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[Dragon.]

U p d a t e ~ 5

Sureah- dekha mai kahta tha n ki jab bhagwan hame beta diya h to uska ahar bhi jarur denge hamra beta divya h aur usse bhi jayada tumhari mamta h tumhari maa ke mamta ke karan hi ye sab huya h mai dhayna ho gya tum jaisi wife aur aditya jaise beta pake

Phir puspa apne bete ko dudh pila kar sula deti h aur dono bhi so jate abhi adhi rat ke samay huya tha ki achanak puspa jor se mere bete ko bachao koi to mere bete ko bachao aditya.... chilate huye uth jati h

Ab aage

Puspa uthate hi apne bete ko idhar udhar dhundhne lagti h jab dekhti h ki aditya uske side me so rha h to usko utha ke apne sine se lga kar rone lagti h usko rote dekh suresh uska ane sine se lga leta h aur puchhta h

Suresh- kya hua puspa tum chikhi kyu aur to kyu rhi h koi bura sapna dekhi h kya

Puspa sirf roti rahti h kuchh bolti nhi h

Suresh- kya hua puspa bolo bhi aise rone se kya ho batao hamko kya hua h
Puspa - +subakte huye) o.. o.. mere bete ko mar denge please bachha lo mere bete ko
Suresh- kon mar dega mere bete batao kya dekhi sapne me
Puspa- o o kuchh log the hatho me talvar liye huye o mere bete ko marne aa rhe the please bachha lo o tumhara bhi beta h please bacha lo

Itna bol kar puspa phir se rone lagi phir suresh usko kisi tarah chup karata h aur bolta

Suresh- puspa tum bekar me dar rhe ho kuchh nhi hoga mere bete ko o ek sapna h sirf sapna samjhi ab chup ho jao aur so jao

( suresh ye bol to rha tha ki kuchh nhi hoga lekin andar andar khud dar rha tha aur dare bhi kyu na kitna minto ke bad ek beta mila tha)

Puspa- mai kuchh nhi sunna chahti aap ek kam karo guruji se is bare me bat kro

(Puspa ki ye bat suresh ko bhi achhi lagi o socha guruji se bat kar ke dekhta hu note- us din guru ji ne suresh ko bola tha ki mujhse kuch kam hoga to mujhe dhyan me yada karna mai ja jaunga

Phir suresh guruji ka dhyan karne lagta h

Suresh - (dhayan me ) guruji ji mujhe darsan dijiye is tuksh insan ko aapki jarurat h kripya kar ke darsan dijiye

Phir waha guru parsuram ji prakat hote h aur bolte h

Guruji- aankhe kholo wats mai aa gya hu bolo mujhe ki liye yad kiya
Suresh- (aankhe kholte huye ) paranam guruji mai dhanya ho gya guruji aapka dobara darsan pake
Puspa- Pranam gurudev
Guruji- dirghyau bava... Bolo kyu yad kiya mejhe
Suresh - aap to antrayami h gurudev aap se kya chhipa h
Guruji - phir bhi mai tumse sunna chahta hu
Puspa- guruji mai ek sapna dekha ki koi mere bete ko marna chahta h kripya mere bache ko bachha lijiye guru ji
Suresh- gurudev ye sapna kyu aaya akhir kon marna chahega mere bete ko mera to kisi se dumani bhi nhi h
Gurudev- putra sapna ka rista aane wale nikat bhabhisya se hota h putra yadi putri ye sapna dekhi h to kuchh jarur bat h mai dekhta hu

(Itna bol guruji aankhe band kar ke dhayan lagate h kuch der bad aankhe kholte h aur bolte h)

Guruji- putra puspa ko sapna aana nikat bhabhiye me hone wale ghatna ke purvanuman h aur ye satya h agar koi upay nhi kiya gya to ghatna ghatit ho skta h
Puspa- parantu gurudev mere bete ko koi kyu marna chahega hamlogo ko kisi se dusmani bhi nhi h
Suresh- kripya kre gurudev mere bete ka raksha kare
Guru dev- putra mai ye nhi janta ki kiska is bache kya dusmani h kyu marna chahte h lekin ye stya h ki is bache par 5 sal tak khatra mandarate rahega aur iska ek hi upay h
Suresh- kya gurudev
Guruji- tumlogo ko ab ye sahar chhodna padega
Suresh- jo agya gurudev

Phir gurudev antradhyan ho gye iske kuch din bad suresh me apna company aur ghar bech ke dusre sahar nikal jata h ye log delhi shift hone ja rhe the
Ab chalte Raghvendra thakur ke haveli ke taraf are ye kya yaha to joro soro se kisi ki swagat ki taiyari chal rhi h are ha yad aaya isnke yaha to laxmi ki swagata ho rha h ghar ke sare pariwar darwaze pe najar aa rhe the
Kaushalya devi ke hath me aarti ki thali thi sare pariwar ke chehre par khushi jhalak rahi thi pura haveli phulo se sajaya hua tha unke haveli par logo ki bhid lagi thi sab ko pata chal gya tha ki aaj haveli me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ek ladki ka janam huya h usi samay darwaze par ek gadi aaker ruki usme se nikla wahi admi jo us din hospital me tha aur phir nikali o aurat jiske god me ek bachi thi aap log to samajh hi gye honge ki ye sanjay thakur aur Rohini devi thi o log ko dekh kar Kaushalya devi aage aayi aur us bachi ki aarti utarne lgi phir arti ki thal ek nokar ko dete huye boli

Kaushalya- la de meri poti ko mai bhi dekhu

Phir Kaushalya devi us bachi ko god me liye aur phir sab andar haveli me gye aaj kaushlya devi bahut khus thi bar bar bachi ko chum rahi thi
Raghvendra- kab tak pyar karegi apni poti ko la idhar de mujhe bhi apne god me lena h
Kaushlya- mai apne poti ko pyar kar rhi hu to apko kyu jalan ho rhi h aur jab tak meri man nhi bhar jati mai kisi ko nhi dungi apni poti samjhe

