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[Calm_777]

Mujhe next update ke liye aap sab ki raye chahiye. Aap mujhe bata sakte hai ki mai aage kaise story continue karu.

 

[LionHeart007]

Mujhe next update ke liye aap sab ki raye chahiye. Aap mujhe bata sakte hai ki mai aage kaise story continue karu.

Ab jab RAYANSH ki training poori ho gyii hai to wo wapas apne born city chala jaye aur us se pehle Dr Noor aur uske beech bhi sab settle ho jaye aur jab wo wapas jaye to uska aur AHANA ka bhi kahin milna ho jaye jate huwe, aur wapas jaa kr wo bhi apni sister ke hi college me admission lega aur wahan usse apni sisters ki condition ka pata chale ga aur kisi trha pandit ki beti ka bhi .

 

[Don$mahi]

Nice update bhai.....
jaisa aapko sahi Lage bhai waisa hi karo....

 

[Delhiboy]

Nice update bhai

 

[Bilal jan]

UPDATE - 17

Jao pehele jake warmp ke liye iss ground ke 100 chakkar lagao phir tumhari baaki training shuru karte hai.

Aabbb aaagggeee...........

Maine karib aadhe ghante me 100 chakkar laga liya wo bhi kaafi easily because jab mujhe power mili thi tab uske sath hi meri physical strength, skills , knowledge aur techniques normal insaan se 1000 guna jada ho gyi thi.
Ye dekh teacher ki aakhen fati ki fati reh gyi phir bhi unhone apne facial expressions ko control kiya aur bola.
Teacher : good ab tumhari body ko har tarh ka pain diya jayega taki tum extreme se extreme condition me bhi survive kar sako.

Uske baad 6 logo ne milke mijhe har possible torture dena shuru ka diya. Pain ho raha tha par wo kafi kam tha par body damage ho rhi thi. Uske baad mijhe poison ka small dose diya taki meri body har tarah ke poison se bhi immune ho jaye. Phir martial arts hua uske baad har present techniques silhayi gyi . Aise hi raat ho gyi body pe kaafi chot ke nishan the toh teacher ne mujhe near by hospital visit karne kaha mai bhi maan gaya kyuki mai apni power use nhi karne wala tha khudko heal karne ke liye.
Abhi karib raat ke 9 baj rahe the, mai bhi city hospital pohoch gya. Jab mai doctor ke cabin me pohocha to dekha waha ek female doctor thi jisne bukha pehena tha. Usme se sirf uski khubsurat aakhen hi dikh rahi thi.


Maine door ko baja ke kaha.
Mai : may I come in doctor.
Doctor : yes of course .

Mai unke samne wali chair pe baith gaya .
Ek pal ke liye wo mere chehre me jaise kho si gyi phir apne aap ko kabu kiya aur Phir unhone pucha.

Doctor : ji kahiye kya taklif hai aapko.
Mai : aap Indian hai achi baat hai. sunne se acha aap dekh lijiye.
Ye bol ke maine apni shirt utar di . jaise hi maine shirt utari wo to bas phir meri body hi ghure ja rhi thi par jaise phir unka dhyaan mere body ke zakhmo pe gaya to wo shock me boli.
Doctor : itni serious chote aayi hai kya kar rhe the tum jo itni chote hai?
Mai : maine kuch bhi galat ya jhagda nhi kiya hai aur agar aapko lagta hai ke ye police matter hai to aap unhe bula sakti hai.
Doctor : nahi abhi in sab ka wakt nhi hai tumhari injuries kafi serious hai iss liye abhi inhe treat karna zaruri hai.

Iss ke sath wo mera first aid karne lagi. Wo ek baat observe kar rhi thi ke reyansh ne use najr utha ke ek baar bhi nhi dekha tha kyuki jaha ladke uske bhurkhe me rehne ke bavjud uske piche pagal the wahi reyansh use dekh bhi nhi raha tha ye uske liye kaafi surprising tha. First aid hone ke baad wo boli.
Doctor : waise aap ka naam kya hai?
Mai : REYANSH. Waise ab aap adat dal lijiye ab hamara milna roj hoga.
Doctor : kyu??
Mai : kyuki mai ek martial arts student hu aur aisi chote ab lagbhag har roj hogi to ab ata rahunga .
Doctor : ji. Waise mera naam Noor siddiqui hai.
( Noor Siddiqui : inki age abhi 22 years hai. Ye apne ammi abbu ke sath russia ke city me rehti hai. Dil se badi komal hai untni hi tan se bhi hai. Ye itni khubsurat hai ki agar koi inhe bina bhurkhe ke dekh le to pagla hi jaye par bahar inhe aaj tak kisi ne bina burkhe ke nhi dekha tha. Ye kaafi Sanskari hai. Bas ye emotional jada hai.)

