai karta hai
manisha .....to kya hua di
monika ......tu dufer ki dufer he raho
aaj raat surya hamare sath soye ushe manane ki jimedaari tumhari hai baki kaise suru karna hai wo sab main dekh lungi
manisha ......thik hai di surya ko main mna lungi
aap apna karya kijiye aaj kuch bhi ho jaye mujhe surya ko apne andar feel karja hai baki jo hoga dekha jayega
monika our manisha apne apne karya me lag jati hai
vahi jinisha in dono ke plan ke baare me sapna ko bitati hai
sapna ......thik hai unhe jo karja karne dijiye ek na ek din to ye hona he hai
fir aaj kyu nahi our waise bhi wo inse kaffi badi hai vivaah to abhi ho nahi sakta hai
jinisha .....kintu kya ye shi rahega
didi sadi se pahle
sapna ......partvilok me to ye sab sadi se pahle he ho jata hai kher chinta na kro surya inse baad me vivaah kar lega
tab tak inko bhi apni life enjoy karne do
jinisha .....thik hai di fir aap he unki help kar dijiye
sapna ......per main kaise jinisha
jinisha .....are didi sartaj ko aap aj unke sath he sone ko kah dijiye baki ka kam wo our unki special madira kar legi hehehe
Sapna ....samaj gai jinu ki bachi
Asur lok ........
Asurguru our chandal naglok ke liya asur lok se nikal chuke the
Chandal ke teleportesan ki madad se asurguru our chandal sigra he naglok pahuch gaye
dekhne me naglok kaffi khubasurat our harabhra tha bade bade visahkay paid charo taraf hariyali he hariyali thi
chandal ........ Naglok to bhut he khubasurat hai asurguru
asurguru .......ha kintu jis sthan pe ham hai ye sthan vasuki vansh ka hai jo ki santi priya nag hote hai
hame jin takshak nago se milna hai wo hamare jaise he hai
asurgur waha se ek disha ki our bhad gaye kuch 1 hr ke baad chandal our asurguru takshak nago ko elake me aa pahuche
abhi dono kuch he aaghe bhade the ki dono ko chato taraf se takshak nago ne gher liya
chandal nago pe parhar karne he wala tha ki tabhi asurguru ne ushe rok diya
asurguru ......hame tumhare maharaj nagraj takshak se milna hai
nag ......tum log kon ho tum nag to nahi ho nahi manav ho fir yaha kyu aaye ho
asurguru .........nagraj takshak ko sandesh do ki asurlok se asurguru aaye hai
nag .......bina koi chalaki ke hamare sath chalo agar tum dono ne bhagne ka ya fir anya koi chalaki ki to hame majbuuran tumhe bandi bana nagraj ke samne le jana hoga
bina kisi virodh ke chandal our asurguru nago ke sath takshak nagvansh ke samudaay me pahuche jaha
ye takshak nag vansh ke nag rahte hai
asurguru ko dekhte he takshak nagraj ne unhe phechana liya
t.nagraj .......kya ye satya hai asur lok ke asurguru naglok me
asurguru .....ye satya hai t.nagraj ye ham he hai asurguru
t.nagraj asurguru our chandal ko apne bhavan me le gaya
T.nagraj. .....ab bataiye asurguru itne samay baad yaha naglok me aaye ho to jarur koi vishesh karya sidh karne aaye honge
Asurguru ......tumhari mitra asurraj narkasur ko tumhari shayta chaiye t.nagraj
Itna bol asurguru ek patra t.nagraj ko de deta hai
T.nagraj patra padh kar
T.nagraj .......ham apne mitra ki shayta to krenge kintu isme karya me kuch waqt lag sakta hai
Asurguru ......hame aapse yahi umeed thi t.nagraj
T.nagraj .......badle me hame wo vasuki vansh ki nagamani chaiye
Asurguru karya hone ke baad tum nagamani rakh sakte ho hame koi aapati nahi hai t.nagraj
T.nagraj .......aap sab vishram kre ham apne guptcharo is karya me laga dete hai jaise he hame moka mila ham ushe aapko sonp denge
asurguru ji .....dhanyavad t.nagraj
chandal .....kya ham ek baar us rajkumari komalangi ko dekh sakte hai
t.nagraj ........ha kintu abhi nahi har subha wo maa durga ki aradhana karne mandir jati hai wahi ushe dekh sakte ho
vusuki nagvansh mahal .......