Phir bahut bahut minte karne ke bad kaushlya devi apne poti ko Raghvendra ke god me diya phir Raghvendra apne natni ko pyar karne lge phir isi tarh time gujarne lga 5 din bad sivratri tha usi din bachi ki name karan ka din fix huya idhar suresh aura puspa bhi delhi me sift ho gye suresh ko compay aur ghar bech ke achha kasa paisa mila tha jisse ek ghar le liya aur ek business start kiya
Aaj 5 din ho gye aaj sivratri h aur aaj sanjay ki beti ka name karan h aaj bhi haveli ko bahut achi tarah se sajaya huya tha aur aaj bhandara bhi rakhe the ye log iss liye bahut sare riletive wale aaye the aur us gaon wale bhi sab aaye the tabhi waha pe ek sadhu baba aaye ye bahi sadhu baba the jo bole the ki thakur khandan me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ek ladki janam legi unka kathan satya huya tha is liye inhi baba ko bulaya gya tha namekaran ke liye baba aate h namekaran ki taiyari hone lagti h baba ko baitne ke liye ek aashan lagaya jata h
Baba- putra bachi ko lekar idher aao
Sanjay- jo gya baba

Phir sanjay us bachi ko lekar baba ke pass jata aur baba ke god me de deta h phir baba usko god me lene ke bad bhayan lagate h kuch der bad ankhe kholte h aur bolte h
Baba- utam ati utam sarvagun sampun kanya h tumlog koi punya ki kam kiye honge jo is divya kanya ki tumhare ghar me janam huya
Ye ke janam se tumhare ghar me business me bahut bridhi hogi ye sach me laxmi h isme gun hai to avgun bhi h ye bahut ziddi hogi ise bat bat me gussa ayega iske guse ka samna karna kisi ke bas ki bat nhi hogi ye kisi bhi chij me chahe o khel ho ya padhai ya ladhai jagda kisi se nhi haregi aur jo ise harayega wahi iska pati hoga jo isse bhi jyada balwan budhiwan hoga iska name A se suru hoga tabhi Rohini boli

Rohini - ishka name ham Anshika rakhenge

Sab Rohini ke bat sun kar kush ho gye

Baba - ab iss bachi ki name karan ho gya ab hame anumati de

Phir Raghvendra thakur ne baba ko dakshina diye aur vida kiye
Note- ab ye log ko yahi chhodte h ab ye log kahani me 18 years pura hone ke bad entry lenge

Idhar Hero side
Wo log delhi me setal ho gye the business bhi start kar diye the sab kuchh achha chal rha tha suresh aura puspa dono aditya ko bahut pyar karte the ye sab aise hi chal rha tha ki achanak ek din...

Nice story


waiting for next update

 

[johnsamuri]

U p d a t e ~ 5

Sureah- dekha mai kahta tha n ki jab bhagwan hame beta diya h to uska ahar bhi jarur denge hamra beta divya h aur usse bhi jayada tumhari mamta h tumhari maa ke mamta ke karan hi ye sab huya h mai dhayna ho gya tum jaisi wife aur aditya jaise beta pake

Phir puspa apne bete ko dudh pila kar sula deti h aur dono bhi so jate abhi adhi rat ke samay huya tha ki achanak puspa jor se mere bete ko bachao koi to mere bete ko bachao aditya.... chilate huye uth jati h

Ab aage

Puspa uthate hi apne bete ko idhar udhar dhundhne lagti h jab dekhti h ki aditya uske side me so rha h to usko utha ke apne sine se lga kar rone lagti h usko rote dekh suresh uska ane sine se lga leta h aur puchhta h

Suresh- kya hua puspa tum chikhi kyu aur to kyu rhi h koi bura sapna dekhi h kya

Puspa sirf roti rahti h kuchh bolti nhi h

Suresh- kya hua puspa bolo bhi aise rone se kya ho batao hamko kya hua h
Puspa - +subakte huye) o.. o.. mere bete ko mar denge please bachha lo mere bete ko
Suresh- kon mar dega mere bete batao kya dekhi sapne me
Puspa- o o kuchh log the hatho me talvar liye huye o mere bete ko marne aa rhe the please bachha lo o tumhara bhi beta h please bacha lo

Itna bol kar puspa phir se rone lagi phir suresh usko kisi tarah chup karata h aur bolta

Suresh- puspa tum bekar me dar rhe ho kuchh nhi hoga mere bete ko o ek sapna h sirf sapna samjhi ab chup ho jao aur so jao

( suresh ye bol to rha tha ki kuchh nhi hoga lekin andar andar khud dar rha tha aur dare bhi kyu na kitna minto ke bad ek beta mila tha)

Puspa- mai kuchh nhi sunna chahti aap ek kam karo guruji se is bare me bat kro

(Puspa ki ye bat suresh ko bhi achhi lagi o socha guruji se bat kar ke dekhta hu note- us din guru ji ne suresh ko bola tha ki mujhse kuch kam hoga to mujhe dhyan me yada karna mai ja jaunga

Phir suresh guruji ka dhyan karne lagta h

Suresh - (dhayan me ) guruji ji mujhe darsan dijiye is tuksh insan ko aapki jarurat h kripya kar ke darsan dijiye

