Cosmoverse

[Werewolf]

Kya fayda first crush to nhi mili Veer ko.

Pragya

Veer ki first crush Pragya nahi hai

 

[Samar_Singh]

Veer ki first crush Pragya nahi hai

Dhulai to usi ke liye hui thi

 

[mistyvixen]

First page pe maine laga rakha hai? Maine kuchh nahi laga rakha aisa. Ek jagah hi spoilers hai. Full characters' guide me jisme saare characters listed hai ab tak ke. But usme bhi maine note laga ke rakha hai ki agar story ke latest update tak read nahi kiya hai, toh full characters' guide mat dekhne lag jaiyo.
Lagta hai ju ne wahi pehle dekh liya.

Aree...udhar cards hai kuch Renshu iirc aise karke...It was easy to figure out...pehle koi dekhega toh uspe notice karega hi...

Complexity ki baat nahi kar raha. Scale alag hai aage ke chapters ka. Level alag hai. but yeah, I get your point as well.

Shayad ek chapter tha shayad koi jiske baad ju ne research karke likhna chalu kiya tha... obvious hai uske baad complexity increase hoge hi...if I say it in simpler terms...first half ke baad hum Bollywood se kisi system novel mein shift hogye...I think if you were to publish it someday you would want to reduce the first part as much as possible and some stuff *ahem* ykwim

 

[Werewolf]

Dhulai to usi ke liye hui thi

Kaahe ki woh Ajay ki crush thi. Veer ki nahi... Crush ke saamne baat karte waqt aap nervous rehte ho. Uske baad se Veer ne kabhi kisi bhi prakar ki feelings ya nervousness show nahi ki Pragya ke saamne. He has only showed it in front of only one female.

 

[mistyvixen]

Exactly kis update tak pahuchi ho

Somewhere on the other side of 130 ig

 

[Samar_Singh]

some stuff *ahem* ykwim

Woh some stuff bahut important hai. Specially Suman. Can't be deleted.

 

[Samar_Singh]

Kaahe ki woh Ajay ki crush thi. Veer ki nahi... Crush ke saamne baat karte waqt aap nervous rehte ho. Uske baad se Veer ne kabhi kisi bhi prakar ki feelings ya nervousness show nahi ki Pragya ke saamne. He has only showed it in front of only one female.

Kaera or Nidhi

 

[Samar_Singh]

Btw Kishor ko lekar kya plan hai, we will see his villain arc also in future. Khas jab Veer aur Kaera close aayenge.

 

[Werewolf]

Aree...udhar cards hai kuch Renshu iirc aise karke...It was easy to figure out...pehle koi dekhega toh uspe notice karega hi...

Lagta hai udhar bhi ek note lagaana padega.

Shayad ek chapter tha shayad koi jiske baad ju ne research karke likhna chalu kiya tha... obvious hai uske baad complexity increase hoge hi...if I say it in simpler terms...first half ke baad hum Bollywood se kisi system novel mein shift hogye...I think if you were to publish it someday you would want to reduce the first part as much as possible and some stuff *ahem* ykwim

I won't reduce it. It would be as it is. But narration abhi ke level ka hoga. Some minor changes of dialogues and settings to make it seem as believable as it can get. Seriousness rahegi. No cheesy lines. Light + dark dono ka atmosphere rahega. Bas, itne me hi poora first half badhiya ho jaayega.

 

[Werewolf]

Somewhere on the other side of 130 ig

Mein ni maanta. Matlab HoK arc padh liya?