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Shandar update

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UPDATE 41
The Creator & Destruction Princess

Punar-Aarambh (The Restart)​

[Aadi Dev ka Sthaan - The Void]

Wahan waqt nahi tha, bas ek anant khamoshi thi. Mere samne Aadi Dev virajman the, jinki aankhon mein brahmaand ban aur mit raha tha.
Unhone mujhe dekha, aur unki awaaz mere rooh ke har kone mein gunj gayi.

Aadi Dev:
"Raakh se uthkar jo wapas aaye, use jalne ka darr nahi hota,
Tune maut ko haraya hai Dev, tujhe ab jeene ka shauk nahi hota?"

Maine muskurate hue apna sar jhuka diya.

Mai: “Jeene ka shauk toh sadiyon pehle chhoot gaya Prabhu. Ab bas apno ko zinda rakhne ki zidd hai.”

Aadi Dev ne apna haath uthaya. Ek sunehri roshni mere maathe par lagi. Mere andar ka shor, wo cheekhein, wo dard... sab ek pal mein shaant ho gaya.

Aadi Dev: “Tathastu. Jaa Putra... Apni kahani wapas likh. Par yaad rakhna...
Waqt badal diya tune, par kismat ke likhe ko mitana aasaan nahi,
Shanti toh mil jayegi tujhe, par andar ka toofan abhi mehmaan nahi.”

Maine apne haath mein bandhi Chronos Dial ko chua.

Mai: “Toofan se keh do... uska baap wapas aa raha hai.”

CLICK... CLICK... CLICK...

Duniya ghum gayi. Sitaron ki sadak pighal kar roshni ban gayi.

[Scene: Dev’s Old Bedroom - The Reset Timeline]

“Kukdookoooo!”

Meri aankh khuli.
Saamne wahi purani chhat (ceiling) thi, jiska paint kone se thoda ukhda hua tha. Pankha dheere-dheere, awaaz karte hue ghum raha tha.
Khidki se subah ki dhoop bistar par gir rahi thi.
Na khoon ki boo, na jale hue maas ki mehak.
Bas subah ki taazgi aur ghar ki wo jaani-pehchani khushbu.

Mere andar Kdev ki awaaz aayi—wahi purani, shararati aur energetic awaaz.

Kdev (Man mein): “Arre O Devdas! Uth ja, ya sapne mein hi heroine ko patayega? Maa chilla rahi hai, naashta thanda ho raha hai.”

Mai bistar par uth kar baitha aur zor se hasa.

Mai: “Aa gaya tu apni nautanki lekar?”

Kdev: “Jiska saath hoga, saala wo kaise mar sakta hai? Main toh hamesha yahin tha, tere dimag ke kone mein.”

Maine apne haath dekhe. Ye wo haath the jo abhi khoon se range nahi the.

Mai (Has kar): “Kdev, tujhe pata chali ek baat? Jo hum pichli baar miss kar gaye the?”

Kdev: “Mujhe kaise pata chalega bhai? Main toh abhi mila hu tere se itne time baad. Memory refresh ho rahi hai meri.”

Mai (Serious hokar): “Haa sun, tujhe batana zaroori hai. Mina ke baare mein ek baar bataya tha na tujhe?”

Kdev: “Haa wo... Destruction wali shakti? Jiske baare mein Guruji ne hint diya tha?”

Mai: “Haa... wo koi aur nahi, Pari hai yaar.”

Kdev thodi der chup raha, jaise process kar raha ho.

Kdev (Shock mein): “Teri behan ki tan tana tan! Yeh kab hua saala? Pari? Wo choti si gudiya?”

Mai: “Oye chutiye, yeh kya hai 'Teri behne ki...' gaali mat de.”

Kdev: “Abe gaali nahi de raha, shock mein hu! Tabhi main kahu... wo yaad hai tujhe Season 1 (Update 221) mein? Jab wo out of control ho gayi thi aur humein laga tha wo depression mein hai ya kisi curse ki wajah se hai? Wo actually Mina ki power leak ho rahi thi!”

Mai: “Haa, main samajh gaya hu ab. Par manna padega Pari ko... usne apne aap ko itna hidden kaise rakh liya? Sadiyon tak hume pata nahi chala.”

Kdev: “Bhool gaya kya? Saloni (Creation) aur Mina (Destruction) ki powers ko track sahi se puri duniya mein koi nahi kar sakta jab tak wo khud use na karein. Wo dono existence ke do pehlu hain.”

Mai: “Haa sahi kaha... Is baar mujhe Pari ko sambhalna hoga. Mina ko jaagna hoga aur usko kabu karna sikhana hoga .”

Tabhi niche se Mom ki awaaz aayi.

Mom (Chilla kar): “Dev! O Dev! Kahan hai? Sota rahega kya? School nahi jana kya aaj?”

Mere rongte khade ho gaye. Yeh wahi awaaz thi, wahi din tha.
Maine apne mobile uthaya aur date dekhi.

[Date - Start of Season 1/ UPDATE 1]

Yeh wahi manhoos (ya shubh) date thi jahan se sab sahi mein chalu hua tha(Season 1 Update 1 )wala din. Bas farak ye tha ki tab main irritated tha, aur aaj main thankful hu aur aaj mujhe koi bimari bhi nahi kaise pheli ke jaise thi aur sabse badi baat mene apni zindagi ke saare raaz jaan liye hai .

Mai (Tezz awaaz mein): “Aaya Mom! Fresh hokar!”

Mai jaldi se utha. Naha-dhokar bahar aaya. Towel lapet kar almira kholi aur kapde dhundne laga.
Maine pant pehen li, par mujhe meri favorite shirt nahi mil rahi thi.