1 ......nagraj mahaveer (veer ) vasuki
2 .......nag maharani purvi
3 .......nag rajkumari komalangi
nagraj veer .........maharani purvi aane wale samay me hame rajkumaari ko naglok ka varisht ghoshit karne wale hai kintu .....
nagrani purvi .......kintu kya maharaj
nagraj veer ......hamari parja hamari putri komalangi ko singhasan pe bethana swikar karegi bhi ya nahi yahi hamari chinta ka vishya hai
nagrani purvi .......kintu hamari kou our santan bhi to nahi hai jishe ham nag log ka utradikari ghoshit kar sake
nagraj veer ......hame chinta hai ho rahi hai hamari putri ki kyuki nagraj takshak nagamani ke piche hai our rajkumaari abhi is yogya nahi hai ki wah nagraj takshak ka samna kar sake
nagrani purvi ......hamare purvajo ke bare me jo kaha vo satya hai to rajkumaari ko hamare us prachin mandir me rah kar puja kar mahadev se vardaan prapt kar rajkumaari is yogya ho sakti hai ki wah naglok our nagraj dono ko sambhal sake
nagraj veer ......kintu waha hamari putri akele kaise rahegi itne lambe samay jabki waha se takshak van bhi bhut pass hai
nagrani purvi .....ham aapki chinta ko samaj rahe hai maharaj kintu yahi ek marg hai jis se nagmani ko bachaaya ja sakta hai nagraj takshak se our rajkumaari ki puja sampan hui to kisi baat ki chinta nahi rahegi
nagraj veer .........ham rajkumaari ko bhejna to nahi chahte the kintu hamare pass anya koi marg bhi to nahi hai
nagrani purvi .....ham rajkumaari se baat karte hai is vishya pe maharaj
nagraj veer ......hame abhi baat karni hogi rajkumari se our unse nagamani mahadev ke sibling ko arpit karvani hogi jo ki puja purn hone ke baad bhut adik sakti sali ho jayegi
nagraj veer rajkumaari komalangi ko is vishya me batate hai
rajkumari komalangi bhi man jati hai
nagraj veer ......putri nagmani ka aahvaan kar ushe mahadev ko arpit kar do
rajkumari nagmani ka aahvaan karti hai jo ki kuch he palo me rajkumaari komalangi ke hatho me aa jati hai
apne pita nagraj veer ke aagya anusar rajkumari nagmani ko mahadev ko arpit kar deti hai
nagraj veer putri kal tumhe akele mahadev ke prachin divya ling ki puja kar unhe prashan karna hoga tabhi tum fir se nagmani prapt kar paogi
rajkumari .....jo aagya pita shree ham aapki icchao ka man rakhte hue mahadev ko awashya prashan krenge pita shree
veer .purvi .....hame aapse yahi apeksha thi putri komalangi
takshak van ( naglok )
Chandal raat ke aandere me takshak mahal se nikal pass me he khokhar jangal takshak van me ja pahucha
mohini .....malik chandal ham yaha kyu aaye hai
chandal .....mon raho jab tak main na kahu
chandal wahi ek sthan dekh wo raksh kitab nikalta hai
chandal kitab khol ushe padhne lagta hai
deree deree us kitab se neeli roshni nikalne lagti hai
our ek jagha pe ekati hone lagti hai
2 hr tak chale is karya me mohini ne ek bhi sabad nahi kaha
Kuch der baad neeli roshni ka wo hola chandal ke isare pe pass me khadi mohini ki aatma se ja takrata hai jis se mohini ki chikhe nikalne lagti hai jinhe keval chandal he sun sakta tha
kaffi waqt tak mohini tadapti rahi uske baad deree deree mohini sant ho gai
chandal ......ab tum pahle se saktisali ho mohini our ab tum kisi bhi pavitra aatma ko apne sammohan me sammohit kar kuch bhi karwa sakti ho
mohini .....mujhe itna ajib kyu lag raha malik chandal
chandal .......kyuki abhi abhi jo urja tumse takrai hai wo tumhari aatma se jud chuki hai
kuch der our ishi book ko padhne ke baad chandal jor jor se mantro ka uccharan karne lagta hai
chandal ke seene se rek red our black urja nikal hawa me aakar lene lagti hai
dekhte he dekhte us urja se ek khanjar ka nirman hota hai
jo dikhne me bilkul devil khanjar jaisa tha
chandal .......hahaha surya tumhari mout ka astra tyaar hai ishe shetaani khabar se tumhara aant hoga
mohini waha se gayab ho jati hai our chandal fir se nagraj takshak ke mahal lout aata hai ...........
