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thanks brother ause hi aap bhi entertainment lete rahoSuper update Dev bro.keep writing keep entertaining everyone.
thanks brother ause hi aap bhi entertainment lete rahoSuper update Dev bro.keep writing keep entertaining everyone.
haa bhai ghar waalo sai khaa chupega kuchDev ki sachai sabko pata chalen se dukhi the saab family aur accident unko dukh ki sagar me bhej diya.dev ko ek saal badh ho aya he uska body pura change ho gaya he.amazing update bhai
Superb Update Bhai....UPDATE 6
UDHAR DEV KE GHAR PAR AUR SHAR MAI 1 SAAL MAI KAAFI KHUCH BADAL GAYA
Flashback
Accident ke baad
Aag ki lapte dekh kar forest department's waha aa jata
Officer - ye sab kaya ho rha hai yaha
Devaraj -(rotte hue) Sir hum sab apne bete ko dusre sahar le ja rahe the ilaaz ke liye tabhi accident ho gaya
Officer - woh ladka kaha hai
Devraj - Sir wo van mai tha
Officer - ohh toh wo mar gaya chalo aap sab yaha sai nikalo aur police ko apna kam karne do body mili toh aapko de di jaayegi
Devraj Aur rajesh jaise taise khud ko sambhal ke sab ko utha kar vaha sai ghar nikal jata hai sabki halat bahut kaharab thi
Aur police niche ja kar talash karti hai par unhe keval van ke jale hue parts hi milete hai
Aise hi dev ke janne ke gam mai 6 mahine gujar jate hai kise ko kuch kam karne ka man nahi karta hai
Udhar dev ke kamre mai do ladkiyan dev Ke photo seene sai laga kar roo rahi hai
Pari /neha - kyu chhodkar chale gaye aap dekho naa kaya haal ho gaya hai aap ki behno ka hey bhagawan aap nai aisa ku kiya
Niche haal mai
Visvaash - bhaiya aap kab tak aise rahenge hamare businesses mai bahut loss ho gaya hai aur to aur vo hamari chemicals ki factory usse deendyal nai kabza li hai ...
Suraj - ...................
Visvash - aise chup rahene sai kuch nhi hoga kuch to bolo
Suraj - ab paise kama kar kaya karenge jab mera hi nhi rha
Devraj - beta kam sai kam apni ladakio ke bare mai to soch
Suraj - thik hai pita ji par
Devraj - par var kuch nayi abb nayi shuruwaat to karani padegi abb
Suraj - ji pita ji
Tabhi saloni school sai vaapas aati hai woo dev sai do saal badi thi aur ess saal 12th mai Ayi
Saloni - papa aaj phir uss nai meri beizzati ki aur dhamki de raha hai ki agar maine uss sai sadi ke liye haa nahi ki to voo mere saath galat karega(aur woo rote hue apne room mai chali jaati hai )
Devraj- esska kuch karana padega humari beti ko akela samajh raha dev nahi toh kay hua abhi usska pura pariwar hai yaha pe
Present time
Masoom aur dev dono Delhi airport par pahuch jaate hai dono ek car mai rawana ho jate par dev ke deemag mai khuch chal rha tha
Dev ki jagah abb mai likhunga
Mai- thanks yaar
Masoom - thanks ki jagah agar burra na lage too
Mai - ya befikar ho kar bolo
Masoom - be friends
Mai bhi haath mila kar - ya friends
Achanak mere sir mai kuch dard saa hua
Aur Mujhe kuch dikhane saa laga jaise mai sapne mi ho
Mere same ek sadhu jaisa koi tha
Sadhu - abb apne dimag ko majboot kake man ki shakti sai ess ped ko todo
mai akhe band karke hath aage karata hu aur ped ukhad jata hai
Phir mere aakhe khul gayi
Masoom ghabra ke - kaya hua
Mai - kuch nahi saayd jab mai van sai gira thaa chhot ki wajagh sai ho raha hai
Khuch time baad hum ek bade sai ghar ke bahar khade the
Bell ringing ...................................