Mai : maine pucha nhi tha.
Noor : so rude. Kya aapke ammi abbu ne aap ko tamiz nhi sikhayi.
Mai : (usdaas hote hue) Agar hote to shayad sikha dete .
Noor : ( nazren niche karte hue) sorry mujhe pata nhi tha aap mujhe maaf kar dijiye.
Mai : ji isme aap ki koi galti nhi hai shayad aap ke khuda ne hi meri kismat me sukh nhi likha tha. Koi baat nhi ab mai chalta hu Noor ji.
Noor : phir kal milte hai.
Mai bina piche dekhe waha se nikal gaya. Aur room pe aa ke sone ki koshish karne laga.
Aaj mujhe saima maa ki bohot yaad aa rahi thi aaj lag raha tha ki mai sach me anath hu .
Jaise taise karke mai so gaya. Agle din se mujhe practice ke sath emotions ko khatam karne ki bhi training di jane lagi par mai emotions ko control kar rha tha khatam nhi kar rha tha. Phir raat ko mai city hospital nikal pada first aid ke liye. Waha poch ke mai seedha doctor Noor ke paas chala gya. Mai Noor ke samne wali chair par baith ke shirt nikal di. Noor bhi bina kuch bole pehle first aid karne lagi. Jab wo dawai laga rahi thi usne masoom sa chehra bana ke (jo mai bhurkhe ki wajah se dekh nhi pa rha tha) sweet tone me mujhse pucha
Noor : jada dard ho rha hai.

Maine naa ke gardan hila di. Maine abhi bhi noor ki taraf nhi dekha tha iss liye ab Noor ko lag raha tha ki mai use ignore kar rha hu.

Noor : kya aap humesha se aise hi behave karte hai.
Mai : haa mai bachpan se hi aisa hu.
Noor : (halka smile karte hue) par aap ki aakhen to kuch aur hi bata rahi hai. Mai logo ki akhon me dekh ke bata sakti hu ke aadmi jhut bol rha hai ya sach.
Mai : isse aapka koi lena dena nhi hai.
Jab mai ye baat keh rha tha tab noor meri aakhon me dekh rahi thi aur jaise dekh paa rahi thi ke kitna gum maine apne andar samete rakha hai. Mujhe aaisa lag raha tha wo meri aakhon ke zariye meri rooh me jhakn rahi hai iss liye mai turant waha se uth kar nikal gaya .
Aise hi din bit rhe the aur har bitte din ke sath meri training extremely tough hoti jaa rahi thi. Ab noor bhi meri friend ki tarh ho gyi thi ab mai unse thoda khul gaya tha par mai apni personal bate avoid karta tha. Aise hi 3 mahine bit gye the. Aise hi ek din Sir Michale mere paas aaye aur bole.
Michael : Reyansh tumhari learning abilities dusro ke mukable kaafi fast hai. Iss liye aaj mai tumhare liye ek mission laya hu.
Mai : kaisa mission??
Michael : west command ke durg market ko khatam karna hai.
Mai : ( cold smile ke sath) toh aap apne competitor ko hi khatam karna chahte hai.
Michael : ye kaam ke liye tumko pay bhi kiya jaye ga.
Mai : kitna.
Michael : 50,000 dollars.
Mai : done. Bataiye kab jana hai??
Michael : tum parso nikloge west command ke liye. Aur weapons and all necessary things will be provided you tomorrow.
Mai : hmmmm ~
___________________________________
Phir raat ko Noor ke paas hospital chala gaya.
Noor : to gye janab bataiye aaj konsi nayi chot lagwa lai hai.
Mai : (smiles)
Phir noor ne meri chot clean kar first aid kar diya.
Mai : tumhare ammi abbu kaise hai.
Noor : ji khairiyat se hai aap kal unhe milne kyu nhi aate.
Mai : abhi kuch din to nhi mil paunga out of city jaa rha hu.
Noor : (udasi aur desperation se) kyuuuu???
Mai : kuch zaroori kaam niptana hai.
Noor : kitne din lagenge.
Mai : are.. are sans to lele sidha rashan pani leke chadi ja rahi ho.
Noor : pehele bataiye kitne din lagenge??
Mai : shayad 15 din legenge.
Noor : itne din?
Mai : hmmmm~
Noor : (udasi se) thik hai. Par jane se pehele kal aap mujhse milke jayege.
Mai : ok.
Phir mai room pe wapas laut aya ye din bhi aise hi bit gaya .

