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Nice and beautiful update....UPDATE 166
Maine Dukaanwale ko sikke diye aur uth ke jaane laga
Sanik - maharaj woh ess samaye ess baagiche mai hai
Maharaj - chalo aaj ess ladaki ki manmani khatam kar dunga
Mai bhi dheere dheere unke piche jane laga
Karib kuch hi dur waha sai woh baagicha tha
Waha ki khushboo aur hawa etnai sukoon de rahi thi jab mere muh sai hokar jaa rahi thi merei baalo ko uda rahi thi
Kuch hi samye baad mai bhi waha andar aa gaya
Waha etnai kushi thi joh maine apni zindagi mai aaj tak nahi dekhi aisa aakhir kaya tha waha par
Maine aage badha hi tha ki meri nayi waali talwar mere haath sai takrayi aur mai aage ki taraf gira
Maine jaise hi aage dekha mujhe chaar ladakiya meri taraf dekhati dikhi aur mujhe jaise laga woh ek ho gayi ho
Maine apni aakhe mali aur vapas dekha toh waha ek ladki mujhe abhi bhi dekh rahi meri nazare jab uski aakho sai mili uske aakho pe uske uske baal aa gaye
Yeh toh saloni thi par maine abhi tak uski aakhe dekhi nahi thi par aisa kaya tha uski aakho mei abhi tak unko vapas dekhane ke liye tadap saa raha tha
Par sainiko ke khatpat sai mera dhyaan tuta aur mai utha
Sainik - yeh murkh chal hat yaha sai
Mai - hat toh raha hu utani jagah hai toh waha sai jaa naa
Maharaj - dekh nahi raha mai yaha hu aur raja apne rasate nahi badalate hai balaki unke aage aane waale hat jaate hai
Woh sainik log ko hatane lag gaye aur bahut log waha sai kudh hat gaye
Sainik - abb hat warana marega tuh yehi
Maine apni potali uthayi aur phir niche sai paate wagera saaf kiya aur wahi beth gaya
Maharaj - uth ke phek do ess dusat ko yaha sai
Maine apni talwar aage rakhi - mere khoon ko chunne wala yaha sai maut lekar jaayega
Sainik ek age badah aur mere kandhe pe bhala ghusa diya Aur uske baad usska shareer waha do hisse mai niche pada tha aur waha ki hari ghass laal ho chuki thi
Maharaj piche hata aur apni talwar nikal leta hai
Maharaj - mar do esko abhi yehi yeh mera aadesh hai
Ek sainik sai phir mujhe khich ke maara aur mere pair sai phir ek khoon ki dhaar nikali
Maine talwar phek ke maari aur uske saath ek saink bhi piche jakr baagiche ke darwaaze ke upper taang gaya
Maharaj - kon hai tuh dusat esske liye pachatayega tuh
Bahar sai aur saink aane lage aur aage waale meri taraf aane lage aur maharaj piche jakar apna kavach pehanane laga
Tabhi mere paas aate hue saink hawa maine bane bawandar mai udd gaye
Par kaiyi aur pheke hathiyaro mai sai do hathiyar mere ko lage
Aur do aur jagah sai mere shareer sai khoon aane laga
Aur yeh hote hi mere shareer pe har ek ghaav pe ek alag haath tha maine dhar udhar dekha toh char ladakiye mere ghaav ko dhak rahi thi
Saloni - tum tino pakade rehana
Ek haath sai saloni mere ghav ko daba rahi thi aur dusare haath sai kisi tarah ke jadu sai unn logo ko roak rahi thi are woh nahi balki baaki tino bhi aisa hi kar rahi thi
Mai - aap log pareshan na ho mai thik
Saloni - ohh abb mai aur dere enhe nahi sambhal paaungi
Tabhi dusari taraf sai ek tir aur aur mai bacha par woh teer piche kadi saloni ko lag gaya
Ek baar phir aisa hua aur ess baar ek dusari ladaki ghyaal aur phir tisari phir chauthi
Mai kudh ko bacha raha tha par woh ghayal ho rahi thi