Phir waha guru parsuram ji prakat hote h aur bolte h

Guruji- aankhe kholo wats mai aa gya hu bolo mujhe ki liye yad kiya
Suresh- (aankhe kholte huye ) paranam guruji mai dhanya ho gya guruji aapka dobara darsan pake
Puspa- Pranam gurudev
Guruji- dirghyau bava... Bolo kyu yad kiya mejhe
Suresh - aap to antrayami h gurudev aap se kya chhipa h
Guruji - phir bhi mai tumse sunna chahta hu
Puspa- guruji mai ek sapna dekha ki koi mere bete ko marna chahta h kripya mere bache ko bachha lijiye guru ji
Suresh- gurudev ye sapna kyu aaya akhir kon marna chahega mere bete ko mera to kisi se dumani bhi nhi h
Gurudev- putra sapna ka rista aane wale nikat bhabhisya se hota h putra yadi putri ye sapna dekhi h to kuchh jarur bat h mai dekhta hu

(Itna bol guruji aankhe band kar ke dhayan lagate h kuch der bad aankhe kholte h aur bolte h)

Guruji- putra puspa ko sapna aana nikat bhabhiye me hone wale ghatna ke purvanuman h aur ye satya h agar koi upay nhi kiya gya to ghatna ghatit ho skta h
Puspa- parantu gurudev mere bete ko koi kyu marna chahega hamlogo ko kisi se dusmani bhi nhi h
Suresh- kripya kre gurudev mere bete ka raksha kare
Guru dev- putra mai ye nhi janta ki kiska is bache kya dusmani h kyu marna chahte h lekin ye stya h ki is bache par 5 sal tak khatra mandarate rahega aur iska ek hi upay h
Suresh- kya gurudev
Guruji- tumlogo ko ab ye sahar chhodna padega
Suresh- jo agya gurudev

Phir gurudev antradhyan ho gye iske kuch din bad suresh me apna company aur ghar bech ke dusre sahar nikal jata h ye log delhi shift hone ja rhe the
Ab chalte Raghvendra thakur ke haveli ke taraf are ye kya yaha to joro soro se kisi ki swagat ki taiyari chal rhi h are ha yad aaya isnke yaha to laxmi ki swagata ho rha h ghar ke sare pariwar darwaze pe najar aa rhe the
Kaushalya devi ke hath me aarti ki thali thi sare pariwar ke chehre par khushi jhalak rahi thi pura haveli phulo se sajaya hua tha unke haveli par logo ki bhid lagi thi sab ko pata chal gya tha ki aaj haveli me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ek ladki ka janam huya h usi samay darwaze par ek gadi aaker ruki usme se nikla wahi admi jo us din hospital me tha aur phir nikali o aurat jiske god me ek bachi thi aap log to samajh hi gye honge ki ye sanjay thakur aur Rohini devi thi o log ko dekh kar Kaushalya devi aage aayi aur us bachi ki aarti utarne lgi phir arti ki thal ek nokar ko dete huye boli

Kaushalya- la de meri poti ko mai bhi dekhu

Phir Kaushalya devi us bachi ko god me liye aur phir sab andar haveli me gye aaj kaushlya devi bahut khus thi bar bar bachi ko chum rahi thi
Raghvendra- kab tak pyar karegi apni poti ko la idhar de mujhe bhi apne god me lena h
Kaushlya- mai apne poti ko pyar kar rhi hu to apko kyu jalan ho rhi h aur jab tak meri man nhi bhar jati mai kisi ko nhi dungi apni poti samjhe

Phir bahut bahut minte karne ke bad kaushlya devi apne poti ko Raghvendra ke god me diya phir Raghvendra apne natni ko pyar karne lge phir isi tarh time gujarne lga 5 din bad sivratri tha usi din bachi ki name karan ka din fix huya idhar suresh aura puspa bhi delhi me sift ho gye suresh ko compay aur ghar bech ke achha kasa paisa mila tha jisse ek ghar le liya aur ek business start kiya
Aaj 5 din ho gye aaj sivratri h aur aaj sanjay ki beti ka name karan h aaj bhi haveli ko bahut achi tarah se sajaya huya tha aur aaj bhandara bhi rakhe the ye log iss liye bahut sare riletive wale aaye the aur us gaon wale bhi sab aaye the tabhi waha pe ek sadhu baba aaye ye bahi sadhu baba the jo bole the ki thakur khandan me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ek ladki janam legi unka kathan satya huya tha is liye inhi baba ko bulaya gya tha namekaran ke liye baba aate h namekaran ki taiyari hone lagti h baba ko baitne ke liye ek aashan lagaya jata h
Baba- putra bachi ko lekar idher aao
Sanjay- jo gya baba

Phir sanjay us bachi ko lekar baba ke pass jata aur baba ke god me de deta h phir baba usko god me lene ke bad bhayan lagate h kuch der bad ankhe kholte h aur bolte h
Baba- utam ati utam sarvagun sampun kanya h tumlog koi punya ki kam kiye honge jo is divya kanya ki tumhare ghar me janam huya
Ye ke janam se tumhare ghar me business me bahut bridhi hogi ye sach me laxmi h isme gun hai to avgun bhi h ye bahut ziddi hogi ise bat bat me gussa ayega iske guse ka samna karna kisi ke bas ki bat nhi hogi ye kisi bhi chij me chahe o khel ho ya padhai ya ladhai jagda kisi se nhi haregi aur jo ise harayega wahi iska pati hoga jo isse bhi jyada balwan budhiwan hoga iska name A se suru hoga tabhi Rohini boli

Rohini - ishka name ham Anshika rakhenge

Sab Rohini ke bat sun kar kush ho gye

Baba - ab iss bachi ki name karan ho gya ab hame anumati de

Phir Raghvendra thakur ne baba ko dakshina diye aur vida kiye
Note- ab ye log ko yahi chhodte h ab ye log kahani me 18 years pura hone ke bad entry lenge

Idhar Hero side
Wo log delhi me setal ho gye the business bhi start kar diye the sab kuchh achha chal rha tha suresh aura puspa dono aditya ko bahut pyar karte the ye sab aise hi chal rha tha ki achanak ek din...