Aaaggeee dekhte hai kya hota hai

Nice update

 

[B@rty2468]

Superb update

 

[Anu3832]

UPDATE - 17

Jao pehele jake warmp ke liye iss ground ke 100 chakkar lagao phir tumhari baaki training shuru karte hai.

Aabbb aaagggeee...........

Maine karib aadhe ghante me 100 chakkar laga liya wo bhi kaafi easily because jab mujhe power mili thi tab uske sath hi meri physical strength, skills , knowledge aur techniques normal insaan se 1000 guna jada ho gyi thi.
Ye dekh teacher ki aakhen fati ki fati reh gyi phir bhi unhone apne facial expressions ko control kiya aur bola.
Teacher : good ab tumhari body ko har tarh ka pain diya jayega taki tum extreme se extreme condition me bhi survive kar sako.

Uske baad 6 logo ne milke mijhe har possible torture dena shuru ka diya. Pain ho raha tha par wo kafi kam tha par body damage ho rhi thi. Uske baad mijhe poison ka small dose diya taki meri body har tarah ke poison se bhi immune ho jaye. Phir martial arts hua uske baad har present techniques silhayi gyi . Aise hi raat ho gyi body pe kaafi chot ke nishan the toh teacher ne mujhe near by hospital visit karne kaha mai bhi maan gaya kyuki mai apni power use nhi karne wala tha khudko heal karne ke liye.
Abhi karib raat ke 9 baj rahe the, mai bhi city hospital pohoch gya. Jab mai doctor ke cabin me pohocha to dekha waha ek female doctor thi jisne bukha pehena tha. Usme se sirf uski khubsurat aakhen hi dikh rahi thi.


Maine door ko baja ke kaha.
Mai : may I come in doctor.
Doctor : yes of course .

Mai unke samne wali chair pe baith gaya .
Ek pal ke liye wo mere chehre me jaise kho si gyi phir apne aap ko kabu kiya aur Phir unhone pucha.

Doctor : ji kahiye kya taklif hai aapko.
Mai : aap Indian hai achi baat hai. sunne se acha aap dekh lijiye.
Ye bol ke maine apni shirt utar di . jaise hi maine shirt utari wo to bas phir meri body hi ghure ja rhi thi par jaise phir unka dhyaan mere body ke zakhmo pe gaya to wo shock me boli.
Doctor : itni serious chote aayi hai kya kar rhe the tum jo itni chote hai?
Mai : maine kuch bhi galat ya jhagda nhi kiya hai aur agar aapko lagta hai ke ye police matter hai to aap unhe bula sakti hai.
Doctor : nahi abhi in sab ka wakt nhi hai tumhari injuries kafi serious hai iss liye abhi inhe treat karna zaruri hai.

Iss ke sath wo mera first aid karne lagi. Wo ek baat observe kar rhi thi ke reyansh ne use najr utha ke ek baar bhi nhi dekha tha kyuki jaha ladke uske bhurkhe me rehne ke bavjud uske piche pagal the wahi reyansh use dekh bhi nhi raha tha ye uske liye kaafi surprising tha. First aid hone ke baad wo boli.
Doctor : waise aap ka naam kya hai?
Mai : REYANSH. Waise ab aap adat dal lijiye ab hamara milna roj hoga.
Doctor : kyu??
Mai : kyuki mai ek martial arts student hu aur aisi chote ab lagbhag har roj hogi to ab ata rahunga .
Doctor : ji. Waise mera naam Noor siddiqui hai.
( Noor Siddiqui : inki age abhi 22 years hai. Ye apne ammi abbu ke sath russia ke city me rehti hai. Dil se badi komal hai untni hi tan se bhi hai. Ye itni khubsurat hai ki agar koi inhe bina bhurkhe ke dekh le to pagla hi jaye par bahar inhe aaj tak kisi ne bina burkhe ke nhi dekha tha. Ye kaafi Sanskari hai. Bas ye emotional jada hai.)