Mai: “Mom! Meri shirt kahan hai?”

Mom (Niche se): “Almira mein hi dekh sahi se, aankhein khol kar!”

Tabhi mere gate par Knock hua.

Thak... Thak...

Maine gate khola.
Pari mere samne thi.
School uniform mein. Wahi bikhre baal, wahi pyari si surat.
Jisko maine pichli baar marta hua dekha tha, aaj wo mere samne zinda khadi thi.
Mujhe dekhte hi main khush ho gaya. Maine soch liya, iss baar jo mauka mila hai, iss Pari ke liye wo mauka main jaane nahi dunga.

Maine bina kuch soche, khushi se usko Goad (Arms) mein utha liya.

Pari (Ghabra kar): “B-Bhaiya... Bhaiya kya ho gaya hai aapko? Thik toh hai na aap? Niche utaro!”

(Pari Internal Thought): “Haye! Yeh achanak kya hua inhe? Aaj subah-subah itna pyaar? Par... inki pakad kitni mazboot hai... mujhe niche utarne ka mann kyu nahi kar raha?”

Maine uski baat ansuni kar di aur usko niche utaar kar, uske dono gaal pakde aur Tezz se Chum (Kiss) liya.

Muaaaah!

Pari ka muh khul gaya. Wo shock hokar mujhe dekhne lagi. Uske gaal tamatar jaise laal ho gaye.

Pari: “Kya kar rahe hain aap Bhaiya? Koi dekh lega!”

(Pari Internal Thought): “Oh God... unke honth... itne garam. Mera dil itna tez kyu dhadak raha hai? Bhaiya aaj bilkul badle hue lag rahe hain. Aisa lag raha hai jaise sadiyon baad mile ho.”

Mai muskura raha tha, bas use dekhta raha.

Mai: “Pari, zara shirt nikal de na .”

Pari apne kandhe par school bag ko pakadte hue, nazrein chura rahi thi.

Pari (Haklate hue): “B..b..h..bhaiya, yeh aap kya keh rahe hain? Sharm karo, aap... aap abhi bina shirt ke ho.”

(Pari Internal Thought): “Uff... inki body. Maine pehle kyu dhyaan nahi diya? Inka seena kitna chauda ho gaya hai...”

Maine uske maathe par halka sa maara.

Mai (Dheere se): “Ae pagal, andar se nikal de shirt. Kya kuch bhi sochne lagti hai. Main tera bhai hu.”

Pari: “H-Haan... laati hu.”

Usne almira se meri shirt nikali aur mujhe di.

Par dete waqt uski nazrein mere shareer par hi thi. Wo mere Biceps ko ghoor rahi thi jo abhi pump hue the (har baar body par etna kaam joh kiyaa hai uski wajah se).

Pari: “Yeh... yeh biceps aise kab hue? Aur aapke... six pack kaise hain? Kal tak toh aap patle the!”

(Pari Internal Thought): “Yeh toh pure hero lag rahe hain aaj. Kaash main inhe aise hi chu sakti... Chhii Pari! Wo bhai hain tere. Control kar.”

Maine shirt pehente hue wink kiya.

Mai: “Sleeper build hai darling, no tension. Tere bhai jaisa koi nahi.”

Pari mere paas aayi aur mere maathe ko haath se chhune lagi, check karne ke liye ki kahin mujhe bukhaar toh nahi.

Pari: “Aap thik toh hai na? Aaj behki-behki baatein kar rahe ho.”

Maine uska haath pakda aur wapas usko Goad mein utha liya.

Mai: “Haa, main bilkul thik hu. Chal niche.”

Bolte hue main usko lekar room se bahar aa gaya aur seedhiyan utarne laga.

Pari: “Arre! Aap kar kya rahe ho? Mujhe niche kyu lekar jaa rahe ho aap? Main chal sakti hu Bhaiya! Mom dekhengi toh daantengi!”

(Pari Internal Thought): “Please niche mat utaro... Please mat utaro. Inki baahon mein kitna sukoon hai. Aisa lag raha hai duniya ki sabse safe jagah yahi hai.”

Mai: “Mere liye naashta tu hi layegi na aaj. Isliye VIP entry kara raha hu.”

Hum niche hall mein pahunche.
Sab wahan the. Mom, Chachi, Sanjana, Kirti.
Sanjana ne hume dekha aur zor se boli.

Sanjana: “Arre Mom! Wo dekho... Kaise laa rahe hain Bhai Pari ko utha kar. Jaise nayi naveli dulhan ho!”

Sab log tezz se hasne lage. Pari sharam ke maare mere seene mein muh chupane lagi.

Badi Chachi: “Haa, lagta hai aaj Dev bahut khush hai. Kyu Dev? Aaj suraj pachim se nikla hai kya?”

Maine goad mein hi Pari ke gaal ko wapas chum liya, sabke samne.

Mai: “Haa Chachi, bahut khush hu main aaj. Aaj se zyada main khush nahi ho sakta. Aur uska kaaran hai Pari... meri sabse pyaari behen.”

Sanjana (Baat kaat kar): “Jaise aap isko utha ke laa rahe ho aur iske gaal laal hain... lagta hai aapki GF hai, behen nahi.”

Sab log phir se has pade.
Pari ka chehra sharam se aur laal ho gaya.

(Pari Internal Thought): “Sanjana Di bhi na... par kaash... kaash yeh sach hota. Nahi Pari, yeh galat hai. Par yeh galat itna sahi kyu lag raha hai aaj?”

Kirti (Thoda jealous hokar): “Bhaiya, aap saara pyaar apni issi behen ko de diya karo. Hum toh kuch nahi lagte na aapke liye? Humein toh kabhi nahi uthaya aise.”

