Baki writer ki apni kalpna hai to reyansh ko abhi aur tod de aur emotionless bana de to phir wo apna revenge jaroor lega family se
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Nice updateUPDATE - 18
Noor : (udasi se) thik hai. Par jane se pehele kal aap mujhse milke jayege.
Mai :ok.
Phir mai room pe wapas laut aya ye din bhi aise hi bit gaya .
Aabbbb aagggggeeeee.......
Agle din Michael ne Reyansh Ko weapons aur sari zaruri chize provide kar di. Reyansh ne sab sahi se set kar liya kyuki kal subah hi Reyansh Ko nikal na tha . Sab saman set karne ke baad Reyansh ready hone laga noor ke ghar jane ke liye kyuki kal Reyansh Ne noor ko promise kiya tha ki wo jane se pehele usse mil ke jaye ga aur use uske ammi abbu se bhi milna tha.
Aaj Reyansh ka 20th birthday tha jo use yaad nhi tha par noor ko pta tha usne jab reyansh ko hospital ka form fill up karne kaha tha tab Reyansh ne uspe birth date bhi likhi thi jo noor ne dekh li thi. Iss liye noor Reyansh ko aaj birthday surprise dene ka plan kar liya tha jisse Reyansh anjan tha.
Reyansh phir nikal pada Noor ke ghar ki aur. Karib 18 min baad wo Noor ke ghar ke saamne khada tha. Reyansh aage badha aur doorbell bajayi tab Noor ne hi darwaja khola par aaj usne burkha nhi pehna tha . Aaj pehli baar reyansh ne noor ko bina burkhe ke dekha tha aur jab reyansh ne use dekha to ek pal ke liye use ghurne hi laga kyuki wo lag bhi asi hi rahi thi.
rudolf nureyev photos
Uski wo kali aakhen bina makeup wala chera uake laal honth. Wo Reyansh ko aaise ghurta dekh sharmaa gyi aur boli.
Noor : ab aise hi dekhte rahenge yaa andar bhi aayenge.
Reyansh : wo.. Wo.. Haa chalo
( ab Reyansh Ke perspective se)
Ham hall me aa gye aur usne mujhe sofe baithne ka bol ke apne ammi abbu ko bula ne chali gayi.
( Aadil Siddiqui : Noor ke abbu. 56 saal ke hai. Ye bhi peshe se doctor hai. Khush mijaz insaan hai. Apni beti se bohot pyaar karte hai.
Farha Siddiqui : Noor ki ammi. Ye 50 saal ki hai. Noor ko apni sundarta apni ammi se hi mili hai. Ye ek housewife hai. Ye bhi aone shauhar aur beti se bohot pyaar karti hai. )
Thodi der me noor apne ammi abbu ke sath hall me aagyi wo log mere saamne wale sofe par baith gye.
( noor ke dad = N dad
noir ki mom = N mom)
N dad : haan to beta tum ho Reyansh.
Mai : ji haan uncle.
N mom : Noor hamesha tumhari baate batati rehti hai.
Noor ye baat sunke sharma rahi thi.
Noor : ( dhire se) kya ammi aap bhi.
Noor reyansh ko uske birthday pe use uski pasand ki mithayi khilana chahti thi iss liye usne reyansh se poocha .
Noor : Reyansh bachpan me konsi mithayi tumhe sabse jada pasand thi.
Mai : (hichkichate hue) mujhe nhi pata
[ kyuki reyansh ne bachpan me kabhi
Mithayi nahi khayi thi to ise kaise pata
Hoga ki kausi mithayi acchi hoti hai]
Noor : are aise kaise nahi pata bachapan me to sabko alag alag mithayi pansand hoti hai.
Mai : bachapan wo kya hota hai.
Ye sab noor ke parents dhyaan se sun rhe the.
Mai : Noor ek baat puchu.
Noor : haan pocho.
Mai : tum jab choti thi tab tumhare ghar me kamata kaun tha aur khana kaun banata tha.
N mom : beta ye to sidhi baat hai iske abbu kamate tge aur mai khana banati thi.
Mai : par mere saath aisa nahi tha na mere paas mere liye kamane wala koi tha, na khana banane wala aur na hi khilane wala. Aakhir anath jo thehra. Pet ki aag shant karne ke liye kaam karta tha par itne paise nhi hote the ke kabhi mithayi kharid sako to kaise batau ki bachpan me mujhe konsi mithayi pasand thi.