Good updates

 

[johnsamuri]

U p d a t e ~ 4

Thodi der bad o aurat ko vip ward me sift kiya jata h uskebl bad o admi jake apne wife se milta h aur bachhe ko dekhne lagta h aur man me sochta h kitni pyari h meri beti isko dekhte hi isme khota ja rha hu jaise koi jadu ho uske chehre me phir o apne wife ke taraf dekhta h aur bolta h
Admi- thanks itni pyari beti dene ke liye dekho n kitni pyari h meri beti bilkul tumpe gyi

O aurat apne pati ke bate sun muskurane lagti h

Ab aage

O aurat aur admi bahut khus the aj 4 pidhiyo (genretion) bad unke ghar me laxmi janam li thi

Inke ghar me 4 pidhiyo se keval ladka hi janam leta tha inko ek sadhu ne bataya tha ki inke ghar me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ladki janam legi jo aaj ja kar sach huya tha ish liye ye aaj bahut khus the phir o admi apne aur wife se bolta h

Admi- aaj mai bahut khus janti ho kyu kyuki aaj hamare khandan me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ladki paida huyi h ye laxmi h hamare ghar ki jab ye khabar maa pitaji sunege to kitna kush honge hai n
Aurat- ha aap thik bol rhe ho ye hamare ghar ki laxmi h dekhiye n kitni cute h iske chehre se najar hi nahi hat rha ha lag rha h bas use dekhte hi rahu
Admi- ha bahut sundar h meri beti achha ruko mai ghar pe call karke aata hu

Iske bad o admi apne ghar pe call krta h idhar ek aalishan ghar me ghar kahna galat hoga ek aalishan haveli me ek admi baita ke huka pi rha hota h tabhi uska mobile bajta h o mobile dekh bahut khus ho jata h aur phone recieve karta h

Admi- Hallo ha beta bolo kaisi h bahu delivery sahi se huya ki nahi
Dusra admi- ha pitaji delivery sahi se ho gya h ghar me 4 pidhiyo bad ladki janam li h
Admi- Ye to bahut achha khabar h beta aaj mai bahut khus aaj thakur khandan me ladki janam li h aaj ghar me party ho aur laxmi ki dumdham se swagt hogi waise hospital se discharge kab mil rha h
Dusra Admi- 2 ghante mil jayegi pitaji
Admi- thik h jaldi ghar aa jao ab intjar nhi hota poti ka mukh dekhe bina nhi rha jayega

Phir phone rakhta h aur chilate huye bolta h

Admi- are bhawan sunti ho kidhar idhar aao ek khuskhabri h
Tabhi ek aurat aati h aur bolti h
Aurat - itna chila kyu rhe ho jee kya huya h kaisi khuskhbari h
Admi- aaj is haveli me 4 pidhiyo bad laxmi aa rhi h uski swagat ki taiyari kro

Ye bat sun kar aurat bahut khu hoti h chila chila kar nokaro ko bulati h aur laxmi ki swagat ki taiyari karne lagti h

Ab ye log ko laxmi ki swagat ki taiyari karne dete h ab time h intro ka
Raghvendra thakur - dekhne me ekdam fit h inka pure 40 gaon me raj chalta h kyuki ye waha ke thakur h inke pass paise ki kami nhi h
Kaushalya devi - ye Raghvendra thakur ke wife h
Sanjay thakur - ye ek business man h inka busness India me top 5 me aata h
Rohini devi - ye sanjay thakur ke wife h ye house wife h
Niraj thakur- ye sanjay thakur ke bada beta h
Rohit thakur- ye sanjay thakur ke chhota beta h
Anshika thakur - ye sanjay thakur ki beti h inke ghar me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ladki huya h isliye ye sabki ladli h gusa iske nak pe rahta h aur thoda ghamandi bhi h

Ab chalte h story pe
Dusri or suresh aur puspa mandir se ghar aate h ghar aane ke bad o log apne bete ki name karan ke khusi me ghar me bhandara rakhte h garibi ko khana khilate h aur kapda dete h
Dono aaj bahut khus the aaj unka warish mil gya tha ye log khusi mana hi rahe the ki achanak unka beta rone lga dono pareshan ho gye bachha chup hi nhi ho rha tha bache ko kabhi suresh chup kra rha tha to kabhi puspa chup kra rhi thi lekin bacha chup hone ka name hi nhi le rha tha

Suresh- lagta h ise bhukh lga h ise dudh ki jarurat h
Puspa - lekin ab ham dudh kha se lau bache ko maa ke dudh ke siva dusra kuchh nhi diya jata h ye bagwan bholenath madad kijiye mai apne bete ko is tarah rote h dekh sakta
Suresh- puspa tum chinta na kro jab bhagwan hame beta diya h to uska ahar bhi jarur denge

Bechari apne bete ko rote dekh uska kaleja chir gya bechari phut phut ke rone lgi aur bagwan se dua karne lgi ki achanak uska sthan bhari bhari lagne lga bechari apne sthan ko hath lga ke dekhi to kuchh gila gila mahsus huya jab use mahsus huya ki ye kya h to bechari khusi se uchhalne lgi phir ye bat apne pati ko batai
Puspa- dekhiye n ye kaisi maya h mere sthan se dudh nikal rha h
Sureah- dekha mai kahta tha n ki jab bhagwan hame beta diya h to uska ahar bhi jarur denge hamra beta divya h aur usse bhi jayada tumhari mamta h tumhari maa ke mamta ke karan hi ye sab huya h mai dhayna ho gya tum jaisi wife aur aditya jaise beta pake

Phir puspa apne bete ko dudh pila kar sula deti h aur dono bhi so jate abhi adhi rat ke samay huya tha ki achanak puspa jor se mere bete ko bachao koi to mere bete ko bachao aditya.... chilate huye uth jati h