Mai kada hua - aap log hate yaha sai
Maine unn sabko hataya aur talwar uthane ko hua ki woh purani karidi hui talwar mere haatho sai chipak gayi abb kaya kyu sochane kaa samaye nahi thaa mere paas mai aage ki taraf badha aur unn logo ko katane laga khoon ki bunde kabhi mere muh mai jaati kabhi meri aakho mai aur yeh talwar jab kisi ko lagati uss mai sai ek nili roshani nikalti aur samane wala mar jata
Mai aage badh raha tha aur kisi ko kaat ke ped ke upper phek raha kisi ko pass ke talab mai talab aisa ho gaya tha jaise yaha khooni samundar ban gaya ho
Tabhi samane woh Maharaj kuch karne wala thaa
Saloni - bhaag jaao yaha sai hat jaao waha sai
Maharaj nai mere taraf ek talwar pheki joh ek aag kaa dragon jaisa ban gaya aur mai talwar kas ke pakad raha thaa ki koi bhaut bada saa mere samane kadha hua woh dragon usse laga aur gayab ho gaya
Maharaj ke haath sai talwaar gir gayi
Maharaj niche ghutane pe beth gaya - mahashaitaan ji aap yaha
Mahashaitaan - tuh mere bheje hue ko aise shakti sai maarega toh mai kaya dekhata rahunga
Maharaj - yeh ladaka aapka bheja hua hai hume nahi pata tha sach mai
Mahashaitaan - haa tere etnai logo ko marane wala mere alawa ess duniya mai kon ho sakata hai
Maharaj - haa yaa toh aap ho sakate hai yaa aapka koi bheja hua aapka saahgird
Mahashaitaan - eske andar wahi sab hai joh ek alage mahashaitaan mai ho sakate hai aage sai ess mera saahgird nahi naya mahashaitaan samajhana
Maharaj - ji jaisa aap kahe maine suna yeh ladaka meri beti ke pass gaya tha toh mujhe laga ess ladake ke liye meri beti mehal mai nahi aati hai
Mahashaitaan - aisa hai toh teri beti aaj sai eski hui harami ke pilli esspar tujhe kush hona caahiye ki mere jaisa koi teri beti ko pasand aaya aur tuh usse marane chala aaya
Maharaj - par mujhe nahi pata tha naa
Mahashaitaan - abb pata chal gaya naa chal hata logo ko yaha sai
Mahashaitaan nai apna shareer chhota kiya aur apne haath mai kuch bola aur kuch aage ki taraf pheka aur woh baagicha phir sai ekdum sundar ho gaya pehale jaisa
Woh phir mere pass aya
Mahashaitaan - tuh toh chhotu se bache ki tarah lada raha aise logo kaa mere pass jada kaam hota nahi samajha
Mai apna ghaav pakad ke - en akal ke paidalo ko kon samajhaye ki enki baap ki jagah nahi joh kisi ko kahi sai hata dene
Mahashaitaan mere shir ko side mai karke - kaya baat 4 ladakiya kaya mili tere muh sai gaali abb ek padhe likhe ke jaise nikal rahi hai
Mai - kaya be bina baat time mat kaharab kar yeh potali pakad unn charo kaa shir hai esmai aage kaa kaam bata
Mahashaitaan woh potali utha ke - chal abhi tuh apni enn charo ko sambhal aur mai apne ess saman ko
Woh muda tha potali lekar
Mai - woh talwar de usmai ek joh padi hai
Mahashaitaan - tere haath mai hai toh ek
Mai - yeh saali jhandu talwar hai saali choriyo jaise jhatake deti hai aaaaaah eeeeee phir mara saali hat saali
Maine woh talwaar dur phek di
Mahashaitaan mere taraf talwar phek ke - ess liye jahtke kahan nahi jahtke kaha sikh le
Etna bol woh gayab ho gaya mai bhag ke unn charo ke pass gaya
Mai - tum log thik ho naa meri wajah sai yeh sab hua
Woh tino toh mere samne aate hi behosh ho gayi aur saloni mere kandhe pe girati hui
