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Dev the lover

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Nice update
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Dev the lover bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
Bechaare dev ki to lanka lga rkhi h uski behno ne.....dekhte h aage kya hota h....
Bhai woh toh kahi bhi ho yeh sab toh thodi bhaut lankaa lagwati hai ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Shaandar Mast Lajwab Update ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“
Bahut hi shandar update
Superb....
Nice update bro :superb:
Nice update
thank you bhai log
 
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UPDATE 226

Location

Ek andhera aur bhayankar chamber. Chhote se deep red light ke saath, room mein ek thoda chilling atmosphere hai. Yeh room kisi purani, bhatakti duniya se juda hua lagta hai. Raat ka waqt hai, aur ek purani, shikal se bhari hui throne pe waha ka raja baitha hai. Uske aas-paas, uske followers alag-alag dark powers se juda, unke chehre kafi badle hue aur daemonic hain. Unka presence room mein ek heavy aura create kar raha hai.

Raja, ek hath mein purani, khoon se bhari hui talwar thami hui hai. Uske chehre pe ek evil grin hai, jaise wo kisi cheez ko jeet chuka ho. Uski aankhon mein ek gahray dard ka reflection hai, jaise wo purani yaadein dekh raha ho.

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Uske saamne ek purani arcane screen hai, jo kisi purani duniya ka part lagti hai. Screen par ek purani battle dikhayi ja rahi hai - Dev ka ek purana avatar, jab woh ek smaraat tha. Dev ko dekhne par, Raja ke chehre par ek twisted smile aa jata hai

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Raja (murmurs to himself):
"Ek smaraat, ek jung ka raja... Tumne apne samay mein duniya ko apni jaan ka khauf diya tha, lekin ab tumhara waqt gaya... Tumhe dekhta hoon toh lagta hai... aaj bhi tumhare andar wahi shakti hai, jo mujhe sab se zyada dikhayi dena chaahiye."

Screen par ek scene hai jahan Dev ka dushman usse lad raha hai, aur Dev apni talwar se apne ghazab ke moves dikha raha hai. Raja dheere se screen ke paas jata hai aur apne haath se apne followers ko ek signal deta hai, jo turant uski order par react karte hain. Sabhi apne magical powers ko control karte hue, unki rooh ki gati ko puraane zamaane ki hawa mein ghuma rahe hote hain, jaise wo time ke andar ki khufiyat ko samajh rahe ho.

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Raja (ghoomte hue, dark tone mein):
"Mujhe pata hai... jo tumne un purani fights mein jeet paayi, uska ek hi matlab tha... Tumne sabko shikast di, lekin tum apne andar jo andar ki andhera rakhe ho, uska samna nahi kar paaye... Tumhaare uss smaraat ka dikhawa tha... Magar ab, yeh sab kuch badal chuka hai."

Abhi usne apni bata puri bhi nahi apni logo ke samane ki uss screen par secene aage badha.

Dev apni talwar uthata hai, aur uska chehra ek dam ghusse aur khauf se bhara hota hai. Jaise woh aage jata hai uske saamne aate hain kuch log, aur ek zabardast fight shuru ho jaati hai.

First Kill:

Dev apni talwar ko itni tezi se ghoomata hai ki sabse pehle ek ghode pe baitha hua warrior ka gardan cut jata hai. Uska chehra khoon mein lapet gaya hai, aur woh apne chehre ko blood se dhota hai. Dev ki talwar se ek khoon ki lakeer niche girti hai, jaise ek kala paani.

Dev (harshly, insulting the fallen warrior):
"Tumhare jaise bekar warriors, sirf marne ke liye paida hote hain. Tumse toh main khud ka khauf bhi jeet leta!"

Second Kill:

Aage badhte hue, Dev ek towering warrior ko dekhta hai jo usse jeetne ki koshish karta hai. Dev uske aankhon mein aakrosh aur garaj bhari hui taqat dekh kar talwar ko uske haath ke neeche maar deta hai. Uska haath katkar zameen pe girta hai, woh warrior apne paaon pe nahi khada ho pata, aur ek instant mein Dev ke talwar ka shikar ban jaata hai.

Dev (with a smirk):
"Yeh tumhara kismat tha, doston ke liye maar khana. Tumhare paas koi shakti nahi thi."

Third Kill:

Dev apne next target ko samajhta hai, jo ek archer hai. Woh maarna nahi chahta, par uska samna karna padta hai. Archer apne shikar ko dekh kar tezi se arrow launch karta hai, lekin Dev ne woh arrow asani se apne talwar se rok diya. Phir uska arrow launcher uske abdomen mein ghusa deta hai, uska chehra badal jata hai aur woh apne khoon se bhari jaata hai, uski atadi nikal kar bahar girane lagti hai.

Dev (mocking):
"Arrow chalaane se kya hoga jab tumhare paas dimaag nahi hai? Tumne khud ko maar diya!"

Fourth Kill:

Phir Dev apne aage aane wale assassin ko dekh kar rukta hai aur uske dark skill ke saath shikar banata hai. Ek badi talwar ka jhatka assassin ko zameen ke andar hi kheench leta hai, uski rooh jaise jaati hai aur woh bandha apni zindagi se haath dho jaata hai, bas ek tezz chikh sunai deti hai.

Dev (coldly):
"Dark magic ke naam pe tumhe maine zinda nahi chhoda. Tumse bekar kuch aur nahi ho sakta."

