thanks very much dear jamesVery hot update
thanks very much dear jamesVery hot update
thanks james yaraHottest update
thanks bro enjoy the readWooooooow double updates?
for double treats bro lemme read
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thanks broSuper update bhai
thanks my dearNice update
So that was it!! Wooooowwww do I tell you what I was thinking bro? Do I say it here or I pm you what was in my mind? I had something else in my mind. Will tell you after you read thiz comment.
Well regarding this update.
IT IS JUST FABULOUS. SUPERB.
the way you have described all with such ease keeping the jovial manners of Sanjana you made her narrate so well. Putting yourself in her shoes you did it too well.
What I was jot expecting is Mister Chawla's reaction. I was surprised that he went by her side saying he would hv done the same. Well yes in a way its true he is right as Sanjana meant as she knew he will love her more after knowing it..... Sanjana was certain to get that kind of response from him that's why she told him the truth..... the way you have described her teenage days with school uniform and how her dad felt interested is so desirous and hot. you made her look desirable since her tender age, wow casi bro you are just awesome a writer,,, you know everything man!!
Going to read ahead to tell u more about my opinion bro.
Anyhow you hv done a wonderful job.
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amazing! amazing!! amazing Casi bro
wooooow too too hot, very very exciting update my dear!! phewwwwwwwww!!!
you maintained the rhythm the same as in the last update!
the way Chawla got excited i got the same feeling and the dick raised the same way and it was unstoppable!
I know this was the aim of writing the update in fact right?
You knew how to keep both the past and the present active in the updates, Sanjana relating the past then Chawla bringing her back to the present and bro you did it so pretty well without leaving the grip on the subject at all. not for any second did you miss the intensity of the narration. and you did it so beautifully that even a non-incest reader will love this update.
wonderful narrative descriptions with both characters getting equal part despite it is Sanjana who should have been the main one here, still, you shared equally for both of them............
any man in place of Chawla would have been in same ecstatic feeling and would have done the same.... even me!!
And when he told her she is a love godess he was so right as such young ladies become nymphos in the real.
They were fantastict both of these updates bro and i know it will be continued in several next updates...
fantastic job casi bro, hats off,
and yes don't forget reply my first comment either I can tell you what i was thinking could have been the secret... if you want i will say it here or else by pm i will tell you mypiece of tthought.
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thanks for thanking him rahul dearnice ripley dear![]()
haan yaar thanks enjoy karoDo do updates? Are vah
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Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
saanvi ka chawla sahab par shak ab dhire dhire aur gahra hota ja raha hai,
chawla sahab aur sanjana ke romantic palo ka varnan aapne bahot hi adbhut tarike se prastut kiya hai,
sanjana ki to har ada kamal ki hai,
chawla sahab ko ye pata chal chuka hai ki sanjana pichhe se virginie nhi hai,
aur unke kuchh puchhne se pahle hi sanjana unke man ki baat jaan gayi hai,
ab dekhte hai ki sanjana chawla sahab ko kya batane wali hai,
Waiting for next update bhai,
Sorry for late review bhai