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Badhiya shuruwatUPDATE :- 1
Ek jagah jo earth to nahi lag rahi thi . Har jagah tabahi Mach rahi thi . Aesa lag raha tha jese wo planet hi tabah ho raha ho .
( Language change to hindi )
Aawaz1 : Hume yaha se jana hoga
Aawaz2 : par hum jayega kaha
Aawaz1 : Chalo
Ye kehkar wo dono Aage chale jaate hai . Dono kisi Aatma ki Tarah lag rahi thi . Dono kayi samay ke baad Prithvi par aaye . Unko koi dekh nahi sakta tha . Dono ko kuch Aesa chahiye tha jisme wo apne aap ko ik aur mauka de paye apne Grah ( planet ) ko fir se banane ka . Wo dono bahut kuch dekhne ke baad ek chote bacche ke sharir ke andar pravesh karte hai .
Wahi dusri taraf ek aadmi hospital me khada tha . Andar uski patni ki delivery chal rahi thi . Kuch samay baad doctor Bahar aata hai . Wo aadmi jaldi se doctor ke pass jata hai . Doctor uske hatho me new born baby pakda deta hai .
Aadmi : doctor meri patni kesi hai
Doctor : I am sorry sir hum aapki patni ko bacha nahi sake.
Ye sunkar wo aadmi jese ki Shock me chala gaya ho . Fir wo apni mrat patni ki laash aur apne bacche ko ghar lekar aata hai . Sare gharwalo ko patni ke nidhan ki baat pata chali . Pure ghar me yahi fel gaya ki ye baccha in a ashubh hai . Fir wo aadmi apni patni ka antim sanskar karta hai . Us aadmi ko bhi apna baccha manhoos aur ashubh lagta hai . Kuch dino baad us aadmi ke chote bhai ka accident ho jata hai jisme usko paralysis ho jata hai . Iska bhi Pura dosh us bacche par lag jata hai . Wo baccha rota rehta par koi uske pass jana bhi pasand nahi karta siway us bacche ki Bua ke . Uski Bua ne hi use apna doodh pilaya tha . Tab uske bhi navjaat shishu Hua tha isliye doodh aata tha . Us baache ka name Rakha gya Arjun uski kundli ke hisab se . Uske pita ne to usko dekhna hi band kar diya tha . Uske pita ne dusri shaadi karli . Wo ladka kuch bada hone laga to usko maarna pitna chalu ho chuka tha . Aakhir me uski Bua usko sheher lekar chali gyi .
{ INTRODUCTION
1) Rajveer singh Thakur :- Hero ke pita . Hero ko to futi aankh nahi dekhte . Are dekhne ki kya baat karte ho . Pichle 14 saalo se use dekha tak nahi hai . Gaanv me bahut rutba hai . Gaanv ke bahut bade jamindar hai . Inke pass croro ki jaydat hai .
2 ) Soumya Thakur:- ( dead ) Hero ki mom . Inki death ho chuki hai . Kab wo to aapko pata hi hai .
3) Reema Thakur :- Rajveer ki dusri patni . Isne arjun ko choti Umar me bahut maara pita tha . Isko bas apne baccho se pyaar hai . Iska figure 35-30-35 hai .
4) Anjali Thakur :- Age 20 . Reema ki beti . Ispar rajveer apni jaan lutata hai . Dikhne me kafi khubsurat hai . Ye 6 saal ki thi jab Arjun Sheher gaya tha . Uske baad isne arjun ke bare me jo bhi suna usse isko yahi laga ki arjun ek manhoos hai .
5) Ananya Thakur :- Age 18 . Reema ke dusri beti .
6 ) Shyam Thakur :- Rajveer ka chota bhai . Paralysis hai . Chal nahi sakta . Kuch bol nahi sakta . Bas sun sakta hai . Inke Lund kaam nahi karta . Pure din wheelchair par hi rhta hai .
7) Vimla Thakur :- Rajveer ki patni . Iski koi Santan nahi hai .