Fifth Kill:

Uske baad, Dev ek aur mutated soldier ko dekhta hai jo apni dark magic ko use kar raha hai. Lekin Dev, apne strength se, uss soldier ke magic ko counter karta hai. Uske demonic energy ko talwar se absorb kar leta hai aur woh soldier apne hi shakti se maar diya jaata hai, jaise woh andar ke andar phir khatam ho jaata hai.

Dev (laughing darkly):
"Apni hi shakti se maar khana, tumne apni zindagi ka maksad hi khatam kar diya!"

Sixth Kill:

Dev apne nimble fighter se lad raha hai jo tezi se moves kar raha hai. Lekin Dev ke jaise high-speed action hone ki wajah se woh fighter Dev ke talwar ke strike se chhoti chhoti tukdon mein kaat diya jaata hai, aur uska laash wahi zameen pe gir jata hai.

Dev (snickering):
"Tezi se hilna aur maut ko dhundhna, yeh tumhare liye hi tha."

Seventh Kill:

Ek aur sword master jo Dev ke saamne khada hota hai, apne sword ke moves se Dev ko fasaana chahta hai. Lekin Dev usko apni talwar ki tez se khaali kar deta hai, aur sword master ka sir ek jhatke se alag ho jata hai, woh apni last breath lekar zameen pe gira hai.

Dev (grimacing):
"Tumhare jaise sword master, sirf maut ko talash karte hain. Ab tumhe apni soch ko samajhna hoga."

Eighth Kill:

Dev ka ek aur target hai, jo ek fire user hai. Woh fire magic se Dev ko maarne ki koshish karta hai, lekin Dev apne chakra control ke saath uske fire ko apni talwar se absorb kar leta hai aur phir fire user ke chest mein talwar daal deta hai. Uske sharir se barabar bhoonko jaise aag nikalti hai, jo turant thandi ho jaati hai.

Dev (mocking, as the fire user burns):
"Fire magic... tumhare liye bas ek khel tha, mere liye toh yeh bas ek aur zakhm tha."

Ninth Kill:

Ab Dev ke saamne ek shapeshifter hai, jo apni shakal badal kar Dev ko samjhne ki koshish karta hai. Par Dev usse maasoom shakal ko samajh kar apne talwar se uski aankhon mein ghusa deta hai, aur woh shapeshifter apne asli form mein vapas aata hai, jisme uska chehra kaafi bhayankar hota hai, lekin woh apni maut ke baad puri tarah se simat jaata hai.

Dev (with disgust):
"Tumhare jaise shakal badalne wale sirf maut se bhaagte hain. Tumne apni asliyat dikhayi, ab marne ka waqt hai."

Tenth Kill:

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Aakhri mein, ek dark sorcerer jo Dev ke saamne khada hota hai, apni dangerous magic se Dev ke aas paas hawa mein bhi badlaav laata hai. Lekin Dev apni purani shaktiyon ko control karte hue, sorcerer ki dark aura ko rokta hai aur apne talwar se uski kamar ko tod deta hai, phir usse apne shikar ki tarah maar daalta hai.

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Dev (coldly, as he strikes the final blow):
"Dark sorcery ke naam par kuch nahi, tum bas apne andar ka dar chhupane ki koshish kar rahe ho. Ab tum khatam ho."

Raja jo sab kuch dekh raha tha, ek twisted smile ke saath apne followers ki taraf dekhta hai.

Raja (darkly, to his followers):
"Yeh tha woh smaraat jo humne pehle dekha tha... par uski shakti se humne sirf ek aur shaikshik safalta hasil ki hai. Tum sabne dekha, kaise Dev apni talwar se apne dushman ko maar raha tha... lekin ab, yeh samay hai uski asli shakti ko samajhne ka aur aisa naa kar paya toh mer naam ravindra nahi ."

Ravindra ki aankhon mein ek nayi soch ki chamak thi, jaise kuch bahut bada hone wala ho.

Ravindra (to himself):
"Dev ki kahani to purani hai, lekin uski taqat ab bhi humare samne hai. Agar main uska istemal kar paaya, toh sab kuch badal sakta hai. Isse pehle ki woh apne asli roop mein aaye, mujhe uska istemal karna hoga..."

Par ravindra ke soch ke pare chal rahe the uske followers

1. Ek soldier, darr se kaanpate hue:
"Yeh... yeh kaunsa bhatakti rooh hai jo humare saath khade hai? Isne toh zindagi bhar ka khauf dikhaya hai!"

2. Ek magician, aankhon mein hairani aur andhkaar bhari:
"Uski talwar se nikli hui roshni... yeh sab... itni taqat! Yeh toh kisi bhi bhootiya prakar se badhkar hai!"


3. Ek warrior, apne haath mein khoon se bhari talwar pakadte hue:
"Hum usse jeet nahi sakte! Humare saare jaise laash ban gaye! Uska gussa... itna bhayankar hai!"


4. Ek archer, apne teer ko todte hue:
"Yeh kisne paida kiya tha! Uski takat, woh chehre ka gussa... hum... hum usse harane ka soch bhi nahi sakte!"


5. Ek sorcerer, apne magic powers ko activate karte hue, dar ke maare:
"Isne toh sabko maar daala, aur hum usse yeh kar nahi paaye... agar humne isse samjhne ki koshish ki... toh hum bhi usi jaise samapt ho jaayenge!"


6. Ek dark knight, apni ghanti ka jangla girate hue:
"Yeh... yeh insaan nahi hai... yeh toh... ek bhootiya devta hai! Agar Ravindra ne iska samna kiya, toh yeh humare liye khatam ho jayega!"


7. Ek beast warrior, khoon se lapet gaye apne haath ko dheere dheere saaf karte hue:
"Humne isse pehle aise kisi ko nahi dekha... agar yeh Dev ke jaise kisi ke saamne aaya toh humari bhi maut tay hai!"