Maine Pari ko dheere se niche utaar diya.

Mai: “Aree Kirti, tu toh meri Gundi hai na. Tujhe uthaya toh tu mujhe hi peet degi.”

Sab hasne lage, par main jaanta tha Kirti ke dimaag mein kya chal raha hai.

Mai: “Pari, ja naashta la. Main isko (Kirti ko) dekhta hu.”

Pari daud kar kitchen mein bhaag gayi, par jaate-jaate usne mud kar mujhe dekha. Uski aankhon mein ek naya sawal tha, aur ek nayi chamak thi.

Mai (Man mein): “Bhaag le Pari. Par ab main tujhe kahin nahi jaane dunga. Na iss duniya mein, na kisi aur duniya mein.”

Kdev: “Bhai, control. Pehle din hi ladki ko heart attack dega kya?”

Maine smile kiya aur sofa par baith gaya, Kirti ko manane ke liye.

 

[Shanu]

Fabulous update bhai

 

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[Dev the lover]

Fabulous update bhai

Shandar update

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UPDATE 42
REAL DEV​

Maine Kirti ko dekha jo muh fulaye baithi thi. Uski aankhein TV screen par thi, par dimaag kahin aur tha. Usko lag raha tha ki maine saara pyaar aaj Pari par luta diya hai aur uske liye mere paas waqt nahi hai.

Mai muskura kar uske paas gaya aur uske bagal mein sofa par baith gaya. Maine apna haath dheere se uske kandhe par rakha. Wo halka sa sihar gayi, par hili nahi.

Mai (Naram awaaz mein): “Oye Gundi! Kya hua? Naak kyu fuli hai subah-subah?”

Kirti (Jhatke se kandha hata kar): “Hato aap! Jao apni Pari ke paas. Hum toh bas aise hi hain ghar mein. Na koi pyaar, na koi care. Jab dekho Pari, Pari, Pari! Hum toh jaise adopted hain!”

Sanjana (Haste hue): “Lo bhai, ab bhugto. Kirti ka drama shuru. Subah ka dose baaki tha iska.”

Maine Sanjana ko aankh dikha kar chup karaya aur Kirti ka chehra apni taraf ghumaya. Uski aankhon mein nami thi—wo sirf natak nahi kar rahi thi, wo sach mein hurt thi.

Mai (Softly): “Pagal hai kya? Pari choti hai na, isliye utha liya. Par tu... tu toh mere dil ka wo hissa hai jiske bina Dev adhoora hai. Tu meri taqat hai Kirti, kamzori nahi. Agar tujhe kuch ho gaya, toh main puri duniya jala dunga. Yeh sirf kehne ki baat nahi hai.”

Meri awaaz mein ek ajeeb si sachai aur gehrai thi—ek aisi heavy feeling jo ek normal bhai-behen ki nok-jhok se pare thi. Kyunki main jaanta tha ki future mein kya hua tha, aur main dobara kisi ko khone ka darr bardasht nahi kar sakta tha.
Kirti ne meri aankhon mein dekha. Usko meri aankhon mein wo 'Future ka Dard' aur 'Present ka Pyaar' dono dikha. Uski narazgi ek second mein gayab ho gayi, jaise kabhi thi hi nahi.

Kirti (Dheere se): “Sachi?”

Mai (Muskura kar): “Muchchi. Ab smile kar de, warna main tickle (gudgudi) karna shuru kar dunga.”

Kirti ne turant mujhe gale laga liya.

Kirti: “Love you Bhaiya! I know main drama queen hu, par aap mujhe manate ho toh achha lagta hai. Par ek shart hai—agli baar mujhe bhi piggyback ride chahiye!”

Mai: “Done. Agli baar tujhe pith par baitha kar pura ghar ghumunga.”

Tabhi Pari kitchen se plate lekar aayi. Usne dekha Kirti mujhe gale lagaye hue hai aur main uske baalon mein haath pher raha hu.
Pari ki chaal thodi slow ho gayi. Uske chehre par halki si Jalan (Jealousy) dikhi.

(Pari Internal Thought: Bhaiya sirf mere hain. Kirti Di hamesha beech mein kyu aa jati hain? Unhe aur koi kaam nahi hai kya?)

Par usne apne expressions turant cover kar liye aur ek fake smile ke saath aayi.

Pari: “Lo Bhaiya, aapka naashta. Aur yeh chai. Mom keh rahi thi jaldi karo.”

Maine naashta kiya. Pari ne mera bag lakar diya. Uska haath mere haath se touch hua, aur usne mujhe ek 'Secret Glance' diya.

Mom (Kitchen se): “Dev, jaldi nikal. Akash ka phone aaya tha, wo niche khada kab se wait kar raha hai. Keh raha hai bike start nahi ho rahi uski.”

Akash.
Mera Dragon Samrat dost. Wo dost jisne mere liye apni insaaniyat tak kurbaan kar di thi.
Maine jaldi se chai khatam ki.

Mai: “Chalta hu Mom! Bye Chachi, bye gundiyo!”

Mai bag utha kar bahar bhaga, par mere dil mein ek alag hi sukoon tha. Ghar mein shanti thi, pyaar tha. Yahi toh wo duniya thi jise main bachana chahta tha.

[Scene: Ghar ke Bahar - Road]

Ghar ke gate par Akash apni purani bike ke paas khada tha.
Baal bikhre hue, shirt ka ek button galat laga hua, aur chehre par wahi purani pareshani.
Yeh wahi Akash tha jisne future mein mere liye Bhukasur se ladte hue apni jaan ki baazi laga di thi. Jiske muh se aag nikalti thi, jiske pankh aasmaan ko dhak lete the.
Aur aaj? Aaj yeh bike ki kick maar-maar kar pareshan tha.
Mujhe hansi bhi aayi aur pyaar bhi.
Mai uske paas gaya aur piche se zor se uski pith par mukka maara.