Gate opened
Dhiksha purohit - masoom ki mami
Rajveer purohit - masoom ke mama
Rajani/ sandy purohit - dhiksha ki beti aur beta
Dhiksha - are choti tuh aa gayi
Masoom - haa mami
Dhiksha - ye handsome kon hai
Masoom -mera boyfriend
Ye masoom kya bol rahai hai
Dhiksha- accha sida ghar hi lekar aa gayi
Masoom - ab gate par hi puri news banaogi kya
Dhiksha - arre sorry sorry chalo andar chalo luch laga hai
Masoom - aur haa mami ye bus ek friend hai mai majaak kar rahi thi
Mere ab jaan mai jaan ayyi
Dhiksha- mujhe pata hai chal ye sab chhod khanna kah lo
Khanna khane ke baad vo log mujhe ek room de dete hai aur mai bed par let jata hu
Mai - yaar ye sab kaise ho gaya aur apne bare mai aur woh sadhu ke baare mai soch ke need aa gayi mujhe
Sham ko Masoom nai mujhe jagaya
Mai - kaya hai didi sone do naa
Masoom - ab uth jaoo or coffee pe lo
Mai - oh sorry masoom
Masoom - koi baat nahi
Mai- wase tum kaya karogi
Masoom - kal school janna hai
Mai - kon sai school mai padati ho
Masoom - JSD school mai
Mai - what a coincident mai bhi essi mai pahadta hu matalab thaa
Masoom- wow ab maja aayega
Mai - kyu kaya ho gaya
Masoom - kyu ki tumhare jaisa friend jo hoga mere sath
Mai - par mai to 10th mai hu
Masoom -yaar mujhe nahi pta tumhare sath kaya hua hai par tumhari age ke hisaab sai tumhe 10 mai padanna ajjeb hoaga
Tabhi mujhe khuch yad aata hai
Mai - masoom apana phone denna
Masoom - yeh loo
Phir mai apana Fb account khol kar
Mai - this is my real face
Masoom - are ye to saloni ka bhai hai
Usske muh sai apni bhen kaa naam sun kar mai hil jaata hu
Mai - tum meri didi ko kaise janati ho
Masoom - ye meri friend hai are are kahi tum usske bhai to nahi ho
Mai - ha mai vahi hu par kuch jada hi coincidence nahi yeh
Masoom- woh woh mujhe kaya pata par etna kaise badal gaye tum
Mai - esska too pata mujhe bhi lagana hai par tum mere baare mai kaise janati ho maine to tumhe phele kabhi nhi dhekha
Masoom - maine 11 th mai addmission liya tha picchale saal
Mai - phir kaise
Masoom - saloni tumhari photo le kar roti rahati hai tabhi dekha tha
Mai - kaas mere ghar wale mujhe pehchan le
Masoom - Uss sai phele tumhe saloni ki madad karani hogi
Mai - kaya matalb
Masoom - usse koi preshaan kar raha hai
Mai ghusse mi- kon hai woh usski etni himmat
Masoom- koi vikky singhal hain
Mai- kya kha vikky singhal
Masoom-- haa yahi naam hai uska
Mai- ess baar mai usse sach mi maar dunga
Masoom meri aakho mai dhekh hue
- Tumhari eyes ko kya hua
Mai- kaya hua meri eyes ko
Masoom - ye to golden color ki ho gayi hai
Mai- - kaya bakwas kar rahi hoo
Masoom mirror meri taraf karate hue - ye loo khud dhek loo
Mai - yaar sab kaya hoo raha hai mere sath phele woh sadhu abb yeh
Masoom - sadhu matalab aur kahi tumhare andar super natural powers to nahi hai
Mai - mujhe khuch nahi pta kaya hai yeh sab
Masoom- aisa karoo tum hamare sath addmission le loo
Mai - uski kaya jarurat hai
Masoom- are tumhare upar murder case hai
Mai-kiska
Masoom - tumne kisi ladki ko bachane ke liye kisi ko mar diya tha
Mai - mai to bhul hi gya tha wasse tum kaafi intelligent hoo aur lagata nahi tum mujhe nahi janati