Ravindra, jo apne followers ke dar ko dekh raha tha, apne gusse ko thoda control karte hue apne dar ko chupata hai. Usne apni aankhon mein gheraav bharte hue apne followers ko dekha aur dheere se bola:

Ravindra (apne aapko sambhalte hue, ek gehri awaaz mein):
"Yeh sab jo tum dekh rahe ho, yeh sirf ek jhilmilati roshni hai... ek rang hai uske andar jo use apne dard aur shakti se milata hai. Lekin uski asli kamzori uske andar chhupi hai, jo sabse zyada usse parichit hai... uska pyaar, uski biwiya, uski behne, aur uska pariwar! Agar hum unhe dikhate hain, toh woh Dev jaisa insaan apni takat ko kabhi nahi samajh paayega. Uska dil uske parivaar mein hai, aur isi wajah se woh kabhi apni asli jang nahi jeet sakta."

(Ravindra apne followers ko dheere dheere samjhata hai, unke sabhi dar ko dheere dheere door karne ke liye)

"Hum iski weakness ko samajh sakte hain. Tumhe sirf ek cheez samajhni hai โ€“ har insan ki ek kamzori hoti hai. Dev ka pyaar uski kamzori ban sakta hai. Uski wife Masoom, uski behen saloni, pari, neha , aur uske parivar ka har ek member uske dil mein ek special jagah rakhta hai. Agar humne unhe apne control mein kiya, toh Dev apne aap ko kabhi sambhal nahi paayega."

(Ravindra ka chehra badalta hai, uski aankhon mein ek kafi shaitani chamak hoti hai)

"Ab hum sirf ek plan bana rahe hain, jisme Dev ka pyaar uske liye ek dard ban jaayega. Tum sab ko sirf apne fear ko kabu mein rakhna hoga, aur is pyaar ko ek aise zakhm mein badalna hoga jo woh kabhi nahi bhar sake. Jab tak uska dil uske logon ke saath rahega, tab tak woh kabhi apni asli taqat ka istemal nahi kar sakta. Aur hum isse achhe se samajh rahe hain. Tumhein apne dar ko apne haath mein lena hoga, aur iss kamzori ka faida uthana hoga."

(Ravindra apne followers ko samjhaane ke baad, unmein ek nayi taqat aur himmat bhar deta hai)

"Ab tum sab ko yeh samajhna hoga ki Dev ko uske apno ke saath humne bandhan mein laga diya, toh woh kabhi bhi apne aap ko itna zor se nahi de sakta! Woh hamesha apne dil se ladta rahega, lekin uska apna dil usse kabhi uski asli taqat nahi dene dega!"

(Ravindra apne followers ki aankhon mein dar ko door karte hue, unhe ek naye ranneeti ke saath jaane ki shakti deta hai)

"Ab tum sab apni himmat dikhana! Hum iss jang ko jeet sakte hain. Agar tum sabne apne dimaag ko laga diya, toh koi bhi Dev humare raahein rok nahi sakta. Uski kamzori ko samjho aur uska khauf humare faayde mein badal do!"

Ravindra ka yeh dialogue sunke sabhi ke chehre par ek naye hosle ka rang chhane lagta hai. Unka dar kuch kam hota hai, lekin Ravindra ki baatein unhein naye plan aur ranneetiyon mein le jaati hain, jisme Dev ke pyaar ko uski taqat ko kamzor karne ke liye use kiya jaayega.

Tabhi waha par kaam karne wala ek remote lekar cd mode se tv mode kr deta hai ussi time

Ravindra - haath upper karke dev banega humara gulaam

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Piche tv par family man kaa ek dialogue aa jata tabhi - chal naaa chutiyee

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Ravindra uss kaam karne waalo ko laat marate hue - dhaat teri.......band karo tv sala meri puri baat ki aisi ki taisi maar di future me koi padh legaa mere baare me review me do gaali dekar jaayega
Shaandar Update ๐Ÿ‘Œ
 

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UPDATE 223

Janu: "Aap yahi ho naa?"

Main apna sar hila kar: "Haan, yahi tha. Thanks, Arav. Accha, ab chalein gaav aur filhal yeh sindoor saaf kar lo."

Itna kehna tha ki sab ekdum zor se chilaye, jaise maine koi badi baat bol di ho. Main aur Arav toh dar ke maare gir pade.

Main apne mann mein sochne laga: "Dad sahi kehte theโ€”'Beta, shaadi kar le, tab pata chalega ki baatein soch-samajh kar boli jaati hain.'"

Shikha (ghusse se): "Kya bola aapne? Aapne hamesha mujhe ignore kiya, par maine kabhi kuch nahi bola. Par yeh baat dubara mat bolna."

Main: "Arre baba, toh kya ghar par aise hi chalega kya?"

Devika: "Yeh sahi keh rahe hain. Itna toh karna hi hoga."

Main aur Arav khade hue aur apne kapde jhaadte hue ek dusre ko aankhon hi aankhon mein samajhne ki koshish karne lage.

Main: "Abbe, ek baat bata doon. Yeh jo abhi kiya hai na, dubara mat karna."

Komal: "Kya?"

Main (thoda taunt maarte hue): "Kya yahi sikhaya hai tumhare maata-pita ne? Apne pati se itni uchi awaaz mein baat karte hain?"

Tabhi Masoom mere paas aayi aur mere pair pakad kar gir gayi: "Maaf kar do, mere praan-naath! Maine galti se yeh kiya. Mujhe shama kar dijiye."

