wow Casi bro this is a wonderfully narrated update. your narrative description is fantastic. you never leave a single detail in your narration, this is the part i admire in your writing. you are just awesome my dear. details like going to pee, nude, chawla taking a dress for her, the way Sanjana surprised him when he was pissing and how his piss stopped in a sudden, the way you described how he was looking for her, how he imagined either she could have been in her father's room, you made our imagination go wild as well. in the beginning how you describe while sanjana was making a love bite over his chest how she was feeling horny and rubbing her pussy in between his leg which made Chawla feel that she needed more..... you did not leave any single detail for the reader to know what is going on, you describe emotion, sex, desire, lust, you say everything in one update. you describe the feeling of both characters equally so very well. fantastic man just fantastic!!
You keep in mind the character of Sanjana must be childish and playful so you do not forget to show her characteristic like when she pointed his dick again looking upward which made her laugh, you proved that she was in need of penetration as when chawla asked her either he should put his organ in she said do as he wish which clearly meant that she wanted it...
Wow casi bro wow...... what a marvelous update man. this is just too good my friend... its a literature on eroticism.
when the penetration took place you took all your time to make chawla do it, penetrate the tip then wait looking in her face and to admire her, then let half dick to get into her then wait again to at last push it all...wow what an explanation my friend....thats not all now the way you described her pain and reaction when it all ended, how she said having burning sensation, which happens in reality, now you described blood and how she got afraid... with her childish behaviour you made her cry...all those descriptions show how far talented you are as a writer casi bro. YOU ARE FANTASTIC AND ONE OF THE BEST WRITER I HAVE EVER KNOWN. THANK YOU FOR THIS MARVELOUS UPDATE AND WONDERFUL EROTIC STORY MY FRIEND. HATS OFF AND I REALLY BOW TO YOU.