DHAPP!

Akash (Dard mein chillata hua): “Aaaah! Haramkhor! Koyi aise maarta hai kya subah-subah? Haddiyaan tod di be!”

Mai hasne laga aur use gale laga liya.

Mai: “Kaisa hai mere bhai? Bada miss kiya tujhe.”

Akash ne mujhe dhakka diya aur hairani se dekha.

Akash: “Abbe hata! Gay hai kya? Aur ye bata tu itna khush kyu hai?

Future ki yaadein (Season 1 ke shuruwat ki) dimaag mein aayi.

Maine ek cheez soch li thi ki iss baar jin-jin ke baare mein pata chal chuka hai, woh sab naa kar paaye woh log... Khaas karke uss Riccha se dur rehna hoga.
Ek minute... Riccha?

Mai: “Akash, teri didi ka kya naam hai?”

Akash mujhe paagalon ki tarah dekhne laga.

Akash: “Kya be? Ab tu sabke naam bhi bhulne laga hai kya? Gajni ban gaya hai? Sonia naam hai meri didi ka.

Mai has pada, jaise mujhe pata tha.

Mai: “Haa haa... Sonia. Main bas check kar raha tha.”

(Internal Monologue):
Matlab raaz ke khulne se woh Riccha jo thi woh gayab ho gayi kya? Ya timeline change hone se uska wajood hi mit gaya? Aadi Dev ne kaha tha 'Kismat ke likhe ko mitana aasaan nahi', par lagta hai kuch characters replace ho gaye hain.

Maine Akash se pucha.

Mai: “Acha yeh bata, kaunsi class mein hain hum log?”

Akash: “12th mein hain hum log bhai! Boards hain iss saal. Kya hua hai tujhe? Dimaag thik toh hai na? Subah-subah sasti wali pee li kya?”

Mai has kar: “Kuch nahi bhai. Bas neend puri nahi hui.”

(Internal Monologue):
Matlab Aadi Dev ne mujhe timeline wahi diya, par kuch changes ke saath jo mere dimaag ne socha tha... School Life wapas mil gayi. Lekin kya meri powers abhi bhi hain?

Maine apna haath aage kiya aur aankhein band ki. Maine kisi dur nadi (River) ke baare mein socha jo maine pehle dekhi thi—jahan Janu (Jhanvi) mili thi.
Mere dimaag mein ek image clear hui. Nadi ka paani, hawa ki awaaz...
Meri Sensory Powers kaam kar rahi thi. Main feel kar sakta tha ki wahan kya ho raha hai.

Akash (Chidhte hue): “Abe kya aankhein band kar raha hai? Meditation karne ka time nahi hai. Chalein ab? Ek toh yeh bike saali start nahi ho rahi. Dimaag kharab kar diya hai is khatara ne.”

Mai niche baitha aur bike ke engine par haath rakha.
Maine halki si Mechanical Energy (Tech Manipulation) pass ki.

Mai: “Start kar ab.”

Akash ne bina umeed ke kick maari.

VROOOM!

Bike ek baar mein start ho gayi, aur uska sound bhi change ho gaya—thoda heavy aur smooth.

Akash: “Arre iski maa ki... yeh saali bike kaise start ho gayi? Tab se main aadhe ghante se laga hua tha, pair dukha diye isne! Tune kya kiya be? Mantar phunka kya?”

Mai: “Chal ab zyada baatein mat kar. School chalte hain. Late ho rahe hain.”

Hum bike par baithe aur school ki taraf nikal pade. Hawa jab chehre par lagi, toh wo purani feeling wapas aa gayi—school jane ki, doston ke saath masti karne ki. Par is baar... main 'Fatu' nahi tha.

[Scene: School Canteen]

Hum school pahunche. Bike park karke hum corridor se hote hue canteen ki taraf ja rahe the.

Akash: “Yaar Dev, main jaldi mein nikal aaya, kuch khaya nahi. Canteen chalein na? Pet mein chuhe daud rahe hain.”

Mai: “Abe toh chutiye ghar par nahi bataya? Tere liye bhi naashta nikalwa deta. Waise bhi Mom tujhe apna dusra beta hi samajhti hain.”

Akash: “Abe chal, gussa kaahe ho raha hai yaar. Teri jeb dheeli karwani thi bas.”

Mai: “Haa chal chal, aaj party meri taraf se.”

Hum canteen mein jaise hi pahunche aur wahan baithe, mere kandhe par kisi ka bhaari haath aaya.
Maine gardan ghuma kar dekha.
Sam.
Komal ka bhai.

Sam (Gusse mein): “Aa gaya tu? Tera hi wait kar raha tha main.”

Akash ghabra gaya. Use laga Sam ladne aaya hai.

Akash: “Sam bhai, wo...”

Maine Akash ko haath dikha kar chup karaya.

Mai: “Arre Sam yaar! Aa gaya tu? Aur Rajiv hi aaye hain kya? Aur wo Komal kahan reh gayi?”

Sam mujhe ghurta hua bola.

Sam: “Komal ke baare mein ab puch raha hai? Usko rula kar ab puch raha hai kahan hai wo?”

Main apni jagah se khada hua aur Sam ko kandhe se pakad kar wapas kursi par bithaya.

Mai: “Sorry bhai sorry! Galti ho gayi.”

