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Ek sunsan ilake me ek aurat bahut teji se bhag rhi thi. uske god me ek bacha tha aurat bahut dari huyi thi sayad kisi se dar ke bhag rhi thi. aurat ke sir se khun gir rha tha bechari ka halat bahut kharab tha o kisi tarah apne bache ko bachana chah rhi thi. kuch gunde uske pichha kr rhe the o bhagwan se yahi dua kar rhi thi hey bagwan mere pran lele magar mere bache ko bacha le. bhagte bhagete aurat ek Brij ke upar se ja rhi thi tabhi ek goli aake uske pith me lagi jisse aurat ke hath me se bacha uchhla aur Brij ke niche gir gya. jo sidhe jaker nadi me gira bache ko girte dekh aurat ke muh se ek chikh nikali mera bacha.... Aur o behosh ho gyi.
Wahi dusre taraf ek sadhu dhyan me baithe the. bache ko girte hi unka dhyan tut gya o waha se gayab hoke sidhe bache ke pas prakat huye aur bache ko god me leke gayab ho gye. O chahte to us aurat ko bacha sakte the lekin o uski niyati tha.aur niyati se chedkhani nhi karna chahte the.(niyati yaha ladki ka name nhi h) Sadhu us bache ko le jaker ek mandir me chhod diye.
Wahi ek aurat mandir me puja karne aayi thi o puja kr hi rhi thi ki tabhi ek bache ki rone ki awaj use sunai di.o us bache ki tarf chali gyi jaker dekhti h ki ek 5 ya 10 din ka bacha mandir ke side me rakha huya h aur bachha ro rha h bache ko dekhte hi us aurat ka mamta jag gya aur o aurat turant us bache ko god me utha li. Bache ko uthane ke bad o idhar udhar dekhne lagi aur boli ye bacha kiska h. Bahut der tak aurat bache ki maa bap ko dundhat rhi lekin koi nhi mila tabhi wahi sadhu aaye aur us aurat se bole
Sadhu- beti is bache ko bholenath ke prasad samajh kar apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- lekin baba mai kaise..aur iske maa bap
Sadhu- beti yadi iske maa bap yaha hote to ab tak aa nhi jate. Beti ye bhole nath ka prasad h tumhare liye tum ise apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- Thik h baba aap itna kahte h to mai ise apne bete ki tarah palunga.
Bechari ko bache ko dekhte hi maa ki mamta jag gyi thi kyuki uska sadi ke panch sal ho gye the abhi tak koi bachha nhi tha bechari bache ke liye na jane kitne doctar kitne hakim kitna mandir gyi thi jab bache ko dekhi to usko bhi man me yahi tha ki kas ise mai apne pas rakh leti.
Aurat- baba itna meharbani ki to thoda aur kar dijiye is bache ka name bhi rakh dijiye
Baba- beti aaj se thik 3 din bad purnima h us din tum apne pati aur is bache ke sath isi mandir me aa jana usi din iska name karan hoga.
 