Masoom - mai tumhe nahi janati mai toh saloni ke bhai ko janati hu mujhe kaya pata jisko ek saal sai maine bacha ke rakaha woh wahi hai
Mai - araam sai araam sai etna explanation toh mat do
Masoom- woh sab chhodo aur woh mla ka ladaka tha
Mai - aree teri ki ab to mujhe apani identity chupani hogi tum apane sath mera addmission kara do please please etnai help aur karo

Dev ko power mil gaya he.wo apna badla lega aur apni pariwar ko bachayegaa.amazing updateUPDATE 6
UDHAR DEV KE GHAR PAR AUR SHAR MAI 1 SAAL MAI KAAFI KHUCH BADAL GAYA
Flashback
Accident ke baad
Aag ki lapte dekh kar forest department's waha aa jata
Officer - ye sab kaya ho rha hai yaha
Devaraj -(rotte hue) Sir hum sab apne bete ko dusre sahar le ja rahe the ilaaz ke liye tabhi accident ho gaya
Officer - woh ladka kaha hai
Devraj - Sir wo van mai tha
Officer - ohh toh wo mar gaya chalo aap sab yaha sai nikalo aur police ko apna kam karne do body mili toh aapko de di jaayegi
Devraj Aur rajesh jaise taise khud ko sambhal ke sab ko utha kar vaha sai ghar nikal jata hai sabki halat bahut kaharab thi
Aur police niche ja kar talash karti hai par unhe keval van ke jale hue parts hi milete hai
Aise hi dev ke janne ke gam mai 6 mahine gujar jate hai kise ko kuch kam karne ka man nahi karta hai
Udhar dev ke kamre mai do ladkiyan dev Ke photo seene sai laga kar roo rahi hai
Pari /neha - kyu chhodkar chale gaye aap dekho naa kaya haal ho gaya hai aap ki behno ka hey bhagawan aap nai aisa ku kiya
Niche haal mai
Visvaash - bhaiya aap kab tak aise rahenge hamare businesses mai bahut loss ho gaya hai aur to aur vo hamari chemicals ki factory usse deendyal nai kabza li hai ...
Suraj - ...................
Visvash - aise chup rahene sai kuch nhi hoga kuch to bolo
Suraj - ab paise kama kar kaya karenge jab mera hi nhi rha
Devraj - beta kam sai kam apni ladakio ke bare mai to soch
Suraj - thik hai pita ji par
Devraj - par var kuch nayi abb nayi shuruwaat to karani padegi abb
Suraj - ji pita ji
Tabhi saloni school sai vaapas aati hai woo dev sai do saal badi thi aur ess saal 12th mai Ayi
Saloni - papa aaj phir uss nai meri beizzati ki aur dhamki de raha hai ki agar maine uss sai sadi ke liye haa nahi ki to voo mere saath galat karega(aur woo rote hue apne room mai chali jaati hai )
Devraj- esska kuch karana padega humari beti ko akela samajh raha dev nahi toh kay hua abhi usska pura pariwar hai yaha pe
Present time
Masoom aur dev dono Delhi airport par pahuch jaate hai dono ek car mai rawana ho jate par dev ke deemag mai khuch chal rha tha
Dev ki jagah abb mai likhunga
Mai- thanks yaar
Masoom - thanks ki jagah agar burra na lage too
Mai - ya befikar ho kar bolo
Masoom - be friends
Mai bhi haath mila kar - ya friends
Achanak mere sir mai kuch dard saa hua
Aur Mujhe kuch dikhane saa laga jaise mai sapne mi ho
Mere same ek sadhu jaisa koi tha
Sadhu - abb apne dimag ko majboot kake man ki shakti sai ess ped ko todo
mai akhe band karke hath aage karata hu aur ped ukhad jata hai
Phir mere aakhe khul gayi
Masoom ghabra ke - kaya hua
Mai - kuch nahi saayd jab mai van sai gira thaa chhot ki wajagh sai ho raha hai
Khuch time baad hum ek bade sai ghar ke bahar khade the
Bell ringing ...................................