Update posted friends ..........
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Write your reply...awesome and thrilling update kalyansurya bro
Carry Minati
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Chodo Bhai ye sb aap story pr focus kro
krish1152
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Mast update ye khanjar vahi to nahi jo dusray janm me surya ke paas hai
Update 121 se aage ki kahani na to update 50 se aur na hi update 50 rewritten, dono mein se kisi se match nahi karti hai...
Update 121 flashback se shuru hota hai to Flashback kahan khatam hota hai ? Update 50 se pahle ke character aur update 118.119 ke character kaise mix ho rahen hai....
Update 50 mein to Surya sirf 3~4 din ke liye gaya tha, par Update 124~125 se lagta hai Surya apni mrityu se pahle kai mahaine ya varsh jinlok ya parilok mein raha aur Chandal ko Surya ko maarne ke liye apni taiyaari ke liye kafi samay mila...
Ek aur baat, Surya ne Manisha aur Monika se vaada kiya tha ki unki maa se sharirik sambandh nahin rakhenge, par update 125 mein, sambandh continue hain...
Confusion hai...
Vaise mujhe update 50 aur update 50 rewritten dono hi theek nahi lage the aur maine use apne liye dono ko mix karke edit kiya tha, main apna edited version comments mein de sakata tha par lekhak jo itni mehnat kar rahen hai unki bhavnaho ko aahat nahi karna chahta tha, par us se pahle Writer sahab khud clear kare ki Update 50 (old) ya Update 50 rewritten mein kounsa rakhna chahte hai...
Mera sujhav hai ki lekhak Ek baar fir se pade aur apni kahani ko line pe laayen...
Main galat bhi ho sakta hoon, shayad Surya ke koma mein gujare itne saalo mein pichhle janam aur vartman janam ke characters mix ho rahe ho..
Update 121 flashback se shuru hota hai to Flashback kahan khatam hota hai ? Update 50 se pahle ke character aur update 118.119 ke character kaise mix ho rahen hai....
Update 50 mein to Surya sirf 3~4 din ke liye gaya tha, par Update 124~125 se lagta hai Surya apni mrityu se pahle kai mahaine ya varsh jinlok ya parilok mein raha aur Chandal ko Surya ko maarne ke liye apni taiyaari ke liye kafi samay mila...
Ek aur baat, Surya ne Manisha aur Monika se vaada kiya tha ki unki maa se sharirik sambandh nahin rakhenge, par update 125 mein, sambandh continue hain...
Confusion hai...
Vaise mujhe update 50 aur update 50 rewritten dono hi theek nahi lage the aur maine use apne liye dono ko mix karke edit kiya tha, main apna edited version comments mein de sakata tha par lekhak jo itni mehnat kar rahen hai unki bhavnaho ko aahat nahi karna chahta tha, par us se pahle Writer sahab khud clear kare ki Update 50 (old) ya Update 50 rewritten mein kounsa rakhna chahte hai...
Mera sujhav hai ki lekhak Ek baar fir se pade aur apni kahani ko line pe laayen...