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Ek sunsan ilake me ek aurat bahut teji se bhag rhi thi. uske god me ek bacha tha aurat bahut dari huyi thi sayad kisi se dar ke bhag rhi thi. aurat ke sir se khun gir rha tha bechari ka halat bahut kharab tha o kisi tarah apne bache ko bachana chah rhi thi. kuch gunde uske pichha kr rhe the o bhagwan se yahi dua kar rhi thi hey bagwan mere pran lele magar mere bache ko bacha le. bhagte bhagete aurat ek Brij ke upar se ja rhi thi tabhi ek goli aake uske pith me lagi jisse aurat ke hath me se bacha uchhla aur Brij ke niche gir gya. jo sidhe jaker nadi me gira bache ko girte dekh aurat ke muh se ek chikh nikali mera bacha.... Aur o behosh ho gyi.
Wahi dusre taraf ek sadhu dhyan me baithe the. bache ko girte hi unka dhyan tut gya o waha se gayab hoke sidhe bache ke pas prakat huye aur bache ko god me leke gayab ho gye. O chahte to us aurat ko bacha sakte the lekin o uski niyati tha.aur niyati se chedkhani nhi karna chahte the.(niyati yaha ladki ka name nhi h) Sadhu us bache ko le jaker ek mandir me chhod diye.
Wahi ek aurat mandir me puja karne aayi thi o puja kr hi rhi thi ki tabhi ek bache ki rone ki awaj use sunai di.o us bache ki tarf chali gyi jaker dekhti h ki ek 5 ya 10 din ka bacha mandir ke side me rakha huya h aur bachha ro rha h bache ko dekhte hi us aurat ka mamta jag gya aur o aurat turant us bache ko god me utha li. Bache ko uthane ke bad o idhar udhar dekhne lagi aur boli ye bacha kiska h. Bahut der tak aurat bache ki maa bap ko dundhat rhi lekin koi nhi mila tabhi wahi sadhu aaye aur us aurat se bole
Sadhu- beti is bache ko bholenath ke prasad samajh kar apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- lekin baba mai kaise..aur iske maa bap
Sadhu- beti yadi iske maa bap yaha hote to ab tak aa nhi jate. Beti ye bhole nath ka prasad h tumhare liye tum ise apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- Thik h baba aap itna kahte h to mai ise apne bete ki tarah palunga.
Bechari ko bache ko dekhte hi maa ki mamta jag gyi thi kyuki uska sadi ke panch sal ho gye the abhi tak koi bachha nhi tha bechari bache ke liye na jane kitne doctar kitne hakim kitna mandir gyi thi jab bache ko dekhi to usko bhi man me yahi tha ki kas ise mai apne pas rakh leti.
Aurat- baba itna meharbani ki to thoda aur kar dijiye is bache ka name bhi rakh dijiye
Baba- beti aaj se thik 3 din bad purnima h us din tum apne pati aur is bache ke sath isi mandir me aa jana usi din iska name karan hoga.
Suruwaat toh bahot mast thi bhai. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa dost 👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍
 

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!! Intro Time !!

Hero ~ Aditya

Aditya's Dad ~ Suresh

Aditya's Mom ~ Pushpa

Aditya's Sister ~ Pallavi ( Heroin )



Aditya's Friends :-

(1) - Abhinav

(2) -  Arushi


!! Aur bhi hai Jinka Intro aage Story Ke Sath Hoga Jaise Jaise Story Aage Badegi Waise Waise Intro Dunga !!


Brother Agar Story Acchi Lage To Like Zarur Kre
 
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:congrats: For starting new story thread.....
 

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Aurat- baba itna meharbani ki to thoda aur kar dijiye is bache ka name bhi rakh dijiye
Baba- beti aaj se thik 3 din bad purnima h us din tum apne pati aur is bache ke sath isi mandir me aa jana usi din iska name karan hoga.

Ab aage

Aurat bache ko lekar ghar aa jati h aurat ke god me bachha dekh kar ek admi bola.

Admi- Puspa ye bacha kiska h
Ji ha dosto ye aurat puspa hi thi aur o admi uske hasband suresh tha (ab ye log ka name se likhunga)
Puspa- ye bacha mujhe mandir me mila tha
Phir puspa ne sari bat suresh ko bataya jise sunkar suresh bahut khus huya. Phir suresh bola.
Sureah- Tumne bahut achha kiya jo is bache ko lekar aa gyi mai is bache ko apne bete ki tarah palunga mai ise duniya ki har khusi dunga ye ab mera beta h.
Ye bat sunkar puspa bhi bahut khus huyi.
(Ab ye log ke karobar aur ghar ke bare me jan lete h)
Suresh bihar ke patna me apne family ke sath rahta h. Uska taxtile business h business to jyada faila nhi h lekin us sahar me no.1 position pe h.
Ghar ki bat kre to 2 flor ka ek ghar h jisme 7 room h 4 first flor pe aur 3 second flor me h.