Main (shock mein): "Arey, Masu, yeh tum kya bol rahi ho?"

Masoom uth kar mere gale lag gayi: "Mujhe maaf kar do. Aage se aisa nahi karungi."

Main (uski peeth thapthapate hue): "Theek hai, theek hai, tension mat lo."

Lekin mera mann ab alag hi thoughts mein chala gaya. Jab maine Masoom ke dad ko dekha tha, toh unmein mujhe apne guruji ki jhalak dikhi thi. Maine socha:
"
Yeh kya? Kya Masoom guruji ki beti hai? Aur kya guruji hi Govind ji hain? Par yaar, yeh sab chhodo. Aaj ke sawaalon ka jawaab nahi mila, toh kal ka kya sochna? Govind ji mere guru nahi ho sakte. Bas, jo bhi ho, mujhe ab ghar ja kar sona hai. Tak gaya hoon. Aur ab toh gala bhi baith gaya hai."

Main ne thoda hasa aur bola: "Masoom, yeh sab chhodo. Chal ab ghar chalte hain. Aur sabse pehle ek baat fix karni haiโ€”tum log mujhe yeh nautanki mein mat uljhao."

Sab hansne lage, lekin mujhe ab bas apni taange stretch karni thi aur so jaana tha.

Main (andar hi andar): "Kal ka din dekh lenge. Par haaye, mere haathon ka dard aur yeh taange toh ab jawab de rahi hain!"

Sab mil kar gaav ke liye nikal pade. Lekin main abhi bhi andar hi andar yeh soch raha tha ki "Yeh guruji aur Masoom ka connection kya hai?" Lekin yeh jawab toh ab mujhe agle din hi milega kaya pata naa mile.

(Raaste Mein Shiv Ka Phone Aaya)

Mai: "Haan bhai, kaisa hai? Aur Sandhya kaisi hai? Maa aur Lakshmi kaise hain?"

Shiv: "Aram se bhai, aram se. Sab theek hai. Aap jahan hote ho, wahan sab theek hi rehta hai."

Mai (halki si hansi ke saath): "Accha, kab aa raha hai ghar?"

Shiv: "Bas Shiv Ji ke mandir ke paas se guzra hoon. Thodi der mein pahuncha."

Mai: "Toh aa ja, mai bhi aage hi thodi door par hoon."

Shiv: "Accha, milta hoon."

Maine apni car wahi rukwa di. Main, Masoom, aur Komal ek car mein the, aur baaki log peeche the. Kuch der baad Shiv ki car bhi aayi. Gate khula aur Lakshmi bhagte hue mere paas aayi.

Lakshmi (mere gale lagte hue): "Bhaiya, aap mil gaye! Ab nahi chhodungi aapko!" (Mere kaan kheenchte hue).

Mai (hans kar): "Haan, bilkul mat chhodna! Arre, apni bhabhiyon se nahi milogi kya?"

Lakshmi mere gale se alag hui aur Masoom ko dekhne lagi.

Lakshmi: "Aap wahi hain na?"

Masoom (confused): "Kaun, gudiya?"

Lakshmi: "Arre, jinka photo inke purse mein rehta tha."

Mai (thoda sharminda hote hue): "Chup kar, gudiya!"


Lakshmi: "Aur aap woh hain jinka tattoo inki peeth par tha!"

Komal (mujhe teasingly dekhte hue): "Haan, ab toh sach saamne aa gaya."

Lakshmi: "Ab batao, bhabhi kaun hai inmein se?"

Mai: "Dono hain."

Lakshmi muh khol ke: "Aaaawwwhhh!"

Mai (baat badalte hue): "Accha, Shiv, maa kahan hain?"

Shiv: "Arre bhai, woh gaav gayi hain. Zaruri kaam tha."

Mai: "Chal, koi nahi. Tu aa peeche-peeche."

Lakshmi ne aage badhkar Komal aur Masoom ke pair chhu liye.

Komal: "Arre gudiya, kya kar rahi ho? Itni chhoti umar mein yeh sab seekh liya?"

Lakshmi: "Maa kehti hain ki kisi ko izzat dene mein umar ka koi kaam nahi hota. Bas dil mein sacchai honi chahiye."

Masoom uske gaalon ko pyar se sahlate hue boli: "Shiv bhai, Lakshmi humare saath chalegi. Aap aayein."

Lakshmi ka chehra khil utha. Sab phir car mein rawana hue ghar ki taraf.

(Ghar Ki Raah Mein)

Masoom aur Komal Lakshmi se baatein kar rahi thi, aur mai car ke sheeshe se bahar dekh raha tha. Ped, pahaad, aur mausam ka nazara mujhe sukoon de raha tha. Dheere-dheere meri aankhein band hone lagi. Thakaan jo thi puri shaadi aur safar ki.


Sapne Ki Duniya

Jab aankhein band hui, toh main ek alag hi jagah tha. Har jagah roshni thi, ekdum saf aur sundar. Itni khoobsurat jagah ki main uss khoobsurti mein kho sa gaya.

Tabhi peechhe se ek pyaari si aawaz aayi: "Beta, tu aa gaya."

Main turant palta aur dekha, meri maaโ€”Sumitraโ€”bethi thi. Main bhaagta hua unke paas pahunch gaya.

Mai (khushi se): "Maa! Maa! Aap yahan?"

Sumitra (pyar se): "Arre beta, pehle baith toh jaa."

Main zameen par unke samne baith gaya aur unki goad mein apna sir rakh diya. Maa mere baalon ko pyar se sehla rahi thi.

Sumitra (halke se muskuraate hue): "Kya hua beta? Tu khush toh hai na?"