Saloni - jaldi chalo mere ghar lekar warna hum mar jaayenge yeh jeharile teer haai.. etna bol woh bhi behosh hui aur waha ek rath aaya
Maharaj dusare rath sai enko ess rath mai lekar mere piche chalo
Maine charo ko utha ke rath mai rakaha aur bahga diya rath uss maharaj ke rath ke piche
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Saloni - kaya hai yeh talwaar aakhir
Usnai usko saaf kiya toh uska gala hua hisa vapas sai banana chalu ho gaya
Saloni uth aur ek chamkati hui bottle sai kuch nikal ke kapde pe dala aur uss sai saaf kiya toh uska pakane wale hise kaa heera chamakane laga
Saloni usko dhyaan sai dekhati hai - yeh toh kaafi beshkimati heera lag rha kaya yeh ess talwaar ko asia ganda rkah ke kuch chhupana cahata hai aur pehali baar aise mahshaitaan nai kisi ko bheja aise madad karne ko
Aur aise hi samaye bit jata hai aur
Udhar jab meri need khuli yaa kahu meri behosi tuti toh pata chala ki mai kisi makhmali bister par soya tha
Ahh haa kaya hi aram mil raha tha mujhe
Maine aas pass dekha koi nahi tha mai uth ke samane kaa parda hata ke dekha toh waha woh ladaki saloni leti hui kuch dekh rahi kitab jaisa aur side mai kuch bhaut tezz chamak raha tha kaya hai
Mai - yeh kaya chamak raha hai
Saloni ghum ke uth ke - aree aap jaag gaye yeh toh aapki hi talwar hai joh kaafi gandi thi wahi saaf kar diya eska heera bahut anmol hai
Maine jakar usko pakada toh mere andar jaise bijali daud gayi mai piche jakar gira
Saloni bahgati hui mere pass aayi
Saloni - aap thik toh hai naa
Mai - haa par yeh kon si talwar rakh di hai tumnai etna jor kaa jahtaka mara mujhe esnai
Saloni - maine koi talwar nahi rakhi yehi wahi waali hai joh aap laaye saath
Mai - par rasate mai ek ladake ke aage kiya woh mujhe jaan wagera kuch bol rahi thi woh toh ek aage aati hi mar gayi
Saloni mere sai dur hat ke - aisa kaise ho sakata hai ek chudail aise kaise mar sakati hai
Mai jhatt sai kahada ho gaya - kaya woh chudail thi phir mere ko apni jaan kyu bol rahi thi woh
Saloni mujhe upper sai niche dekhati hai
Mai - aisa kaya dekh rahi ho maine kaya galat kaha
Saloni - kuch nahi tum nahi janate kaya ki woh tumhe rijhane ki khosis kar rahi thi taaki tum uske saath woh sab karo aur woh tumhari ruh khich le
Mai - woh sab matalb kaya sab thoda khul ke bataiye
Saloni - mahashaitaan ke saath reh ke woh sab kaa matlab nahi janate kaya
Maine thoda socha aisa kaya woh sab ek toh mai enn jadugaro ki tarah padha likha toh hu nahi bus joh muh mai ata bak deta hu par kabhi kabhi mera dimag etna tezz chalata jaise sab kuch janata hu mai yeh sala woh sab kaya hota joh yeh saloni bata nahi rahi mujhe
Maine ek kapde sai apni talwaar uthayi kyuki jab gandi thi toh sayad maine usse chua nahi thaa mitti ki parat ki wajagh sai aur phir potali uthayi aur waha sai jata hua bolata gaya
Mai - Nasib acha hua toh kabhi naa milenge
Saloni ke tabhi saath ke waha kuch log aaye andar mere jaate hi
Pari - yeh kon tha joh dubra naa milane kaa bol ke gaya
Saloni - kaya pata yaar mujhe mahashaitaan nai bheja thaa
Neha - yaar ess mahashaitaan nai abb lagata yaha har jagah kabza kar rakha hai pata nahi kab koi ess sai chutkara dilayega
Shikha - waise khaas mere sapno kaa rajkumar hi usko maar toh maza aayega