Maine apni jeb mein haath dala aur Creation Magic (Saloni wali power) use karke ek Diamond Ring materialize kar li.
Woh ring chamak rahi thi, bilkul asli.
Mai Sam ko ring dikhate hue bola.

Mai: “Abe saale, tune kabhi dekha kisi ladki ko propose karte hue aise khali haath? Mere paas tab gift nahi tha, isliye maine naa kar diya tha. Aaj yeh ring lekar aaya hu, usko propose karunga. Grand style mein!”

Akash uth kar khada ho gaya, uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Akash: “What?! Dev? Kab? Kaise? Kyu? Tu aur Komal? Kab hua yeh sab?”

Mai: “Le, iss lodu ko ab sab batau? Meri GF se zyada toh yeh shock ho raha hai. Jaise iski kidney maang li ho.”

Sam (Confused): “Abb saala main bolu kya? Tujh par gussa rahu ki khush hu? Kuch samajh nahi aa raha.”

Mai: “Chup kar saale. Kaahe bak-bak kar raha hai. Khush ho ja, tera dost ab tera Jija banne wala hai.”

Sam mujhe pakad kar hilane laga.

Sam: “Saala bolta hai? Himmat dekh rahe ho iski?”

Mai (Hasta hua): “Aur kya jhaat ke baal bolu? Saale tu mera saala hi banega na aur main tera Jija. Rishta wahi, soch nayi.”

Sam (Akash se): “Yeh saale Dev ko kya pila ke laya hai Akki tu? Aaj subah se iska fuse uda hua lag raha hai.”

Akash: “Kuch nahi Sam bhai... mujhe khud nahi pata.”

Mai: “Kya bol raha hai 'Sam Bhai'? Sam bol! Seniority gayi tel lene. Ab hum barabar hain. Balki main toh senior hu rishte mein.”

Sam: “Aaj itna khush kyu hai tu Dev? Koi khaas baat hai kya?”

Mai: “Kyu? Komal ko propose karne se badi koi khushi hogi kya? Meri jaan hai wo.”

Tabhi piche se ek ladki ki tezz aur gusse bhari awaaz aayi.

Ladki: “Tumhari himmat kaise hui Komal ke liye aise bolne ki? Apni shakal dekhi hai aaine mein?”

Mai chauk gaya. Yeh kaun aa gayi? Yeh toh maine pheli life mein nahi dekhi thi. Jo bhi thi, badi khatarnaak lag rahi thi.
Wo aage aayi aur bina warning ke mera collar pakad liya.

Sam: “Shanaya! Kya kar rahi hai yeh?”

Shanaya (Gusse mein): “Sam bhai, aap chup raho! Yeh kya keh raha hai Komal Didi ko aapko sunayi de nahi raha? Yeh sadak-chaap ladka Didi ko propose karega? Iski aukaat bhi hai?”

(Internal Monologue):
Shanaya? Yeh kaunsa naya character unlock ho gaya? Timeline change ka side effect hai ya koi naya villain? Par jo bhi hai... badi hot hai. Aur gussa toh naak par rakha hai.

Tabhi piche gate par se Komal aa rahi thi apni friends ke saath.
Wo bilkul waisi hi thi jaisi mujhe yaad thi—chulbuli, stylish aur thodi si nakhre wali.
Mere dimaag mein ek idea aaya.

Mai (Akash se): “Akki! Jara canteen ka announcement mic de jaldi!”

Akash: “Kya? Pagal ho gaya hai kya?”

Mai: “Fenk jaldi!”

Akash ne darrte-darrte counter se mic utha kar meri taraf phenka.
Maine mic hawa mein catch kiya aur on kiya.
Shanaya ne mera collar chhoda, hairani se dekhne lagi ki main kya karne wala hu.
Puri canteen, pura corridor, har jagah meri awaaz gunji.

Mai (Tezz se chillaya): “I LOVE YOU KOMALLLLL...!!”

Sare teachers, students, canteen staff... sab idhar hi dekhne lage. Pin drop silence ho gaya.
Aur Komal... wo gate par jaise jam gayi. Uski friends usse hila rahi thi par wo statue bani khadi thi.
Maine apna collar thik kiya, baal set kiye aur Shanaya ko aankh maari.

Mai (Shanaya se): “Aukaat dekhti rehna.”

Mai Komal ki taraf bhagta hua gaya.
Aisa lag raha tha Komal ki saansein bhaut tezz chal rahi ho par uska mind ekdum blank ho gaya tha. Uska chehra poora laal pad gaya tha.
Main uske paas pahuncha aur ghutno par baith gaya—filmi style mein.
Maine apne jeb se wo Diamond Ring nikali.
Ring ki chamak ne sabki aankhein chaundhiya di.

Mai: “Komal... Maine bahut der kar di shayad, par ab aur nahi. Tum meri life ki wo missing puzzle piece ho jiske bina meri picture adhuri hai.”

Komal ka haath kaanp raha tha.

Mai: “Will you be my wife, Komal?”

Puri canteen mein phele sab shock hue yeh toh wife ke liye propose kar raha hai par thodi der me shor mach gaya.

“Ooooooohhhhh!”
“Accept it! Accept it!”

Sam side mein khada hokar hass raha tha (shayad usse pehle se pata tha ki main Komal ko pasand karta hu, bas 'Naa' karne ka natak kar raha tha).
Shanaya ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya tha.
Komal ne ring dekhi, fir mujhe dekha. Uski aankhon mein aansu aa gaye.

Komal (Rote hue has kar): “Tum paagal ho Dev! Pure paagal ho!”

Usne apna haath aage kiya.
Maine ring pehnayi aur khada hokar use sabke samne gale laga liya.

