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*Winner spelling mistakeBanegakya downfall aagaya hai mera legendary writer ko langotiya bana lete
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Congratulations for first storyDesiPriyaRai
Hope this story will be a blockbuster
First time hai thodi bahut galti hogi
Dheere dheere sahi ho jaayegi writing
Bahut achcha hai non erotic likh rahe
Reach kam milegi lekin asli lekhak wohi hai jo non erotic likh sake
Pehla update padhke review dunga
Jo bhi lagega bata dunga![]()
Aaae bangali, hum bhi yad karte haiBilkul yad kijiye ek aap hi to Hai Jo Mujhe yad karte Hain![]()

Mdjak nahi samajhti kua noobdiItni buri hu to bol de main yha nhi aaungi![]()

Aao fir sab rules todke chumma chaati kareI play without rules