Saloni - maar toh naa paayega mahashaitaan ko koi par kaya pata hara ke bandi bana de toh kuch ho jaaye
Shikha - waise yeh joh abhi gaya kahi tera rajkumar yeh toh naa ban gaya naa bada saja waza ke bheja hai
Saloni - kaya pata woh aise hi aaya ho
Pari - chal kuch bhi mat keh tere yaha ke kapdo aur bister ki khusboo mai janati hu
Saloni - aee kaya kuch bhi bol rahi kapde pehaye bus aur thoda aram kiya bus falatu ki baate mat kar ek baat sun woh joh abhi gaya naa usnai woh sunigufa ki chudail ko maar diya hai
Neha - kaya bakwas kar rahi hai wahi pe thodi dur chaar logo ko bhi koi maar ke gaya unke body ke chhote chhote tukade mile waha
Saloni - woh sayad essi kaa kaam hoga haath bhi kata thaa wahi maine thik kiyaa
Pari - upper wale ka shukar hai ki mahshaitaan ke madad ke badale mai woh humare rajaya ko kuch naa kehate hai par tuh kab tak apne pitaji sai lad ke yaha rehegi tuh yaha ki rajkumari hai
Saloni uske muh ko pakad ke - chhup kar pagal kahi ki bola hai naa yeh baat kabhi kisi sai naa kehana
Shikha - chal chal abb chal rahi kaya pass waale bagiche mai
Saloni - haa thik hai chalo chalo aur pari tuh muh band rakha kar apana
Edhar maine socha kaam ho gaya aram ho gaya thoda yaha ghum liya jaaye
Mai bhi waha ke bazar mai ghus gaya maine samane dekha kuch siphai waha ghum rahe the kuch nahi kaafi jaise kisi ko dudh rahe the
Uske piche sayad unka raja aa raha thaa
Sanik uske paas jata hua - maharaj woh toh yaha nahi hai
Maharaj - dudho kaise bhi karke meri beti ko woh yehi dikhi thi bataya kuch logo nai mujhe
Waise mai bhi saloni sai yehi mila thaa par azeeb hai ki yaha abb mujhe koi pehchan nahi raha kaya kapdo mai etnai takat hai ki woh pehchan badal de
Maine pass ki dukan pe ke ek jagah apni potali rakhi
Mai - jara kuch dena kahane ko
Woh kuch laya mere pass
Mai - yaha yeh sab kaise hangama macha hua hai
Dukandaar - are naye ho kaya yaha
Mai - haa tabhi toh puch raha hu naa
Dukandaar - yeh humare raja hai apni beti ko doodh rahi par acha hai naa mile enhe toh yeh mahashaitaan ke aage jhukana nahi chate par humari rajkumari uski madad karke sabko shuki aur bacha ke rakhati hai
Mai - acha toh woh yehi kyu doodh rahe ho
Dukandaar - are ek kaatil aya tha aaj mahashaitaan kaa ekdum ghatiya saa lag rah thaa ganda khoon me mehakata hua uska hi kuch kaam hoga joh rajkumari nai kiya hoga ess liye raja ko pata chala ki yehi dikhi woh uske saath
Mai - par ek baat batao mahashaitaan kon saa tum logo ko maar rha hai
Dukandaar - are bhai katil toh katil hi rahega naa aaj nahi kal kisi naa kisi ko maar dega ab aap hi batao kisi ko maar dena kon saa acha kaam hai
Mai - paise ache milate honge naa dher saari sone ki muhare sikke sab
Dukandaar - abb aap hi ko le lo baato baato mai 1 sone ke sike jitana kaah liya toh kaya aapka kaya sikka khoon mai thodi dooba hai
Mai - kon jaane kiska sikka kaisa hai hum bus baate kar sakate hai bus
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Maine Dukaanwale ko sikke diye aur uth ke jaane laga
Sanik - maharaj woh ess samaye ess baagiche mai hai
Maharaj - chalo aaj ess ladaki ki manmani khatam kar dunga
Mai bhi dheere dheere unke piche jane laga
Karib kuch hi dur waha sai woh baagicha tha