Main galat bhi ho sakta hoon, shayad Surya ke koma mein gujare itne saalo mein pichhle janam aur vartman janam ke characters mix ho rahe ho..
mashish
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very nice updateupdate 125
asurguru ........ha hai ek aisi kanya nagraj vasuki ki padpotri rajukmari komalangi ( komal ) jo divya sondarya se paripurn
chandal kinitu us tak pahuchana bhi aasan nahi hoga
narkasur ......mitra chandal usme tumhari shayta takshak nag krenge jo hamare mitra bhi hai
chandal .....tab to ye sambhav ho sakta hai
narkasur kantkasur ko partvilok kisi aisi kanya ki talash me nikal gaya
wahi narkasur our chandal aaghe ki yojana banane lagte hai .............
Ab aaghe .......
parijat apne lok lout chuki thi kintu ushe waha bhi surya ke sath bitaye hue pal yaad aate jiski vajha se deree deree parijat ka man parilok se ukhadhne laga
rani pari se baat chupi nahi thi ki parijat fir se pahle ke jaise udhaash rahne lagi hai
jab tak kiran sath hoti parinat kuch khush najar aati per fir ekant me pahle jaise halat ho jati
rani pari ......kya baat hai putri main dekh rahi hun jab se aap jinlok se louti hai
fir se pahle ki tarha udhash rahti hai
parijat ......aisa kuch nahi hai rani maa hamara yaha man nahi lag raha hai
rani pari ......kya sach me yahi baat hai putri parijat
parijat.....?????
rani pari ......aapke mon ko ham bhali bhati samaj rahe hai putri aap kuch samay baad unse milne ja sakti ho
parijat .......hame kiss se milna hai hamne kab kaha rani maa
rani pari ......ye mat bhulo putri rani hone se purva ham aapki maa hai hame pta hai aap surya se prem karti hai our unse judai aap bardast nahi kar pa rahi hai is liya he aapka yaha man nahi lag raha hai
parijat .......pta nahi kaise rani maa per ye sach hai ham unko apna sabkuch man chuke hai hame unse prem hai
rani pari ......aap nishchint raho putri samya aane pe ham savyam aapka vivaah surya se krenge ye ham aapko vachan dete hai
rani pari ki baat sun parijat bhut khush hoti hai
wahi jinlok me .......
kiran ke parilok chale jane ke baad jyadatar samay surya sapna ke sath he laga rahta is bich surya ne maya bua kamini chachi our sapna ki bhut baar acche se bajai teeno ka sarir nikhar diya tha
Pichle kuch samay se manisha our monika bhi surya se kaffi khul gai thi jaise ek dusre ko kiss karname ek dusre ke part ke sath masti karna
manisha......didi kab tak ham ek dusre ko aise he sant karte rahenge surya se ham pyaar karti hai our baat ab to mom bhi janti hai
monika .......shi kaha tumne manisha aaj raat surya ke sath aaghe bhadhna he hoga
manisha .....kintu kaise di
monika .........ham yaha jinlok me hai yaha maine rajved ki putri se dosti kar li hai
manisha .....is baat ka surya se kya lena dena hai
monika ........tumhe ye to pta hai aajkal surya yaha jinlok ki sarab (madira ) ka sevan kar mom ki chudaai karta hai our ab to kamini mami ki bhi surya night me chudaai karta hai
manisha .....to kya hua di
monika ......tu dufer ki dufer he raho
aaj raat surya hamare sath soye ushe manane ki jimedaari tumhari hai baki kaise suru karna hai wo sab main dekh lungi
manisha ......thik hai di surya ko main mna lungi
aap apna karya kijiye aaj kuch bhi ho jaye mujhe surya ko apne andar feel karja hai baki jo hoga dekha jayega
monika our manisha apne apne karya me lag jati hai
vahi jinisha in dono ke plan ke baare me sapna ko bitati hai
sapna ......thik hai unhe jo karja karne dijiye ek na ek din to ye hona he hai
fir aaj kyu nahi our waise bhi wo inse kaffi badi hai vivaah to abhi ho nahi sakta hai
jinisha .....kintu kya ye shi rahega
didi sadi se pahle
sapna ......partvilok me to ye sab sadi se pahle he ho jata hai kher chinta na kro surya inse baad me vivaah kar lega
tab tak inko bhi apni life enjoy karne do
jinisha .....thik hai di fir aap he unki help kar dijiye
sapna ......per main kaise jinisha
jinisha .....are didi sartaj ko aap aj unke sath he sone ko kah dijiye baki ka kam wo our unki special madira kar legi hehehe
Sapna ....samaj gai jinu ki bachi
Asur lok ........
