Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

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[Creepy story]

As expected the conflict has been surfaced between the brothers which shouldn’t have to be after knowing each other, if it was before rocky had known the family it would have been different…

Yeah vro it was expected let's see where this conflict leads both of them and both are the main character

I think if Rocky is really thinking of becoming an underworld Don/trying to destroy the underworld he must accept the brutality of his brother and sister without any complaints, but he has shown his loser side here too…

Vro use kuch kehne ka chance nahi mila jaise hi usne anya rakshin ko roka uske baad wo bas pitta raha fir saras agaya jisne dono ko mara..

he knowingly attacking his brother and sister was one which no one could digest and Rakshin II’s reaction was expected…now let’s move forward since everybody is safe now based on information provided to Sanvi and her reaction shows the mama Veer will be making his appearance in the story pretty soon and we may see some encounters with that demon called Dr. whatever too…

Mama veer ki entry me abhi time hai

After the death of Veer if Shanvi lives she must be a slave of Rocky,

Vro incest nahi hogi story me specially with rocky becouse he's real son of saanvi

because she is with her villain brother instead of her own bloodline whether it’s her mom/daughters/adopted son/Real son…

Vro abhi confirm bhi nahi hua hai ki wo apne bhai ke sath hai ki bete ke sath

Seems she will decide whether she will tell her brother about Rocky or not based on Rocky’s answer testing whether he will come out like her other kids or will speak her truth…

Letsee vro

Comparing Ahana’s Love with the woman Sneha was a total ignorance of Rocky, lady like Ahana will be with him wherever he goes no matter how hard the way is or it even takes her life she will be always with him including Rishu…

Vro iska jawab sahi tarah se yash vro ne diya hai same my reply

he should let go her to Rakshin II if she wants to be with Rakshin II in near future…
Actually saying I don’t like the war since it was for nothing rather than creating a conflict in a family…
Last question is will Junior uncle of Rocky will tell about the one of the worker/goon telling Shanvi about Rocky, will Junior will tell about this new issue to granny or not…?!

I think not because junior unhe stress nahi deta age dekhte hue

Bro , it's Rakshin fault, if Rocky not defended himself so rakshin guards surely kill Rocky, Rishu and Ahana and it was a necessary lesson for Rakshin and Ana, Do you really think Rakshin is innocent after listening rakshin and Ana conversation and do you really think ahana is better than sneha or dipti, she is the same girl who rejected Rocky and sucked his enemy Ram cock and she was also ready for swaping that night after convinced by lavnaya, I know Rocky has bad side too but that time rocky was innocent and just expressed his feelings but she didn't even rejected politely instead she humiliated Rocky infront of whole class and don't forget she was partner in crime with lavnaya,by the way Sanvi house derived by power rather than love, I'm excited about Sanvi birthday celebration because that single event connected with all major upcoming events of story and I'll surely enjoy sanvi family new power dynamics and remember Sometimes war is necessary to maintain peace

Well said vro

I'm curious about Rony sister and also Ana know something secret about her family and I'm confused about lavanya because writer told her only life aim is protect rocky from his own family but WHY she is selfish and nymphomaniac so after getting those insane amounts of wealth she expected to do foursome with her paid playboys everyday but instead she just involving herself in rocky and her step family life unnecessarily I can't believe she just doing it because her father told her in childhood, I think she want to take revenge from sanvi because of her father death

Nahi vro ana ne to kaha wo apne mama ke bare me kuch nahi janti .

Nice update

Nice update creepy bro
But Veer or mama ki entry shyd ho or
sanvi connect h iska jwab shyd age PTA chlega
Ab dekhna hga kia hga rocky ata h
Sanvi ke bulane pr

Abhi nahi

Or ek doubt kia
Creepy bro
Jo shadow rocky me enter hui wo Saras to nhi h mujhe nhi lgta q ke Saras ne kha wo uske undr hi

Vro saras hi hai

Bro rakshin or anya

Bro rakshin or Anya relation me hote to Anya rocky ko psnd nhi krti
Jbke strt se dikhaya gya h Anya alg h usko Kisi se mtlb nhi etc
Or ek scene me dikhaya JB rocky Anya ko rakshin ke room se nklte dekhti h uska mujhe doubt h kia wo such me me physical relation h ya just writer ne dikhaya h to divert readers
Well waiting for next update