Ye sunke noor aur uski mom ki aakhe bhar aayi . Use abbu bole.
N dad : he upar wale iss bachche ko itni si umer me ye sab kyu jhelna pada.
Noor : aap sab bhi kyaa baat lekar baith gaye. Aur reyansh tum apni aakhen band karo surprise hai
Mai : kaisa surprise.
N mom : are beta bol rahi hai to kar lo na.
Phir maine apni aakhen band karli. Thodi der baad noor ne mujhe aakhen kholne ko kaha.
Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi.
Sab ek sath : Happy birthday to you..... Happy birthday to you....
Sab birthday song ga rahe the sammne table pe cake rakha hua tha. Tab jakr mujhe yaad aya ki aaj mera birthday hai. Tabhi cake dekh ke mujhe kuch yaad aane laga.
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Ye baat karib 9 saal pehele ki hai jab Janvi didi ka birthday tha toh ghar me bohot badi party rakhi hui thi. Mujhe us party me ana allowed nahi tha papa ne mujhe sakt kaha tha ki party me nhi ana. Mai bhi apne room me chup chap baitha tha par jab gana bajne laga mujhe bohot utsukta hone lagi ke niche kya ho raha hai ( bache to aap jante hi hai ki kaise hote hai ) is liye mai chupke se sidiyo ke paas se parde ke piche chup ke sab dekh raha tha.
Waha janvi didi ka birthday celebration ho raha tha. Mom dad unke saath cake cut karke unhe khila rahe the phir wo apne dosto se baat kar rahi thi.
Tabhi pata nhi kaise mai unhe dikh gaya aur ubke chehre ke bhav badal gye. Usne gusse ke sath meri taraf dekha aur jor se chillayi.
Janvi : ye haram ki aulad yaha kya kar rha hai. Maine kaha tha ki aaj mujhe ye dikhna nhi chahiye .
Ye bolke janvi didi mera hath pakad ke mujhe bahar nikalne lagi aur khich tan me mera hath waiter ke hath ke rakhe tray se takra gya jis karan ek juice ka glass niche gir gya aur juice fail gaya. Jiss karan janvi aur gussa ho gyi aur aag me ghi dalne ka kaam ek ladke ne kar diya janvi ko impress karne ke liye jo janvi ka dost tha.
Ladka : are are ye kya kar diya isne sara floor kharab kar diya.
Janvi : ye kya kar diya iss kutte ne sara mood kharab kar diya. Chal ab jaldi se floor saaf kar nahi to mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.
Mujhe rona aagya tha ye sab sunke mai subak raha tha par phir bhi kisi ne daya ke bhav tak na dikhaye. Maine ek baar Mummy aur papa ki taraf dekha jo shant khade the. Jab maine unhe dekha to unhone muh fer liya.
Janvi : ab dekh kya raha hai apni shirt utar aur ye sab saaf kar.
Maine rote rote apni shirt utari aur sab saaf karne laga. Sab mujhe dekh ke bas hass rahe the. Ye sab us din mere atmsamman par thes kar gaya tha.
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Noor mere samne hath ghumate hue
Noor : kya soch rahe ho.
Mai : (haklate hue) k... Kuch n.. Naahhii.
( Reyansh ko bachpan se ek problem thi jab bhi wo bura feel karta ya sad hota to wo haklata tha . Ye baat kisi ko pata nhi thi.)
Noor ne mujh ko aise haklate dekh mere kandhe pe hath rakhke puch liye.
Noor : kya hua reyansh aise hakla kyu rahe ho ?
Maine jaldi se apne aap ko control kiya aur bola.
Mai : kuch nahi.
Noor : chalo phir cake cut karte hai.
Mai : hmmm....
Phir mai cake katne hi wala tha ke noor ki ammi boli.
N mom: are beta pehle candles to bujha lo.
Mai : hmm~ wo mijhe pata nhi tha pehele kabhi birthday nhi manaya hai .
Ye sunke Noor ka chehra fika ho gya wo soch rhi thi ke
(Noor( man me) : reyansh ki mental state abhi puri tarah se sahi nhi hai usne apne life bohot bad experiences dekhe hai shayad ise ke karan ye itna shant rehta hai zada baat nhi karta)
Phir maine candles bujha ke cake cut kiya sabse pehele noor ne mujhe cake khilaya phir noor ki mom khilane lagi to meri akhon me nami si aa gyi kyuki unko dekh ke mujhe saima maa ki yaad aa gyi wo bhi mujhe aise hi apne hatho se khilati thi.
