Chit-Chatters Thread - Live

[The Immortal]

kahani mast thi par kar nahi paya comment ,,
nok jhok wali kahani se dur hi rehta hu me .

Raaz .. par review nhi diya

 

[Rahul]

kaunsi ,wo sanvy wali ??

Han aur do story complete hai wo bhi

 

[The Immortal]

Kaise ho aap

ju tello

 

[Rahul]

ju tello

Thoda paise se pareshan hun kuch lakh mil jate kaam ho jata mera

 

[SHADOW KING]

Aap simple word me story le liye apni rai de sakte ho kuch nai to nice update to likh sakte

sirf padhkar jo maja aata hai wo comment karne me nahi aata ..

 

[Rahul]

sirf padhkar jo maja aata hai wo comment karne me nahi aata ..

Lekin writer ko kaise pata chalega aapne kya mahsus kiya waise to bina register bhi story padh sakte the I'd kyu banai

 

[SHADOW KING]

Raaz .. par review nhi diya

maine socha bahut purani hai to kuch nahi kaha ,,like kiya hai waise har update ..

 

[Rahul]

maine socha bahut purani hai to kuch nahi kaha ,,like kiya hai waise har update ..

Ju meko mufatkhor tipe lag rahe aaj

 

[SHADOW KING]

Han aur do story complete hai wo bhi

wo attitude aadhi padhi aur kuch maja nahi aaya to baadme padha hi nahi ..
aur itni badi kahani thi ki comment karne ka socha hi nahi .
thoda fast forward bhi padh leta hu kabhi kabhi to comment kaise kare .

 

[The Immortal]

Thoda paise se pareshan hun kuch lakh mil jate kaam ho jata mera

Loan lene ka