Main unki goad mein aur chipak gaya, jaise zindagi bhar ka sukoon chahiye ho. Lekin uske baad jo hua, usne meri duniya hila diโ€ฆ

Dev (Main):
"Haan maa, main bahut khush hoon aaj. Aap se mil liya, sab kuch mil gaya."

Sumitra:
"Kayaa wahan tujhe maa ka pyaar nahi milta?"

Dev:
"Nahi, aisa nahi hai maa. Bas woh thodi alag hai. Hamesha chinta mein rehti hai, ki kahin mere saath kuch galat na ho jaaye."

Sumitra:
"Unka darna sahi bhi hai beta, aakhir teri shaktiyaan toh hain hi aisi. Pehle bhi main hi jaanti hoon, tujhe maine khatre se hamesha dur rakha tha."

Dev:
"Akheer aap sab kyun darte hain mujhse?"

Sumitra:
"Aree beta, tujhse nahi, tere gusse se! Jab tu joker banata hai, tab tu bhi jaanta hai, ki tu kitna khaufnaak ban jaata hai. Mere samne woh saari ladaaiyaan, unki cheekhein, unke haath-pair, behrahmo ki tarah todna..."

Dev is visibly shaken, as his anger from the past is reflected in Sumitraโ€™s words.

Dev (softly):
"Maa, mujhe hila kar... Kaha kho un palloo mein mat jaa beta. Accha bata, kab milayega mujhe meri bhabhi se, aur meri teenon betiyon se?"

Dev:
"Mila dunga maa, par kya aap naraz ho, ki maine Saloni aur Neha ke saath jo kiya..."

Sumitra:
"Nahi beta, yeh toh hona hi tha ek din."

Dev (surprised):
"Kyun maa? Aisa kyun?"

Sumitra:
"Beta, woh asli mein teri behenein nahi thi, par ab hain."

Dev (shocked):
"Iska kya matlab hai?"

Dev:
"Kya hai maa, aap pehle hi mat bujhao."

Sumitra:
"Tujhe nahi lagta ki in teenon se tera alag sa rishta hai? Jaise koi chiz inke paas tujhe chhup rahi ho?"

Dev (reluctantly):
"Haan maa, aisa hamesha hota hai."

Sumitra:
"Asal mein beta, jab tere pita ek shaitaan se jhagde par gaye the, tab mar-kat mein woh bahut kuch kho gaye. Teen saal tak ladte rahe the."

Dev:
"Toh maa, kya hua?"

Sumitra:
"Jab woh ghar aaye, toh hamesha gusse aur ladaayi mein hi rehte. Tere pita ki tabiyat bahut kharaab ho gayi thi."

Dev (upset):
"Yeh toh galat hua!"

Sumitra:
"Haan, jab tuh mere pet mein tha.
Ek din maine unse poochha, par unhone mujhe dhakka de diya aur main gir gayi. Mera pet thoda nuksaan hua."

Dev (shocked):
"Maa..."

Sumitra:
"Shh, beta. Chup. Abhi toh thodi gir gayi thi. Aage bata rahi hoon."

Dev (more softly):
"Phir kya hua maa?"

Sumitra:
"Thodi der baad, jab unka gussa thoda shaant hua, unhe apni galti ka ahsaas hua. Par tab tak kaafi der ho gayi thi, aur main behosh ho gayi."

Dev:
"Pita ji ne sahi nahi kiya, yeh."

Sumitra:
"Unki bhi galti nahi thi. Phir woh mujhe Raj Vaidya ke paas le gaye. Unhone haath uthaye, aur kuch nahi kar sakte the. Phir Rajguru ne bataya ki agar tere pita ji 10 din ka maha yagya karein aur apne gusse aur shaktiyon se ek herre ka nirman karein, toh tum dono ko surakshit kiya ja sakta hai."

Dev:
"Par maa..."

Sumitra:
"Haan, ruk batati hoon. Tum chhup jao. Jab tere janm ka samay aaya, toh mujhe apni shaktiyon se us herre ko banwana tha. Maine wahi kiya, par Bhagwan ki vidhambana ke karan, woh herre ke tukde hue aur ek tukda tu bana, baaki chaar mein woh sab."

Dev:
"Maa, chaar kon?"

Sumitra:
"Aree, Shikha aur kon, pagal!"

Dev:
"Par maa, woh toh chacha ki beti thi na?"

Sumitra:
"Nahi beta, tere pita ji ne unhe de diya tha, kyunki teri chachi ko unse bahut pyaar tha. Main bhi mana nahi kar sakti thi."

Dev:
"Maa, yeh sab aap mujhe ab bata rahi ho? Aur aap mujhe bich majhdhaar mein chhod kar chal gayi, na main pariwaar sambhal paya, na Rajaya ko."

Sumitra:
"Beta, jo tune kiya, shaayad us waqt koi aur karta. Par tujhe yaad hai naa, Mahakaal ne kya kaha tha?"

Dev:
"Haan maa, ussne kaha tha ki mujhe kai saalon tak narak mein rakha jayega."

Sumitra:
"Beta, shaayad kuch saalon mein woh tujhe chhod de, kyunki ab tere aur tere pita ji ka banaya hua kavach usse rok nahi paayega."

Dev:
"Maa, agar aap uss waqt mujh par vishwas kar ke ruk jaati, toh woh aapko maar nahi pata tha. Aur aapki kasam ki wajah se, maine kabhi uska peecha nahi kiya."

Sumitra:
"Main nahi chahti thi ki tu badle mein apni zindagi barbaad kare. Par beta, ab tujhe majboot banna hoga. Apni shaktiyon ko ujagar karna hoga."