Gate opened
Dhiksha purohit - masoom ki mami
Rajveer purohit - masoom ke mama
Rajani/ sandy purohit - dhiksha ki beti aur beta
Dhiksha - are choti tuh aa gayi
Masoom - haa mami
Dhiksha - ye handsome kon hai
Masoom -mera boyfriend
Ye masoom kya bol rahai hai
Dhiksha- accha sida ghar hi lekar aa gayi
Masoom - ab gate par hi puri news banaogi kya
Dhiksha - arre sorry sorry chalo andar chalo luch laga hai
Masoom - aur haa mami ye bus ek friend hai mai majaak kar rahi thi
Mere ab jaan mai jaan ayyi
Dhiksha- mujhe pata hai chal ye sab chhod khanna kah lo
Khanna khane ke baad vo log mujhe ek room de dete hai aur mai bed par let jata hu
Mai - yaar ye sab kaise ho gaya aur apne bare mai aur woh sadhu ke baare mai soch ke need aa gayi mujhe
Sham ko Masoom nai mujhe jagaya
Mai - kaya hai didi sone do naa
Masoom - ab uth jaoo or coffee pe lo
Mai - oh sorry masoom
Masoom - koi baat nahi
Mai- wase tum kaya karogi
Masoom - kal school janna hai
Mai - kon sai school mai padati ho
Masoom - JSD school mai
Mai - what a coincident mai bhi essi mai pahadta hu matalab thaa
Masoom- wow ab maja aayega
Mai - kyu kaya ho gaya
Masoom - kyu ki tumhare jaisa friend jo hoga mere sath
Mai - par mai to 10th mai hu
Masoom -yaar mujhe nahi pta tumhare sath kaya hua hai par tumhari age ke hisaab sai tumhe 10 mai padanna ajjeb hoaga
Tabhi mujhe khuch yad aata hai
Mai - masoom apana phone denna
Masoom - yeh loo
Phir mai apana Fb account khol kar
Mai - this is my real face
Masoom - are ye to saloni ka bhai hai
Usske muh sai apni bhen kaa naam sun kar mai hil jaata hu
Mai - tum meri didi ko kaise janati ho
Masoom - ye meri friend hai are are kahi tum usske bhai to nahi ho
Mai - ha mai vahi hu par kuch jada hi coincidence nahi yeh
Masoom- woh woh mujhe kaya pata par etna kaise badal gaye tum
Mai - esska too pata mujhe bhi lagana hai par tum mere baare mai kaise janati ho maine to tumhe phele kabhi nhi dhekha
Masoom - maine 11 th mai addmission liya tha picchale saal
Mai - phir kaise
Masoom - saloni tumhari photo le kar roti rahati hai tabhi dekha tha
Mai - kaas mere ghar wale mujhe pehchan le
Masoom - Uss sai phele tumhe saloni ki madad karani hogi
Mai - kaya matalb
Masoom - usse koi preshaan kar raha hai
Mai ghusse mi- kon hai woh usski etni himmat
Masoom- koi vikky singhal hain
Mai- kya kha vikky singhal
Masoom-- haa yahi naam hai uska
Mai- ess baar mai usse sach mi maar dunga
Masoom meri aakho mai dhekh hue
- Tumhari eyes ko kya hua
Mai- kaya hua meri eyes ko
Masoom - ye to golden color ki ho gayi hai
Mai- - kaya bakwas kar rahi hoo
Masoom mirror meri taraf karate hue - ye loo khud dhek loo
Mai - yaar sab kaya hoo raha hai mere sath phele woh sadhu abb yeh
Masoom - sadhu matalab aur kahi tumhare andar super natural powers to nahi hai
Mai - mujhe khuch nahi pta kaya hai yeh sab
Masoom- aisa karoo tum hamare sath addmission le loo
Mai - uski kaya jarurat hai
Masoom- are tumhare upar murder case hai
Mai-kiska
Masoom - tumne kisi ladki ko bachane ke liye kisi ko mar diya tha
Mai - mai to bhul hi gya tha wasse tum kaafi intelligent hoo aur lagata nahi tum mujhe nahi janati