Vro conversation ke baad is tarah ki bat crna nahi banta


Thx gyz ek me hi sabko reply de raha hun wajah hai processing bhut slow hai

 

[Creepy story]

Pehle ki tarah, great update.
Thx vro

Aadhya ki acchi durgati ban gayi hai, weh apne saath wale policewalon ki respect kho baithi hai. Udhar Gaitonde alag uase khaar khaye baitha hai. Aadhya ko lag raha hai ki agar weh Red File kisi tarah se le aaye, to uski respect laut aayegi. Iske liye weh Rocky ke neeche laetne ke liye bhi tayyar ho gayi hai. Lekin, aakhir ka scene samajh nahi aaya. Story se to lagta hai ki weh Rocky ke pyar ke jaal me fansti ja rahi hai. Iski to jaldi hi baajne wali hai.

Uska scene rocky se bhi aage ka ho gaya hai vro..ab wo call kar rahi hai .

<Aadhya : dad aapko yaad hai wo baccha jise aapne jane diya tha saran ka beta....>

Ab yeh ek naya suspense chhod diya.

Vro aadhya ko uske baap ne saran ke bare me bataya tha

Yeh DD bahut dogula nikla,

Start se hi tha vro

hai to Saanvi ka partner, lekin Thakre ke saath mil gaya hai. Kahin mutant fruit Moko ko na mil jaaye... Lekin Saanvi fruit ki neelami kar ke galat kar rahi hai, apna ek aur dushman khada kar rahi hai. Use apne hi kisi bharose ke vyakti ko dena chahiye. Kahin weh Rocky ko na mil jaaye, lekin fir main villain Rocky ke hi peeche padh jayega.

Haa vro ye to hai..

Ahana aur Rocky ka romance accha tha, lekin one sided. Lagta hai ki Ahana uske peeche padi hai, lekin Rocky ko ab usme interest nahi raha.

Haa vro ahana par use trust nahi

Rakshin, Anya ki ladai Desouza aur Sneha ke saath badi bhayanak thi. Reshu bechari beech me pis gayi.

Lekin Rocky ne Rakshin ko kuch jyada hi maar diya. Kuch bhi ho, weh Rocky ki side le raha tha. Lekin Rakshin ko apne adopted hone ka bahut bada complex hai.

Vro wo smart hai powerful hai agar use laga saanvi rocky ko jyada importance de ragi hai wo ghar chhod dega

Anya ka character bahut complex hai. Kahan weh Rakshin ko hate karti thi, ab usi ke saath physical ho gayi hai. Lekin uska Rocky ke liye soft corner saaf dikhta hai. Shayad agar weh Rocky se shadi nahi ki hoti, toh scene kuch alag hi hota. Ladai me ek aur baat saaf huyi, yeh Saham bahut darpok nikla.

Nahi vro saham ghar ki female memeber ke sath tha jise desouza ne safe room me lock kar diya tha..

Yahan par Sneha ki ek baat acchi lagi, weh Rishu ko jitna bhi dutkare, lekin uske liye Sneha ki sahanubhuti saaf dikh rahi hai.

Haa vro

Akhir me Arshu ke kehne par Rocky ne Rakshin ko chhod diya.

<Rocky : meri goadi me padi ye bejaan si ladki inoncent thi..janti bhi nahi maafias kya hote hai..aaj mai zinda hon to in dono ki wajah se...rocky ne sneha ko dekhte hue kaha..>

Uper wala dialog bada hi emotional aur solid tha, padh kar maza aa gaya. Shayad Sneha ke gyan-chakshu kuch khulein.

Na bhi khule use ab yakin ho gaya hoga ki rocky uske piche kisi wajah se hai

Ab Saanvi ne akhir kya letter me likha hai, weh to aage pata lagega. Kya sach Saanvi usase ugalvana chahti hai.

Ab horror jaldi hi shuru hone wala hai. Maine to apni seat-belt kas li hai.