Dev:
"Haan maa, main kar lunga. Bas thodi der tumhare god mein rehna chahta hoon... Phir sab kuch apne haath mein hoga."

Aaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii huuuuuuuffffff... Kon hai? Kon hai?

Meri nazar Masoom ke gaale par thi, aur uski gardan se khoon nikal raha tha. Main ne apne khanzar ko fekh diya aur apne hoth uski gardan par laga diye. Uski aankhon mein aansu bhar aaye the.

Maine uska khoon dheere dheere chusa, jab khoon ruk gaya toh maine apne hoth usse hata liye.

Dev (softly, remorseful):
"Maaf kar do, baby. Main sach mein bahut bura hoon."

Masoom apne aansu ko saaf karte hue mere seene se lag jaati hai.

Masoom (gently):
"Nahi, aisa mat kaho. Shayad maine hi galat waqt par aapko uthaa liya."

Dev (in pain):
"Par phir bhi, maaf kar do. Mujhe... main bhi apni galti par aansu nahi roka paaya."

Masoom meri aankhon mein dekhte hue, halka sa muskurati hai.

Masoom (calmly):
"Bus kariye, kaha na kuch nahi hua. Bas thoda sa khoon hi toh nikla hai, aur woh aapke hothon ne chuka diya. Waise kaha kho gaye the aap?"

Dev (deep in thought):
"Main apni maa ke paas tha... Sumitra maa ke paas."

Masoom (surprised):
"Achha, pichle janam mein?"

Dev (nodding slowly):
"Haan, wahi thi."

Masoom (curiously):
"Kya keh rahi thi woh?"

Dev:
"Wahi ki meri baby se kab milaa raha hoon."

Masoom (teasing):
"Aap naa... bigad gaye ho bahut! Maa se bata diya, kya bulate ho mujhe?"

Dev (chuckling softly):
"Maa sab jaanti hai, pehle se hi."

Masoom (with a smile):
"Accha, ab bas... kya keh rahe ho? Kaha jaa rahe ho?"

Dev (playfully):
"Achha, tabhi jaagani aayi thi."

Masoom (playfully):
"Haan, waise bahut mazaa aa raha hai safar mein. Mujhe toh lag raha hai apni baarat lekar jaa rahi hoon."

Dev (teasingly):
"Aare baba, tum khush toh main khush. Ab chalo, warna koi aayegi aur kahegi, 'Abhi tak romance chal raha hai!'"

Masoom halki si jhuk kar Dev ko ek pyaari si kiss deti hai aur phir uske haath ko pakad kar sabke paas le chalti hai, unke saath ek naye safar par.

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Jahan sab bethe hue khana ka maja le rahe the. Actually, yeh ek dhabha tha.

Dev (teasingly, with a mischievous smile):
"Aare, dhabe par kyu roka? Restaurant mein le chalti, aage hai city mein."

Masoom (laughing softly, enjoying the moment):
"Kabhi kahein kar toh, dikhe, iska alag maja hai."

Dev (playfully, with a glint in his eyes):
"Matalab pura aadami banani ki tayyari mein hoon."

Masoom (laughing, with a playful wink):
"Haan, baaki raat ko aap kar dena pura."

Dev (with a soft smile, his voice full of warmth):
"Haan, kyun nahi?"

Hum dono jakar baith gaye table par, ek dusre ke kareeb, ek ajeeb si khushi aur sukoon ke saath. Jaise waqt ruka ho, aur hum dono bas apne ek dusre mein kho gaye ho.

Janu (with a cheeky grin, teasing in her own way):
"AA gayi hoon, gaya pyaar in the car."

Masoom (mockingly, raising an eyebrow):
"Haan, kyun? Tujhe bhikarna hai kya?"

Janu (mocking with a playful tone):
"Aree apni sautan ko thodi toh izzat de na."

Masoom (laughing, with a mischievous look):
"Haan, kyun nahi, didi! Kya lenge aap?"

Mujhe is baat par sach mein hasi aa gayi, jo Janu ko accha nahi laga. Woh uth kar mere paas aayi aur meri goad mein baith gayi, jaise koi masoom si ladki apne pyaar ko apne paas chahti ho. Uska yeh jazba dekh kar mere dil mein ek ajeeb si feeling uthti hai, jaise sab kuch thoda aur pyaara ho gaya ho.

Dev (surprised, with a gentle smile):
"Aare, yeh kya?"

Janu (teasing softly, her eyes sparkling with mischief):
"Muh kholo, jaldi!"

Dev (laughing lightly, with a twinkle in his eyes):
"Aaaaaaaaaawwwww...."

Usne ek shahi paneer aur tandoori roti ka tukda mere muh mein daal diya, jaise woh pyaar bhari baat ho jo sirf dono samajh sakein. Waise, woh khaana sach mein bohot tasty tha. Samne rakha hua aur bhi paani laa raha tha muh mein, har bite ke saath uska pyaar aur mehsoos ho raha tha. Har tukde mein ek nayi khushboo thi, jaise pyaar ki meethaai.

Maine Janu ka haath pakda, aur uski ungliyon ko pyaar se chus liya. Janu toh jaise iss se zyada khush nahi hui kabhi, uske chehre par ek nayi chamak thi, jaise koi nayi duniya apne saath laaye ho. Uski aankhon mein jo sharmili muskurahat thi, woh mere dil ko chhoo gayi, jaise koi pyaari si baat ho jo hum dono ke beech ho.


Janu (teasing, with a mischievous smile):
"Dekha, kitna pyaar karte hain mujhse! Mere haath se inhe kehna kitna tasty lag raha hai!"