Aaj noor ke abbu air ammi noor ki harkate dekh ke thoda shock the kyuki noor kabhi ladko se jada baat nhi karti thi.
Phir ham sab ne dinner kiya phir sabko bye bol ke nikal raha tha to noor mujhe bahar tak chodne aayi. Gate ke paas aake wo boli.
Noor : aap wapas kab tak aayenge??
Mai : shayad 15 din lag sakte hai.
Noor : hhhmmmm~ koshish kijiyega jaldi aane ki.
Mai : hmmm.. Aaj ke liye shukriya.
Noor : shukriya ki jarurat nhi hai aap to waise bhi apne hai.
Mai : matlab?
Ispe wo kuch bhi nhi boli aur blush karte hue wapas andar bhag gyi. Mai iss baat pe jada dhyaan na dete hue car me baith ke nikal gaya room ki taraf .
Wahi usi din subah Mr. Raghuveer Rajput ke Yaha
Sab log breakfast ke liye baithe the dinning table pe sivaye swara ke wo iss wakt Reyansh ke room me baithi thi. Swara dinner, lunch yaha tak breakfast bhi reyansh ke room me hi karti thi.
Sabhi breakfast kar rahe the tabhi mr. Raghuveer ka phone baja. Unhone call uthaya.
Raghuveer : hello.
Samne se : Sir ek aadmi ka pata laga hai jo reyansh ke bare me janta hai
Raghuveer : wah kya khabar sunayi hai. Jald se jald us aadmi ko lekar mere mansion me aa jao .
Samne se : jii sir.
Aaagggeeee dekhte hai kyaaa hotaa haaiiii....
Bilal jan
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Zabardast updateUPDATE - 18
Noor : (udasi se) thik hai. Par jane se pehele kal aap mujhse milke jayege.
Mai :
Phir mai room pe wapas laut aya ye din bhi aise hi bit gaya .
Aabbbb aagggggeeeee.......
Agle din Michael ne Reyansh Ko weapons aur sari zaruri chize provide kar di. Reyansh ne sab sahi se set kar liya kyuki kal subah hi Reyansh Ko nikal na tha . Sab saman set karne ke baad Reyansh ready hone laga noor ke ghar jane ke liye kyuki kal Reyansh Ne noor ko promise kiya tha ki wo jane se pehele usse mil ke jaye ga aur use uske ammi abbu se bhi milna tha.
Aaj Reyansh ka 20th birthday tha jo use yaad nhi tha par noor ko pta tha usne jab reyansh ko hospital ka form fill up karne kaha tha tab Reyansh ne uspe birth date bhi likhi thi jo noor ne dekh li thi. Iss liye noor Reyansh ko aaj birthday surprise dene ka plan kar liya tha jisse Reyansh anjan tha.
Reyansh phir nikal pada Noor ke ghar ki aur. Karib 18 min baad wo Noor ke ghar ke saamne khada tha. Reyansh aage badha aur doorbell bajayi tab Noor ne hi darwaja khola par aaj usne burkha nhi pehna tha . Aaj pehli baar reyansh ne noor ko bina burkhe ke dekha tha aur jab reyansh ne use dekha to ek pal ke liye use ghurne hi laga kyuki wo lag bhi asi hi rahi thi.
rudolf nureyev photos
Uski wo kali aakhen bina makeup wala chera uake laal honth. Wo Reyansh ko aaise ghurta dekh sharmaa gyi aur boli.
Noor : ab aise hi dekhte rahenge yaa andar bhi aayenge.
Reyansh : wo.. Wo.. Haa chalo
( ab Reyansh Ke perspective se)
Ham hall me aa gye aur usne mujhe sofe baithne ka bol ke apne ammi abbu ko bula ne chali gayi.
( Aadil Siddiqui : Noor ke abbu. 56 saal ke hai. Ye bhi peshe se doctor hai. Khush mijaz insaan hai. Apni beti se bohot pyaar karte hai.
Farha Siddiqui : Noor ki ammi. Ye 50 saal ki hai. Noor ko apni sundarta apni ammi se hi mili hai. Ye ek housewife hai. Ye bhi aone shauhar aur beti se bohot pyaar karti hai. )
Thodi der me noor apne ammi abbu ke sath hall me aagyi wo log mere saamne wale sofe par baith gye.