Masoom - mai tumhe nahi janati mai toh saloni ke bhai ko janati hu mujhe kaya pata jisko ek saal sai maine bacha ke rakaha woh wahi hai
Mai - araam sai araam sai etna explanation toh mat do
Masoom- woh sab chhodo aur woh mla ka ladaka tha
Mai - aree teri ki ab to mujhe apani identity chupani hogi tum apane sath mera addmission kara do please please etnai help aur karo
Awesome UpdateUPDATE 6
UDHAR DEV KE GHAR PAR AUR SHAR MAI 1 SAAL MAI KAAFI KHUCH BADAL GAYA
Flashback
Accident ke baad
Aag ki lapte dekh kar forest department's waha aa jata
Officer - ye sab kaya ho rha hai yaha
Devaraj -(rotte hue) Sir hum sab apne bete ko dusre sahar le ja rahe the ilaaz ke liye tabhi accident ho gaya
Officer - woh ladka kaha hai
Devraj - Sir wo van mai tha
Officer - ohh toh wo mar gaya chalo aap sab yaha sai nikalo aur police ko apna kam karne do body mili toh aapko de di jaayegi
Devraj Aur rajesh jaise taise khud ko sambhal ke sab ko utha kar vaha sai ghar nikal jata hai sabki halat bahut kaharab thi
Aur police niche ja kar talash karti hai par unhe keval van ke jale hue parts hi milete hai
Aise hi dev ke janne ke gam mai 6 mahine gujar jate hai kise ko kuch kam karne ka man nahi karta hai
Udhar dev ke kamre mai do ladkiyan dev Ke photo seene sai laga kar roo rahi hai
Pari /neha - kyu chhodkar chale gaye aap dekho naa kaya haal ho gaya hai aap ki behno ka hey bhagawan aap nai aisa ku kiya
Niche haal mai
Visvaash - bhaiya aap kab tak aise rahenge hamare businesses mai bahut loss ho gaya hai aur to aur vo hamari chemicals ki factory usse deendyal nai kabza li hai ...
Suraj - ...................
Visvash - aise chup rahene sai kuch nhi hoga kuch to bolo
Suraj - ab paise kama kar kaya karenge jab mera hi nhi rha
Devraj - beta kam sai kam apni ladakio ke bare mai to soch
Suraj - thik hai pita ji par
Devraj - par var kuch nayi abb nayi shuruwaat to karani padegi abb
Suraj - ji pita ji
Tabhi saloni school sai vaapas aati hai woo dev sai do saal badi thi aur ess saal 12th mai Ayi
Saloni - papa aaj phir uss nai meri beizzati ki aur dhamki de raha hai ki agar maine uss sai sadi ke liye haa nahi ki to voo mere saath galat karega(aur woo rote hue apne room mai chali jaati hai )
Devraj- esska kuch karana padega humari beti ko akela samajh raha dev nahi toh kay hua abhi usska pura pariwar hai yaha pe
Present time
Masoom aur dev dono Delhi airport par pahuch jaate hai dono ek car mai rawana ho jate par dev ke deemag mai khuch chal rha tha
Dev ki jagah abb mai likhunga
Mai- thanks yaar
Masoom - thanks ki jagah agar burra na lage too
Mai - ya befikar ho kar bolo
Masoom - be friends
Mai bhi haath mila kar - ya friends
Achanak mere sir mai kuch dard saa hua
Aur Mujhe kuch dikhane saa laga jaise mai sapne mi ho
Mere same ek sadhu jaisa koi tha
Sadhu - abb apne dimag ko majboot kake man ki shakti sai ess ped ko todo
mai akhe band karke hath aage karata hu aur ped ukhad jata hai
Phir mere aakhe khul gayi
Masoom ghabra ke - kaya hua
Mai - kuch nahi saayd jab mai van sai gira thaa chhot ki wajagh sai ho raha hai
Khuch time baad hum ek bade sai ghar ke bahar khade the
Bell ringing ...................................