Masoom (making a face, jokingly):
"Accha bana hai paneer toh, lagega nahi!"

Janu (slightly impatient, waiting for a response):
"Aap kuch bolenge ya nahi?"

Dev (grinning, with affection, in a playful tone):
"Waakiye, Janu ki ungliyon mein asli swaad hai... aur khilaoo naa!"

Masoom ne apna paneer hata liya, thoda gussa aur thoda shaayari ke mood mein.

Janu (playfully scolding):
"Masoom, dekh! Majak mat karo, idhar laa!"

Masoom (with a smirk, teasing back):
"Aare, tere ungliyon mein tasty hai toh iska kya kaam hai!"

Dev ne phir se Janu ki ungliyan chusna shuru kar diya, aur Masoom ka gussa wala chehra, jo kaafi dil ko ghayal kar raha tha, usne ignore kiya. Par sach mein, Janu ki ungliyan swadist thi, aur Dev ko unhe chusna accha lag raha tha.

Janu (making a face as she feels the sweetness):
"Uhhh... aaeeee."

Dev (softly, with eyes full of care, asking gently):
"Aare, naraz kyu hoti ho?"

Masoom ne pyaar bhari aankhon se Dev ki taraf dekha, aur uski khoobsurati aur naraazgi dono ki jhalak saaf nazar aa rahi thi.

Dusri table par thodi si jalne wali baat chal rahi thi.

Saloni (thinking to herself, with a hint of jealousy):
"Dekho, kitna pyaar aa raha hai... humein toh pucha hi nahi."

Shikha (in her mind, half-laughing):
"Ab jab tak khud baat nahi karenge, main nahi jaane... bas tumhe satate raho, mujhe!"

Neha (frowning, feeling a bit left out):
"Karwaya sab mere sanikoo, maza le rahi ho Janu... dekho, inhe bhi rulate hain aur yeh Janu ki ungliyan nahi chhod rahe!"

Dev ko lag raha tha ke thoda aur chhupane ki koshish ki toh kahin aag na lag jaye yaha, par usse toh apni pyaari Janu ke saath kaafi maza aa raha tha.

Dev (smiling at the situation, looking around):
"Accha, bb, betho wahan, main aur kuch lekar aata hoon."

Janu (grinning, slightly playful):
"Kya laane jaa rahe ho?"

Dev (with a teasing smile):
"Ice cream... kaunsa flavor logi?"

Janu (excited, eagerly):
"Vanilla."

Dev (lovingly, with a smirk):
"Masoom, baby, tum!"

Masoom (with a playful pout, pretending to be mad):
"Chocolate!"

Dev muskurate hue wahan se ice cream lene gaya, kayi saari flavors le aaya aur sabko pehle dusri table par dene laga.

Dev (handing out ice creams to everyone):
"Sabko ice cream aur kya!"

Riccha (half-annoyed, yet smiling):
"Iski kya zarurat hai, jaaiye wahan, de dijiye."

Dev (laughing, slightly playful):
"Kya, tum bhi pagal wali baatein karti ho! Chalo, lo aur gussa shaant karo."

Neha (with a frown, but a soft smile on the inside):
"Mujhe vanilla dena."

Dev (grinning, teasing her):
"Abbe, Janu ne maggi toh maangi thi, main yeh flavor ek hi laya tha!"

Phir Dev ne Janu ko bhi de diya, sabko de diya, kyunki wo chahta tha ki koi bhi gussa na ho. Table alag thi, lekin sab ko khush karna zaroori tha.

Dev (giving Janu strawberry ice cream):
"Yeh lo."

Janu (surprised, slightly teasing):
"Yeh kyu?"

Dev (with a soft smile):
"Aare, humari pasand ki bhi toh kaho na!"

Masoom (looking at him with a playful expression):
"Mujhe bhi yahi do."

Dev (handing her the ice cream, teasing):
"Yeh lo."

Tabhi wahan Sona aa gayi.

Dev (looking at Sona, curious):
"Tum kaha thi tabse?"

Sona (smiling, with a hint of mischief):
"Washroom gayi thi mai."

Dev (playfully handing her the ice cream):
"Accha, yeh lo."

Sona (excited, tasting it):
"Wow, chocolate flavor! Bahut pasand hai naa aapko?"

Dev Masoom ko dheere se dekh raha tha, aur phir Janu ko. Dono ice cream khate khate ruk gayi thi, lekin Dev ne thoda apna sharmila sa smile diya.

Sona (while eating, happily):
"Accha, kitna dur hai abhi?"

Dev (teasing, but with love):
"Bas 1-2 ghante ka safar aur hai."

Sona โ€“ "Kahan kahin gaya tha?"

Main โ€“ "Haan, kaah liya."

Masoom โ€“ "Accha, aaj kal to bahut kam bol rahe ho."

Main โ€“ "Haan, thoda dieting par hoon naa."

Sona apni chair lekar mere paas aa gayi โ€“ "Pagal ho kya, yeh kaah raha hai!"

Usne itna khilaya ki main bhi nahi sambhal paa raha tha. Phir yeh sab hua, aur lagbhag do ghante mein hum gaon pahunch gaye.

Gaon mein kai saari gaadiyan dekhar sab humari cars ko hi ghur rahe the.

Naye characters:

Gaon ke kuch log:

Madan โ€“ "Gaon mein mithaiyon ki dukaan hai, bahut badi."

Raju โ€“ "Kabhi bachpan mein dost the hum."

Aashu โ€“ "Bachpan ka kaafi achha dost."