( noor ke dad = N dad
noir ki mom = N mom)
N dad : haan to beta tum ho Reyansh.
Mai : ji haan uncle.
N mom : Noor hamesha tumhari baate batati rehti hai.
Noor ye baat sunke sharma rahi thi.
Noor : ( dhire se) kya ammi aap bhi.
Noor reyansh ko uske birthday pe use uski pasand ki mithayi khilana chahti thi iss liye usne reyansh se poocha .
Noor : Reyansh bachpan me konsi mithayi tumhe sabse jada pasand thi.
Mai : (hichkichate hue) mujhe nhi pata
[ kyuki reyansh ne bachpan me kabhi
Mithayi nahi khayi thi to ise kaise pata
Hoga ki kausi mithayi acchi hoti hai]
Noor : are aise kaise nahi pata bachapan me to sabko alag alag mithayi pansand hoti hai.
Mai : bachapan wo kya hota hai.
Ye sab noor ke parents dhyaan se sun rhe the.
Mai : Noor ek baat puchu.
Noor : haan pocho.
Mai : tum jab choti thi tab tumhare ghar me kamata kaun tha aur khana kaun banata tha.
N mom : beta ye to sidhi baat hai iske abbu kamate tge aur mai khana banati thi.
Mai : par mere saath aisa nahi tha na mere paas mere liye kamane wala koi tha, na khana banane wala aur na hi khilane wala. Aakhir anath jo thehra. Pet ki aag shant karne ke liye kaam karta tha par itne paise nhi hote the ke kabhi mithayi kharid sako to kaise batau ki bachpan me mujhe konsi mithayi pasand thi.
Ye sunke noor aur uski mom ki aakhe bhar aayi . Use abbu bole.
N dad : he upar wale iss bachche ko itni si umer me ye sab kyu jhelna pada.
Noor : aap sab bhi kyaa baat lekar baith gaye. Aur reyansh tum apni aakhen band karo surprise hai
Mai : kaisa surprise.
N mom : are beta bol rahi hai to kar lo na.
Phir maine apni aakhen band karli. Thodi der baad noor ne mujhe aakhen kholne ko kaha.
Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi.
Sab ek sath : Happy birthday to you..... Happy birthday to you....
Sab birthday song ga rahe the sammne table pe cake rakha hua tha. Tab jakr mujhe yaad aya ki aaj mera birthday hai. Tabhi cake dekh ke mujhe kuch yaad aane laga.
FLASHBACK
Ye baat karib 9 saal pehele ki hai jab Janvi didi ka birthday tha toh ghar me bohot badi party rakhi hui thi. Mujhe us party me ana allowed nahi tha papa ne mujhe sakt kaha tha ki party me nhi ana. Mai bhi apne room me chup chap baitha tha par jab gana bajne laga mujhe bohot utsukta hone lagi ke niche kya ho raha hai ( bache to aap jante hi hai ki kaise hote hai ) is liye mai chupke se sidiyo ke paas se parde ke piche chup ke sab dekh raha tha.
Waha janvi didi ka birthday celebration ho raha tha. Mom dad unke saath cake cut karke unhe khila rahe the phir wo apne dosto se baat kar rahi thi.
Tabhi pata nhi kaise mai unhe dikh gaya aur ubke chehre ke bhav badal gye. Usne gusse ke sath meri taraf dekha aur jor se chillayi.
Janvi : ye haram ki aulad yaha kya kar rha hai. Maine kaha tha ki aaj mujhe ye dikhna nhi chahiye .
Ye bolke janvi didi mera hath pakad ke mujhe bahar nikalne lagi aur khich tan me mera hath waiter ke hath ke rakhe tray se takra gya jis karan ek juice ka glass niche gir gya aur juice fail gaya. Jiss karan janvi aur gussa ho gyi aur aag me ghi dalne ka kaam ek ladke ne kar diya janvi ko impress karne ke liye jo janvi ka dost tha.
Ladka : are are ye kya kar diya isne sara floor kharab kar diya.
Janvi : ye kya kar diya iss kutte ne sara mood kharab kar diya. Chal ab jaldi se floor saaf kar nahi to mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.
Mujhe rona aagya tha ye sab sunke mai subak raha tha par phir bhi kisi ne daya ke bhav tak na dikhaye. Maine ek baar Mummy aur papa ki taraf dekha jo shant khade the. Jab maine unhe dekha to unhone muh fer liya.