Asurguru our chandal naglok ke liya asur lok se nikal chuke the
Chandal ke teleportesan ki madad se asurguru our chandal sigra he naglok pahuch gaye
dekhne me naglok kaffi khubasurat our harabhra tha bade bade visahkay paid charo taraf hariyali he hariyali thi
chandal ........ Naglok to bhut he khubasurat hai asurguru
asurguru .......ha kintu jis sthan pe ham hai ye sthan vasuki vansh ka hai jo ki santi priya nag hote hai
hame jin takshak nago se milna hai wo hamare jaise he hai
asurgur waha se ek disha ki our bhad gaye kuch 1 hr ke baad chandal our asurguru takshak nago ko elake me aa pahuche
abhi dono kuch he aaghe bhade the ki dono ko chato taraf se takshak nago ne gher liya
chandal nago pe parhar karne he wala tha ki tabhi asurguru ne ushe rok diya
asurguru ......hame tumhare maharaj nagraj takshak se milna hai
nag ......tum log kon ho tum nag to nahi ho nahi manav ho fir yaha kyu aaye ho
asurguru .........nagraj takshak ko sandesh do ki asurlok se asurguru aaye hai
nag .......bina koi chalaki ke hamare sath chalo agar tum dono ne bhagne ka ya fir anya koi chalaki ki to hame majbuuran tumhe bandi bana nagraj ke samne le jana hoga
bina kisi virodh ke chandal our asurguru nago ke sath takshak nagvansh ke samudaay me pahuche jaha
ye takshak nag vansh ke nag rahte hai
asurguru ko dekhte he takshak nagraj ne unhe phechana liya
t.nagraj .......kya ye satya hai asur lok ke asurguru naglok me
asurguru .....ye satya hai t.nagraj ye ham he hai asurguru
t.nagraj asurguru our chandal ko apne bhavan me le gaya
T.nagraj. .....ab bataiye asurguru itne samay baad yaha naglok me aaye ho to jarur koi vishesh karya sidh karne aaye honge
Asurguru ......tumhari mitra asurraj narkasur ko tumhari shayta chaiye t.nagraj
Itna bol asurguru ek patra t.nagraj ko de deta hai
T.nagraj patra padh kar
T.nagraj .......ham apne mitra ki shayta to krenge kintu isme karya me kuch waqt lag sakta hai
Asurguru ......hame aapse yahi umeed thi t.nagraj
T.nagraj .......badle me hame wo vasuki vansh ki nagamani chaiye
Asurguru karya hone ke baad tum nagamani rakh sakte ho hame koi aapati nahi hai t.nagraj
T.nagraj .......aap sab vishram kre ham apne guptcharo is karya me laga dete hai jaise he hame moka mila ham ushe aapko sonp denge
asurguru ji .....dhanyavad t.nagraj
chandal .....kya ham ek baar us rajkumari komalangi ko dekh sakte hai
t.nagraj ........ha kintu abhi nahi har subha wo maa durga ki aradhana karne mandir jati hai wahi ushe dekh sakte ho
vusuki nagvansh mahal .......