Mai : maine pucha nhi tha.
Noor : so rude. Kya aapke ammi abbu ne aap ko tamiz nhi sikhayi.
Mai : (usdaas hote hue) Agar hote to shayad sikha dete .
Noor : ( nazren niche karte hue) sorry mujhe pata nhi tha aap mujhe maaf kar dijiye.
Mai : ji isme aap ki koi galti nhi hai shayad aap ke khuda ne hi meri kismat me sukh nhi likha tha. Koi baat nhi ab mai chalta hu Noor ji.
Noor : phir kal milte hai.
Mai bina piche dekhe waha se nikal gaya. Aur room pe aa ke sone ki koshish karne laga.
Aaj mujhe saima maa ki bohot yaad aa rahi thi aaj lag raha tha ki mai sach me anath hu .
Jaise taise karke mai so gaya. Agle din se mujhe practice ke sath emotions ko khatam karne ki bhi training di jane lagi par mai emotions ko control kar rha tha khatam nhi kar rha tha. Phir raat ko mai city hospital nikal pada first aid ke liye. Waha poch ke mai seedha doctor Noor ke paas chala gya. Mai Noor ke samne wali chair par baith ke shirt nikal di. Noor bhi bina kuch bole pehle first aid karne lagi. Jab wo dawai laga rahi thi usne masoom sa chehra bana ke (jo mai bhurkhe ki wajah se dekh nhi pa rha tha) sweet tone me mujhse pucha
Noor : jada dard ho rha hai.

Maine naa ke gardan hila di. Maine abhi bhi noor ki taraf nhi dekha tha iss liye ab Noor ko lag raha tha ki mai use ignore kar rha hu.

Noor : kya aap humesha se aise hi behave karte hai.
Mai : haa mai bachpan se hi aisa hu.
Noor : (halka smile karte hue) par aap ki aakhen to kuch aur hi bata rahi hai. Mai logo ki akhon me dekh ke bata sakti hu ke aadmi jhut bol rha hai ya sach.
Mai : isse aapka koi lena dena nhi hai.
Jab mai ye baat keh rha tha tab noor meri aakhon me dekh rahi thi aur jaise dekh paa rahi thi ke kitna gum maine apne andar samete rakha hai. Mujhe aaisa lag raha tha wo meri aakhon ke zariye meri rooh me jhakn rahi hai iss liye mai turant waha se uth kar nikal gaya .
Aise hi din bit rhe the aur har bitte din ke sath meri training extremely tough hoti jaa rahi thi. Ab noor bhi meri friend ki tarh ho gyi thi ab mai unse thoda khul gaya tha par mai apni personal bate avoid karta tha. Aise hi 3 mahine bit gye the. Aise hi ek din Sir Michale mere paas aaye aur bole.
Michael : Reyansh tumhari learning abilities dusro ke mukable kaafi fast hai. Iss liye aaj mai tumhare liye ek mission laya hu.
Mai : kaisa mission??
Michael : west command ke durg market ko khatam karna hai.
Mai : ( cold smile ke sath) toh aap apne competitor ko hi khatam karna chahte hai.
Michael : ye kaam ke liye tumko pay bhi kiya jaye ga.
Mai : kitna.
Michael : 50,000 dollars.
Mai : done. Bataiye kab jana hai??
Michael : tum parso nikloge west command ke liye. Aur weapons and all necessary things will be provided you tomorrow.
Mai : hmmmm ~
___________________________________
Phir raat ko Noor ke paas hospital chala gaya.
Noor : to gye janab bataiye aaj konsi nayi chot lagwa lai hai.
Mai : (smiles)
Phir noor ne meri chot clean kar first aid kar diya.
Mai : tumhare ammi abbu kaise hai.
Noor : ji khairiyat se hai aap kal unhe milne kyu nhi aate.
Mai : abhi kuch din to nhi mil paunga out of city jaa rha hu.
Noor : (udasi aur desperation se) kyuuuu???
Mai : kuch zaroori kaam niptana hai.
Noor : kitne din lagenge.
Mai : are.. are sans to lele sidha rashan pani leke chadi ja rahi ho.
Noor : pehele bataiye kitne din lagenge??
Mai : shayad 15 din legenge.
Noor : itne din?
Mai : hmmmm~
Noor : (udasi se) thik hai. Par jane se pehele kal aap mujhse milke jayege.
Mai : ok.
Phir mai room pe wapas laut aya ye din bhi aise hi bit gaya .