Ab aate h story par

Aaj 3 din ho gye the aaj purnima tha aaj bache ki namkaran ka din tha puspa aur suresh bahut khus the.
Puspa- aji sunte ho kha ho aap abhi tak taiyar nhi huye.
Suresh- are bagwan itna pareshan kyu ho rhi ho bs taiyar hi ho rha hu.
Puspa- pareshan na hou to kya kru aaj mere bete ka name karan h aur aap abhi tak taiyar nhi huye.

Tab tak suresh taiyar hoke aa jata h
Suresh- lo ji mai taiyar hoke aa gya ab chale

Phir dono gadi se mandir ki taraf nikal jate h.
1 ghante ke bad dono mandir pahuch jate h mandir me andar jane ke bad dono bagwan bholenath ka darsan karte h tab tak sadhu baba bhi aa jate h. Dono sadhu baba ko dekh kar unke pas jate h aur pranam krte h
Puspa- Pranam baba
Sadhu- sawbhagyawati bava
Suresh- pranam baba
Sadhu- aayusman bava. beti mai aaj tumlogo ko yaha is bache ki name karan ke liye bulaya hu aur sath me ek yagya bhi hoga jisme tum dono pati patni ko baitna padega. Aur ha bagwan ne chaha to is yagya ke bad tumhara god bhi bharega.
Puspa- baba mai is karya se sada apkali abhari rahungi.
Sadhu- beti pahli bat ki mujhe baba nhi guruji bologi aur dusri ye to me kartavya h beti
Puspa- jo agya gurudev

(Note yaha ab sadhu ko guruji likhunga)
Guruji- Pahle yaha yagya hoga iske bad name karan
Suresh- jaisi apka iksha durudev

Phir yagya ki taiyari hoti h guru ji ke sath aur bhi sadhu aaye the agya aarambh huya mantro ki dhwani charo dishao me gunjane lagi ye agya 4 ghanto tak chali yagya samapt huya iske bad guruji ne puspa ko prasad ke taur pe khir diya khane ko.
Ab bari aayi name karan ki.
Guruji- beti bache ko idhar lao
Puspa- ji gurudev

Puspa bache ko lekar gurudev ke pass jati h gurudev bache ko apne god me lete h aur ankhe band kar ke dhyan lagate h dhyan lagane ke bad guruji ke chehre pe kabhi khushi kabhi dukh ka bav aa rha tha.
Phir guruji dhyan se uthe aur bole.

Guruji- beti tum bahut bagya sali jo iske jaisa putra tumhe mila ye nekdil insan hoga ise babhisya me bade bade kam karna h waise to ye sant rahega lekin agar ise gusa aa jaye to ye kisi ka nhi sunega. Ye apne man ka malik hoga Isliye kosis karna ki ise gusa na aye. Iske chehre pe surya ka tej hai is liye iska name Aditya hoga
(Aur guruji ek rudraksh ki mala puspa ko dete hue bole)
Guruji- ye mala iske gle me pahna dena ye bholenath ka mala h ise iske gle se kabhi bhi nhi utarna

Suresh aur puspa guruji ke mukh se apne bete ke bare me sun ke bahut khus huye

Puspa- hmm.. Aditya kitna pyara name h bikul mere bete ki tarah mai kitna bhayasali hu jo mujhe aditya jaisa beta mila mai ise apne se kabhi dur nhi karungi.
Suresh- tum sahi kah rahi ho puspa mera beta lakho me ek h guru ji iska janam kundali bna dijiye
Guruji- Thik h beta aao mere sath

Guruji aur suresh ek or chale gye aaj puspa aur suresh ke chehre par khushi saf jhalak rhi thi ye bete ki milne ki khushi thi

Guruji aur suresh ek or ja rhe the guruji ke chehre par is wakt pareshani saf jalak rhi thi jo suresh ne dekh liya

