Adultery CHOTU KE MAZZE

[Bimal]

wonderful and fabulous start

 

[simapatel]

congratulations

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

CHOTU KE MAZE ..... ..

Sabhi ko sabse pehle Hello! :

aapke saamne prastut hu apni ek aur nayi kahani lekar.. Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai... short and sweat ..

I n t r o d u c t i o n

Papa ji - Pratap Patel

Age - (65) .. Ye gaanv ke Patel.. Inka khud ka bada business hai.. aur khethi badi bhi hai bahut saree.. inhone bohot mahnat aur lagan se apne business ko bahut bada banaya hai.. Par ye aabhi bhi aapne gaanv mai hi rahte hai ..

Patel ji ke 2 bachche hai 1 ladka 1 ladki

Rajesh - Pratap Patel ka beta.. (29) ye dil ka bahut achcha hai.. sab ko pyar karta hai.. Aapne papa ka business dekhata hai.. Business ke chakkar mai hamesha ghumata rahta hai.. 4 mahine pahle inki shadi hui hai.. Nisha se..

Renu - pratap Patel ki beti (22) .. Abhi College Me Study kar rahi hai.. bohot gussel hai..ek baar kisi pe gussa aajay to uski shamat nahi.. par deemag ki bohot tej hai..



Nisha - Rajesh ki biwi (26) .. Bohot achchi Hai Sabka Khyal Rakhti hai .. dil ki bahut saaf sanskari ..



Chotu - aapana hero.. seedha sadha insan hai.. kisi se koi ladai jhagda nhi karta lekin koi jagada suru karta hai to use nahi chorta hai... Patel ji ke yaha kaam karta hai..

Congratulations Bhai for your new thread introduction toh acha hai jab hero ke maze ho hi rahe hai toh aur female characters badha dena dheere dheere family me nani dadi chachi Tai mami mausi bua aur unki betiyan sabko Chotu chod kar maze le

 

[Dharmendra Kumar Patel]

Nice start

 

[tpk]

Waiting

 

[urc4me]

Romanchak patra parichay. kahani aage badhaye. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

[Aupee Karim]

Bahut hi mast start

 

[fantasyWriter]

You should complete your any story. Your Zaalim story seems to near end. At least give readers a complete story. All your stories are incomplete. A story should have an end. If you have less time to complete story, then at least complete that by putting some conclusion lines like for Zalim, "Javed revealed that he was an undercover officer and working to get information from slum area people" and move out. Or , Richa killed Javed by loosing a snake in Javed cell and disclosed it to dying Javed that he was punished for destroying multiple girls life etc. etc. You can even complete story and left hint for second part of that story by using same characters or new characters. Decision would be your.

 

[shake chilli]

Please update Watchmen stories please koi to stories Puri karo sir kitna tdpa rahe ho

 

[Raj9977]

Nice start waiting for update