Mukhiya โ€“ Mangu Singh

Dr. Ya Jholachhap Doctor โ€“ Hariya Kumar

Aur kuch log wahan baithe the. Mukhiya aur kuch log Dr. Sahab ke saath mandir ke bahar bane chhoti chhatri par baithe the. Gaon mein aisa hi hota hai โ€“ shaam ko zyada tar kisi ke na ho toh pata nahi, humare gaon mein toh hai.

Mukhiya โ€“ "Aare baap re, kaun aaye gaon mein yeh? {Kon aa gaya yahan?}"

Dr. โ€“ "Sayad Rajput ke ghar aayel ho."

Adamai1 โ€“ "Aare haan, suna tha hum, saayad Diwali manane aaye rahe."

Tabhi wahan se ek ladka bhaagta hua aata hai aur ek ghar mein ghus jaata hai. Yeh hai yaha ke zamindar ka ghar.

Zamindar โ€“ Ratan Singh

Roshani โ€“ Ratan ki beti

Giriraj Singh โ€“ Ratan ka beta, zyada tar log isse 'Giri' bulate hain.

Kamala Singh โ€“ Ratan ki biwi

Ladka โ€“ "Maalik woh aa gaye."

Ratan โ€“ "Kon aa gaya bhai?"

Ladka โ€“ "Aare Dev babu aa gaye."

Yeh baat upar khadi Roshani sunati hai aur bhaagi chali jaati hai khidki ke paas aur cars ko guzarata hua dekhati hai.

Giri โ€“ "Aare, kya khabar di hai yeh!"

Giri ek bandal note usse deta hai aur ghar aajata hai.

Asal mein yeh Main, Roshani, Aashu, aur Raju kaafi achhe dost the. Phir dad ke kaam se business badha aur hum sab gaon se chale gaye. Sab aate the ghar par, bas main nahi aata tha, man nahi karta tha. Mujhe bhi sheher ki hawa lag gayi thi, aur sach kahu toh gaon mein log bahut chipakne wale hote hain. Tab lagta tha ki jaise sheher mein aakar sukoon mil raha ho.

Hum sab ghar pahuch gaye. Main car se utara hi tha, Masoom ke saath, ki maa aur chachiya aur gaon ki kuch auratein kadhi thi. Maa humari aarti karne lagi. Halaki shaadi toh sabki hui thi, par kya karein, Masoom ke is halat mein hai. Ab nagada toh pit nahi sakta tha. Bhai aaye aur meri dusri biwiyon ki muh dikhaayi ki, phir sab traditions, riti-riwaj, jo sab jaante hain, unko sabne nibhaya. Lote ko laat maaro, andar jao. Baaki sab main toh shanti se jakar sofe par baith gaya.

Main aaram farma raha tha, tabhi gate par mujhe ek ladka apni umar ka dikhai diya, par main pehchaan nahi paaya. Uske kapde kaafi ameer lag rahe the.

Woh seedha mere paas aa gaya.

Giri โ€“ "Dev, kahaan hai?"

Main hairaan tha, ek banda mujhse mera pata puch raha tha.

Main โ€“ "Kyun, kya kaam hai?"

Giri โ€“ "Bata dijiye sir, bahut din ho gaye hain uss se mile hue. Woh toh bhool gaya hai mujhe, par main nahi bhula."

Main โ€“ "Accha, kya lagta hai aapko?"

Giri โ€“ "Mera yaari hai bachpan ka, woh saath mein bahut maza kiye hain humne."

Main khada hokar uske gale lag gaya.

Giri โ€“ "Arre, kya hua aapko? Sir, kya hua? Bata dijiye na, woh bhodu kahaan hai?"

Main alag ho gaya usse.

Main โ€“ "Bhodu, kya matlab?"

Giri โ€“ "Aare, aapne toh dekha hoga, shukha sa hai, aapki tarah body thodi nahi hai."

Main uske kaan pakad ke kheench liya โ€“ "Kyu be haramkhor, main tujhe shukha hua lagta hoon?"

Giri (darr ke saath) โ€“ "Kya matlab aapka?"

Main โ€“ "Aabbe, main hoon itera Dev!"

Giri โ€“ "Aaaahhh! Abbe, teri ki, kaan toh chhod na!"

Maine uske kaan chhode.

Giri โ€“ "Abe, tu toh bilkul badal gaya, kya baat hai?"

Tabhi piche se dad aate hue bole โ€“ "Aare bhai, shaadi ke laddoo jo kah liye the, ess nai."

Giri โ€“ "Arre, chacha ji, namaste!"

Dad โ€“ "Khush raho beta, aur sab kaise hai ghar par?"

Giri โ€“ "Sab bhadiya hai, aapka ashirwaad hai."

Dad โ€“ "Aare jao Dev, thoda ghum aao, doston ke saath."

Main โ€“ "Ji dad, chal be natakbaaz."

Hum dono hasate hue ghar se bahar nikalne lage.

Masoom โ€“ "Kahaan jaa rahe ho aap?"

Main โ€“ "Yahi hoon, thoda ghum ke aata hoon apne dost ke saath."

Masoom haath jod kar namaste karti hai aur andar chali jaati hai, aur hum bahar nikalte hain.

Giri โ€“ "Abbe, uss ladki ne aise kyun bulaaya?"

Main โ€“ "Yaar, wohh..."

Giri โ€“ "Bata raha hai ya lagaaun ek!"

Main โ€“ "Yaara, teri bhabhi hai woh."

Giri โ€“ "What?"

Main โ€“ "Aabe, tujhe kya hua?"

Giri โ€“ "Tunne shaadi kar li?"
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