Kdev (Man mein): “Bhai, maan gaye! Ek hi din mein Hero ban gaya tu. Par yeh Shanaya abhi bhi ghur rahi hai. Lagta hai naya kalesh yahi hai.”

Maine Komal ko gale lagaye hue Shanaya ki taraf dekha aur muskura diya.

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

[sorbobhuk]

UPDATE 42
REAL DEV​

Maine Kirti ko dekha jo muh fulaye baithi thi. Uski aankhein TV screen par thi, par dimaag kahin aur tha. Usko lag raha tha ki maine saara pyaar aaj Pari par luta diya hai aur uske liye mere paas waqt nahi hai.

Mai muskura kar uske paas gaya aur uske bagal mein sofa par baith gaya. Maine apna haath dheere se uske kandhe par rakha. Wo halka sa sihar gayi, par hili nahi.

Mai (Naram awaaz mein): “Oye Gundi! Kya hua? Naak kyu fuli hai subah-subah?”

Kirti (Jhatke se kandha hata kar): “Hato aap! Jao apni Pari ke paas. Hum toh bas aise hi hain ghar mein. Na koi pyaar, na koi care. Jab dekho Pari, Pari, Pari! Hum toh jaise adopted hain!”

Sanjana (Haste hue): “Lo bhai, ab bhugto. Kirti ka drama shuru. Subah ka dose baaki tha iska.”

Maine Sanjana ko aankh dikha kar chup karaya aur Kirti ka chehra apni taraf ghumaya. Uski aankhon mein nami thi—wo sirf natak nahi kar rahi thi, wo sach mein hurt thi.

Mai (Softly): “Pagal hai kya? Pari choti hai na, isliye utha liya. Par tu... tu toh mere dil ka wo hissa hai jiske bina Dev adhoora hai. Tu meri taqat hai Kirti, kamzori nahi. Agar tujhe kuch ho gaya, toh main puri duniya jala dunga. Yeh sirf kehne ki baat nahi hai.”

Meri awaaz mein ek ajeeb si sachai aur gehrai thi—ek aisi heavy feeling jo ek normal bhai-behen ki nok-jhok se pare thi. Kyunki main jaanta tha ki future mein kya hua tha, aur main dobara kisi ko khone ka darr bardasht nahi kar sakta tha.
Kirti ne meri aankhon mein dekha. Usko meri aankhon mein wo 'Future ka Dard' aur 'Present ka Pyaar' dono dikha. Uski narazgi ek second mein gayab ho gayi, jaise kabhi thi hi nahi.

Kirti (Dheere se): “Sachi?”

Mai (Muskura kar): “Muchchi. Ab smile kar de, warna main tickle (gudgudi) karna shuru kar dunga.”

Kirti ne turant mujhe gale laga liya.

Kirti: “Love you Bhaiya! I know main drama queen hu, par aap mujhe manate ho toh achha lagta hai. Par ek shart hai—agli baar mujhe bhi piggyback ride chahiye!”

Mai: “Done. Agli baar tujhe pith par baitha kar pura ghar ghumunga.”

Tabhi Pari kitchen se plate lekar aayi. Usne dekha Kirti mujhe gale lagaye hue hai aur main uske baalon mein haath pher raha hu.
Pari ki chaal thodi slow ho gayi. Uske chehre par halki si Jalan (Jealousy) dikhi.

(Pari Internal Thought: Bhaiya sirf mere hain. Kirti Di hamesha beech mein kyu aa jati hain? Unhe aur koi kaam nahi hai kya?)

Par usne apne expressions turant cover kar liye aur ek fake smile ke saath aayi.

Pari: “Lo Bhaiya, aapka naashta. Aur yeh chai. Mom keh rahi thi jaldi karo.”

Maine naashta kiya. Pari ne mera bag lakar diya. Uska haath mere haath se touch hua, aur usne mujhe ek 'Secret Glance' diya.

Mom (Kitchen se): “Dev, jaldi nikal. Akash ka phone aaya tha, wo niche khada kab se wait kar raha hai. Keh raha hai bike start nahi ho rahi uski.”

Akash.
Mera Dragon Samrat dost. Wo dost jisne mere liye apni insaaniyat tak kurbaan kar di thi.
Maine jaldi se chai khatam ki.

Mai: “Chalta hu Mom! Bye Chachi, bye gundiyo!”

Mai bag utha kar bahar bhaga, par mere dil mein ek alag hi sukoon tha. Ghar mein shanti thi, pyaar tha. Yahi toh wo duniya thi jise main bachana chahta tha.

[Scene: Ghar ke Bahar - Road]

Ghar ke gate par Akash apni purani bike ke paas khada tha.
Baal bikhre hue, shirt ka ek button galat laga hua, aur chehre par wahi purani pareshani.
Yeh wahi Akash tha jisne future mein mere liye Bhukasur se ladte hue apni jaan ki baazi laga di thi. Jiske muh se aag nikalti thi, jiske pankh aasmaan ko dhak lete the.
Aur aaj? Aaj yeh bike ki kick maar-maar kar pareshan tha.
Mujhe hansi bhi aayi aur pyaar bhi.
Mai uske paas gaya aur piche se zor se uski pith par mukka maara.

DHAPP!

Akash (Dard mein chillata hua): “Aaaah! Haramkhor! Koyi aise maarta hai kya subah-subah? Haddiyaan tod di be!”

Mai hasne laga aur use gale laga liya.

Mai: “Kaisa hai mere bhai? Bada miss kiya tujhe.”

Akash ne mujhe dhakka diya aur hairani se dekha.

Akash: “Abbe hata! Gay hai kya? Aur ye bata tu itna khush kyu hai?