Again, a great update.

Thx vro

 

[Creepy story]

Rishu thik hai aur Ahana sirf apne option close hone ke kaaran Rocky ke sath hai i think, pehle Ram phir saham fir aab Rocky

Karta hai bhai bas woh accept nahi kar pa raha

Wahi par Sneha thi par Rocky ko fikr Rishu ki thi

tera hero yaar Moko kaha tha jab Raksin aur Ana Desouza aur Sneha se ladne aaye , Rocky aa gya bachane par Moco jisko desouza ne lucky se kharida tha woh nahi aaya

Sanvi moko ki sister ko jitne paise chahiye usse jyada ki deal lavanya ne use offer ki thi jo success rahi phir ab wo kyo kaam karega desouza ke liye

Bro wo ek deal tha but bachane ke liye nahi saanvi ke liye wo scene mujhe thik se yaad nahi hai jab sneha aayi thi uska party ka ye scene hai na abhi to moko ka idhar 6 ya 7 update se koi scene nahi hai ha aur sayad deal nahi hua tha

Moko ki story me chalane ke plan tha lekin readers ne mana kar diya ab bolenge to shuru ho jayegi

Great effort bhai… story badhiya ja rhi h

Thx

Great effort bhai… story badhiya ja rhi h

 

[Creepy story]

1. Sabse pehle episode ke shuruwat mein Aadhya ko lagta hai ki Rocky usse pyar karta hai, jabki Rocky uske sath mind game khel Raha hai aur Aadhya ka baap bhi samajh gya hai ab dekhte hai Aadhya ke sath aage kya hota hai wo jab rocky ke pass phone karti hai.

Ye aage ka scene hai aadhya ki side ki story age badh gayi vro

2. Aur idhar Thakre aur DD mil kar planing kar rahe hai Rocky ke liye aur baad me jab DD batata hai ki "Rocky Saanvi ka saga beta hai". Uss time wahan "jiya" door khadi chhup kar unki baatein sun rahi hoti hai, aur ye sach jaan kar use bahut bada shock lagta hai. To creepy bro ye batao ye jiya kon hai aur usko shock kyu laga?

Jiya aakash ki bahan hai aur aarvi naina Lavanya ki common friend

Aur Thakre aur DD jante hai Saanvi mutant fruit khayi hai to usse lad nahi sakte hai isliye uske birthday party mein kisi ko hire kiye hai aur Saanvi mutant fruit bechne wali bhi hai brithday party mein bhi kuch bada hone wala hai.

Let see

3. Beech mein Ahana aur Rocky ka movie shopping wala scene acha laga aur Ahana bhi ab rocky se pyar karne lagi bhabhi bolna ko bolna rocky ke sathiyo ko aur Taj hotel me Rony ka apni behen Amy ko kisi aur ke sath dekhna ye kya hai aur ye kiske sath hai aur usi time Rishu ka call aana Rocky ne Rony ko bolya tab bhi wo nahi aaya ye bhi bada sawal hai ki Rocky agar kabhi mushkil me hoga to kya ye sab nahi aayenge.

Vro rony ne apni bahan ko 2 saalo se nahi dekha jaisa ki pehle ke episode ke usne bataya tha ..
Sagi bahan ke samne uski jagah rocky hota wo bhi yahi karta lekin haan ye baat sahi hai time par Rony he dhoka diya

4. Bhai, jab Anya aur Rakshin ne Desouza ke ghar par attack Kiya, toh unki mutant fruit powers ke samne Sneha ka drone attack and uske 5k bodyguard sab fail the. Par sabse buri cheez thi unka ghamand. Jis tarah se Anya ne inocent Rishu ko mara torture kiya aur Rakshin ne Desouza ke sath.

Haa vro ye to hai..

5. Aur idhar Rocky jaldi Desouza ke ghar aata hai aur pichhe se kood kar daldal me girna ek bohot hi acha idea tha aur Ahana ka rocky ko bahar nikalne ke liye apni kapde khol kar nikalna aur Rocky ke pure body me kichad lag gaya tha iske wajah se kisi ne use pehchan nahi.