8) Lalita kapoor :- Rajveer ki badi behen aur Arjun ki Bua . Isine Arjun ko apna dudh pilaya aur yahi usko 7 saal ki umra me mumbai lekar aa gayi . Ye manhoos jese chizo par vishwas nahi karti . Modern soch wali aaurat hai . Iska koi beta nahi hai . Isne arjun ko apne bete jesa hi pyaar kiya . Ye ek bahut badi doctor hai neurologist.
9) Vishwanath Kapoor :- Ye Traveller hai . Foreign se aaye logo ko Pure India ke ser karate hai . 2-3 mahine me ek baar ye ghar aate hai .
10 ) Ritika kapoor :- Age 21 . Ye bhi Arjun ki class me hi hai . Dono acche dost hai . Arjun se sirf 1 mahina badi hai . Dono same class me hai .
11) Jheel kapoor : - Age 18 . Abhi college ke 1st year me aayi hai . Ye arjun ke saath Mano ke jese attached hai . Apna Pura haq jatati hai arjun par .
12) Arjun Thakur :- ( Hero ) software Engineering last year me hai . Kuch hi dino baad ye 21 ka ho jayega . Dikhne me Average hai . Height Achi hai .
Rajveer ke pita ne apne teeno santano ko padhaya jisme se unke dono beto ko koi ruchi nahi thi par unki beti padhayi me bahut acchi thi ]



Superb update..UPDATE :- 2
Wo ladka kuch bada hone laga to usko maarna pitna chalu ho chuka tha . Aakhir me uski Bua usko sheher lekar chali gyi.
AB AAGE ;
21 Saal baad :-
Me as Arjun
Apichle 13-14 saalo se me Bua ke sath hi reh raha hu . Apne bachpan ke dino me mene kya sehen kiya wo sirf me hi jaanta hu . Bachpan me papa ke Jane ke baad meri sauteli mujhse ghar ke kaam karwana , har choti chiz par mujhe lakdi se maarna , jisme meri chachi ka bhi hath uthana . Sirf yahi nahi , shyam ko meri pita aata to usse bhi meri pitayi karwana . Choti umra me hi mujhe ek kutta jese Pala jaa raha tha . Wo to accha Hua ki meri Bua ne mujhe ek din maar khate hue dekh Liya aur yaha mumbai le aayi . Warna me Mar jata ya fir un sab ko maar deta bada hokar . Unki wajah se mere andar nafrat bhar gyi thi . Me kisise sidhe muh baat nahi karta . Bas apne me hi rhta . Sex education mere andar Pura tha . Me bas apne me hi khoya rehta hu . Padhayi me me accha tha . School me mera sirf ek dost tha jo abhi college me bhi hai .
[ CHARACTER INTRO
1) Nagraj :- Ek Ameer businessman .
2) Shweta :- Nagraj ki patni .
3) Ravi :- Arjun ka dost .Age 21 Ya kahu to sirf name ka dost . Sirf ritika ka patane ke liye arjun ka dost Bana hai . Kitne salo se ritika ke piche pada hai par ritika bhaav hi nahi deti .
4) Shilpa :- Ravi ki badi behen . Age 23 .
5) Rosy :- Age 20
]
Parso mera birthday hai par Lawda mujhe fark pade . Meri koi gf nahi thi kyunki na to me dikhne me jyada acha tha aur na hi me kisise jyada baat karta . Ladkiyo me mene sirf ritika aur jheel se baate ki hui hai .
Subah ka waqt tha .
