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Thank youUska namber tow lagega hi lekin pehle yeh SP ka lagega jisne Arjun ko bastard hola h or kia koyi saboot he uske paas Jo muh utha ker Chali aayi h
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Thank youUska namber tow lagega hi lekin pehle yeh SP ka lagega jisne Arjun ko bastard hola h or kia koyi saboot he uske paas Jo muh utha ker Chali aayi h
He is not a typical herosuperb story in making, arjun is making more enemies then friends
Aisa toh nahi bahut like mile par bhai.. Is kahani main partishod maun woh log bhi piss rahe hai jinka koi dosh nahi... Jaise ke inspector ke wife aur uski maa bahen.. Jaisa gusaa aur pratishod arjun le raha hai.. Koi aur bhi usse lega.. Yeh kuch haza nahi ho raha hai..Is waale update pe toh na likes aaye na comments
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Shayad bada update Dene ka yahi nuksan hai..
Lagta hai phale lady officer ken fategiInspector ki fatne mein abh samay hai
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Ab bhaiya kisi ke paas bhayankar shakti hoAisa toh nahi bahut like mile par bhai.. Is kahani main partishod maun woh log bhi piss rahe hai jinka koi dosh nahi... Jaise ke inspector ke wife aur uski maa bahen.. Jaisa gusaa aur pratishod arjun le raha hai.. Koi aur bhi usse lega.. Yeh kuch haza nahi ho raha hai..
Sheetal ka role ab sayad bahut kaam kar diya jisne arjun ko pyar shikya.. Arjun ne us pyar ko hawas bana diya
फ्लो वाली बात मैं भी मानता हूं, लेकिन रिस्पोंस अच्छी कहानी होने से ही आता है, ये पक्की बात है।Riky bhai
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