Suresh- gurudev aap itna pareshan kyu h kya bat h gurudev
Guruji- putra mai tumse ek bat batana chahta hu
Suresh- kya bat h gurudev
Guruji- putra ye bat sach h ki tumhare putra ke pas kuchh saktiya h jo lok kalyan ke liye h lekin ye tum logo ke upar nirbhar karta h ki o lok kalyan karega ya vinash
Suresh- aisa kyu gurudev
Guruji- ye tum logo ke parwarish ke upar nirbhar karta h putra
Suresh- guruji o bhale hi mere patni ke garbh se paida nhi huya h lekin o mere putra se badhkar h aap nisanchit rahiye gurudev mai apne putra ko ek nekdil insan banaunga ye mera wada h apse
Guruji- mujhe tumse yahi asa thi putra. Aur ek bat jab o 5 sal ka ho jayega to uske siksha ke liye mujh saupna hoga
Suresh- jaisi apki ichha gurudev mujhe chhama kre to ek bat puchhu gurudev

Suresh ki ye bat jankar guruji ke chehre par ek muskan aa gya jaise o jante ho ki suresh unse kya puchhega

Guruji- avasya putra puchho kya puchhna chah rhe ho
Suresh- (apne hath jodkar guru dev ke samne baith gya) guru dev aap kon h

Guruji- (guru ji muskurate huye) mai hu. !!
 
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Suresh ki ye bat Jankar Guru ji ke Chehre par ek Muskan aa gyi Jaise wo Jante ho ki Suresh Unse Kya Puchega

Guru ji - Avasya Putra Puchho Kya Puchhna Chah rhe Ho

Suresh - ( apne hath jodkar guru dev ke samne baith gya ) Guru dev aap Kon hai

Guru Ji - ( guru ji muskurate huye ) Mai Hu !!

ab aage


Tabhi guruji ne apne rup badle unka ye rup dekh kar suresh unhi me kho gya unka rup atulniye tha chehre pe jaise 100 surya ka prakash ho gle me rudrakh ke malaye ek hath me pharsa dusre hath me Vijay dhanus pith pe tiro se bhara tarkas sarir pe geruya rang ke kapde unka shobha badha rha tha (bhai log sayad aap log jan gye honge ye kon h nhi jante to bta hi de rha hu)

Guruji- mai guru shiv ka shisya parsuram hu

Guruji ko dekh kar aur unke bate sun kar suresh ke aankho se aansu chalne lagta o khusi ke ansu the o khus bhi kyu na ho aaj uska jivan safal ho gya tha aaj use ek divya purus darsan huya tha

Suresh- mai dhanya ho gya prabhu jo aapne is tuksh prani ko darsan diya apko koti koti pranam prabhu mai dhanya ho gya prabhu mai dhanya ho gya
Guruji- ye sab prabhu ki ikchha h putra mai to unka ek das hu baki prabhu ki lila prabhu hi Jane mere khyal se ab tumhe jana chahiye aur ha ek bat yad rakhna aditya ka sach kisi ko pta na chale waise to uske shaktiyo ko bandh diya hu lekin tum bhi dhyan rakhna uska
Suresh- jo agya gurudev

Phir suresh waha se apne wife puska ke pass aata h aur bolta h
Suresh- Puspa guruji ne bole yaha ka kam sab khatam ho gya h ab tum ghar ja sakte ho
Puspa - thik h chalo ab ghar chalte h

Phir dono ghar ki or chal dete h (ab ye log ko yahi chhod dete h chalte h dusre or)

Wahi dusri or ek hospital me ek aadmi idhar udhar ghum raha tha chehre par kuchh paresani thi o bar bar god prey kar rha tha ki hey bhagwan mere bache aur mere wife ki raksha karna itne me use ek bache ki rone ki aavaj sunai di avaj sun kar o aadmi bahut khus huya itne ek narse aa kar bolti h Mubarak ho sir apko ek sundar si beti huyi h o admi itna sunte hi khusi ke mare uchalne lga o apne keb ek 500 noto ki ek gadi nikal ke narse ko diya aur bola lo ise aur pure hospital me mithai kharid ke bat do aaj mai bahut khus hu aaj mai bap ban gaya phir o narse bole
Admi- sister kya mai apne wife se mil sakta hu
Narse- thodi deri bad vip ward me sift kiya jayenga unko iske bad mil lijiyega sir
Admi- ok thanks