Good updates

 

[johnsamuri]

U p d a t e ~ 1

Ek sunsan ilake me ek aurat bahut teji se bhag rhi thi. uske god me ek bacha tha aurat bahut dari huyi thi sayad kisi se dar ke bhag rhi thi. aurat ke sir se khun gir rha tha bechari ka halat bahut kharab tha o kisi tarah apne bache ko bachana chah rhi thi. kuch gunde uske pichha kr rhe the o bhagwan se yahi dua kar rhi thi hey bagwan mere pran lele magar mere bache ko bacha le. bhagte bhagete aurat ek Brij ke upar se ja rhi thi tabhi ek goli aake uske pith me lagi jisse aurat ke hath me se bacha uchhla aur Brij ke niche gir gya. jo sidhe jaker nadi me gira bache ko girte dekh aurat ke muh se ek chikh nikali mera bacha.... Aur o behosh ho gyi.
Wahi dusre taraf ek sadhu dhyan me baithe the. bache ko girte hi unka dhyan tut gya o waha se gayab hoke sidhe bache ke pas prakat huye aur bache ko god me leke gayab ho gye. O chahte to us aurat ko bacha sakte the lekin o uski niyati tha.aur niyati se chedkhani nhi karna chahte the.(niyati yaha ladki ka name nhi h) Sadhu us bache ko le jaker ek mandir me chhod diye.
Wahi ek aurat mandir me puja karne aayi thi o puja kr hi rhi thi ki tabhi ek bache ki rone ki awaj use sunai di.o us bache ki tarf chali gyi jaker dekhti h ki ek 5 ya 10 din ka bacha mandir ke side me rakha huya h aur bachha ro rha h bache ko dekhte hi us aurat ka mamta jag gya aur o aurat turant us bache ko god me utha li. Bache ko uthane ke bad o idhar udhar dekhne lagi aur boli ye bacha kiska h. Bahut der tak aurat bache ki maa bap ko dundhat rhi lekin koi nhi mila tabhi wahi sadhu aaye aur us aurat se bole
Sadhu- beti is bache ko bholenath ke prasad samajh kar apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- lekin baba mai kaise..aur iske maa bap
Sadhu- beti yadi iske maa bap yaha hote to ab tak aa nhi jate. Beti ye bhole nath ka prasad h tumhare liye tum ise apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- Thik h baba aap itna kahte h to mai ise apne bete ki tarah palunga.
Bechari ko bache ko dekhte hi maa ki mamta jag gyi thi kyuki uska sadi ke panch sal ho gye the abhi tak koi bachha nhi tha bechari bache ke liye na jane kitne doctar kitne hakim kitna mandir gyi thi jab bache ko dekhi to usko bhi man me yahi tha ki kas ise mai apne pas rakh leti.
Aurat- baba itna meharbani ki to thoda aur kar dijiye is bache ka name bhi rakh dijiye
Baba- beti aaj se thik 3 din bad purnima h us din tum apne pati aur is bache ke sath isi mandir me aa jana usi din iska name karan hoga.

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U p d a t e ~ 1

Ek sunsan ilake me ek aurat bahut teji se bhag rhi thi. uske god me ek bacha tha aurat bahut dari huyi thi sayad kisi se dar ke bhag rhi thi. aurat ke sir se khun gir rha tha bechari ka halat bahut kharab tha o kisi tarah apne bache ko bachana chah rhi thi. kuch gunde uske pichha kr rhe the o bhagwan se yahi dua kar rhi thi hey bagwan mere pran lele magar mere bache ko bacha le. bhagte bhagete aurat ek Brij ke upar se ja rhi thi tabhi ek goli aake uske pith me lagi jisse aurat ke hath me se bacha uchhla aur Brij ke niche gir gya. jo sidhe jaker nadi me gira bache ko girte dekh aurat ke muh se ek chikh nikali mera bacha.... Aur o behosh ho gyi.
Wahi dusre taraf ek sadhu dhyan me baithe the. bache ko girte hi unka dhyan tut gya o waha se gayab hoke sidhe bache ke pas prakat huye aur bache ko god me leke gayab ho gye. O chahte to us aurat ko bacha sakte the lekin o uski niyati tha.aur niyati se chedkhani nhi karna chahte the.(niyati yaha ladki ka name nhi h) Sadhu us bache ko le jaker ek mandir me chhod diye.
Wahi ek aurat mandir me puja karne aayi thi o puja kr hi rhi thi ki tabhi ek bache ki rone ki awaj use sunai di.o us bache ki tarf chali gyi jaker dekhti h ki ek 5 ya 10 din ka bacha mandir ke side me rakha huya h aur bachha ro rha h bache ko dekhte hi us aurat ka mamta jag gya aur o aurat turant us bache ko god me utha li. Bache ko uthane ke bad o idhar udhar dekhne lagi aur boli ye bacha kiska h. Bahut der tak aurat bache ki maa bap ko dundhat rhi lekin koi nhi mila tabhi wahi sadhu aaye aur us aurat se bole
Sadhu- beti is bache ko bholenath ke prasad samajh kar apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- lekin baba mai kaise..aur iske maa bap
Sadhu- beti yadi iske maa bap yaha hote to ab tak aa nhi jate. Beti ye bhole nath ka prasad h tumhare liye tum ise apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- Thik h baba aap itna kahte h to mai ise apne bete ki tarah palunga.
Bechari ko bache ko dekhte hi maa ki mamta jag gyi thi kyuki uska sadi ke panch sal ho gye the abhi tak koi bachha nhi tha bechari bache ke liye na jane kitne doctar kitne hakim kitna mandir gyi thi jab bache ko dekhi to usko bhi man me yahi tha ki kas ise mai apne pas rakh leti.
Aurat- baba itna meharbani ki to thoda aur kar dijiye is bache ka name bhi rakh dijiye
Baba- beti aaj se thik 3 din bad purnima h us din tum apne pati aur is bache ke sath isi mandir me aa jana usi din iska name karan hoga.