Me subah jaldi uth jata hu . Sabke saath nashta karke Apni bike par ritika ke sath college chala jata hu . Bike mujhe Bua ne kharid kar di thi . Isse hi me aur ritika dono college jate hai . College pahuchkar ritika to apne frnds me shaamil ho jati hai par me sirf Ravi se baat karta hu . Ravi koi mera jyada accha dost nahi tha . Wo mera mazaak bhi udaya karta tha ritika ke saamne cool banne ke liye . Mujhe nahi pata tha wo ritika ko patane ke piche pada hai . Ritika mujhe hamesha Ravi se door rehne ko kehti hai par mene kabhi uski baat par dhyan nahi diya . Dopahar ko college khatam karne ke baad me aur ritika ghar aa jate hai . College me meri image ek padhaku bacche ki Tarah thi jo chup chap rehta tha jyada . Ghar aane ke baad fir se kitab lekar baith jana . Aesa nahi tha ki me bahht jyada sharif tha . Par me kuch bolta nahi tha . Kuch Der baad jheel bhi aa jati hai . Shyaam ko Bua bhi aa jati hai . Me jyadatar time apne room me hi rhta hu . Mujhe bua Bahar ghumna aur naye frnds banane ke bare me kehti par me chup chap apne room me hi rehta . Shyaam ko khaana khake me raat ko so jata hu . Agla din bhi kuch aesa hi nikalta hai . Fir aata hai mera birthday ka din.
12 AM
Raat ka andhera .
Aawaz1 : kaisa hai mera bhai . Meri Shaktiya mujhe wapas mil chuki hai .
Aawaz2 : wapas se milkar acha lag raha hai bhai . Mujhe bhi apni shaktiyo ka abhas ho raha hai . Parantu hum abhi is manushya ke sharir ke andar hai .
Aawaz1 : Hum Yaha se ab kabhi nahi nikal sakte mere bhai . Ab hume iski madad leni hi padegi .
Subah hoti hai . Me bathroom me naha raha tha . Aaj mera birthday par mujhe koi fark nahi padna tha . Tabhi mujhe ek aawaz sunai di
Aawaz1 : Kese ho
Me apne aaspass dekhta hu . Mujhe kuch dikhai nahi deta . Me apna vehem maanta hu .
Aawaz1 : Chutiye tere andar se bol raha hu me .
Me dar gya wapas ye sunke .
Aawaz 2 : Bhai hum tumhare andar se hi bol rahe hai .
Me : ( mann me ) Bc me kahi pagal to nahi ho gaya .
Aawaz1 : Sale chutiye tu pagal nahi Hua. Me tere andar se hi bol raha hu
Me : Kon ho tum
Aawaz1 : Me Devil
Aawaz2 : Aur Me Angel
Meri to fatt gyi .
Me : Kon ho tum dono
Devil : Me aur mera bhai tab se tere andar hai jab tu teri maa ki chut se Bahar nahi nikla tha
Me : ( chillake ) Maa par jana nahi
Devil : Chutiye tu apne mann me bhi bol sakta hai . Hum dono ki aawaz sirf tu hi sun sakta hai aur koi nahi
Angel : Ha hum dono ki aawaz sirf tum sun sakte ho
Me : Tum dono kya chahte ho
Devil : Jyada kuch nahi . Ab dhyan se sun . Ab tu hi hum dono hai aur hum dono hi tu hai . Hum ab alag nahi ho sakte .
Fir Angle mujhe batata hai ki wo grah aur uske logo ko fir se revive karna chahte hai .
Me : Me yaha se kahi nahi jauga
Devil : Kahi Jane ko nahi bol Raha hu . ************************
Fir Devil mujhe Sab batata hai .
Devil : Hum dono aur tu ek dusre ke Bina adhere hai . Hamari power ka hum istemaal nahi kar sakte par tum kar sakte ho .
Me : Me tumhari madad karne ko taiyar hu par abhi nahi .
Devil : Thik hai hume Manjur hai
Me : Ye Angel kuch bolta nahi kya
Devil : Wo sharif hai Kam hi bolta hai
Angel : Bhai shuru kare
Devil : Ha
Mera sharir achanak hawa me udne lagta hai . Mere sharir me bahut dard hone lagta hai . Kuch kali aur saved kirne mere sharir me jaa rahi thi . 10 min baad me niche zameen par aa jata hu . Mujhe aesa lag raha tha jese me bahut powerfull hu .
Me...........( mann me) bkl ye kya ho raha .
Me phle se hi nanga tha . Bathroom me naha jo raha tha . Mera Lund jo 5 inch ka tha wo ab karib 11 inch ka ho gya tha .
Devil : ye to meri shaktiyo ka chota sa namuna hai . Aage dekh kya hota hai .