1 ......nagraj mahaveer (veer ) vasuki
2 .......nag maharani purvi
3 .......nag rajkumari komalangi
nagraj veer .........maharani purvi aane wale samay me hame rajkumaari ko naglok ka varisht ghoshit karne wale hai kintu .....
nagrani purvi .......kintu kya maharaj
nagraj veer ......hamari parja hamari putri komalangi ko singhasan pe bethana swikar karegi bhi ya nahi yahi hamari chinta ka vishya hai
nagrani purvi .......kintu hamari kou our santan bhi to nahi hai jishe ham nag log ka utradikari ghoshit kar sake
nagraj veer ......hame chinta hai ho rahi hai hamari putri ki kyuki nagraj takshak nagamani ke piche hai our rajkumaari abhi is yogya nahi hai ki wah nagraj takshak ka samna kar sake
nagrani purvi ......hamare purvajo ke bare me jo kaha vo satya hai to rajkumaari ko hamare us prachin mandir me rah kar puja kar mahadev se vardaan prapt kar rajkumaari is yogya ho sakti hai ki wah naglok our nagraj dono ko sambhal sake
nagraj veer ......kintu waha hamari putri akele kaise rahegi itne lambe samay jabki waha se takshak van bhi bhut pass hai
nagrani purvi .....ham aapki chinta ko samaj rahe hai maharaj kintu yahi ek marg hai jis se nagmani ko bachaaya ja sakta hai nagraj takshak se our rajkumaari ki puja sampan hui to kisi baat ki chinta nahi rahegi
nagraj veer .........ham rajkumaari ko bhejna to nahi chahte the kintu hamare pass anya koi marg bhi to nahi hai
nagrani purvi .....ham rajkumaari se baat karte hai is vishya pe maharaj
nagraj veer ......hame abhi baat karni hogi rajkumari se our unse nagamani mahadev ke sibling ko arpit karvani hogi jo ki puja purn hone ke baad bhut adik sakti sali ho jayegi
nagraj veer rajkumaari komalangi ko is vishya me batate hai
rajkumari komalangi bhi man jati hai
nagraj veer ......putri nagmani ka aahvaan kar ushe mahadev ko arpit kar do
rajkumari nagmani ka aahvaan karti hai jo ki kuch he palo me rajkumaari komalangi ke hatho me aa jati hai
apne pita nagraj veer ke aagya anusar rajkumari nagmani ko mahadev ko arpit kar deti hai
nagraj veer putri kal tumhe akele mahadev ke prachin divya ling ki puja kar unhe prashan karna hoga tabhi tum fir se nagmani prapt kar paogi
rajkumari .....jo aagya pita shree ham aapki icchao ka man rakhte hue mahadev ko awashya prashan krenge pita shree
veer .purvi .....hame aapse yahi apeksha thi putri komalangi
takshak van ( naglok )
Chandal raat ke aandere me takshak mahal se nikal pass me he khokhar jangal takshak van me ja pahucha
mohini .....malik chandal ham yaha kyu aaye hai
chandal .....mon raho jab tak main na kahu
chandal wahi ek sthan dekh wo raksh kitab nikalta hai
chandal kitab khol ushe padhne lagta hai
deree deree us kitab se neeli roshni nikalne lagti hai
our ek jagha pe ekati hone lagti hai
2 hr tak chale is karya me mohini ne ek bhi sabad nahi kaha
Kuch der baad neeli roshni ka wo hola chandal ke isare pe pass me khadi mohini ki aatma se ja takrata hai jis se mohini ki chikhe nikalne lagti hai jinhe keval chandal he sun sakta tha
kaffi waqt tak mohini tadapti rahi uske baad deree deree mohini sant ho gai
chandal ......ab tum pahle se saktisali ho mohini our ab tum kisi bhi pavitra aatma ko apne sammohan me sammohit kar kuch bhi karwa sakti ho
mohini .....mujhe itna ajib kyu lag raha malik chandal
chandal .......kyuki abhi abhi jo urja tumse takrai hai wo tumhari aatma se jud chuki hai
kuch der our ishi book ko padhne ke baad chandal jor jor se mantro ka uccharan karne lagta hai
chandal ke seene se rek red our black urja nikal hawa me aakar lene lagti hai
dekhte he dekhte us urja se ek khanjar ka nirman hota hai
jo dikhne me bilkul devil khanjar jaisa tha
chandal .......hahaha surya tumhari mout ka astra tyaar hai ishe shetaani khabar se tumhara aant hoga
mohini waha se gayab ho jati hai our chandal fir se nagraj takshak ke mahal lout aata hai ...........
Update posted friends ..........
read and enjoy friends .............
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