Gate opened
Dhiksha purohit - masoom ki mami
Rajveer purohit - masoom ke mama
Rajani/ sandy purohit - dhiksha ki beti aur beta
Dhiksha - are choti tuh aa gayi
Masoom - haa mami
Dhiksha - ye handsome kon hai
Masoom -mera boyfriend
Ye masoom kya bol rahai hai
Dhiksha- accha sida ghar hi lekar aa gayi
Masoom - ab gate par hi puri news banaogi kya
Dhiksha - arre sorry sorry chalo andar chalo luch laga hai
Masoom - aur haa mami ye bus ek friend hai mai majaak kar rahi thi
Mere ab jaan mai jaan ayyi
Dhiksha- mujhe pata hai chal ye sab chhod khanna kah lo
Khanna khane ke baad vo log mujhe ek room de dete hai aur mai bed par let jata hu
Mai - yaar ye sab kaise ho gaya aur apne bare mai aur woh sadhu ke baare mai soch ke need aa gayi mujhe
Sham ko Masoom nai mujhe jagaya
Mai - kaya hai didi sone do naa
Masoom - ab uth jaoo or coffee pe lo
Mai - oh sorry masoom
Masoom - koi baat nahi
Mai- wase tum kaya karogi
Masoom - kal school janna hai
Mai - kon sai school mai padati ho
Masoom - JSD school mai
Mai - what a coincident mai bhi essi mai pahadta hu matalab thaa
Masoom- wow ab maja aayega
Mai - kyu kaya ho gaya
Masoom - kyu ki tumhare jaisa friend jo hoga mere sath
Mai - par mai to 10th mai hu
Masoom -yaar mujhe nahi pta tumhare sath kaya hua hai par tumhari age ke hisaab sai tumhe 10 mai padanna ajjeb hoaga
Tabhi mujhe khuch yad aata hai
Mai - masoom apana phone denna
Masoom - yeh loo
Phir mai apana Fb account khol kar
Mai - this is my real face
Masoom - are ye to saloni ka bhai hai
Usske muh sai apni bhen kaa naam sun kar mai hil jaata hu
Mai - tum meri didi ko kaise janati ho
Masoom - ye meri friend hai are are kahi tum usske bhai to nahi ho
Mai - ha mai vahi hu par kuch jada hi coincidence nahi yeh
Masoom- woh woh mujhe kaya pata par etna kaise badal gaye tum
Mai - esska too pata mujhe bhi lagana hai par tum mere baare mai kaise janati ho maine to tumhe phele kabhi nhi dhekha
Masoom - maine 11 th mai addmission liya tha picchale saal
Mai - phir kaise
Masoom - saloni tumhari photo le kar roti rahati hai tabhi dekha tha
Mai - kaas mere ghar wale mujhe pehchan le
Masoom - Uss sai phele tumhe saloni ki madad karani hogi
Mai - kaya matalb
Masoom - usse koi preshaan kar raha hai
Mai ghusse mi- kon hai woh usski etni himmat
Masoom- koi vikky singhal hain
Mai- kya kha vikky singhal
Masoom-- haa yahi naam hai uska
Mai- ess baar mai usse sach mi maar dunga
Masoom meri aakho mai dhekh hue
- Tumhari eyes ko kya hua
Mai- kaya hua meri eyes ko
Masoom - ye to golden color ki ho gayi hai
Mai- - kaya bakwas kar rahi hoo
Masoom mirror meri taraf karate hue - ye loo khud dhek loo
Mai - yaar sab kaya hoo raha hai mere sath phele woh sadhu abb yeh
Masoom - sadhu matalab aur kahi tumhare andar super natural powers to nahi hai
Mai - mujhe khuch nahi pta kaya hai yeh sab
Masoom- aisa karoo tum hamare sath addmission le loo
Mai - uski kaya jarurat hai
Masoom- are tumhare upar murder case hai
Mai-kiska
Masoom - tumne kisi ladki ko bachane ke liye kisi ko mar diya tha
Mai - mai to bhul hi gya tha wasse tum kaafi intelligent hoo aur lagata nahi tum mujhe nahi janati
Masoom - mai tumhe nahi janati mai toh saloni ke bhai ko janati hu mujhe kaya pata jisko ek saal sai maine bacha ke rakaha woh wahi hai