Waha ki khushboo aur hawa etnai sukoon de rahi thi jab mere muh sai hokar jaa rahi thi merei baalo ko uda rahi thi
Kuch hi samye baad mai bhi waha andar aa gaya
Waha etnai kushi thi joh maine apni zindagi mai aaj tak nahi dekhi aisa aakhir kaya tha waha par
Maine aage badha hi tha ki meri nayi waali talwar mere haath sai takrayi aur mai aage ki taraf gira
Maine jaise hi aage dekha mujhe chaar ladakiya meri taraf dekhati dikhi aur mujhe jaise laga woh ek ho gayi ho
Maine apni aakhe mali aur vapas dekha toh waha ek ladki mujhe abhi bhi dekh rahi meri nazare jab uski aakho sai mili uske aakho pe uske uske baal aa gaye
Yeh toh saloni thi par maine abhi tak uski aakhe dekhi nahi thi par aisa kaya tha uski aakho mei abhi tak unko vapas dekhane ke liye tadap saa raha tha
Par sainiko ke khatpat sai mera dhyaan tuta aur mai utha
Sainik - yeh murkh chal hat yaha sai
Mai - hat toh raha hu utani jagah hai toh waha sai jaa naa
Maharaj - dekh nahi raha mai yaha hu aur raja apne rasate nahi badalate hai balaki unke aage aane waale hat jaate hai
Woh sainik log ko hatane lag gaye aur bahut log waha sai kudh hat gaye
Sainik - abb hat warana marega tuh yehi
Maine apni potali uthayi aur phir niche sai paate wagera saaf kiya aur wahi beth gaya
Maharaj - uth ke phek do ess dusat ko yaha sai
Maine apni talwar aage rakhi - mere khoon ko chunne wala yaha sai maut lekar jaayega
Sainik ek age badah aur mere kandhe pe bhala ghusa diya Aur uske baad usska shareer waha do hisse mai niche pada tha aur waha ki hari ghass laal ho chuki thi
Maharaj piche hata aur apni talwar nikal leta hai
Maharaj - mar do esko abhi yehi yeh mera aadesh hai
Ek sainik sai phir mujhe khich ke maara aur mere pair sai phir ek khoon ki dhaar nikali
Maine talwar phek ke maari aur uske saath ek saink bhi piche jakr baagiche ke darwaaze ke upper taang gaya
Maharaj - kon hai tuh dusat esske liye pachatayega tuh
Bahar sai aur saink aane lage aur aage waale meri taraf aane lage aur maharaj piche jakar apna kavach pehanane laga
Tabhi mere paas aate hue saink hawa maine bane bawandar mai udd gaye
Par kaiyi aur pheke hathiyaro mai sai do hathiyar mere ko lage
Aur do aur jagah sai mere shareer sai khoon aane laga
Aur yeh hote hi mere shareer pe har ek ghaav pe ek alag haath tha maine dhar udhar dekha toh char ladakiye mere ghaav ko dhak rahi thi
Saloni - tum tino pakade rehana
Ek haath sai saloni mere ghav ko daba rahi thi aur dusare haath sai kisi tarah ke jadu sai unn logo ko roak rahi thi are woh nahi balki baaki tino bhi aisa hi kar rahi thi
Mai - aap log pareshan na ho mai thik
Saloni - ohh abb mai aur dere enhe nahi sambhal paaungi
Tabhi dusari taraf sai ek tir aur aur mai bacha par woh teer piche kadi saloni ko lag gaya
Ek baar phir aisa hua aur ess baar ek dusari ladaki ghyaal aur phir tisari phir chauthi
Mai kudh ko bacha raha tha par woh ghayal ho rahi thi
Mai kada hua - aap log hate yaha sai
Maine unn sabko hataya aur talwar uthane ko hua ki woh purani karidi hui talwar mere haatho sai chipak gayi abb kaya kyu sochane kaa samaye nahi thaa mere paas mai aage ki taraf badha aur unn logo ko katane laga khoon ki bunde kabhi mere muh mai jaati kabhi meri aakho mai aur yeh talwar jab kisi ko lagati uss mai sai ek nili roshani nikalti aur samane wala mar jata