Janvi : ab dekh kya raha hai apni shirt utar aur ye sab saaf kar.
Maine rote rote apni shirt utari aur sab saaf karne laga. Sab mujhe dekh ke bas hass rahe the. Ye sab us din mere atmsamman par thes kar gaya tha.
FLASHBACK END
Noor mere samne hath ghumate hue
Noor : kya soch rahe ho.
Mai : (haklate hue) k... Kuch n.. Naahhii.
( Reyansh ko bachpan se ek problem thi jab bhi wo bura feel karta ya sad hota to wo haklata tha . Ye baat kisi ko pata nhi thi.)
Noor ne mujh ko aise haklate dekh mere kandhe pe hath rakhke puch liye.
Noor : kya hua reyansh aise hakla kyu rahe ho ?
Maine jaldi se apne aap ko control kiya aur bola.
Mai : kuch nahi.
Noor : chalo phir cake cut karte hai.
Mai : hmmm....
Phir mai cake katne hi wala tha ke noor ki ammi boli.
N mom: are beta pehle candles to bujha lo.
Mai : hmm~ wo mijhe pata nhi tha pehele kabhi birthday nhi manaya hai .
Ye sunke Noor ka chehra fika ho gya wo soch rhi thi ke
(Noor( man me) : reyansh ki mental state abhi puri tarah se sahi nhi hai usne apne life bohot bad experiences dekhe hai shayad ise ke karan ye itna shant rehta hai zada baat nhi karta)
Phir maine candles bujha ke cake cut kiya sabse pehele noor ne mujhe cake khilaya phir noor ki mom khilane lagi to meri akhon me nami si aa gyi kyuki unko dekh ke mujhe saima maa ki yaad aa gyi wo bhi mujhe aise hi apne hatho se khilati thi.
Aaj noor ke abbu air ammi noor ki harkate dekh ke thoda shock the kyuki noor kabhi ladko se jada baat nhi karti thi.
Phir ham sab ne dinner kiya phir sabko bye bol ke nikal raha tha to noor mujhe bahar tak chodne aayi. Gate ke paas aake wo boli.
Noor : aap wapas kab tak aayenge??
Mai : shayad 15 din lag sakte hai.
Noor : hhhmmmm~ koshish kijiyega jaldi aane ki.
Mai : hmmm.. Aaj ke liye shukriya.
Noor : shukriya ki jarurat nhi hai aap to waise bhi apne hai.
Mai : matlab?
Ispe wo kuch bhi nhi boli aur blush karte hue wapas andar bhag gyi. Mai iss baat pe jada dhyaan na dete hue car me baith ke nikal gaya room ki taraf .
Wahi usi din subah Mr. Raghuveer Rajput ke Yaha
Sab log breakfast ke liye baithe the dinning table pe sivaye swara ke wo iss wakt Reyansh ke room me baithi thi. Swara dinner, lunch yaha tak breakfast bhi reyansh ke room me hi karti thi.
Sabhi breakfast kar rahe the tabhi mr. Raghuveer ka phone baja. Unhone call uthaya.
Raghuveer : hello.
Samne se : Sir ek aadmi ka pata laga hai jo reyansh ke bare me janta hai
Raghuveer : wah kya khabar sunayi hai. Jald se jald us aadmi ko lekar mere mansion me aa jao .
Samne se : jii sir.
Aaagggeeee dekhte hai kyaaa hotaa haaiiii....
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Story ab kaafi interesting ho gyiii hai bcz ab Noor ke dil me RAYANSH ke liye feelings aagyii hain ya shayad pyaar bhi ab dekhna hai ke RAYANSH kya apna mission complete kr paata hai to kaise jo ke wo kr.hi lega pr kaise ye dekhna hai aur phir kya wo wapas jaa kr.Noor se milta hai ya nahi agr milta hai to kya hota hai inke saath kya RAYANSH Noor ke pyaar ko accept kre ga jo kaafi difficult hai bcz usne dhoka jo khaa rakha hai har jagah se,
Phir ye bhi dekhana interesting hoga ke AHANA ki entry kaise aur kab hogi aur kya RAYANSH wapis apne city jayega? , Apni so called family se.mile ga pata nahi pr wo Swara se to laazmi hi mile ga .
Baaki story ab kaafi interesting ho gyiii hai to maza ayega next Updates prhne me .
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Maine bola hai ab seedha Tuesday ko
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