Future ki yaadein (Season 1 ke shuruwat ki) dimaag mein aayi.

Maine ek cheez soch li thi ki iss baar jin-jin ke baare mein pata chal chuka hai, woh sab naa kar paaye woh log... Khaas karke uss Riccha se dur rehna hoga.
Ek minute... Riccha?

Mai: “Akash, teri didi ka kya naam hai?”

Akash mujhe paagalon ki tarah dekhne laga.

Akash: “Kya be? Ab tu sabke naam bhi bhulne laga hai kya? Gajni ban gaya hai? Sonia naam hai meri didi ka.

Mai has pada, jaise mujhe pata tha.

Mai: “Haa haa... Sonia. Main bas check kar raha tha.”

(Internal Monologue):
Matlab raaz ke khulne se woh Riccha jo thi woh gayab ho gayi kya? Ya timeline change hone se uska wajood hi mit gaya? Aadi Dev ne kaha tha 'Kismat ke likhe ko mitana aasaan nahi', par lagta hai kuch characters replace ho gaye hain.

Maine Akash se pucha.

Mai: “Acha yeh bata, kaunsi class mein hain hum log?”

Akash: “12th mein hain hum log bhai! Boards hain iss saal. Kya hua hai tujhe? Dimaag thik toh hai na? Subah-subah sasti wali pee li kya?”

Mai has kar: “Kuch nahi bhai. Bas neend puri nahi hui.”

(Internal Monologue):
Matlab Aadi Dev ne mujhe timeline wahi diya, par kuch changes ke saath jo mere dimaag ne socha tha... School Life wapas mil gayi. Lekin kya meri powers abhi bhi hain?

Maine apna haath aage kiya aur aankhein band ki. Maine kisi dur nadi (River) ke baare mein socha jo maine pehle dekhi thi—jahan Janu (Jhanvi) mili thi.
Mere dimaag mein ek image clear hui. Nadi ka paani, hawa ki awaaz...
Meri Sensory Powers kaam kar rahi thi. Main feel kar sakta tha ki wahan kya ho raha hai.

Akash (Chidhte hue): “Abe kya aankhein band kar raha hai? Meditation karne ka time nahi hai. Chalein ab? Ek toh yeh bike saali start nahi ho rahi. Dimaag kharab kar diya hai is khatara ne.”

Mai niche baitha aur bike ke engine par haath rakha.
Maine halki si Mechanical Energy (Tech Manipulation) pass ki.

Mai: “Start kar ab.”

Akash ne bina umeed ke kick maari.

VROOOM!

Bike ek baar mein start ho gayi, aur uska sound bhi change ho gaya—thoda heavy aur smooth.

Akash: “Arre iski maa ki... yeh saali bike kaise start ho gayi? Tab se main aadhe ghante se laga hua tha, pair dukha diye isne! Tune kya kiya be? Mantar phunka kya?”

Mai: “Chal ab zyada baatein mat kar. School chalte hain. Late ho rahe hain.”

Hum bike par baithe aur school ki taraf nikal pade. Hawa jab chehre par lagi, toh wo purani feeling wapas aa gayi—school jane ki, doston ke saath masti karne ki. Par is baar... main 'Fatu' nahi tha.

[Scene: School Canteen]

Hum school pahunche. Bike park karke hum corridor se hote hue canteen ki taraf ja rahe the.

Akash: “Yaar Dev, main jaldi mein nikal aaya, kuch khaya nahi. Canteen chalein na? Pet mein chuhe daud rahe hain.”

Mai: “Abe toh chutiye ghar par nahi bataya? Tere liye bhi naashta nikalwa deta. Waise bhi Mom tujhe apna dusra beta hi samajhti hain.”

Akash: “Abe chal, gussa kaahe ho raha hai yaar. Teri jeb dheeli karwani thi bas.”

Mai: “Haa chal chal, aaj party meri taraf se.”

Hum canteen mein jaise hi pahunche aur wahan baithe, mere kandhe par kisi ka bhaari haath aaya.
Maine gardan ghuma kar dekha.
Sam.
Komal ka bhai.

Sam (Gusse mein): “Aa gaya tu? Tera hi wait kar raha tha main.”

Akash ghabra gaya. Use laga Sam ladne aaya hai.

Akash: “Sam bhai, wo...”

Maine Akash ko haath dikha kar chup karaya.

Mai: “Arre Sam yaar! Aa gaya tu? Aur Rajiv hi aaye hain kya? Aur wo Komal kahan reh gayi?”

Sam mujhe ghurta hua bola.

Sam: “Komal ke baare mein ab puch raha hai? Usko rula kar ab puch raha hai kahan hai wo?”

Main apni jagah se khada hua aur Sam ko kandhe se pakad kar wapas kursi par bithaya.

Mai: “Sorry bhai sorry! Galti ho gayi.”

Maine apni jeb mein haath dala aur Creation Magic (Saloni wali power) use karke ek Diamond Ring materialize kar li.
Woh ring chamak rahi thi, bilkul asli.
Mai Sam ko ring dikhate hue bola.

Mai: “Abe saale, tune kabhi dekha kisi ladki ko propose karte hue aise khali haath? Mere paas tab gift nahi tha, isliye maine naa kar diya tha. Aaj yeh ring lekar aaya hu, usko propose karunga. Grand style mein!”

Akash uth kar khada ho gaya, uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Akash: “What?! Dev? Kab? Kaise? Kyu? Tu aur Komal? Kab hua yeh sab?”

Mai: “Le, iss lodu ko ab sab batau? Meri GF se zyada toh yeh shock ho raha hai. Jaise iski kidney maang li ho.”