Mai aage badh raha tha aur kisi ko kaat ke ped ke upper phek raha kisi ko pass ke talab mai talab aisa ho gaya tha jaise yaha khooni samundar ban gaya ho
Tabhi samane woh Maharaj kuch karne wala thaa
Saloni - bhaag jaao yaha sai hat jaao waha sai
Maharaj nai mere taraf ek talwar pheki joh ek aag kaa dragon jaisa ban gaya aur mai talwar kas ke pakad raha thaa ki koi bhaut bada saa mere samane kadha hua woh dragon usse laga aur gayab ho gaya
Maharaj ke haath sai talwaar gir gayi
Maharaj niche ghutane pe beth gaya - mahashaitaan ji aap yaha
Mahashaitaan - tuh mere bheje hue ko aise shakti sai maarega toh mai kaya dekhata rahunga
Maharaj - yeh ladaka aapka bheja hua hai hume nahi pata tha sach mai
Mahashaitaan - haa tere etnai logo ko marane wala mere alawa ess duniya mai kon ho sakata hai
Maharaj - haa yaa toh aap ho sakate hai yaa aapka koi bheja hua aapka saahgird
Mahashaitaan - eske andar wahi sab hai joh ek alage mahashaitaan mai ho sakate hai aage sai ess mera saahgird nahi naya mahashaitaan samajhana
Maharaj - ji jaisa aap kahe maine suna yeh ladaka meri beti ke pass gaya tha toh mujhe laga ess ladake ke liye meri beti mehal mai nahi aati hai
Mahashaitaan - aisa hai toh teri beti aaj sai eski hui harami ke pilli esspar tujhe kush hona caahiye ki mere jaisa koi teri beti ko pasand aaya aur tuh usse marane chala aaya
Maharaj - par mujhe nahi pata tha naa
Mahashaitaan - abb pata chal gaya naa chal hata logo ko yaha sai
Mahashaitaan nai apna shareer chhota kiya aur apne haath mai kuch bola aur kuch aage ki taraf pheka aur woh baagicha phir sai ekdum sundar ho gaya pehale jaisa
Woh phir mere pass aya
Mahashaitaan - tuh toh chhotu se bache ki tarah lada raha aise logo kaa mere pass jada kaam hota nahi samajha
Mai apna ghaav pakad ke - en akal ke paidalo ko kon samajhaye ki enki baap ki jagah nahi joh kisi ko kahi sai hata dene
Mahashaitaan mere shir ko side mai karke - kaya baat 4 ladakiya kaya mili tere muh sai gaali abb ek padhe likhe ke jaise nikal rahi hai
Mai - kaya be bina baat time mat kaharab kar yeh potali pakad unn charo kaa shir hai esmai aage kaa kaam bata
Mahashaitaan woh potali utha ke - chal abhi tuh apni enn charo ko sambhal aur mai apne ess saman ko
Woh muda tha potali lekar
Mai - woh talwar de usmai ek joh padi hai
Mahashaitaan - tere haath mai hai toh ek
Mai - yeh saali jhandu talwar hai saali choriyo jaise jhatake deti hai aaaaaah eeeeee phir mara saali hat saali
Maine woh talwaar dur phek di
Mahashaitaan mere taraf talwar phek ke - ess liye jahtke kahan nahi jahtke kaha sikh le
Etna bol woh gayab ho gaya mai bhag ke unn charo ke pass gaya
Mai - tum log thik ho naa meri wajah sai yeh sab hua
Woh tino toh mere samne aate hi behosh ho gayi aur saloni mere kandhe pe girati hui
Saloni - jaldi chalo mere ghar lekar warna hum mar jaayenge yeh jeharile teer haai.. etna bol woh bhi behosh hui aur waha ek rath aaya
Maharaj dusare rath sai enko ess rath mai lekar mere piche chalo
Maine charo ko utha ke rath mai rakaha aur bahga diya rath uss maharaj ke rath ke piche
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