Nice beginning

 

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!! Intro Time !!

Hero ~ Aditya

Aditya's Dad ~ Suresh

Aditya's Mom ~ Pushpa

Aditya's Sister ~ Pallavi ( Heroin )


Aditya's Friends :-

(1) - Abhinav

(2) -  Arushi

!! Aur bhi hai Jinka Intro aage Story Ke Sath Hoga Jaise Jaise Story Aage Badegi Waise Waise Intro Dunga !!


Brother Agar Story Acchi Lage To Like Zarur Kre

Nice intro

 

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U p d a t e ~ 6

Phir Raghvendra thakur ne baba ko dakshina diye aur vida kiye
Note- ab ye log ko yahi chhodte h ab ye log kahani me 18 years pura hone ke bad entry lenge

Idhar Hero side
Wo log delhi me setal ho gye the business bhi start kar diye the sab kuchh achha chal rha tha suresh aura puspa dono aditya ko bahut pyar karte the ye sab aise hi chal rha tha ki
achanak ek din...

Ab aage

Subah ka time tha suresh office jane ki taiyari kar rha tha aur aditya so rha tha ki achanak puspa ko chakar aane lga aur bechari gir ke behosh ho suresh usko behosh ho kar girte dekh liya aur o puspa... chilate huye dorkar uske pass gya aur usko utha ke gadi me lekar hospital ki taraf chala gya hospital me puspa ka chekup hone lga kuch der bad use hos aa gya phir doctor aake bola Mubarak ho aap bap banane wale h ye sunkar suresh bahut khus huya aur puspa ke pass jakar uske aankho me dekhte huye bola

Suresh- aaj mai bahut khus hu ki mere ghar me laxmi aane wali h
Puspa- thodi sarmati huyi aapko kaise pata ki laxmi hi aayegi ladka bhi ho sakta h
Suresh- mera dil kahta h mujhe beti hi milegi aur mujhe beti hi chahiye kyuki beta to pahle hi ghar pe h bas ek beti ki kami thi
Puspa- ha aap sahi kah rhe h meri ek beta to h hi mujhe bhi beti hi chahiye mai bhagwan se yahi duya karungi ki beti hi ho kyuki aditya ko bhi khelne ke liye ek bahan mil jayegi

Aaj suresh aur puspa bahut khus the phir dactor se chhuti lekar ghar aa gye suresh ab ghar me ek nokarani rakh liya tha ghar ka kam karne ke liye ab suresh puspa ko kam karne nhi deta tha isi tarah samay bitne lga aaj puspa ko pregnant huye 9 month ho gya tha ab aditya bhi chalne lga tha aur totli aavaj me bat bhi karne lga tha aise hi hasi khusi se inka pariwar chal rha tha ki achanak ek din puspa ko pain start ho gya us samay suresh office me tha udhar puspa ko bahut hi pain ho rha tha idhar suresh ko baichani hone lga usko kam me man hi nhi lag rha tha to socha thora ghar pe bat kar lu phir suresh ghar pe call kiya to uska nokarani phon uthai or boli sahab maidam ko pain start ho gya h aap ghar jaldi aa jaiye phir suresh waha se jaldi hi ghar aa jata h aur puspa ko lekar hospital ke liye nikal jata h

Dusri taraf

Himalay pe kuchh rishi dhyan me baithe the tabhi ek rishi ka dhyan tut jata h aur chehre pe muskan aa jata h jise ek rishi dekh leta h aur puchta h

(Note-ye rishi aur koi nhi guru parsuram h)

Rishi- guruji aaj apke chehre par muskan kyu h abhi to aap dhyan me the
Guruji- mai is liye khus hu putra ki ab wakt aa gya h rakshak ki sakti ke janam ka jo mata parvati ki ansh hogi ab mujhe jana hoga waha phir guru ji waha se gayab ho gye

Idhar hospital me suresh baichani se idhar udhar ghum rha tha udhar puspa ko bahut jyada dard ho rha tha bechari dard se chila rhi thi ki achanak uska dard kam ho gya sath me ek bachi ki rone ki awaj Anne lgi yani bache ka janam ho gya aur bache ko janam lete hi pura room me prakash phial gya aur usi wakt samay ruk gya phir waha pe guru parsuram aa gye aur us bachi ke sar pe hath rakh diye jisse o prakash bachi me jane lga jab sara prakash us bachi me chala gya to guru ji gayab ho gye phir se samay chalne laga bahar suresh ke pass ek narse aayi aur boli Mubarak ho aapko ek pyar si ladki huyi h jise sun suresh khus ho gya aur bhag kar puspa ke pass gya aur bachi ko god me utha liya bachi apne papa dekh muskurane lgi jisse suresh usi me kho gya phir uska dhyan puspa pe gya jo suresh ko dekh kar muskura rhi thi

Puspa- aise kya dekh rhe ho ji
Suresh - dekh rha hu ki meri beti kitni sundar h bilkul tumhari tarah isse najar hi nhi hat rha h
Puspa- (sarmate huye ) dhat ji aap kuchh bhi bolte ho achha aap kya to h n
Sureah- mai maito bahut khus hu puspa aaj mera pariwar pura ho gye thank u puspa mujhe itna pyari ladki dene ke liye aur meri life me aane ke liye aaj mai bahut khus hu
Puspa- ye to mera saubhagya h ho aap ke jaisa pati mujhe mila aditya jaisa beta aur iske jaise pyari beti