Thodi der bad o aurat ko vip ward me sift kiya jata h uskebl bad o admi jake apne wife se milta h aur bachhe ko dekhne lagta h aur man me sochta h kitni pyari h meri beti isko dekhte hi isme khota ja rha hu jaise koi jadu ho uske chehre me phir o apne wife ke taraf dekhta h aur bolta h
Admi- thanks itni pyari beti dene ke liye dekho n kitni pyari h meri beti bilkul tumpe gyi
O aurat apne pati ke bat sun ke muskurane lagti h
 

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Ek sunsan ilake me ek aurat bahut teji se bhag rhi thi. uske god me ek bacha tha aurat bahut dari huyi thi sayad kisi se dar ke bhag rhi thi. aurat ke sir se khun gir rha tha bechari ka halat bahut kharab tha o kisi tarah apne bache ko bachana chah rhi thi. kuch gunde uske pichha kr rhe the o bhagwan se yahi dua kar rhi thi hey bagwan mere pran lele magar mere bache ko bacha le. bhagte bhagete aurat ek Brij ke upar se ja rhi thi tabhi ek goli aake uske pith me lagi jisse aurat ke hath me se bacha uchhla aur Brij ke niche gir gya. jo sidhe jaker nadi me gira bache ko girte dekh aurat ke muh se ek chikh nikali mera bacha.... Aur o behosh ho gyi.
Wahi dusre taraf ek sadhu dhyan me baithe the. bache ko girte hi unka dhyan tut gya o waha se gayab hoke sidhe bache ke pas prakat huye aur bache ko god me leke gayab ho gye. O chahte to us aurat ko bacha sakte the lekin o uski niyati tha.aur niyati se chedkhani nhi karna chahte the.(niyati yaha ladki ka name nhi h) Sadhu us bache ko le jaker ek mandir me chhod diye.
Wahi ek aurat mandir me puja karne aayi thi o puja kr hi rhi thi ki tabhi ek bache ki rone ki awaj use sunai di.o us bache ki tarf chali gyi jaker dekhti h ki ek 5 ya 10 din ka bacha mandir ke side me rakha huya h aur bachha ro rha h bache ko dekhte hi us aurat ka mamta jag gya aur o aurat turant us bache ko god me utha li. Bache ko uthane ke bad o idhar udhar dekhne lagi aur boli ye bacha kiska h. Bahut der tak aurat bache ki maa bap ko dundhat rhi lekin koi nhi mila tabhi wahi sadhu aaye aur us aurat se bole
Sadhu- beti is bache ko bholenath ke prasad samajh kar apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- lekin baba mai kaise..aur iske maa bap
Sadhu- beti yadi iske maa bap yaha hote to ab tak aa nhi jate. Beti ye bhole nath ka prasad h tumhare liye tum ise apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- Thik h baba aap itna kahte h to mai ise apne bete ki tarah palunga.
Bechari ko bache ko dekhte hi maa ki mamta jag gyi thi kyuki uska sadi ke panch sal ho gye the abhi tak koi bachha nhi tha bechari bache ke liye na jane kitne doctar kitne hakim kitna mandir gyi thi jab bache ko dekhi to usko bhi man me yahi tha ki kas ise mai apne pas rakh leti.
Aurat- baba itna meharbani ki to thoda aur kar dijiye is bache ka name bhi rakh dijiye
Baba- beti aaj se thik 3 din bad purnima h us din tum apne pati aur is bache ke sath isi mandir me aa jana usi din iska name karan hoga.
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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