Thx vro

Jab rocky andar gaya aur usne Rishu ko bachane ke liye vase phek kar maara,toh Rakshin ne bina soche samjhe rocky ki haddiyan tod di. Wo scene padh kar sach me bhaut buda laga. Rocky itna helpless tha, uski aawaz tak nahi nikal rahi thi.

Ha vro saras na hota to rocky bhi na hota

6. Uske baad jab rocky ko marne wale the tab lights flicker hona aur "Red Shadow" ka Rocky ke andar ghusna bhaukaal scene tha hawa mein hi Rocky ki tooti hui haddiyan judne ki awaaz aur wo laal aankhein uske baad Rocky ne jo kutte ki tarah dhoya hai Rakshin aur anya ko, padh ke kaleje ko thandak mil gayi.

Hahaha vro thx

Rakshin ko farsh tod kar zameen pe marna aur anya ka sar Zameen me gaad dena Rocky ne dikha Diya mutant fruit se bhi jyada powerful demon power hai aur ek swal hai creepy bro kya ye saras tha ya koi aur jo Rocky ko hospital me bachye the wo ye samajh me nahi aaya.

Mutant fruit demon power se bane hai jabki unke samne hi demon tha

7. Jab Sneha ne pipe se Rocky ke face par pani dala tab sab face dekh ke chup ho gye unko vishwas hi nahi tha ki ye Rocky hoga aur Rakshin and Anya ke to hosh udd gaye. Aur Rocky ne jo dialogue mara " Mera Bhai aur meri behen itne cruel nahi ho sakte...." . Aur Rakshin ka ye bolna ki tum jante the ye mera bhai aur behen hai tab bhi tumne mara aur ab se rishta khatam hua.... aur main tujhse nahi darta.

Uska reaction sahi tha vro koi bhi hota yahi karta use apni jaan se jyda ana ki fikr thi ...

Rocky bhi apni jagah sahi tha

8. Aur uske baad Arshu ne Rakshin aur anya ko sachai batne se mana Kiya aur ye bhi bata diya ki Rocky ka asli dusman unka Mama Veera hai aur sirf Rocky hi mar sakta hai. Aur shayad Rakshin apne mama ke bare me nahi janta hai but Anya apne Mama ke bare mein kuch janti hai. Kya ab Rakshin apne mama ka sath dega Rakshin ko marne ke liye jis tarah wo bola tha main tujhse nahi darta aur rishta khatam?

Haa vro aisa hi samjho

9. Idhar Saanvi toh sabki baap nikli! Arshu ne bhale hi Ravi ka jhooth bola but Saanvi ko malum chal gaya uske gaurd se ki Ravi nahi Rocky tha wo. Aur wo jo letter likhi hai usme kya likha hoga Rocky ko surrender karna ya kuch aur hi ye last me suspense ka bomb phod diye ho mai jab se padha hu tab se yahi soch Raha hu ki us letter me kya likha hoga aur junior ke hath se Rocky ko bhej di. Abhi to sabse bawal birthday party mein hone wala hai uska bhi intezar hai.

Vro agle hi episode me pata chalega

Aur ha ye update padh ke to confirm ho gaya hai ki Rakshin aur anya dono relationship me hai but kabse aur kaise ye abhi tak nahi malum chala hai bro ye bhi batao. Aur please update ek do update jaldi de do bro update ka intezar hai aur abhi story peak par bhi hai.

Abhi confirm hoga vro soon..thx vro

 

[Harman11]

Creepy story Bhai jaldi update post kardo Yar please

 

[Yash5678]

Creepy bro , jaldi se update do , aaj free time hai mast raat ko padhunga

 

[Yash5678]

Creepy bro , jaldi se update do , aaj free time hai mast raat ko padhunga

 

[Yash5678]

Yaar mein toh chahta hu Afrit bhi rocky ke control mein aajaye aur Rocky ko madad kare saras ki tarah

 

[Killer jeya]

Creepy bro agar ye bhi saras tha to afrit kitne powerful hongy or kia agy jakar afrit ka bhi kafi important role hoga?

 

[Killer jeya]

Update AJ ayga NA ?