Phir hospital se discharge leke suresh aur puspa ghar aa gye aaj unke ghar me bahut hi khusi ka mahol tha aaj unke ghar me laxmi aayi thi jab ye log ghar me pahuche to aditya dodte huye aa aur apni totali awaj me puchha
Aditya- papa ye ton h
Suresh- beta ye mai tumhare liye dol laya hu
Aditya-ye mela dol aa dya mela dol aa dya mummy mele dol ko mudhe do na
Puspa- abhi nhi beta abhi tum bahut chhote ho jab bade ho jaoge tab tumhe dunga thik h
Aditya- thith h mama pal mudhe dethna h
Phir puspa aditya ko dekhane lagti h aditya bade dhyan se dekh rha tha o bachi bhi aditya ko dekh kar muskura rhi thi
Puspa- suniye aaj guruji ko bol dijiye kal ham apne beti ki name karam karwayenge
Suresh - thik h
Phir suresh guruji ko man hi man yad karta h aur kal name karan ke liye aane ka nimantran deta h isi tarah aaj ka din khatam ho jata h dusre din
Aaj name karan ka din tha aaj guruji aane wale the phir kuchh der bad guruji aa gye suresh ne unhe aasan diya baitne ke liye phir guru ji baitne ke bad bachi ko lane ko bole puspa bachi ko lekar aayi aur guruji ko dedi phir guruji dhyan lagate h aur phir muskutlrate huye bolte h
Guruji- mere ahobhagya jo mai i divya bachi ki kundali aur namkaran kar rha hu tumlog bahut kismat wale h jo tumahare ghar me aise divya bache ka agman huya haur tum dono inke mata pita ho ye ladki me sare gun h ye sarva gun sampun h ye ladki bahut sushil aur shant hogi iske chehre pe hamesa muskan hi hoga ye bahut hi dyalu swabhav ki hogi ise manushya ho ya pashu pakhsi sabse pram hoga ise waise to kabhi gusa nhi aayega aur jadi kabhi gusa aa gya to kisi se bhi santh nhi hogi sivay aditya ke aditya hi ise sant karega tumhari putri me mata parvati ki pratima dikhti h jaise ye unhi ki ansh ko iss liye iska name p se suru hoga

Ye sab aditya badi dhyan se sun rha tha ki achanak uske mukh se palvi nikla papa aur suresh guruji ke bat sun kar bahut hi jyada khus the unhe apne kismat pe bahut hi garva ho rha tha ki achanak aditya ke mukh se palvi sun kar aur bhi jyada khus ho gye
Puspa- are wah aditya beta kitna achha name diya h palvi bahut hi pyara name h
Surwsh- ha puspa tum sahi bol rhi ho aditya ne apne doll ki bahut hi pyara name rakha h palvi

Phir namekaran hone ke bad guruji chale jate h aaj ghar me bahut hi khusi ka mahol tha aaj unka pariwar pura ho gya tha isi tarah samay bitne lga suresh ka business bhi achha khasa chal rha tha dhire dhire samay bitta gya isi tarah 3 sal bit gya
Aaj se do din bad aditya ka pure 5 sal ho jayega
Ab palvi bhi 3 sal ki ho gyi thi ab suresh ka business bhi bahut badh gya tha ab ye log ka name pura india me nami grami logo me aane lga tha ab inka business india ke top 10 me aane lga tha aise hi aditya rat ko soya huya tha ki achanak jor se chilaya nhi...

 

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U p d a t e ~ 6

Phir Raghvendra thakur ne baba ko dakshina diye aur vida kiye
Note- ab ye log ko yahi chhodte h ab ye log kahani me 18 years pura hone ke bad entry lenge

Idhar Hero side
Wo log delhi me setal ho gye the business bhi start kar diye the sab kuchh achha chal rha tha suresh aura puspa dono aditya ko bahut pyar karte the ye sab aise hi chal rha tha ki
achanak ek din...

Ab aage

Subah ka time tha suresh office jane ki taiyari kar rha tha aur aditya so rha tha ki achanak puspa ko chakar aane lga aur bechari gir ke behosh ho suresh usko behosh ho kar girte dekh liya aur o puspa... chilate huye dorkar uske pass gya aur usko utha ke gadi me lekar hospital ki taraf chala gya hospital me puspa ka chekup hone lga kuch der bad use hos aa gya phir doctor aake bola Mubarak ho aap bap banane wale h ye sunkar suresh bahut khus huya aur puspa ke pass jakar uske aankho me dekhte huye bola

Suresh- aaj mai bahut khus hu ki mere ghar me laxmi aane wali h
Puspa- thodi sarmati huyi aapko kaise pata ki laxmi hi aayegi ladka bhi ho sakta h
Suresh- mera dil kahta h mujhe beti hi milegi aur mujhe beti hi chahiye kyuki beta to pahle hi ghar pe h bas ek beti ki kami thi
Puspa- ha aap sahi kah rhe h meri ek beta to h hi mujhe bhi beti hi chahiye mai bhagwan se yahi duya karungi ki beti hi ho kyuki aditya ko bhi khelne ke liye ek bahan mil jayegi

Aaj suresh aur puspa bahut khus the phir dactor se chhuti lekar ghar aa gye suresh ab ghar me ek nokarani rakh liya tha ghar ka kam karne ke liye ab suresh puspa ko kam karne nhi deta tha isi tarah samay bitne lga aaj puspa ko pregnant huye 9 month ho gya tha ab aditya bhi chalne lga tha aur totli aavaj me bat bhi karne lga tha aise hi hasi khusi se inka pariwar chal rha tha ki achanak ek din puspa ko pain start ho gya us samay suresh office me tha udhar puspa ko bahut hi pain ho rha tha idhar suresh ko baichani hone lga usko kam me man hi nhi lag rha tha to socha thora ghar pe bat kar lu phir suresh ghar pe call kiya to uska nokarani phon uthai or boli sahab maidam ko pain start ho gya h aap ghar jaldi aa jaiye phir suresh waha se jaldi hi ghar aa jata h aur puspa ko lekar hospital ke liye nikal jata h