Aaaggeee dekhte hai kya hota hai

Awesome update brother

 

[A.A.G.]

Mujhe next update ke liye aap sab ki raye chahiye. Aap mujhe bata sakte hai ki mai aage kaise story continue karu.

russia me reyansh bahot sare missions complete kare aur bahot paise kamaye..aur apni company suru kare..dr. noor reyansh se apna pyaar ka ijhaar kare aur reyansh ke sath India chali jaye..!! aage reyansh padhayi kare apne behen ke college aur saima maa ko apne sath rakh le hamesha ke liye..aur reyansh ka business uske khas log handle kare..!! swara se bhi mil le reyansh aur swara reyansh ke sath hamesha ke liye rehne aajaye..!! baki gharwalo ko toh unke kiye ki saja toh milegi hi..aur swara se reyansh ko pandit ke beti ke bare me pata chal jaye..!!

 

[Calm_777]

Update kal aayega 4 baje ke pehele

 

[Vipul]

UPDATE - 16​

hotel nikal pada kyuki mujhe pata tha samira wapas mafi mangne aaegi aur mai ab mai use apne samne bardasht nhi kar skta tha iss liye nikal gaya hotel aur apne naye safar ki aur.......

Aabb aagggeee..........

Hotel pohochne ke baad mai ek room book kar kuch hard drinks kharid kar room me chala gya. Room me aa kar seedha sharab ki bottle ko muh se laga kar ek hi baar me khatam kar diya (nasha hona na hona ye mere uper tha powers ke karan mai jab chahu tab hi mujhe nasha hoga otherwise nhi hoga). Phir dusri bottle khatam ki aur bed pe let gaya aur aakhen band kar liya par jaise hi aaakhen band ki Samira ka chehra saamne aa gya phir agle hi pal uska wo ganda sach yaad aa gya aur itna gussa ane laga ki body se dhua nikalne laga. Mai uth ke sidha shower on krke uske niche khada ho gya. Kuch der baad mai sahi ho gya par aaj ek baat mai samajh gaya tha ke mai ab wapas pyaar nhi kar paunga kyuki ab koi aur dhoka jhelne ki takat nhi thi mujhme.
Agli din mai flight se aidha Russia ke liye nikal gaya. Mai ne apne sources se sabse hard training dene wale Russian mafia camp ke bare me pata lagaya tha aur mai wahi jane wala tha apni practice ke liye.
Mai aeroplane me baitha apne life ke experience ke bare me soch rha tga waise uae experience kehna galat tha kyuki abhi tak mujhe sirf gum dard dukh aur dhoke hi mile the . Mai soch hi rha tha ki mere bagal wali seat pe ek mid aged aadmi aake baith gaya. Usne meri tarf dekha aur kaha.
Aadmi : myself Aanand Mehta. Mai ek poet hu.
Mai : (cold tone me) to mai kya kru.
Aanand : tum to kaafi rude ho yaar.
Mai : (no answer)
Aanand : agar tum aise hi shant baithe rahoge to mai to bore ho jaunga. Chalo mai tumhe apni poetry sunata hu.

"Mohabbat ki inteha na puchhiye,
is pyaar kee vajah na puchhiye,
har saans me samaye rahte ho..
kahan base ho tum jagah na puchhiye."

(third person perspective)
Ye shayari sunne ke baad Reyansh ke expression change ho gye use samira ka chehra yaad ane laga aur wo udaas hone laga tabhi aanand bola.