Mai - araam sai araam sai etna explanation toh mat do
Masoom- woh sab chhodo aur woh mla ka ladaka tha
Mai - aree teri ki ab to mujhe apani identity chupani hogi tum apane sath mera addmission kara do please please etnai help aur karo
CONGRATULATIONS bhai purani kahani ko nayi tarah se shuru kerne k liye
Hello old aur new readers Meri yeh first story thi aur Jab maine xossip pe chalu ki phir thoda bhaut jada hi jaldi baazi yaa aur problems ki wajah sai maine logo ki sun ke jaha xossip pe band hui wahi sai aage chalu kar di jis sai old naa mil paane ke wajagh sai meri story yaha ess forum pe kharab hoti chali gayi kyu ki naye readers ko bhi confusion aur pdf nahi milata sahi sai aur yaha uss time forum pe kuch issue tha toh maine jaldi mai woh sab end hi kiya par saayd uss sai bahut log naraz hue phir maine socha aage kaa kabhi start karunga toh thik sai likhunga par purna phir sab mangane lag jaayenge ess liye maine woh saari thread private karke yeh nayi thread banayi jaha shuru sai end tak hogi
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Thank You
Bahot khoobUPDATE 1
Mausam mai thodi si nami thi saayad kal raat halki si barish padi thi par abb Time tha sooraj (sun) ka Ki woh apni roshani sai bata sake Ki aakhir subah ho chuki hai
Hazaro building ke piche ek aalishan saa ghar tha
Ess ghar mai naa kamro ki kami thi naa naa gaadi yoo Ki aur logo Ki puchiye mat kyuki yaha ek bhaut bada pariwar rehata hai
Essi ghar ke room mai jaha kuch ansuna andekha saa hoo raha tha
Aurat - are beta abb uth ja dekh 7 bej gaye hai tuh late ho jayega
Ladka angdayi leta hua - kaya hai kyu pareshan kar rahi ho apna kam karo
Aurat- school nahi jana kaya
Ladka -tujhe jada fikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai chali jaa yaha sai
Uss aurat ke akho mai aashu aa jate hai yeh sun kar
Use nai phir sai uss ladake ko hilaya toh use nai haath jatak diya
Aurat [rotte hu vaha sai chhali jaati hai ]
Kuch der baad Ladaka utth kar beth jata ha aur (man mai) yaar ye subah subah kaya
bakwaas laga rakha hai chal beta utth ja ab to nicche bhi mari jayegi phir vo uth kar fresh hota hai aur niche breakfast ke liye ja rha tha tabhi
Chhaaataak ek karara tappad usse pada
Ladaka picche mud kar teri ma ki ..... aur baaki ke sab muh mai hi rah jate hai
Ladki - tune mom ko kaya kha hai jaldi bata
Ladka - yar tum log picha ku nahi chhodate har time mere naak mai dum kar ke rakahte ho
Ladki -kaya kaha tunne hum sab tere dushman todi hai
Ladka - tum sab ek hi jese ho aur tum to kuch jada hi apne aap ko maharani samajhti ho ab jao yaha sai mera mood na kharab karo
Ladki. ---(ye bhi roote hue yaha sai nikal jati hai )
Phir woh ladaka jakar breakfast table par beth jata hai Sab (Family) dining table par ussi ko ghur rahe the
Ladaka- yaha koi mela laga hai kaya jo sab ke sab joker dekhnai bethe ho kahana khalo
Par koi kuch nahi bola
Woh ladaka uthata hua - chhodo mai hi chala jaata hu kahte raho aram sai
Woh apna bag leta hai aur waha sai apne school nikal jata hai ( Yeh koi aur
nhi hamre hero hai Dev Rajput hai ) Par sayad aaj eska ek aur kaharab din tha school ke gate par kuch ladke kadhe hai
Ladka1st - Dhekho be aa gaya fatu
Ladaka 2nd - abe ye fatu nahi darpok bhi hai
Tabhi ek ladki aati hai aur jor ka tapad use mar deti are dev ko nahi Ladaka 2nd ko