Dusri taraf

Himalay pe kuchh rishi dhyan me baithe the tabhi ek rishi ka dhyan tut jata h aur chehre pe muskan aa jata h jise ek rishi dekh leta h aur puchta h

(Note-ye rishi aur koi nhi guru parsuram h)

Rishi- guruji aaj apke chehre par muskan kyu h abhi to aap dhyan me the
Guruji- mai is liye khus hu putra ki ab wakt aa gya h rakshak ki sakti ke janam ka jo mata parvati ki ansh hogi ab mujhe jana hoga waha phir guru ji waha se gayab ho gye

Idhar hospital me suresh baichani se idhar udhar ghum rha tha udhar puspa ko bahut jyada dard ho rha tha bechari dard se chila rhi thi ki achanak uska dard kam ho gya sath me ek bachi ki rone ki awaj Anne lgi yani bache ka janam ho gya aur bache ko janam lete hi pura room me prakash phial gya aur usi wakt samay ruk gya phir waha pe guru parsuram aa gye aur us bachi ke sar pe hath rakh diye jisse o prakash bachi me jane lga jab sara prakash us bachi me chala gya to guru ji gayab ho gye phir se samay chalne laga bahar suresh ke pass ek narse aayi aur boli Mubarak ho aapko ek pyar si ladki huyi h jise sun suresh khus ho gya aur bhag kar puspa ke pass gya aur bachi ko god me utha liya bachi apne papa dekh muskurane lgi jisse suresh usi me kho gya phir uska dhyan puspa pe gya jo suresh ko dekh kar muskura rhi thi

Puspa- aise kya dekh rhe ho ji
Suresh - dekh rha hu ki meri beti kitni sundar h bilkul tumhari tarah isse najar hi nhi hat rha h
Puspa- (sarmate huye ) dhat ji aap kuchh bhi bolte ho achha aap kya to h n
Sureah- mai maito bahut khus hu puspa aaj mera pariwar pura ho gye thank u puspa mujhe itna pyari ladki dene ke liye aur meri life me aane ke liye aaj mai bahut khus hu
Puspa- ye to mera saubhagya h ho aap ke jaisa pati mujhe mila aditya jaisa beta aur iske jaise pyari beti

Phir hospital se discharge leke suresh aur puspa ghar aa gye aaj unke ghar me bahut hi khusi ka mahol tha aaj unke ghar me laxmi aayi thi jab ye log ghar me pahuche to aditya dodte huye aa aur apni totali awaj me puchha
Aditya- papa ye ton h
Suresh- beta ye mai tumhare liye dol laya hu
Aditya-ye mela dol aa dya mela dol aa dya mummy mele dol ko mudhe do na
Puspa- abhi nhi beta abhi tum bahut chhote ho jab bade ho jaoge tab tumhe dunga thik h
Aditya- thith h mama pal mudhe dethna h
Phir puspa aditya ko dekhane lagti h aditya bade dhyan se dekh rha tha o bachi bhi aditya ko dekh kar muskura rhi thi
Puspa- suniye aaj guruji ko bol dijiye kal ham apne beti ki name karam karwayenge
Suresh - thik h
Phir suresh guruji ko man hi man yad karta h aur kal name karan ke liye aane ka nimantran deta h isi tarah aaj ka din khatam ho jata h dusre din
Aaj name karan ka din tha aaj guruji aane wale the phir kuchh der bad guruji aa gye suresh ne unhe aasan diya baitne ke liye phir guru ji baitne ke bad bachi ko lane ko bole puspa bachi ko lekar aayi aur guruji ko dedi phir guruji dhyan lagate h aur phir muskutlrate huye bolte h
Guruji- mere ahobhagya jo mai i divya bachi ki kundali aur namkaran kar rha hu tumlog bahut kismat wale h jo tumahare ghar me aise divya bache ka agman huya haur tum dono inke mata pita ho ye ladki me sare gun h ye sarva gun sampun h ye ladki bahut sushil aur shant hogi iske chehre pe hamesa muskan hi hoga ye bahut hi dyalu swabhav ki hogi ise manushya ho ya pashu pakhsi sabse pram hoga ise waise to kabhi gusa nhi aayega aur jadi kabhi gusa aa gya to kisi se bhi santh nhi hogi sivay aditya ke aditya hi ise sant karega tumhari putri me mata parvati ki pratima dikhti h jaise ye unhi ki ansh ko iss liye iska name p se suru hoga

Ye sab aditya badi dhyan se sun rha tha ki achanak uske mukh se palvi nikla papa aur suresh guruji ke bat sun kar bahut hi jyada khus the unhe apne kismat pe bahut hi garva ho rha tha ki achanak aditya ke mukh se palvi sun kar aur bhi jyada khus ho gye
Puspa- are wah aditya beta kitna achha name diya h palvi bahut hi pyara name h
Surwsh- ha puspa tum sahi bol rhi ho aditya ne apne doll ki bahut hi pyara name rakha h palvi

Phir namekaran hone ke bad guruji chale jate h aaj ghar me bahut hi khusi ka mahol tha aaj unka pariwar pura ho gya tha isi tarah samay bitne lga suresh ka business bhi achha khasa chal rha tha dhire dhire samay bitta gya isi tarah 3 sal bit gya
Aaj se do din bad aditya ka pure 5 sal ho jayega
Ab palvi bhi 3 sal ki ho gyi thi ab suresh ka business bhi bahut badh gya tha ab ye log ka name pura india me nami grami logo me aane lga tha ab inka business india ke top 10 me aane lga tha aise hi aditya rat ko soya huya tha ki achanak jor se chilaya nhi...

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