Aanand : lagta hai dil tute aashik ho. Tumhara chera to yahi bata rha hai.
Reyansh : (emotionless hasi ke sath) aisa hi samajh lijiye.
Anand : to ab tum bhi kuch suna hi do suna hai dil tute aashik ki bate sidha dil se nikalti hai.
Reyansh :
" tu likhe DARD to mai aage behisab likhu,
tu likhe Sham to mai gum gile aur sharab
likhu."
Anand : wah ! Mai jo suna tha wo to sach nikla.
Reyansh :
‘Ye ankh jab khule to chehra tumhara ho,
Ye ankh jab band ho to sapna tumhara ho….
Mout bhi aa jaye to gum nahi iska,
Kafan bhi ho to vo daman tumhara ho’……

Anand : wah ji wah aap to khud bade ghalib nikale . Waise kya mai iss bade Faiz ka naam jaan sakta hu.
Reyansh : REYANSH.

Aise hi reyansh ka safar kat gaya .plane rusaia land kar chuka tha. Reyansh airport se chalte hue bahar aya aur aasman ki taraf dekh kar anpa hath upar karke pehle apni powers seal ki kyuki abhi iss training ko bina kisi powers ka use kiye bina pura karna chahta tha.
Phir Reyansh nikal pada Russian mafia base ki taraf. Russian mafia ki training duniya ki sabse extreme training mani jati hai. Bohot se logo ki training ke dauran hi maut ho jati hai.
(reyanshs perspective)
Mai base pe pohoch gaya car se utrne ke baad mai base ke andar gaya command office me jaha ek old person baitha hua tha.
Usne mujhe dekhte hue kaha.
Old person : nice to see you mr. Reyansh again.
Mai : same here Michael sir.
Michael : are you sure you want to take this training ?? . Its extremely hard beyond your expectations so think twice before answering.
Mai : i am absolutely sure about it.
Michael : ok then we will start your training from tomorrow morning.
Mai : thanks sir for this favor.

Ye bol mai waha se nikal apne assigned room me aa gya. Aise hi aaj ka din nit gaya.

Wahi kahi ek andhere jungle me kafi lightning bolts strike ho rhi thi. Suddenly aasman se ek asteroid ki tarah dikhne wali chiz forest me aa giri, sab taraf uske karan dhua dhua ho gaya . Jab waha sab shaant hua tab us dhue me se ek shadow nikalti nazar aayi uske baal aur figure dekh ke koi bhi bata sakta tha ki wo ek ladki hai. Jab wo bahar aayi tab wo kuch aaisi dikh rahi thi.




Usne pure black kapde pehene hue the. Uski khubsurti iss jahan ki lag hi nhi rahi thi aisa lag raha tha uski beauti , cuteness aur figure
Ka koi compition hi nhi hai.
Wo ab asman ki taraf dekh ke kehti hai.

Ladki : mai wapas aa gyi mere prince iss bar hum dono ko koi juda nhi kar sakta . Mai aa rahi hu Reyansh. ISS BAAR REYANSH AAHANA KA HO KAR HI RAHEGA....

Iss ke sath us ladki ki aakhen bhi kali ho gyi aur suddenly ek bijli chamki aur iss ke sath hi wo ladki bhi waha se gayab ho gyi.

Idehar reyansh ki taraf.

Reyansh savere 4 baje uth kar fresh hoke training area me pohoch gaya. Waha uske teachers already available the .
(trainer English me bol rha hai par mai hindi me likhunga)
Teacher : so tum ho wo jo ye try karna chahta hai. Bache mai abhi bhi keh rha hu wapas chale jao ye tumhare bas ki baat nhi hai.

Mai : ye aap decide nhi kar sakte kya mere bas ka hai aur kya nhi.
Teacher : kaafi arrogant ho koi baat nhi kuch hi din me tumhari saari arrogance nikal jayegi. Jao pehele jake warmp ke liye iss ground ke 100 chakkar lagao phir tumhari baaki training shuru karte hai.

Aage dekhte hai kya hota hai.......
Sorry short update ke liye but jaldi jaldi me likha hai agla update kal subah mil jayega.

Nice Update Bhai