Sam (Confused): “Abb saala main bolu kya? Tujh par gussa rahu ki khush hu? Kuch samajh nahi aa raha.”

Mai: “Chup kar saale. Kaahe bak-bak kar raha hai. Khush ho ja, tera dost ab tera Jija banne wala hai.”

Sam mujhe pakad kar hilane laga.

Sam: “Saala bolta hai? Himmat dekh rahe ho iski?”

Mai (Hasta hua): “Aur kya jhaat ke baal bolu? Saale tu mera saala hi banega na aur main tera Jija. Rishta wahi, soch nayi.”

Sam (Akash se): “Yeh saale Dev ko kya pila ke laya hai Akki tu? Aaj subah se iska fuse uda hua lag raha hai.”

Akash: “Kuch nahi Sam bhai... mujhe khud nahi pata.”

Mai: “Kya bol raha hai 'Sam Bhai'? Sam bol! Seniority gayi tel lene. Ab hum barabar hain. Balki main toh senior hu rishte mein.”

Sam: “Aaj itna khush kyu hai tu Dev? Koi khaas baat hai kya?”

Mai: “Kyu? Komal ko propose karne se badi koi khushi hogi kya? Meri jaan hai wo.”

Tabhi piche se ek ladki ki tezz aur gusse bhari awaaz aayi.

Ladki: “Tumhari himmat kaise hui Komal ke liye aise bolne ki? Apni shakal dekhi hai aaine mein?”

Mai chauk gaya. Yeh kaun aa gayi? Yeh toh maine pheli life mein nahi dekhi thi. Jo bhi thi, badi khatarnaak lag rahi thi.
Wo aage aayi aur bina warning ke mera collar pakad liya.

Sam: “Shanaya! Kya kar rahi hai yeh?”

Shanaya (Gusse mein): “Sam bhai, aap chup raho! Yeh kya keh raha hai Komal Didi ko aapko sunayi de nahi raha? Yeh sadak-chaap ladka Didi ko propose karega? Iski aukaat bhi hai?”

(Internal Monologue):
Shanaya? Yeh kaunsa naya character unlock ho gaya? Timeline change ka side effect hai ya koi naya villain? Par jo bhi hai... badi hot hai. Aur gussa toh naak par rakha hai.

Tabhi piche gate par se Komal aa rahi thi apni friends ke saath.
Wo bilkul waisi hi thi jaisi mujhe yaad thi—chulbuli, stylish aur thodi si nakhre wali.
Mere dimaag mein ek idea aaya.

Mai (Akash se): “Akki! Jara canteen ka announcement mic de jaldi!”

Akash: “Kya? Pagal ho gaya hai kya?”

Mai: “Fenk jaldi!”

Akash ne darrte-darrte counter se mic utha kar meri taraf phenka.
Maine mic hawa mein catch kiya aur on kiya.
Shanaya ne mera collar chhoda, hairani se dekhne lagi ki main kya karne wala hu.
Puri canteen, pura corridor, har jagah meri awaaz gunji.

Mai (Tezz se chillaya): “I LOVE YOU KOMALLLLL...!!”

Sare teachers, students, canteen staff... sab idhar hi dekhne lage. Pin drop silence ho gaya.
Aur Komal... wo gate par jaise jam gayi. Uski friends usse hila rahi thi par wo statue bani khadi thi.
Maine apna collar thik kiya, baal set kiye aur Shanaya ko aankh maari.

Mai (Shanaya se): “Aukaat dekhti rehna.”

Mai Komal ki taraf bhagta hua gaya.
Aisa lag raha tha Komal ki saansein bhaut tezz chal rahi ho par uska mind ekdum blank ho gaya tha. Uska chehra poora laal pad gaya tha.
Main uske paas pahuncha aur ghutno par baith gaya—filmi style mein.
Maine apne jeb se wo Diamond Ring nikali.
Ring ki chamak ne sabki aankhein chaundhiya di.

Mai: “Komal... Maine bahut der kar di shayad, par ab aur nahi. Tum meri life ki wo missing puzzle piece ho jiske bina meri picture adhuri hai.”

Komal ka haath kaanp raha tha.

Mai: “Will you be my wife, Komal?”

Puri canteen mein phele sab shock hue yeh toh wife ke liye propose kar raha hai par thodi der me shor mach gaya.

“Ooooooohhhhh!”
“Accept it! Accept it!”

Sam side mein khada hokar hass raha tha (shayad usse pehle se pata tha ki main Komal ko pasand karta hu, bas 'Naa' karne ka natak kar raha tha).
Shanaya ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya tha.
Komal ne ring dekhi, fir mujhe dekha. Uski aankhon mein aansu aa gaye.

Komal (Rote hue has kar): “Tum paagal ho Dev! Pure paagal ho!”

Usne apna haath aage kiya.
Maine ring pehnayi aur khada hokar use sabke samne gale laga liya.

Kdev (Man mein): “Bhai, maan gaye! Ek hi din mein Hero ban gaya tu. Par yeh Shanaya abhi bhi ghur rahi hai. Lagta hai naya kalesh yahi hai.”

Maine Komal ko gale lagaye hue Shanaya ki taraf dekha aur muskura diya.

Bahut badhiya update Hai Bhai.... Maja aageya hai....to pari hi mina thi....or ab to new timeline me sab kuch pehla jaiisa hai liken dev ka bimari ko chhod kar....or dev pehle jaisa nhi kar raha hai sab alag tarike se shuru kiya hai....liken cichha ki jagah soniya aageyi....to ricca kaha hai....or bhi bahut kuch bata tha liken ek sath itne update read kiya aaj itna hi
Waiting for next update

 

[king1969]

Shandar update