Esska naam hai komal
abb yeh kyu yaha hai aur kaya hai yeh khudh hi bata degi
Komal - tumhari himmat kaise hu ase baat karnne ki
Ladka 1st yaar chhod na komal kyu ess ke liye hume kyu pareshan kar rahi hai
Komal - aap jaante ho phir bhi tum chaloo dev Par dev komal ko andhekha kar ke
Muh niche kar ke waha sai sidha class mai chala Jata hai
Ladaka 1st - Sam
Ladaka 2nd - Rajeev
Sam - dekh dekh abhi bhi tujh sai bina bole chala gaya
Komal sam ko roak ke - bus bhaiya jaane bhi do
In class room
Dev - Are akash kaya haal hai
Akash - sab mast tu bata yaar
Dev - bus apna to tuh janata hi hai na
Aur dev ka shir nicche ho jata hai
Akash - yaar tu uss ke baare mai jada na socha kar
Dev - tuh thik kehata hai yaar ab teri baat maan kar to maine ghar par bhi drama shuru kar diya hai par yaar mujhe bahut bura lagata hai ase sab ko irritate ignore beizzat karna aur mom ko esse bolna to khuch jada hi bura lagata hai bhai
Akash- yaar ab kar bhi kaya sakate hai bus too yaar ghar sai nikal jaa
Dev - yaar ye too kaya kah rha hai bhai
Akash - sahi yaar agar unn logo ko ye pata chal gay to vo log to jite ji mar hia Jayenge
Dono ke aakho sai aashu nikal jate hai par madam ko aate dekh kar dono apna face rumal sai saaf karte hai
Madam - good morning baccho mera naam Meera hai aur mai aap ki english and class teacher bhi hoo too agar koi bhi help ki jarurat ho to mujhe bata dena only study related any doubt
Class - No mam
Meera - that's good to ye aap logo ka pahela din hai 10th standard mai too aap sab ko pata hi hoga ki ess saal aap logo ko board dena hai too bahut hardwork karna hoga
Class - yes mam
Meera - to thik hai apnni books nikalo ......ase hi 3 classes ke baad interval ho gaya
Sab Canteen mai janne lage
Akash - yaar aaj kaya order karu
Dev - yaar kuch spicy order kar bhai
Akash - ok
Sam- abe chutiye tu kab sai spicy kaah nai laga
Akash - Jab sai teri bhen Ess ke piche padi hai
Sam - jada mat bol nhi too
Dev - Sorry sam akash yaar tu jaa lekar aa
Sam - Abb ki na kaam ki baat aur tuh ab chup chhap ess fattu ke sath beth ja samajha
Akash - teri to.....
Dev usse pakad kar agge bad jata hai
Komal - Bhai app uss sai assa ku bolte ho..
Sam - isne tujhe naa kaha kaise jab tumhare sath ghumata tha tab to bada accha lagata tha ab kaya ho gaya
Komal - bhai app ko kuch doubt nhi ho rha jo ladka aap ke jaan dene to tyaar rahata tha aaj 1 mahine mai kya badal gya
Sam ke dimag kharab ho jata hai
Sam - Komal gusse ke vajah sai maine to ye socha hi nhi par kaya karu woh hamesha gussa dila ke chala jata hai
Komal - Bhai kuch to pata karna padega
Sam - Tum sahi kehati ho oye rajeev jara yaha aa
Rajeev (rv)- ji bhai
Sam - yaar tu jaa kar pata laga ye sale dono kaya khichadi paka rahe hai
Rv - kaya didi ki shaadi ho gayi aur hume bulaya bhi nahi ye to galat hai party to banati hai
Sam ( ghuse mai ) - abe yaar tujhe har time bakchodi sai fursat nhi hai yaar mai yaha serious baat kar rha hu aur
Rajiv - sorry bhai sorry sis
Komal - koi baat nahi bhai par jo bhai keh rahe hai uss kam ko kar doo please
Rajiv- bhai bhi bolti ho aur please bhi
Komal- sorry bhai aage sai essa nahi hoga
Rajiv- par tum dono uss mai etana interest kyu le rahe ho jab usse apani dosti ki kimat hi pata nahi hai